Comments received on poems by Neville
Before it All Began to Go Wrong
Goldfinch60 said:
I would be there like a shot Neville, such wonderful times and memories back in the day. My friends and I made bows and arrows, we were never ever injured by them, or the catapults we made. LOL
Great times and such innocence all around.
Andy
April 18th, 2024 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
I would be there like a shot Neville, such wonderful times and memories back in the day. My friends and I made bows and arrows, we were never ever injured by them, or the catapults we made. LOL
Great times and such innocence all around.
Andy
April 18th, 2024 01:21
Before it All Began to Go Wrong
Doggerel Dave said:
First: A fine line in pure nostalgia Neville, full of the most appealing detail (and I mean \'most\' as part of many or much) which filled me with the above mentioned...
Second: Yes - I\'d go back for a week\'s visit because there were many things/attitudes I really enjoyed.....but do I want my own naivety too?
April 17th, 2024 21:04
Doggerel Dave said:
First: A fine line in pure nostalgia Neville, full of the most appealing detail (and I mean \'most\' as part of many or much) which filled me with the above mentioned...
Second: Yes - I\'d go back for a week\'s visit because there were many things/attitudes I really enjoyed.....but do I want my own naivety too?
April 17th, 2024 21:04
Before it All Began to Go Wrong
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. You pull the reader along brilliantly. I anticipated everything. Superb work.
April 17th, 2024 15:07
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. You pull the reader along brilliantly. I anticipated everything. Superb work.
April 17th, 2024 15:07
Before it All Began to Go Wrong
Cassie58 said:
Some say you should never go back, but I would give my right arm to have a day back with my mum and dad, my four grandparents and my four siblings. So much in your words Neville that I like and resonate with. Simple times, when money wasn’t king, when people were friendlier and your neighbours were called auntie and uncle. Values have sadly changed. I sometimes pine for what has gone. That doesn’t mean I am unhappy. It just means time has moved on and I am nostalgic. Thank goodness for poetry, where we can pen our memories and enjoy them with like minded souls. I’d gladly go back with ya to the days before it all went wrong . Just think, no internet, no mobiles we all walked or got buses. A very different world. I really enjoyed the detail in this write.
April 17th, 2024 12:08
Cassie58 said:
Some say you should never go back, but I would give my right arm to have a day back with my mum and dad, my four grandparents and my four siblings. So much in your words Neville that I like and resonate with. Simple times, when money wasn’t king, when people were friendlier and your neighbours were called auntie and uncle. Values have sadly changed. I sometimes pine for what has gone. That doesn’t mean I am unhappy. It just means time has moved on and I am nostalgic. Thank goodness for poetry, where we can pen our memories and enjoy them with like minded souls. I’d gladly go back with ya to the days before it all went wrong . Just think, no internet, no mobiles we all walked or got buses. A very different world. I really enjoyed the detail in this write.
April 17th, 2024 12:08
Before it All Began to Go Wrong
Teddy.15 said:
I wouldn\'t go back in time simply because I believe nothing would change and what I have learnt on my road is that everything from the past has led me to today 🌹 Fabulous thought provoker dear Nev.
April 17th, 2024 03:27
Teddy.15 said:
I wouldn\'t go back in time simply because I believe nothing would change and what I have learnt on my road is that everything from the past has led me to today 🌹 Fabulous thought provoker dear Nev.
April 17th, 2024 03:27
Before it All Began to Go Wrong
orchidee said:
Oohhh, I wish I could go back to pre-KP days! lol.
April 17th, 2024 02:18
orchidee said:
Oohhh, I wish I could go back to pre-KP days! lol.
April 17th, 2024 02:18
No Certain Doubt
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville, it is so awful that many ladies have problems like this because of the swineherd of men who see them as prey.
Andy
April 17th, 2024 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville, it is so awful that many ladies have problems like this because of the swineherd of men who see them as prey.
Andy
April 17th, 2024 01:11
No Certain Doubt
Cassie58 said:
The safety of women is paramount. They need protecting from the violence and twisted minds of some of the male species. This poem gave me the chills and I started to think of stalkers and how frightening it would be for a woman on her own, anxious and afraid at night. And then my mind travelled elsewhere to women with mental health problems and that all this might be playing out in their minds. There is so much to ponder on this piece Neville. Different takes. Results the same. Frightened women. A poem of current times, so well penned which exercises the brain cells.
April 16th, 2024 04:27
Cassie58 said:
The safety of women is paramount. They need protecting from the violence and twisted minds of some of the male species. This poem gave me the chills and I started to think of stalkers and how frightening it would be for a woman on her own, anxious and afraid at night. And then my mind travelled elsewhere to women with mental health problems and that all this might be playing out in their minds. There is so much to ponder on this piece Neville. Different takes. Results the same. Frightened women. A poem of current times, so well penned which exercises the brain cells.
April 16th, 2024 04:27
No Certain Doubt
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I had my doubts of marrying KP, but she hid the water from my whisky. I got tipsy and said \'I do\'! lol.
April 16th, 2024 02:14
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I had my doubts of marrying KP, but she hid the water from my whisky. I got tipsy and said \'I do\'! lol.
April 16th, 2024 02:14
Advice on Avoiding Pedestals
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, we will all end up as dust.
Andy
April 16th, 2024 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, we will all end up as dust.
Andy
April 16th, 2024 01:17
Advice on Avoiding Pedestals
Thomas W Case said:
Very true, and I like the sly wit this has. Excellent work.
April 15th, 2024 18:50
Thomas W Case said:
Very true, and I like the sly wit this has. Excellent work.
April 15th, 2024 18:50
Advice on Avoiding Pedestals
Cassie58 said:
Too many marches , too many protests, too many sheep, too many dumb politicians but Neva enough poetry. Always good to read yours Neville.
April 15th, 2024 10:20
Cassie58 said:
Too many marches , too many protests, too many sheep, too many dumb politicians but Neva enough poetry. Always good to read yours Neville.
April 15th, 2024 10:20
Advice on Avoiding Pedestals
Alan R said:
I refuse to be that kind of victim ..
I mean a quiet one
Very intriguing write!
April 15th, 2024 07:45
Alan R said:
I refuse to be that kind of victim ..
I mean a quiet one
Very intriguing write!
April 15th, 2024 07:45
Advice on Avoiding Pedestals
Teddy.15 said:
Great advice Nev, too many sheep in the world, we need some authentic vibes. 🌹
April 15th, 2024 04:27
Teddy.15 said:
Great advice Nev, too many sheep in the world, we need some authentic vibes. 🌹
April 15th, 2024 04:27
Yesterday I Met a Monster
Doggerel Dave said:
Somehow this one slipped past me -time zones defeat me sometimes - Welcome back following.
Here you were at the wrong place at the wrong time, Neville
April 15th, 2024 02:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Somehow this one slipped past me -time zones defeat me sometimes - Welcome back following.
Here you were at the wrong place at the wrong time, Neville
April 15th, 2024 02:43
Advice on Avoiding Pedestals
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve turned up!! Left without a \'by your leave\' or anything.
I was only querying with Teddy yesterday, and was shortly to message you. Glad to see you back, Neville, but what\'s with this \'despite my burning up like this ..\'
You are a bit of a worry right now.
April 15th, 2024 02:28
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve turned up!! Left without a \'by your leave\' or anything.
I was only querying with Teddy yesterday, and was shortly to message you. Glad to see you back, Neville, but what\'s with this \'despite my burning up like this ..\'
You are a bit of a worry right now.
April 15th, 2024 02:28
Advice on Avoiding Pedestals
2781 said:
Very true, but a do believe, at best, we all end up a bag of bones.
April 15th, 2024 01:37
2781 said:
Very true, but a do believe, at best, we all end up a bag of bones.
April 15th, 2024 01:37
Yesterday I Met a Monster
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words Neville. I just do not understand why anybody will harm children. If I had my way I would hang by their spheroids from a bridge and let the crows have them!
Andy
April 15th, 2024 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words Neville. I just do not understand why anybody will harm children. If I had my way I would hang by their spheroids from a bridge and let the crows have them!
Andy
April 15th, 2024 01:33
Yesterday I Met a Monster
Cassie58 said:
His beard was braided. Yuk I thought and as I read further, I imagined the horror of having to listen to the sickening stuff he was coming out with. Children egging him on. Nothing but an evil pervert. Yes a monster in your presence. Every parent’s nightmare. Such a dark write Neville, but there seems to be such a great deal of darkness at present. What a pity he was let out after 25 years. Who let him out, I ask? Your reality. What an awful yesterday, but what a powerful piece of writing. Great to see you back.
April 14th, 2024 15:55
Cassie58 said:
His beard was braided. Yuk I thought and as I read further, I imagined the horror of having to listen to the sickening stuff he was coming out with. Children egging him on. Nothing but an evil pervert. Yes a monster in your presence. Every parent’s nightmare. Such a dark write Neville, but there seems to be such a great deal of darkness at present. What a pity he was let out after 25 years. Who let him out, I ask? Your reality. What an awful yesterday, but what a powerful piece of writing. Great to see you back.
April 14th, 2024 15:55
Yesterday I Met a Monster
orchidee said:
If it wasn\'t such a heavy theme, I would say - ahh, so you met KP yesterday?!
I bet you knew I would say that. lol.
April 14th, 2024 10:28
orchidee said:
If it wasn\'t such a heavy theme, I would say - ahh, so you met KP yesterday?!
I bet you knew I would say that. lol.
April 14th, 2024 10:28
Yesterday I Met a Monster
Parisab said:
Wow Neville, those are the days I wish we are out sick-Although another psychopath can be joining us at a holiday… Great to read your moving words again…
April 14th, 2024 09:32
Parisab said:
Wow Neville, those are the days I wish we are out sick-Although another psychopath can be joining us at a holiday… Great to read your moving words again…
April 14th, 2024 09:32
Yesterday I Met a Monster
Teddy.15 said:
Hello dear Neville, you\'ve been missed. This is really dark and having seen what happened in Sydney yesterday made this even darker, I guess any good psychology would know that we can only help those who want to be helped and those born pure evil unfortunately may never be able to change. An eye for an eye? With what is going on in the world right now, I\'m thinking I wish it could all be fairies and father Christmas but in reality it\'s all so terribly dark. 🌹
April 14th, 2024 09:23
Teddy.15 said:
Hello dear Neville, you\'ve been missed. This is really dark and having seen what happened in Sydney yesterday made this even darker, I guess any good psychology would know that we can only help those who want to be helped and those born pure evil unfortunately may never be able to change. An eye for an eye? With what is going on in the world right now, I\'m thinking I wish it could all be fairies and father Christmas but in reality it\'s all so terribly dark. 🌹
April 14th, 2024 09:23
Harbour Side
Cassie58 said:
What an incredibly sensual piece of poetry Neville, discovered here in your archives. Wonderfully written and not likely to be forgotten either. A masterpiece in a beautiful scenic setting.
March 25th, 2024 19:53
Cassie58 said:
What an incredibly sensual piece of poetry Neville, discovered here in your archives. Wonderfully written and not likely to be forgotten either. A masterpiece in a beautiful scenic setting.
March 25th, 2024 19:53
Silly Me
Bella Shepard said:
Hope springs eternal, and love will always try to find a way, though starry eyes may not see the warning signs along the road. A touching vulnerability here my friend, beautifully crafted.
March 15th, 2024 11:38
Bella Shepard said:
Hope springs eternal, and love will always try to find a way, though starry eyes may not see the warning signs along the road. A touching vulnerability here my friend, beautifully crafted.
March 15th, 2024 11:38
Silly Me
Cassie58 said:
Your poetic license is truly admirable Neville,. Have a gorgeous Sunday 💜
March 10th, 2024 00:43
Cassie58 said:
Your poetic license is truly admirable Neville,. Have a gorgeous Sunday 💜
March 10th, 2024 00:43
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