Comments received on poems by Cassie58
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Teddy.15 said:
Incredibly haunting with a sage massage, love your last lines, I wrote a poem called caged bird whilst in COVID prison. You are a wonderful poet. πΉ
March 8th, 2025 13:18
Teddy.15 said:
Incredibly haunting with a sage massage, love your last lines, I wrote a poem called caged bird whilst in COVID prison. You are a wonderful poet. πΉ
March 8th, 2025 13:18
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hauntingly beautiful your imagery is in this poem, Cassie. I absolutely love your imagery...and your heart really always shines through your work. Well done! πΉπ
March 8th, 2025 11:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hauntingly beautiful your imagery is in this poem, Cassie. I absolutely love your imagery...and your heart really always shines through your work. Well done! πΉπ
March 8th, 2025 11:16
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aDarkerMind said:
in my humble opinion Cassie,
as good as you have ever written.
every word....superb!
March 8th, 2025 10:13
aDarkerMind said:
in my humble opinion Cassie,
as good as you have ever written.
every word....superb!
March 8th, 2025 10:13
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sorenbarrett said:
Cassie this is beautiful in its warning. Its last lines a deep metaphor and the hope that in nature there is always a way to purify and recycle what damage man has done. Most lovely and deserving of a fave
March 8th, 2025 07:32
sorenbarrett said:
Cassie this is beautiful in its warning. Its last lines a deep metaphor and the hope that in nature there is always a way to purify and recycle what damage man has done. Most lovely and deserving of a fave
March 8th, 2025 07:32
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Friendship said:
Well written,Cassie,of inner peace,Your poem revolves around the contrast between outward beauty and inner sorrow. It reflects on the stillness and serene appearance of a lake, which serves as a metaphor for deeper emotional pain and loss. The subject matter touches on themes of reflection, healing, and the hope for freedom, as evidenced in the concluding lines about caged birds finding their wings. Your wriing is so Lovely.
March 8th, 2025 07:17
Friendship said:
Well written,Cassie,of inner peace,Your poem revolves around the contrast between outward beauty and inner sorrow. It reflects on the stillness and serene appearance of a lake, which serves as a metaphor for deeper emotional pain and loss. The subject matter touches on themes of reflection, healing, and the hope for freedom, as evidenced in the concluding lines about caged birds finding their wings. Your wriing is so Lovely.
March 8th, 2025 07:17
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arqios said:
A haunting release as wings unfurl- remembering that a few birds that will have never taken wing πͺ½ there is no such thing as a scarless flight no matter how tiny the scab ππ»ποΈ
March 8th, 2025 07:15
arqios said:
A haunting release as wings unfurl- remembering that a few birds that will have never taken wing πͺ½ there is no such thing as a scarless flight no matter how tiny the scab ππ»ποΈ
March 8th, 2025 07:15
Dandelion Clocks
Kevin Hulme said:
A lovely Poem, and using a Dandelion as a Metaphor for people going separate ways was a nice touch. Enjoyed.
March 7th, 2025 21:59
Kevin Hulme said:
A lovely Poem, and using a Dandelion as a Metaphor for people going separate ways was a nice touch. Enjoyed.
March 7th, 2025 21:59
Kite
gray0328 said:
Great imagery Cassie brought me back to my kite flying days well done
March 7th, 2025 12:19
gray0328 said:
Great imagery Cassie brought me back to my kite flying days well done
March 7th, 2025 12:19
Melting Snow
rebellion_in_sanity said:
What a poem! \"my wings got crushed yet still i fly
on melodies of love once felt \" love it
March 7th, 2025 07:23
rebellion_in_sanity said:
What a poem! \"my wings got crushed yet still i fly
on melodies of love once felt \" love it
March 7th, 2025 07:23
Unwavering
arqios said:
Now this is about someone specific and it also brings other images as well, among them the tale of the little π§ββοΈ mermaid ππ»π
March 7th, 2025 02:24
arqios said:
Now this is about someone specific and it also brings other images as well, among them the tale of the little π§ββοΈ mermaid ππ»π
March 7th, 2025 02:24
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Doggerel Dave said:
A presence clearly evoked in deep rich rhythms, Cassie. For me there is little need to be specific, the impression does it completely.
March 6th, 2025 18:19
Doggerel Dave said:
A presence clearly evoked in deep rich rhythms, Cassie. For me there is little need to be specific, the impression does it completely.
March 6th, 2025 18:19
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Poetic Licence said:
I feel this is of feelings for someone dearly loved but no longer here, touching and sensitive write
March 6th, 2025 13:42
Poetic Licence said:
I feel this is of feelings for someone dearly loved but no longer here, touching and sensitive write
March 6th, 2025 13:42
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Teddy.15 said:
Memories to treasure and your spectacular imagery makes me think this is about your beloved Mother. Stunning πΉ
March 6th, 2025 11:17
Teddy.15 said:
Memories to treasure and your spectacular imagery makes me think this is about your beloved Mother. Stunning πΉ
March 6th, 2025 11:17
Unwavering
sorenbarrett said:
Hauntingly beautiful this poem a memory painted in siren images where waves sing a lullaby. Hypnotic and enchanting are the feelings that I get from this poem
March 6th, 2025 10:36
sorenbarrett said:
Hauntingly beautiful this poem a memory painted in siren images where waves sing a lullaby. Hypnotic and enchanting are the feelings that I get from this poem
March 6th, 2025 10:36
Dandelion Clocks
Friendship said:
Nicely done,Cassie,Your poem captures the universal experience of longing for a simpler, happier time while grappling with the inevitability of change.
March 6th, 2025 06:58
Friendship said:
Nicely done,Cassie,Your poem captures the universal experience of longing for a simpler, happier time while grappling with the inevitability of change.
March 6th, 2025 06:58
Dandelion Clocks
Neville said:
Thomas took the words write out of my mouth (note to self & thee) .. without being rude, sometimes it\'s best to get it out quick and get in first before risking the chance of being misconstrued .. Neville
March 6th, 2025 03:10
Neville said:
Thomas took the words write out of my mouth (note to self & thee) .. without being rude, sometimes it\'s best to get it out quick and get in first before risking the chance of being misconstrued .. Neville
March 6th, 2025 03:10
Dandelion Clocks
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Cassie and those seeds will always bring new life.
Andy
March 6th, 2025 02:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Cassie and those seeds will always bring new life.
Andy
March 6th, 2025 02:59
Kite
Accidental Poet said:
You honor your Red Kite with love and respect. May he frequent your window view. Beautiful words Cassie. πΉ
March 6th, 2025 02:58
Accidental Poet said:
You honor your Red Kite with love and respect. May he frequent your window view. Beautiful words Cassie. πΉ
March 6th, 2025 02:58
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arqios said:
All that in three shortish stanzas! A treat to readππ»π
March 6th, 2025 01:53
arqios said:
All that in three shortish stanzas! A treat to readππ»π
March 6th, 2025 01:53
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Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful dearest Cassie, every single image I can see. πΉ
March 6th, 2025 01:02
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful dearest Cassie, every single image I can see. πΉ
March 6th, 2025 01:02
Kite
NafisaSB said:
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this poem is so descriptive that i can visualize the flight in my mind\'s eye
thanks for sharing
March 6th, 2025 00:21
NafisaSB said:
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this poem is so descriptive that i can visualize the flight in my mind\'s eye
thanks for sharing
March 6th, 2025 00:21
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