Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Bard
Poetic Licence said:

A beautiful Way of summing it up in a nutshell, enjoyed the read

March 17th, 2025 06:13

Bard
Teddy.15 said:

A most perfect description of what poet means. Beautiful and so is the form that you have used along with your title.
🌹 Bravo, Bravo 👏

March 17th, 2025 03:37

Bard
arqios said:

Love the paper skies, eve more when they are filled! 🙏🏻🕊

March 17th, 2025 03:06

Bard
orchidee said:

A fine write SB.

March 17th, 2025 03:06

Smell of color
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words soren bring the smell and view of Nature to us all.

Andy

March 17th, 2025 02:25

Smell of color
David Wakeling said:

Good to be alive and witness it all.Enjoyable read mi amigo

March 16th, 2025 18:22

What I left behind
Friendship said:

Well written ,sorenbarrett, Your poem is to encourage readers to reflect on their own experiences in nature, the marks they leave behind, and the emotional resonances of their interactions with the world and others. It invites contemplation on the beauty of existence and the significance of seemingly small actions.

March 16th, 2025 18:20

A grip too tight
Alan R said:

Quite an accurate representation of several disproportionate things I’ve seen in this life! Cheers!!

March 16th, 2025 17:19

Smell of color
Lorenz said:

I love this painting of scents !

March 16th, 2025 13:26

Smell of color
Bella Shepard said:

This poem is a feast for the senses, exquisite imagery filled with natures delight. You have created a most interesting shape with your words, I envision a tree in that shape, bursting with life. Beautiful!

March 16th, 2025 13:06

Sigh of a storm
spilleronsheet said:

And these are lines are giving me glimmer amidst darkness…keep writing dear poet

March 16th, 2025 12:18

Canned expression
spilleronsheet said:

Those poetic words truly playing with every note…good one dear, keep penning…

March 16th, 2025 12:17

Smell of color
orchidee said:

Good write SB. KP has lovely smell of colour of rotten maggots that I feed her with for dinner. lol. It\'s gross here at meal-times.

March 16th, 2025 11:29

Pages not written
ginny jayne said:

That is lovely, at the same time sad.

March 16th, 2025 10:43

Smell of color
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This my friend, is a lovely shape. At first I saw a mushroom, or it could be a tree, but it looks like a fully bloomed mushroom or tree, which totally mirrors the content. Bravo on this, my friend! 🌹👏 Instant fave.

March 16th, 2025 07:51

Verses of dust
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

March 16th, 2025 07:36

Smell of color
aDarkerMind said:

yet another from the pen of Soren to add to my favourites list.

a stunning write;

March 16th, 2025 06:11

Smell of color
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write of the positive impact colours and smells can have on us, and a nice smell can open up a wonderful world in your mind, enjoyed the read

March 16th, 2025 05:31

Smell of color
Friendship said:

Beautifully written, sorenbarrett, Your poem captures the sensory experience of nature and the joy of simple pleasures. It presents nature as a nurturing force that offers comfort and satisfaction, suggesting a deep connection between the self and the natural world. Your poem may aim to celebrate the beauty of nature and its ability to provide joy and satisfaction, encouraging readers to appreciate the simple pleasures in life. It invites reflection on the relationship between humans and the natural world, emphasizing the nourishment found in both physical and emotional realms.

March 16th, 2025 04:47

Smell of color
Teddy.15 said:

Stunning dear sorrenbarret 🌹 🍿 🌨️ 🌼

March 16th, 2025 03:21

Smell of color
arqios said:

Smells and colours have a magic in the music 🎶 of the day 🙏🏻🕊️

March 16th, 2025 03:19

Leaves
cellinic said:

very deep work with philosophical connotations. Liked it.

March 15th, 2025 20:45

Leaves
Caring dove said:

Lovely writing .. sometimes we feel so close to someone or someone can feel a part of us ..

I like how you wrote this


March 15th, 2025 15:50

Leaves
David Wakeling said:

This is so poetic.I like the metaphor of leaves.There is a sadness here but hey thats life.

March 15th, 2025 15:23

Leaves
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Great job, Soren. This rings so nicely and the poem is beautiful, using nature to symbolize any number of things from loving relationships to our hopes and aspirations. Wonderful job, my friend! 🌹👏

March 15th, 2025 14:31

Leaves
Ellen Marsell said:

Through the metaphor of a tree and its leaves, you delicately expressed the evolution of human relationships, marked by growth, separation, and ultimately, the acceptance of fate that leads each to different horizons. Beautiful poem!

March 15th, 2025 14:30

Leaves
Salvia.S said:

Beautifully written! Your poem captures the bittersweet pain of growing apart and the memories that remain, with words that dance like leaves in the wind....

March 15th, 2025 10:56

Leaves
Friendship said:

Well written, Your poem is a poignant reflection on the bond between siblings, employing the metaphor of two leaves on a tree to illustrate a close relationship that evolves over time, leading to both distance and acceptance. You explore the transition from youthful intimacy to the inevitable divergence that comes with personal growth and change. Ultimately, it reflects on the memories of a past connection while acknowledging the separate paths individuals take in life. Your poem delves into the complexities of relationships, emphasizing the inevitability of growth and change while cherishing memories of intimacy. It seeks to resonate with anyone who has experienced the bittersweet nature of moving on from a close bond.

March 15th, 2025 08:34

Leaves
Teddy.15 said:

How truly beautiful, a child\'s friendship with a tree, how it\'s so different yet very similar in so many ways. Such imagery has given me a glimpse of a young boy and his huge appreciation of life. 🌹

March 15th, 2025 07:13

Verses of dust
rebellion_in_sanity said:

So nice! Felt like personification of the poems and telling each has its own life.

March 15th, 2025 06:13



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