Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow



People Always Prefer Rainbows
orchidee said:

You seen Jim McDonald in Corrie? He changed that coat yet? It msut pong. he has not taken it off for about 20 years!
And has Zac (though not Irish) changed his hat yet in Emmerdale, or is it glued on?!

September 11th, 2021 04:54

People Always Prefer Rainbows
orchidee said:

A fine write SC. You got that that pot of gold? Did you get to end of rainbow before us!? lol.

September 11th, 2021 02:31

People Always Prefer Rainbows
Jayasree said:

True words SC. Well written. :)

September 11th, 2021 01:52

People Always Prefer Rainbows
Doggerel Dave said:

Of course I\'m your thunder cloud with plenty of it, Sax.... Climate change is on its way - if not here already...

Quality work though.

September 11th, 2021 01:25

People Always Prefer Rainbows
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Great writing crow ๐Ÿ™‚itโ€™s so much easier and nicer to smile at rainbows . But perhaps the clouds full of heavy rain ... perhaps they are beautiful we just canโ€™t see it . Beauty within ....

Like your poem .

Iโ€™m not sure that your always on your own if you Moan and cry ... although some people will simply stay away ,



September 11th, 2021 00:48

People Always Prefer Rainbows
dusk arising said:

Oh most definitely, I mean if it\'s raining there\'s a chance Orchi will start singing!.... Gimmie a rainbow and fairytails.

September 11th, 2021 00:41

People Always Prefer Rainbows
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true SC, the belief that the Pot o\' Gold is waiting for them enhances their dreams.

Andy

September 11th, 2021 00:22

The Darkest Place
Accidental Poet said:

If truth were easily seen in the light, many would not look close enough at the truth. But truth in the darkness requires one to look closer and understand the truth for what it is.

September 10th, 2021 21:45

The Darkest Place
Neville said:


this is the same colour as the underside of a ravens wing ... residing in the shadows, very dark indeed ...............

but of course, you already know that .... top marks n a gold star sir S C ................ Neville :)


September 10th, 2021 09:02

The Darkest Place
L. B. Mek said:

a wonderful shorty
\'darkness is a child of light, quicker we realise it
sooner we get to search for that light, giving it life...\'


September 10th, 2021 04:43

The Darkest Place
Saxon Crow said:

Thanks Teddy :)


September 10th, 2021 02:56

The Darkest Place
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Within the nights sky we might feel vulnerable and bare .... just what your words made me think of . Sometimes we write things but weโ€™re not sure what we mean at the time ,

September 10th, 2021 01:11

The Darkest Place
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

It made me think of the blue daytime sky and the nights sky . Lovely words ....

September 10th, 2021 01:10

The Darkest Place
Doggerel Dave said:

To be powerless in a relationship is for me the best place to be. When I make myself vulnerable the truth and depth of the relationship is seen clearly, then I am secure if I want to be.

I hope that makes sense. It is what I got from your piece today, Sax.


September 10th, 2021 00:59

The Darkest Place
dusk arising said:

An honest friend is a sweet place to go.

September 10th, 2021 00:36

A pythonesque poem..... Well sort of.... Well I thought I\'d give it a go..... Shh!........ Sorry
Doggerel Dave said:

Garn - it\'s got Passion \'n Power \'n ...\'n... \'n ...\'n - yeh, all of that....
๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜Š

September 9th, 2021 17:48

A pythonesque poem..... Well sort of.... Well I thought I\'d give it a go..... Shh!........ Sorry
L. B. Mek said:

\'no dear poet, let your creativity roam free
like the custard, you forgot...\'
said Zeus, with a rumbling sky of thunderous delight

September 9th, 2021 05:11

A pythonesque poem..... Well sort of.... Well I thought I\'d give it a go..... Shh!........ Sorry
dusk arising said:

A definite odour of a late parrot pervades the whole post saxon.

Bluddy good fun write m8.

September 9th, 2021 04:27

A pythonesque poem..... Well sort of.... Well I thought I\'d give it a go..... Shh!........ Sorry
Goldfinch60 said:

You forgot the Roast Beef, Yorkshire Pudding covered in onion gravy SC.
Good fun write.

Andy

September 9th, 2021 00:13

State of Grace (a serial killers tale)
AuburnScribbler said:

A tremendously penned piece of macabre here Saxon Crow, bravo!

The flow here definitely tells me, that you had fun writing this, but naturally, just continue to \"kill it\" on the page, yeah! Haha!

September 8th, 2021 14:14

State of Grace (a serial killers tale)
Goldfinch60 said:

The truth can be seen in peoples eyes but if you kill them and save the eyes their Spirit will go on and never die

Andy

September 8th, 2021 02:07

State of Grace (a serial killers tale)
orchidee said:

This is the fanaticism of some minds, who justify killing even, by saying \'God told me to\'.
Meanwhile - quite a bad hair-day!

September 8th, 2021 01:58

State of Grace (a serial killers tale)
Arvy said:

it was all games and fun until the last line๐Ÿ™‚

September 8th, 2021 00:52

Murderers Lament
L. B. Mek said:

\'And never shall I return again
To the light of freedom and a happy land
For the forest is within my mind
No peace in here I shall ever find
And madness is my truest north
A compass for my unabsolved soul
Deserved these woes I heavily carry
My burden alone to do nought but tarry
And so this journey will forever be
One of abject misery \'
sometimes we need to expel, those tormenting doubts we carry with us, from remnants of obstacles we surpassed,
before they accumulate and create a new obstacle for us to confront...
\'know! thy self\'
truly, purposed introspection is key
(indeed, a morose read, mainly because so many of its points are universally relatable)
thanks for sharing, dear poet

September 7th, 2021 05:18

Murderers Lament
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'d suggest a torch with some long life batteries plus spares....

I need cheering up, for crying out loud, as in.....๐Ÿ˜Š

September 7th, 2021 02:01

Murderers Lament
orchidee said:

You \'in\' a mood? A bad-hair day? Or meaning a \'moody write\'?! lol.

September 7th, 2021 01:47

Murderers Lament
Arvy said:

Really interesting write dear Sax!

September 7th, 2021 01:24

Murderers Lament
Goldfinch60 said:

Those two murders may have taken place but luckily it was not my murder so all is fine with me.
Good dark write SC.

Strangely I am going to a Murder Mystery evening on Friday!

Andy

September 7th, 2021 00:57

Murderers Lament
dusk arising said:

Yea forsooth though thee doth walk thine deathly path through woodland\'s woe, tis reassuring that the evil wind, which follows thine steps, be a reassurance that thy digestion still doth handle an evenings biryani with aplomb and fortitude.

Love the olde worlde style Saxon and darkness doth suite thy pen..... I sense dark days ahead Master Crow. Doth thee have a cunning plan?

Great fun Sax, got me well into the spirit as u can see.

September 7th, 2021 00:48

The Stars are Jellyfish
Vacancy said:

Love the inspiration photo and a great poem.

September 5th, 2021 19:35



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