Comments received on poems by Neville
Clean Breaks
orchidee said:
I too am fallible, and a gentleman - am I? heehee Except to KP.
December 22nd, 2023 04:54
orchidee said:
I too am fallible, and a gentleman - am I? heehee Except to KP.
December 22nd, 2023 04:54
Clean Breaks
orchidee said:
I wish KP would say this to me, but she clings to me our marriage like a.... you know it, old trout! lol.
December 22nd, 2023 04:53
orchidee said:
I wish KP would say this to me, but she clings to me our marriage like a.... you know it, old trout! lol.
December 22nd, 2023 04:53
Clean Breaks
Cassie58 said:
Delivered with a punch. Sharp and without feeling. She undoubtedly had someone else at the top of the queue. Breaks are always easier for those who have found someone else. The poor sod left behind is the one that flounders in a quagmire of hurt. Painful brevity here Neville.
December 22nd, 2023 04:36
Cassie58 said:
Delivered with a punch. Sharp and without feeling. She undoubtedly had someone else at the top of the queue. Breaks are always easier for those who have found someone else. The poor sod left behind is the one that flounders in a quagmire of hurt. Painful brevity here Neville.
December 22nd, 2023 04:36
Going Against the Flow
MendedFences27 said:
I wondered what possessed her to leave, but then reading your comments answered that questioned. A disturbed young girl, sort of lost in this world. It was saddening to read. Your poem describes a parting of ways between two lovers, that one cannot understand, because it is illogical. The way you wove in the bridge is cleverly done. A most enjoyable read. - Phil A.
December 21st, 2023 21:50
MendedFences27 said:
I wondered what possessed her to leave, but then reading your comments answered that questioned. A disturbed young girl, sort of lost in this world. It was saddening to read. Your poem describes a parting of ways between two lovers, that one cannot understand, because it is illogical. The way you wove in the bridge is cleverly done. A most enjoyable read. - Phil A.
December 21st, 2023 21:50
Going Against the Flow
Nicholas Browning said:
I believe it went, \"She\'s cold as ice!\"
A good read Sir Nev, much enjoyed the emotional coaster.
December 21st, 2023 09:31
Nicholas Browning said:
I believe it went, \"She\'s cold as ice!\"
A good read Sir Nev, much enjoyed the emotional coaster.
December 21st, 2023 09:31
Going Against the Flow
Cassie58 said:
Ice cold stares, going against the flow, and bridges,
When I first read these lines, I saw a dead woman in a river, but then I scrolled down further to find that you had given the game away.
Maybe she just wants to be remembered and that is why she still haunts you. Light a candle for her and speak fondly to her. Maybe then, she will leave you be Neville. An emotive write, sad with it too. Suicide, such a lonely, violent ending 🙁
December 21st, 2023 05:06
Cassie58 said:
Ice cold stares, going against the flow, and bridges,
When I first read these lines, I saw a dead woman in a river, but then I scrolled down further to find that you had given the game away.
Maybe she just wants to be remembered and that is why she still haunts you. Light a candle for her and speak fondly to her. Maybe then, she will leave you be Neville. An emotive write, sad with it too. Suicide, such a lonely, violent ending 🙁
December 21st, 2023 05:06
Going Against the Flow
orchidee said:
This sounds suspiciously like another tale of KP and I. Did ya marry her sister? Has she got any?!
December 21st, 2023 03:10
orchidee said:
This sounds suspiciously like another tale of KP and I. Did ya marry her sister? Has she got any?!
December 21st, 2023 03:10
Going Against the Flow
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Neville, may she flow back to you soon.
Andy
December 21st, 2023 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Neville, may she flow back to you soon.
Andy
December 21st, 2023 02:27
Rank Order
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Neville but many idiots think they are.
Andy
December 21st, 2023 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Neville but many idiots think they are.
Andy
December 21st, 2023 02:23
Rank Order
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - I\'ll slide in at the bottom and give certain needy folks above (not immediately above!) a leg up....they tell me its getting close to Christmas, so let\'s play at forgiveness and all that.......
December 20th, 2023 19:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - I\'ll slide in at the bottom and give certain needy folks above (not immediately above!) a leg up....they tell me its getting close to Christmas, so let\'s play at forgiveness and all that.......
December 20th, 2023 19:15
Glow
Doggerel Dave said:
Crossed wires here I feel, but this is the way language expands to encompass new realities....etc....
December 20th, 2023 18:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Crossed wires here I feel, but this is the way language expands to encompass new realities....etc....
December 20th, 2023 18:41
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MendedFences27 said:
Someone just got put in their place. All need remember, the higher up you go the further you can fall.
The longer the list the more to be disappointed.
A lot to be said for this short of a poem. The message came in loud and clear. Why do people insist on being \"Rank\"ed? it\'s as if everything is a game. Enjoyed this one. - Phil A.
December 20th, 2023 15:36
MendedFences27 said:
Someone just got put in their place. All need remember, the higher up you go the further you can fall.
The longer the list the more to be disappointed.
A lot to be said for this short of a poem. The message came in loud and clear. Why do people insist on being \"Rank\"ed? it\'s as if everything is a game. Enjoyed this one. - Phil A.
December 20th, 2023 15:36
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Accidental Poet said:
I guess that makes two of us Orchi, at least that way there\'s no let down. 😁
December 20th, 2023 15:18
Accidental Poet said:
I guess that makes two of us Orchi, at least that way there\'s no let down. 😁
December 20th, 2023 15:18
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Cassie58 said:
The title by the way is a brilliant play on words.
December 20th, 2023 07:20
Cassie58 said:
The title by the way is a brilliant play on words.
December 20th, 2023 07:20
Rank Order
Cassie58 said:
Perfection in the way this has been executed. The last couplet goes for the jugular. Masterful in delivery Neville. What a put down for someone in cloud cuckoo land :)
December 20th, 2023 06:22
Cassie58 said:
Perfection in the way this has been executed. The last couplet goes for the jugular. Masterful in delivery Neville. What a put down for someone in cloud cuckoo land :)
December 20th, 2023 06:22
Glow
Doggerel Dave said:
Quite possibly fun while it lasted... I hope the \'disciples\' weren\'t too bitter....
December 19th, 2023 20:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Quite possibly fun while it lasted... I hope the \'disciples\' weren\'t too bitter....
December 19th, 2023 20:32
Glow
Accidental Poet said:
Maybe Orchi should meet this lady of the night? 🤔 Then again, maybe not.
December 19th, 2023 13:01
Accidental Poet said:
Maybe Orchi should meet this lady of the night? 🤔 Then again, maybe not.
December 19th, 2023 13:01
Glow
Cassie58 said:
That glow and the drawn curtains makes me think of a working gal. A lady of the night, maybe. Sackcloth though? Would have thought she might have worn something a little softer to the touch. It seems she was troubled by all her shadows. I can understand that. Bills have to be paid. Children have to be fed. What an intriguing write. My imagination seems to have gone awol with this write Neville. Glow though, has a certain warmth to it. Captivating writing for sure from your prolific and varied pen.
December 19th, 2023 12:03
Cassie58 said:
That glow and the drawn curtains makes me think of a working gal. A lady of the night, maybe. Sackcloth though? Would have thought she might have worn something a little softer to the touch. It seems she was troubled by all her shadows. I can understand that. Bills have to be paid. Children have to be fed. What an intriguing write. My imagination seems to have gone awol with this write Neville. Glow though, has a certain warmth to it. Captivating writing for sure from your prolific and varied pen.
December 19th, 2023 12:03
Glow
Goldfinch60 said:
That glow will always be with her and in your mind though Neville.
Andy
December 19th, 2023 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
That glow will always be with her and in your mind though Neville.
Andy
December 19th, 2023 02:27
From Big Things Small
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville and so true in many people, whey do they do it?
Andy
December 19th, 2023 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville and so true in many people, whey do they do it?
Andy
December 19th, 2023 01:31
From Big Things Small
Accidental Poet said:
Some can\'t help themselves. Like when their head swells thinking it\'s all about them. Egotistical minds like birds flock together. Great write though N. 😉
December 18th, 2023 15:06
Accidental Poet said:
Some can\'t help themselves. Like when their head swells thinking it\'s all about them. Egotistical minds like birds flock together. Great write though N. 😉
December 18th, 2023 15:06
From Big Things Small
Cassie58 said:
Maybe some people just have too much to say? There are times when a bit of quiet is appreciated. This little piece of brevity can generate much thought and different thinking Neville. Second reading of this, I sensed a little frustration.
December 18th, 2023 15:01
Cassie58 said:
Maybe some people just have too much to say? There are times when a bit of quiet is appreciated. This little piece of brevity can generate much thought and different thinking Neville. Second reading of this, I sensed a little frustration.
December 18th, 2023 15:01
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