Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Night of dream dust
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite poetry an infinity of imagery and made me feel really sad, they say the truth hurts and your words are marvelous beautiful poetry my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
February 23rd, 2025 05:09
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite poetry an infinity of imagery and made me feel really sad, they say the truth hurts and your words are marvelous beautiful poetry my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
February 23rd, 2025 05:09
Night of dream dust
Mutley Ravishes said:
Here\'s the deal Mutley : You can be comfortable all the time, but you will be numb!
February 23rd, 2025 04:42
Mutley Ravishes said:
Here\'s the deal Mutley : You can be comfortable all the time, but you will be numb!
February 23rd, 2025 04:42
Reeling one in
Salvia.S said:
Beautiful poem with a soothing and uplifting quality!
February 23rd, 2025 01:24
Salvia.S said:
Beautiful poem with a soothing and uplifting quality!
February 23rd, 2025 01:24
Reeling one in
NinjaGirl said:
I think you have a good enough fish trap for us!
February 22nd, 2025 19:40
NinjaGirl said:
I think you have a good enough fish trap for us!
February 22nd, 2025 19:40
Reeling one in
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah fishing...and what a metaphor for writing too...often feels like fishing. And the worst is when the fish aren\'t biting. This gets a fave for sure! Well done! 🌹👏
February 22nd, 2025 09:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah fishing...and what a metaphor for writing too...often feels like fishing. And the worst is when the fish aren\'t biting. This gets a fave for sure! Well done! 🌹👏
February 22nd, 2025 09:49
Reeling one in
Teddy.15 said:
lol catching a fish without a hook, now that\'s something I would try to do, 🤣 I guess sometimes things aren\'t meant to be caught, a most wonderful amusing write dear sorrenbarret 🌹
February 22nd, 2025 07:23
Teddy.15 said:
lol catching a fish without a hook, now that\'s something I would try to do, 🤣 I guess sometimes things aren\'t meant to be caught, a most wonderful amusing write dear sorrenbarret 🌹
February 22nd, 2025 07:23
Reeling one in
arqios said:
In real time I haven’t fished for about 25 years which bothers me to no end… and also in real time, poeting as with everything else these days, feels like fishing… I find if I just let loose, and that I have from time to time… hardly anyone would have a taste for my poetry… so what should the ratios be in the give and take… it changes from day to day and from case to case… (sigh) 🙏🏻🕊
February 22nd, 2025 06:16
arqios said:
In real time I haven’t fished for about 25 years which bothers me to no end… and also in real time, poeting as with everything else these days, feels like fishing… I find if I just let loose, and that I have from time to time… hardly anyone would have a taste for my poetry… so what should the ratios be in the give and take… it changes from day to day and from case to case… (sigh) 🙏🏻🕊
February 22nd, 2025 06:16
Reeling one in
David Wakeling said:
The poet and the fisherman both trying to secure a catch.Great poem
February 22nd, 2025 04:50
David Wakeling said:
The poet and the fisherman both trying to secure a catch.Great poem
February 22nd, 2025 04:50
Reeling one in
Poetic Licence said:
Enjoyed today\'s read, have a great weekend
February 22nd, 2025 04:26
Poetic Licence said:
Enjoyed today\'s read, have a great weekend
February 22nd, 2025 04:26
Reeling one in
Goldfinch60 said:
In my younger days I used to go fishing every weekend, a great time was had sitting there with Nature.
Andy
February 22nd, 2025 03:09
Goldfinch60 said:
In my younger days I used to go fishing every weekend, a great time was had sitting there with Nature.
Andy
February 22nd, 2025 03:09
Flies
Goldfinch60 said:
Those who have all steal from those who have nothing soren. Good anomaly.
Andy
February 22nd, 2025 02:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Those who have all steal from those who have nothing soren. Good anomaly.
Andy
February 22nd, 2025 02:58
Reeling one in
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I went fishing for KP\'s supper. I caught an old boot so I cooked that for her instead. lol.
February 22nd, 2025 02:46
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I went fishing for KP\'s supper. I caught an old boot so I cooked that for her instead. lol.
February 22nd, 2025 02:46
Record Player
faie said:
I enjoyed the poem. Reading it made me think of the record spinning on the turntable and how carefree life becomes at that moment when the music sounds.
February 21st, 2025 21:59
faie said:
I enjoyed the poem. Reading it made me think of the record spinning on the turntable and how carefree life becomes at that moment when the music sounds.
February 21st, 2025 21:59
Flies
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is a amazing. The flies almost took on super human status as they dictated the scene.Good fun Well done
February 21st, 2025 16:03
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is a amazing. The flies almost took on super human status as they dictated the scene.Good fun Well done
February 21st, 2025 16:03
Flies
Friendship said:
This was a very challenging one, Soren, Your poem revolves around the frustration and disgust experienced when food, typically a source of pleasure and nourishment, is tainted by the presence of flies. It reflects on the loss of purity and enjoyment in a meal due to external, unsanitary influences, symbolizing broader themes of decay, contamination, and the inevitability of nature\'s intrusion into human life. Yet it also seems that The flies are a metaphor for uncontrollable and unwelcome aspects of life that spoil what is otherwise enjoyable. Serves to highlight the fragility of human experiences, particularly those related to pleasure and nourishment, and reflects on how nature, in the form of flies, can intrude upon and taint those experiences. It evokes a broader commentary on the inevitability of decay and the challenges of maintaining purity in life.
February 21st, 2025 15:05
Friendship said:
This was a very challenging one, Soren, Your poem revolves around the frustration and disgust experienced when food, typically a source of pleasure and nourishment, is tainted by the presence of flies. It reflects on the loss of purity and enjoyment in a meal due to external, unsanitary influences, symbolizing broader themes of decay, contamination, and the inevitability of nature\'s intrusion into human life. Yet it also seems that The flies are a metaphor for uncontrollable and unwelcome aspects of life that spoil what is otherwise enjoyable. Serves to highlight the fragility of human experiences, particularly those related to pleasure and nourishment, and reflects on how nature, in the form of flies, can intrude upon and taint those experiences. It evokes a broader commentary on the inevitability of decay and the challenges of maintaining purity in life.
February 21st, 2025 15:05
Fear
Friendship said:
Soren, Your poem aims to evoke empathy and provoke thought about the human condition, particularly regarding the relationship between past actions and present suffering. It serves as a reflection on vulnerability and the haunting nature of unresolved pain. You painted an imagery that evokes a sense of being trapped in one\'s own body and the haunting memory of past sins. The language you use is raw and evocative, with words like \"naked,\" \"homeless,\" and \"pain\" conjuring a stark sense of vulnerability. Yet your words like \"death bell\'s knell\" and \"bug prickles\" emphasize sensory experiences tied to suffering and discomfort as if one could comprehend yet remain oblivious to it.
February 21st, 2025 12:29
Friendship said:
Soren, Your poem aims to evoke empathy and provoke thought about the human condition, particularly regarding the relationship between past actions and present suffering. It serves as a reflection on vulnerability and the haunting nature of unresolved pain. You painted an imagery that evokes a sense of being trapped in one\'s own body and the haunting memory of past sins. The language you use is raw and evocative, with words like \"naked,\" \"homeless,\" and \"pain\" conjuring a stark sense of vulnerability. Yet your words like \"death bell\'s knell\" and \"bug prickles\" emphasize sensory experiences tied to suffering and discomfort as if one could comprehend yet remain oblivious to it.
February 21st, 2025 12:29
Flies
NinjaGirl said:
I hate flies! Some people know what\'s not theirs but chose to continue anyway...
February 21st, 2025 12:21
NinjaGirl said:
I hate flies! Some people know what\'s not theirs but chose to continue anyway...
February 21st, 2025 12:21
Flies
orchidee said:
They only live 3 weeks anyway, I read somewhere. Ahh. Maggot Pie for KP\'s supper tonight. But Fido and I are having roast beef! lol.
February 21st, 2025 11:21
orchidee said:
They only live 3 weeks anyway, I read somewhere. Ahh. Maggot Pie for KP\'s supper tonight. But Fido and I are having roast beef! lol.
February 21st, 2025 11:21
Flies
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, this one 🪰 would make for a great read at the start of fasting! 🪰 LOL! Obviously many metaphors here, but I chose to read this as is 🪰 and...I\'ll pass the plate! 🤣 🌹👏 Seriously, well done on this brilliant piece, Soren. Observational poetry that really can work on so many other levels. A must fave for me. 🪰
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February 21st, 2025 11:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, this one 🪰 would make for a great read at the start of fasting! 🪰 LOL! Obviously many metaphors here, but I chose to read this as is 🪰 and...I\'ll pass the plate! 🤣 🌹👏 Seriously, well done on this brilliant piece, Soren. Observational poetry that really can work on so many other levels. A must fave for me. 🪰
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February 21st, 2025 11:17
Flies
2781 said:
It\'s enough to turn you off your food. Thing is, they know a good meal when they see one.
February 21st, 2025 09:06
2781 said:
It\'s enough to turn you off your food. Thing is, they know a good meal when they see one.
February 21st, 2025 09:06
Flies
Doggerel Dave said:
I seem to remember you riffed on this topic before, Soren. Got something against the little buggers, have yer?
A well vented piece.
February 21st, 2025 07:48
Doggerel Dave said:
I seem to remember you riffed on this topic before, Soren. Got something against the little buggers, have yer?
A well vented piece.
February 21st, 2025 07:48
Flies
Cassie58 said:
No one likes flies in their food. How rude of the flies to invite themselves to lunch. Why do they do it? Well all creatures have to live and need nourishment. This poem is rich in metaphor and has many meanings. Flies actually get bad press. Without them we would be up to our eyes in dead and rotting bodies and filth. That I learned from my biology lessons. Best just swat them away. Your metaphors are quite amazing sorenbarrett. Thinking outside the box all the time. A poem enjoyed.
February 21st, 2025 07:26
Cassie58 said:
No one likes flies in their food. How rude of the flies to invite themselves to lunch. Why do they do it? Well all creatures have to live and need nourishment. This poem is rich in metaphor and has many meanings. Flies actually get bad press. Without them we would be up to our eyes in dead and rotting bodies and filth. That I learned from my biology lessons. Best just swat them away. Your metaphors are quite amazing sorenbarrett. Thinking outside the box all the time. A poem enjoyed.
February 21st, 2025 07:26
Flies
Mutley Ravishes said:
The big fish eat the little ones!
That was a fun read, Soren.
February 21st, 2025 07:18
Mutley Ravishes said:
The big fish eat the little ones!
That was a fun read, Soren.
February 21st, 2025 07:18
Flies
Poetic Licence said:
On the fun side of this write I hate flies with a passion, on the serious side there are many messages in this write. How it needs one bad thing to go unchecked then it quickly multiplies, how greed becomes a disease, the more they the more they want etc etc, very nicely written and really enjoyed the read
February 21st, 2025 06:16
Poetic Licence said:
On the fun side of this write I hate flies with a passion, on the serious side there are many messages in this write. How it needs one bad thing to go unchecked then it quickly multiplies, how greed becomes a disease, the more they the more they want etc etc, very nicely written and really enjoyed the read
February 21st, 2025 06:16
Flies
arqios said:
The onset of a maggoty process, I’m afraid… prevention is always more effective than curative measures… 🙏🏻
February 21st, 2025 06:08
arqios said:
The onset of a maggoty process, I’m afraid… prevention is always more effective than curative measures… 🙏🏻
February 21st, 2025 06:08
Flies
Teddy.15 said:
I\'d say this is about greed, I see the generosity of the peaceful narrator acceptance of what is going on, knowing he cannot change it, he reflects on what good he can get from the bad situation. I would go as far to say this could also be about politics. But who am I to say. 🌹 Ah yes lots to munch on. 🌹
February 21st, 2025 04:34
Teddy.15 said:
I\'d say this is about greed, I see the generosity of the peaceful narrator acceptance of what is going on, knowing he cannot change it, he reflects on what good he can get from the bad situation. I would go as far to say this could also be about politics. But who am I to say. 🌹 Ah yes lots to munch on. 🌹
February 21st, 2025 04:34
Relics of the lost
Emile Dubois said:
Beautiful, I guess even in dementia the mind has the key, and yet one is sadly lost to oneself. Thanks for a stimulating read
February 21st, 2025 03:11
Emile Dubois said:
Beautiful, I guess even in dementia the mind has the key, and yet one is sadly lost to oneself. Thanks for a stimulating read
February 21st, 2025 03:11
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