Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek



Watermelons in Winter
A.D. Small said:

Watermelon does sound really amazing right now lol. I love the naturalness of this. Very well written. I really enjoy your work

January 10th, 2022 03:06

They label you: ‘Cold hearted’
katie the naughty poet said:

in my mind’s dimensioning corridors
a resoundingly stale coldness, awakens
voicing life’s, inescapable: bitter truth
it has to be me, to yield
love’s cancerous mirages, to survive.

Wow I love that. Really great share dear friend

January 9th, 2022 07:41

They label you: ‘Cold hearted’
Garth Rakumakoe said:

A hurricane of the sharpest darts of descript. I could aliken this to those commercial vessel fishing nets. You really hauled out the ocean my friend. Particularly I must point out, even your presentation stands out by virtue of artistic posture, i.e font, shape, spacing, punctuation. It presents you and your uniqueness with little care for being \"pretty\". As a writer, I identify with that. \"Stoppering\".... An excavation right there my friend. I could go on ... An authentic masterpiece L.B. - Hat off to you sir!🔥

January 8th, 2022 00:05

Meditation
mish kanafani said:

Indeed ..to listen to ourselves ...intently and thoroughly.. weighing up the pro\'s and cons...then inviting in the ideas of others...incorporation... development and expansion ...great recipe ..thanks LB ...💐

January 7th, 2022 21:09

They label you: ‘Cold hearted’
Michael Edwards said:

Great read - it flows - the mark of an accomplished write.

January 7th, 2022 14:44

They label you: ‘Cold hearted’
Neil Higgins said:

Late to the \"party\" as usual (busy day) but this is superb LB.A rip roaring journey through various incantations of thoughts and emotions.
Deserves to be read out on those \"tred boards\" LB.It really does.

January 7th, 2022 13:54

They label you: ‘Cold hearted’
Paul Bell said:

I will survive.
In reality, should really be the bywords to life.
Some will say you need to get knocked down to get up, and maybe they\'re right, still hurts mind you.

January 7th, 2022 12:50

They label you: ‘Cold hearted’
spilleronsheet said:

A fantastic imagery
Where every scene played
Played in front of my eyes
I could see the actor in play
Love struck and heartbroken
Clinging on tenterhooks to hold it or let go
The mobile’s dimlight and life holding as if the last line for the lovers to connect
Some connections hold on
Causing us in dilemma whether to continue or not
What if we never get the chance again
Every word conveyed the pain
Heart wrenching were the lines
The title spoke of a cold hearted
Why did it seem so overwhelming
The pledge of not being in same situation again
But alas the Cupid isn’t in our control
We could be only actors
Not the one writing the play afar

January 7th, 2022 12:03

They label you: ‘Cold hearted’
Poetic Dan said:

Holly **** what just happened, this was not expected but yet how could I not.

Such expressions of the soul

\"Not these morbid thoughts again\"

Hit me like an arrow at the end, holding on from the start as if there was something in your words I wanted so much but yet still can\'t let go!

I\'ll never know every step you have taken but to have a vibration like yours, must mean it\'s been no vacation.

Thank you for sharing my friend!

January 7th, 2022 11:49

They label you: ‘Cold hearted’
Saxon Crow said:

\'there won’t - ever

be another: again!\'

Right there says it all my friend.

Brilliant piece of poetry Mek. I was there with you all the way

January 7th, 2022 10:42

They label you: ‘Cold hearted’
Teddy.15 said:

LoL damn love dear Mek, one of my all time favourite dance and karaoke songs that I have sung many times with a passion. Beautifully executed a poem that tells not all is perfect but we will move along and maybe we will or won\'t find that one that could be perfect. Fab, although hoping it\'s just fiction. 💖

January 7th, 2022 07:05

They label you: ‘Cold hearted’
Robert Haigh said:

An impassioned, agonising poetic piece, Mek! The emotions are palpable! The imagery is very well-worked and fitting. A fine write, my friend!

January 7th, 2022 05:28

Windows, as mirrors
John Prophet said:

Dear poet you have a gift.
Wonderful write!

January 6th, 2022 19:30

We too, were Romeo’s - once
mish kanafani said:

Love this...the wonderful imagery of anticipation beneath the windowsill...the promise...the dreams...the want...that moment captured holds all the magic.

January 6th, 2022 09:08

Windows, as mirrors
melellendixon said:

Excellent as always.

January 6th, 2022 01:08

Windows, as mirrors
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good words Mek, may this year bring more wonder to your life.

Andy

January 5th, 2022 01:28

Watermelons in Winter
GardenDelights said:

Very enjoyable! You present much worth pondering here. You sculpt with ink in many highly descriptive phrases. Some of note for myself: \'There’s, not enough poetry in the world /and far too much of it, simultaneously\' \'creatures, who thrive best/ draped, in starlit blankets/
of kindness and love\' and your final verse.

January 5th, 2022 01:06

Windows, as mirrors
blue sparkle said:

Your poems evoke a kind of sad emptiness in me. They\'re so flowery and remind me of how I used to write poetry during some of my darkest times I try to eclipse when I was seventeen. They\'re darker poems than what I\'ve chosen to publish here. I grouped 40 together and named them Poems to Read Aloud When I\'m Gone. Life never gets any easier, but my style of writing has changed greatly into an almost lyrical direction, and when I\'m composing now I listen to my favourite music. Before I could only write in silence, and I\'d recite them. Great piece. I especially love: \"lava dedication
as eyes squirm\".

January 4th, 2022 20:19

Windows, as mirrors
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, L.B.
Happy New Year

January 4th, 2022 18:33

Windows, as mirrors
Neil Higgins said:

Superb LB.

January 4th, 2022 15:38

Windows, as mirrors
dusk arising said:

Like your moth my mind took flight across instinct and will. Whatever drives Mr Moth undermines his species survival, for one day, just as humanity cannot cease to be led into commercial, environment bending, self destruction, he too and his ilk will die away..... whilst other life forms casually take his place and reform our planet.

January 4th, 2022 14:58

Windows, as mirrors
spilleronsheet said:

The evolution of man was inscribed
I read the Darwin theory but slept halfway unkind
But alas i hit a jackpot reading such a beautiful evolution of a butterfly
Who summed up all emotions of mine
A vivid poetry
With such engaging imagery
Last year summed up in those lines
A very engaging and intriguing poetry
Hats off dear Mek

January 4th, 2022 13:18

Windows, as mirrors
Paul Bell said:

If only animals could speak, they might be asking themselves what the hell is going on with the humans.
I suppose we\'re all on a journey, and for some the journey will end prematurely. I suppose, like the animals, the obstacles are in front of us too, and maybe some nice soul might be at hand to help us out. You paint one magical poignant poem.

January 4th, 2022 12:12

Windows, as mirrors
Eugene S. said:

A protean use of language describing the spinning wheel of life we all so erratically stumble through. Really interesting read. I can say that I read through long poems way too quickly (always in a hurry...hey, I can relate to the tempo this poem sets). Favoriting for sure.

January 4th, 2022 12:06

Windows, as mirrors
Poetic Dan said:

Wow.... what a journey you just took me on... think I\'ll take a nap now lol

I wish! Again still trying to comprehend where i just went but thank you

January 4th, 2022 11:14

Windows, as mirrors
Teddy.15 said:

LOL I could see you for some reason 12 midnight opening the kitchen window and letting out the old letting in the new, karma can certainly come round any time to bite us on the bum. Mek.this is a masterpiece for sure. Bowing most in honour to your amazing talents, Kudos. 💖 Happy new year dear friend.

January 4th, 2022 08:38

Windows, as mirrors
Munro said:

Superb poetry L.B.

January 4th, 2022 08:36

Windows, as mirrors
Robert Haigh said:

A well-written and interesting piece, Mek. Happy New Year, my friend!

January 4th, 2022 08:35

Windows, as mirrors
Dove said:

Beauty is in the eye of the moth holder! Happy New Year Mek! Thanks for another view of The mirror

January 4th, 2022 07:08

Windows, as mirrors
Fay Slimm. said:

A virtual saga of deliciously fertile imagination taking shapes and phrasing in happenings that blend so well together - - a wonderful trip around your awakening to life and to butterfly death as like the rest of nature you watch struggles end in acceptance........ this is now in my list of reads-again L.B. and thanks for the effort I know it takes to escape when the Muse leads the way to expression with engaging words. First class writing my friend.

January 4th, 2022 07:05

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