Comments received on poems by Neville



When it All Boils Down to Bad Men and Fools
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work. Edgy.

May 14th, 2024 17:27

When it All Boils Down to Bad Men and Fools
orchidee said:

Baa-woof. Or baa-hoowwwlll.
I\'m a wolf in sheep\'s clothing.
Or a sheep in wolf\'s clothing?
I could be anything, even mutant giant hamster, as some suppose from my pic! lol.
A wolf doesn\'t go \'woof\' does it? lol.

May 14th, 2024 07:18

When it All Boils Down to Bad Men and Fools
Doggerel Dave said:

Poetic noir if ever I\'ve encountered it, Neville.
Don\'t give me much chance of a bedtime (coming very soon) with the prospect of sweet dreams, do you?

May 14th, 2024 07:00

When it All Boils Down to Bad Men and Fools
2781 said:

A joyful little message!

May 14th, 2024 05:37

When it All Boils Down to Bad Men and Fools
Teddy.15 said:

Wow I wouldn\'t want to be a sheep my dear Nev, how very dark and powerful. Superb emotion and kudos. 🌹

May 14th, 2024 04:57

A World That Was
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words Neville.

Yes there once was a time and I remember it well, such wonderful memories.

Andy

May 14th, 2024 01:18

A World That Was
Cassie58 said:

This makes me pine for all things lost. Thankfully I have a memory. Will always thank my lucky stars, I was born in the right decade. We are moving too fast and furious. You are saying it as it is Neville.

May 13th, 2024 11:22

A World That Was
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous. You nailed this one.

May 13th, 2024 10:37

A World That Was
Doggerel Dave said:

I didn’t get no satisfaction then.. Yes! Bloody lucky to be there even if there was still much wrong with the world.

But no double negative this time round, many are suffering as you list so carefully, Neville, I’m just lucky plus some good timing to have cushioned myself from most of it.


May 13th, 2024 07:32

A World That Was
Tom Dylan said:

Completely agree, Neville. Every single line really hits home.

May 13th, 2024 02:12

A World That Was
2781 said:

That world is still available, just have to divorce ourselves from the other.

May 13th, 2024 02:09

A World That Was
Teddy.15 said:

Kudos Nev. 🌹 I want to say so much but I\'ll leave it like this because we have the same idea\'s on this stuff. ❤️

May 13th, 2024 02:06

A World That Was
Alan R said:

Was a blessing growing up as a mind without mobile phones all around

May 13th, 2024 02:02

A World That Was
orchidee said:

There\'s a lot of s*** about in various ways in life, it seems. Doh!

May 13th, 2024 01:49

Back When Jessie Had a Real Thing About Handbags
Goldfinch60 said:

Such strong words Neville about an absolutely dreadful habit. I hope you writing these words brings a release to your mind.

Andy

May 13th, 2024 01:04

Back When Jessie Had a Real Thing About Handbags
orchidee said:

A sensitive write N.

May 12th, 2024 14:48

Back When Jessie Had a Real Thing About Handbags
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful and funny. You really brought this home. I love it.

May 12th, 2024 10:55

Back When Jessie Had a Real Thing About Handbags
2781 said:

Jails, institutions, and death.



May 12th, 2024 06:39

Back When Jessie Had a Real Thing About Handbags
Teddy.15 said:

Charing cross? Hey the 80\'s were hard on the London streets, I was young but I had friends older and just like Jessie, drugs and shoplifting, was a part of the scene sadly, then came the super model in the 90\'s social pressure and I remember that. I feel nothing but empathy for Jessie. ❤️

May 12th, 2024 04:37

Hold the Sugar
Bobby O said:

Metaphorical Moments carve indelible impressions and even if we beg ourselves to minimize a possibly exaggerated reflection of the event , it’s a battle we often lose.
Like Dat!

May 11th, 2024 16:09

Hold the Sugar
Bella Shepard said:

There is a feeling of personal loss about this poem that is so very touching. A realization that something precious has slipped away, something which was so familiar can no longer be recalled. This really tugged at the heartstrings my friend, incredible write!

May 11th, 2024 13:11

Hold the Sugar
orchidee said:

Good write N.

May 11th, 2024 09:46

Hold the Sugar
Doggerel Dave said:

That table has seen the wars over the years.... maybe not wars.... that\'s for you to say... Well anyway since it seems to have survived.. I need a strong table.. If at anytime you were thinking of flogging it - sans all the coffee paraphernalia of course....

May 11th, 2024 06:51

Hold the Sugar
Teddy.15 said:

Awe, if it was an important moment for her then yes, she would remember, if not then your writing a poem because you have those fond memories but that\'s love and reflection which makes you a poet in every sense dear Nev. 🌹

May 11th, 2024 06:37

Hold the Sugar
2781 said:

Sounds like me, forgettable.

May 11th, 2024 05:29

Good Reasons for Spilling the Beans
Goldfinch60 said:

One of the things I say in life Neville is \"This is me, if you don\'t like what you see it is not my problem, it is yours!\"

Andy

May 11th, 2024 01:18

Good Reasons for Spilling the Beans
Doggerel Dave said:

You\'ve lead an extraordinary emotionally tortured life Neville, and until you publish your memoir which should place all this in some semblance of order, I will continue to be confounded by the extent of your suffering............................

May 10th, 2024 20:00

Good Reasons for Spilling the Beans
Cassie58 said:

Betrayal by so called friends as well as her is the pits. Spilling the beans serves no purpose. It just adds fuel to the fire. Let it be. Retaliation just piles on more hurt. Quiet dignity is so admirable such a fine quality.

May 10th, 2024 12:29

Good Reasons for Spilling the Beans
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work. Right on time. Thank you.

May 10th, 2024 10:46

Good Reasons for Spilling the Beans
Teddy.15 said:

They weren\'t that good friends if they went along with her for the ride, I\'d say move on my dear friend spilling the beans is something only prince harry would do. Dignity is everything and the truth always comes out. 🌹

May 10th, 2024 05:14



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