Comments received on poems by PoeticBiscuit
Wasted Potential
L. B. Mek said:
if this is you wasting potential
then I cant wait to see
what heights your poetry can reach,
thanks for sharing
August 13th, 2021 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
if this is you wasting potential
then I cant wait to see
what heights your poetry can reach,
thanks for sharing
August 13th, 2021 04:49
Wasted Potential
Lorna said:
Oh it\'s just a down day but a fun poem came out of it...........
August 13th, 2021 02:49
Lorna said:
Oh it\'s just a down day but a fun poem came out of it...........
August 13th, 2021 02:49
Wasted Potential
Saxon Crow said:
Great poem PB. Long time no see. There\'s no such thing as wasted potential, just time to practice and hone ones skills
August 13th, 2021 01:20
Saxon Crow said:
Great poem PB. Long time no see. There\'s no such thing as wasted potential, just time to practice and hone ones skills
August 13th, 2021 01:20
Wasted Potential
Thekkinkkattil said:
Nice wording but don\'t be so negative .You are what you are
August 13th, 2021 00:48
Thekkinkkattil said:
Nice wording but don\'t be so negative .You are what you are
August 13th, 2021 00:48
I Will Change For You…
orchidee said:
No one\'s perfect - except ME, of course!
Glad you will change - come up to MY standard.
Notice the selfish emphasis on ME here!
This is insufferable - go eat some humble pie, Orchi! heehee.
June 19th, 2021 01:57
orchidee said:
No one\'s perfect - except ME, of course!
Glad you will change - come up to MY standard.
Notice the selfish emphasis on ME here!
This is insufferable - go eat some humble pie, Orchi! heehee.
June 19th, 2021 01:57
Chaotic Love
orchidee said:
Good write PB.
You could bash the guitar - use it as a drum! lol.
June 2nd, 2021 02:00
orchidee said:
Good write PB.
You could bash the guitar - use it as a drum! lol.
June 2nd, 2021 02:00
Chaotic Love
Poetic Dan said:
Short and sweet, with no guitar strings. So beautifully done! The cracks let the light in!
Keep up the write my friend
June 2nd, 2021 00:37
Poetic Dan said:
Short and sweet, with no guitar strings. So beautifully done! The cracks let the light in!
Keep up the write my friend
June 2nd, 2021 00:37
Savior or Captor?
dusk arising said:
Written from the point of view of a puppy in a pet shop ? ? ? ?
February 4th, 2021 22:50
dusk arising said:
Written from the point of view of a puppy in a pet shop ? ? ? ?
February 4th, 2021 22:50
Savior or Captor?
FredPeyer said:
Good one, PB! And by the time you find out, it may be too late!
February 4th, 2021 21:46
FredPeyer said:
Good one, PB! And by the time you find out, it may be too late!
February 4th, 2021 21:46
Tick Tock
dusk arising said:
Herein older year the clock seems to leap forward leaving one wondering... where does the time go.
I like the way you concisely encapsulated lifes clock and pace.
January 23rd, 2021 02:05
dusk arising said:
Herein older year the clock seems to leap forward leaving one wondering... where does the time go.
I like the way you concisely encapsulated lifes clock and pace.
January 23rd, 2021 02:05
Tick Tock
Goldfinch60 said:
That clock never seems to go at the same time, every time we enjoy ourselves it races by but if we are sad it slows down.
Andy
January 23rd, 2021 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
That clock never seems to go at the same time, every time we enjoy ourselves it races by but if we are sad it slows down.
Andy
January 23rd, 2021 01:52
Spoiler Alert
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, PoeticBiscuit! At my age I am getting towards the end of the book, and I know how it ends, but what I don\'t know and want to know is what will happen in-between now and the end. It could be incredible, so I turn the pages one by one, ready for the \'surprise\'.
January 21st, 2021 21:57
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, PoeticBiscuit! At my age I am getting towards the end of the book, and I know how it ends, but what I don\'t know and want to know is what will happen in-between now and the end. It could be incredible, so I turn the pages one by one, ready for the \'surprise\'.
January 21st, 2021 21:57
Spoiler Alert
dusk arising said:
LOL 4 years too late but most of the world saw where the election of Trump was going to go.
January 21st, 2021 03:56
dusk arising said:
LOL 4 years too late but most of the world saw where the election of Trump was going to go.
January 21st, 2021 03:56
Spoiler Alert
Goldfinch60 said:
I know of people who read the last chapter of a book first to see \'whodunnit\'.
Andy
January 21st, 2021 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
I know of people who read the last chapter of a book first to see \'whodunnit\'.
Andy
January 21st, 2021 01:44
Lack of Courage
Poetic Dan said:
Bam.. And again..
I did one recently called dark side of the moon with a tune my daughter played once...
Needless to say the effects was the same as your rhyme... Shivering down my spine!
Not sure if this is fantasy or fiction but your spirit has conviction!
Never lose the write my friend
Much peace and respect
January 16th, 2021 08:20
Poetic Dan said:
Bam.. And again..
I did one recently called dark side of the moon with a tune my daughter played once...
Needless to say the effects was the same as your rhyme... Shivering down my spine!
Not sure if this is fantasy or fiction but your spirit has conviction!
Never lose the write my friend
Much peace and respect
January 16th, 2021 08:20
One step.
Poetic Dan said:
Boom... Quick dunk! Always inspiring my friend..
Keep up the write!
January 16th, 2021 08:11
Poetic Dan said:
Boom... Quick dunk! Always inspiring my friend..
Keep up the write!
January 16th, 2021 08:11
One step.
orchidee said:
Seems like it sometimes. Or - two steps forwards, one step backwards. Though at least then we have made ONE step forward.
You took that step yet?! (heehee).
January 16th, 2021 03:20
orchidee said:
Seems like it sometimes. Or - two steps forwards, one step backwards. Though at least then we have made ONE step forward.
You took that step yet?! (heehee).
January 16th, 2021 03:20
One step.
Goldfinch60 said:
That curse will be lifted and you will walk forward into happiness once more.
Andy
January 16th, 2021 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
That curse will be lifted and you will walk forward into happiness once more.
Andy
January 16th, 2021 02:01
Lack of Courage
orchidee said:
Oh dear, I best say something more useful!
I suppose it takes courage to go on living. Suicide can be a cowardly way out - at times anyway.
January 15th, 2021 03:05
orchidee said:
Oh dear, I best say something more useful!
I suppose it takes courage to go on living. Suicide can be a cowardly way out - at times anyway.
January 15th, 2021 03:05
Lack of Courage
orchidee said:
A fine write PB.
If it was not such a serious theme - \'Oohh, I shouldn\'t; suicide is very bad for your health, ya know!\'
Or \'I felt like suicide, but have you seen the cost of razor blades these days?!\' heehee.
Or \'I tried to electrocute myself, but there was power cut that day!\' lol.
January 15th, 2021 03:04
orchidee said:
A fine write PB.
If it was not such a serious theme - \'Oohh, I shouldn\'t; suicide is very bad for your health, ya know!\'
Or \'I felt like suicide, but have you seen the cost of razor blades these days?!\' heehee.
Or \'I tried to electrocute myself, but there was power cut that day!\' lol.
January 15th, 2021 03:04
My Life is Over
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic flow yes nothing in life will ever be adventurous is this!
December 7th, 2020 02:28
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic flow yes nothing in life will ever be adventurous is this!
December 7th, 2020 02:28
My Life is Over
orchidee said:
Oops - a blessing in disguise, I hope.
But it can seem as if one\'s life is over, if getting some long drawn-out disease, for example.
December 4th, 2020 02:43
orchidee said:
Oops - a blessing in disguise, I hope.
But it can seem as if one\'s life is over, if getting some long drawn-out disease, for example.
December 4th, 2020 02:43
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