Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave
Not Here – better elsewhere.
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Dave this rhyme is CLEVER - - - four lines of warning and so very telling.
May 10th, 2021 11:11
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Dave this rhyme is CLEVER - - - four lines of warning and so very telling.
May 10th, 2021 11:11
Not Here – better elsewhere.
AuburnScribbler said:
A superb stanza here Doggerel Dave, and I totally agree with your sentiment.
Bravo, and I hope all is well.
May 10th, 2021 10:09
AuburnScribbler said:
A superb stanza here Doggerel Dave, and I totally agree with your sentiment.
Bravo, and I hope all is well.
May 10th, 2021 10:09
A Relationship
Neville said:
that\'s cats for ya innit ... and just a few of the many reasons I\'m gonna stick with dogs sir thank you very much................ Neville
May 7th, 2021 08:25
Neville said:
that\'s cats for ya innit ... and just a few of the many reasons I\'m gonna stick with dogs sir thank you very much................ Neville
May 7th, 2021 08:25
The Joys of Apartment Living.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah oh my, door banging and any neighbour noises can get on my hibby\'s nerves so i understand your lamenting super fantastic rhyming poem wow! Towards the end she learnt her lesson, how crafty a way to teach her. Kudos!!
May 6th, 2021 14:35
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah oh my, door banging and any neighbour noises can get on my hibby\'s nerves so i understand your lamenting super fantastic rhyming poem wow! Towards the end she learnt her lesson, how crafty a way to teach her. Kudos!!
May 6th, 2021 14:35
Great Expectations
Andy Hunter said:
Kept me on the edge of my seat. Great rhyme, really enjoyed it.
May 6th, 2021 14:26
Andy Hunter said:
Kept me on the edge of my seat. Great rhyme, really enjoyed it.
May 6th, 2021 14:26
The Joys of Apartment Living.
Fay Slimm. said:
Good to hear the prob. with door-slams is being sorted Dave - - - - your telling title got me ready for reading more on apartment living and will send you a medal for your patient solution - - extra thanks too
for the story of how to handle close neighbours who can tend to be thoughtless .Hope that bit of late night action will do the trick - -
\"There\'s nowt so thick as folk\" as they say around here.
May 5th, 2021 16:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Good to hear the prob. with door-slams is being sorted Dave - - - - your telling title got me ready for reading more on apartment living and will send you a medal for your patient solution - - extra thanks too
for the story of how to handle close neighbours who can tend to be thoughtless .Hope that bit of late night action will do the trick - -
\"There\'s nowt so thick as folk\" as they say around here.
May 5th, 2021 16:42
Time Just Disappears When Having Fun
Neville said:
The marriage between prose & poem work extremely well here .. no illusion .. just a matter of fact and my own perception .......................... Neville
May 5th, 2021 15:03
Neville said:
The marriage between prose & poem work extremely well here .. no illusion .. just a matter of fact and my own perception .......................... Neville
May 5th, 2021 15:03
The Joys of Apartment Living.
Neville said:
I had no neighbours for eight years .. having just moved, I now have two sets of them .. both pairs are quite lovely ........ I enjoyed todays offering Dave .. .. very muchly
.. Neville
May 4th, 2021 01:48
Neville said:
I had no neighbours for eight years .. having just moved, I now have two sets of them .. both pairs are quite lovely ........ I enjoyed todays offering Dave .. .. very muchly
.. Neville
May 4th, 2021 01:48
The Joys of Apartment Living.
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometime neighbours can be so annoying, in my time I have come across them but the ones I have at present are wonderful.
Andy
May 3rd, 2021 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometime neighbours can be so annoying, in my time I have come across them but the ones I have at present are wonderful.
Andy
May 3rd, 2021 00:08
The Dog Next Door (plus bonus)
Neville said:
I kinda liked these DD .. well slightly .. but very much enjoyed ...........
Neville
May 2nd, 2021 02:10
Neville said:
I kinda liked these DD .. well slightly .. but very much enjoyed ...........
Neville
May 2nd, 2021 02:10
The Afterlife – A Case Study
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Great write Doggerel. Light enough to remind me of the great, all time classic “The Great Divorce” by C.S. Lewis. A brilliant, contemporary American author to read regarding what heaven may be like (where faith and hope inform) is Dr. Peter Kreeft. Finally, and your wonderful write spurred this flow, I like American Bishop Robert Barron’s reply to Canadian Dr. Jordan Peterson that, according to the monotheist traditions of one God - the flames in Hell itself are part of His creation as He has created it All (Hell being freely chosen by its inhabitants and merely a privation of the Ultimate Good - eternity with One God).
April 29th, 2021 19:58
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Great write Doggerel. Light enough to remind me of the great, all time classic “The Great Divorce” by C.S. Lewis. A brilliant, contemporary American author to read regarding what heaven may be like (where faith and hope inform) is Dr. Peter Kreeft. Finally, and your wonderful write spurred this flow, I like American Bishop Robert Barron’s reply to Canadian Dr. Jordan Peterson that, according to the monotheist traditions of one God - the flames in Hell itself are part of His creation as He has created it All (Hell being freely chosen by its inhabitants and merely a privation of the Ultimate Good - eternity with One God).
April 29th, 2021 19:58
The Night Male
Neville said:
a little bird told me that he has neva yet failed to find a solution, all be it too late to do any good ....................
I\'m glad Neville was a lion and not a centipede or sumfink :)
April 27th, 2021 01:55
Neville said:
a little bird told me that he has neva yet failed to find a solution, all be it too late to do any good ....................
I\'m glad Neville was a lion and not a centipede or sumfink :)
April 27th, 2021 01:55
The Afterlife – A Case Study
Neville said:
its true innit .. you\'ve been there ...
never heard this one before DD or even any variant thereof .. however, I do know that what you\'ve just writ is a bloomin fact ...
April 25th, 2021 02:53
Neville said:
its true innit .. you\'ve been there ...
never heard this one before DD or even any variant thereof .. however, I do know that what you\'ve just writ is a bloomin fact ...
April 25th, 2021 02:53
Finale
Gary Edward Geraci said:
In addition to the Catholic intelectual tradition among Catholic Christians worldwide, I love the great traditions of the Sacraments and Holy Mass. Granted, I was away from the Church for nearly 30 years and reluctant to engage with anyone that proclaimed to be religious and so I feel like I know where you’re coming from. This is a superb write with a fantastic cadence to it ... my favorite type of poem to read as well ... one that explores the deepest questions concerning our very meaning or in the case of nihilism - no meaning what-so-ever. When you ask this question, even to an atheist, nearly all will respond in the affirmative: wouldn’t you want there to be an afterlife so that you could meet your loved ones again after your departure from this life?
April 24th, 2021 19:02
Gary Edward Geraci said:
In addition to the Catholic intelectual tradition among Catholic Christians worldwide, I love the great traditions of the Sacraments and Holy Mass. Granted, I was away from the Church for nearly 30 years and reluctant to engage with anyone that proclaimed to be religious and so I feel like I know where you’re coming from. This is a superb write with a fantastic cadence to it ... my favorite type of poem to read as well ... one that explores the deepest questions concerning our very meaning or in the case of nihilism - no meaning what-so-ever. When you ask this question, even to an atheist, nearly all will respond in the affirmative: wouldn’t you want there to be an afterlife so that you could meet your loved ones again after your departure from this life?
April 24th, 2021 19:02
The Afterlife – A Case Study
Doggerel Dave said:
You have done me the world of good, Andy; the Flying Pickets and Dave Allen - nostalgically two of my favourite entertainers today...my cup runneth....
Many thanks.
April 24th, 2021 02:14
Doggerel Dave said:
You have done me the world of good, Andy; the Flying Pickets and Dave Allen - nostalgically two of my favourite entertainers today...my cup runneth....
Many thanks.
April 24th, 2021 02:14
The Afterlife – A Case Study
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Dave.
https://youtu.be/Ku8yw57ZZFI
Andy
April 24th, 2021 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Dave.
https://youtu.be/Ku8yw57ZZFI
Andy
April 24th, 2021 01:44
MIDNIGHT TRILOGY (3) About Midnight.
Neville said:
Say it like it is or woz why dont\'cha
This is brill Dave & I aint talkin fish ...
Neville
April 23rd, 2021 11:53
Neville said:
Say it like it is or woz why dont\'cha
This is brill Dave & I aint talkin fish ...
Neville
April 23rd, 2021 11:53
The Toilet Seat
Neville said:
A household necessity, but one that is responsible for many domestic disagreements and indeed injuries ...
April 22nd, 2021 08:50
Neville said:
A household necessity, but one that is responsible for many domestic disagreements and indeed injuries ...
April 22nd, 2021 08:50
The Hopeville Hilton Hospital - ity
Neville said:
Your poem accurately reflects the oft but almost always negatively tainted and heavily weighted prejudiced and ill informed assumptions made about people displaying signs of severe mental illness .. In reality, your authors note is spot on .. particularly the last sentence ..
I used to travel up and down the UK facilitating workshops that were specifically designed with the intention of trying to address this imbalance ..
Bravo DD
Neville
April 21st, 2021 02:40
Neville said:
Your poem accurately reflects the oft but almost always negatively tainted and heavily weighted prejudiced and ill informed assumptions made about people displaying signs of severe mental illness .. In reality, your authors note is spot on .. particularly the last sentence ..
I used to travel up and down the UK facilitating workshops that were specifically designed with the intention of trying to address this imbalance ..
Bravo DD
Neville
April 21st, 2021 02:40
The Hopeville Hilton Hospital - ity
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Andy - that\'s a relief, and I\'m very grateful...
Can be a controversial subject.
April 17th, 2021 04:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Andy - that\'s a relief, and I\'m very grateful...
Can be a controversial subject.
April 17th, 2021 04:34
The Hopeville Hilton Hospital - ity
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful write Dave.
The problem with the news is that we always here the 1% bad side of events not the 99% good side - the good does not make the news.
Andy
April 17th, 2021 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful write Dave.
The problem with the news is that we always here the 1% bad side of events not the 99% good side - the good does not make the news.
Andy
April 17th, 2021 02:17
The Toilet Seat
Accidental Poet said:
On the insistence by the ladies that we men always put the lid back down after use, and that not all men raise the lid to pee to begin with (disgusting), I thought maybe the ladies should be happy to see that the lid was raised. Never the less, ALWAYS wipe the seat.
April 13th, 2021 06:55
Accidental Poet said:
On the insistence by the ladies that we men always put the lid back down after use, and that not all men raise the lid to pee to begin with (disgusting), I thought maybe the ladies should be happy to see that the lid was raised. Never the less, ALWAYS wipe the seat.
April 13th, 2021 06:55
The Toilet Seat
Classicmister said:
I once went to a party where this sign was place in the toilet
\"We aim to please - will you aim too please!\"
Presumably aimed at gentlemen only!
April 13th, 2021 03:02
Classicmister said:
I once went to a party where this sign was place in the toilet
\"We aim to please - will you aim too please!\"
Presumably aimed at gentlemen only!
April 13th, 2021 03:02
The Toilet Seat
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Dave, with ladies in the house the seat must always been put down otherwise severe discourse may be coming your way.
Andy
April 13th, 2021 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Dave, with ladies in the house the seat must always been put down otherwise severe discourse may be coming your way.
Andy
April 13th, 2021 00:31
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