Comments received on poems by PoeticBiscuit
Smear
David Wakeling said:
The problem with asking questions in a poem is that it is impossible to answer.
September 8th, 2023 15:55
David Wakeling said:
The problem with asking questions in a poem is that it is impossible to answer.
September 8th, 2023 15:55
The Breaking of Us
Kinsey Peterson said:
Well I will say that you\'re likely a very wonderful person and I hope you learn to love yourself.
August 19th, 2023 13:10
Kinsey Peterson said:
Well I will say that you\'re likely a very wonderful person and I hope you learn to love yourself.
August 19th, 2023 13:10
The Breaking of Us
Bobby O said:
Undergoing renovations. Make sure you go it first for yourself ?
August 11th, 2023 16:05
Bobby O said:
Undergoing renovations. Make sure you go it first for yourself ?
August 11th, 2023 16:05
Cold Love
Poetic Dan said:
The connections that jump-start our lives again! Always well penned my friend
July 5th, 2023 01:10
Poetic Dan said:
The connections that jump-start our lives again! Always well penned my friend
July 5th, 2023 01:10
Puzzle Piece
L. B. Mek said:
nothing like realising
you\'re missing a puzzle piece
at the very end
that bold patch in your masterpiece
like, that shrapnel core in your heart
making you implode, self-destruct
and feel like you\'ll never be whole
again..
(i so relate, dear poet
thanks for sharing)
July 3rd, 2023 03:49
L. B. Mek said:
nothing like realising
you\'re missing a puzzle piece
at the very end
that bold patch in your masterpiece
like, that shrapnel core in your heart
making you implode, self-destruct
and feel like you\'ll never be whole
again..
(i so relate, dear poet
thanks for sharing)
July 3rd, 2023 03:49
New Depth
orchidee said:
I fell off a ladder. Is that the same sort of thing you mean?! heehee. (I didn\'t really).
July 1st, 2023 13:02
orchidee said:
I fell off a ladder. Is that the same sort of thing you mean?! heehee. (I didn\'t really).
July 1st, 2023 13:02
New Depth
Bobby O said:
Nice words but I got a question? If you begin the comparison of depth to a fiery core which some may find as a reference to Hell? And the in thenext sentence that same act of chasing into that depth is now relayed as positive representation of falling in love. It’s maybe risky?
July 1st, 2023 10:56
Bobby O said:
Nice words but I got a question? If you begin the comparison of depth to a fiery core which some may find as a reference to Hell? And the in thenext sentence that same act of chasing into that depth is now relayed as positive representation of falling in love. It’s maybe risky?
July 1st, 2023 10:56
Search
orchidee said:
Oohh, I never knew you were still searching for me. I\'m hiding in the cellar! lol.
June 29th, 2023 01:45
orchidee said:
Oohh, I never knew you were still searching for me. I\'m hiding in the cellar! lol.
June 29th, 2023 01:45
Mother Nature’s Masterpiece
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely poem 🙂
June 29th, 2023 00:48
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely poem 🙂
June 29th, 2023 00:48
Distant
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like your poems ) good writing )
June 29th, 2023 00:43
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like your poems ) good writing )
June 29th, 2023 00:43
Search
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing .. I like your poem 🙂
June 29th, 2023 00:39
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing .. I like your poem 🙂
June 29th, 2023 00:39
What’s left to say?
Kinsey Peterson said:
what\'s left to say is the awesome poems that you\'re writing- well done darling
June 27th, 2023 13:12
Kinsey Peterson said:
what\'s left to say is the awesome poems that you\'re writing- well done darling
June 27th, 2023 13:12
I envy the wind…
L. B. Mek said:
lovely
might have to borrow a word or two
if I need to confess someday soon
lol
June 26th, 2023 04:18
L. B. Mek said:
lovely
might have to borrow a word or two
if I need to confess someday soon
lol
June 26th, 2023 04:18
Unprepared Love
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great poem ))
Especially like these words
Wrapped in a whirlwind,
Of the perfect melody,
Melancholy kisses,
Beautiful words )
June 25th, 2023 22:25
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great poem ))
Especially like these words
Wrapped in a whirlwind,
Of the perfect melody,
Melancholy kisses,
Beautiful words )
June 25th, 2023 22:25
I envy the wind…
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nicely expressed poem I like it 🙂
June 25th, 2023 22:22
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nicely expressed poem I like it 🙂
June 25th, 2023 22:22
Unprepared Love
Kinsey Peterson said:
Love is one of those emotions that is as terrifying as it is rewarding. Beautiful work. :)
June 24th, 2023 15:40
Kinsey Peterson said:
Love is one of those emotions that is as terrifying as it is rewarding. Beautiful work. :)
June 24th, 2023 15:40
Unprepared Love
LIZ said:
Ah yes, \"blissful pain\"! Unexpected! Worth it though, isn\'t?
June 24th, 2023 11:11
LIZ said:
Ah yes, \"blissful pain\"! Unexpected! Worth it though, isn\'t?
June 24th, 2023 11:11
Fall
Bobby O said:
I really felt the sentiment and conviction. Wishing you spent a little time to vary the sentence structure a nice idea like this might shine a bit more with an added. Complexity?
June 23rd, 2023 21:04
Bobby O said:
I really felt the sentiment and conviction. Wishing you spent a little time to vary the sentence structure a nice idea like this might shine a bit more with an added. Complexity?
June 23rd, 2023 21:04
Memory Lane
Poetic Dan said:
Don\'t stay too long or at least make it a huge one!
June 23rd, 2023 15:01
Poetic Dan said:
Don\'t stay too long or at least make it a huge one!
June 23rd, 2023 15:01
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