Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Fire, earth, air and water
orchidee said:
\'Skirt of dirt\' is surely metaphorical, but it\'s what I\'m literally gonna do to KP. I\'m not gonna do her washing for a year! lol.
October 5th, 2025 04:25
orchidee said:
\'Skirt of dirt\' is surely metaphorical, but it\'s what I\'m literally gonna do to KP. I\'m not gonna do her washing for a year! lol.
October 5th, 2025 04:25
To an old dog
Goldfinch60 said:
Dogs can always be in our memories soren, I certainly remember the dogs in my life.
Andy
October 5th, 2025 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Dogs can always be in our memories soren, I certainly remember the dogs in my life.
Andy
October 5th, 2025 01:18
To an old dog
Poetic Licence said:
I feel there is way more to this than I want to get involved in, but on a lighter note,years ago my Alsatian put me in hospital when we were playing football, I went to head the ball, she went to head it, I lost she bit into my head. Enjoy the rest of your weekend
October 4th, 2025 09:13
Poetic Licence said:
I feel there is way more to this than I want to get involved in, but on a lighter note,years ago my Alsatian put me in hospital when we were playing football, I went to head the ball, she went to head it, I lost she bit into my head. Enjoy the rest of your weekend
October 4th, 2025 09:13
To an old dog
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a lovely piece. Loyal dog, misunderstood friend, poetic fog...those four-legged, furry companions in our lives who stay true despite everything. Grateful for this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Makes me think of my ol\' dog, Chloe. Just passed in May. 😢
October 4th, 2025 08:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a lovely piece. Loyal dog, misunderstood friend, poetic fog...those four-legged, furry companions in our lives who stay true despite everything. Grateful for this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Makes me think of my ol\' dog, Chloe. Just passed in May. 😢
October 4th, 2025 08:34
Lost music of the forest
Favour Rubyson Kharnaior said:
Beautiful balance of doubt and wonder.
October 4th, 2025 08:16
Favour Rubyson Kharnaior said:
Beautiful balance of doubt and wonder.
October 4th, 2025 08:16
To an old dog
Friendship said:
Well written, Sorenbarrett. Your poem is about a dog, loyalty, and misunderstanding, but I think it\'s more about the transformative power of human connection, highlighting how misunderstandings can arise from differing perspectives, and how we can sometimes misinterpret things. Apparently, you miss the person you were corresponding with, and you hold no grudges. Still, instead, you\'re extending an olive branch, letting that person know it was all just a big misunderstanding, and you genuinely desire to rekindle your friendship.
October 4th, 2025 07:58
Friendship said:
Well written, Sorenbarrett. Your poem is about a dog, loyalty, and misunderstanding, but I think it\'s more about the transformative power of human connection, highlighting how misunderstandings can arise from differing perspectives, and how we can sometimes misinterpret things. Apparently, you miss the person you were corresponding with, and you hold no grudges. Still, instead, you\'re extending an olive branch, letting that person know it was all just a big misunderstanding, and you genuinely desire to rekindle your friendship.
October 4th, 2025 07:58
To an old dog
orchidee said:
We do miss them - pets are pet of the family. And now my poem: To an old trout who I won\'t miss at all! You knows her. lol. I would miss Fido 100 times more. heehee.
October 4th, 2025 06:38
orchidee said:
We do miss them - pets are pet of the family. And now my poem: To an old trout who I won\'t miss at all! You knows her. lol. I would miss Fido 100 times more. heehee.
October 4th, 2025 06:38
To an old dog
Paul Bell said:
It is strange, but I\'ve never heard of a dog stabbing you in the back.
Sadly, can\'t be said for the other lot. Probably why dogs rock.
October 4th, 2025 04:20
Paul Bell said:
It is strange, but I\'ve never heard of a dog stabbing you in the back.
Sadly, can\'t be said for the other lot. Probably why dogs rock.
October 4th, 2025 04:20
To an old dog
Michael Edwards said:
Great write - I would miss my little Stanley so much - the best companion I could ask for so loving and always by my side - currently asleep on the arm of a chair after his walk - or should I say our walk.
October 4th, 2025 03:30
Michael Edwards said:
Great write - I would miss my little Stanley so much - the best companion I could ask for so loving and always by my side - currently asleep on the arm of a chair after his walk - or should I say our walk.
October 4th, 2025 03:30
Holes in our day
Poetic Licence said:
All the signs of old age which I display very well, wear and tear physically and mentally and the increasing lack of ability for the body like nature, to repair it\'s self, have fun
October 4th, 2025 00:23
Poetic Licence said:
All the signs of old age which I display very well, wear and tear physically and mentally and the increasing lack of ability for the body like nature, to repair it\'s self, have fun
October 4th, 2025 00:23
Degrees
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This poem reminded me of quantum physics where our usual expectations of definitives get defeated. Beautifully rendered- non deterministic yet not ambiguous.
October 3rd, 2025 09:09
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This poem reminded me of quantum physics where our usual expectations of definitives get defeated. Beautifully rendered- non deterministic yet not ambiguous.
October 3rd, 2025 09:09
Lost music of the forest
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Funnily enough, for me the difining lines were \"Walking toward it the sound diminished, fading off into only creaking trees\". They told me tbat for a few things a look or hear from afar is more appropriate than a look under the microscope. Belief is such a thing.
Apologies for misinterpretation.
October 3rd, 2025 08:51
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Funnily enough, for me the difining lines were \"Walking toward it the sound diminished, fading off into only creaking trees\". They told me tbat for a few things a look or hear from afar is more appropriate than a look under the microscope. Belief is such a thing.
Apologies for misinterpretation.
October 3rd, 2025 08:51
Holes in our day
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Stunning poem. The last line \" dreams grew of rhyme\'s rust\" was phenomenal.
October 3rd, 2025 08:34
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Stunning poem. The last line \" dreams grew of rhyme\'s rust\" was phenomenal.
October 3rd, 2025 08:34
Holes in our day
Paul Bell said:
Life is a good-worn path and maybe dreams are more distant now, but we plough through, cos life is still a great journey.
The pencil is still sharp, and the words still go together.
October 3rd, 2025 08:18
Paul Bell said:
Life is a good-worn path and maybe dreams are more distant now, but we plough through, cos life is still a great journey.
The pencil is still sharp, and the words still go together.
October 3rd, 2025 08:18
Holes in our day
Soman Ragavan said:
A good depiction of life, of destiny, of our experiences. Like roots, we struggle to make a future, to safeguard ourselves.
October 3rd, 2025 07:44
Soman Ragavan said:
A good depiction of life, of destiny, of our experiences. Like roots, we struggle to make a future, to safeguard ourselves.
October 3rd, 2025 07:44
Holes in our day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is beautifully layered. The cracks, roots, and worn paths unfold as metaphors for time, wear, and memory itself. Always grateful for your craft, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 3rd, 2025 07:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is beautifully layered. The cracks, roots, and worn paths unfold as metaphors for time, wear, and memory itself. Always grateful for your craft, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 3rd, 2025 07:25
Holes in our day
Mike Prestridge said:
This is great. Please forgive me for my short comments, as I am new to poetry and am not sure what I am looking for in order to critique. I can appreciate good writing, though and that\'s what I would consider this.
October 3rd, 2025 06:33
Mike Prestridge said:
This is great. Please forgive me for my short comments, as I am new to poetry and am not sure what I am looking for in order to critique. I can appreciate good writing, though and that\'s what I would consider this.
October 3rd, 2025 06:33
Holes in our day
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the tension between nature and human constructs, reflecting on the passage of time, the resilience of life, and the fragility of human character. It suggests that despite efforts to build a strong and enduring foundation (symbolized by bricks and caring deeds), nature finds a way to infiltrate and challenge those constructs.
October 3rd, 2025 06:16
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the tension between nature and human constructs, reflecting on the passage of time, the resilience of life, and the fragility of human character. It suggests that despite efforts to build a strong and enduring foundation (symbolized by bricks and caring deeds), nature finds a way to infiltrate and challenge those constructs.
October 3rd, 2025 06:16
Lost music of the forest
Goldfinch60 said:
The sounds of Nature ae wonderous Soren.
Andy
October 3rd, 2025 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
The sounds of Nature ae wonderous Soren.
Andy
October 3rd, 2025 01:47
Lost music of the forest
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is powerful. You frame doubt and longing as a hymn in the breeze...something glimpsed, sought, and elusive. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 2nd, 2025 16:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is powerful. You frame doubt and longing as a hymn in the breeze...something glimpsed, sought, and elusive. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 2nd, 2025 16:49
Lost music of the forest
arqios said:
That has happened to me as well on occasion, Soren. 🕊️🙏🏻
October 2nd, 2025 16:02
arqios said:
That has happened to me as well on occasion, Soren. 🕊️🙏🏻
October 2nd, 2025 16:02
Lost music of the forest
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the tension between skepticism and belief, particularly in the context of nature and the ethereal. It reflects on the beauty of the natural world and the elusive quality of its music, suggesting that even if one does not believe in supernatural entities, there are experiences in nature that evoke a sense of wonder and mystery.
October 2nd, 2025 06:48
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the tension between skepticism and belief, particularly in the context of nature and the ethereal. It reflects on the beauty of the natural world and the elusive quality of its music, suggesting that even if one does not believe in supernatural entities, there are experiences in nature that evoke a sense of wonder and mystery.
October 2nd, 2025 06:48
Shaping
William Hromada said:
Compost of past day\'s thoughts, growth from what rots!!’ What a thought!
October 2nd, 2025 04:42
William Hromada said:
Compost of past day\'s thoughts, growth from what rots!!’ What a thought!
October 2nd, 2025 04:42
Read
Aman 12 said:
poetry bleeds to feed the mind...the alliteration is working really well.
October 2nd, 2025 02:22
Aman 12 said:
poetry bleeds to feed the mind...the alliteration is working really well.
October 2nd, 2025 02:22
Indigestion
Tom Dylan said:
So much packed into those lines. A fine write, Soren.
October 2nd, 2025 02:15
Tom Dylan said:
So much packed into those lines. A fine write, Soren.
October 2nd, 2025 02:15
Shaping
Goldfinch60 said:
That valve often needs opening to bring glory into our lives soren.
Andy
October 2nd, 2025 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
That valve often needs opening to bring glory into our lives soren.
Andy
October 2nd, 2025 01:14
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