Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek
Hour of your absent, weight
2781 said:
I think the others have said it all. My only contribution is that my true love has grown, and I could no longer take her weight. Really beautiful poem, thanks friend.
February 13th, 2023 02:08
2781 said:
I think the others have said it all. My only contribution is that my true love has grown, and I could no longer take her weight. Really beautiful poem, thanks friend.
February 13th, 2023 02:08
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Eugene S. said:
The subtlety is supreme. Beautiful sentiment!
February 12th, 2023 03:50
Eugene S. said:
The subtlety is supreme. Beautiful sentiment!
February 12th, 2023 03:50
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Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
lol Modern Love Is 4 Real. A Classic, L.B. Peace, Love, & Blessings, My Friend.
February 11th, 2023 00:33
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
lol Modern Love Is 4 Real. A Classic, L.B. Peace, Love, & Blessings, My Friend.
February 11th, 2023 00:33
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Fay Slimm. said:
A truly romantic way of describing a love that is still young after twenty years. A heart-tugging write.
February 10th, 2023 16:12
Fay Slimm. said:
A truly romantic way of describing a love that is still young after twenty years. A heart-tugging write.
February 10th, 2023 16:12
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Bella Shepard said:
The playful nature of this poem is so endearing. It\'s goes to show, that the little things we say often mean the most. I just loved this and it is a fav!
February 10th, 2023 16:06
Bella Shepard said:
The playful nature of this poem is so endearing. It\'s goes to show, that the little things we say often mean the most. I just loved this and it is a fav!
February 10th, 2023 16:06
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Bella Shepard said:
The playful nature of this poem is so endearing. It\'s goes to show, that the little things we say often mean the most. I just loved this and it is a fav!
February 10th, 2023 16:05
Bella Shepard said:
The playful nature of this poem is so endearing. It\'s goes to show, that the little things we say often mean the most. I just loved this and it is a fav!
February 10th, 2023 16:05
A lifetime’s vista
Parisab said:
Beautiful moment to capture, your words breathed a fresh breath to such lasting moments.
February 10th, 2023 10:46
Parisab said:
Beautiful moment to capture, your words breathed a fresh breath to such lasting moments.
February 10th, 2023 10:46
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crypticbard said:
This is so sweet and endearing without being mushy, good stuff here L.B.
February 10th, 2023 07:29
crypticbard said:
This is so sweet and endearing without being mushy, good stuff here L.B.
February 10th, 2023 07:29
of May-it-be maybes and Belatedness as curse
sorenbarrett said:
So many lines of great verse. This reaches to the innermost searching of the soul for answers as to our purpose and reflections upon how we measure up. Your almost mystical wording of time, how it passes, what it brings and what we have to show for it. This is far deeper than the surface and unearths archetypes evoking deep emotions. The last two lines \"Once a Time before Autumn\'s blight
Shadows trailed life\'s enamoring light\" were haunting. At my age I live in those shadows half of the time waiting for the sun to continue its journey but as it does the shadow grows longer. A masterful write.
February 10th, 2023 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
So many lines of great verse. This reaches to the innermost searching of the soul for answers as to our purpose and reflections upon how we measure up. Your almost mystical wording of time, how it passes, what it brings and what we have to show for it. This is far deeper than the surface and unearths archetypes evoking deep emotions. The last two lines \"Once a Time before Autumn\'s blight
Shadows trailed life\'s enamoring light\" were haunting. At my age I live in those shadows half of the time waiting for the sun to continue its journey but as it does the shadow grows longer. A masterful write.
February 10th, 2023 06:03
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sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful thought and thing to say. It reflects like the light of the stars the shining light of the energy behind it. Words of love.
February 10th, 2023 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful thought and thing to say. It reflects like the light of the stars the shining light of the energy behind it. Words of love.
February 10th, 2023 05:44
Hour of your absent, weight
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes- all of the above.
But stay - no response, svp..
February 10th, 2023 03:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes- all of the above.
But stay - no response, svp..
February 10th, 2023 03:38
Hour of your absent, weight
Bella Shepard said:
This poem has a beautiful afterglow of such sweet reminiscence that it leaves the reader basking in its warmth and tenderness. So lovingly written dear friend, so gratefully shared.
February 9th, 2023 15:26
Bella Shepard said:
This poem has a beautiful afterglow of such sweet reminiscence that it leaves the reader basking in its warmth and tenderness. So lovingly written dear friend, so gratefully shared.
February 9th, 2023 15:26
Hour of your absent, weight
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
The words flow so nicely .
A beautiful write Mek .. gentle sad yet beautiful love the mention of those birds ))
February 7th, 2023 15:47
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
The words flow so nicely .
A beautiful write Mek .. gentle sad yet beautiful love the mention of those birds ))
February 7th, 2023 15:47
Hour of your absent, weight
NewWolf said:
Your comment about my work blew me away, well, ive never shared my work, ,,,,Then I read your masterpiece and OMG!! It\'s an honor to have you read my work .
February 7th, 2023 10:13
NewWolf said:
Your comment about my work blew me away, well, ive never shared my work, ,,,,Then I read your masterpiece and OMG!! It\'s an honor to have you read my work .
February 7th, 2023 10:13
Hour of your absent, weight
Sakwa Franc said:
I knew it ... I just knew it such great work my brother from Africa
Good work
February 6th, 2023 05:42
Sakwa Franc said:
I knew it ... I just knew it such great work my brother from Africa
Good work
February 6th, 2023 05:42
Hour of your absent, weight
sorenbarrett said:
L.B. this one made me cry. I felt like I was reading my own story, my own emotions, my own thoughts, it was haunting. This is art, no more to be said.
February 6th, 2023 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
L.B. this one made me cry. I felt like I was reading my own story, my own emotions, my own thoughts, it was haunting. This is art, no more to be said.
February 6th, 2023 05:02
Hour of your absent, weight
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an attention grabber this piece of poetic mastery dear L.B. - the time of regret poised so clearly after so many years is so very relatable in this honest gem of a write - no doubt about it I must have Hour of Your Absent Weight in my list of favourites.
February 6th, 2023 04:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an attention grabber this piece of poetic mastery dear L.B. - the time of regret poised so clearly after so many years is so very relatable in this honest gem of a write - no doubt about it I must have Hour of Your Absent Weight in my list of favourites.
February 6th, 2023 04:44
Hour of your absent, weight
Neville said:
I am so glad I got up early this mane and reached this page before anyone else .. I could not have bared it had anyone got here before me .. this is a masterpiece brother Mek and no kidding .. see I even added the g at the end of kiddin as a mark of my absolute respect ... any poet regardless of who they might be or think they might be would be proud to have \'Hour of your absent, weight\' in their portfolio .. Neville
February 6th, 2023 04:05
Neville said:
I am so glad I got up early this mane and reached this page before anyone else .. I could not have bared it had anyone got here before me .. this is a masterpiece brother Mek and no kidding .. see I even added the g at the end of kiddin as a mark of my absolute respect ... any poet regardless of who they might be or think they might be would be proud to have \'Hour of your absent, weight\' in their portfolio .. Neville
February 6th, 2023 04:05
Musicality to cherish And ‘Joshiryoku’ purposed to Empower
Joan Peters said:
The incredible talent of women.
February 3rd, 2023 09:41
Joan Peters said:
The incredible talent of women.
February 3rd, 2023 09:41
Musicality to cherish And ‘Joshiryoku’ purposed to Empower
Neville said:
girl power eh\' quite simply amazing sir
February 3rd, 2023 08:51
Neville said:
girl power eh\' quite simply amazing sir
February 3rd, 2023 08:51
of Geometrical Substance or Mode
sorenbarrett said:
Wise words L.B. wisdom poors from your mouth like it did from his but so few that are willing to take the time and perservere to the end of what is needed to understand. It is your method that I have used over the years to pass exams, learn music, appreciate books and live life. You\'r last stanza rings with poetic words of truth. This one struck a chord in me that is still reverberating.
February 3rd, 2023 05:48
sorenbarrett said:
Wise words L.B. wisdom poors from your mouth like it did from his but so few that are willing to take the time and perservere to the end of what is needed to understand. It is your method that I have used over the years to pass exams, learn music, appreciate books and live life. You\'r last stanza rings with poetic words of truth. This one struck a chord in me that is still reverberating.
February 3rd, 2023 05:48
Musicality to cherish And ‘Joshiryoku’ purposed to Empower
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you L.B. for introducing me to this group. I love music as much as poetry and am always looking for out of the mainstream talent. I was taken by a group homogenized in their age, gender, I expect race, and degree of musical talent across a variety of instruments in a genre that requires so much improvixation. Joshiryoku, certainly empowerment for the women of this group much more than just what is expected. Thanks again for the introduction.
February 3rd, 2023 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you L.B. for introducing me to this group. I love music as much as poetry and am always looking for out of the mainstream talent. I was taken by a group homogenized in their age, gender, I expect race, and degree of musical talent across a variety of instruments in a genre that requires so much improvixation. Joshiryoku, certainly empowerment for the women of this group much more than just what is expected. Thanks again for the introduction.
February 3rd, 2023 05:38
Dawning of Open-Sourced Inevitabilities
Doggerel Dave said:
No wish to engage here Mek, but just to add that I\'ve read it, appreciated it and taken it seriously.
January 30th, 2023 21:53
Doggerel Dave said:
No wish to engage here Mek, but just to add that I\'ve read it, appreciated it and taken it seriously.
January 30th, 2023 21:53
Dawning of Open-Sourced Inevitabilities
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause LB. for this well researched and powerful outcry for more awareness of society\'s free-falling into a bleak future. Without even knowing it too if chips in minds reaches reality. That kind of dictatorship is beyond appalling so before it is too late everyone seeing it needs to stand up and be counted. Thanks dear poet friend for spelling it out so clearly.
January 30th, 2023 13:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause LB. for this well researched and powerful outcry for more awareness of society\'s free-falling into a bleak future. Without even knowing it too if chips in minds reaches reality. That kind of dictatorship is beyond appalling so before it is too late everyone seeing it needs to stand up and be counted. Thanks dear poet friend for spelling it out so clearly.
January 30th, 2023 13:44
So far, removed
amepiesces said:
automated greetings... on apps screen .so well written ..that line in the start....and it took its legacy to the end... great read
January 30th, 2023 05:59
amepiesces said:
automated greetings... on apps screen .so well written ..that line in the start....and it took its legacy to the end... great read
January 30th, 2023 05:59
of Saturday’s
sorenbarrett said:
From beginning to end memories, most all fond and desirable. Heart warming, wistful, at most a bit melancholic. Thanks for the memories L.B.
January 30th, 2023 05:46
sorenbarrett said:
From beginning to end memories, most all fond and desirable. Heart warming, wistful, at most a bit melancholic. Thanks for the memories L.B.
January 30th, 2023 05:46
Dawning of Open-Sourced Inevitabilities
Neville said:
I often wonder where we would all be today if Nostradamus & Mother Shipton each sat down together with their lap tops open .. nice one Mek
January 30th, 2023 05:17
Neville said:
I often wonder where we would all be today if Nostradamus & Mother Shipton each sat down together with their lap tops open .. nice one Mek
January 30th, 2023 05:17
Dawning of Open-Sourced Inevitabilities
crypticbard said:
What a deadly cocktail: herding of humans, abuse and recycled patterns. Something dark and fearful looming before us.
January 30th, 2023 05:08
crypticbard said:
What a deadly cocktail: herding of humans, abuse and recycled patterns. Something dark and fearful looming before us.
January 30th, 2023 05:08
Dawning of Open-Sourced Inevitabilities
sorenbarrett said:
L.B. or should I now call you Isaiah? Yes I have seen it too Ted Kaczynski was much more right than society wanted to believe. Much of modern technolgy has come from Sci-fi all the way back to Jules Vern. Are we becoming a part of the Matrix. It would appear so. Great write L.B.
January 30th, 2023 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
L.B. or should I now call you Isaiah? Yes I have seen it too Ted Kaczynski was much more right than society wanted to believe. Much of modern technolgy has come from Sci-fi all the way back to Jules Vern. Are we becoming a part of the Matrix. It would appear so. Great write L.B.
January 30th, 2023 04:42
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