Comments received on poems by Neville



A Taste of Hope
arqios said:

Yellow is a grand colour that would trump a stoic smile with a tooth bared grin 😁

November 19th, 2023 06:58

A Taste of Hope
orchidee said:

KP got her own back on me. I read this to her and she gave me a yellow banana filled with botox! lol.
That\'s Adventure Number, oh I dunno, 7638495 or summat. I lost count.

November 19th, 2023 05:58

An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work my friend.

November 18th, 2023 16:59

The Wife of a Dead Russian Diplomat
Christina8 said:

Very interesting poem. There are still asylums? Sounds like you enjoyed each others company.

November 18th, 2023 11:34

The Wife of a Dead Russian Diplomat
Thomas W Case said:

Very intriguing. Great work.

November 18th, 2023 09:21

The Wife of a Dead Russian Diplomat
Accidental Poet said:

My comfort zone would be around 20-23 C (withe the Sun shining) 😎

November 18th, 2023 09:03

The Wife of a Dead Russian Diplomat
arqios said:

The mink coat said it all!

November 18th, 2023 07:09

The Wife of a Dead Russian Diplomat
Goldfinch60 said:

Sounds like a very interesting lady Neville, it\'s a shame she went away.

Andy

November 18th, 2023 02:48

An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness
Goldfinch60 said:

That pride and dignity can be re-awakened Neville and all will be fine.

Andy

November 18th, 2023 02:28

The Wife of a Dead Russian Diplomat
orchidee said:

Would that be 39F in Russia, not 39C?
And should I meet her? lol.

November 18th, 2023 02:07

The Wife of a Dead Russian Diplomat
Doggerel Dave said:

This is too much with too little, Neville. Needs a book or at least an extended essay......................................

November 18th, 2023 02:01

Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter
Parisab said:

That is a good economic policy, when words are a few and to the point! Keeps the time, energy, and emotional resources protected. I wish I were that sensible…

November 17th, 2023 21:59

An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness
Accidental Poet said:

You two need a room? Meanwhile, I\'ll just look the other way. 👍

November 17th, 2023 21:01

An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness
Doggerel Dave said:

Best not the open beach, sadly .
Lock the door, draw the curtains...oh, and leave the mandolin outside.... Evokes though a strong feeling of nostalgia of course, the first part - the rest I\'ll take with a grain of....sand....

November 17th, 2023 17:39

Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter
Bella Shepard said:

You\'ve given me the biggest smile with this one! Opposites attract and even meld when it\'s just right. I can imagine the fun they had coming up with those imaginative, rude words, Iand can alomost hear them laughing now. Priceless!!!

November 17th, 2023 14:49

An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness
amysliterature said:

this really touched me thank you it feels so vulnerable and distant at the same time :)

November 17th, 2023 14:35

An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness
orchidee said:

Good write N.
I wanted to write \'A certain kind of aloneness - without KP\'. Well, I suppose I hardly see her in person - only on TV, in papers, etc, or if I collect her from the botox clinic. She\'s there 23 hours of every day. lol.

November 17th, 2023 07:45

An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness
LIZ said:

Mmmmmm long, lost, abused love? Just a thought....💜💜💜💜💜

November 17th, 2023 06:23

An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness
arqios said:

Mandolin eye and a belly-full of strumming…makes for interesting days.

November 17th, 2023 05:32

Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter
Bobby O said:

Expression that is vibrant need not be chaste , especially perfect when shared with commiserate souls

November 17th, 2023 02:50

Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter
LIZ said:

I love this!!! I think in my family, I\'m the one who curses the most!! 🫢🫢🫢 I wish I could say I\'m sorry....but NOPE!! AND I\'m a proper lady.....when necessary. 😆 💜💜💜💜

November 16th, 2023 16:02

Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter
2781 said:

My mum and her family drank like the fishermen they were, and swore like the troopers they were.
Nothing I am ashamed of.

November 16th, 2023 15:02

Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work. Love the story. I was reading an old dictionary one time, I came across the word, \"Jack in the green\" It was someone who stood in the bushes and looked in people\'s windows. I thought it was hysterical, so I started calling all my friends jack in the green. lol

November 16th, 2023 09:15

Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter
Doggerel Dave said:

What a textured environment you grew up in Neville, rich in verbal colour. All poetry should be seasoned in such a way. No poet could be too precious after that.

November 16th, 2023 06:09

Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter
orchidee said:

A fine write N.
KP say such words in tantrums, when I don\'t give her more money for botox! lol.
This must be Adventure No. 6849748 or summat in \'The Adventures of Orchi and KP\'.

November 16th, 2023 03:10

Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter
Goldfinch60 said:

Language is what it is and nowadays it can be dreadful.

Andy

November 16th, 2023 02:46

Now Looking Back With Anticipation
Goldfinch60 said:

May that anticipation bring much joy and love to your life Neville.

Andy

November 16th, 2023 02:25

Now Looking Back With Anticipation
Doggerel Dave said:

With the sole exception of the tea choice, I cannot but feel myself in your position ( without the little \'un with whom to dispense absolutely valid advice).

November 16th, 2023 01:12

Now Looking Back With Anticipation
Bella Shepard said:

This poem is so moving dear Nev. It speaks to me of our children, of the hope and anticipation we have for their future, and of the love and pride we feel as we watch them blossom, as we knew they would. A father\'s heart here, I think. Beautiful!!

November 15th, 2023 15:37

Now Looking Back With Anticipation
orchidee said:

A fine write N.
Doh! All I see in me tea leaves is KP asking for more money for botox!
She will end up a ghostly trout-like apparition! heehee.

November 15th, 2023 04:45



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