Comments received on poems by PoeticBiscuit
End of Times?
Saxon Crow said:
It would be good if all this was a smack on the hand and go to the naughty corner moment
March 27th, 2020 03:34
Saxon Crow said:
It would be good if all this was a smack on the hand and go to the naughty corner moment
March 27th, 2020 03:34
End of Times?
orchidee said:
One aspect of this could be Old Testament Book of Judges - The people sinned; called to God for help; He gave them leaders to rescue them; then they forgot Him again and sinned - and so on, in a circle.
Not that He is a \'hellfire and damnation\' God, but Jesus warns us of plagues, pestilences, famines, etc, as signs of the end. Though those things may not mean the actual end of the world.
March 27th, 2020 03:16
orchidee said:
One aspect of this could be Old Testament Book of Judges - The people sinned; called to God for help; He gave them leaders to rescue them; then they forgot Him again and sinned - and so on, in a circle.
Not that He is a \'hellfire and damnation\' God, but Jesus warns us of plagues, pestilences, famines, etc, as signs of the end. Though those things may not mean the actual end of the world.
March 27th, 2020 03:16
End of Times?
Goldfinch60 said:
So true but it is also bring out the good in many people. Being retired I have had many notes through the door, ;phone calls and emails from friends and acquaintances asking if I need any help at all. I don\'t as all is well but it shows the goodness of people in these strange times.
March 27th, 2020 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
So true but it is also bring out the good in many people. Being retired I have had many notes through the door, ;phone calls and emails from friends and acquaintances asking if I need any help at all. I don\'t as all is well but it shows the goodness of people in these strange times.
March 27th, 2020 02:22
End of Times?
Neville said:
who knows what the future holds.. I fear we are a long way from resolution..
An apt and timely post if ever there was..... Neville
March 26th, 2020 18:07
Neville said:
who knows what the future holds.. I fear we are a long way from resolution..
An apt and timely post if ever there was..... Neville
March 26th, 2020 18:07
End of Times?
dusk arising said:
He he he SNAP! I wrote on the same theme today...please have a look at my \'global warning\' today.
Do we deserve such a beautiful planet? Our home?
Well i don\'t believe god is the \'Mr Nice Guy and our saviour\' bit at all..... ask anyone who prayed and then was confronted with disaster and deaths.
March 26th, 2020 15:58
dusk arising said:
He he he SNAP! I wrote on the same theme today...please have a look at my \'global warning\' today.
Do we deserve such a beautiful planet? Our home?
Well i don\'t believe god is the \'Mr Nice Guy and our saviour\' bit at all..... ask anyone who prayed and then was confronted with disaster and deaths.
March 26th, 2020 15:58
Past Memory
Amon said:
We can\'t rewind time, instead we can renew it in a corrected version, living a sweeter life that is never to be regretted again.
March 26th, 2020 01:45
Amon said:
We can\'t rewind time, instead we can renew it in a corrected version, living a sweeter life that is never to be regretted again.
March 26th, 2020 01:45
Past Memory
FredPeyer said:
Well written, PB! When memories are all that\'s left, off we go to make new ones!
March 25th, 2020 13:44
FredPeyer said:
Well written, PB! When memories are all that\'s left, off we go to make new ones!
March 25th, 2020 13:44
Past Memory
dusk arising said:
Ha! the bitter sweet of the one that got away, or was cast aside. But are you just recalling the juicy bits LOL.
March 25th, 2020 12:13
dusk arising said:
Ha! the bitter sweet of the one that got away, or was cast aside. But are you just recalling the juicy bits LOL.
March 25th, 2020 12:13
Past Memory
Neville said:
it happens... thanks for reminding me so bloomin well... Stay safe PB
Neville
March 25th, 2020 06:36
Neville said:
it happens... thanks for reminding me so bloomin well... Stay safe PB
Neville
March 25th, 2020 06:36
What is a poet?
Poetic Dan said:
Bam, I would dunk that in my tea! It is you, it is me, its everybody..
If you so many didn\'t hide away, great stuff my friend
Much peace and respect
March 24th, 2020 17:06
Poetic Dan said:
Bam, I would dunk that in my tea! It is you, it is me, its everybody..
If you so many didn\'t hide away, great stuff my friend
Much peace and respect
March 24th, 2020 17:06
Blissful Moon
Crystal Hope said:
This is really beautiful. love the description
March 24th, 2020 15:32
Crystal Hope said:
This is really beautiful. love the description
March 24th, 2020 15:32
Blissful Moon
PoeticBiscuit said:
Thanks for stopping by, glad I could help you reminisce a little.
-PB
March 24th, 2020 14:40
PoeticBiscuit said:
Thanks for stopping by, glad I could help you reminisce a little.
-PB
March 24th, 2020 14:40
Blissful Moon
Neville said:
I vaguely remember such daze....Cheers for jogging my memory, and for doing it so well...
March 24th, 2020 14:30
Neville said:
I vaguely remember such daze....Cheers for jogging my memory, and for doing it so well...
March 24th, 2020 14:30
What is a poet?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE - Good evening *PB* thanks for an intersting Poem which asks a QUESTION *What is a Poet ?* Provided they can speak in their Mother tongue the whole Human Race (over 7 billion) is potentially a Poet. The definition of a Modern Poem is any words in any order ! Although I would prefer the definition *A poem is words with REASON and arranged in a pattern of either Rhythm or Rhyme*. Early Poems in the oral tradition (before most poeple could write or read) were composed so people could remember them and recite & repeat them ! Hence the need for Rhyme & Rhythm and classic Poetic Forms such a Sonnets & Pantoums (repetition) & Hymns etc. It is the form & function of the Poem that makes it memorable !
Peace & Joy ~ Yours BRIAN
March 23rd, 2020 18:11
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE - Good evening *PB* thanks for an intersting Poem which asks a QUESTION *What is a Poet ?* Provided they can speak in their Mother tongue the whole Human Race (over 7 billion) is potentially a Poet. The definition of a Modern Poem is any words in any order ! Although I would prefer the definition *A poem is words with REASON and arranged in a pattern of either Rhythm or Rhyme*. Early Poems in the oral tradition (before most poeple could write or read) were composed so people could remember them and recite & repeat them ! Hence the need for Rhyme & Rhythm and classic Poetic Forms such a Sonnets & Pantoums (repetition) & Hymns etc. It is the form & function of the Poem that makes it memorable !
Peace & Joy ~ Yours BRIAN
March 23rd, 2020 18:11
Little Star
tundrol said:
Yes, it\'s difficult to say what is the profound relationship between stars and humans, but I\'m sure they do see us (without eyes) and feel us (without fingers) and hear us (without ears). Smell us, maybe not.
March 20th, 2020 10:43
tundrol said:
Yes, it\'s difficult to say what is the profound relationship between stars and humans, but I\'m sure they do see us (without eyes) and feel us (without fingers) and hear us (without ears). Smell us, maybe not.
March 20th, 2020 10:43
Little Star
Goldfinch60 said:
Stars are holes in heavens floor so they can shine heaven down onto each of us PB.
Good write.
Andy
March 20th, 2020 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Stars are holes in heavens floor so they can shine heaven down onto each of us PB.
Good write.
Andy
March 20th, 2020 01:14
Wedding Bells or Warning Signs?
Poetic Dan said:
As some one who married a his sweet 16 girl and had to amazing children, 12 years on divorced, 8 years on my new marriage shows that life does get better with another beautiful baby girl!
Life is a ripple, and your flow is always inspirational!
March 13th, 2020 09:01
Poetic Dan said:
As some one who married a his sweet 16 girl and had to amazing children, 12 years on divorced, 8 years on my new marriage shows that life does get better with another beautiful baby girl!
Life is a ripple, and your flow is always inspirational!
March 13th, 2020 09:01
Wedding Bells or Warning Signs?
PoeticBiscuit said:
Thanks for reading dusk, your feedback have and always will be greatly appreciated.
March 12th, 2020 17:52
PoeticBiscuit said:
Thanks for reading dusk, your feedback have and always will be greatly appreciated.
March 12th, 2020 17:52
Wedding Bells or Warning Signs?
dusk arising said:
Ouch the cracks today in yesterdays bliss. The warning bells you hear but turn away from only to hear them louder next week..... and hey, no longer the naive teen you were.... you realise this premonition is real.
It\'s all there in your words.
March 12th, 2020 16:24
dusk arising said:
Ouch the cracks today in yesterdays bliss. The warning bells you hear but turn away from only to hear them louder next week..... and hey, no longer the naive teen you were.... you realise this premonition is real.
It\'s all there in your words.
March 12th, 2020 16:24
Our Own Beat
Goldfinch60 said:
If we were all the same it would be a very boring life.
November 15th, 2019 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
If we were all the same it would be a very boring life.
November 15th, 2019 01:52
Ocean Eyes
Poetic Dan said:
When we go to the depths we\'ve never been before, there is always danger but so much beauty than before!
Thanks for the inspiration ;)
November 9th, 2019 03:55
Poetic Dan said:
When we go to the depths we\'ve never been before, there is always danger but so much beauty than before!
Thanks for the inspiration ;)
November 9th, 2019 03:55
Eclipsing Hearts
Goldfinch60 said:
Their hearts and souls will be together forever listing to the words of your poem.
November 8th, 2019 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Their hearts and souls will be together forever listing to the words of your poem.
November 8th, 2019 01:49
Beautiful Sky
Poetic Dan said:
Every now and then this can be true but I am on the side of things are not like they used too.
Great stuff!
Much appreciated
November 7th, 2019 08:43
Poetic Dan said:
Every now and then this can be true but I am on the side of things are not like they used too.
Great stuff!
Much appreciated
November 7th, 2019 08:43
Beautiful Sky
Goldfinch60 said:
Looking at clouds is so wonderful, the uniqueness of every one can bring so much to us all.
November 7th, 2019 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Looking at clouds is so wonderful, the uniqueness of every one can bring so much to us all.
November 7th, 2019 01:20
Beautiful Sky
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING *PB* - ANGELA HERE ! Thanks for an elegant Poem on a very important subject CLOUDS ! Cloud formations are never the same and are a help to predicting the Weather. Also they have such lovely names ! Cumulus (like cauliflowers) ~ Cirrus (whispy) ~ Lenticular (banks of cloud) and Nimbus (rain !) There ar e many other compound names ! Cumulus are the best ones for seeing objects ! On can see all manner of Animals & Trees & if the sun is shining through the GATEWAY to Heaven ~ AMEN !
Keep looking up
Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA (UK)
Please check our SITE ~ Thanks A & B !
November 6th, 2019 19:04
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING *PB* - ANGELA HERE ! Thanks for an elegant Poem on a very important subject CLOUDS ! Cloud formations are never the same and are a help to predicting the Weather. Also they have such lovely names ! Cumulus (like cauliflowers) ~ Cirrus (whispy) ~ Lenticular (banks of cloud) and Nimbus (rain !) There ar e many other compound names ! Cumulus are the best ones for seeing objects ! On can see all manner of Animals & Trees & if the sun is shining through the GATEWAY to Heaven ~ AMEN !
Keep looking up
Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA (UK)
Please check our SITE ~ Thanks A & B !
November 6th, 2019 19:04
Droplets
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong write, may those tears soon turn to tears of laughter.
November 6th, 2019 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong write, may those tears soon turn to tears of laughter.
November 6th, 2019 02:10
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