Comments received on poems by PoeticBiscuit
Curveball
Poetic Dan said:
Yes, yes and yes perfectly time as I hit a wave of unsureNess.... It was never a mistake, only time for two reads glad the last pick was this!
Much peace and respect
Keep up the write!
November 30th, 2020 08:00
Poetic Dan said:
Yes, yes and yes perfectly time as I hit a wave of unsureNess.... It was never a mistake, only time for two reads glad the last pick was this!
Much peace and respect
Keep up the write!
November 30th, 2020 08:00
Curveball
L. B. Mek said:
like the confident tone, has me imagining a young father using these words as a mantra to meditate with and calm that tsunami of panic and anxiety bubbling just below the surface,
good read
November 30th, 2020 06:25
L. B. Mek said:
like the confident tone, has me imagining a young father using these words as a mantra to meditate with and calm that tsunami of panic and anxiety bubbling just below the surface,
good read
November 30th, 2020 06:25
...In The Eye of The Beholder
RDS said:
Hahaha fine historic skit. I too catch my reflection hunched and disfigured around a pen and notepad.
J
November 29th, 2020 07:14
RDS said:
Hahaha fine historic skit. I too catch my reflection hunched and disfigured around a pen and notepad.
J
November 29th, 2020 07:14
...In The Eye of The Beholder
Neville said:
I can read into this in several ways .. and enjoy every one of em ... maybe my fave being .. I see Hephaestus as a craftsman a maker or fabricator and maybe born again or renewed .......whatever the case, ya can beat an egg but ya just cant beat a bit o Greek mythology before breakfast ...
Neville
November 29th, 2020 02:48
Neville said:
I can read into this in several ways .. and enjoy every one of em ... maybe my fave being .. I see Hephaestus as a craftsman a maker or fabricator and maybe born again or renewed .......whatever the case, ya can beat an egg but ya just cant beat a bit o Greek mythology before breakfast ...
Neville
November 29th, 2020 02:48
If Forever was but a day...
RDS said:
Haha tenderness made punchy and bold. I enjoyed it.
J
November 28th, 2020 18:45
RDS said:
Haha tenderness made punchy and bold. I enjoyed it.
J
November 28th, 2020 18:45
She Was My Muse
Poetic Dan said:
I wish I had more time to share my thoughts, but like many say (not easy to believe) you\'re a inspirational star!
Keep up the write my friend!
Always appreciated
November 28th, 2020 04:04
Poetic Dan said:
I wish I had more time to share my thoughts, but like many say (not easy to believe) you\'re a inspirational star!
Keep up the write my friend!
Always appreciated
November 28th, 2020 04:04
She Was My Muse
Goldfinch60 said:
Calliope is within us all who write poetry.
Andy
November 28th, 2020 02:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Calliope is within us all who write poetry.
Andy
November 28th, 2020 02:39
If Forever was but a day...
Goldfinch60 said:
True love is always forever no matter how long forever is.
Andy
November 28th, 2020 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
True love is always forever no matter how long forever is.
Andy
November 28th, 2020 02:10
Atlas
Neville said:
Tis words like this that make the world go round .................. :)
November 27th, 2020 17:50
Neville said:
Tis words like this that make the world go round .................. :)
November 27th, 2020 17:50
If Forever was but a day...
Neville said:
Get straight to the point why dont ya..
love songs just dont get much better ..
.. Neville
November 27th, 2020 17:48
Neville said:
Get straight to the point why dont ya..
love songs just dont get much better ..
.. Neville
November 27th, 2020 17:48
- Division -
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Never have guessed...
The kind of poetry I like - small neat and crunchy...
Biscuit like?
Cheers Dave
November 18th, 2020 00:54
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Never have guessed...
The kind of poetry I like - small neat and crunchy...
Biscuit like?
Cheers Dave
November 18th, 2020 00:54
Atlas
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful flow and yes physical strength alone is never enough, nor sadly is intellect, that is the wonder of this thing called life, where even immortality: is no defining measure,
still we have the good fortune of our next breath and the distance of one more step, to make all the difference we can - before the curtain call of our eyelids, lets us know we have done what we could, for this round at least...
(it\'s easy to project the optimist - when seating on my high-horse of a keyboard) lol
November 17th, 2020 03:57
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful flow and yes physical strength alone is never enough, nor sadly is intellect, that is the wonder of this thing called life, where even immortality: is no defining measure,
still we have the good fortune of our next breath and the distance of one more step, to make all the difference we can - before the curtain call of our eyelids, lets us know we have done what we could, for this round at least...
(it\'s easy to project the optimist - when seating on my high-horse of a keyboard) lol
November 17th, 2020 03:57
Atlas
Poetic Dan said:
Not 100% sure on Hercules story but I know he-mans and by the power of gray skull, it\'s all in my hands!
Always a pleasure, to see yours in action!
November 16th, 2020 08:47
Poetic Dan said:
Not 100% sure on Hercules story but I know he-mans and by the power of gray skull, it\'s all in my hands!
Always a pleasure, to see yours in action!
November 16th, 2020 08:47
Broken Perfectly
L. B. Mek said:
this is why classic metaphors are timeless, when they fit so well - it\'s like reading them anew all over again,
there is a quality of unfiltered truth to your writing style, an innate skill that\'s very hard to learn
November 16th, 2020 05:10
L. B. Mek said:
this is why classic metaphors are timeless, when they fit so well - it\'s like reading them anew all over again,
there is a quality of unfiltered truth to your writing style, an innate skill that\'s very hard to learn
November 16th, 2020 05:10
My Catacomb
Poetic Dan said:
The crowd went wild, well in my head! You are outstandingly spot on my friend together will take on that anxiety and put the diamond back into earths bed!
I truly hope you are well my friend?
November 15th, 2020 05:18
Poetic Dan said:
The crowd went wild, well in my head! You are outstandingly spot on my friend together will take on that anxiety and put the diamond back into earths bed!
I truly hope you are well my friend?
November 15th, 2020 05:18
Broken Perfectly
Poetic Dan said:
Had me at the first few lines and then of course you ended it so sweet, like a Bitter Symphony. I couldn\'t wait to read!
Always a pleasure
In your company!
November 15th, 2020 05:15
Poetic Dan said:
Had me at the first few lines and then of course you ended it so sweet, like a Bitter Symphony. I couldn\'t wait to read!
Always a pleasure
In your company!
November 15th, 2020 05:15
Broken Perfectly
orchidee said:
Meanwhile - I am perfect, not human! heehee (I wish I would shut up. lol).
November 15th, 2020 03:37
orchidee said:
Meanwhile - I am perfect, not human! heehee (I wish I would shut up. lol).
November 15th, 2020 03:37
My Catacomb
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow you express in such creative metaphors and similes all so poetic and wonderful to read of and though many feel the same yet not everyone can express so superbly. I love to use the word catacomb in my poems. Kudos.
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem here. Thanks.
November 9th, 2020 10:06
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow you express in such creative metaphors and similes all so poetic and wonderful to read of and though many feel the same yet not everyone can express so superbly. I love to use the word catacomb in my poems. Kudos.
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem here. Thanks.
November 9th, 2020 10:06
Taking Back My Life
Poetic Dan said:
Never fail to deliver with your brilliant poetic soul....I\'m nearly 40 and they still won\'t go!
I just sit them down for tea, with a biscuit and me. Getting lost in the flow of poetry, others & ours letting go of screams..
Thank you my friend
Always appreciated
August 16th, 2020 07:16
Poetic Dan said:
Never fail to deliver with your brilliant poetic soul....I\'m nearly 40 and they still won\'t go!
I just sit them down for tea, with a biscuit and me. Getting lost in the flow of poetry, others & ours letting go of screams..
Thank you my friend
Always appreciated
August 16th, 2020 07:16
Taking Back My Life
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, may your life move forward into the freedom and wonder that come with every new day.
August 16th, 2020 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, may your life move forward into the freedom and wonder that come with every new day.
August 16th, 2020 00:20
Taking Back My Life
jarcher54 said:
If you can write like this, you have no need to be insecure. Henceforth remember the wisdom of Carroll\'s Humpty Dumpty: ‘The question is, which is to be master–that’s all.’
August 16th, 2020 00:14
jarcher54 said:
If you can write like this, you have no need to be insecure. Henceforth remember the wisdom of Carroll\'s Humpty Dumpty: ‘The question is, which is to be master–that’s all.’
August 16th, 2020 00:14
Taking Back My Life
CaitEva said:
Beautiful poem, very raw and authentic.
Good luck on your journey of self discovery 🙏💖
August 15th, 2020 14:09
CaitEva said:
Beautiful poem, very raw and authentic.
Good luck on your journey of self discovery 🙏💖
August 15th, 2020 14:09
Innocence Stolen
benevolentbluebabe said:
All too quickly lost...thank you, this was a thoroughly enjoyable read : )
July 17th, 2020 14:59
benevolentbluebabe said:
All too quickly lost...thank you, this was a thoroughly enjoyable read : )
July 17th, 2020 14:59
My Abyss Pt 1
Leisa Niamh said:
Sounds like your poetry could be a much needed outlet to express how you\'re really feeling.
Liked the poem.
Helen
July 14th, 2020 14:49
Leisa Niamh said:
Sounds like your poetry could be a much needed outlet to express how you\'re really feeling.
Liked the poem.
Helen
July 14th, 2020 14:49
My Abyss Pt 1
Leisa Niamh said:
Sounds like your poetry could be a much needed outlet to express how you\'re really feeling.
Liked the poem.
Helen
July 14th, 2020 14:49
Leisa Niamh said:
Sounds like your poetry could be a much needed outlet to express how you\'re really feeling.
Liked the poem.
Helen
July 14th, 2020 14:49
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