Comments received on poems by PoeticBiscuit
Distant
Poetic Dan said:
That\'s like me in the same room as my loved ones and I\'m too stressed to interact.
Absolutely love your work.
I do hope it brings you light
June 23rd, 2023 15:00
Poetic Dan said:
That\'s like me in the same room as my loved ones and I\'m too stressed to interact.
Absolutely love your work.
I do hope it brings you light
June 23rd, 2023 15:00
Fall
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... that\'s some raw truth there! This was me last week for real.
Thank you so much for sharing
Much peace and respect
Ps
Not sure how I\'ll do reading this to the wife but my tears will be worth!
June 23rd, 2023 14:56
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... that\'s some raw truth there! This was me last week for real.
Thank you so much for sharing
Much peace and respect
Ps
Not sure how I\'ll do reading this to the wife but my tears will be worth!
June 23rd, 2023 14:56
Distant
L. B. Mek said:
too near and our fingers get scorched
too far and our frozen heart, gives up
in between, exists
that dream we aspire to realise
in each new chapter of romance
we take a leap of faith, to grasp..
(inspirational resolve, a great read
thanks for sharing)
June 23rd, 2023 03:39
L. B. Mek said:
too near and our fingers get scorched
too far and our frozen heart, gives up
in between, exists
that dream we aspire to realise
in each new chapter of romance
we take a leap of faith, to grasp..
(inspirational resolve, a great read
thanks for sharing)
June 23rd, 2023 03:39
Distant
David Wakeling said:
This seems unfinished.The poor reader is left wondering who is talking to whom and what is the end result
June 22nd, 2023 17:39
David Wakeling said:
This seems unfinished.The poor reader is left wondering who is talking to whom and what is the end result
June 22nd, 2023 17:39
Memory Lane
orchidee said:
Good write P.
Phew! So you didn\'t forget what you were trying to remember?! Eh?! lol.
June 22nd, 2023 01:10
orchidee said:
Good write P.
Phew! So you didn\'t forget what you were trying to remember?! Eh?! lol.
June 22nd, 2023 01:10
I am a Phoenix
Kinsey Peterson said:
\"I am a pheonix, so burn me.\" It\'s as if this line is a challenge and it reads incredibly powerfully, especially as an opening line. Amazing work darlin :)
June 20th, 2023 15:23
Kinsey Peterson said:
\"I am a pheonix, so burn me.\" It\'s as if this line is a challenge and it reads incredibly powerfully, especially as an opening line. Amazing work darlin :)
June 20th, 2023 15:23
Wall
SweetOdodoGrass43 said:
I loved how you described self-isolation, and the description you used for it. Thank you so much for this, it was wonderful.
March 26th, 2023 11:54
SweetOdodoGrass43 said:
I loved how you described self-isolation, and the description you used for it. Thank you so much for this, it was wonderful.
March 26th, 2023 11:54
Broken Perfectly
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing nicely expressed poem
February 9th, 2023 01:22
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing nicely expressed poem
February 9th, 2023 01:22
I\'m Gonna be a Butterfly
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely poem .. nice words about the caterpillar and butterfly š
February 9th, 2023 01:18
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely poem .. nice words about the caterpillar and butterfly š
February 9th, 2023 01:18
I\'m Gonna be a Butterfly
thinkerbell said:
Beautiful poem about our hidden potential and hoe we can all be true to ourselves and achieve the best...
February 8th, 2023 21:08
thinkerbell said:
Beautiful poem about our hidden potential and hoe we can all be true to ourselves and achieve the best...
February 8th, 2023 21:08
Bound by Love
orchidee said:
Well, stop meeting on the top floor of tower blocks then! heehee. (heights).
January 14th, 2023 03:10
orchidee said:
Well, stop meeting on the top floor of tower blocks then! heehee. (heights).
January 14th, 2023 03:10
Iām Trying.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words PB. I will give you an A+.
Andy
October 15th, 2022 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words PB. I will give you an A+.
Andy
October 15th, 2022 00:44
Weight.
L. B. Mek said:
relationship\'s, as backpack burdens
we carry around
long after our connections have been severed..
(a relatable read, thanks for sharing)
August 4th, 2022 03:33
L. B. Mek said:
relationship\'s, as backpack burdens
we carry around
long after our connections have been severed..
(a relatable read, thanks for sharing)
August 4th, 2022 03:33
Sweet Child, Slow down.
karvelD said:
Lovely.
:)_/\\_ ty for sharing with us.
December 11th, 2021 20:25
karvelD said:
Lovely.
:)_/\\_ ty for sharing with us.
December 11th, 2021 20:25
Sweet Child, Slow down.
orchidee said:
A fine write PB.
Yes, adults may say: \'I know a child. I was one once!\'
December 11th, 2021 03:07
orchidee said:
A fine write PB.
Yes, adults may say: \'I know a child. I was one once!\'
December 11th, 2021 03:07
Sweet Child, Slow down.
dusk arising said:
The intimacy between mother and tiny baby... something a man can never know.
December 11th, 2021 00:06
dusk arising said:
The intimacy between mother and tiny baby... something a man can never know.
December 11th, 2021 00:06
Through the Cracks
L. B. Mek said:
this is a wonderfully succinct poem, and I loved the imagery in your final lines
thanks for sharing
October 8th, 2021 04:18
L. B. Mek said:
this is a wonderfully succinct poem, and I loved the imagery in your final lines
thanks for sharing
October 8th, 2021 04:18
Father Hood
Saxon Crow said:
Congratulations! You now have enough poetic material to last a lifetime! Beautiful and relatable poem PB
August 13th, 2021 20:44
Saxon Crow said:
Congratulations! You now have enough poetic material to last a lifetime! Beautiful and relatable poem PB
August 13th, 2021 20:44
Father Hood
dusk arising said:
May you grow together, learning of life together and remain best of friends unconditionally.
August 13th, 2021 15:17
dusk arising said:
May you grow together, learning of life together and remain best of friends unconditionally.
August 13th, 2021 15:17
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