Comments received on poems by Neville
Shadows Don’t Share Secrets
Neville said:
thank you S .. you n hymn are indeed an education .. 👍
July 27th, 2023 01:46
Neville said:
thank you S .. you n hymn are indeed an education .. 👍
July 27th, 2023 01:46
Shadows Don’t Share Secrets
orchidee said:
Good write N.
A rather gloomy-sounding title to a hymn is \'Buried in shadows of the night\'.
July 27th, 2023 01:41
orchidee said:
Good write N.
A rather gloomy-sounding title to a hymn is \'Buried in shadows of the night\'.
July 27th, 2023 01:41
I Think it Only Fair to Suggest
Neil Higgins said:
Greetings Nev.Yes I\'m still alive 🤣 Been away from the site for a while,but will post the occasional poems now and again.
Keep up the fine (intriguing) words 😎
July 26th, 2023 17:55
Neil Higgins said:
Greetings Nev.Yes I\'m still alive 🤣 Been away from the site for a while,but will post the occasional poems now and again.
Keep up the fine (intriguing) words 😎
July 26th, 2023 17:55
I Think it Only Fair to Suggest
Bella Shepard said:
It\'s always the \"what could have been\'s\" that seem to plague us most, because we\'ll never know what an opportunity might have brought, so we lament what never was. We are strange creatures, are we not? Love your insight into human nature, along with your style and grace. Great write my dear Nev!
July 26th, 2023 15:47
Bella Shepard said:
It\'s always the \"what could have been\'s\" that seem to plague us most, because we\'ll never know what an opportunity might have brought, so we lament what never was. We are strange creatures, are we not? Love your insight into human nature, along with your style and grace. Great write my dear Nev!
July 26th, 2023 15:47
I Think it Only Fair to Suggest
orchidee said:
You and Liz on the gin? That glass! I don\'t even know how to include it in comments!😁
July 26th, 2023 14:57
orchidee said:
You and Liz on the gin? That glass! I don\'t even know how to include it in comments!😁
July 26th, 2023 14:57
I Think it Only Fair to Suggest
LIZ said:
But...you ARE asking again. At least...\"suggesting\". You never know! 🙂
July 26th, 2023 02:40
LIZ said:
But...you ARE asking again. At least...\"suggesting\". You never know! 🙂
July 26th, 2023 02:40
I Think it Only Fair to Suggest
Parisab said:
Inventive to make the title be your first stanza-like the ambivalence in this poem-
July 26th, 2023 02:13
Parisab said:
Inventive to make the title be your first stanza-like the ambivalence in this poem-
July 26th, 2023 02:13
I Think it Only Fair to Suggest
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville, you never know it may happen.....
Andy
July 26th, 2023 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville, you never know it may happen.....
Andy
July 26th, 2023 01:08
Just Because She Is ..
Christina8 said:
Congratulations Neville! I bet shes already the light of your life.....C
July 25th, 2023 09:14
Christina8 said:
Congratulations Neville! I bet shes already the light of your life.....C
July 25th, 2023 09:14
Just Because She Is ..
sorenbarrett said:
In these four lines you have encapsulated the frustration of a poet with the language he/she is working with. How many times in writting have I found the word in another language much more fitting for either meaning or rhyme and at time there exists no word that I know that expresses the feeling and no simple metaphor either.
July 25th, 2023 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
In these four lines you have encapsulated the frustration of a poet with the language he/she is working with. How many times in writting have I found the word in another language much more fitting for either meaning or rhyme and at time there exists no word that I know that expresses the feeling and no simple metaphor either.
July 25th, 2023 06:03
Just Because She Is ..
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Congratulations )) nice for you to have a grandkid .. and nice writing aswell
July 25th, 2023 03:49
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Congratulations )) nice for you to have a grandkid .. and nice writing aswell
July 25th, 2023 03:49
Just Because She Is ..
LIZ said:
Mmmmm I still want to hear/read all the words 😉
July 25th, 2023 02:06
LIZ said:
Mmmmm I still want to hear/read all the words 😉
July 25th, 2023 02:06
Just Because She Is ..
orchidee said:
Ahh, a fine write N.
Meanwhile KP - she is.... words unrepeatable in polite company such as yours! lol.
July 25th, 2023 01:57
orchidee said:
Ahh, a fine write N.
Meanwhile KP - she is.... words unrepeatable in polite company such as yours! lol.
July 25th, 2023 01:57
Just Because She Is ..
Goldfinch60 said:
Hello Astrid, may your life be filled with joy and love.
Andy
July 25th, 2023 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Hello Astrid, may your life be filled with joy and love.
Andy
July 25th, 2023 01:16
As Yet Unfurnished
Bella Shepard said:
The thought of a secret room is so beguiling, where the fantasies of your heart are safe and await. Love it!
July 24th, 2023 14:50
Bella Shepard said:
The thought of a secret room is so beguiling, where the fantasies of your heart are safe and await. Love it!
July 24th, 2023 14:50
As Yet Unfurnished
Christina8 said:
I love the thought of a secret room...from your first book...Wonderful thoughts and fantasies listed here...C
July 24th, 2023 09:00
Christina8 said:
I love the thought of a secret room...from your first book...Wonderful thoughts and fantasies listed here...C
July 24th, 2023 09:00
As Yet Unfurnished
LIZ said:
I definitely have a secret room....filled with thoughts...moments, and black rose petals!! 🖤 Beautiful read!!
July 24th, 2023 04:31
LIZ said:
I definitely have a secret room....filled with thoughts...moments, and black rose petals!! 🖤 Beautiful read!!
July 24th, 2023 04:31
As Yet Unfurnished
L. B. Mek said:
erm, so Hyung
sometimes I just read your title and then
lose control of my fingers for a bit
inspired
to try and scribble a little poetic reply
since I so relate with your words
thank you!
(replete, with our youthful zeal
lust inspiring us to love without handbrakes
we were young
all we chased was a place
for us to embrace
and cuddle, all night
since, climbing out
of the toilet window to evade capture
got old, after one rainy weekend
so now
we trace Time, in a finger caress
with that ease of mind
yeah, it\'s a lot of money
when between us, we can barely
pay the rent
let alone the bills, but
the memories we made, in that
very first place, we both
got to call our own, even for just
a while, lasted us a lifetime
dear, first love..
and yes i still remember it all
like it was yesterday
wine n dining you on tuna sandwiches
and cheap strawberry wine
making your lips, taste
a little more sweet, with every sip
I remember it all
no regrets
just mementos I cherish, with pride
knowing how lucky I was
that it was you I got to share
those moments with)
July 24th, 2023 03:21
L. B. Mek said:
erm, so Hyung
sometimes I just read your title and then
lose control of my fingers for a bit
inspired
to try and scribble a little poetic reply
since I so relate with your words
thank you!
(replete, with our youthful zeal
lust inspiring us to love without handbrakes
we were young
all we chased was a place
for us to embrace
and cuddle, all night
since, climbing out
of the toilet window to evade capture
got old, after one rainy weekend
so now
we trace Time, in a finger caress
with that ease of mind
yeah, it\'s a lot of money
when between us, we can barely
pay the rent
let alone the bills, but
the memories we made, in that
very first place, we both
got to call our own, even for just
a while, lasted us a lifetime
dear, first love..
and yes i still remember it all
like it was yesterday
wine n dining you on tuna sandwiches
and cheap strawberry wine
making your lips, taste
a little more sweet, with every sip
I remember it all
no regrets
just mementos I cherish, with pride
knowing how lucky I was
that it was you I got to share
those moments with)
July 24th, 2023 03:21
As Yet Unfurnished
orchidee said:
I refuse to buy KP a secret room where she can give botox treatments to others. lol.
July 24th, 2023 01:42
orchidee said:
I refuse to buy KP a secret room where she can give botox treatments to others. lol.
July 24th, 2023 01:42
Requiem For a Lost Cause
Goldfinch60 said:
That person can be so important in your life Neville.
Andy
July 24th, 2023 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
That person can be so important in your life Neville.
Andy
July 24th, 2023 01:07
As Yet Unfurnished
Goldfinch60 said:
The imagination fills with thoughts Neville. A secret room eh?
Andy
July 24th, 2023 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
The imagination fills with thoughts Neville. A secret room eh?
Andy
July 24th, 2023 00:48
Requiem For a Lost Cause
MendedFences27 said:
I think this is a desire to focus on the important things in life, closeness and \"time together.\"
It sounds by the title it is something not to be granted. Outside influence to force a separation? I enjoyed the ease of language in this poem. It sounded as though it was being softly spoken, almost mournfully. As always, a most enjoyable treat. - Phil A.
July 22nd, 2023 18:36
MendedFences27 said:
I think this is a desire to focus on the important things in life, closeness and \"time together.\"
It sounds by the title it is something not to be granted. Outside influence to force a separation? I enjoyed the ease of language in this poem. It sounded as though it was being softly spoken, almost mournfully. As always, a most enjoyable treat. - Phil A.
July 22nd, 2023 18:36
Requiem For a Lost Cause
Bella Shepard said:
You pull at the heart strings with this beautiful poem dear Nev. The simple pleasutes of coats touching but never close enough, the taste of a crisp red apple made even sweeter when shared, and the park bench where two can sit as one and just enjoy one anothers company. The longing for just one more encounter makes this so priceless my friend. I love it!,
July 22nd, 2023 11:13
Bella Shepard said:
You pull at the heart strings with this beautiful poem dear Nev. The simple pleasutes of coats touching but never close enough, the taste of a crisp red apple made even sweeter when shared, and the park bench where two can sit as one and just enjoy one anothers company. The longing for just one more encounter makes this so priceless my friend. I love it!,
July 22nd, 2023 11:13
Requiem For a Lost Cause
Doggerel Dave said:
I too, as Rik above, picked up on the autumn line ....... what is to be made of this?.
July 21st, 2023 21:12
Doggerel Dave said:
I too, as Rik above, picked up on the autumn line ....... what is to be made of this?.
July 21st, 2023 21:12
Requiem For a Lost Cause
Garth Rakumakoe said:
These words bridge many more gaps than the ones on benches my friend. Be proud sir, be proud.
July 21st, 2023 09:47
Garth Rakumakoe said:
These words bridge many more gaps than the ones on benches my friend. Be proud sir, be proud.
July 21st, 2023 09:47
Requiem For a Lost Cause
arqios said:
Brings to mind the red coats and the blue (?) the history of it is getting vaguer as the days go by. The \'very last autumn\' sounds a bit ominous.
July 21st, 2023 07:44
arqios said:
Brings to mind the red coats and the blue (?) the history of it is getting vaguer as the days go by. The \'very last autumn\' sounds a bit ominous.
July 21st, 2023 07:44
The Mess They Leave Behind
Christina8 said:
The fact that she killed someone whether she was injured or not should send her straight to prison.....no compensation for that kind of dumbassery in America!
July 21st, 2023 06:00
Christina8 said:
The fact that she killed someone whether she was injured or not should send her straight to prison.....no compensation for that kind of dumbassery in America!
July 21st, 2023 06:00
Requiem For a Lost Cause
Christina8 said:
A wonderful and tender write, N! Loved it till the very end....C
July 21st, 2023 05:53
Christina8 said:
A wonderful and tender write, N! Loved it till the very end....C
July 21st, 2023 05:53
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