Comments received on poems by Neville
Dembe’s Dust
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I wish KP would spend time in West Africa. I will buy her a one-way ticket! heehee.
She wouldn\'t help much though. She would only find out the botox clinic there. lol.
June 25th, 2023 01:31
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I wish KP would spend time in West Africa. I will buy her a one-way ticket! heehee.
She wouldn\'t help much though. She would only find out the botox clinic there. lol.
June 25th, 2023 01:31
Dembe’s Dust
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, times passed mean so much to us.
Andy
June 25th, 2023 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, times passed mean so much to us.
Andy
June 25th, 2023 01:27
What is Wrong With This Tongue
Kinsey Peterson said:
I think I have made my point clear that you are a wonderful poet and each of your poems is a masterpiece- you do not need to keep proving it. ;)
June 24th, 2023 16:24
Kinsey Peterson said:
I think I have made my point clear that you are a wonderful poet and each of your poems is a masterpiece- you do not need to keep proving it. ;)
June 24th, 2023 16:24
What is it With Poetry
Kinsey Peterson said:
Poetry is a fascinating subject that has connected people across cultures, distance, and time. I\'m honored to be witnessing your impact on the art. :)
June 24th, 2023 16:21
Kinsey Peterson said:
Poetry is a fascinating subject that has connected people across cultures, distance, and time. I\'m honored to be witnessing your impact on the art. :)
June 24th, 2023 16:21
No Gardener Required
Kinsey Peterson said:
My face always lights up learning i have another of your wonderful works to read my friend. it means a lot that you continue to share them with the world. Beautiful work as always (:
June 24th, 2023 16:13
Kinsey Peterson said:
My face always lights up learning i have another of your wonderful works to read my friend. it means a lot that you continue to share them with the world. Beautiful work as always (:
June 24th, 2023 16:13
Little Flower
Kinsey Peterson said:
perhaps i am reading too far into this- but the poem could go two very different directions. you found a beautiful flower and became quite taken with it- or fleur can mean a blossom. and picking it ending a life before it truly began. the duality of poetry at its finest. is it beautiful or sorrowful? either way it is a fantastic write.
June 24th, 2023 15:44
Kinsey Peterson said:
perhaps i am reading too far into this- but the poem could go two very different directions. you found a beautiful flower and became quite taken with it- or fleur can mean a blossom. and picking it ending a life before it truly began. the duality of poetry at its finest. is it beautiful or sorrowful? either way it is a fantastic write.
June 24th, 2023 15:44
Little Flower
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Bit of French there - but not as in \'pardon my french!\' lol.
June 24th, 2023 07:55
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Bit of French there - but not as in \'pardon my french!\' lol.
June 24th, 2023 07:55
What is it With Poetry
Poetic Dan said:
Without it I\'d not have one of your books on shelve or found many other souls that showed me a reflection of self!
Poetry be that glue between me and you lol
Always a pleasure
June 24th, 2023 05:12
Poetic Dan said:
Without it I\'d not have one of your books on shelve or found many other souls that showed me a reflection of self!
Poetry be that glue between me and you lol
Always a pleasure
June 24th, 2023 05:12
Little Flower
Bobby O said:
That Shakespearean touch redeems Brevity Is the Soul of Wit but I hover mostly under Twain’s exacting retort
“If I had more time I would write a shorter letter”
Once again s pleasured Requite is mine as your energetic energy stimulates connection. Hope the best is yours as you Conquer , my friend.
June 24th, 2023 04:22
Bobby O said:
That Shakespearean touch redeems Brevity Is the Soul of Wit but I hover mostly under Twain’s exacting retort
“If I had more time I would write a shorter letter”
Once again s pleasured Requite is mine as your energetic energy stimulates connection. Hope the best is yours as you Conquer , my friend.
June 24th, 2023 04:22
What is it With Poetry
Teddy.15 said:
Hello dear Nev, so lovely to be able to come by and write something once more, you are of such poetic beauty that when people read your poems they relate deeply of course I can only really speak on behalf of myself but I truly mean it, your deep sense of truth that\'s spills out from beyond your poetic heart will always keep me coming back to read more. 🤗
June 24th, 2023 03:56
Teddy.15 said:
Hello dear Nev, so lovely to be able to come by and write something once more, you are of such poetic beauty that when people read your poems they relate deeply of course I can only really speak on behalf of myself but I truly mean it, your deep sense of truth that\'s spills out from beyond your poetic heart will always keep me coming back to read more. 🤗
June 24th, 2023 03:56
No Gardener Required
Goldfinch60 said:
That garden of life sometimes does not need pruning Neville, it grows into resounding beauty,
Andy
June 24th, 2023 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
That garden of life sometimes does not need pruning Neville, it grows into resounding beauty,
Andy
June 24th, 2023 01:19
No Gardener Required
Parisab said:
This poem is lush in language and succulent in capturing ones imagination. ‘Calling me with whispers so we’ll hidden’ I often feel that when I walk in my (actual) secret garden. People who actually garden develop a unique and sophisticated language. Thank you for sharing…
June 23rd, 2023 23:34
Parisab said:
This poem is lush in language and succulent in capturing ones imagination. ‘Calling me with whispers so we’ll hidden’ I often feel that when I walk in my (actual) secret garden. People who actually garden develop a unique and sophisticated language. Thank you for sharing…
June 23rd, 2023 23:34
No Gardener Required
orchidee said:
You manured that garden yet? Not that it\'s related to the \'unspeakable\' thing I can\'t mention in public. lol.
June 23rd, 2023 11:54
orchidee said:
You manured that garden yet? Not that it\'s related to the \'unspeakable\' thing I can\'t mention in public. lol.
June 23rd, 2023 11:54
No Gardener Required
L. B. Mek said:
so relatable, capturing that pure joy
and appreciation, we all recognise
for that steadfast presence
in our lives
such wonderful flow, dear Poet supreme
(be it a garden, a loved one or a cherished hobby
we all need those treasured anchors
to our everyday reality
those that take a subtly, entrenched
place in our hearts
and whisper, droplets of soothing
thoughts, when things
get a little rough, allowing us a fall-back
routine, to grip to
when, once more we\'re forced
to try and fix our shattered lives
one planted seed at a time..)
June 23rd, 2023 01:56
L. B. Mek said:
so relatable, capturing that pure joy
and appreciation, we all recognise
for that steadfast presence
in our lives
such wonderful flow, dear Poet supreme
(be it a garden, a loved one or a cherished hobby
we all need those treasured anchors
to our everyday reality
those that take a subtly, entrenched
place in our hearts
and whisper, droplets of soothing
thoughts, when things
get a little rough, allowing us a fall-back
routine, to grip to
when, once more we\'re forced
to try and fix our shattered lives
one planted seed at a time..)
June 23rd, 2023 01:56
No Gardener Required
orchidee said:
\'Garden\' can have some swoony connotations, which I cannot explain in public! lol.
June 23rd, 2023 01:47
orchidee said:
\'Garden\' can have some swoony connotations, which I cannot explain in public! lol.
June 23rd, 2023 01:47
What is it With Poetry
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'your talented fingertips
serenading
our Poesy\'s heartstrings\'
June 23rd, 2023 01:45
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'your talented fingertips
serenading
our Poesy\'s heartstrings\'
June 23rd, 2023 01:45
What is Wrong With This Tongue
L. B. Mek said:
\'And like that,
fall asleep, albeit
fitfully ..
Until dawn arrives,
to insult
and to taunt me\'
how intimately I know this scene
instantly, recognise
your subtle words of vivid Poetry..
\'the, Poet is back
all is well then, all is well\'
thank you! Hyung
June 23rd, 2023 01:42
L. B. Mek said:
\'And like that,
fall asleep, albeit
fitfully ..
Until dawn arrives,
to insult
and to taunt me\'
how intimately I know this scene
instantly, recognise
your subtle words of vivid Poetry..
\'the, Poet is back
all is well then, all is well\'
thank you! Hyung
June 23rd, 2023 01:42
What is it With Poetry
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t visit very often now, so I feel lucky to have caught you, Neville. \'Thought you were away, navigating the world with a white stick....
Glad you are not.
June 22nd, 2023 21:18
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t visit very often now, so I feel lucky to have caught you, Neville. \'Thought you were away, navigating the world with a white stick....
Glad you are not.
June 22nd, 2023 21:18
What is it With Poetry
Accidental Poet said:
Poetry... the language of the heart? 🤔
June 22nd, 2023 17:05
Accidental Poet said:
Poetry... the language of the heart? 🤔
June 22nd, 2023 17:05
Blame It On the Fall
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A lovely nicely expressed poem )
June 22nd, 2023 15:50
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A lovely nicely expressed poem )
June 22nd, 2023 15:50
What is it With Poetry
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Poetry is a good way to express ourselves ))
A nice poem 🙂
June 22nd, 2023 06:29
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Poetry is a good way to express ourselves ))
A nice poem 🙂
June 22nd, 2023 06:29
What is it With Poetry
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Neville,
A telescope of what is…
POETRY
Nicely executed!👏
I’m appreciating today’s writing from you very much.
Laura 🌻
June 22nd, 2023 06:23
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Neville,
A telescope of what is…
POETRY
Nicely executed!👏
I’m appreciating today’s writing from you very much.
Laura 🌻
June 22nd, 2023 06:23
What is it With Poetry
orchidee said:
In olden days ye poetic stirrings began, with thee and thou, and whoever else! lol.
June 22nd, 2023 05:13
orchidee said:
In olden days ye poetic stirrings began, with thee and thou, and whoever else! lol.
June 22nd, 2023 05:13
What is Wrong With This Tongue
jarcher54 said:
We are delighted to have this latest offering... you are sort of necessary to a proper day you know... now why you have to get us so worked up I haven\'t any idea!
June 22nd, 2023 02:18
jarcher54 said:
We are delighted to have this latest offering... you are sort of necessary to a proper day you know... now why you have to get us so worked up I haven\'t any idea!
June 22nd, 2023 02:18
What is Wrong With This Tongue
Garth Rakumakoe said:
An offering with a tongue and a life of its own. Wonderfully expressed, dear Neville. 👌🏼
June 21st, 2023 12:28
Garth Rakumakoe said:
An offering with a tongue and a life of its own. Wonderfully expressed, dear Neville. 👌🏼
June 21st, 2023 12:28
Blame It On the Fall
Garth Rakumakoe said:
She is quite a charming lady sir. A well justified blame assigned. 🙏🏼😇
June 21st, 2023 12:25
Garth Rakumakoe said:
She is quite a charming lady sir. A well justified blame assigned. 🙏🏼😇
June 21st, 2023 12:25
What is Wrong With This Tongue
orchidee said:
Did ya hurry back for more Mad Adventures of Me, KP, and Fido?! lol.
June 21st, 2023 12:23
orchidee said:
Did ya hurry back for more Mad Adventures of Me, KP, and Fido?! lol.
June 21st, 2023 12:23
No More Blues for These Tired Eyes
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Poignant, endearing, blue. A craftwork sir. May all be with your sight.
June 21st, 2023 12:23
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Poignant, endearing, blue. A craftwork sir. May all be with your sight.
June 21st, 2023 12:23
What is Wrong With This Tongue
orchidee said:
Nowt wrong with ya tongue in spouting some good lines again - welcome back! lol.
June 21st, 2023 10:34
orchidee said:
Nowt wrong with ya tongue in spouting some good lines again - welcome back! lol.
June 21st, 2023 10:34
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