Comments received on poems by PoeticBiscuit
Victim
Poetic Dan said:
Mental mind is the key hero inside us all there is!
Great stuff
August 15th, 2019 01:55
Poetic Dan said:
Mental mind is the key hero inside us all there is!
Great stuff
August 15th, 2019 01:55
Victim
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write, defying bullies will show them to be the cowards they are.
August 15th, 2019 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write, defying bullies will show them to be the cowards they are.
August 15th, 2019 00:42
The Spider
Neville said:
well there ya go.. Fine B knows a thing or two too....
August 14th, 2019 15:46
Neville said:
well there ya go.. Fine B knows a thing or two too....
August 14th, 2019 15:46
The Spider
Christina8 said:
Another fun write biscuit. I wish I knew your name so I didn\'t always have to call you that! LOL!! Anyway, great job on this!! Looking forward to tomorrows poem.....Christina
August 14th, 2019 12:50
Christina8 said:
Another fun write biscuit. I wish I knew your name so I didn\'t always have to call you that! LOL!! Anyway, great job on this!! Looking forward to tomorrows poem.....Christina
August 14th, 2019 12:50
The Spider
Neville said:
Reminds me of Boris the spider by the Who...... toodle oooh
August 14th, 2019 04:27
Neville said:
Reminds me of Boris the spider by the Who...... toodle oooh
August 14th, 2019 04:27
The Spider
FineB said:
Hello PoeticBiscuit,
What a great write.
Wonderful!
As I read this I thought of the song Boris the Spider sung and written by the legendary late John Entwistle of The Who.
Keep writing
FineB
August 14th, 2019 04:24
FineB said:
Hello PoeticBiscuit,
What a great write.
Wonderful!
As I read this I thought of the song Boris the Spider sung and written by the legendary late John Entwistle of The Who.
Keep writing
FineB
August 14th, 2019 04:24
The Spider
Fay Slimm. said:
May Fred live a long time as protector and guardian to prove your condition of arachnophobia can be defeated - an engaging read Biscuit.
August 14th, 2019 02:40
Fay Slimm. said:
May Fred live a long time as protector and guardian to prove your condition of arachnophobia can be defeated - an engaging read Biscuit.
August 14th, 2019 02:40
The Spider
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Good old Fred
Nothing to be scared of
Great write
August 14th, 2019 02:23
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Good old Fred
Nothing to be scared of
Great write
August 14th, 2019 02:23
The Spider
Goldfinch60 said:
May Fred watch over you forever PB. Good fun write.
I used to have an assistant at work who suffered from arachnophobia and she told me once that she was in her lounge at home and she saw a spider, she rushed out of the room closed the door and sealed the bottom of the door with cushions and then \'phoned her husband and made him come home from work to get the spider.
August 14th, 2019 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
May Fred watch over you forever PB. Good fun write.
I used to have an assistant at work who suffered from arachnophobia and she told me once that she was in her lounge at home and she saw a spider, she rushed out of the room closed the door and sealed the bottom of the door with cushions and then \'phoned her husband and made him come home from work to get the spider.
August 14th, 2019 01:00
Perception
Neville said:
tis such a very personal thing perception..........
tis a darn good little poem here too....
N
August 13th, 2019 13:13
Neville said:
tis such a very personal thing perception..........
tis a darn good little poem here too....
N
August 13th, 2019 13:13
Perception
Christina8 said:
I think as we age, our perspective changes and hopefully for the better. This is very well written! Great job!
August 13th, 2019 12:48
Christina8 said:
I think as we age, our perspective changes and hopefully for the better. This is very well written! Great job!
August 13th, 2019 12:48
Perception
Poetic Dan said:
Well penned! Hard to get out of your own way sometimes!
August 13th, 2019 01:40
Poetic Dan said:
Well penned! Hard to get out of your own way sometimes!
August 13th, 2019 01:40
Lonely Days
Christina8 said:
I like your writing today, biscuit! It\'s so emotional and descriptive. how i wonder what my last days will be like without my spouse. (you wonder sometimes who is gonna go first) (i\'m too young to be wondering about this! LOL) Great job on this!!!
August 12th, 2019 15:50
Christina8 said:
I like your writing today, biscuit! It\'s so emotional and descriptive. how i wonder what my last days will be like without my spouse. (you wonder sometimes who is gonna go first) (i\'m too young to be wondering about this! LOL) Great job on this!!!
August 12th, 2019 15:50
Lonely Days
dusk arising said:
Depends upon how you view your life is my response to this. Some ppl are seen to shut down and count the days. But here on MPS i see those elders who are positive and have vitality.
Always sweet memories will reward with tears of joy and affection. We talk with God when we talk to those no longer with us.
Surprisingly uplifting to have such moments.
Excellent writing from you today Biscuit showing poetic vision.
August 12th, 2019 00:38
dusk arising said:
Depends upon how you view your life is my response to this. Some ppl are seen to shut down and count the days. But here on MPS i see those elders who are positive and have vitality.
Always sweet memories will reward with tears of joy and affection. We talk with God when we talk to those no longer with us.
Surprisingly uplifting to have such moments.
Excellent writing from you today Biscuit showing poetic vision.
August 12th, 2019 00:38
Shedding
Christina8 said:
I think I see some raw emotion when I see some of these writes...this one was was good. Will keep a look out for your new poems!
August 11th, 2019 11:27
Christina8 said:
I think I see some raw emotion when I see some of these writes...this one was was good. Will keep a look out for your new poems!
August 11th, 2019 11:27
Shedding
Michael Edwards said:
This truly reaches out - may the new skin weld itself into a great future.
August 11th, 2019 08:59
Michael Edwards said:
This truly reaches out - may the new skin weld itself into a great future.
August 11th, 2019 08:59
Shedding
dusk arising said:
I\'m thankful for you and myself too that you have shown us there is also a more relaxed aspect of your personna.
I hope this piece is a reflection too the past and that the emotional rebirth has already taken place here on earth with you. For your words here are again truly distressing.
August 11th, 2019 05:00
dusk arising said:
I\'m thankful for you and myself too that you have shown us there is also a more relaxed aspect of your personna.
I hope this piece is a reflection too the past and that the emotional rebirth has already taken place here on earth with you. For your words here are again truly distressing.
August 11th, 2019 05:00
Shedding
Neville said:
there are a lot of things one might assume from these words... but assumptions are not the best things to base ones objective critique on...
Nicely penned my friend and muchly enjoyed..... Objective achieved..... Neville
August 11th, 2019 02:12
Neville said:
there are a lot of things one might assume from these words... but assumptions are not the best things to base ones objective critique on...
Nicely penned my friend and muchly enjoyed..... Objective achieved..... Neville
August 11th, 2019 02:12
Shedding
Goldfinch60 said:
Those burdens become released as experience comes into you life and that experience will enable you to become just you.
August 11th, 2019 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Those burdens become released as experience comes into you life and that experience will enable you to become just you.
August 11th, 2019 00:59
Teenage Dream
Neville said:
You have crafted an aesthetically pleasing poem here and one which I certainly relate to, having once been there, done that and worn several of the T shirts out...
The only difference today though is the range of drugs and alcohol are much broader, stronger and readily available...
A great little post in my opinion...
Neville
August 11th, 2019 00:37
Neville said:
You have crafted an aesthetically pleasing poem here and one which I certainly relate to, having once been there, done that and worn several of the T shirts out...
The only difference today though is the range of drugs and alcohol are much broader, stronger and readily available...
A great little post in my opinion...
Neville
August 11th, 2019 00:37
Teenage Dream
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, my teenage dreams are a very long time ago.
August 10th, 2019 15:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, my teenage dreams are a very long time ago.
August 10th, 2019 15:24
Teenage Dream
Christina8 said:
Very good form. Great write. I don\'t know about the liquor and drugs but I do remember intoxicating fantasies fulfilled and poor judgement! LOL I hope you\'ve got some more of these writes left in you.......Christina
August 10th, 2019 10:13
Christina8 said:
Very good form. Great write. I don\'t know about the liquor and drugs but I do remember intoxicating fantasies fulfilled and poor judgement! LOL I hope you\'ve got some more of these writes left in you.......Christina
August 10th, 2019 10:13
Teenage Dream
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Those verses point one way
What a wau to go?
Very enjoyable
Thanks
Me!
August 10th, 2019 02:58
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Those verses point one way
What a wau to go?
Very enjoyable
Thanks
Me!
August 10th, 2019 02:58
Teenage Dream
dusk arising said:
We were all teenagers once and recall the spirit of early adult pleasure in our veins. Times change, Years tell, but memories are beauties.
August 10th, 2019 02:57
dusk arising said:
We were all teenagers once and recall the spirit of early adult pleasure in our veins. Times change, Years tell, but memories are beauties.
August 10th, 2019 02:57
Teenage Dream
Fay Slimm. said:
A needed message in these three well-crafted stanzas - - good read.
August 10th, 2019 02:55
Fay Slimm. said:
A needed message in these three well-crafted stanzas - - good read.
August 10th, 2019 02:55
Teenage Dream
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and great form - wherever it came from I hope there are more there just like it .
August 10th, 2019 02:42
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and great form - wherever it came from I hope there are more there just like it .
August 10th, 2019 02:42
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