Comments received on poems by Neville
Strategic Untruths
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Sounds like another instalment of \'My life with KP!\' lol.
July 6th, 2023 00:55
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Sounds like another instalment of \'My life with KP!\' lol.
July 6th, 2023 00:55
No Rules for All
MendedFences27 said:
Love and time, the two things that can\'t be bought, but only spent, One \"marches on,\" the other waits for the right time.
I think you\'ve said a lot here in a few words. - Phil A.
July 5th, 2023 22:14
MendedFences27 said:
Love and time, the two things that can\'t be bought, but only spent, One \"marches on,\" the other waits for the right time.
I think you\'ve said a lot here in a few words. - Phil A.
July 5th, 2023 22:14
No Rules for All
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d vote for no rules.... in certain strictly defined situations....
July 5th, 2023 18:01
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d vote for no rules.... in certain strictly defined situations....
July 5th, 2023 18:01
When One is No Longer
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This poems literally turns inside out in meaning and metaphor. A brilliant piece of work, Neville.
July 5th, 2023 05:49
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This poems literally turns inside out in meaning and metaphor. A brilliant piece of work, Neville.
July 5th, 2023 05:49
No Rules for All
arqios said:
Sometimes no rules is just a mirror reflection of no one rules. Thanks N for the deep thoughts.
July 5th, 2023 04:11
arqios said:
Sometimes no rules is just a mirror reflection of no one rules. Thanks N for the deep thoughts.
July 5th, 2023 04:11
No Rules for All
orchidee said:
A sexy write? Swoon!
A little repartee (bit of French there. lol) and banter with friends, but never any \'excitement\' with Fido around. I will put him in the back garden a while.
July 5th, 2023 03:58
orchidee said:
A sexy write? Swoon!
A little repartee (bit of French there. lol) and banter with friends, but never any \'excitement\' with Fido around. I will put him in the back garden a while.
July 5th, 2023 03:58
No Rules for All
Christina8 said:
Sometimes we don\'t need rules. A very sexy and intriguing write, my friend....C
July 5th, 2023 02:59
Christina8 said:
Sometimes we don\'t need rules. A very sexy and intriguing write, my friend....C
July 5th, 2023 02:59
From Inside This Box of Broken Mirrors
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sounds painful
Interesting words in this poem tho and well expressed
That first verse sounds so sad
The broken mirrors and that feeling of not liking ourselves .. makes me think of feeling incomplete / wounded .. almost trapped
A good poem tho ..
July 5th, 2023 02:53
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sounds painful
Interesting words in this poem tho and well expressed
That first verse sounds so sad
The broken mirrors and that feeling of not liking ourselves .. makes me think of feeling incomplete / wounded .. almost trapped
A good poem tho ..
July 5th, 2023 02:53
No Rules for All
Teddy.15 said:
Rules sometimes are made to be broken, and sometimes depending on the situation we should be able to move or pause time. thought provoking my dear Nev. ❤️
July 5th, 2023 02:30
Teddy.15 said:
Rules sometimes are made to be broken, and sometimes depending on the situation we should be able to move or pause time. thought provoking my dear Nev. ❤️
July 5th, 2023 02:30
No Rules for All
orchidee said:
KP rests her head against my gold ankle chain. She\'s conned me into thinking that\'s what it is, but it\'s a ball and chain really. lol.
July 5th, 2023 02:06
orchidee said:
KP rests her head against my gold ankle chain. She\'s conned me into thinking that\'s what it is, but it\'s a ball and chain really. lol.
July 5th, 2023 02:06
No Rules for All
Michael Edwards said:
Dignity, self respect and respect for others seem to be in the past. Mind you I like the idea of the ankle chain bit!
July 5th, 2023 01:07
Michael Edwards said:
Dignity, self respect and respect for others seem to be in the past. Mind you I like the idea of the ankle chain bit!
July 5th, 2023 01:07
No Rules for All
Poetic Dan said:
Interesting read and glad time was on my side to see this art, before three no rules policy blows everything apart!
Keep sailing my friend
July 5th, 2023 01:06
Poetic Dan said:
Interesting read and glad time was on my side to see this art, before three no rules policy blows everything apart!
Keep sailing my friend
July 5th, 2023 01:06
No Rules for All
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Neville, respect has disappeared from our world.
Andy
July 5th, 2023 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Neville, respect has disappeared from our world.
Andy
July 5th, 2023 00:46
When One is No Longer
Bella Shepard said:
I read this poem aloud several times, and each time the sense of yearning became more palpable. Beautifully expressed and lovingly written dear friend.
July 4th, 2023 15:25
Bella Shepard said:
I read this poem aloud several times, and each time the sense of yearning became more palpable. Beautifully expressed and lovingly written dear friend.
July 4th, 2023 15:25
When One is No Longer
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully written...one day I think you will find yourself at peace with that \"ghost\" and you will be together again....C
July 4th, 2023 05:28
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully written...one day I think you will find yourself at peace with that \"ghost\" and you will be together again....C
July 4th, 2023 05:28
When One is No Longer
orchidee said:
I of course am un-cultured to give such a well reasoned and in depth comment as is above! lol.
July 4th, 2023 02:03
orchidee said:
I of course am un-cultured to give such a well reasoned and in depth comment as is above! lol.
July 4th, 2023 02:03
When One is No Longer
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. KP said to me ages ago \'You can no longer sing\', but I carry on warbling regardless! lol.
July 4th, 2023 02:01
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. KP said to me ages ago \'You can no longer sing\', but I carry on warbling regardless! lol.
July 4th, 2023 02:01
Fruit Salad Skies
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Neville and so very true the way the weather is changing in the UK.
Andy
July 4th, 2023 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Neville and so very true the way the weather is changing in the UK.
Andy
July 4th, 2023 01:23
When One is No Longer
Goldfinch60 said:
One day that ghost may be with you in reality Neville and all will be wonderful.
Andy
July 4th, 2023 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
One day that ghost may be with you in reality Neville and all will be wonderful.
Andy
July 4th, 2023 01:13
When One is No Longer
Parisab said:
I found the iteration of the word indeed very interesting in this piece-There is depth to the content in the simple and ‘care free’ wording-we do detach to survive the grief from loss-also the idol worshiping of humans, especially a woman, will lose their luster as the last seven lines eluded and we can become disengaged from the feelings we once had for the person-you are mastering the enigma of this piece-Of course I am commenting the implicit meaning-appealing work as always poet friend…
July 4th, 2023 01:08
Parisab said:
I found the iteration of the word indeed very interesting in this piece-There is depth to the content in the simple and ‘care free’ wording-we do detach to survive the grief from loss-also the idol worshiping of humans, especially a woman, will lose their luster as the last seven lines eluded and we can become disengaged from the feelings we once had for the person-you are mastering the enigma of this piece-Of course I am commenting the implicit meaning-appealing work as always poet friend…
July 4th, 2023 01:08
When One is No Longer
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
the ghost
of all those
women I have ever wanted .‘
Those are really sad lines ..
Sad writing but well expressed
July 4th, 2023 01:02
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
the ghost
of all those
women I have ever wanted .‘
Those are really sad lines ..
Sad writing but well expressed
July 4th, 2023 01:02
Fruit Salad Skies
Bella Shepard said:
Sounds like ambrosia to me! This wonderful poem tickles the taste buds as well as the imagination. A great write my friend!
July 3rd, 2023 12:21
Bella Shepard said:
Sounds like ambrosia to me! This wonderful poem tickles the taste buds as well as the imagination. A great write my friend!
July 3rd, 2023 12:21
Fruit Salad Skies
Christina8 said:
Very nice, I could taste all the flavors coming together....then I thought of my grandmothers fruit salad....twas to die for!
July 3rd, 2023 10:31
Christina8 said:
Very nice, I could taste all the flavors coming together....then I thought of my grandmothers fruit salad....twas to die for!
July 3rd, 2023 10:31
Fruit Salad Skies
Bobby O said:
And the cherry is elusive. True if many things that tease delight.
Nice write good read Mr. Neville
July 3rd, 2023 05:21
Bobby O said:
And the cherry is elusive. True if many things that tease delight.
Nice write good read Mr. Neville
July 3rd, 2023 05:21
Fruit Salad Skies
L. B. Mek said:
worded as deliciously vivid
as every fruity spoonful bite
is, to imagine..
Brilliant!
(guess what i\'ll be having for lunch
yeah..
steak! n chips with me mushy peas
..what!
.. what? did you think)
😁
(oh and of course a fruit salad for dessert
duh!)
😎
yeah I\'m a failed comedian
but so what, I own it!
🍻
(thanks for putting up with me)
hope you n yours have a great week Hyung!
July 3rd, 2023 04:52
L. B. Mek said:
worded as deliciously vivid
as every fruity spoonful bite
is, to imagine..
Brilliant!
(guess what i\'ll be having for lunch
yeah..
steak! n chips with me mushy peas
..what!
.. what? did you think)
😁
(oh and of course a fruit salad for dessert
duh!)
😎
yeah I\'m a failed comedian
but so what, I own it!
🍻
(thanks for putting up with me)
hope you n yours have a great week Hyung!
July 3rd, 2023 04:52
Fruit Salad Skies
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Greedy KP wants to eat it all! lol.
July 3rd, 2023 03:49
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Greedy KP wants to eat it all! lol.
July 3rd, 2023 03:49
Fruit Salad Skies
moonwriting said:
I enjoy how you can read this in whatever order you feel like and it will somehow form a new image.
July 3rd, 2023 03:04
moonwriting said:
I enjoy how you can read this in whatever order you feel like and it will somehow form a new image.
July 3rd, 2023 03:04
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