Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave
Balance.
sorenbarrett said:
When ever there are more than one person there will be politics and a tyrany or the majority or of the minority. Can\'t please everyone they say. Self interest is a terrible ruler.
January 13th, 2023 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
When ever there are more than one person there will be politics and a tyrany or the majority or of the minority. Can\'t please everyone they say. Self interest is a terrible ruler.
January 13th, 2023 05:14
Concerning Some ‘C’ Words.
Bella Shepard said:
This was great fun to read my friend. Now \"Lady and the Tramp\" had it right. A spaghetti dinner, a candlelit table for two, romantic music and two pups sucking on opposite ends of the the same long strand, their eyes meeting demurely, in surprise. Would that it could work as well for humans. Unfortunately, reality is not part of the \"Wonderful World of Disney\". You make a very important point!
January 11th, 2023 16:17
Bella Shepard said:
This was great fun to read my friend. Now \"Lady and the Tramp\" had it right. A spaghetti dinner, a candlelit table for two, romantic music and two pups sucking on opposite ends of the the same long strand, their eyes meeting demurely, in surprise. Would that it could work as well for humans. Unfortunately, reality is not part of the \"Wonderful World of Disney\". You make a very important point!
January 11th, 2023 16:17
Disaster Trumps Competition.
Bella Shepard said:
A great write Dear poet. The rhyming pattern for me, treats the subject with a powerful kid glove. The expression is forthright, honest and oh so true. At times we are as slow growing as the trees, but they have hundreds of years to grow and change, we have only one, brief lifetime by comparison in which to change our world. The last stanza puts it all in perspective, thank you.
January 11th, 2023 15:59
Bella Shepard said:
A great write Dear poet. The rhyming pattern for me, treats the subject with a powerful kid glove. The expression is forthright, honest and oh so true. At times we are as slow growing as the trees, but they have hundreds of years to grow and change, we have only one, brief lifetime by comparison in which to change our world. The last stanza puts it all in perspective, thank you.
January 11th, 2023 15:59
Concerning Some ‘C’ Words.
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Quite cool, charming and creative DD!
January 6th, 2023 14:10
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Quite cool, charming and creative DD!
January 6th, 2023 14:10
Disaster Trumps Competition.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Humanity is the first thing to be encouraged yes and your poem is wonderful. Kudos!
Plz also read my newest poem too
December 30th, 2022 11:34
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Humanity is the first thing to be encouraged yes and your poem is wonderful. Kudos!
Plz also read my newest poem too
December 30th, 2022 11:34
“Heigh-ho, Heigh-ho it’s Off to Work We Go…”
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, Dave, this was truly spot-on.
The way you made this villanelle seem so effortless is incredible.
You so accurately describe the overworker mentality in this poem.
It\'s like big companies and corporations are normalizing working their laborers to death.
It\'s our \"workaholic\" world that adapts to these norms and feeds the fire.
You described this perfectly.
December 22nd, 2022 10:27
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, Dave, this was truly spot-on.
The way you made this villanelle seem so effortless is incredible.
You so accurately describe the overworker mentality in this poem.
It\'s like big companies and corporations are normalizing working their laborers to death.
It\'s our \"workaholic\" world that adapts to these norms and feeds the fire.
You described this perfectly.
December 22nd, 2022 10:27
Disaster Trumps Competition.
Goldfinch60 said:
Competition is always in our lives Dave but so many take it to extremes and do not worry about the cost to others in our world.
Andy
December 21st, 2022 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Competition is always in our lives Dave but so many take it to extremes and do not worry about the cost to others in our world.
Andy
December 21st, 2022 02:24
Disaster Trumps Competition.
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m glad you didn\'t end it \"humanity rotten to the core\" , although this may be true. It speaks truth anyway you look at it. Good write.
December 20th, 2022 19:40
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m glad you didn\'t end it \"humanity rotten to the core\" , although this may be true. It speaks truth anyway you look at it. Good write.
December 20th, 2022 19:40
Disaster Trumps Competition.
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks mate. And I\'m not getting at Andy here - but I really would like to see more attempts at answers on these pages - easy to wax poetical about problems ........
December 20th, 2022 06:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks mate. And I\'m not getting at Andy here - but I really would like to see more attempts at answers on these pages - easy to wax poetical about problems ........
December 20th, 2022 06:10
Disaster Trumps Competition.
Neville said:
ink well spilt in my opinion :)
December 20th, 2022 06:03
Neville said:
ink well spilt in my opinion :)
December 20th, 2022 06:03
Free Exchange
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Such talent, like your writing! Great thought and presentation with your write - DD!
December 19th, 2022 18:48
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Such talent, like your writing! Great thought and presentation with your write - DD!
December 19th, 2022 18:48
Concerning Some ‘C’ Words.
Neville said:
Its a dogs life innit .. but I get your point sir .. :)
December 19th, 2022 04:23
Neville said:
Its a dogs life innit .. but I get your point sir .. :)
December 19th, 2022 04:23
Concerning Some ‘C’ Words.
Fay Slimm. said:
Your write so cleverly composed on the subject of matings is full of poetic rhyming that leaves me with a wry smile - - thanks Dave - - I love the dry wit in this tale of \"unloosed copulation\" - - great read.
December 18th, 2022 03:27
Fay Slimm. said:
Your write so cleverly composed on the subject of matings is full of poetic rhyming that leaves me with a wry smile - - thanks Dave - - I love the dry wit in this tale of \"unloosed copulation\" - - great read.
December 18th, 2022 03:27
Concerning Some ‘C’ Words.
orchidee said:
A \'C\' word I must mention only in December is \'Christmas\', or else Gold/Andy will shoot me! lol.
December 18th, 2022 03:06
orchidee said:
A \'C\' word I must mention only in December is \'Christmas\', or else Gold/Andy will shoot me! lol.
December 18th, 2022 03:06
War Veterans
sorenbarrett said:
You make a good point. You would think that we would have reached a point where killing our fellow men for the good of money makers or power minded would no longer be tolerated.
December 16th, 2022 17:55
sorenbarrett said:
You make a good point. You would think that we would have reached a point where killing our fellow men for the good of money makers or power minded would no longer be tolerated.
December 16th, 2022 17:55
Mud, Mud, Glorious Mud
sorenbarrett said:
I remember her she put a damper on my spirits until we got a separation. Fun write Dave.
December 16th, 2022 07:25
sorenbarrett said:
I remember her she put a damper on my spirits until we got a separation. Fun write Dave.
December 16th, 2022 07:25
Serious Questions
sorenbarrett said:
Senior moments are becoming a regular expectation for me. Loved the forgotten rhyme. I find myself digging back through some of your older poems. What worries me is when I find in my poems of years ago speaking of my senior moments.
December 14th, 2022 20:46
sorenbarrett said:
Senior moments are becoming a regular expectation for me. Loved the forgotten rhyme. I find myself digging back through some of your older poems. What worries me is when I find in my poems of years ago speaking of my senior moments.
December 14th, 2022 20:46
The Chair.
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
I have one of those! Mine came the same way and needed the same effort to assemble. But, I like mine! Great fun to read DD!
December 12th, 2022 18:20
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
I have one of those! Mine came the same way and needed the same effort to assemble. But, I like mine! Great fun to read DD!
December 12th, 2022 18:20
Rampant Vegetation.
sorenbarrett said:
Dave I loved where this went. I too go to the bathroom when I have beans but for other purposes. This one seemed to grow out of control. Hope you find a pot of gold up there. Great piece.
December 8th, 2022 18:49
sorenbarrett said:
Dave I loved where this went. I too go to the bathroom when I have beans but for other purposes. This one seemed to grow out of control. Hope you find a pot of gold up there. Great piece.
December 8th, 2022 18:49
Rampant Vegetation.
arqios said:
At some stage you\'ll need a machete to navigate that room!
December 7th, 2022 03:54
arqios said:
At some stage you\'ll need a machete to navigate that room!
December 7th, 2022 03:54
Rampant Vegetation.
Goldfinch60 said:
You can get hooked by the cheese plant and taken out of that window Dave.
Andy
December 7th, 2022 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
You can get hooked by the cheese plant and taken out of that window Dave.
Andy
December 7th, 2022 02:48
Balance.
Goldfinch60 said:
They only think of what they themselves want and don\'t care about anybody else.
As I have said many times: \"How do you know when a politician is lying?\" \"There lips move!\"
Andy
December 7th, 2022 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
They only think of what they themselves want and don\'t care about anybody else.
As I have said many times: \"How do you know when a politician is lying?\" \"There lips move!\"
Andy
December 7th, 2022 02:26
Balance.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Dave.
I fear the fulcrum is up their bums.
December 6th, 2022 16:11
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Dave.
I fear the fulcrum is up their bums.
December 6th, 2022 16:11
Balance.
Saxon Crow said:
Just walk away from it all mate. Don\'t even give them your time and energy. Let them play their little games.They are insignificant.
December 6th, 2022 05:29
Saxon Crow said:
Just walk away from it all mate. Don\'t even give them your time and energy. Let them play their little games.They are insignificant.
December 6th, 2022 05:29
Balance.
orchidee said:
Yep, we have Bozo, Coco, Thicko, etc..... as some newspapers call them.
One is in cuckoo land in a celebrity show on telly at the moment.
December 6th, 2022 05:04
orchidee said:
Yep, we have Bozo, Coco, Thicko, etc..... as some newspapers call them.
One is in cuckoo land in a celebrity show on telly at the moment.
December 6th, 2022 05:04
Balance.
arqios said:
That\'s a good one for the soapbox in the public square. If only people would listen and act accordingly.
December 6th, 2022 04:31
arqios said:
That\'s a good one for the soapbox in the public square. If only people would listen and act accordingly.
December 6th, 2022 04:31
The Chair.
Paul Bell said:
Flat pack is like a jail sentence.
Though there\'s bound to be someone in jail that can put it together.
December 4th, 2022 06:56
Paul Bell said:
Flat pack is like a jail sentence.
Though there\'s bound to be someone in jail that can put it together.
December 4th, 2022 06:56
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