Comments received on poems by Neville



The Difference in Our Similarities
Tom Dylan said:

A good write, Neville.. we do all have a thing for poetry. Spot on. :-)

March 7th, 2024 05:53

The Difference in Our Similarities
Teddy.15 said:

A thing for poetry lol indeed dear Nev, we all have a fave too. 🌹

March 7th, 2024 05:34

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
Goldfinch60 said:

I hope it was a good whisky Neville.

Cheers!

Andy

March 7th, 2024 02:03

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant snapshot.

March 6th, 2024 23:48

On Waking Up in Rio
Rocky Lagou said:

As a Brazilian, this speaks to me on another level. That last line feels as if it were almost slurred by a drunken man: “top to toe.” Everything is affected and everything surrounding the speaker is so captivating. ✨

March 6th, 2024 22:53

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
Bella Shepard said:

A beautiful memory, preserved in every detail, such happy ones are a treasure. On the other end of that spectrum, no pun intended, I remember my first colonoscopy, in all its horror. I much prefer your memory, keep them positive ones coming my friend. Just lovely!

March 6th, 2024 16:13

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
Cassie58 said:

What a special memory of time aboard a cruise ship. Sounds absolutely perfect. Lucky you Neville.

March 6th, 2024 13:51

On Waking Up in Rio
Cloie said:

Your poem is like a rollercoaster for the imagination! It paints a vivid picture of wonder. The imagery is striking. Great job!

March 6th, 2024 12:24

Arc
Bella Shepard said:

You create an ambiance of comfort, and sweet familiarity in these three, visually pleasing lines. Subtle and oh so beautiful!

March 6th, 2024 09:03

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
Christina8 said:

What a wonderful memory, N., captured and perfectly retold.

March 6th, 2024 08:35

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
Accidental Poet said:

And 6 days later you wished me a happy 67th birthday. 67 only comes once so that was a first and only. 🤔

March 6th, 2024 08:32

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
Tom Dylan said:

Another fine write, Neville, and another moment perfectly captured.

March 6th, 2024 06:45

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
Doggerel Dave said:

2023??? I dooon\'t belieeeve it....!!!

March 6th, 2024 05:59

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
orchidee said:

I suppose I remember the moment I met KP, though I\'d like to forget it! lol.

March 6th, 2024 02:59

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
Teddy.15 said:

What a charmed life you do lead Mr Neville. So very well written into a moment and memory of time. ❤️💜❤️

March 6th, 2024 02:56

On Waking Up in Rio
Goldfinch60 said:

Those dreams can take you to some very strange places Neville.

Andy

March 6th, 2024 02:13

Recall
Bobby O said:

Any stone yet turned still presents gifts for perspective

March 6th, 2024 01:52

On Waking Up in Rio
Bobby O said:

The seamless aspect of that “bundling” speaks of a great acquired existing comfort of soul and body atwixt and represents an accordance of high value and is a constant gift and lift and makes me happy that is within your possession.

March 6th, 2024 01:47

On Waking Up in Rio
MendedFences27 said:

Waking up in Rio, disoriented and confused, sounds like movie plotline.
The poetry comes from the fact you were not alone.
A small yet intriguing poem. One wants to know what happened next. - Phil A.

March 5th, 2024 17:47

On Waking Up in Rio
Thomas W Case said:

It\'s fantastic and very relatable.

March 5th, 2024 13:28

On Waking Up in Rio
Cassie58 said:

Disorientated maybe after jet lag. You woke up on holiday, not having a clue where you were. Been there and done that Neville. Lucky you travelling to Rio. Fab.

March 5th, 2024 13:22

On Waking Up in Rio
Teddy.15 said:

Seems like a dream to me, waking up anywhere in Rio 🌹 Neville slumberbashing in Brazil how wonderful 💜

March 5th, 2024 13:00

On Waking Up in Rio
orchidee said:

Good write N.

March 5th, 2024 11:04

On Waking Up in Rio
Neilton said:

That\'s literally me after my afternoon sleep!Great poem.

March 5th, 2024 10:53

On Waking Up in Rio
Accidental Poet said:

Sounds like one of those dreams where you wake up and nothing makes sense. Been there done that. 😉

March 5th, 2024 10:00

On Waking Up in Rio
Doggerel Dave said:

Lifting your head could have been a very risky enterprise, Neville...best to take such extraordinary moves extremely gently indeed.......

March 5th, 2024 07:51

On Waking Up in Rio
Tom Dylan said:

Nicely done, Neville. Perfectly captured the feeling of waking up and wondering where you are and what\'s going on. :-)

March 5th, 2024 06:02

Entres
Cassie58 said:

Now there are munchies and munchies. I prefer the chocolate sort. The taste of chocolate can certainly give me a high.Look where I drifted with your lines Neville. Good sunny day to ya.

March 5th, 2024 03:14

Recall
Cassie58 said:

Memories can be pleasant to visit once in a while, but lingering in the what ifs is not living in the now, where you can be building stronger. I guess that’s not easy when we live in times of such rapid and sometimes unwelcome change. Collisions are often painful. That!s where I drifted to Neville. Have a happy Tuesday my friend.

March 5th, 2024 02:28

Recall
Goldfinch60 said:

We must always move forward Neville, we can do nothing about our past except use our experience to make the future better.

Andy

March 5th, 2024 02:20



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