Comments received on poems by Neville
The Mess They Leave Behind
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
That’s really sad … (( has to be difficult to hear that type of news .
Some people are so depressed that they think there is no other option ..
I guess the guy should have stayed and not left her alone
July 18th, 2023 05:19
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
That’s really sad … (( has to be difficult to hear that type of news .
Some people are so depressed that they think there is no other option ..
I guess the guy should have stayed and not left her alone
July 18th, 2023 05:19
Clearly Departed
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Neville, I am so fortunate that in my long life I have never seen anything like this happen. I am so grateful.
Andy
July 18th, 2023 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Neville, I am so fortunate that in my long life I have never seen anything like this happen. I am so grateful.
Andy
July 18th, 2023 00:23
Clearly Departed
MendedFences27 said:
A gruesome thing to witness. By penning this poem maybe some will take heed, or at least pay attention while playing.
Your poem is short and to the point. and graphic enough to leave a lasting impression. A good one. - Phil A.
July 17th, 2023 12:39
MendedFences27 said:
A gruesome thing to witness. By penning this poem maybe some will take heed, or at least pay attention while playing.
Your poem is short and to the point. and graphic enough to leave a lasting impression. A good one. - Phil A.
July 17th, 2023 12:39
Clearly Departed
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve actually seen a few things over the weeks very disturbing. However you have another beautifully written piece here. Glad you were only the watcher dear Nev. ❤️
July 17th, 2023 05:05
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve actually seen a few things over the weeks very disturbing. However you have another beautifully written piece here. Glad you were only the watcher dear Nev. ❤️
July 17th, 2023 05:05
Clearly Departed
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, I\'ve totalled a few cars in my past
a most shameful past
(hope you\'re ok my freind
always an unnerving thing to experience)
Hope you n yours have a good week, stay safe Hyung
July 17th, 2023 03:28
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, I\'ve totalled a few cars in my past
a most shameful past
(hope you\'re ok my freind
always an unnerving thing to experience)
Hope you n yours have a good week, stay safe Hyung
July 17th, 2023 03:28
So Very Roughly Taken
L. B. Mek said:
all abusers and rapist\'s
should have the words
\'deserved it\' and a mini skirt
tattooed on their foreheads for life
so everyone can understand
how depraved and ignorant
that thought process, truly is!
(an important write Hyung
and yes, our gender has a long
way
to go, before we can begin
to comprehend the collective depths
of our generational crimes)
still, we who acknowledge
and wage a war, against
that societal monster we know too well
must believe in a better
and do what we can
hoping, somehow
it may accumulate to being enough
to offset what evil is committed
by the weak, spineless men of the world
July 17th, 2023 03:24
L. B. Mek said:
all abusers and rapist\'s
should have the words
\'deserved it\' and a mini skirt
tattooed on their foreheads for life
so everyone can understand
how depraved and ignorant
that thought process, truly is!
(an important write Hyung
and yes, our gender has a long
way
to go, before we can begin
to comprehend the collective depths
of our generational crimes)
still, we who acknowledge
and wage a war, against
that societal monster we know too well
must believe in a better
and do what we can
hoping, somehow
it may accumulate to being enough
to offset what evil is committed
by the weak, spineless men of the world
July 17th, 2023 03:24
A Very Temporary Arrangement
L. B. Mek said:
if love is falling deep
then be thankful for our fear
of falling
keeping us from being head over heels
for every person we\'re attracted to
theirs just not enough rope in the world
to pull ourselves
out of those pits we dig, time n again..
(far too many of us scarred by love will relate I think, Hyung)
wonderfully paced
July 17th, 2023 03:13
L. B. Mek said:
if love is falling deep
then be thankful for our fear
of falling
keeping us from being head over heels
for every person we\'re attracted to
theirs just not enough rope in the world
to pull ourselves
out of those pits we dig, time n again..
(far too many of us scarred by love will relate I think, Hyung)
wonderfully paced
July 17th, 2023 03:13
Clearly Departed
orchidee said:
I was gonna mow down KP, but she bounced up again, with all that botox! lol. That\'s going too far, says Fido.
July 17th, 2023 02:28
orchidee said:
I was gonna mow down KP, but she bounced up again, with all that botox! lol. That\'s going too far, says Fido.
July 17th, 2023 02:28
So Very Roughly Taken
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you dear Nev for tackling a subject that women have always struggled with in just about every imaginable place. Kudos my friend!
July 16th, 2023 14:34
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you dear Nev for tackling a subject that women have always struggled with in just about every imaginable place. Kudos my friend!
July 16th, 2023 14:34
So Very Roughly Taken
orchidee said:
is it a terrible thing, though I been diverted by cheesecloth.
Can ya beat cheese, like you can beat an egg? It\'s getting late in the day - causes me to utter more nonsense than usual! lol.
July 16th, 2023 14:26
orchidee said:
is it a terrible thing, though I been diverted by cheesecloth.
Can ya beat cheese, like you can beat an egg? It\'s getting late in the day - causes me to utter more nonsense than usual! lol.
July 16th, 2023 14:26
So Very Roughly Taken
Teddy.15 said:
No thrills at all here you say it like it is and unfortunately in your incredible line of work darling Nev, you see this all too often, it\'s people like you who are 100% selfless to take the time to help others and I can only speak as 1 woman but I say thank you a thousand times. 💓
July 16th, 2023 09:54
Teddy.15 said:
No thrills at all here you say it like it is and unfortunately in your incredible line of work darling Nev, you see this all too often, it\'s people like you who are 100% selfless to take the time to help others and I can only speak as 1 woman but I say thank you a thousand times. 💓
July 16th, 2023 09:54
So Very Roughly Taken
MendedFences27 said:
Those last four lines paint the picture.
We live in a troubled time, but this has gone on for centuries.
Short and concise and to the point, a piece of master craft. - Phil A.
July 16th, 2023 09:47
MendedFences27 said:
Those last four lines paint the picture.
We live in a troubled time, but this has gone on for centuries.
Short and concise and to the point, a piece of master craft. - Phil A.
July 16th, 2023 09:47
A Very Temporary Arrangement
orchidee said:
It\'s too late for me now - I married KP. Boo hoo! lol.
July 16th, 2023 02:04
orchidee said:
It\'s too late for me now - I married KP. Boo hoo! lol.
July 16th, 2023 02:04
So Very Roughly Taken
orchidee said:
I bought KP a cheesecloth - dress? Nope, a bit of material to put on wooden chopping board when chopping cheese! So the chopping board does not get damaged. I thought more about the chopping board than of her. lol.
July 16th, 2023 02:01
orchidee said:
I bought KP a cheesecloth - dress? Nope, a bit of material to put on wooden chopping board when chopping cheese! So the chopping board does not get damaged. I thought more about the chopping board than of her. lol.
July 16th, 2023 02:01
When a Diet Does a Fat Lot of Good
Goldfinch60 said:
So many people have eating problems, I am very fortunate in that I will eat anything place in front of me but not overeat.
\"Everything in moderation.\"
Andy
July 16th, 2023 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
So many people have eating problems, I am very fortunate in that I will eat anything place in front of me but not overeat.
\"Everything in moderation.\"
Andy
July 16th, 2023 01:51
As a Matter of Fact
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, aging is not a kind process in some ways Neville.
Andy
July 16th, 2023 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, aging is not a kind process in some ways Neville.
Andy
July 16th, 2023 01:25
A Very Temporary Arrangement
Goldfinch60 said:
But love is so important in life, my long life has been filled with it.
Andy
July 16th, 2023 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
But love is so important in life, my long life has been filled with it.
Andy
July 16th, 2023 01:15
A Very Temporary Arrangement
MendedFences27 said:
Yes, when you finally realize that she\'s not the one for you. That something is just not right. No matter what happens next, someone will be hurt. Unless she truly does \"understand\" and then maybe she is the one for you, - Phil A.
July 15th, 2023 19:06
MendedFences27 said:
Yes, when you finally realize that she\'s not the one for you. That something is just not right. No matter what happens next, someone will be hurt. Unless she truly does \"understand\" and then maybe she is the one for you, - Phil A.
July 15th, 2023 19:06
A Very Temporary Arrangement
Teddy.15 said:
Denying love lol so very clever my dear Nev. Love the thought of a lover pretending it\'s not true knowing that it\'s probably the greatest love of all ❤️
July 15th, 2023 16:58
Teddy.15 said:
Denying love lol so very clever my dear Nev. Love the thought of a lover pretending it\'s not true knowing that it\'s probably the greatest love of all ❤️
July 15th, 2023 16:58
A Very Temporary Arrangement
Bobby O said:
Without that slight fatalistic tinge and hue it’s exactly almost an Irving Berlin song
Tomato tomatoes
July 15th, 2023 12:47
Bobby O said:
Without that slight fatalistic tinge and hue it’s exactly almost an Irving Berlin song
Tomato tomatoes
July 15th, 2023 12:47
A Very Temporary Arrangement
Bobby O said:
Without that slight fatalistic tinge and hue it’s exactly almost an Irving Berlin song
Tomato tomatoes
July 15th, 2023 12:43
Bobby O said:
Without that slight fatalistic tinge and hue it’s exactly almost an Irving Berlin song
Tomato tomatoes
July 15th, 2023 12:43
As a Matter of Fact
L. B. Mek said:
erm, one less glass
try that out
and remember Shaggy
gave us our out
just sing \'It wasn\'t me\'
till some colour returns
to your face
and your mind is once gain
capable of grouping words...
(my 2 cents worth
if it helps
well, erm
there\'s actually more
I just ........t)
lol
have a great weekend Hyung
July 14th, 2023 04:04
L. B. Mek said:
erm, one less glass
try that out
and remember Shaggy
gave us our out
just sing \'It wasn\'t me\'
till some colour returns
to your face
and your mind is once gain
capable of grouping words...
(my 2 cents worth
if it helps
well, erm
there\'s actually more
I just ........t)
lol
have a great weekend Hyung
July 14th, 2023 04:04
When a Diet Does a Fat Lot of Good
L. B. Mek said:
so true Hyung, gotta find a way
to laugh about it
sadly, having experiencing it
close up
has changed my perspective
these days, I see anyone who survives an eating disorder
as a genuine hero
that vicious cycle of psychological
and physical, toxic self comparisons
is so hard to break
just like most debilitating addictions
25 years sober, is no guarantee
this is a war they have to fight
all their lives
only without diabetes injections
to support their weaknesses
one slip, and it all starts again
horrid, horrid plague for a person
to try and overcome
they\'re all heroes in my book
and those helping them
tantamount to saints
they both need so much empathetic stamina..
July 14th, 2023 03:59
L. B. Mek said:
so true Hyung, gotta find a way
to laugh about it
sadly, having experiencing it
close up
has changed my perspective
these days, I see anyone who survives an eating disorder
as a genuine hero
that vicious cycle of psychological
and physical, toxic self comparisons
is so hard to break
just like most debilitating addictions
25 years sober, is no guarantee
this is a war they have to fight
all their lives
only without diabetes injections
to support their weaknesses
one slip, and it all starts again
horrid, horrid plague for a person
to try and overcome
they\'re all heroes in my book
and those helping them
tantamount to saints
they both need so much empathetic stamina..
July 14th, 2023 03:59
Seriously Wronged
L. B. Mek said:
I don\'t know, Hyung
lately
I\'ve been thinking these lady\'s
know exactly what they\'re doing
it\'s the fools
that fall for the thirsty silvers
while surrendering their ticket
to heaven on earth..
(stats on single men and ladies
is so off kilter
I gotta think there\'s some design
at play?
but what do I know, lol)
acute commentary and timely, a great shorty
July 14th, 2023 03:50
L. B. Mek said:
I don\'t know, Hyung
lately
I\'ve been thinking these lady\'s
know exactly what they\'re doing
it\'s the fools
that fall for the thirsty silvers
while surrendering their ticket
to heaven on earth..
(stats on single men and ladies
is so off kilter
I gotta think there\'s some design
at play?
but what do I know, lol)
acute commentary and timely, a great shorty
July 14th, 2023 03:50
By Definition Only
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(perception as a conduit to our volition
so often, we\'re pushed
to look the other way, acting ignorant
so we can avoid reprisals
living like we\'re on a rotary of fate
knowing eventually
we\'ll soon be facing life\'s heat
strife as all we scope
sunglasses at night, heads lowered
masked like we\'re thieving
each breath
but some, brave enough like you
dear Poet supreme
ink with passion to remind us, that
its never too late
to traverse life, staring down the bul sht
and seeing things for what they are
allowing our choices
to be more than automated outputs
for all the sht they cram
down our eyes and ears, every day
of this endless fight
we named, a life...)
July 14th, 2023 03:45
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(perception as a conduit to our volition
so often, we\'re pushed
to look the other way, acting ignorant
so we can avoid reprisals
living like we\'re on a rotary of fate
knowing eventually
we\'ll soon be facing life\'s heat
strife as all we scope
sunglasses at night, heads lowered
masked like we\'re thieving
each breath
but some, brave enough like you
dear Poet supreme
ink with passion to remind us, that
its never too late
to traverse life, staring down the bul sht
and seeing things for what they are
allowing our choices
to be more than automated outputs
for all the sht they cram
down our eyes and ears, every day
of this endless fight
we named, a life...)
July 14th, 2023 03:45
As a Matter of Fact
Bobby O said:
Idiomatically precise and the obvious not obviated. I look for your pieces and am always glad to discover cuz I then Discover.
July 14th, 2023 03:29
Bobby O said:
Idiomatically precise and the obvious not obviated. I look for your pieces and am always glad to discover cuz I then Discover.
July 14th, 2023 03:29
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