Comments received on poems by PoeticBiscuit
Sweet Child, Slow down.
orchidee said:
A fine write PB.
Yes, adults may say: \'I know a child. I was one once!\'
December 11th, 2021 03:07
orchidee said:
A fine write PB.
Yes, adults may say: \'I know a child. I was one once!\'
December 11th, 2021 03:07
Sweet Child, Slow down.
dusk arising said:
The intimacy between mother and tiny baby... something a man can never know.
December 11th, 2021 00:06
dusk arising said:
The intimacy between mother and tiny baby... something a man can never know.
December 11th, 2021 00:06
Through the Cracks
L. B. Mek said:
this is a wonderfully succinct poem, and I loved the imagery in your final lines
thanks for sharing
October 8th, 2021 04:18
L. B. Mek said:
this is a wonderfully succinct poem, and I loved the imagery in your final lines
thanks for sharing
October 8th, 2021 04:18
Father Hood
Saxon Crow said:
Congratulations! You now have enough poetic material to last a lifetime! Beautiful and relatable poem PB
August 13th, 2021 20:44
Saxon Crow said:
Congratulations! You now have enough poetic material to last a lifetime! Beautiful and relatable poem PB
August 13th, 2021 20:44
Father Hood
dusk arising said:
May you grow together, learning of life together and remain best of friends unconditionally.
August 13th, 2021 15:17
dusk arising said:
May you grow together, learning of life together and remain best of friends unconditionally.
August 13th, 2021 15:17
Wasted Potential
L. B. Mek said:
if this is you wasting potential
then I cant wait to see
what heights your poetry can reach,
thanks for sharing
August 13th, 2021 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
if this is you wasting potential
then I cant wait to see
what heights your poetry can reach,
thanks for sharing
August 13th, 2021 04:49
Wasted Potential
Lorna said:
Oh it\'s just a down day but a fun poem came out of it...........
August 13th, 2021 02:49
Lorna said:
Oh it\'s just a down day but a fun poem came out of it...........
August 13th, 2021 02:49
Wasted Potential
Saxon Crow said:
Great poem PB. Long time no see. There\'s no such thing as wasted potential, just time to practice and hone ones skills
August 13th, 2021 01:20
Saxon Crow said:
Great poem PB. Long time no see. There\'s no such thing as wasted potential, just time to practice and hone ones skills
August 13th, 2021 01:20
Wasted Potential
Thekkinkkattil said:
Nice wording but don\'t be so negative .You are what you are
August 13th, 2021 00:48
Thekkinkkattil said:
Nice wording but don\'t be so negative .You are what you are
August 13th, 2021 00:48
I Will Change For You…
orchidee said:
No one\'s perfect - except ME, of course!
Glad you will change - come up to MY standard.
Notice the selfish emphasis on ME here!
This is insufferable - go eat some humble pie, Orchi! heehee.
June 19th, 2021 01:57
orchidee said:
No one\'s perfect - except ME, of course!
Glad you will change - come up to MY standard.
Notice the selfish emphasis on ME here!
This is insufferable - go eat some humble pie, Orchi! heehee.
June 19th, 2021 01:57
Chaotic Love
orchidee said:
Good write PB.
You could bash the guitar - use it as a drum! lol.
June 2nd, 2021 02:00
orchidee said:
Good write PB.
You could bash the guitar - use it as a drum! lol.
June 2nd, 2021 02:00
Chaotic Love
Poetic Dan said:
Short and sweet, with no guitar strings. So beautifully done! The cracks let the light in!
Keep up the write my friend
June 2nd, 2021 00:37
Poetic Dan said:
Short and sweet, with no guitar strings. So beautifully done! The cracks let the light in!
Keep up the write my friend
June 2nd, 2021 00:37
Savior or Captor?
dusk arising said:
Written from the point of view of a puppy in a pet shop ? ? ? ?
February 4th, 2021 22:50
dusk arising said:
Written from the point of view of a puppy in a pet shop ? ? ? ?
February 4th, 2021 22:50
Savior or Captor?
FredPeyer said:
Good one, PB! And by the time you find out, it may be too late!
February 4th, 2021 21:46
FredPeyer said:
Good one, PB! And by the time you find out, it may be too late!
February 4th, 2021 21:46
Tick Tock
dusk arising said:
Herein older year the clock seems to leap forward leaving one wondering... where does the time go.
I like the way you concisely encapsulated lifes clock and pace.
January 23rd, 2021 02:05
dusk arising said:
Herein older year the clock seems to leap forward leaving one wondering... where does the time go.
I like the way you concisely encapsulated lifes clock and pace.
January 23rd, 2021 02:05
Tick Tock
Goldfinch60 said:
That clock never seems to go at the same time, every time we enjoy ourselves it races by but if we are sad it slows down.
Andy
January 23rd, 2021 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
That clock never seems to go at the same time, every time we enjoy ourselves it races by but if we are sad it slows down.
Andy
January 23rd, 2021 01:52
Spoiler Alert
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, PoeticBiscuit! At my age I am getting towards the end of the book, and I know how it ends, but what I don\'t know and want to know is what will happen in-between now and the end. It could be incredible, so I turn the pages one by one, ready for the \'surprise\'.
January 21st, 2021 21:57
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, PoeticBiscuit! At my age I am getting towards the end of the book, and I know how it ends, but what I don\'t know and want to know is what will happen in-between now and the end. It could be incredible, so I turn the pages one by one, ready for the \'surprise\'.
January 21st, 2021 21:57
Spoiler Alert
dusk arising said:
LOL 4 years too late but most of the world saw where the election of Trump was going to go.
January 21st, 2021 03:56
dusk arising said:
LOL 4 years too late but most of the world saw where the election of Trump was going to go.
January 21st, 2021 03:56
Spoiler Alert
Goldfinch60 said:
I know of people who read the last chapter of a book first to see \'whodunnit\'.
Andy
January 21st, 2021 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
I know of people who read the last chapter of a book first to see \'whodunnit\'.
Andy
January 21st, 2021 01:44
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