Comments received on poems by PoeticBiscuit



The Spider
Fay Slimm. said:

May Fred live a long time as protector and guardian to prove your condition of arachnophobia can be defeated - an engaging read Biscuit.

August 14th, 2019 02:40

The Spider
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Good old Fred
Nothing to be scared of
Great write

August 14th, 2019 02:23

The Spider
orchidee said:

A fine write Biscuit.

August 14th, 2019 01:27

The Spider
Goldfinch60 said:

May Fred watch over you forever PB. Good fun write.

I used to have an assistant at work who suffered from arachnophobia and she told me once that she was in her lounge at home and she saw a spider, she rushed out of the room closed the door and sealed the bottom of the door with cushions and then \'phoned her husband and made him come home from work to get the spider.

August 14th, 2019 01:00

Perception
Neville said:

tis such a very personal thing perception..........

tis a darn good little poem here too....

N

August 13th, 2019 13:13

Perception
Christina8 said:

I think as we age, our perspective changes and hopefully for the better. This is very well written! Great job!

August 13th, 2019 12:48

Lonely Days
Poetic Dan said:

Brilliantly done!

August 13th, 2019 01:43

Perception
Poetic Dan said:

Well penned! Hard to get out of your own way sometimes!

August 13th, 2019 01:40

Perception
Goldfinch60 said:

We all see life differently and it is good.

August 13th, 2019 01:06

Lonely Days
Christina8 said:

I like your writing today, biscuit! It\'s so emotional and descriptive. how i wonder what my last days will be like without my spouse. (you wonder sometimes who is gonna go first) (i\'m too young to be wondering about this! LOL) Great job on this!!!

August 12th, 2019 15:50

Lonely Days
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good emotive write PB.

August 12th, 2019 15:15

Lonely Days
dusk arising said:

Depends upon how you view your life is my response to this. Some ppl are seen to shut down and count the days. But here on MPS i see those elders who are positive and have vitality.

Always sweet memories will reward with tears of joy and affection. We talk with God when we talk to those no longer with us.

Surprisingly uplifting to have such moments.

Excellent writing from you today Biscuit showing poetic vision.

August 12th, 2019 00:38

Shedding
Christina8 said:

I think I see some raw emotion when I see some of these writes...this one was was good. Will keep a look out for your new poems!

August 11th, 2019 11:27

Shedding
Michael Edwards said:

This truly reaches out - may the new skin weld itself into a great future.

August 11th, 2019 08:59

Shedding
dusk arising said:

I\'m thankful for you and myself too that you have shown us there is also a more relaxed aspect of your personna.

I hope this piece is a reflection too the past and that the emotional rebirth has already taken place here on earth with you. For your words here are again truly distressing.

August 11th, 2019 05:00

Shedding
Neville said:

there are a lot of things one might assume from these words... but assumptions are not the best things to base ones objective critique on...

Nicely penned my friend and muchly enjoyed..... Objective achieved..... Neville

August 11th, 2019 02:12

Shedding
Goldfinch60 said:

Those burdens become released as experience comes into you life and that experience will enable you to become just you.

August 11th, 2019 00:59

Teenage Dream
Neville said:

You have crafted an aesthetically pleasing poem here and one which I certainly relate to, having once been there, done that and worn several of the T shirts out...

The only difference today though is the range of drugs and alcohol are much broader, stronger and readily available...

A great little post in my opinion...

Neville

August 11th, 2019 00:37

Teenage Dream
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, my teenage dreams are a very long time ago.

August 10th, 2019 15:24

Teenage Dream
Christina8 said:

Very good form. Great write. I don\'t know about the liquor and drugs but I do remember intoxicating fantasies fulfilled and poor judgement! LOL I hope you\'ve got some more of these writes left in you.......Christina

August 10th, 2019 10:13

Teenage Dream
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Those verses point one way
What a wau to go?
Very enjoyable
Thanks
Me!

August 10th, 2019 02:58

Teenage Dream
dusk arising said:

We were all teenagers once and recall the spirit of early adult pleasure in our veins. Times change, Years tell, but memories are beauties.

August 10th, 2019 02:57

Teenage Dream
Fay Slimm. said:

A needed message in these three well-crafted stanzas - - good read.

August 10th, 2019 02:55

Teenage Dream
Michael Edwards said:

Great write and great form - wherever it came from I hope there are more there just like it .

August 10th, 2019 02:42

Fire & Ice
Neville said:

the unity of opposites does not always apply.... concept applauded though....... Neville

August 10th, 2019 01:16

Fire & Ice
Michael Edwards said:

Ice puts out fire, fire melts ice , nothing left but ashes - there\'s a lot to be said for compatibility - aw I\'m getting philosophical - fine write PB.

August 9th, 2019 15:11

Fire & Ice
BoxMyHeart said:

Polar opposites attract. Nice comparison. You might only melt enough to get closer, maybe your fire will fill in a good way. Thanks for this one :)

August 9th, 2019 14:51

Fire & Ice
Christina8 said:

Very well done, PB! Cool opposites attract comparison. Enjoyed the read!

August 9th, 2019 09:08

Fire & Ice
dusk arising said:

She melted away at my mere glance. She told me i could never put a fire in her heart.
I have met the Ice Woman and survived.

AS Joni Mitchell wrote \"if there\'s one rule to this game it\'s - be cool .... fifty fifty fire and ice\"

August 9th, 2019 08:17

Fire & Ice
Fay Slimm. said:

Good comparison of fire and ice - - I suspect lots of relationships have to cope with the fact that opposites attract......... thanks for this thought provoking read .

August 9th, 2019 02:58

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