Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek
Dawning of Open-Sourced Inevitabilities
NewWolf said:
You too my friend are not sleep at all.
\"They\'re going to make us beg them to do it\"
I agree . this whole poem/letter says, There are woke people out there to me and I gotta say be safe out there. They\'re putting the crazy in plain sight now.
February 16th, 2023 20:26
NewWolf said:
You too my friend are not sleep at all.
\"They\'re going to make us beg them to do it\"
I agree . this whole poem/letter says, There are woke people out there to me and I gotta say be safe out there. They\'re putting the crazy in plain sight now.
February 16th, 2023 20:26
Fresh
Bella Shepard said:
The imagery of eyelashes puts me in mind of buttefly kisses, so gentle upon the cheek. When love comes rushing from both sides, it collides and fuses, and the joy is overwhelming. This is romance at its best dear friend, each day should be Valentines Day.
February 16th, 2023 15:28
Bella Shepard said:
The imagery of eyelashes puts me in mind of buttefly kisses, so gentle upon the cheek. When love comes rushing from both sides, it collides and fuses, and the joy is overwhelming. This is romance at its best dear friend, each day should be Valentines Day.
February 16th, 2023 15:28
Fresh
MiddleMood said:
Apparently, Eye lashes .
Are now, something I notice .
What an apt description of love .
February 15th, 2023 12:48
MiddleMood said:
Apparently, Eye lashes .
Are now, something I notice .
What an apt description of love .
February 15th, 2023 12:48
Fresh
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely brilliant and yes it will always believe no matter what we do.....I was also told its a butterfly kiss to have those eyes flutter on us!
Great stuff as ever
February 14th, 2023 03:13
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely brilliant and yes it will always believe no matter what we do.....I was also told its a butterfly kiss to have those eyes flutter on us!
Great stuff as ever
February 14th, 2023 03:13
Fresh
Kinsley Lee said:
Hi! L.B. Thank you for your poem. I was impressed. Happy days!
February 13th, 2023 17:23
Kinsley Lee said:
Hi! L.B. Thank you for your poem. I was impressed. Happy days!
February 13th, 2023 17:23
Fresh
Fay Slimm. said:
A Valentine tale designed to take breath away and it certainly twined itself around my ever-romantic sense of the value its set-aside date places on that sudden feeling from just one kiss. A lovely read of love in the making.
February 13th, 2023 17:00
Fay Slimm. said:
A Valentine tale designed to take breath away and it certainly twined itself around my ever-romantic sense of the value its set-aside date places on that sudden feeling from just one kiss. A lovely read of love in the making.
February 13th, 2023 17:00
Instinctively
sorenbarrett said:
So many possibilities in these stanzas. How many times our innocence is followed with doubts and fears that seem to portend the unknown pending troubles of life. A deep thought that evokes even deeper feelings. Haunting
February 13th, 2023 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
So many possibilities in these stanzas. How many times our innocence is followed with doubts and fears that seem to portend the unknown pending troubles of life. A deep thought that evokes even deeper feelings. Haunting
February 13th, 2023 07:03
Fresh
sorenbarrett said:
An appropriate timing for the United States where it is to be Valentines day. Refreshing and lovely for the day.
February 13th, 2023 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
An appropriate timing for the United States where it is to be Valentines day. Refreshing and lovely for the day.
February 13th, 2023 06:50
Dawning of Open-Sourced Inevitabilities
2781 said:
He that sits in the heavens shall laugh.
February 13th, 2023 04:55
2781 said:
He that sits in the heavens shall laugh.
February 13th, 2023 04:55
Hour of your absent, weight
2781 said:
I think the others have said it all. My only contribution is that my true love has grown, and I could no longer take her weight. Really beautiful poem, thanks friend.
February 13th, 2023 02:08
2781 said:
I think the others have said it all. My only contribution is that my true love has grown, and I could no longer take her weight. Really beautiful poem, thanks friend.
February 13th, 2023 02:08
of Choice wording
Eugene S. said:
The subtlety is supreme. Beautiful sentiment!
February 12th, 2023 03:50
Eugene S. said:
The subtlety is supreme. Beautiful sentiment!
February 12th, 2023 03:50
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Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
lol Modern Love Is 4 Real. A Classic, L.B. Peace, Love, & Blessings, My Friend.
February 11th, 2023 00:33
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
lol Modern Love Is 4 Real. A Classic, L.B. Peace, Love, & Blessings, My Friend.
February 11th, 2023 00:33
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Fay Slimm. said:
A truly romantic way of describing a love that is still young after twenty years. A heart-tugging write.
February 10th, 2023 16:12
Fay Slimm. said:
A truly romantic way of describing a love that is still young after twenty years. A heart-tugging write.
February 10th, 2023 16:12
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Bella Shepard said:
The playful nature of this poem is so endearing. It\'s goes to show, that the little things we say often mean the most. I just loved this and it is a fav!
February 10th, 2023 16:06
Bella Shepard said:
The playful nature of this poem is so endearing. It\'s goes to show, that the little things we say often mean the most. I just loved this and it is a fav!
February 10th, 2023 16:06
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Bella Shepard said:
The playful nature of this poem is so endearing. It\'s goes to show, that the little things we say often mean the most. I just loved this and it is a fav!
February 10th, 2023 16:05
Bella Shepard said:
The playful nature of this poem is so endearing. It\'s goes to show, that the little things we say often mean the most. I just loved this and it is a fav!
February 10th, 2023 16:05
A lifetime’s vista
Parisab said:
Beautiful moment to capture, your words breathed a fresh breath to such lasting moments.
February 10th, 2023 10:46
Parisab said:
Beautiful moment to capture, your words breathed a fresh breath to such lasting moments.
February 10th, 2023 10:46
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crypticbard said:
This is so sweet and endearing without being mushy, good stuff here L.B.
February 10th, 2023 07:29
crypticbard said:
This is so sweet and endearing without being mushy, good stuff here L.B.
February 10th, 2023 07:29
of May-it-be maybes and Belatedness as curse
sorenbarrett said:
So many lines of great verse. This reaches to the innermost searching of the soul for answers as to our purpose and reflections upon how we measure up. Your almost mystical wording of time, how it passes, what it brings and what we have to show for it. This is far deeper than the surface and unearths archetypes evoking deep emotions. The last two lines \"Once a Time before Autumn\'s blight
Shadows trailed life\'s enamoring light\" were haunting. At my age I live in those shadows half of the time waiting for the sun to continue its journey but as it does the shadow grows longer. A masterful write.
February 10th, 2023 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
So many lines of great verse. This reaches to the innermost searching of the soul for answers as to our purpose and reflections upon how we measure up. Your almost mystical wording of time, how it passes, what it brings and what we have to show for it. This is far deeper than the surface and unearths archetypes evoking deep emotions. The last two lines \"Once a Time before Autumn\'s blight
Shadows trailed life\'s enamoring light\" were haunting. At my age I live in those shadows half of the time waiting for the sun to continue its journey but as it does the shadow grows longer. A masterful write.
February 10th, 2023 06:03
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sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful thought and thing to say. It reflects like the light of the stars the shining light of the energy behind it. Words of love.
February 10th, 2023 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful thought and thing to say. It reflects like the light of the stars the shining light of the energy behind it. Words of love.
February 10th, 2023 05:44
Hour of your absent, weight
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes- all of the above.
But stay - no response, svp..
February 10th, 2023 03:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes- all of the above.
But stay - no response, svp..
February 10th, 2023 03:38
Hour of your absent, weight
Bella Shepard said:
This poem has a beautiful afterglow of such sweet reminiscence that it leaves the reader basking in its warmth and tenderness. So lovingly written dear friend, so gratefully shared.
February 9th, 2023 15:26
Bella Shepard said:
This poem has a beautiful afterglow of such sweet reminiscence that it leaves the reader basking in its warmth and tenderness. So lovingly written dear friend, so gratefully shared.
February 9th, 2023 15:26
Hour of your absent, weight
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
The words flow so nicely .
A beautiful write Mek .. gentle sad yet beautiful love the mention of those birds ))
February 7th, 2023 15:47
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
The words flow so nicely .
A beautiful write Mek .. gentle sad yet beautiful love the mention of those birds ))
February 7th, 2023 15:47
Hour of your absent, weight
NewWolf said:
Your comment about my work blew me away, well, ive never shared my work, ,,,,Then I read your masterpiece and OMG!! It\'s an honor to have you read my work .
February 7th, 2023 10:13
NewWolf said:
Your comment about my work blew me away, well, ive never shared my work, ,,,,Then I read your masterpiece and OMG!! It\'s an honor to have you read my work .
February 7th, 2023 10:13
Hour of your absent, weight
Sakwa Franc said:
I knew it ... I just knew it such great work my brother from Africa
Good work
February 6th, 2023 05:42
Sakwa Franc said:
I knew it ... I just knew it such great work my brother from Africa
Good work
February 6th, 2023 05:42
Hour of your absent, weight
sorenbarrett said:
L.B. this one made me cry. I felt like I was reading my own story, my own emotions, my own thoughts, it was haunting. This is art, no more to be said.
February 6th, 2023 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
L.B. this one made me cry. I felt like I was reading my own story, my own emotions, my own thoughts, it was haunting. This is art, no more to be said.
February 6th, 2023 05:02
Hour of your absent, weight
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an attention grabber this piece of poetic mastery dear L.B. - the time of regret poised so clearly after so many years is so very relatable in this honest gem of a write - no doubt about it I must have Hour of Your Absent Weight in my list of favourites.
February 6th, 2023 04:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an attention grabber this piece of poetic mastery dear L.B. - the time of regret poised so clearly after so many years is so very relatable in this honest gem of a write - no doubt about it I must have Hour of Your Absent Weight in my list of favourites.
February 6th, 2023 04:44
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