Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Liberated
orchidee said:
Good write SB. If you\'re a tree, how do ya get past the verify check on here? I\'m getting obsessed with that! lol.
March 20th, 2025 13:45
orchidee said:
Good write SB. If you\'re a tree, how do ya get past the verify check on here? I\'m getting obsessed with that! lol.
March 20th, 2025 13:45
Liberated
Lorenz said:
A wonderful landscape that blends words, colors,and seasons in a tender dawn dance !
March 20th, 2025 10:25
Lorenz said:
A wonderful landscape that blends words, colors,and seasons in a tender dawn dance !
March 20th, 2025 10:25
The circle
rebellion_in_sanity said:
WOW and WOW. Let me not embarras myself by repeating the same word. A last wow perhaps for \"Reclined infinity the masculine devouring femininity\"
March 20th, 2025 10:08
rebellion_in_sanity said:
WOW and WOW. Let me not embarras myself by repeating the same word. A last wow perhaps for \"Reclined infinity the masculine devouring femininity\"
March 20th, 2025 10:08
Liberated
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, to be truly free of our human trappings to be, completely one, as opposed to at war, with nature. This poem speaks to that yearning we all have, whether we realize it or not. Or, at least, that is what I get out of it. Either way, my friend, this is a wonderful poem! An easy fave for its connection to nature and for its beautiful profundity. 🌹👏
March 20th, 2025 09:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, to be truly free of our human trappings to be, completely one, as opposed to at war, with nature. This poem speaks to that yearning we all have, whether we realize it or not. Or, at least, that is what I get out of it. Either way, my friend, this is a wonderful poem! An easy fave for its connection to nature and for its beautiful profundity. 🌹👏
March 20th, 2025 09:08
Liberated
Salvia.S said:
Breathtakingly beautiful, a poetic longing for transcendence and creative freedom!
March 20th, 2025 07:20
Salvia.S said:
Breathtakingly beautiful, a poetic longing for transcendence and creative freedom!
March 20th, 2025 07:20
Liberated
Friendship said:
Nicely done, you are definitely tuned into Mother Nature. Soren, Your poem explores the desire for liberation from the physical constraints of the human body and the longing for a deeper connection with nature and creativity. It conveys a yearning to transcend the limitations of mortality and express beauty through art and poetry. The imagery of sunbeams, colors, and natural elements suggests a quest for enlightenment and emotional freedom. At the same time, the references to the senses highlight the contrast between the physical and the ethereal. You seem to seek to articulate the tension between the constraints of the human body and the soul\'s desire for transcendence, prompting readers to reflect on their own experiences with creativity, nature, and the search for meaning.
March 20th, 2025 07:02
Friendship said:
Nicely done, you are definitely tuned into Mother Nature. Soren, Your poem explores the desire for liberation from the physical constraints of the human body and the longing for a deeper connection with nature and creativity. It conveys a yearning to transcend the limitations of mortality and express beauty through art and poetry. The imagery of sunbeams, colors, and natural elements suggests a quest for enlightenment and emotional freedom. At the same time, the references to the senses highlight the contrast between the physical and the ethereal. You seem to seek to articulate the tension between the constraints of the human body and the soul\'s desire for transcendence, prompting readers to reflect on their own experiences with creativity, nature, and the search for meaning.
March 20th, 2025 07:02
Liberated
Mutley Ravishes said:
There\'s a standing exercise from Chinese Taoism called \"Holding the Tree,\" or \"Stake standing.\" It\'s traditionally done while standing in front of a tree.
Beautiful write, by the way!
March 20th, 2025 05:40
Mutley Ravishes said:
There\'s a standing exercise from Chinese Taoism called \"Holding the Tree,\" or \"Stake standing.\" It\'s traditionally done while standing in front of a tree.
Beautiful write, by the way!
March 20th, 2025 05:40
Liberated
Poetic Licence said:
To see through the eyes of nature would be a wonderful thing, it conjures up lovely thoughts and emotions that would be truly liberating, a lovely write
March 20th, 2025 05:05
Poetic Licence said:
To see through the eyes of nature would be a wonderful thing, it conjures up lovely thoughts and emotions that would be truly liberating, a lovely write
March 20th, 2025 05:05
Liberated
arqios said:
There is a sense of deep yearning to express emotions and beauty that can\'t be captured by traditional means, and to connect with the natural world on a fundamental level, feeling and seeing with the roots and leaves of a tree. It\'s a beautiful and evocative piece that captures the desire for a more enlightened existence.🙏🏻🕊
March 20th, 2025 04:05
arqios said:
There is a sense of deep yearning to express emotions and beauty that can\'t be captured by traditional means, and to connect with the natural world on a fundamental level, feeling and seeing with the roots and leaves of a tree. It\'s a beautiful and evocative piece that captures the desire for a more enlightened existence.🙏🏻🕊
March 20th, 2025 04:05
The circle
Goldfinch60 said:
Immortality is a circle of life soren that goes on for eternity. Good words.
Andy
March 20th, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Immortality is a circle of life soren that goes on for eternity. Good words.
Andy
March 20th, 2025 02:22
The circle
Doggerel Dave said:
Yer working class hoop snake got a promotion........ No?..... sorry I interposed.....
Short, neat explanatory write, Soren.
March 19th, 2025 17:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Yer working class hoop snake got a promotion........ No?..... sorry I interposed.....
Short, neat explanatory write, Soren.
March 19th, 2025 17:42
The circle
Neilton said:
Before I saw your comment I had to look it up and I can sincerely admit that your poem explained it perfectly!! Amazing work
March 19th, 2025 15:30
Neilton said:
Before I saw your comment I had to look it up and I can sincerely admit that your poem explained it perfectly!! Amazing work
March 19th, 2025 15:30
The circle
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profound! And excellent poem and an excellent representation of Ourboros. Well done on this, Soren! 🌹👏
March 19th, 2025 08:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profound! And excellent poem and an excellent representation of Ourboros. Well done on this, Soren! 🌹👏
March 19th, 2025 08:40
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
RSM0812 said:
This is one of my most favorite of your works. Amazing.
March 19th, 2025 07:02
RSM0812 said:
This is one of my most favorite of your works. Amazing.
March 19th, 2025 07:02
The circle
Poetic Licence said:
May I just say simply brilliant,, loved the write
March 19th, 2025 06:54
Poetic Licence said:
May I just say simply brilliant,, loved the write
March 19th, 2025 06:54
The circle
Friendship said:
Touche! A powerful poem, Soren, Your poem \"Ouroboros of Love and Hate\" examines the intricate, interconnected relationship between love and hate, implying that they are two sides of the same coin. The imagery of the ouroboros—a snake consuming its own tail—symbolizes the cyclical nature of these emotions and their eternal connection. Your poem explores themes of desire, consumption, and the duality of human emotions, portraying a relationship where love and hate coexist, each fueling the other, creating an endless cycle that is both destructive and all-consuming. It aims to stimulate thought about the nature of love and hate, encouraging readers to reflect on their experiences and perceptions of these powerful emotions. It uses vivid imagery and metaphor to illustrate the often tangled relationship between these opposing forces.
March 19th, 2025 06:51
Friendship said:
Touche! A powerful poem, Soren, Your poem \"Ouroboros of Love and Hate\" examines the intricate, interconnected relationship between love and hate, implying that they are two sides of the same coin. The imagery of the ouroboros—a snake consuming its own tail—symbolizes the cyclical nature of these emotions and their eternal connection. Your poem explores themes of desire, consumption, and the duality of human emotions, portraying a relationship where love and hate coexist, each fueling the other, creating an endless cycle that is both destructive and all-consuming. It aims to stimulate thought about the nature of love and hate, encouraging readers to reflect on their experiences and perceptions of these powerful emotions. It uses vivid imagery and metaphor to illustrate the often tangled relationship between these opposing forces.
March 19th, 2025 06:51
The circle
David Wakeling said:
Amazing poem.I have heard of that snake, Excellent interpretation of the fable.Well done
March 19th, 2025 05:19
David Wakeling said:
Amazing poem.I have heard of that snake, Excellent interpretation of the fable.Well done
March 19th, 2025 05:19
The circle
Salvia.S said:
Powerful and thought-provoking poem! The imagery is vivid and the exploration of dualities is captivating. Well written!
March 19th, 2025 05:15
Salvia.S said:
Powerful and thought-provoking poem! The imagery is vivid and the exploration of dualities is captivating. Well written!
March 19th, 2025 05:15
The circle
Teddy.15 said:
Says a lot about love and hate, forever a grand educator, your poem is magnificent 🌹
March 19th, 2025 04:45
Teddy.15 said:
Says a lot about love and hate, forever a grand educator, your poem is magnificent 🌹
March 19th, 2025 04:45
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