Comments received on poems by Neville



Upon Finding a Smile
Goldfinch60 said:

My pleasure Neville.
As I have said before \"Smile, it confuses people\"

Andy

February 20th, 2024 01:59

Upon Finding a Smile
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work.

February 19th, 2024 16:41

Upon Finding a Smile
Parisab said:

Just the simple mention of the smile, brightened up the poem! Mine have been more forced and intentional these days. Thanks for being positive….

February 19th, 2024 14:37

Upon Finding a Smile
Christina8 said:

Absolutely wonderful! (A smile just made its rounds to me!)

February 19th, 2024 13:34

Upon Finding a Smile
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful. 🌹

February 19th, 2024 12:20

Upon Finding a Smile
Bella Shepard said:

That smile is making the rounds today, what a joy. Thank you dear friend!

February 19th, 2024 10:25

Upon Finding a Smile
Accidental Poet said:

They must be handing out smiles at the door in honor of you N, as I got one too. 😊

February 19th, 2024 08:23

Upon Finding a Smile
orchidee said:

Good write N. :)
My face never found a smile on so-called TV comedy shows since about 1975.
Plus, being married to KP never raises a smile for me. I will smile and show G-Pig teeth when her botox melts. heehee.

February 19th, 2024 05:06

A Million Miles Apart
Goldfinch60 said:

But in sharing that night we are always together Neville.

Andy

February 19th, 2024 02:59

Spillage
Dove said:

Wow! What a surprise...

February 18th, 2024 22:36

Why Not Just Call it a Day
Dove said:

I agree... too many crazy people, too much hate, a weapon in hand.. No escape.

February 18th, 2024 22:34

All the Wrong Buttons
Dove said:

Colors fading from my eyes, I don\'t know what to do
the suns glare is too hot... should I gaze at you?

February 18th, 2024 22:30

A Million Miles Apart
Dove said:

Oh Oh... 💞

February 18th, 2024 22:15

A Million Miles Apart
Thomas W Case said:

Very relatable. Great work my friend.

February 18th, 2024 16:22

All the Wrong Buttons
Bella Shepard said:

I get a feeling in this poem for someone, who despite their best efforts and compassion for another, finds that perhaps the only recourse is to allow them to fail, rather than enabling. I love the way you have presented this. Don\'t know if I\'m interpreting it correctly, but it\'s a great write!

February 18th, 2024 16:04

A Million Miles Apart
Accidental Poet said:

Been there, done that. 🙄

February 18th, 2024 10:14

A Million Miles Apart
orchidee said:

KP and I always sleep a million miles apart. I take the No.7 bus to Pluto each evening, then come back the next morning!

February 18th, 2024 08:27

A Million Miles Apart
Doggerel Dave said:

Lust or caring, empathy and a deep abiding love that I\'ve tried to define before not are, but can be two different things, and no judgements anytime here.

February 18th, 2024 07:01

A Million Miles Apart
arqios said:

Some interactions we have do have this result and effect. I for one feel sad because of the waste but glad in the same breathe for that momentary connection.

February 18th, 2024 06:36

A Million Miles Apart
Teddy.15 said:

So many meanings I see two from my eyes metaphor and nature 🌹

February 18th, 2024 06:22

All the Wrong Buttons
Goldfinch60 said:

Never give up in life Neville, all will be well.

Andy

February 18th, 2024 02:15

Why Not Just Call it a Day
Parisab said:

I don’t know the back story, Nev, but this one is relentless! I hope they’ve been blocked or unplugged :))

February 17th, 2024 23:29

All the Wrong Buttons
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

February 17th, 2024 15:52

All the Wrong Buttons
Accidental Poet said:

Has the person in question tried opening their eyes? That usually helps. Well penned Sir N. 😉👍

February 17th, 2024 13:40

All the Wrong Buttons
orchidee said:

Well, press the right button for a change then! heehee. Not necessarily directly relating to Jerry, but a comment in general.

February 17th, 2024 11:14

All the Wrong Buttons
Jerry Reynolds said:

I always seem to push the wrong buttons. It\'s a freaking knack.

February 17th, 2024 10:49

Why Not Just Call it a Day
2781 said:

If I didn\'t read your comment I would have sworn you were talking about me.

February 17th, 2024 06:27

All the Wrong Buttons
Teddy.15 said:

Oh but love is also blind, and those who behold it sometimes never see it. ❤️

February 17th, 2024 04:49

All the Wrong Buttons
Bobby O said:

Literal is possible here but I’m feeling metaphor , commentary that speaks to the fact that you’ve already been helping , already with non admittance they chose s deft dance but yet still lean toward your words as if dependent and non responsive could coexist. Did they not know you would recognize folly? Now my question for you is”where might you put that rug?”y

February 17th, 2024 03:51

All the Wrong Buttons
orchidee said:

Pear-shaped? Sounds like KP\'s face with botox! I\'m horrible to her, a naughty furry G-Pig! lol.

February 17th, 2024 03:26



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