Comments received on poems by Neville
Not Yet Quite Forgot
Cassie58 said:
Ouch. That must have hurt. This scene plays out clearly before my eyes.
a memory foam mattress
of many years lieing - now that is quite brill Neville.
That tells a story. I saw her mouthing your name. The air was blue.
Brevity which turns into a movie. Not something you would forget easily, though time may soften the blow.
Hits the emotions. So well related. Have an easy day my friend.
January 25th, 2024 05:31
Cassie58 said:
Ouch. That must have hurt. This scene plays out clearly before my eyes.
a memory foam mattress
of many years lieing - now that is quite brill Neville.
That tells a story. I saw her mouthing your name. The air was blue.
Brevity which turns into a movie. Not something you would forget easily, though time may soften the blow.
Hits the emotions. So well related. Have an easy day my friend.
January 25th, 2024 05:31
Haiku 4 Having Me She Said
Teddy.15 said:
lol 🤣 that\'s a great senryu made me chuckle 🤭
January 25th, 2024 04:51
Teddy.15 said:
lol 🤣 that\'s a great senryu made me chuckle 🤭
January 25th, 2024 04:51
When it Hurts So Good Why Not Just Bring it On
Goldfinch60 said:
Cannot understand why anybody wants to be hurt Neville but it takes all types.
Andy
January 25th, 2024 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Cannot understand why anybody wants to be hurt Neville but it takes all types.
Andy
January 25th, 2024 02:22
When it Hurts So Good Why Not Just Bring it On
Accidental Poet said:
AKA an Attention Addict. 🤔
January 24th, 2024 09:38
Accidental Poet said:
AKA an Attention Addict. 🤔
January 24th, 2024 09:38
When it Hurts So Good Why Not Just Bring it On
orchidee said:
So - you know KP wants to be punished. She\'s got me - what could be worse for her?! lol.
I only \'punish\' her in saying \'I\'ve no money for you for botox today, dear\'. I\'m a naughty fluffy Guinea Pig.
January 24th, 2024 07:27
orchidee said:
So - you know KP wants to be punished. She\'s got me - what could be worse for her?! lol.
I only \'punish\' her in saying \'I\'ve no money for you for botox today, dear\'. I\'m a naughty fluffy Guinea Pig.
January 24th, 2024 07:27
When it Hurts So Good Why Not Just Bring it On
Cassie58 said:
A little poem that warrants more than a little thinking. I looked at your author notes. All I can add I guess, is that variety is said to be the spice of life. Each to his own. Is this anuvver day at the office?
You have a fab day Neville.
Chris
January 24th, 2024 06:11
Cassie58 said:
A little poem that warrants more than a little thinking. I looked at your author notes. All I can add I guess, is that variety is said to be the spice of life. Each to his own. Is this anuvver day at the office?
You have a fab day Neville.
Chris
January 24th, 2024 06:11
This is Not a Threat Okay
Bella Shepard said:
I suppose we\'ve all have experiences where we look back and think \"What the.....\". But when you squirrel them away, and keep them for a rainy day, therein the mystery lies. Naughty, but fun my friend, I say with a grin.
January 23rd, 2024 15:25
Bella Shepard said:
I suppose we\'ve all have experiences where we look back and think \"What the.....\". But when you squirrel them away, and keep them for a rainy day, therein the mystery lies. Naughty, but fun my friend, I say with a grin.
January 23rd, 2024 15:25
This is Not a Threat Okay
Cassie58 said:
Dear Neville, I am looking for the positives in this write. I found only negatives. The most important lesson I think in life is to learn from those negatives. Maybe that is the positive here. Have a lovely Tuesday my friend.
January 23rd, 2024 05:22
Cassie58 said:
Dear Neville, I am looking for the positives in this write. I found only negatives. The most important lesson I think in life is to learn from those negatives. Maybe that is the positive here. Have a lovely Tuesday my friend.
January 23rd, 2024 05:22
This is Not a Threat Okay
orchidee said:
None of the photos KP posed for - still does - did her any good either. She tortures me. She says she will get out the Family Album and show me every picture in it, if I upset her! lol.
January 23rd, 2024 03:24
orchidee said:
None of the photos KP posed for - still does - did her any good either. She tortures me. She says she will get out the Family Album and show me every picture in it, if I upset her! lol.
January 23rd, 2024 03:24
This is Not a Threat Okay
Goldfinch60 said:
Those photos will never get lost Neville.
Andy
January 23rd, 2024 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Those photos will never get lost Neville.
Andy
January 23rd, 2024 02:25
Nothing is Free
Bobby O said:
Nuanced precision precluding customary casted semantic opens new path to alternate certainty.
Like Clyde Mcphatter carved trail
ONLY YOU
January 22nd, 2024 15:27
Bobby O said:
Nuanced precision precluding customary casted semantic opens new path to alternate certainty.
Like Clyde Mcphatter carved trail
ONLY YOU
January 22nd, 2024 15:27
Nothing is Free
Doggerel Dave said:
The freedom of absence absolutely screwed, monetarised via meditation classes and sixties trips to India for an encounter with some guru, who would (note this, young ladies) relieve you of your virginity (if, that is…) in the form of a very sacred blessing.
For those who stayed at home the possession of superfluous items at high cost compensated for a spiritual awakening……
January 22nd, 2024 06:43
Doggerel Dave said:
The freedom of absence absolutely screwed, monetarised via meditation classes and sixties trips to India for an encounter with some guru, who would (note this, young ladies) relieve you of your virginity (if, that is…) in the form of a very sacred blessing.
For those who stayed at home the possession of superfluous items at high cost compensated for a spiritual awakening……
January 22nd, 2024 06:43
Nothing is Free
Cassie58 said:
Oh my goodness! How very blue:)
Have a good Monday Neville.
January 22nd, 2024 03:41
Cassie58 said:
Oh my goodness! How very blue:)
Have a good Monday Neville.
January 22nd, 2024 03:41
Nothing is Free
orchidee said:
I keep telling KP that botox is not free! lol.
January 22nd, 2024 03:17
orchidee said:
I keep telling KP that botox is not free! lol.
January 22nd, 2024 03:17
Nothing is Free
Accidental Poet said:
And top shelf is this little scribble N. Excellent. 😉👍
January 22nd, 2024 03:05
Accidental Poet said:
And top shelf is this little scribble N. Excellent. 😉👍
January 22nd, 2024 03:05
kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope that this was real Neville and not a miracle that you imagined.
Andy
January 22nd, 2024 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope that this was real Neville and not a miracle that you imagined.
Andy
January 22nd, 2024 02:14
kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds to me a Knight in shining armour, helping someone back to their best is not an easy task and then some. Beautiful to know.
January 22nd, 2024 01:55
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds to me a Knight in shining armour, helping someone back to their best is not an easy task and then some. Beautiful to know.
January 22nd, 2024 01:55
kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru
MendedFences27 said:
A wonderful tale of what must surely be a Japanese legend. I don\'t know of such a legend. The only connection I could see is their art called Kintsugi, where they take broken ceramics and repair them with lacquer and gold pigment, such that the finished repair work looks like threads on the object. Thus, restoring its beauty. Almost like a miracle. - Phil A.
January 21st, 2024 16:40
MendedFences27 said:
A wonderful tale of what must surely be a Japanese legend. I don\'t know of such a legend. The only connection I could see is their art called Kintsugi, where they take broken ceramics and repair them with lacquer and gold pigment, such that the finished repair work looks like threads on the object. Thus, restoring its beauty. Almost like a miracle. - Phil A.
January 21st, 2024 16:40
kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru
Bella Shepard said:
\"Let\'s make it neatly\", according to translation, I was interested. I love the sentiment of this poem, of caring so much for another, to take them to heart and make them whole, seeing something wonderful in them. Beautiful my friend!!
January 21st, 2024 14:18
Bella Shepard said:
\"Let\'s make it neatly\", according to translation, I was interested. I love the sentiment of this poem, of caring so much for another, to take them to heart and make them whole, seeing something wonderful in them. Beautiful my friend!!
January 21st, 2024 14:18
kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru
orchidee said:
Bit of French there?! Fido will translate it. lol.
January 21st, 2024 08:04
orchidee said:
Bit of French there?! Fido will translate it. lol.
January 21st, 2024 08:04
kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru
Cassie58 said:
Broken items of china and glass can be restored and value can be added to them. Where they are broken, they can be repaired and gold powder or leaf can be worked into the flaws. This is a Japanese art. In your poem, I imagined a shattered bowl put together again and restored to its former beauty. What a lovely idea. I watched a video. Fascinating Neville.
A bit kinder than Botox eh? Happy Sunday.
Chris
January 21st, 2024 06:57
Cassie58 said:
Broken items of china and glass can be restored and value can be added to them. Where they are broken, they can be repaired and gold powder or leaf can be worked into the flaws. This is a Japanese art. In your poem, I imagined a shattered bowl put together again and restored to its former beauty. What a lovely idea. I watched a video. Fascinating Neville.
A bit kinder than Botox eh? Happy Sunday.
Chris
January 21st, 2024 06:57
kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru
Doggerel Dave said:
Did try Guv, honestly. All I got was involved instructions re tense etc (never dun that in English, let alone Japanese) plus an offer to fly me to Japan tout suite. And that ain\'t Japanese either, but it\'s the best I can do to sound sophisticated.
January 21st, 2024 05:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Did try Guv, honestly. All I got was involved instructions re tense etc (never dun that in English, let alone Japanese) plus an offer to fly me to Japan tout suite. And that ain\'t Japanese either, but it\'s the best I can do to sound sophisticated.
January 21st, 2024 05:34
Gaia’s Secret Garden
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds like Gaia\'s a bit frisky lass. And Neville\'s after her... 😆
January 20th, 2024 10:17
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds like Gaia\'s a bit frisky lass. And Neville\'s after her... 😆
January 20th, 2024 10:17
Gaia’s Secret Garden
Cassie58 said:
Goddess Gaia, brings out the free spirit in all her admirers. I sense that here in your lines.
Surrounded
by rainbows then
dancing
like a candle flame
How lovely is that. Have a super Saturday Neville.
January 20th, 2024 04:05
Cassie58 said:
Goddess Gaia, brings out the free spirit in all her admirers. I sense that here in your lines.
Surrounded
by rainbows then
dancing
like a candle flame
How lovely is that. Have a super Saturday Neville.
January 20th, 2024 04:05
Gaia’s Secret Garden
Goldfinch60 said:
Just lay there Neville but make sure that you rise into the world.
Andy
January 20th, 2024 03:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Just lay there Neville but make sure that you rise into the world.
Andy
January 20th, 2024 03:08
Another One of Those Café Moments
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, took me back to those days in the sixties where music was good and the girls were so good to look at by a shy one like me.
Andy
January 20th, 2024 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, took me back to those days in the sixties where music was good and the girls were so good to look at by a shy one like me.
Andy
January 20th, 2024 02:45
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