Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave
Confession.
Neville said:
aint they just made to be broken, bent twisted and bruised .. or summat :)
April 15th, 2024 02:48
Neville said:
aint they just made to be broken, bent twisted and bruised .. or summat :)
April 15th, 2024 02:48
A BAWDY Foggy Foggy Purple Parody
Neville said:
You wove it well Dave ..
Very well indeed .. and so very, very true ..
April 15th, 2024 02:44
Neville said:
You wove it well Dave ..
Very well indeed .. and so very, very true ..
April 15th, 2024 02:44
A BAWDY Foggy Foggy Purple Parody
sorenbarrett said:
I guess I need to get out some of my old poems and rework them. A merry story set in the style of old. Liked this one Dave.
April 14th, 2024 02:21
sorenbarrett said:
I guess I need to get out some of my old poems and rework them. A merry story set in the style of old. Liked this one Dave.
April 14th, 2024 02:21
A Happy Birthday party, you MIGHT say…..
Goldfinch60 said:
You could always send nine ten year old birthday cards.
Andy
April 3rd, 2024 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
You could always send nine ten year old birthday cards.
Andy
April 3rd, 2024 01:04
A Happy Birthday party, you MIGHT say…..
sorenbarrett said:
A great message. When one reaches a certain age years and count are no longer important, or maybe they are as a tribute to how old the person is, Loved the humor in this write but more than this I love the humor in me living as long as I have, it seems a cosmic joke.
April 2nd, 2024 18:44
sorenbarrett said:
A great message. When one reaches a certain age years and count are no longer important, or maybe they are as a tribute to how old the person is, Loved the humor in this write but more than this I love the humor in me living as long as I have, it seems a cosmic joke.
April 2nd, 2024 18:44
A Happy Birthday party, you MIGHT say…..
Teddy.15 said:
Don\'t worry about the card just plant the kisses on her dear forehead for each year she has celebrated her birthdays 🌹 so very humbling. ❤️
April 2nd, 2024 09:16
Teddy.15 said:
Don\'t worry about the card just plant the kisses on her dear forehead for each year she has celebrated her birthdays 🌹 so very humbling. ❤️
April 2nd, 2024 09:16
A Happy Birthday party, you MIGHT say…..
orchidee said:
Will you send Goldfinch and I a 10 millionth birthday card? - our ages! lol.
April 2nd, 2024 01:52
orchidee said:
Will you send Goldfinch and I a 10 millionth birthday card? - our ages! lol.
April 2nd, 2024 01:52
Confession.
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Dave, a dot means a lot when poised in the right hand and you sir, well let\'s just say that the hand that writes delights...........!
March 31st, 2024 12:22
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Dave, a dot means a lot when poised in the right hand and you sir, well let\'s just say that the hand that writes delights...........!
March 31st, 2024 12:22
Full Employment.
Bella Shepard said:
You get across a very important point, with wonderful rhyme & reason. I couldn\'t agree more. Such a good write!
March 28th, 2024 08:43
Bella Shepard said:
You get across a very important point, with wonderful rhyme & reason. I couldn\'t agree more. Such a good write!
March 28th, 2024 08:43
A BAWDY Foggy Foggy Purple Parody
Bella Shepard said:
Well my friend, inspiration was upon you. I just had to YouTube Foggy, Foggy Dew which I had never heard before. Your purple parody (love the alliteration) is superb. Naughty, but oh so nice. I can almost see the wry smile on your face as you wrote it, I know I was smiling as I read it. Kudos, great work!
March 28th, 2024 08:40
Bella Shepard said:
Well my friend, inspiration was upon you. I just had to YouTube Foggy, Foggy Dew which I had never heard before. Your purple parody (love the alliteration) is superb. Naughty, but oh so nice. I can almost see the wry smile on your face as you wrote it, I know I was smiling as I read it. Kudos, great work!
March 28th, 2024 08:40
A BAWDY Foggy Foggy Purple Parody
orchidee said:
I say \'I\'ve not got the foggiest idea\' - geddit?! lol.
March 27th, 2024 10:58
orchidee said:
I say \'I\'ve not got the foggiest idea\' - geddit?! lol.
March 27th, 2024 10:58
A BAWDY Foggy Foggy Purple Parody
Goldfinch60 said:
Good interpretation Dave.
Andy
https://youtu.be/aEQXOYrukVI?si=cFOw9rm94sRbQ9xC
March 27th, 2024 02:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Good interpretation Dave.
Andy
https://youtu.be/aEQXOYrukVI?si=cFOw9rm94sRbQ9xC
March 27th, 2024 02:56
Full Employment.
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Dave, being retired has its thankfulness.
Andy
March 23rd, 2024 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Dave, being retired has its thankfulness.
Andy
March 23rd, 2024 02:21
Full Employment.
2781 said:
It\'s in a slide. Community replaced by government, government replaced by corporations. I wonder what comes next?
March 22nd, 2024 22:59
2781 said:
It\'s in a slide. Community replaced by government, government replaced by corporations. I wonder what comes next?
March 22nd, 2024 22:59
Confession.
Teddy.15 said:
Dot away my friend, creative idea\'s are fun maybe you could make a poem using only dots I\'ve seen it done but I wouldn\'t have the patience myself. 🌹
March 22nd, 2024 02:07
Teddy.15 said:
Dot away my friend, creative idea\'s are fun maybe you could make a poem using only dots I\'ve seen it done but I wouldn\'t have the patience myself. 🌹
March 22nd, 2024 02:07
Vuitton Clerihew
sorenbarrett said:
It was my oldest daughter that was fixed on name brands. Great write.
March 18th, 2024 16:29
sorenbarrett said:
It was my oldest daughter that was fixed on name brands. Great write.
March 18th, 2024 16:29
Confession.
sorenbarrett said:
Whether music or grammar breaking rules is a method of individual expression. Well said Dave
March 12th, 2024 07:53
sorenbarrett said:
Whether music or grammar breaking rules is a method of individual expression. Well said Dave
March 12th, 2024 07:53
Confession.
Saxon Crow said:
Must not break the rules! Conform! Conform to meter and rhythm man! Ha. Great point Dave. Poetry should be Avant Garde or not. It\'s just poetry.
March 12th, 2024 05:25
Saxon Crow said:
Must not break the rules! Conform! Conform to meter and rhythm man! Ha. Great point Dave. Poetry should be Avant Garde or not. It\'s just poetry.
March 12th, 2024 05:25
Confession.
Tom Dylan said:
Fantastic, Dave. Glad I\'m not the only one. When I send emails, they usually have a fair few dots... Good on ya. :-)
Cheers.. Tom..
March 12th, 2024 03:54
Tom Dylan said:
Fantastic, Dave. Glad I\'m not the only one. When I send emails, they usually have a fair few dots... Good on ya. :-)
Cheers.. Tom..
March 12th, 2024 03:54
Confession.
orchidee said:
Some people only use two dots for an ellipsis. Can\'t have that - it\'s a matter of major importance that it must be three dots!
Well, using two dots saves half a gallon of ink, I suppose, if used for a third dot.
March 12th, 2024 03:01
orchidee said:
Some people only use two dots for an ellipsis. Can\'t have that - it\'s a matter of major importance that it must be three dots!
Well, using two dots saves half a gallon of ink, I suppose, if used for a third dot.
March 12th, 2024 03:01
Confession.
Goldfinch60 said:
We can always break the rule Dave as long as it does not hurt anyone.
Andy
March 12th, 2024 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
We can always break the rule Dave as long as it does not hurt anyone.
Andy
March 12th, 2024 02:49
Confession.
Cassie58 said:
There’s alot of dots at the end of this write Dave :) I break rules too. Well let me clarify. I do when it comes to poetry:)
March 11th, 2024 23:36
Cassie58 said:
There’s alot of dots at the end of this write Dave :) I break rules too. Well let me clarify. I do when it comes to poetry:)
March 11th, 2024 23:36
Vuitton Clerihew
MendedFences27 said:
Staying within my criminal bent, I have to say that the sellers of brand-named goods are criminal also. I once bought a shirt priced at $150. Went back 3 months later and got it for $30. I venture to say it could have sold for $5 and they still would have made a profit. Clothing is the biggest rip off business there is. Enjoyed your Vuitton Clerihew.
March 7th, 2024 16:34
MendedFences27 said:
Staying within my criminal bent, I have to say that the sellers of brand-named goods are criminal also. I once bought a shirt priced at $150. Went back 3 months later and got it for $30. I venture to say it could have sold for $5 and they still would have made a profit. Clothing is the biggest rip off business there is. Enjoyed your Vuitton Clerihew.
March 7th, 2024 16:34
Vuitton Clerihew
Cassie58 said:
So much money being lost to those who make fakes of expensive labelled goods. Never been one to go for labels. I just can’t part with huge amounts of cash for a fancy handbag. Not a problem I worry about, but I guess if you have parted with mega cash and find out you have fake goods, you wouldn’t be a happy bunny. Neither would the manufacturer be happy :) I’m not a designer type of gal:) I enjoyed reading your three part slice of current day life Dave. All the best.
March 7th, 2024 14:25
Cassie58 said:
So much money being lost to those who make fakes of expensive labelled goods. Never been one to go for labels. I just can’t part with huge amounts of cash for a fancy handbag. Not a problem I worry about, but I guess if you have parted with mega cash and find out you have fake goods, you wouldn’t be a happy bunny. Neither would the manufacturer be happy :) I’m not a designer type of gal:) I enjoyed reading your three part slice of current day life Dave. All the best.
March 7th, 2024 14:25
Exposé
sorenbarrett said:
I guess that you Gold and Orchi are also know as the three wise men. Good write Dave a proper tribute.
March 6th, 2024 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
I guess that you Gold and Orchi are also know as the three wise men. Good write Dave a proper tribute.
March 6th, 2024 06:32
Exposé
Neville said:
Dont mention the P word .. Solomon will swoon .. Hairy nuff .. or should that be furry nuff .. Neville 😎👍
March 6th, 2024 06:07
Neville said:
Dont mention the P word .. Solomon will swoon .. Hairy nuff .. or should that be furry nuff .. Neville 😎👍
March 6th, 2024 06:07
Vuitton Clerihew
Teddy.15 said:
It\'s probably down to education and keeping up with the Jones\'s, something I would never do myself, one of those bags cost more than an international holiday. 🌹
March 6th, 2024 05:30
Teddy.15 said:
It\'s probably down to education and keeping up with the Jones\'s, something I would never do myself, one of those bags cost more than an international holiday. 🌹
March 6th, 2024 05:30
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