Comments received on poems by PoeticBiscuit
Voices
Poetic Dan said:
No one but ourselves my friend, my sit round a table now but so do throw chairs!
I once did a writting about sitting for tea with my head demon next time it kicked down the door.
This reminds of that time, thanks for sharing yours
Much peace and respect
August 8th, 2019 18:08
Poetic Dan said:
No one but ourselves my friend, my sit round a table now but so do throw chairs!
I once did a writting about sitting for tea with my head demon next time it kicked down the door.
This reminds of that time, thanks for sharing yours
Much peace and respect
August 8th, 2019 18:08
Voices
Christina8 said:
I\'m sure this is poetic license at work, and if it is you are doing a great job! Keep writing, PB!
August 8th, 2019 13:33
Christina8 said:
I\'m sure this is poetic license at work, and if it is you are doing a great job! Keep writing, PB!
August 8th, 2019 13:33
Voices
dusk arising said:
Maybe, just maybe the pain is your real nice self being horrified by/hurt by/disgusted by (you choose) the horrible side of your thoughts?
Which is proof you\'re that nice guy.
August 8th, 2019 13:12
dusk arising said:
Maybe, just maybe the pain is your real nice self being horrified by/hurt by/disgusted by (you choose) the horrible side of your thoughts?
Which is proof you\'re that nice guy.
August 8th, 2019 13:12
Voices
Neville said:
I hope these words are the product of a keen imagination & not autobiographical..... but if they are... I suggest you politely go ask to change your therapist... Neville
August 8th, 2019 07:21
Neville said:
I hope these words are the product of a keen imagination & not autobiographical..... but if they are... I suggest you politely go ask to change your therapist... Neville
August 8th, 2019 07:21
Voices
orchidee said:
I don\'t know - can you think of good, pleasant, happy things, etc? They could replace the voices, or at least somewhat, I think.
August 8th, 2019 03:40
orchidee said:
I don\'t know - can you think of good, pleasant, happy things, etc? They could replace the voices, or at least somewhat, I think.
August 8th, 2019 03:40
End of A Rainbow
Christina8 said:
This is a fantastic write no matter the age! Great job with this one!!....Christina
August 7th, 2019 11:04
Christina8 said:
This is a fantastic write no matter the age! Great job with this one!!....Christina
August 7th, 2019 11:04
End of A Rainbow
Neville said:
you dont have to be a kid to enjoy this one.. this should bring a smile the faces of all adults, children and baby animals alike.... Nice one .... Neville
August 7th, 2019 05:54
Neville said:
you dont have to be a kid to enjoy this one.. this should bring a smile the faces of all adults, children and baby animals alike.... Nice one .... Neville
August 7th, 2019 05:54
End of A Rainbow
dusk arising said:
And brighten my day it did. What a delight from behind your clown mask today.
Superb read, especially for those who will read to their kiddies.
I burst out laughing at a Dinosaur on a business call and again at the tiger. Adding this to my favourites.
Much needed mirth in MPS where so much is often dark.
August 7th, 2019 05:09
dusk arising said:
And brighten my day it did. What a delight from behind your clown mask today.
Superb read, especially for those who will read to their kiddies.
I burst out laughing at a Dinosaur on a business call and again at the tiger. Adding this to my favourites.
Much needed mirth in MPS where so much is often dark.
August 7th, 2019 05:09
End of A Rainbow
Michael Edwards said:
And brighten it it does - nice to know others write light verse - it can get very \'heavy\' on this site - more please .
August 7th, 2019 03:17
Michael Edwards said:
And brighten it it does - nice to know others write light verse - it can get very \'heavy\' on this site - more please .
August 7th, 2019 03:17
End of A Rainbow
Poetic Dan said:
That would be one fantastic kids book my friend!
Thank you so much for your wonderful vibration
I\'ve been told that unicorns fart rainbows and a leprechaun flys ever time we say goodbye!
August 7th, 2019 02:28
Poetic Dan said:
That would be one fantastic kids book my friend!
Thank you so much for your wonderful vibration
I\'ve been told that unicorns fart rainbows and a leprechaun flys ever time we say goodbye!
August 7th, 2019 02:28
Masked
Christina8 said:
A good write PB! Enjoyed your authors notes...there are far too many people that live behind the mask. Enjoyed.
August 6th, 2019 17:39
Christina8 said:
A good write PB! Enjoyed your authors notes...there are far too many people that live behind the mask. Enjoyed.
August 6th, 2019 17:39
Masked
Neville said:
the black dog can be a right bastard..
am glad you wrote a detailed authors note to accompany \'Masked\' .... which was enjoyed by the way.... N
August 6th, 2019 06:17
Neville said:
the black dog can be a right bastard..
am glad you wrote a detailed authors note to accompany \'Masked\' .... which was enjoyed by the way.... N
August 6th, 2019 06:17
Masked
dusk arising said:
Yep, behind my painted smile live many miseries but i will not dwell there.....
Many/most poets here know the \'tears of a clown\' syndrome only too well.
A well penned expression of the carriage of a personal burden.
August 6th, 2019 01:15
dusk arising said:
Yep, behind my painted smile live many miseries but i will not dwell there.....
Many/most poets here know the \'tears of a clown\' syndrome only too well.
A well penned expression of the carriage of a personal burden.
August 6th, 2019 01:15
Storm
dusk arising said:
At last sir there is sunshine from your words on mps. Very welcome they are too.....
.... pearls of wisdom from a person who has lived what they write...
August 5th, 2019 12:36
dusk arising said:
At last sir there is sunshine from your words on mps. Very welcome they are too.....
.... pearls of wisdom from a person who has lived what they write...
August 5th, 2019 12:36
Storm
Fay Slimm. said:
Good thought here PB - storms can make us much more aware of our strength when we show them we are not afraid. Dance in the rain and laugh at the thunder eh ? - - a positive write and true.
August 5th, 2019 12:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Good thought here PB - storms can make us much more aware of our strength when we show them we are not afraid. Dance in the rain and laugh at the thunder eh ? - - a positive write and true.
August 5th, 2019 12:04
Storm
Neville said:
Now that is a nice outlook .. I certainly thing when they have passed, we are stronger....... Neville
August 5th, 2019 11:53
Neville said:
Now that is a nice outlook .. I certainly thing when they have passed, we are stronger....... Neville
August 5th, 2019 11:53
Storm
Christina8 said:
Yes, storms are necessary in life but things bloom thereafter...great write PB!
August 5th, 2019 11:46
Christina8 said:
Yes, storms are necessary in life but things bloom thereafter...great write PB!
August 5th, 2019 11:46
Storm
Suresh said:
Rain is needed for growth,
Let my courage be my rain.
Well poemed
August 5th, 2019 11:43
Suresh said:
Rain is needed for growth,
Let my courage be my rain.
Well poemed
August 5th, 2019 11:43
Panic Attack
Suresh said:
Good to hear they are no longer a part
And pray they never re-start.
Your poem though speaks volumes.
Posted my response to Christina8, on her posting.
August 4th, 2019 12:28
Suresh said:
Good to hear they are no longer a part
And pray they never re-start.
Your poem though speaks volumes.
Posted my response to Christina8, on her posting.
August 4th, 2019 12:28
Panic Attack
Christina8 said:
I applaud you for writing about this subject, PB!! Well done! I simply hope these don\'t affect you any longer or as much as they used to.......Christina
August 4th, 2019 10:46
Christina8 said:
I applaud you for writing about this subject, PB!! Well done! I simply hope these don\'t affect you any longer or as much as they used to.......Christina
August 4th, 2019 10:46
Hello Mother Nature
Seek said:
Nature, our greatest resource for self-renewal. Enjoyed this thoroughly.
August 3rd, 2019 23:04
Seek said:
Nature, our greatest resource for self-renewal. Enjoyed this thoroughly.
August 3rd, 2019 23:04
Hello Mother Nature
Christina8 said:
This is a very cute poem, poetic b! Job well done!
August 3rd, 2019 11:11
Christina8 said:
This is a very cute poem, poetic b! Job well done!
August 3rd, 2019 11:11
Hello Mother Nature
Poetic Dan said:
Yes, yes and yes again. As I sit in the garden with my dog, she totally agrees.
Spectacular my friend!
August 3rd, 2019 04:03
Poetic Dan said:
Yes, yes and yes again. As I sit in the garden with my dog, she totally agrees.
Spectacular my friend!
August 3rd, 2019 04:03
Hello Mother Nature
Michael Edwards said:
Seeing nature going about its business makes life worthwhile - great write.
August 3rd, 2019 03:03
Michael Edwards said:
Seeing nature going about its business makes life worthwhile - great write.
August 3rd, 2019 03:03
Sculpting
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write PB. In our lives we do have the bad times but the idea of maybe dying at one own hand will not work.
So glad that you have got passed that stage in your life and are now moving forward in joy.
August 3rd, 2019 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write PB. In our lives we do have the bad times but the idea of maybe dying at one own hand will not work.
So glad that you have got passed that stage in your life and are now moving forward in joy.
August 3rd, 2019 00:59
Sculpting
Poetic Dan said:
The was beautifully sad my friend, you have been on the edge. Reminds me of my 1st or 2nd writing called my cliff.
Just a thought that if you wanted to let us know about the your mind set, just pop it in the author section.
I joined here to help my mental state of mind, from then I\'ve even had close friend take her life.
This road is can be really rough but worse if we keep things bottled up.
Thank you for being open and raw, live is nothing more.
August 2nd, 2019 18:27
Poetic Dan said:
The was beautifully sad my friend, you have been on the edge. Reminds me of my 1st or 2nd writing called my cliff.
Just a thought that if you wanted to let us know about the your mind set, just pop it in the author section.
I joined here to help my mental state of mind, from then I\'ve even had close friend take her life.
This road is can be really rough but worse if we keep things bottled up.
Thank you for being open and raw, live is nothing more.
August 2nd, 2019 18:27
Sculpting
Christina8 said:
I feel ya with the cutting the wrists......but you have to understand that many accidental suicides take place with cutting. i really hope your self esteem gets better.....because your writing is great. Just keep writing!
August 2nd, 2019 13:26
Christina8 said:
I feel ya with the cutting the wrists......but you have to understand that many accidental suicides take place with cutting. i really hope your self esteem gets better.....because your writing is great. Just keep writing!
August 2nd, 2019 13:26
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