Comments received on poems by Neville
Haiku 4 Having Me She Said
Bobby O said:
I smiled and would not be able to explain how for the first time ever I used the word Haiku in a poem. I read this minutes after I posted. If I could ask John Cleese he might provide clarity?
January 2nd, 2024 04:04
Bobby O said:
I smiled and would not be able to explain how for the first time ever I used the word Haiku in a poem. I read this minutes after I posted. If I could ask John Cleese he might provide clarity?
January 2nd, 2024 04:04
Cruise Snobs
Bobby O said:
Bad bling bad manners and bad taste in music , brings to mind two important observations
While its so logical and easy to decide an immediate plan of avoidance ,
It’s impossible to fathom how that culture not only exists but seems to recently exponentially grow?
January 2nd, 2024 03:58
Bobby O said:
Bad bling bad manners and bad taste in music , brings to mind two important observations
While its so logical and easy to decide an immediate plan of avoidance ,
It’s impossible to fathom how that culture not only exists but seems to recently exponentially grow?
January 2nd, 2024 03:58
Cruise Snobs
2781 said:
I still have disturbing flashbacks of seeing beer gutted middle aged men wearing g-strings.
January 2nd, 2024 03:44
2781 said:
I still have disturbing flashbacks of seeing beer gutted middle aged men wearing g-strings.
January 2nd, 2024 03:44
Cruise Snobs
Parisab said:
He he! This made me chuckle while I was sympathizing with you. Flamboyance is what they call a flock of flamingoes, I learned today. I thought of that when I read about your Cruise Snobs…
January 2nd, 2024 03:11
Parisab said:
He he! This made me chuckle while I was sympathizing with you. Flamboyance is what they call a flock of flamingoes, I learned today. I thought of that when I read about your Cruise Snobs…
January 2nd, 2024 03:11
Cruise Snobs
orchidee said:
KP always dashes to the uppermost deck. She has to, or the fishermen will catch her, being an old trout! lol.
January 2nd, 2024 03:08
orchidee said:
KP always dashes to the uppermost deck. She has to, or the fishermen will catch her, being an old trout! lol.
January 2nd, 2024 03:08
Cruise Snobs
Cassie58 said:
The height of bad taste. You brought me some imagery best left covered up but you made me laugh out loud. Always best to feel comfortable down below. Hilarious and a reminder of why ocean cruises aren’t on the bucket list. Good morning Neville.
January 2nd, 2024 02:55
Cassie58 said:
The height of bad taste. You brought me some imagery best left covered up but you made me laugh out loud. Always best to feel comfortable down below. Hilarious and a reminder of why ocean cruises aren’t on the bucket list. Good morning Neville.
January 2nd, 2024 02:55
Haiku 4 Having Me She Said
Parisab said:
Impromptu imagery matching your powerful sentiments…
January 2nd, 2024 00:13
Parisab said:
Impromptu imagery matching your powerful sentiments…
January 2nd, 2024 00:13
Haiku 4 Having Me She Said
orchidee said:
KP said Haiku - she was sneezing in a foreign language! lol. (achoo!)
January 1st, 2024 08:41
orchidee said:
KP said Haiku - she was sneezing in a foreign language! lol. (achoo!)
January 1st, 2024 08:41
Haiku 4 Having Me She Said
Cassie58 said:
There is gratitude in your title. Probably much more elsewhere as well.
Your embu should meet the approval of all those who deplore violence and suffering of any sort.
Happy New Year Neville.
January 1st, 2024 08:30
Cassie58 said:
There is gratitude in your title. Probably much more elsewhere as well.
Your embu should meet the approval of all those who deplore violence and suffering of any sort.
Happy New Year Neville.
January 1st, 2024 08:30
Well Done
Accidental Poet said:
Well N, somehow you knew what my reply to your little scribble here would be. Well done. Though I\'d like to add \"Very Well Done\". 😜👍
December 31st, 2023 10:31
Accidental Poet said:
Well N, somehow you knew what my reply to your little scribble here would be. Well done. Though I\'d like to add \"Very Well Done\". 😜👍
December 31st, 2023 10:31
Well Done
orchidee said:
With that title I thought this was gonna be about you congratulating me for having spent another year (in agony) with KP! lol.
December 31st, 2023 07:45
orchidee said:
With that title I thought this was gonna be about you congratulating me for having spent another year (in agony) with KP! lol.
December 31st, 2023 07:45
Well Done
Cassie58 said:
Holidays. Cooking nicely on the balcony. Plenty of heat here, sea view, sunset and drinks. Perfect harmony I reckon. A well done poem Neville :)
December 31st, 2023 06:53
Cassie58 said:
Holidays. Cooking nicely on the balcony. Plenty of heat here, sea view, sunset and drinks. Perfect harmony I reckon. A well done poem Neville :)
December 31st, 2023 06:53
It’s Not What it Used to Be
Goldfinch60 said:
May your summer always be with you in the New Year Neville.
Andy
December 31st, 2023 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
May your summer always be with you in the New Year Neville.
Andy
December 31st, 2023 02:23
Not Guilty as Charged
Dev Parth said:
Not Guilty as Charged\' is a clever and humorous exploration of miscommunication. The poem combines a serious theme with playful elements, using irony and a legal metaphor. The speaker\'s plea for understanding and the unexpected twist at the end make it an engaging and relatable read. Overall, it prompts reflection on the consequences of hasty judgments and the complexities of human interaction.\"
Thank you for your lovely poetry 😊😊. I enjoyed it.
December 30th, 2023 09:31
Dev Parth said:
Not Guilty as Charged\' is a clever and humorous exploration of miscommunication. The poem combines a serious theme with playful elements, using irony and a legal metaphor. The speaker\'s plea for understanding and the unexpected twist at the end make it an engaging and relatable read. Overall, it prompts reflection on the consequences of hasty judgments and the complexities of human interaction.\"
Thank you for your lovely poetry 😊😊. I enjoyed it.
December 30th, 2023 09:31
It’s Not What it Used to Be
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Egg and chips?! mmm.
December 30th, 2023 08:44
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Egg and chips?! mmm.
December 30th, 2023 08:44
It’s Not What it Used to Be
Cassie58 said:
Bloomin awful summer, apart from June. I too can remember long hot summers. That was an age ago. Six weeks summer holiday when I was at school seemed like a life time. Out in the fresh air every day. Packed lunch and off to Churchill’s swimming pool. Those were the days:) Reflecting here Neville, not moaning. And as I look out my window, more dull and more wet. Still not moaning.
December 30th, 2023 06:53
Cassie58 said:
Bloomin awful summer, apart from June. I too can remember long hot summers. That was an age ago. Six weeks summer holiday when I was at school seemed like a life time. Out in the fresh air every day. Packed lunch and off to Churchill’s swimming pool. Those were the days:) Reflecting here Neville, not moaning. And as I look out my window, more dull and more wet. Still not moaning.
December 30th, 2023 06:53
It’s Not What it Used to Be
Accidental Poet said:
The older I get I realize how much of a traditionalist I\'ve become. Great write N.
December 30th, 2023 04:44
Accidental Poet said:
The older I get I realize how much of a traditionalist I\'ve become. Great write N.
December 30th, 2023 04:44
It’s Not What it Used to Be
2781 said:
Reverse climate change or selective memory?
The sun down here will fry an egg but maybe it\'s always been that way?
December 30th, 2023 04:21
2781 said:
Reverse climate change or selective memory?
The sun down here will fry an egg but maybe it\'s always been that way?
December 30th, 2023 04:21
Not Guilty as Charged
Goldfinch60 said:
At one time I was a postman for a short time and the only person that came to the door naked was a man!!
Good words Neville glad it worked out well for you, some people arr just exhibitionists and are out to cause trouble.
December 30th, 2023 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
At one time I was a postman for a short time and the only person that came to the door naked was a man!!
Good words Neville glad it worked out well for you, some people arr just exhibitionists and are out to cause trouble.
December 30th, 2023 02:21
Not Guilty as Charged
Bobby O said:
That insertion of ugly was twisted departure from not just most , but all.
So here’s this ugly chick who on purpose lets me see her naked and then tries to leverage that?? I heard that Beyoncé song playing in my head
“You must not know about me?”
December 29th, 2023 22:21
Bobby O said:
That insertion of ugly was twisted departure from not just most , but all.
So here’s this ugly chick who on purpose lets me see her naked and then tries to leverage that?? I heard that Beyoncé song playing in my head
“You must not know about me?”
December 29th, 2023 22:21
Not Guilty as Charged
Accidental Poet said:
But you got an eye full anyways. 😲
December 29th, 2023 18:33
Accidental Poet said:
But you got an eye full anyways. 😲
December 29th, 2023 18:33
Not Guilty as Charged
orchidee said:
You seen that Bavarian cuckoo clock you mentioned the other day?!
I\'m talking nonsense now. lol.
December 29th, 2023 10:48
orchidee said:
You seen that Bavarian cuckoo clock you mentioned the other day?!
I\'m talking nonsense now. lol.
December 29th, 2023 10:48
Not Guilty as Charged
Cassie58 said:
Ah, a provocative exhibitionist out to cause trouble. Her in the window stark naked. The put down is wonderful. I only hope that everyone sees her for what she is. Don’t tell me this is true? Surely not Neville?
December 29th, 2023 10:36
Cassie58 said:
Ah, a provocative exhibitionist out to cause trouble. Her in the window stark naked. The put down is wonderful. I only hope that everyone sees her for what she is. Don’t tell me this is true? Surely not Neville?
December 29th, 2023 10:36
Not Guilty as Charged
orchidee said:
Someone was stalking KP. They found him insane and talking to real trouts! lol.
December 29th, 2023 05:59
orchidee said:
Someone was stalking KP. They found him insane and talking to real trouts! lol.
December 29th, 2023 05:59
Genuine Fakes Going Dirt Cheap
Goldfinch60 said:
Most forgers of art are genuine artists in their own right but cannot get in money from their own pictures, which I believe is a shame.
Andy
December 29th, 2023 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Most forgers of art are genuine artists in their own right but cannot get in money from their own pictures, which I believe is a shame.
Andy
December 29th, 2023 02:25
A Snog is For Life Not Just for Christmas
sorenbarrett said:
We all tolerate the intolerable when love is involved. This brings it into focus . Well done Neville
December 28th, 2023 12:50
sorenbarrett said:
We all tolerate the intolerable when love is involved. This brings it into focus . Well done Neville
December 28th, 2023 12:50
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