Comments received on poems by PoeticBiscuit



Droplets
Aislinn Wilson said:

I appreciate the brevity

November 5th, 2019 23:35

Droplets
Poetic Dan said:

That\'s the feeling of washing away my fear, always appreciated!

Thanks for popping back!

November 5th, 2019 23:29

Droplets
MendedFences27 said:

I have to agree with Neville. This is short, concise, and powerful. A picture of loneliness if ever there was one. - Phil A.

November 5th, 2019 19:23

Droplets
Neville said:

a little gem my friend ... hope things get better and truly.... N

November 5th, 2019 18:23

Darkness Awaits
orchidee said:

You need not remain always sad or melancholy, biscuit. Some can feel (false) guilt for feeling joyful and happy.
But light awaits too - a spark, or light at the end of the tunnel, etc.

August 27th, 2019 01:56

Darkness Awaits
Christina8 said:

Very descriptive write, biscuit. Great job!!

August 26th, 2019 17:29

It Comes
Poetic Dan said:

Only those caught up in a war, say it is worth fighting for.
But I yet I still know your words well!

August 26th, 2019 01:33

It Comes
Goldfinch60 said:

Stay firm in your life and all will be wonderful.

August 25th, 2019 23:54

It Comes
dusk arising said:

A fight is only worth fighting if it frightens you. Anything else is bullying.

August 25th, 2019 15:05

Fire Fly
Laura🌻 said:

PoeticBiscuit,

May this creature of light always illuminate your path!

~Laura~

August 18th, 2019 22:49

Fire Fly
Christina8 said:

Great write biscuit. I haven\'t seen a firefly in ages.....very cute poem indeed!

August 18th, 2019 11:11

Free At Last
Seek said:

Nothing like freedom from the tyranny of fake love. Well written.

August 18th, 2019 09:25

Fire Fly
dusk arising said:

That night will live on for you Biscuit. One of the added bonus\' of being a poet... reading your own pieces takes you right back.

August 18th, 2019 08:51

Fire Fly
Neville said:

they are lovely we have masses of them in May and June .. then , they are gone...

August 18th, 2019 03:03

Fire Fly
Goldfinch60 said:

That light will be forever with you PB

August 18th, 2019 01:03

Free At Last
Christina8 said:

Awesome write, biscuit! This one truly felt! Glad she/it is gone forever....

August 17th, 2019 13:21

Free At Last
Poetic Dan said:

Yes, yes and triple yes
Felt ever word burst from my chest!
Always a pleasure to read


August 17th, 2019 03:48

Free At Last
Neville said:

Sometimes, just sometimes maybe .. gone is for the best....

Nicely poemed and pretty on the page..... Neville

August 17th, 2019 02:40

Free At Last
orchidee said:

A fine write again PB.

August 17th, 2019 01:26

Free At Last
Goldfinch60 said:

The bonds are cast away and your life of freedom and wonder now lay before you.

August 17th, 2019 00:08

Free At Last
dusk arising said:

That\'s it mate, cast her out of your system.

August 17th, 2019 00:05

Trapped Dove
Christina8 said:

A great read with a wonderfully happy ending! All you need is love!

August 16th, 2019 17:17

Trapped Dove
dusk arising said:

So very true. Caging a beautiful thing/lover stops it being what it was. And then complaints and cruelty follow. Control freak syndrome.

Very well versed here. You are producing truly excellent pieces Biscuit.

August 16th, 2019 12:33

Victim
dusk arising said:

Amazing spunk in this! Really can relate to this stand.

Having read your previous work on MPS i can begin to see the strength of character running through it all now.

August 16th, 2019 12:10

Trapped Dove
orchidee said:

A lovely write PB.

August 16th, 2019 01:57

Trapped Dove
Neville said:

You can beat an egg, and you can beat a carpet.. but you just can\'t beat a bit of freedom can ya........

Nicely penned my friend.........

Neville

August 16th, 2019 00:49

Trapped Dove
Goldfinch60 said:

Fly free in love PB, fly free in love.

August 16th, 2019 00:39

Victim
Christina8 said:

I wanted to stand and applaud!! This is awesome, and this will definitely go in my favorites, biscuit!!

August 15th, 2019 11:02

Victim
Fay Slimm. said:

The best of attitudes to take is the mantra you penned and so well that this lesson will stay long after the read.

August 15th, 2019 03:27

Victim
Neville said:

Crumbs..... this is without doubt my favourite Poetic Biscuit poem to date

Neville

August 15th, 2019 03:11

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