Comments received on poems by PoeticBiscuit
Droplets
MendedFences27 said:
I have to agree with Neville. This is short, concise, and powerful. A picture of loneliness if ever there was one. - Phil A.
November 5th, 2019 19:23
MendedFences27 said:
I have to agree with Neville. This is short, concise, and powerful. A picture of loneliness if ever there was one. - Phil A.
November 5th, 2019 19:23
Droplets
Neville said:
a little gem my friend ... hope things get better and truly.... N
November 5th, 2019 18:23
Neville said:
a little gem my friend ... hope things get better and truly.... N
November 5th, 2019 18:23
Darkness Awaits
orchidee said:
You need not remain always sad or melancholy, biscuit. Some can feel (false) guilt for feeling joyful and happy.
But light awaits too - a spark, or light at the end of the tunnel, etc.
August 27th, 2019 01:56
orchidee said:
You need not remain always sad or melancholy, biscuit. Some can feel (false) guilt for feeling joyful and happy.
But light awaits too - a spark, or light at the end of the tunnel, etc.
August 27th, 2019 01:56
Darkness Awaits
Christina8 said:
Very descriptive write, biscuit. Great job!!
August 26th, 2019 17:29
Christina8 said:
Very descriptive write, biscuit. Great job!!
August 26th, 2019 17:29
It Comes
Poetic Dan said:
Only those caught up in a war, say it is worth fighting for.
But I yet I still know your words well!
August 26th, 2019 01:33
Poetic Dan said:
Only those caught up in a war, say it is worth fighting for.
But I yet I still know your words well!
August 26th, 2019 01:33
It Comes
dusk arising said:
A fight is only worth fighting if it frightens you. Anything else is bullying.
August 25th, 2019 15:05
dusk arising said:
A fight is only worth fighting if it frightens you. Anything else is bullying.
August 25th, 2019 15:05
Fire Fly
Laura🌻 said:
PoeticBiscuit,
May this creature of light always illuminate your path!
~Laura~
August 18th, 2019 22:49
Laura🌻 said:
PoeticBiscuit,
May this creature of light always illuminate your path!
~Laura~
August 18th, 2019 22:49
Fire Fly
Christina8 said:
Great write biscuit. I haven\'t seen a firefly in ages.....very cute poem indeed!
August 18th, 2019 11:11
Christina8 said:
Great write biscuit. I haven\'t seen a firefly in ages.....very cute poem indeed!
August 18th, 2019 11:11
Free At Last
Seek said:
Nothing like freedom from the tyranny of fake love. Well written.
August 18th, 2019 09:25
Seek said:
Nothing like freedom from the tyranny of fake love. Well written.
August 18th, 2019 09:25
Fire Fly
dusk arising said:
That night will live on for you Biscuit. One of the added bonus\' of being a poet... reading your own pieces takes you right back.
August 18th, 2019 08:51
dusk arising said:
That night will live on for you Biscuit. One of the added bonus\' of being a poet... reading your own pieces takes you right back.
August 18th, 2019 08:51
Fire Fly
Neville said:
they are lovely we have masses of them in May and June .. then , they are gone...
August 18th, 2019 03:03
Neville said:
they are lovely we have masses of them in May and June .. then , they are gone...
August 18th, 2019 03:03
Free At Last
Christina8 said:
Awesome write, biscuit! This one truly felt! Glad she/it is gone forever....
August 17th, 2019 13:21
Christina8 said:
Awesome write, biscuit! This one truly felt! Glad she/it is gone forever....
August 17th, 2019 13:21
Free At Last
Poetic Dan said:
Yes, yes and triple yes
Felt ever word burst from my chest!
Always a pleasure to read
August 17th, 2019 03:48
Poetic Dan said:
Yes, yes and triple yes
Felt ever word burst from my chest!
Always a pleasure to read
August 17th, 2019 03:48
Free At Last
Neville said:
Sometimes, just sometimes maybe .. gone is for the best....
Nicely poemed and pretty on the page..... Neville
August 17th, 2019 02:40
Neville said:
Sometimes, just sometimes maybe .. gone is for the best....
Nicely poemed and pretty on the page..... Neville
August 17th, 2019 02:40
Free At Last
Goldfinch60 said:
The bonds are cast away and your life of freedom and wonder now lay before you.
August 17th, 2019 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
The bonds are cast away and your life of freedom and wonder now lay before you.
August 17th, 2019 00:08
Free At Last
dusk arising said:
That\'s it mate, cast her out of your system.
August 17th, 2019 00:05
dusk arising said:
That\'s it mate, cast her out of your system.
August 17th, 2019 00:05
Trapped Dove
Christina8 said:
A great read with a wonderfully happy ending! All you need is love!
August 16th, 2019 17:17
Christina8 said:
A great read with a wonderfully happy ending! All you need is love!
August 16th, 2019 17:17
Trapped Dove
dusk arising said:
So very true. Caging a beautiful thing/lover stops it being what it was. And then complaints and cruelty follow. Control freak syndrome.
Very well versed here. You are producing truly excellent pieces Biscuit.
August 16th, 2019 12:33
dusk arising said:
So very true. Caging a beautiful thing/lover stops it being what it was. And then complaints and cruelty follow. Control freak syndrome.
Very well versed here. You are producing truly excellent pieces Biscuit.
August 16th, 2019 12:33
Victim
dusk arising said:
Amazing spunk in this! Really can relate to this stand.
Having read your previous work on MPS i can begin to see the strength of character running through it all now.
August 16th, 2019 12:10
dusk arising said:
Amazing spunk in this! Really can relate to this stand.
Having read your previous work on MPS i can begin to see the strength of character running through it all now.
August 16th, 2019 12:10
Trapped Dove
Neville said:
You can beat an egg, and you can beat a carpet.. but you just can\'t beat a bit of freedom can ya........
Nicely penned my friend.........
Neville
August 16th, 2019 00:49
Neville said:
You can beat an egg, and you can beat a carpet.. but you just can\'t beat a bit of freedom can ya........
Nicely penned my friend.........
Neville
August 16th, 2019 00:49
Victim
Christina8 said:
I wanted to stand and applaud!! This is awesome, and this will definitely go in my favorites, biscuit!!
August 15th, 2019 11:02
Christina8 said:
I wanted to stand and applaud!! This is awesome, and this will definitely go in my favorites, biscuit!!
August 15th, 2019 11:02
Victim
Fay Slimm. said:
The best of attitudes to take is the mantra you penned and so well that this lesson will stay long after the read.
August 15th, 2019 03:27
Fay Slimm. said:
The best of attitudes to take is the mantra you penned and so well that this lesson will stay long after the read.
August 15th, 2019 03:27
Victim
Neville said:
Crumbs..... this is without doubt my favourite Poetic Biscuit poem to date
Neville
August 15th, 2019 03:11
Neville said:
Crumbs..... this is without doubt my favourite Poetic Biscuit poem to date
Neville
August 15th, 2019 03:11
Victim
Poetic Dan said:
Mental mind is the key hero inside us all there is!
Great stuff
August 15th, 2019 01:55
Poetic Dan said:
Mental mind is the key hero inside us all there is!
Great stuff
August 15th, 2019 01:55
Victim
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write, defying bullies will show them to be the cowards they are.
August 15th, 2019 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write, defying bullies will show them to be the cowards they are.
August 15th, 2019 00:42
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