Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



I am all things
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work. Fantastic job.

February 8th, 2024 19:25

I am all things
orchidee said:

I never knew ya was all those things? What do you do for hobbies in spare time - all of 1 minute per week, after all this lot! lol.

February 8th, 2024 11:48

I am all things
Teddy.15 said:

You are indeed, a portrait of life itself

Kudos what a wonderful picture, the bigger picture walts and all. Kudos once again 🌹

February 8th, 2024 05:55

Tares
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words of truth in our current world soren.

I do make my own bread though and it seems to taste fine. LOL.

Andy

February 8th, 2024 02:26

Tares
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and poignant. Very relatable to the times.

February 7th, 2024 19:41

Tares
orchidee said:

Dang tares! They have to remain until the end of time Harvest, so the parable goes. If harvested now, they may root up some of the good wheat with them.
You got a tare or two? Same as a weed or two?!
I\'m sure KP feeds me with that poison bread - it tastes odd. lol.

February 7th, 2024 07:32

Tares
Doggerel Dave said:

As Teddy above - even I managed the imagery and metaphor - you pinned the process with absolute clarity, Soren.

February 7th, 2024 07:07

Tares
Accidental Poet said:

You bake a fine poem Soren. 😉👍

February 7th, 2024 07:05

Tares
Teddy.15 said:

So very relevant In our today\'s world. What amazing imagery and metaphor. I say let\'s just make some pasta together and fix it all. 🌹

February 7th, 2024 05:53

Everything has a price
Goldfinch60 said:

We all need to look into ourselves soren to find the glory that is within us all.

Andy

February 7th, 2024 03:11

Everything has a price
Bella Shepard said:

You find a place where poetry and philosophy meet, in this wonderful verse. Would that we truly understood, and lived by it, such a world it would be.

February 6th, 2024 16:48

Everything has a price
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and poignant. Well done.

February 6th, 2024 12:06

Everything has a price
Doggerel Dave said:

That soul, Soren - it\'s a tribute to your poetic skill that you almost convinced me I have one.

February 6th, 2024 08:56

Everything has a price
Accidental Poet said:

For without the mind, heart and soul the body would be no more than a lifeless lump of flesh and bones. Excellently penned soren. 😁👍

February 6th, 2024 07:44

Everything has a price
Teddy.15 said:

I would never sell my soul I love my soul. lol yes 🤣 mixing it up today my dear Sorenbarret

February 6th, 2024 06:09

Everything has a price
orchidee said:

Good write SB.
What is the price of Humble Pie? £1.99? $1.99?

February 6th, 2024 05:36

Everything has a price
Teddy.15 said:

How very interesting and I\'m sure we all have different views which in its self is inspiring. As ever written with a magnificent pen. ❤️

February 6th, 2024 05:26

Against all we want to believe
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words soren, each of our poems birth comes like this.

Andy

February 6th, 2024 02:37

Against all we want to believe
Bella Shepard said:

The embryo bears the print of its progenitor, and this poem the inimitable print of its creator. Beautifully versed in style, flow, and rhyme, the progeny is perfect.

February 5th, 2024 15:30

Against all we want to believe
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work and great use of rhyme.

February 5th, 2024 10:24

Against all we want to believe
Christina8 said:

Excellent poem, SB! I liked that the poem is \'\'formed with love and birthed in pain\'\'\' Some of my poems are, so I can relate. Such a descriptive poem you have, I enjoyed reading it!

February 5th, 2024 10:10

Against all we want to believe
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

February 5th, 2024 08:44

Against all we want to believe
Accidental Poet said:

An interesting idea of the birth of a poem. Great work soren. 😉👍

February 5th, 2024 07:05

Against all we want to believe
Doggerel Dave said:

An odd process, but you\'ve got its essence, I believe Soren. After its birth, the process, as you point out, is ever evolving. Thanks for some poetic clarity here.

February 5th, 2024 06:26

Against all we want to believe
Teddy.15 said:

Dear sorenbarret

You have just described the birth of a poem perfectly
A poem like an embryo begins in the mind,

more than often conceived in the blind.

Created and born of a kind.

Its nature set and defined

Wow loved all the stanza\'s but what language you do use. Simply beautiful. And yes mine are ever evolving. Kudos. ❤️


February 5th, 2024 05:27

Transformation
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes we must all mover on in our lives soren.

Andy

February 5th, 2024 02:27

Transformation
arqios said:

Before and after!

February 4th, 2024 22:11

Transformation
Thomas W Case said:

Here\'s to new beginnings. Cheers.

February 4th, 2024 13:00

Transformation
Parisab said:

Simple and beautifully clean!

February 4th, 2024 12:38

Transformation
Accidental Poet said:

Inspiration comes in many ways and from many sources. You and Teddy of such sources. 😉👍

February 4th, 2024 11:16



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