Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow
Little Jack Frost
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully penned,
such free flowing tempo and rhyme
a great read!
thanks for sharing dear Poet
November 5th, 2021 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully penned,
such free flowing tempo and rhyme
a great read!
thanks for sharing dear Poet
November 5th, 2021 05:09
Little Jack Frost
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful fun write SC, totally true.
Andy
November 5th, 2021 02:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful fun write SC, totally true.
Andy
November 5th, 2021 02:58
Wake
Goldfinch60 said:
We may not be in this world for very long but memories of us will live forever in those who love us.
I still stand still as a coffin passes me.
Good to see you back SC.
Andy
November 5th, 2021 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
We may not be in this world for very long but memories of us will live forever in those who love us.
I still stand still as a coffin passes me.
Good to see you back SC.
Andy
November 5th, 2021 01:47
Wake
Doggerel Dave said:
Hey Sax – as a fan of Stanley Holloway, you will be familiar with his monologue ‘Brahn Boots’:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3bUJJVSPdp4&ab_channel=StanleyHolloway-Topic
People treated funerals with appropriate respect in them days….. mostly….
Neat write – now something more cheerful?
November 5th, 2021 00:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Hey Sax – as a fan of Stanley Holloway, you will be familiar with his monologue ‘Brahn Boots’:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3bUJJVSPdp4&ab_channel=StanleyHolloway-Topic
People treated funerals with appropriate respect in them days….. mostly….
Neat write – now something more cheerful?
November 5th, 2021 00:22
Wake
Paul Bell said:
Death etiquette has definitely gone out the window. The hearse is just another car going slow, annoying the ignorant car drivers now.
November 4th, 2021 13:43
Paul Bell said:
Death etiquette has definitely gone out the window. The hearse is just another car going slow, annoying the ignorant car drivers now.
November 4th, 2021 13:43
Wake
Charles_newOwner said:
It is almost scary while also a universal fact, we all die. I think this poem illustrates this fact well.
November 4th, 2021 10:57
Charles_newOwner said:
It is almost scary while also a universal fact, we all die. I think this poem illustrates this fact well.
November 4th, 2021 10:57
Wake
dusk arising said:
A truism. I rarely see a funeral procession though i live quite close to our cemetery. Though when I do see one i reflect upon my own funeral and those who may attend. I\'m a very solitary independant soul so there wont be a huge wake im sure.
Do we notice you ask, I don\'t think we do unless it appears on our telly screen along with a heroic life\'s tale.
November 4th, 2021 07:08
dusk arising said:
A truism. I rarely see a funeral procession though i live quite close to our cemetery. Though when I do see one i reflect upon my own funeral and those who may attend. I\'m a very solitary independant soul so there wont be a huge wake im sure.
Do we notice you ask, I don\'t think we do unless it appears on our telly screen along with a heroic life\'s tale.
November 4th, 2021 07:08
Wake
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I co-sign in the sentiment and spirit of this poem. A reality observed. Very well written. Thank you for a critical piece.
November 4th, 2021 07:03
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I co-sign in the sentiment and spirit of this poem. A reality observed. Very well written. Thank you for a critical piece.
November 4th, 2021 07:03
Universal Truth #1
Doggerel Dave said:
As in \'We are all in this together, aren\'t we?\'?
Well actually (and I don\'t know how to break this gently..) NO!
September 12th, 2021 01:44
Doggerel Dave said:
As in \'We are all in this together, aren\'t we?\'?
Well actually (and I don\'t know how to break this gently..) NO!
September 12th, 2021 01:44
Universal Truth #1
dusk arising said:
Such universal truths are self evident. I would like to start a movement and have this printed upon all sheets of toilet tissue produced henceforth.... the two are not necessarily related though i must buy a few rolls this cloudy Sunday.
I feel lighter for having got that out of my system.
Reading your words brought to mind the faces of taliban leaders... the ones with dead eyes. You can see your fine words written all over them.
September 12th, 2021 00:15
dusk arising said:
Such universal truths are self evident. I would like to start a movement and have this printed upon all sheets of toilet tissue produced henceforth.... the two are not necessarily related though i must buy a few rolls this cloudy Sunday.
I feel lighter for having got that out of my system.
Reading your words brought to mind the faces of taliban leaders... the ones with dead eyes. You can see your fine words written all over them.
September 12th, 2021 00:15
People Always Prefer Rainbows
Accidental Poet said:
True Sax, balance in everything. 🤔
September 11th, 2021 09:42
Accidental Poet said:
True Sax, balance in everything. 🤔
September 11th, 2021 09:42
People Always Prefer Rainbows
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, S.C.
Though I may not agree
He wrote a poem to win her heart.
Wrote five on how she tore his apart.
September 11th, 2021 09:03
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, S.C.
Though I may not agree
He wrote a poem to win her heart.
Wrote five on how she tore his apart.
September 11th, 2021 09:03
People Always Prefer Rainbows
orchidee said:
You seen Jim McDonald in Corrie? He changed that coat yet? It msut pong. he has not taken it off for about 20 years!
And has Zac (though not Irish) changed his hat yet in Emmerdale, or is it glued on?!
September 11th, 2021 04:54
orchidee said:
You seen Jim McDonald in Corrie? He changed that coat yet? It msut pong. he has not taken it off for about 20 years!
And has Zac (though not Irish) changed his hat yet in Emmerdale, or is it glued on?!
September 11th, 2021 04:54
People Always Prefer Rainbows
orchidee said:
A fine write SC. You got that that pot of gold? Did you get to end of rainbow before us!? lol.
September 11th, 2021 02:31
orchidee said:
A fine write SC. You got that that pot of gold? Did you get to end of rainbow before us!? lol.
September 11th, 2021 02:31
People Always Prefer Rainbows
Jayasree said:
True words SC. Well written. :)
September 11th, 2021 01:52
Jayasree said:
True words SC. Well written. :)
September 11th, 2021 01:52
People Always Prefer Rainbows
Doggerel Dave said:
Of course I\'m your thunder cloud with plenty of it, Sax.... Climate change is on its way - if not here already...
Quality work though.
September 11th, 2021 01:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Of course I\'m your thunder cloud with plenty of it, Sax.... Climate change is on its way - if not here already...
Quality work though.
September 11th, 2021 01:25
People Always Prefer Rainbows
Caring dove said:
Great writing crow 🙂it’s so much easier and nicer to smile at rainbows . But perhaps the clouds full of heavy rain ... perhaps they are beautiful we just can’t see it . Beauty within ....
Like your poem .
I’m not sure that your always on your own if you Moan and cry ... although some people will simply stay away ,
September 11th, 2021 00:48
Caring dove said:
Great writing crow 🙂it’s so much easier and nicer to smile at rainbows . But perhaps the clouds full of heavy rain ... perhaps they are beautiful we just can’t see it . Beauty within ....
Like your poem .
I’m not sure that your always on your own if you Moan and cry ... although some people will simply stay away ,
September 11th, 2021 00:48
People Always Prefer Rainbows
dusk arising said:
Oh most definitely, I mean if it\'s raining there\'s a chance Orchi will start singing!.... Gimmie a rainbow and fairytails.
September 11th, 2021 00:41
dusk arising said:
Oh most definitely, I mean if it\'s raining there\'s a chance Orchi will start singing!.... Gimmie a rainbow and fairytails.
September 11th, 2021 00:41
People Always Prefer Rainbows
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true SC, the belief that the Pot o\' Gold is waiting for them enhances their dreams.
Andy
September 11th, 2021 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true SC, the belief that the Pot o\' Gold is waiting for them enhances their dreams.
Andy
September 11th, 2021 00:22
The Darkest Place
Accidental Poet said:
If truth were easily seen in the light, many would not look close enough at the truth. But truth in the darkness requires one to look closer and understand the truth for what it is.
September 10th, 2021 21:45
Accidental Poet said:
If truth were easily seen in the light, many would not look close enough at the truth. But truth in the darkness requires one to look closer and understand the truth for what it is.
September 10th, 2021 21:45
The Darkest Place
Neville said:
this is the same colour as the underside of a ravens wing ... residing in the shadows, very dark indeed ...............
but of course, you already know that .... top marks n a gold star sir S C ................ Neville :)
September 10th, 2021 09:02
Neville said:
this is the same colour as the underside of a ravens wing ... residing in the shadows, very dark indeed ...............
but of course, you already know that .... top marks n a gold star sir S C ................ Neville :)
September 10th, 2021 09:02
The Darkest Place
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful shorty
\'darkness is a child of light, quicker we realise it
sooner we get to search for that light, giving it life...\'
September 10th, 2021 04:43
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful shorty
\'darkness is a child of light, quicker we realise it
sooner we get to search for that light, giving it life...\'
September 10th, 2021 04:43
The Darkest Place
Caring dove said:
Within the nights sky we might feel vulnerable and bare .... just what your words made me think of . Sometimes we write things but we’re not sure what we mean at the time ,
September 10th, 2021 01:11
Caring dove said:
Within the nights sky we might feel vulnerable and bare .... just what your words made me think of . Sometimes we write things but we’re not sure what we mean at the time ,
September 10th, 2021 01:11
The Darkest Place
Caring dove said:
It made me think of the blue daytime sky and the nights sky . Lovely words ....
September 10th, 2021 01:10
Caring dove said:
It made me think of the blue daytime sky and the nights sky . Lovely words ....
September 10th, 2021 01:10
The Darkest Place
Doggerel Dave said:
To be powerless in a relationship is for me the best place to be. When I make myself vulnerable the truth and depth of the relationship is seen clearly, then I am secure if I want to be.
I hope that makes sense. It is what I got from your piece today, Sax.
September 10th, 2021 00:59
Doggerel Dave said:
To be powerless in a relationship is for me the best place to be. When I make myself vulnerable the truth and depth of the relationship is seen clearly, then I am secure if I want to be.
I hope that makes sense. It is what I got from your piece today, Sax.
September 10th, 2021 00:59
The Darkest Place
dusk arising said:
An honest friend is a sweet place to go.
September 10th, 2021 00:36
dusk arising said:
An honest friend is a sweet place to go.
September 10th, 2021 00:36
A pythonesque poem..... Well sort of.... Well I thought I\'d give it a go..... Shh!........ Sorry
Doggerel Dave said:
Garn - it\'s got Passion \'n Power \'n ...\'n... \'n ...\'n - yeh, all of that....
😊 😉 😊
September 9th, 2021 17:48
Doggerel Dave said:
Garn - it\'s got Passion \'n Power \'n ...\'n... \'n ...\'n - yeh, all of that....
😊 😉 😊
September 9th, 2021 17:48
A pythonesque poem..... Well sort of.... Well I thought I\'d give it a go..... Shh!........ Sorry
L. B. Mek said:
\'no dear poet, let your creativity roam free
like the custard, you forgot...\'
said Zeus, with a rumbling sky of thunderous delight
September 9th, 2021 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'no dear poet, let your creativity roam free
like the custard, you forgot...\'
said Zeus, with a rumbling sky of thunderous delight
September 9th, 2021 05:11
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