Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Shade
Victor Bolshov said:
Beautiful, as always. Few words that introduce you to a lot of thoughts.
May 7th, 2025 03:49
Victor Bolshov said:
Beautiful, as always. Few words that introduce you to a lot of thoughts.
May 7th, 2025 03:49
I thought I knew
Goldfinch60 said:
So many things change in our lives soren.
Andy
May 7th, 2025 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
So many things change in our lives soren.
Andy
May 7th, 2025 01:20
I thought I knew
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is powerful and evocative, effectively capturing the pain of change and loss in familiar places. The imagery is vivid and impactful. Well done!
May 6th, 2025 21:51
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is powerful and evocative, effectively capturing the pain of change and loss in familiar places. The imagery is vivid and impactful. Well done!
May 6th, 2025 21:51
I thought I knew
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, I know this experience well. Where I grew up, everything is different. Well done, on this Soren! 🌹👏
May 6th, 2025 20:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, I know this experience well. Where I grew up, everything is different. Well done, on this Soren! 🌹👏
May 6th, 2025 20:24
I thought I knew
NinjaGirl said:
People destroy what we never thought we\'d once appreciate. Thoughtful write.
May 6th, 2025 18:47
NinjaGirl said:
People destroy what we never thought we\'d once appreciate. Thoughtful write.
May 6th, 2025 18:47
I thought I knew
Teddy.15 said:
A familiar place, so very important and in some cases it\'s not. When I go to London I always hope for this, sometimes .y very old memories are ruined but again it\'s ok, time and age moves us on. . An absolutely wonderful poem. 🌹
May 6th, 2025 13:30
Teddy.15 said:
A familiar place, so very important and in some cases it\'s not. When I go to London I always hope for this, sometimes .y very old memories are ruined but again it\'s ok, time and age moves us on. . An absolutely wonderful poem. 🌹
May 6th, 2025 13:30
I thought I knew
Lorenz said:
I have the same feeling when I look at my environment .As it belonged to a stolen memory ...
May 6th, 2025 09:50
Lorenz said:
I have the same feeling when I look at my environment .As it belonged to a stolen memory ...
May 6th, 2025 09:50
I thought I knew
Damaso said:
It breaks my heart. I share your sentiment. Excellent. Regards.
May 6th, 2025 09:40
Damaso said:
It breaks my heart. I share your sentiment. Excellent. Regards.
May 6th, 2025 09:40
I thought I knew
Friendship said:
Your poem contrasts memories of innocence with the harsh realities of commercialization and urbanization. In it, you express a deep sense of loss and nostalgia for a familiar place that has undergone significant transformation, highlighting the conflict between memory and change. It reflects on how progress can alter landscapes and erase personal histories. Could the metaphor be \"Change\'s theft\"? It personifies change as a thief, emphasizing the loss experienced.
May 6th, 2025 06:53
Friendship said:
Your poem contrasts memories of innocence with the harsh realities of commercialization and urbanization. In it, you express a deep sense of loss and nostalgia for a familiar place that has undergone significant transformation, highlighting the conflict between memory and change. It reflects on how progress can alter landscapes and erase personal histories. Could the metaphor be \"Change\'s theft\"? It personifies change as a thief, emphasizing the loss experienced.
May 6th, 2025 06:53
Devil deeds angel thoughts
Teddy.15 said:
What a magnificent truth and so very poetically powerful. Blown away with this one especially because it speaks personally to me. 🌹
May 6th, 2025 05:18
Teddy.15 said:
What a magnificent truth and so very poetically powerful. Blown away with this one especially because it speaks personally to me. 🌹
May 6th, 2025 05:18
I thought I knew
David Wakeling said:
That\'s progress I guess.They don\'t knock down buildings they knock down memories.Certainly a touch of anger and sadness here,Made me think
May 6th, 2025 05:09
David Wakeling said:
That\'s progress I guess.They don\'t knock down buildings they knock down memories.Certainly a touch of anger and sadness here,Made me think
May 6th, 2025 05:09
I thought I knew
arqios said:
It always saddens me that the “hood” has transformed, eradicating my past along with my sentimental journeying 🙏🏻🕊️
May 6th, 2025 04:53
arqios said:
It always saddens me that the “hood” has transformed, eradicating my past along with my sentimental journeying 🙏🏻🕊️
May 6th, 2025 04:53
I thought I knew
Victor Bolshov said:
Very nice and original rhymes. Indeed, it can be quite an experience to get back to your memorable places only to find them irreversibly changed and forsaken.
May 6th, 2025 03:40
Victor Bolshov said:
Very nice and original rhymes. Indeed, it can be quite an experience to get back to your memorable places only to find them irreversibly changed and forsaken.
May 6th, 2025 03:40
Devil deeds angel thoughts
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine and true words soren, putting thoughts into practice can lead to anomalies.
Andy
May 6th, 2025 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine and true words soren, putting thoughts into practice can lead to anomalies.
Andy
May 6th, 2025 01:46
Devil deeds angel thoughts
Soman Ragavan said:
“Watch your thoughts,
they become your words;
watch your words,
they become your actions;
watch your actions,
they become your habits;
watch your habits,
they become your character;
watch your character,
it becomes your destiny.”
by
Lao Tzu (born 571 BC)
The tragedy is that we have no control over our thoughts. Hitler’s mind told him to wage wars, regardless. We know the consequences. It is the same with all those who launched wars. Thoughts lead in the end to character, which itself defines your destiny.
In the end, we have no control over the whole process.
Soman Ragavan
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May 6th, 2025 00:24
Soman Ragavan said:
“Watch your thoughts,
they become your words;
watch your words,
they become your actions;
watch your actions,
they become your habits;
watch your habits,
they become your character;
watch your character,
it becomes your destiny.”
by
Lao Tzu (born 571 BC)
The tragedy is that we have no control over our thoughts. Hitler’s mind told him to wage wars, regardless. We know the consequences. It is the same with all those who launched wars. Thoughts lead in the end to character, which itself defines your destiny.
In the end, we have no control over the whole process.
Soman Ragavan
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May 6th, 2025 00:24
Sacrifice, take the hit
NafisaSB said:
yes, i see humans also in the same shape, and thank God for all of the above.
beautifully expressed
May 5th, 2025 23:12
NafisaSB said:
yes, i see humans also in the same shape, and thank God for all of the above.
beautifully expressed
May 5th, 2025 23:12
Blackness\' light
NinjaGirl said:
Ah, the black square, this is the black square of poems!
May 5th, 2025 16:38
NinjaGirl said:
Ah, the black square, this is the black square of poems!
May 5th, 2025 16:38
Muse\'s blood
NinjaGirl said:
So satisfying! Perhaps the last poems are written in blood
May 5th, 2025 16:37
NinjaGirl said:
So satisfying! Perhaps the last poems are written in blood
May 5th, 2025 16:37
Sacrifice, take the hit
NinjaGirl said:
Sacrifice precedes success! Amazing message!
May 5th, 2025 16:34
NinjaGirl said:
Sacrifice precedes success! Amazing message!
May 5th, 2025 16:34
Devil deeds angel thoughts
NinjaGirl said:
You\'re not at fault thinking a bad thought! But choosing to continue to think about it, perhaps maybe then a little.
May 5th, 2025 16:33
NinjaGirl said:
You\'re not at fault thinking a bad thought! But choosing to continue to think about it, perhaps maybe then a little.
May 5th, 2025 16:33
Sacrifice, take the hit
aDarkerMind said:
in my opinion Soren, one of your finest pieces of work I have read;
Superb!
May 5th, 2025 12:38
aDarkerMind said:
in my opinion Soren, one of your finest pieces of work I have read;
Superb!
May 5th, 2025 12:38
Devil deeds angel thoughts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
An interesting concept that bears the question, whose the judge of another\'s thoughts. Well, I guess we don\'t have to live long and share much to find out other humans can be. Of course, for those who believe, there\'s God. Does God judge our thoughts? It seems not so long as those thoughts don\'t take root in the heart...which is a broad difference from those who are simply thinking thoughts. For something to take root, it then grows, it spreads and, of course that alone is actionable not to mention that the spreading often goes beyond the individual in harmful ways. A most thought-provoking poem, Soren. Another fave. 🌹👏
May 5th, 2025 11:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
An interesting concept that bears the question, whose the judge of another\'s thoughts. Well, I guess we don\'t have to live long and share much to find out other humans can be. Of course, for those who believe, there\'s God. Does God judge our thoughts? It seems not so long as those thoughts don\'t take root in the heart...which is a broad difference from those who are simply thinking thoughts. For something to take root, it then grows, it spreads and, of course that alone is actionable not to mention that the spreading often goes beyond the individual in harmful ways. A most thought-provoking poem, Soren. Another fave. 🌹👏
May 5th, 2025 11:19
Devil deeds angel thoughts
aDarkerMind said:
worthy of much applause Soren,
as always.
another one to fave.
May 5th, 2025 10:34
aDarkerMind said:
worthy of much applause Soren,
as always.
another one to fave.
May 5th, 2025 10:34
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