Comments received on poems by Neville



My Very Dearest of Coincidences
Goldfinch60 said:

It must be love as life is like this when love is in the air Neville.

Andy

May 7th, 2024 01:04

My Very Dearest of Coincidences
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work and use of the senses. This tastes good.

May 6th, 2024 14:45

My Very Dearest of Coincidences
Teddy.15 said:

And now the resident romance poet, 🤣 sounds to me someone has put the spring in your step dear Nev. I\'m definitely enjoying those muse. 🌹

May 6th, 2024 11:25

My Very Dearest of Coincidences
Cassie58 said:

I detect some spring in your summer steps Neville. May your days always be summer. Happy bank holiday Monday. What romantic poetry you pen poet.

May 6th, 2024 02:52

My Very Dearest of Coincidences
orchidee said:

And - can ya beat a bit of coincidence? I\'m waffling now. lol.

May 6th, 2024 02:20

My Very Dearest of Coincidences
orchidee said:

Yes, I did a similar poem for KP. It began:
\'Can you explain dearest, why there is a dullness to each new day, and why I got further downhill every day married to you?!\' lol

May 6th, 2024 02:19

My Very Dearest of Coincidences
2781 said:

His glory goes on...

May 6th, 2024 02:13

My Very Dearest of Coincidences
Doggerel Dave said:

Obviously going well, Neville. The flavour is sweet.

May 6th, 2024 01:37

Le Plagiaire
Goldfinch60 said:

Poems can come from so many different places Neville.

Andy

May 6th, 2024 01:08

Le Plagiaire
Cassie58 said:

You know this is so incredibly romantic. Writing love poems for a love. He could easily be forgiven for pinching a few words that inspired him from another source. I’d forgive him , even though the author of what was copied, might not be so bloomin soft. Lovely Neville.

May 5th, 2024 14:14

Hush Now Little Wren
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous.

May 5th, 2024 13:59

Le Plagiaire
Thomas W Case said:

Amazing work.

May 5th, 2024 13:59

Le Plagiaire
Teddy.15 said:

Oh my, oh so very romantic šŸ˜

May 5th, 2024 05:52

Le Plagiaire
Doggerel Dave said:

Oh come on , mate I ain\'t got much time... if you are talking about a plagiarist, then say so. I ain\'t got time to get a translation of all this Frenchie stuff.....
PS Please do your best to encourage orchi along the correct path....

May 5th, 2024 04:52

Le Plagiaire
orchidee said:

The dreaded plagiarism? Sounds like \'plague\'.
A guy pinched another poets words, posted them, complete with his own photo, saying he had written it. He incurred poets wrath.

May 5th, 2024 02:46

What Makes Us Broken
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Neville, others should not be able to hurt any true love relationships.

Andy

May 5th, 2024 01:15

What Makes Us Broken
Doggerel Dave said:

Feels like a spectator sport to me.... are you diversifying just a teensy bit, Neville? šŸ˜‰

May 4th, 2024 19:58

What Makes Us Broken
Cassie58 said:

A poem here to not allow others to interfere in relationships. Some people just like to pick holes and spread negativity. This is a reminder to stay strong and positive and to concentrate on self. What is whole should stay whole regardless. The cracks come and the breaks only if you take notice of others and allow their negativity to wear you down. Seems like sage advice to me and is written tenderly. A lovely poem. There are other ways of looking at this poem too. Happy Saturday Neville.

May 4th, 2024 09:55

Hush Now Little Wren
Teddy.15 said:

Awe, resident children\'s poet? Sounds like, the creators of Winnie the pooh have come to visit, such calming imagery, reminds me of home. 🌹 ā¤ļø

May 4th, 2024 02:30

What Makes Us Broken
orchidee said:

If I admit to KP that I\'m broken, she will only say \'Well, patch it up with botox, dear!\' lol.

May 4th, 2024 01:58

Hush Now Little Wren
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words Neville for a special little girl.

Andy

May 4th, 2024 01:13

Hush Now Little Wren
Cassie58 said:

Beautiful poem for a little girl who sounds like she needs more sleep. Visual and cute, it is Neville.

May 3rd, 2024 12:33

Hush Now Little Wren
Doggerel Dave said:

So gentle, so kind - such an excellent way to hint that it is time to depart (we\'ve had our fun now bugger off until tomorrow.....)🤣

May 3rd, 2024 06:14

Hush Now Little Wren
orchidee said:

But - great write N.
I was distracted by that comment of the day being short!

May 3rd, 2024 04:48

Hush Now Little Wren
Tom Dylan said:

A lovely piece, mate. Really special.

May 3rd, 2024 03:37

Hush Now Little Wren
orchidee said:

A fine write N.
I thought the days were longer just now - not short? Hours of daylight anyway!

May 3rd, 2024 02:39

Hush Now Little Wren
2781 said:

The day\'s are short.

May 3rd, 2024 01:10

Retribution
Doggerel Dave said:

Terribly tempting, sometimes... Do I submit to temptation sometimes?.......?.......... Oh Yes!.....!

May 3rd, 2024 00:32

Retribution
Teddy.15 said:

lol 🤣 seems to me someone will be scratching old records on an L.P player 🌹

May 3rd, 2024 00:26

Retribution
orchidee said:

Good write N.

May 2nd, 2024 09:07



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