Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Seasons pass
MDStone said:
Soren,
Loved the way you started and finished in the same season. The circle of life! What beautiful snapshots of Mother Nature told from a lover’s point of view. Loved the font that flowered and flowed like the Négligée. Thanks for sharing. I feel like I have new memories.
April 12th, 2025 07:17
MDStone said:
Soren,
Loved the way you started and finished in the same season. The circle of life! What beautiful snapshots of Mother Nature told from a lover’s point of view. Loved the font that flowered and flowed like the Négligée. Thanks for sharing. I feel like I have new memories.
April 12th, 2025 07:17
Seasons pass
arqios said:
It must well and truly be Spring… “everyone” is writing twitterpated 🥰 poems and this one encompasses all seasons, just wonderful 🕊🙏🏻
April 12th, 2025 05:32
arqios said:
It must well and truly be Spring… “everyone” is writing twitterpated 🥰 poems and this one encompasses all seasons, just wonderful 🕊🙏🏻
April 12th, 2025 05:32
Seasons pass
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing poem.Filled with delightful metaphors for the seasons.enjoyable read mi amigo
April 12th, 2025 05:30
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing poem.Filled with delightful metaphors for the seasons.enjoyable read mi amigo
April 12th, 2025 05:30
Seasons pass
teardrop said:
You covered the seasons to beautifully! Especially loved the \" In a gown of roses, her beauty exposed\" breathtaking. Beautiful write!
April 12th, 2025 04:53
teardrop said:
You covered the seasons to beautifully! Especially loved the \" In a gown of roses, her beauty exposed\" breathtaking. Beautiful write!
April 12th, 2025 04:53
Seasons pass
Poetic Licence said:
I think that is the most beautiful way I have ever read of the passing of the seasons, really enjoyed the read
April 12th, 2025 04:46
Poetic Licence said:
I think that is the most beautiful way I have ever read of the passing of the seasons, really enjoyed the read
April 12th, 2025 04:46
Scent of the past
Goldfinch60 said:
Smell is the most relevant of the senses to bring back memories soren.
Andy
April 12th, 2025 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Smell is the most relevant of the senses to bring back memories soren.
Andy
April 12th, 2025 01:55
How soon we forget
NafisaSB said:
beautiful poem, makes me remember the days when i enjoyed the burning hot sun of my hometown, Chennai, where the weather is hot, hotter and hottest
April 12th, 2025 01:26
NafisaSB said:
beautiful poem, makes me remember the days when i enjoyed the burning hot sun of my hometown, Chennai, where the weather is hot, hotter and hottest
April 12th, 2025 01:26
Scent of the past
hzugman said:
What a fine combination of thought and scent. You hit a homer with this one.
April 11th, 2025 17:15
hzugman said:
What a fine combination of thought and scent. You hit a homer with this one.
April 11th, 2025 17:15
Scent of the past
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant use of the senses. My mom loved Hollyhocks.
April 11th, 2025 14:51
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant use of the senses. My mom loved Hollyhocks.
April 11th, 2025 14:51
Flower
Salvia.S said:
Vibrant imagery and symbolism weave a beautiful tapestry of resilience and spirituality. Well written!!!!
April 11th, 2025 09:35
Salvia.S said:
Vibrant imagery and symbolism weave a beautiful tapestry of resilience and spirituality. Well written!!!!
April 11th, 2025 09:35
Scent of the past
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love your use of the sense of smell in this poem, particularly, \"The smell anxiety and anticipation\". Really wonderful write, Soren. A fave for sure. 🌹👏
April 11th, 2025 07:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love your use of the sense of smell in this poem, particularly, \"The smell anxiety and anticipation\". Really wonderful write, Soren. A fave for sure. 🌹👏
April 11th, 2025 07:55
You will argue
spilleronsheet said:
Transient nature of mind…no permanence but the evolution of time….beautiful observation dear poet
April 11th, 2025 07:21
spilleronsheet said:
Transient nature of mind…no permanence but the evolution of time….beautiful observation dear poet
April 11th, 2025 07:21
Scent of the past
Friendship said:
Your poem appears to examine the interplay between memory, scent, and the passage of time, reflecting on how fragrances can evoke nostalgia and influence emotions, thereby intertwining past experiences with present feelings of anxiety and anticipation. The smell of anxiety and anticipation serves as a metaphor for the emotional weight of the present, underscoring how the future can be both exciting and daunting. Soren, your poem also seeks to underscore the significance of scent in shaping our memories and emotions, illustrating how the past informs the present and future, and encouraging readers to consider their own associations with scents and how they evoke personal memories and feelings.
April 11th, 2025 06:27
Friendship said:
Your poem appears to examine the interplay between memory, scent, and the passage of time, reflecting on how fragrances can evoke nostalgia and influence emotions, thereby intertwining past experiences with present feelings of anxiety and anticipation. The smell of anxiety and anticipation serves as a metaphor for the emotional weight of the present, underscoring how the future can be both exciting and daunting. Soren, your poem also seeks to underscore the significance of scent in shaping our memories and emotions, illustrating how the past informs the present and future, and encouraging readers to consider their own associations with scents and how they evoke personal memories and feelings.
April 11th, 2025 06:27
Scent of the past
arqios said:
They do tell a story and narrate history as well as its accompanying feelings. 🙏🏻🕊
April 11th, 2025 05:27
arqios said:
They do tell a story and narrate history as well as its accompanying feelings. 🙏🏻🕊
April 11th, 2025 05:27
Scent of the past
David Wakeling said:
I like the scents that this poem conjures up. It shows the magic power of poetry.Enjoyable
April 11th, 2025 05:21
David Wakeling said:
I like the scents that this poem conjures up. It shows the magic power of poetry.Enjoyable
April 11th, 2025 05:21
Scent of the past
MDStone said:
Soren,
Made me think about past experiences, good times, good people, good memories. But also awakened me to my lack of anticipation for what is to come. New scents bring new experiences. Thank you dear poet for providing an aroma of reflection.
April 11th, 2025 05:21
MDStone said:
Soren,
Made me think about past experiences, good times, good people, good memories. But also awakened me to my lack of anticipation for what is to come. New scents bring new experiences. Thank you dear poet for providing an aroma of reflection.
April 11th, 2025 05:21
Scent of the past
Poetic Licence said:
Its not something we usually think off but there are things, thoughts, feelings, emotions connected with smell. Interesting write and observation, enjoyed the read
April 11th, 2025 05:07
Poetic Licence said:
Its not something we usually think off but there are things, thoughts, feelings, emotions connected with smell. Interesting write and observation, enjoyed the read
April 11th, 2025 05:07
Scent of the past
Lorenz said:
Here\'s A theme I particularly like ! The scents of times...
April 11th, 2025 03:57
Lorenz said:
Here\'s A theme I particularly like ! The scents of times...
April 11th, 2025 03:57
Flower
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the font, which really works well for this poem, as well as your use of Bennu, the Ravens, Elijah, the Manna...all of it brilliantly woven into deep, philosophical, metaphor. Well done, Soren! 🌹👏
April 10th, 2025 16:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the font, which really works well for this poem, as well as your use of Bennu, the Ravens, Elijah, the Manna...all of it brilliantly woven into deep, philosophical, metaphor. Well done, Soren! 🌹👏
April 10th, 2025 16:21
Flower
Lorenz said:
A hard rock orchid ? What a tempting musical inspiration !
April 10th, 2025 10:02
Lorenz said:
A hard rock orchid ? What a tempting musical inspiration !
April 10th, 2025 10:02
Flower
Friendship said:
Well done, Soren, and an intensified poem. Yet it had me thinking; excellent job.
Your allusions to the Bennu bird, the Greek Phoenix, the prophet Elijah, epiphytes, and manna are noteworthy. Each of these elements is intricately linked to motifs of creation, survival, and the mystical interplay between the divine and the natural world. Your poem is structured as an extended metaphor, deftly connecting mythological and religious symbols to broader themes of existence, sustenance, and the divine. Furthermore, your poem explores the theme of resilience and the emergence of beauty in harsh environments. It posits that life and beauty can flourish even in the most inhospitable environments, as exemplified by the orchid growing on hard rock. It appears that you aim to inspire readers to discover beauty and strength in their own struggles, emphasizing the notion that even in adversity, life can thrive through divine support and resilience.
April 10th, 2025 05:59
Friendship said:
Well done, Soren, and an intensified poem. Yet it had me thinking; excellent job.
Your allusions to the Bennu bird, the Greek Phoenix, the prophet Elijah, epiphytes, and manna are noteworthy. Each of these elements is intricately linked to motifs of creation, survival, and the mystical interplay between the divine and the natural world. Your poem is structured as an extended metaphor, deftly connecting mythological and religious symbols to broader themes of existence, sustenance, and the divine. Furthermore, your poem explores the theme of resilience and the emergence of beauty in harsh environments. It posits that life and beauty can flourish even in the most inhospitable environments, as exemplified by the orchid growing on hard rock. It appears that you aim to inspire readers to discover beauty and strength in their own struggles, emphasizing the notion that even in adversity, life can thrive through divine support and resilience.
April 10th, 2025 05:59
Liberated
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice one soren
A poem with a spectrum of beauty
April 10th, 2025 05:38
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice one soren
A poem with a spectrum of beauty
April 10th, 2025 05:38
Flower
MDStone said:
Soren,
Love the font. It matches the message that blooms in this poem. Hope thriving even when the surroundings say it shouldn’t be so, beauty in the hard places. Thank you for sharing and for the educational piece as well. Loved it!
April 10th, 2025 05:25
MDStone said:
Soren,
Love the font. It matches the message that blooms in this poem. Hope thriving even when the surroundings say it shouldn’t be so, beauty in the hard places. Thank you for sharing and for the educational piece as well. Loved it!
April 10th, 2025 05:25
Flower
David Wakeling said:
I love the egyptian connection here.I actually learned something.Great poem.
April 10th, 2025 05:14
David Wakeling said:
I love the egyptian connection here.I actually learned something.Great poem.
April 10th, 2025 05:14
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