Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow
Endless
Universal_guarantee said:
I love how you tied it all together at the end, if that makes sense!
April 12th, 2022 04:33
Universal_guarantee said:
I love how you tied it all together at the end, if that makes sense!
April 12th, 2022 04:33
Endless
Fay Slimm. said:
Great read of inner-sight when holding a pebble - -- you have such a good grasp of real poetry Sax which comes from your talented mind.
April 12th, 2022 02:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Great read of inner-sight when holding a pebble - -- you have such a good grasp of real poetry Sax which comes from your talented mind.
April 12th, 2022 02:32
Endless
dusk arising said:
Lovely writing Saxon. I share your vision of a continuum since first glimpsing the amazing minds of science fiction writers and then to sit before the ocean beneath a blanket of stars and wonder.
Thank you for sharing and giving me these moments of reflection upon just how tiny we all are but how wonderful we each are.
So relateable to your dad\'s post of today too.
April 12th, 2022 01:56
dusk arising said:
Lovely writing Saxon. I share your vision of a continuum since first glimpsing the amazing minds of science fiction writers and then to sit before the ocean beneath a blanket of stars and wonder.
Thank you for sharing and giving me these moments of reflection upon just how tiny we all are but how wonderful we each are.
So relateable to your dad\'s post of today too.
April 12th, 2022 01:56
Layers
dusk arising said:
Astral meditation hmmm yes please. I only managed to really meditate once and went so deep that it has changed my life for the better.
Would I like to do it again, yes but i have no idea how to. Do i need to do it again, no.
Great poem for me Saxon as it reminded me of something important.
April 8th, 2022 11:20
dusk arising said:
Astral meditation hmmm yes please. I only managed to really meditate once and went so deep that it has changed my life for the better.
Would I like to do it again, yes but i have no idea how to. Do i need to do it again, no.
Great poem for me Saxon as it reminded me of something important.
April 8th, 2022 11:20
Layers
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful!
we all need, something
to grasp, when submerged
dogpaddling to survive
ill-fate\'s, waves..
thanks for sharing
April 8th, 2022 05:53
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful!
we all need, something
to grasp, when submerged
dogpaddling to survive
ill-fate\'s, waves..
thanks for sharing
April 8th, 2022 05:53
Being One
theneophiles_words said:
\'What am I?\' The most straightforward as well as elaborate query one encounters in life. Simplistic beauty!
April 8th, 2022 02:48
theneophiles_words said:
\'What am I?\' The most straightforward as well as elaborate query one encounters in life. Simplistic beauty!
April 8th, 2022 02:48
Layers
Caring dove said:
Great writing crow )especially like the lines ‘ around blue moons and rose pink suns ‘
Lovely words
April 8th, 2022 02:14
Caring dove said:
Great writing crow )especially like the lines ‘ around blue moons and rose pink suns ‘
Lovely words
April 8th, 2022 02:14
Systemic Living?
Goldfinch60 said:
Stepping outside the box and thinking of how we can help others without following the callous codes of the many is the way to try and deal with the situation. All we can try and do is be ourselves and go our own way.
Andy
April 8th, 2022 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Stepping outside the box and thinking of how we can help others without following the callous codes of the many is the way to try and deal with the situation. All we can try and do is be ourselves and go our own way.
Andy
April 8th, 2022 00:27
Systemic Living?
L. B. Mek said:
\'Despair, the food for the thoughts of the one
No relent in diet as one new fad upgrades from another
And yet there is a famine in the soul
And while those in shadow grow fat through fear
We, the masses are starved of an education of what it truly means to be human
The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the one?\'..
(forgive me, dear poet
your words inspired me, into
yet another lengthy, rant
\'have no idea how y\'all put up with me\'
thank you! loved
your humanist championing, message)
w. h. Auden\'s
\'age of anxiety\'
birthing, regressive ideologies
where our New
is what was once, considered: Knew..
capitalism\'s, individual accountability
is a great, theory
yet, when even Twins
aren\'t born, \'equal\' in capability
its, just as flawed
as communism\'s, \'the whole
being more important
than the individual, trickery...\'
\'Humility
and accepting
that absolutism doesn\'t, exist
at our current level of evolution
is how, we can free ourselves
of mind warping, ideologies..\'
(I think, much better
if we, maintain a healthy
and robust
saving\'s account, and still
make time
to enjoy, that simple
beauty
in watching a butterfly, grace
our scope of life
while freely empowering, our empathy
at every opportunity..)
April 7th, 2022 06:14
L. B. Mek said:
\'Despair, the food for the thoughts of the one
No relent in diet as one new fad upgrades from another
And yet there is a famine in the soul
And while those in shadow grow fat through fear
We, the masses are starved of an education of what it truly means to be human
The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the one?\'..
(forgive me, dear poet
your words inspired me, into
yet another lengthy, rant
\'have no idea how y\'all put up with me\'
thank you! loved
your humanist championing, message)
w. h. Auden\'s
\'age of anxiety\'
birthing, regressive ideologies
where our New
is what was once, considered: Knew..
capitalism\'s, individual accountability
is a great, theory
yet, when even Twins
aren\'t born, \'equal\' in capability
its, just as flawed
as communism\'s, \'the whole
being more important
than the individual, trickery...\'
\'Humility
and accepting
that absolutism doesn\'t, exist
at our current level of evolution
is how, we can free ourselves
of mind warping, ideologies..\'
(I think, much better
if we, maintain a healthy
and robust
saving\'s account, and still
make time
to enjoy, that simple
beauty
in watching a butterfly, grace
our scope of life
while freely empowering, our empathy
at every opportunity..)
April 7th, 2022 06:14
Being One
dusk arising said:
It\'s easy for each one of us to overcomplicate our existence in todays society as we bless ourselves with our self-importance. But at the ond of the day we are all just members of a colony.
April 6th, 2022 08:27
dusk arising said:
It\'s easy for each one of us to overcomplicate our existence in todays society as we bless ourselves with our self-importance. But at the ond of the day we are all just members of a colony.
April 6th, 2022 08:27
Being One
Caring dove said:
I really like this . A nice interesting writing , crow ) we all have different parts of ourself I guess ,
April 6th, 2022 01:51
Caring dove said:
I really like this . A nice interesting writing , crow ) we all have different parts of ourself I guess ,
April 6th, 2022 01:51
A Truth #1
Dahlia said:
you could not have said it any better
well done poet...enjoyed...Dahlia
April 5th, 2022 12:55
Dahlia said:
you could not have said it any better
well done poet...enjoyed...Dahlia
April 5th, 2022 12:55
A Truth #1
Rocky Lagou said:
Exactly. I feel ants are a perfect example of this, when they come together they can do anything. Well done! ✨
April 5th, 2022 12:24
Rocky Lagou said:
Exactly. I feel ants are a perfect example of this, when they come together they can do anything. Well done! ✨
April 5th, 2022 12:24
Hopeful Days Gone By
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words SC but we must always look to the future as all will be wonderful in lour lives.
Andy
February 1st, 2022 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words SC but we must always look to the future as all will be wonderful in lour lives.
Andy
February 1st, 2022 02:18
The Activist?
L. B. Mek said:
This, and similarly insightful texts
is what should be on school curriculums,
wording the hypocrisy of the world
in a relatable and accessible manner
so those young enough
to heed its meaning
and avoid previous generations
pitfalls
can benefit, the most!
rest of us, too old to do anything but just grunt
nod, our apathetical frustrations
and waste
your poetry\'s:
\'call to arms\', for change
change
change! starting from within..
(what this last few decades have done
to traumatise people, to the word
\'Activist\', is unforgivable
when you think ahead, and wonder
who now
would dare, frontline a revolution...?)
fck\'ng stopping traffic and preventing everyday, trodden-on
hard working people
from getting, to their lifeline jobs
and calling it \'activism\'
or that most
poisonously abject of terms: \'creating awareness\',
those self-indulgent morons!
January 14th, 2022 06:48
L. B. Mek said:
This, and similarly insightful texts
is what should be on school curriculums,
wording the hypocrisy of the world
in a relatable and accessible manner
so those young enough
to heed its meaning
and avoid previous generations
pitfalls
can benefit, the most!
rest of us, too old to do anything but just grunt
nod, our apathetical frustrations
and waste
your poetry\'s:
\'call to arms\', for change
change
change! starting from within..
(what this last few decades have done
to traumatise people, to the word
\'Activist\', is unforgivable
when you think ahead, and wonder
who now
would dare, frontline a revolution...?)
fck\'ng stopping traffic and preventing everyday, trodden-on
hard working people
from getting, to their lifeline jobs
and calling it \'activism\'
or that most
poisonously abject of terms: \'creating awareness\',
those self-indulgent morons!
January 14th, 2022 06:48
The Activist?
dusk arising said:
The cycle of politics, destined for failure and re-birth.
January 14th, 2022 05:19
dusk arising said:
The cycle of politics, destined for failure and re-birth.
January 14th, 2022 05:19
The Activist?
Goldfinch60 said:
If only that could happen and the world could be come the wonderful place it could be SC.
Andy
January 14th, 2022 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
If only that could happen and the world could be come the wonderful place it could be SC.
Andy
January 14th, 2022 02:24
Christmas Tree End
Rozina said:
Something to think about. Recycling the beautiful trees would be great. Thank you.
January 13th, 2022 08:49
Rozina said:
Something to think about. Recycling the beautiful trees would be great. Thank you.
January 13th, 2022 08:49
Christmas Tree End
L. B. Mek said:
yup, maybe
society shouldn\'t have merged
antiquity\'s
worshiping of the Sun, links
to modernity\'s
religious practises
lets just, all act \'Christian\'-like for once
and simply leave the trees, in peace
how\'s that for a \'giving\' mentality.. lol
(haven\'t allowed a real tree
in our house, for decades now
just fake one\'s, that match
those fictitious elements
of that
most festive of our public holidays)
a really strong write, dear poet
thanks for sharing
January 13th, 2022 06:40
L. B. Mek said:
yup, maybe
society shouldn\'t have merged
antiquity\'s
worshiping of the Sun, links
to modernity\'s
religious practises
lets just, all act \'Christian\'-like for once
and simply leave the trees, in peace
how\'s that for a \'giving\' mentality.. lol
(haven\'t allowed a real tree
in our house, for decades now
just fake one\'s, that match
those fictitious elements
of that
most festive of our public holidays)
a really strong write, dear poet
thanks for sharing
January 13th, 2022 06:40
Christmas Tree End
Paul Bell said:
Is anyone \'pining\' for their Christmas tree, I think not. Not when Easter eggs are in the stores, and you never put the Easter egg tree back in the attic, ever.
January 13th, 2022 05:22
Paul Bell said:
Is anyone \'pining\' for their Christmas tree, I think not. Not when Easter eggs are in the stores, and you never put the Easter egg tree back in the attic, ever.
January 13th, 2022 05:22
Christmas Tree End
Caring dove said:
Makes me feel sorry for the Christmas tree .
A good poem , crow )
January 13th, 2022 04:29
Caring dove said:
Makes me feel sorry for the Christmas tree .
A good poem , crow )
January 13th, 2022 04:29
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