Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Synchronicity
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, you’ve taken the blender blade to chronology and somehow blended it into clarity. The way you move through time here...fluid, fragmented, looping...it reminds me of the \"gravity wells\" we create just by living. A stunning piece of metaphysical poetry. Wonderful job, friend. A fave! 🌹👏
July 16th, 2025 08:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, you’ve taken the blender blade to chronology and somehow blended it into clarity. The way you move through time here...fluid, fragmented, looping...it reminds me of the \"gravity wells\" we create just by living. A stunning piece of metaphysical poetry. Wonderful job, friend. A fave! 🌹👏
July 16th, 2025 08:02
Synchronicity
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite and so very true. 🌹 The poetry on here today has spoken loudly in my heart and it brings me such peace, thank you dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
July 16th, 2025 07:45
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite and so very true. 🌹 The poetry on here today has spoken loudly in my heart and it brings me such peace, thank you dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
July 16th, 2025 07:45
Synchronicity
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Synchronicity\" explores the concept of time as a non-linear and cyclical experience, suggesting that past, present, and future are interconnected. It reflects on the limitations of human perception in understanding the vastness of time and existence. You seem to aim to provoke thought about the nature of time and our relationship with it, encouraging readers to consider their place within the continuum of history and existence. It invites reflection on the cyclical nature of life and the inevitability of time’s passage.
July 16th, 2025 07:15
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Synchronicity\" explores the concept of time as a non-linear and cyclical experience, suggesting that past, present, and future are interconnected. It reflects on the limitations of human perception in understanding the vastness of time and existence. You seem to aim to provoke thought about the nature of time and our relationship with it, encouraging readers to consider their place within the continuum of history and existence. It invites reflection on the cyclical nature of life and the inevitability of time’s passage.
July 16th, 2025 07:15
Double
ElizabethMoroz said:
Love this one - great scientific metaphysical and physical and philosophical exploration conveying concepts so cleverly throughout the piece. This one was a joy to read- your concise ability to deliver complex subject matter with brevity is deeply admirable. Well done again Sir! Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 16th, 2025 07:12
ElizabethMoroz said:
Love this one - great scientific metaphysical and physical and philosophical exploration conveying concepts so cleverly throughout the piece. This one was a joy to read- your concise ability to deliver complex subject matter with brevity is deeply admirable. Well done again Sir! Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 16th, 2025 07:12
Probability
ElizabethMoroz said:
Rich thematic depth and expansive philosophical inquiry . I love the concept of their being “no year” in your exploration of time and the human condition. Thankyou this one is soul enriching . Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 16th, 2025 07:08
ElizabethMoroz said:
Rich thematic depth and expansive philosophical inquiry . I love the concept of their being “no year” in your exploration of time and the human condition. Thankyou this one is soul enriching . Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 16th, 2025 07:08
Visit with a dream
ElizabethMoroz said:
Again such great rhyme in here. I love the turns of phrase you use. Is it indicative of a certain culture or ethnicity pardon my ignorance or is it just colloquial creative expressions that you are using? The abbreviated words really fit the rhyme scheme well and the overall descriptive imagery and warmth in the tonal ideas of the poem had me pondering about friendship and stew & human relationships and the warmth of good hospitality. Thankyou thoroughly enjoyed this composition. Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 16th, 2025 07:04
ElizabethMoroz said:
Again such great rhyme in here. I love the turns of phrase you use. Is it indicative of a certain culture or ethnicity pardon my ignorance or is it just colloquial creative expressions that you are using? The abbreviated words really fit the rhyme scheme well and the overall descriptive imagery and warmth in the tonal ideas of the poem had me pondering about friendship and stew & human relationships and the warmth of good hospitality. Thankyou thoroughly enjoyed this composition. Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 16th, 2025 07:04
Synchronicity
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
Tomorrow never comes and yesterday never goes so how can they exist in the vacuum of a life lived in the spin of a bottle. Once again your brain is working overtime and how we the readers benefit and enjoy the fruits of your toil. Keep it up my, good fellow.
Wishing you the very best,
Tony.
July 16th, 2025 06:17
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
Tomorrow never comes and yesterday never goes so how can they exist in the vacuum of a life lived in the spin of a bottle. Once again your brain is working overtime and how we the readers benefit and enjoy the fruits of your toil. Keep it up my, good fellow.
Wishing you the very best,
Tony.
July 16th, 2025 06:17
Synchronicity
Poetic Licence said:
Is this suggestion that time is already allocated and will be what it is destined to be, so no point chasing it, probably not but it\'s an enjoyable puzzle to read
July 16th, 2025 05:28
Poetic Licence said:
Is this suggestion that time is already allocated and will be what it is destined to be, so no point chasing it, probably not but it\'s an enjoyable puzzle to read
July 16th, 2025 05:28
Equal but not the same
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren about todays complex understanding of sexual identity.
Andy
July 16th, 2025 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren about todays complex understanding of sexual identity.
Andy
July 16th, 2025 00:55
What is perfect
Bella Mae Marshall said:
beautiful. simply beautiful poem from start to finish. could read it a hundred times
July 15th, 2025 17:10
Bella Mae Marshall said:
beautiful. simply beautiful poem from start to finish. could read it a hundred times
July 15th, 2025 17:10
Equal but not the same
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Soren, this is quite clever and complex...riddled with paradox and metaphor, yet rooted in something real. And in it, you’re asking the reader to reimagine strength, purpose, and identity through unconventional forms. It’s not just wordplay...it’s worldview. Nicely done, my dear friend. 🌹👏
July 15th, 2025 14:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Soren, this is quite clever and complex...riddled with paradox and metaphor, yet rooted in something real. And in it, you’re asking the reader to reimagine strength, purpose, and identity through unconventional forms. It’s not just wordplay...it’s worldview. Nicely done, my dear friend. 🌹👏
July 15th, 2025 14:26
Equal but not the same
Teddy.15 said:
Brave Bravo Bravo. So incredibly poetic and a theme that is so deeply comforting today. We should all accept and be accepted. 🌹
July 15th, 2025 11:16
Teddy.15 said:
Brave Bravo Bravo. So incredibly poetic and a theme that is so deeply comforting today. We should all accept and be accepted. 🌹
July 15th, 2025 11:16
Crazy sonnet
Tony Grannell said:
Oh my! Soren,
This is hard and as raw as it can get. Of a life from a head injury to a prison cell and the complete and utter shocking and horrific awfulness in between. A man possessed - to condemn or to understand, the latter; most difficult as one\'s concentration is centred on the the terrible history of the prisoner, with time one remembers the victims; the three young girls murdered and then to commit the crime of necrophilia, impossible to stomach. A hard-hitting poem, shot from the hip with the power that only a true poet can express. Excellent!
Wishing you the very best,
Tony.
July 15th, 2025 10:02
Tony Grannell said:
Oh my! Soren,
This is hard and as raw as it can get. Of a life from a head injury to a prison cell and the complete and utter shocking and horrific awfulness in between. A man possessed - to condemn or to understand, the latter; most difficult as one\'s concentration is centred on the the terrible history of the prisoner, with time one remembers the victims; the three young girls murdered and then to commit the crime of necrophilia, impossible to stomach. A hard-hitting poem, shot from the hip with the power that only a true poet can express. Excellent!
Wishing you the very best,
Tony.
July 15th, 2025 10:02
Equal but not the same
Damaso said:
Wow, I felt like I was wandering somewhere else. I got lost in the text and its dramas with hidden morals. Thank you so much, I really enjoyed it. Best regards.
July 15th, 2025 09:28
Damaso said:
Wow, I felt like I was wandering somewhere else. I got lost in the text and its dramas with hidden morals. Thank you so much, I really enjoyed it. Best regards.
July 15th, 2025 09:28
Crazy sonnet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This one stares straight into the abyss and doesn’t blink, my dear friend. You’ve taken madness, war, trauma, and horror and laid it bare in relentless rhythm. It\'s disturbing, yes, but also deeply human in its descent. Not for the faint of heart, but masterfully rendered, Soren. 🌹👏 A must fave for me.
July 15th, 2025 08:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This one stares straight into the abyss and doesn’t blink, my dear friend. You’ve taken madness, war, trauma, and horror and laid it bare in relentless rhythm. It\'s disturbing, yes, but also deeply human in its descent. Not for the faint of heart, but masterfully rendered, Soren. 🌹👏 A must fave for me.
July 15th, 2025 08:43
Equal but not the same
Priya Tomar said:
You have raised a voice for gender identity through this poetry.
Very well, you are a born poet
July 15th, 2025 06:01
Priya Tomar said:
You have raised a voice for gender identity through this poetry.
Very well, you are a born poet
July 15th, 2025 06:01
What you can\'t accept in yourself
Priya Tomar said:
Very beautiful
\"Severe protection a must, total lack of trust\" caught my eyes.
July 15th, 2025 05:51
Priya Tomar said:
Very beautiful
\"Severe protection a must, total lack of trust\" caught my eyes.
July 15th, 2025 05:51
Equal but not the same
Friendship said:
Whoa, a bit of a brain teaser! Your poem explores the fluidity of gender identity and the complexity of human relationships. It suggests that while individuals may identify as different genders, they share commonalities and deserve respect and acceptance. It challenges traditional notions of gender roles and emphasizes that both masculine and feminine qualities can coexist. The poet serves to challenge preconceived notions of gender and identity, encouraging readers to embrace diversity and accept the complexity of human experiences. It aims to foster understanding and respect for all individuals, regardless of their gender identity or expression.
July 15th, 2025 05:49
Friendship said:
Whoa, a bit of a brain teaser! Your poem explores the fluidity of gender identity and the complexity of human relationships. It suggests that while individuals may identify as different genders, they share commonalities and deserve respect and acceptance. It challenges traditional notions of gender roles and emphasizes that both masculine and feminine qualities can coexist. The poet serves to challenge preconceived notions of gender and identity, encouraging readers to embrace diversity and accept the complexity of human experiences. It aims to foster understanding and respect for all individuals, regardless of their gender identity or expression.
July 15th, 2025 05:49
Equal but not the same
Poetic Licence said:
Although many things are different everything has it\'s own strengths, loved this one, enjoyed the read
July 15th, 2025 05:43
Poetic Licence said:
Although many things are different everything has it\'s own strengths, loved this one, enjoyed the read
July 15th, 2025 05:43
Equal but not the same
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
Your poem beautifully explores identity and transformation, using vivid metaphors to show that strength and value can come in unexpected forms. It’s a thoughtful reflection on gender, perception, and the importance of embracing differences. Very well written!!!
July 15th, 2025 05:38
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
Your poem beautifully explores identity and transformation, using vivid metaphors to show that strength and value can come in unexpected forms. It’s a thoughtful reflection on gender, perception, and the importance of embracing differences. Very well written!!!
July 15th, 2025 05:38
Why me?
ElizabethMoroz said:
Again there is such playful rhythm among serious subject matter . I am so delighted to read your work with rhythm Sir. The internal rhythmic structure of this piece really bounces and propels it forward. (I love to rhyme myself and really do find your sense of rhythm wonderful!... You have an excellent internal metronome with words. Thankyou your poetry uplifted my day. Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 15th, 2025 03:02
ElizabethMoroz said:
Again there is such playful rhythm among serious subject matter . I am so delighted to read your work with rhythm Sir. The internal rhythmic structure of this piece really bounces and propels it forward. (I love to rhyme myself and really do find your sense of rhythm wonderful!... You have an excellent internal metronome with words. Thankyou your poetry uplifted my day. Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 15th, 2025 03:02
Don\'t mix them up
ElizabethMoroz said:
A spiritual warning tied up with the gift of rhyme among its multiple warnings and comparisons -wise words indeed! Thought provoking and imagery rich as well as being structurally and rhythmically deft and melodic. Thankyou again for the inspired work! Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 15th, 2025 02:34
ElizabethMoroz said:
A spiritual warning tied up with the gift of rhyme among its multiple warnings and comparisons -wise words indeed! Thought provoking and imagery rich as well as being structurally and rhythmically deft and melodic. Thankyou again for the inspired work! Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 15th, 2025 02:34
Lost art
NafisaSB said:
agree with your thoughtful message about memories, and how they transform
Great work
July 14th, 2025 23:31
NafisaSB said:
agree with your thoughtful message about memories, and how they transform
Great work
July 14th, 2025 23:31
Crazy sonnet
Poetic Licence said:
A tale of a man whose fall into the world of madness and violence was never of his own making , his path was decided the day he had the accident, nicely expressed and written
July 14th, 2025 22:50
Poetic Licence said:
A tale of a man whose fall into the world of madness and violence was never of his own making , his path was decided the day he had the accident, nicely expressed and written
July 14th, 2025 22:50
Crazy sonnet
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your \'Crazy Sonnet\' is haunting and raw, gripping with its dark narrative and unflinching imagery. The relentless rhythm mirrors the protagonist\'s descent into madness, leaving a chilling impact. A stark, unforgettable piece.
July 14th, 2025 12:54
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your \'Crazy Sonnet\' is haunting and raw, gripping with its dark narrative and unflinching imagery. The relentless rhythm mirrors the protagonist\'s descent into madness, leaving a chilling impact. A stark, unforgettable piece.
July 14th, 2025 12:54
Crazy sonnet
arqios said:
Too wild to be untrue, it’s elements a poem would not subdue but made to sparkle thru however great the topic to rue.
July 14th, 2025 12:49
arqios said:
Too wild to be untrue, it’s elements a poem would not subdue but made to sparkle thru however great the topic to rue.
July 14th, 2025 12:49
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