Comments received on poems by Neville
A Scatter of Moments
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful writing ) a lovely poem
July 21st, 2023 04:34
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful writing ) a lovely poem
July 21st, 2023 04:34
Requiem For a Lost Cause
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
from title to pinprick last dots
this was profoundly sobering
contemplation needed, as preparation
for those inevitable tear stains, in life
(I read and learn)
thank you! Hyung
July 21st, 2023 02:51
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
from title to pinprick last dots
this was profoundly sobering
contemplation needed, as preparation
for those inevitable tear stains, in life
(I read and learn)
thank you! Hyung
July 21st, 2023 02:51
In the Wake of New Gods
L. B. Mek said:
funny, every other word I read
mentions, people\'s
demons and life\'s devilish temptations
I thought western secular society assassinated all deity\'s
how convenient, we choose to keep
the demonic around;
\'American gods\', a book that\'s
as prophetic as it is steeped
in mythological fantasy;
we be contrary creatures, that duality
necessity
of self betraying contradiction
in our every choice...)
July 21st, 2023 02:47
L. B. Mek said:
funny, every other word I read
mentions, people\'s
demons and life\'s devilish temptations
I thought western secular society assassinated all deity\'s
how convenient, we choose to keep
the demonic around;
\'American gods\', a book that\'s
as prophetic as it is steeped
in mythological fantasy;
we be contrary creatures, that duality
necessity
of self betraying contradiction
in our every choice...)
July 21st, 2023 02:47
Two Ants One Question
L. B. Mek said:
sticky sweet..
explains why hollywod\'s
no1 profession, is a nose surgeon
we all need a release
some are powdery white and sweet
others... destroy!
an anthill\'s life, indeed
(a deeper read warranted of this
subtle gem
my very wise friend, loved this
such acute imagery
executed so subtly)
July 21st, 2023 02:37
L. B. Mek said:
sticky sweet..
explains why hollywod\'s
no1 profession, is a nose surgeon
we all need a release
some are powdery white and sweet
others... destroy!
an anthill\'s life, indeed
(a deeper read warranted of this
subtle gem
my very wise friend, loved this
such acute imagery
executed so subtly)
July 21st, 2023 02:37
The Mess They Leave Behind
L. B. Mek said:
Hyung,
I bow to your empathetic endurance
I can barely handle my own sht
let alone walk through life, wading
through other people\'s, mire...
(escapism as our artform of ignorance
we assume, all is fair
in our neurotic crutches of life
even when those crutches are formed
of the goodwill ashes
of those who invested in us, or
the innocent collateral damage
of the
thoughtless choice we make in life..)
July 21st, 2023 02:33
L. B. Mek said:
Hyung,
I bow to your empathetic endurance
I can barely handle my own sht
let alone walk through life, wading
through other people\'s, mire...
(escapism as our artform of ignorance
we assume, all is fair
in our neurotic crutches of life
even when those crutches are formed
of the goodwill ashes
of those who invested in us, or
the innocent collateral damage
of the
thoughtless choice we make in life..)
July 21st, 2023 02:33
Requiem For a Lost Cause
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I dunno about tasty red apples, but KP and I share sour grapes. lol.
July 21st, 2023 01:48
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I dunno about tasty red apples, but KP and I share sour grapes. lol.
July 21st, 2023 01:48
Requiem For a Lost Cause
Bobby O said:
Thrilled as ever, wanting perhaps, but the universe knew you had the position that didn’t require any “ups”
July 21st, 2023 01:37
Bobby O said:
Thrilled as ever, wanting perhaps, but the universe knew you had the position that didn’t require any “ups”
July 21st, 2023 01:37
In the Wake of New Gods
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Neville, the latest new god should be treated with apathy.
Andy
July 21st, 2023 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Neville, the latest new god should be treated with apathy.
Andy
July 21st, 2023 00:42
In the Wake of New Gods
MendedFences27 said:
Is worshipping the cell phone the latest cult.? Will they all walk into the sea at the same time?
There is a growing feeling that we are raising a generation that will be incapable of human interaction. They will walk around with their phones doing whatever it tells them to do. Scary!! - Phil A.
July 20th, 2023 15:07
MendedFences27 said:
Is worshipping the cell phone the latest cult.? Will they all walk into the sea at the same time?
There is a growing feeling that we are raising a generation that will be incapable of human interaction. They will walk around with their phones doing whatever it tells them to do. Scary!! - Phil A.
July 20th, 2023 15:07
In the Wake of New Gods
arqios said:
Back seat\'s the best spot for back seat driving. But otherwise destroying all that makes us look foolish is top order. The new and latest is for many but that could be seen as a badge of surface dwelling and a lack of much depth.
July 20th, 2023 06:21
arqios said:
Back seat\'s the best spot for back seat driving. But otherwise destroying all that makes us look foolish is top order. The new and latest is for many but that could be seen as a badge of surface dwelling and a lack of much depth.
July 20th, 2023 06:21
In the Wake of New Gods
Parisab said:
True description of the inception of technology and what the Apple Store looks like when a new iPhone comes out and everyone is rushing to be blessed
July 20th, 2023 02:17
Parisab said:
True description of the inception of technology and what the Apple Store looks like when a new iPhone comes out and everyone is rushing to be blessed
July 20th, 2023 02:17
Two Ants One Question
Goldfinch60 said:
Life can be so wonderfully sweet as mine is. Neville.
Andy
July 20th, 2023 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Life can be so wonderfully sweet as mine is. Neville.
Andy
July 20th, 2023 00:42
Two Ants One Question
MendedFences27 said:
The fewer \'ants dancing in\" sugar pots the \'sweeter\" it will be.
A very clever image created by you in this poem, happy ants dancing in sugar, setting up the final rhetorical question. But let\'s not encourage the ants. - Phil A,
July 19th, 2023 22:26
MendedFences27 said:
The fewer \'ants dancing in\" sugar pots the \'sweeter\" it will be.
A very clever image created by you in this poem, happy ants dancing in sugar, setting up the final rhetorical question. But let\'s not encourage the ants. - Phil A,
July 19th, 2023 22:26
The Mess They Leave Behind
Doggerel Dave said:
Well I just ain’t sure whether this is a tale or true reportage, and yeh I know a gentleman never tells. Thus I’m left to make my own mind up about that….
Either way, irony is something I’m well into, so thanks for a bit of dark entertainment, Neville.
July 19th, 2023 18:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Well I just ain’t sure whether this is a tale or true reportage, and yeh I know a gentleman never tells. Thus I’m left to make my own mind up about that….
Either way, irony is something I’m well into, so thanks for a bit of dark entertainment, Neville.
July 19th, 2023 18:20
Two Ants One Question
Garth Rakumakoe said:
It sure can... That\'s one sweet tooth you got there Poet! 🤟🏽
July 19th, 2023 14:20
Garth Rakumakoe said:
It sure can... That\'s one sweet tooth you got there Poet! 🤟🏽
July 19th, 2023 14:20
Two Ants One Question
Bella Shepard said:
Would it be trit to say \"short and sweet\"? It may be, but the image of two ants dancing in a sugar pot is the sweetest I can imagine. I\'d love it to be a waltz, but with all that suger it\'s probably a jitterbug. Now I\'m smiling in the sweetest way, thank you.
July 19th, 2023 12:43
Bella Shepard said:
Would it be trit to say \"short and sweet\"? It may be, but the image of two ants dancing in a sugar pot is the sweetest I can imagine. I\'d love it to be a waltz, but with all that suger it\'s probably a jitterbug. Now I\'m smiling in the sweetest way, thank you.
July 19th, 2023 12:43
Two Ants One Question
arqios said:
The sweetness is as big as the bowl and having someone to share it with is divine.
July 19th, 2023 06:40
arqios said:
The sweetness is as big as the bowl and having someone to share it with is divine.
July 19th, 2023 06:40
Two Ants One Question
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lol ) nice lighthearted writing .. maybe ants would like to dance .. yet all they can do is walk .. i imagine they might be nervous , being so small
July 19th, 2023 04:53
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lol ) nice lighthearted writing .. maybe ants would like to dance .. yet all they can do is walk .. i imagine they might be nervous , being so small
July 19th, 2023 04:53
Two Ants One Question
orchidee said:
I rescued a spider today - but that\'s not two ants!
July 19th, 2023 04:14
orchidee said:
I rescued a spider today - but that\'s not two ants!
July 19th, 2023 04:14
Two Ants One Question
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I got ants in me pants, married to KP. lol.
July 19th, 2023 01:49
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I got ants in me pants, married to KP. lol.
July 19th, 2023 01:49
Two Ants One Question
Poetic Dan said:
Sounds like overdose to me lol
Have a great day my friend
July 19th, 2023 01:28
Poetic Dan said:
Sounds like overdose to me lol
Have a great day my friend
July 19th, 2023 01:28
The Mess They Leave Behind
Goldfinch60 said:
There are no such things as accidents these days as all people want to do is blame somebody else and get money from them!
Andy
July 19th, 2023 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
There are no such things as accidents these days as all people want to do is blame somebody else and get money from them!
Andy
July 19th, 2023 01:23
The Mess They Leave Behind
MendedFences27 said:
Here, attempting suicide is a crime. She would have been prosecuted. Really, compensation?
Some people ought to be more aware
of the consequences of their actions.
Your poem highlights the results of today\'s \"It\'s all about me!\" attitude. How the hell does one peel a grape? Just another excellent piece of writing. Enjoyed it. - Phil A.
July 18th, 2023 11:05
MendedFences27 said:
Here, attempting suicide is a crime. She would have been prosecuted. Really, compensation?
Some people ought to be more aware
of the consequences of their actions.
Your poem highlights the results of today\'s \"It\'s all about me!\" attitude. How the hell does one peel a grape? Just another excellent piece of writing. Enjoyed it. - Phil A.
July 18th, 2023 11:05
The Mess They Leave Behind
arqios said:
Wow that was intense. And many times truth has been proven stranger than fiction.
July 18th, 2023 07:14
arqios said:
Wow that was intense. And many times truth has been proven stranger than fiction.
July 18th, 2023 07:14
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