Comments received on poems by PoeticBiscuit
Unprepared Love
Kinsey Peterson said:
Love is one of those emotions that is as terrifying as it is rewarding. Beautiful work. :)
June 24th, 2023 15:40
Kinsey Peterson said:
Love is one of those emotions that is as terrifying as it is rewarding. Beautiful work. :)
June 24th, 2023 15:40
Unprepared Love
LIZ said:
Ah yes, \"blissful pain\"! Unexpected! Worth it though, isn\'t?
June 24th, 2023 11:11
LIZ said:
Ah yes, \"blissful pain\"! Unexpected! Worth it though, isn\'t?
June 24th, 2023 11:11
Fall
Bobby O said:
I really felt the sentiment and conviction. Wishing you spent a little time to vary the sentence structure a nice idea like this might shine a bit more with an added. Complexity?
June 23rd, 2023 21:04
Bobby O said:
I really felt the sentiment and conviction. Wishing you spent a little time to vary the sentence structure a nice idea like this might shine a bit more with an added. Complexity?
June 23rd, 2023 21:04
Memory Lane
Poetic Dan said:
Don\'t stay too long or at least make it a huge one!
June 23rd, 2023 15:01
Poetic Dan said:
Don\'t stay too long or at least make it a huge one!
June 23rd, 2023 15:01
Distant
Poetic Dan said:
That\'s like me in the same room as my loved ones and I\'m too stressed to interact.
Absolutely love your work.
I do hope it brings you light
June 23rd, 2023 15:00
Poetic Dan said:
That\'s like me in the same room as my loved ones and I\'m too stressed to interact.
Absolutely love your work.
I do hope it brings you light
June 23rd, 2023 15:00
Fall
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... that\'s some raw truth there! This was me last week for real.
Thank you so much for sharing
Much peace and respect
Ps
Not sure how I\'ll do reading this to the wife but my tears will be worth!
June 23rd, 2023 14:56
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... that\'s some raw truth there! This was me last week for real.
Thank you so much for sharing
Much peace and respect
Ps
Not sure how I\'ll do reading this to the wife but my tears will be worth!
June 23rd, 2023 14:56
Distant
L. B. Mek said:
too near and our fingers get scorched
too far and our frozen heart, gives up
in between, exists
that dream we aspire to realise
in each new chapter of romance
we take a leap of faith, to grasp..
(inspirational resolve, a great read
thanks for sharing)
June 23rd, 2023 03:39
L. B. Mek said:
too near and our fingers get scorched
too far and our frozen heart, gives up
in between, exists
that dream we aspire to realise
in each new chapter of romance
we take a leap of faith, to grasp..
(inspirational resolve, a great read
thanks for sharing)
June 23rd, 2023 03:39
Distant
David Wakeling said:
This seems unfinished.The poor reader is left wondering who is talking to whom and what is the end result
June 22nd, 2023 17:39
David Wakeling said:
This seems unfinished.The poor reader is left wondering who is talking to whom and what is the end result
June 22nd, 2023 17:39
Memory Lane
orchidee said:
Good write P.
Phew! So you didn\'t forget what you were trying to remember?! Eh?! lol.
June 22nd, 2023 01:10
orchidee said:
Good write P.
Phew! So you didn\'t forget what you were trying to remember?! Eh?! lol.
June 22nd, 2023 01:10
I am a Phoenix
Kinsey Peterson said:
\"I am a pheonix, so burn me.\" It\'s as if this line is a challenge and it reads incredibly powerfully, especially as an opening line. Amazing work darlin :)
June 20th, 2023 15:23
Kinsey Peterson said:
\"I am a pheonix, so burn me.\" It\'s as if this line is a challenge and it reads incredibly powerfully, especially as an opening line. Amazing work darlin :)
June 20th, 2023 15:23
Wall
SweetOdodoGrass43 said:
I loved how you described self-isolation, and the description you used for it. Thank you so much for this, it was wonderful.
March 26th, 2023 11:54
SweetOdodoGrass43 said:
I loved how you described self-isolation, and the description you used for it. Thank you so much for this, it was wonderful.
March 26th, 2023 11:54
I\'m Gonna be a Butterfly
Caring dove said:
Lovely poem .. nice words about the caterpillar and butterfly š
February 9th, 2023 01:18
Caring dove said:
Lovely poem .. nice words about the caterpillar and butterfly š
February 9th, 2023 01:18
I\'m Gonna be a Butterfly
thinkerbell said:
Beautiful poem about our hidden potential and hoe we can all be true to ourselves and achieve the best...
February 8th, 2023 21:08
thinkerbell said:
Beautiful poem about our hidden potential and hoe we can all be true to ourselves and achieve the best...
February 8th, 2023 21:08
Bound by Love
orchidee said:
Well, stop meeting on the top floor of tower blocks then! heehee. (heights).
January 14th, 2023 03:10
orchidee said:
Well, stop meeting on the top floor of tower blocks then! heehee. (heights).
January 14th, 2023 03:10
Iām Trying.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words PB. I will give you an A+.
Andy
October 15th, 2022 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words PB. I will give you an A+.
Andy
October 15th, 2022 00:44
Weight.
L. B. Mek said:
relationship\'s, as backpack burdens
we carry around
long after our connections have been severed..
(a relatable read, thanks for sharing)
August 4th, 2022 03:33
L. B. Mek said:
relationship\'s, as backpack burdens
we carry around
long after our connections have been severed..
(a relatable read, thanks for sharing)
August 4th, 2022 03:33
Sweet Child, Slow down.
karvelD said:
Lovely.
:)_/\\_ ty for sharing with us.
December 11th, 2021 20:25
karvelD said:
Lovely.
:)_/\\_ ty for sharing with us.
December 11th, 2021 20:25
Sweet Child, Slow down.
orchidee said:
A fine write PB.
Yes, adults may say: \'I know a child. I was one once!\'
December 11th, 2021 03:07
orchidee said:
A fine write PB.
Yes, adults may say: \'I know a child. I was one once!\'
December 11th, 2021 03:07
Sweet Child, Slow down.
dusk arising said:
The intimacy between mother and tiny baby... something a man can never know.
December 11th, 2021 00:06
dusk arising said:
The intimacy between mother and tiny baby... something a man can never know.
December 11th, 2021 00:06
Through the Cracks
L. B. Mek said:
this is a wonderfully succinct poem, and I loved the imagery in your final lines
thanks for sharing
October 8th, 2021 04:18
L. B. Mek said:
this is a wonderfully succinct poem, and I loved the imagery in your final lines
thanks for sharing
October 8th, 2021 04:18
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