Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Wound
Cassie58 said:
A somber write. There are wounds that scratch the surface and then there are those that carve deep into the flesh leaving scars. Some amazing description here. The scars may never heal and act as a reminder of what has been and gone. Brilliantly conveyed sorenbarrett.
January 19th, 2025 09:18
Cassie58 said:
A somber write. There are wounds that scratch the surface and then there are those that carve deep into the flesh leaving scars. Some amazing description here. The scars may never heal and act as a reminder of what has been and gone. Brilliantly conveyed sorenbarrett.
January 19th, 2025 09:18
Wound
David Wakeling said:
This certainly packs a punch. There is a lot of anger here and hurt that hasn\'t healed.It is very troubling.Well written indeed
January 19th, 2025 06:29
David Wakeling said:
This certainly packs a punch. There is a lot of anger here and hurt that hasn\'t healed.It is very troubling.Well written indeed
January 19th, 2025 06:29
Wound
Neville said:
I think healed or not, they are here to stay and should serve as a reminder of what is and once was .. it simply doesn\'t do to forget .. such great poetry makes one both wonder and think .. Neville
January 19th, 2025 05:54
Neville said:
I think healed or not, they are here to stay and should serve as a reminder of what is and once was .. it simply doesn\'t do to forget .. such great poetry makes one both wonder and think .. Neville
January 19th, 2025 05:54
Wound
LP2187 said:
Wow, this blew me away literally, such a great sense of melancholy and nostalgia. Thanks for sharing.
January 19th, 2025 05:24
LP2187 said:
Wow, this blew me away literally, such a great sense of melancholy and nostalgia. Thanks for sharing.
January 19th, 2025 05:24
Wound
arqios said:
In some real ways wounds donβt ever go away. Some things are hard to put to words but then have to be voiced out.
January 19th, 2025 04:28
arqios said:
In some real ways wounds donβt ever go away. Some things are hard to put to words but then have to be voiced out.
January 19th, 2025 04:28
Tequila
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, I have never tasted Tequila in my life.
Andy
January 19th, 2025 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, I have never tasted Tequila in my life.
Andy
January 19th, 2025 02:11
Tequila
Thad Wilk said:
Fantabulous poem
a tasty treat
indeed to read today! π―
Made me wanna tequila
Or two, to pass the time away!! πΈ πΈ
Best regards βοΈ πΈ Thad
January 18th, 2025 22:49
Thad Wilk said:
Fantabulous poem
a tasty treat
indeed to read today! π―
Made me wanna tequila
Or two, to pass the time away!! πΈ πΈ
Best regards βοΈ πΈ Thad
January 18th, 2025 22:49
Tequila
Tristan Robert Lange said:
One tequila, two tequila, three tequila...floor! LOL! Love this poem, my friend! Bottom\'s up! π₯ (they need to come up with a shot glass emoji, just saying. π€£). Here\'s to Teddy for the challenge! π»
January 18th, 2025 11:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
One tequila, two tequila, three tequila...floor! LOL! Love this poem, my friend! Bottom\'s up! π₯ (they need to come up with a shot glass emoji, just saying. π€£). Here\'s to Teddy for the challenge! π»
January 18th, 2025 11:16
Tequila
arqios said:
Oh, I say.. this was a challenge, not your typical flair.. one tequila, two tequila, three tequila, FLOOR! History can be so much fun and poetry even βfunner!β
January 18th, 2025 06:49
arqios said:
Oh, I say.. this was a challenge, not your typical flair.. one tequila, two tequila, three tequila, FLOOR! History can be so much fun and poetry even βfunner!β
January 18th, 2025 06:49
Tequila
Teddy.15 said:
Applause, applause, applause, I felt we needed to be cheered up, a bit of a sad week on MPS but you have surpassed any expectation I could have on the subject, if anyone could write about tequila it would be you, thank you for taking up this challenge that was purely to cheer us up and you most certainly have, superb and now I wish we could have a Latin dance my dear friend sorrenbarret πΉ biggest amount of hugs from Italy to you dearest of friends. β€οΈ
January 18th, 2025 06:24
Teddy.15 said:
Applause, applause, applause, I felt we needed to be cheered up, a bit of a sad week on MPS but you have surpassed any expectation I could have on the subject, if anyone could write about tequila it would be you, thank you for taking up this challenge that was purely to cheer us up and you most certainly have, superb and now I wish we could have a Latin dance my dear friend sorrenbarret πΉ biggest amount of hugs from Italy to you dearest of friends. β€οΈ
January 18th, 2025 06:24
Tequila
Neville said:
You just done good .. I know this stuff you are on about .. made me salivate just thinking about it .. Funnily enough I have never sampled it anywhere other than in Mexico where I drank far too much of it .. Neville
January 18th, 2025 06:08
Neville said:
You just done good .. I know this stuff you are on about .. made me salivate just thinking about it .. Funnily enough I have never sampled it anywhere other than in Mexico where I drank far too much of it .. Neville
January 18th, 2025 06:08
Tequila
Mutley Ravishes said:
Now I want to drink some Okinawan snake liqor!
January 18th, 2025 06:01
Mutley Ravishes said:
Now I want to drink some Okinawan snake liqor!
January 18th, 2025 06:01
Tequila
LP2187 said:
Really nice to read, such good imagery. Thanks for sharing.
January 18th, 2025 05:18
LP2187 said:
Really nice to read, such good imagery. Thanks for sharing.
January 18th, 2025 05:18
Muddy shoes
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren covering the times before into new times.
Andy
January 18th, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren covering the times before into new times.
Andy
January 18th, 2025 02:22
Muddy shoes
Thad Wilk said:
π π Clapping!
Wonderfully penned,
short and succinct, and
thought provoking and true! π€
Great use of metaphor
much enjoyed thank you!!π
Best regards βοΈ Thad
January 17th, 2025 20:41
Thad Wilk said:
π π Clapping!
Wonderfully penned,
short and succinct, and
thought provoking and true! π€
Great use of metaphor
much enjoyed thank you!!π
Best regards βοΈ Thad
January 17th, 2025 20:41
Muddy shoes
NinjaGirl said:
while one can clean mud off a tile floor, it stains the carpet so easily
January 17th, 2025 19:14
NinjaGirl said:
while one can clean mud off a tile floor, it stains the carpet so easily
January 17th, 2025 19:14
Muddy shoes
David Wakeling said:
This got me thinking.Well done.The trouble we cause can leave an imprint for ever.Excellent
January 17th, 2025 16:20
David Wakeling said:
This got me thinking.Well done.The trouble we cause can leave an imprint for ever.Excellent
January 17th, 2025 16:20
Muddy shoes
Cassie58 said:
A strong metaphor here in muddy shoes. It is impossible to go through life without wading through mud at times. The art is to not let it stick. A thoughtful write sorenbarrett. We all have our own ways of solving a mudslide. Enjoyed the read.
January 17th, 2025 13:36
Cassie58 said:
A strong metaphor here in muddy shoes. It is impossible to go through life without wading through mud at times. The art is to not let it stick. A thoughtful write sorenbarrett. We all have our own ways of solving a mudslide. Enjoyed the read.
January 17th, 2025 13:36
Muddy shoes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful metaphor and a powerful write, Soren. Indeed, we can\'t walk through life without tracking around some mud. The mud is not fun to acknowledge, but it is there and can\'t be ignored, either. Well, it can be ignored by some, but it won\'t be by all. So, there\'s that. What an excellent poem, my friend. I thoroughly enjoyed this and, whether or not my interpretation lines up with your intent, this was a very thought-provoking piece, as always. Well done! ππΉ
January 17th, 2025 08:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful metaphor and a powerful write, Soren. Indeed, we can\'t walk through life without tracking around some mud. The mud is not fun to acknowledge, but it is there and can\'t be ignored, either. Well, it can be ignored by some, but it won\'t be by all. So, there\'s that. What an excellent poem, my friend. I thoroughly enjoyed this and, whether or not my interpretation lines up with your intent, this was a very thought-provoking piece, as always. Well done! ππΉ
January 17th, 2025 08:59
Muddy shoes
arqios said:
Our living and of those around us does scuff and soil the veneer of our awareness and even our hopes and dreams, perhaps somewhere between these is reality. Just a stab after a long day at workβ¦ muddied boots and allβ¦ quite literally for me. ππ»πππ»
January 17th, 2025 07:06
arqios said:
Our living and of those around us does scuff and soil the veneer of our awareness and even our hopes and dreams, perhaps somewhere between these is reality. Just a stab after a long day at workβ¦ muddied boots and allβ¦ quite literally for me. ππ»πππ»
January 17th, 2025 07:06
Muddy shoes
Neville said:
What is done is done but not necessarily dead, done and dusted .. it seems that one mans eyesore might easily be another mans beauty spot .. perhaps .. π€
January 17th, 2025 06:51
Neville said:
What is done is done but not necessarily dead, done and dusted .. it seems that one mans eyesore might easily be another mans beauty spot .. perhaps .. π€
January 17th, 2025 06:51
Truth
Salvia.S said:
Beautifully written, a wonderful poetic reflection on truth.
January 17th, 2025 05:40
Salvia.S said:
Beautifully written, a wonderful poetic reflection on truth.
January 17th, 2025 05:40
Muddy shoes
Teddy.15 said:
Such powerful metaphor, some things can absolutely be cleaned away others not. Marvelous lines my dear sorrenbarret πΉ
January 17th, 2025 05:00
Teddy.15 said:
Such powerful metaphor, some things can absolutely be cleaned away others not. Marvelous lines my dear sorrenbarret πΉ
January 17th, 2025 05:00
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