Comments received on poems by PoeticBiscuit



It Comes
Poetic Dan said:

Only those caught up in a war, say it is worth fighting for.
But I yet I still know your words well!

August 26th, 2019 01:33

It Comes
Goldfinch60 said:

Stay firm in your life and all will be wonderful.

August 25th, 2019 23:54

It Comes
dusk arising said:

A fight is only worth fighting if it frightens you. Anything else is bullying.

August 25th, 2019 15:05

Fire Fly
Laura🌻 said:

PoeticBiscuit,

May this creature of light always illuminate your path!

~Laura~

August 18th, 2019 22:49

Fire Fly
Christina8 said:

Great write biscuit. I haven\'t seen a firefly in ages.....very cute poem indeed!

August 18th, 2019 11:11

Free At Last
Seek said:

Nothing like freedom from the tyranny of fake love. Well written.

August 18th, 2019 09:25

Fire Fly
dusk arising said:

That night will live on for you Biscuit. One of the added bonus\' of being a poet... reading your own pieces takes you right back.

August 18th, 2019 08:51

Fire Fly
Neville said:

they are lovely we have masses of them in May and June .. then , they are gone...

August 18th, 2019 03:03

Fire Fly
Goldfinch60 said:

That light will be forever with you PB

August 18th, 2019 01:03

Free At Last
Christina8 said:

Awesome write, biscuit! This one truly felt! Glad she/it is gone forever....

August 17th, 2019 13:21

Free At Last
Poetic Dan said:

Yes, yes and triple yes
Felt ever word burst from my chest!
Always a pleasure to read


August 17th, 2019 03:48

Free At Last
Neville said:

Sometimes, just sometimes maybe .. gone is for the best....

Nicely poemed and pretty on the page..... Neville

August 17th, 2019 02:40

Free At Last
orchidee said:

A fine write again PB.

August 17th, 2019 01:26

Free At Last
Goldfinch60 said:

The bonds are cast away and your life of freedom and wonder now lay before you.

August 17th, 2019 00:08

Free At Last
dusk arising said:

That\'s it mate, cast her out of your system.

August 17th, 2019 00:05

Trapped Dove
Christina8 said:

A great read with a wonderfully happy ending! All you need is love!

August 16th, 2019 17:17

Trapped Dove
dusk arising said:

So very true. Caging a beautiful thing/lover stops it being what it was. And then complaints and cruelty follow. Control freak syndrome.

Very well versed here. You are producing truly excellent pieces Biscuit.

August 16th, 2019 12:33

Victim
dusk arising said:

Amazing spunk in this! Really can relate to this stand.

Having read your previous work on MPS i can begin to see the strength of character running through it all now.

August 16th, 2019 12:10

Trapped Dove
orchidee said:

A lovely write PB.

August 16th, 2019 01:57

Trapped Dove
Neville said:

You can beat an egg, and you can beat a carpet.. but you just can\'t beat a bit of freedom can ya........

Nicely penned my friend.........

Neville

August 16th, 2019 00:49

Trapped Dove
Goldfinch60 said:

Fly free in love PB, fly free in love.

August 16th, 2019 00:39

Victim
Christina8 said:

I wanted to stand and applaud!! This is awesome, and this will definitely go in my favorites, biscuit!!

August 15th, 2019 11:02

Victim
Fay Slimm. said:

The best of attitudes to take is the mantra you penned and so well that this lesson will stay long after the read.

August 15th, 2019 03:27

Victim
Neville said:

Crumbs..... this is without doubt my favourite Poetic Biscuit poem to date

Neville

August 15th, 2019 03:11

Victim
Poetic Dan said:

Mental mind is the key hero inside us all there is!
Great stuff

August 15th, 2019 01:55

Victim
Goldfinch60 said:

Good strong write, defying bullies will show them to be the cowards they are.

August 15th, 2019 00:42

The Spider
Neville said:

well there ya go.. Fine B knows a thing or two too....

August 14th, 2019 15:46

The Spider
Christina8 said:

Another fun write biscuit. I wish I knew your name so I didn\'t always have to call you that! LOL!! Anyway, great job on this!! Looking forward to tomorrows poem.....Christina

August 14th, 2019 12:50

The Spider
Neville said:

Reminds me of Boris the spider by the Who...... toodle oooh

August 14th, 2019 04:27

The Spider
FineB said:

Hello PoeticBiscuit,

What a great write.

Wonderful!

As I read this I thought of the song Boris the Spider sung and written by the legendary late John Entwistle of The Who.

Keep writing
FineB

August 14th, 2019 04:24

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