Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow
Yearning
Thekkinkkattil said:
It is always the her you seek but why the dilemma?
August 12th, 2021 07:32
Thekkinkkattil said:
It is always the her you seek but why the dilemma?
August 12th, 2021 07:32
Yearning
L. B. Mek said:
so true,
when we trip or buckle
we seldom have time
to look, at the root cause
of our demise
rather, we hurry to limit our fall
and rush to resume
our blind leap, to that same
aspirational trap
of belatedly realised, conformity...
an intriguing read
like the \'her\', adds a meaningful twist
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 12th, 2021 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
so true,
when we trip or buckle
we seldom have time
to look, at the root cause
of our demise
rather, we hurry to limit our fall
and rush to resume
our blind leap, to that same
aspirational trap
of belatedly realised, conformity...
an intriguing read
like the \'her\', adds a meaningful twist
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 12th, 2021 05:04
Yearning
Accidental Poet said:
Very thought provoking Sax. Straight to my favs. 👍
August 12th, 2021 05:03
Accidental Poet said:
Very thought provoking Sax. Straight to my favs. 👍
August 12th, 2021 05:03
Yearning
dusk arising said:
A dilemma indeed but I learned the hard way to just move on. The what if\'s were the things which didn\'t happen.
Great concise piece to wake up a contrary old beast like me.
August 12th, 2021 04:30
dusk arising said:
A dilemma indeed but I learned the hard way to just move on. The what if\'s were the things which didn\'t happen.
Great concise piece to wake up a contrary old beast like me.
August 12th, 2021 04:30
Yearning
Goldfinch60 said:
What if? the most difficult question in our lives SC.
Andy
August 12th, 2021 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
What if? the most difficult question in our lives SC.
Andy
August 12th, 2021 00:56
Words Left Unsaid
Goldfinch60 said:
May those words in your heart break free and show the love that you have for others.
Andy
August 12th, 2021 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
May those words in your heart break free and show the love that you have for others.
Andy
August 12th, 2021 00:26
Words Left Unsaid
Coyote said:
Loved this, particularly the final stanza. Excellent!
August 11th, 2021 15:42
Coyote said:
Loved this, particularly the final stanza. Excellent!
August 11th, 2021 15:42
Words Left Unsaid
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful piece of poetry, of love never spoken and the aftermath of that hollowness. Life\'s many forked pathways are strewn with the poorly selected and often neglected choices. Here you have shown that words \"unspoken\" can be as powerful as those we shout. The \"unsaid\" can scar as deeply as the freely spoken. We spend years wondering why and what if, and at some point we render a graceful and articulate poem. Well done. - Phil A.
August 11th, 2021 13:26
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful piece of poetry, of love never spoken and the aftermath of that hollowness. Life\'s many forked pathways are strewn with the poorly selected and often neglected choices. Here you have shown that words \"unspoken\" can be as powerful as those we shout. The \"unsaid\" can scar as deeply as the freely spoken. We spend years wondering why and what if, and at some point we render a graceful and articulate poem. Well done. - Phil A.
August 11th, 2021 13:26
Words Left Unsaid
dusk arising said:
A woeful tale of regret when ones head overruled ones heart.
August 11th, 2021 09:06
dusk arising said:
A woeful tale of regret when ones head overruled ones heart.
August 11th, 2021 09:06
Words Left Unsaid
rebmasters said:
Beautiful first stanza and bittersweet throughout ❤️
August 11th, 2021 03:22
rebmasters said:
Beautiful first stanza and bittersweet throughout ❤️
August 11th, 2021 03:22
For the love of clouds
Accidental Poet said:
What else can I say that hasn\'t already been said? Another masterpiece Sax. 👍
August 10th, 2021 18:36
Accidental Poet said:
What else can I say that hasn\'t already been said? Another masterpiece Sax. 👍
August 10th, 2021 18:36
To Begin Again
Coyote said:
Wow! This is profoundly flawless. Not just poetry but literature. Excellent, excellent write!
August 10th, 2021 10:45
Coyote said:
Wow! This is profoundly flawless. Not just poetry but literature. Excellent, excellent write!
August 10th, 2021 10:45
To Begin Again
orchidee said:
So you started again with another poem! Good write SC.
August 10th, 2021 01:42
orchidee said:
So you started again with another poem! Good write SC.
August 10th, 2021 01:42
To Begin Again
Goldfinch60 said:
May that new path lead you to the wonder of new life that is there before you SC.
Andy
August 10th, 2021 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
May that new path lead you to the wonder of new life that is there before you SC.
Andy
August 10th, 2021 00:57
For the love of clouds
Laura🌻 said:
Saxon,
A beautifully written poem expressing an everlasting bond/love between two people.
As you run free like the wind, your world is a heavenly place to
“dance on clouds”.
An enjoyable read…
indeed.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
August 9th, 2021 16:36
Laura🌻 said:
Saxon,
A beautifully written poem expressing an everlasting bond/love between two people.
As you run free like the wind, your world is a heavenly place to
“dance on clouds”.
An enjoyable read…
indeed.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
August 9th, 2021 16:36
For the love of clouds
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well said, S.C.
Beautiful poem, I may just print it and give it to Linda. You get the credit, my Saxon friend.
August 9th, 2021 15:59
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well said, S.C.
Beautiful poem, I may just print it and give it to Linda. You get the credit, my Saxon friend.
August 9th, 2021 15:59
For the love of clouds
dusk arising said:
May a cloudburst only bring you springtimes dance of growth and good fortune.
August 9th, 2021 06:20
dusk arising said:
May a cloudburst only bring you springtimes dance of growth and good fortune.
August 9th, 2021 06:20
For the love of clouds
L. B. Mek said:
\'its just me and you
and our lifelong romance
We are dancing on clouds
in perpetual harmony\'..
those hope\'s, we intrust to destiny
lightly
tend, to float-along merely and last
longer
than those wishes: we grasp far too, tight
or
at least, that\'s how it seems to me...
(a wonderful read
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
August 9th, 2021 05:39
L. B. Mek said:
\'its just me and you
and our lifelong romance
We are dancing on clouds
in perpetual harmony\'..
those hope\'s, we intrust to destiny
lightly
tend, to float-along merely and last
longer
than those wishes: we grasp far too, tight
or
at least, that\'s how it seems to me...
(a wonderful read
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
August 9th, 2021 05:39
For the love of clouds
orchidee said:
Good write SC. Keep on dancing! I will accompany you with singing if ya wish! Aww, no one wishes that. lol.
August 9th, 2021 01:38
orchidee said:
Good write SC. Keep on dancing! I will accompany you with singing if ya wish! Aww, no one wishes that. lol.
August 9th, 2021 01:38
Insanely mad
Accidental Poet said:
For some, a comfort zone they feel locked within. Great write Sax. ✔
August 7th, 2021 07:36
Accidental Poet said:
For some, a comfort zone they feel locked within. Great write Sax. ✔
August 7th, 2021 07:36
Insanely mad
Neville said:
makes perfect sense to me
and me
................................... and me too
:)
August 7th, 2021 02:20
Neville said:
makes perfect sense to me
and me
................................... and me too
:)
August 7th, 2021 02:20
Insanely mad
orchidee said:
Fill the well with water and drown that clown! Don\'t know how that all works out metaphorically. Long word there too. lol.
Demons and other nasties don\'t like water. They seek out dry places. Not that I\'m any expert on demonology.
August 7th, 2021 01:46
orchidee said:
Fill the well with water and drown that clown! Don\'t know how that all works out metaphorically. Long word there too. lol.
Demons and other nasties don\'t like water. They seek out dry places. Not that I\'m any expert on demonology.
August 7th, 2021 01:46
Insanely mad
Goldfinch60 said:
If you just look up from that \'deep dark well\' you will see the light and you just need to reach up for it and the light will show you the way to life\'s wonder.
Andy
August 7th, 2021 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
If you just look up from that \'deep dark well\' you will see the light and you just need to reach up for it and the light will show you the way to life\'s wonder.
Andy
August 7th, 2021 00:26
No Curtain Call
Trenz Pruca said:
A good one Sax. A play full on sound and fury...
August 6th, 2021 16:27
Trenz Pruca said:
A good one Sax. A play full on sound and fury...
August 6th, 2021 16:27
No Curtain Call
Fay Slimm. said:
A thrilling drama about life and its lessons being played out and need for learning where decisions quickly made could make all the difference to our role....... a compelling read Sax.
August 6th, 2021 15:38
Fay Slimm. said:
A thrilling drama about life and its lessons being played out and need for learning where decisions quickly made could make all the difference to our role....... a compelling read Sax.
August 6th, 2021 15:38
No Curtain Call
Poetic Dan said:
Omg this was absolutely incredible, I wrote one just like this once but no where near as magnificent you made this! My very life dancing in front of me, the opening line made me sit up and take note. As I followed to the end I was glad for each role that I took and will execute my final day\'s on my stage. ...100% my way!
Thanks for doing yours ;)
One of a kind!
August 6th, 2021 12:06
Poetic Dan said:
Omg this was absolutely incredible, I wrote one just like this once but no where near as magnificent you made this! My very life dancing in front of me, the opening line made me sit up and take note. As I followed to the end I was glad for each role that I took and will execute my final day\'s on my stage. ...100% my way!
Thanks for doing yours ;)
One of a kind!
August 6th, 2021 12:06
No Curtain Call
Accidental Poet said:
A play so many of us have starred in. Excellently penned Sax. 👍
August 6th, 2021 05:41
Accidental Poet said:
A play so many of us have starred in. Excellently penned Sax. 👍
August 6th, 2021 05:41
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