Comments received on poems by PoeticBiscuit



Savior or Captor?
orchidee said:

Good write PB.

February 5th, 2021 03:07

Savior or Captor?
dusk arising said:

Written from the point of view of a puppy in a pet shop ? ? ? ?

February 4th, 2021 22:50

Savior or Captor?
FredPeyer said:

Good one, PB! And by the time you find out, it may be too late!

February 4th, 2021 21:46

Tick Tock
dusk arising said:

Herein older year the clock seems to leap forward leaving one wondering... where does the time go.

I like the way you concisely encapsulated lifes clock and pace.

January 23rd, 2021 02:05

Tick Tock
Goldfinch60 said:

That clock never seems to go at the same time, every time we enjoy ourselves it races by but if we are sad it slows down.

Andy

January 23rd, 2021 01:52

Spoiler Alert
FredPeyer said:

Very well written, PoeticBiscuit! At my age I am getting towards the end of the book, and I know how it ends, but what I don\'t know and want to know is what will happen in-between now and the end. It could be incredible, so I turn the pages one by one, ready for the \'surprise\'.

January 21st, 2021 21:57

Spoiler Alert
Jerry Reynolds said:

The hero of each of our stories dies.

January 21st, 2021 08:56

Spoiler Alert
L. B. Mek said:

ha! how delightfully witty
good write

January 21st, 2021 06:31

Spoiler Alert
dusk arising said:

LOL 4 years too late but most of the world saw where the election of Trump was going to go.

January 21st, 2021 03:56

Spoiler Alert
orchidee said:

Good write PB.

January 21st, 2021 03:05

Spoiler Alert
Goldfinch60 said:

I know of people who read the last chapter of a book first to see \'whodunnit\'.

Andy

January 21st, 2021 01:44

Lack of Courage
Poetic Dan said:

Bam.. And again..

I did one recently called dark side of the moon with a tune my daughter played once...

Needless to say the effects was the same as your rhyme... Shivering down my spine!

Not sure if this is fantasy or fiction but your spirit has conviction!

Never lose the write my friend

Much peace and respect

January 16th, 2021 08:20

One step.
Poetic Dan said:

Boom... Quick dunk! Always inspiring my friend..

Keep up the write!

January 16th, 2021 08:11

One step.
orchidee said:

Seems like it sometimes. Or - two steps forwards, one step backwards. Though at least then we have made ONE step forward.
You took that step yet?! (heehee).

January 16th, 2021 03:20

One step.
Robert Haigh said:

I\'m sure we have all had similar feelings at some time in our lives. We just have to hang on in there -- some day the tide will turn!

January 16th, 2021 02:51

One step.
Goldfinch60 said:

That curse will be lifted and you will walk forward into happiness once more.

Andy

January 16th, 2021 02:01

Lack of Courage
L. B. Mek said:

Congratulations!

January 15th, 2021 05:48

Lack of Courage
orchidee said:

Oh dear, I best say something more useful!
I suppose it takes courage to go on living. Suicide can be a cowardly way out - at times anyway.

January 15th, 2021 03:05

Lack of Courage
orchidee said:

A fine write PB.
If it was not such a serious theme - \'Oohh, I shouldn\'t; suicide is very bad for your health, ya know!\'
Or \'I felt like suicide, but have you seen the cost of razor blades these days?!\' heehee.
Or \'I tried to electrocute myself, but there was power cut that day!\' lol.

January 15th, 2021 03:04

My Life is Over
Poetic Dan said:

Fantastic flow yes nothing in life will ever be adventurous is this!

December 7th, 2020 02:28

My Life is Over
orchidee said:

Oops - a blessing in disguise, I hope.
But it can seem as if one\'s life is over, if getting some long drawn-out disease, for example.

December 4th, 2020 02:43

Curveball
Jerry Reynolds said:

Enjoy your child

November 30th, 2020 15:23

Curveball
Poetic Dan said:

Yes, yes and yes perfectly time as I hit a wave of unsureNess.... It was never a mistake, only time for two reads glad the last pick was this!

Much peace and respect
Keep up the write!

November 30th, 2020 08:00

Curveball
L. B. Mek said:

like the confident tone, has me imagining a young father using these words as a mantra to meditate with and calm that tsunami of panic and anxiety bubbling just below the surface,
good read

November 30th, 2020 06:25

Curveball
orchidee said:

Good write PB.

November 30th, 2020 02:48

...In The Eye of The Beholder
RDS said:

Hahaha fine historic skit. I too catch my reflection hunched and disfigured around a pen and notepad.
J

November 29th, 2020 07:14

...In The Eye of The Beholder
orchidee said:

Good write PB.

November 29th, 2020 03:18

...In The Eye of The Beholder
Neville said:


I can read into this in several ways .. and enjoy every one of em ... maybe my fave being .. I see Hephaestus as a craftsman a maker or fabricator and maybe born again or renewed .......whatever the case, ya can beat an egg but ya just cant beat a bit o Greek mythology before breakfast ...

Neville

November 29th, 2020 02:48

If Forever was but a day...
RDS said:

Haha tenderness made punchy and bold. I enjoyed it.
J

November 28th, 2020 18:45

She Was My Muse
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful flow, good write

November 28th, 2020 06:51

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