Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
Mutley Ravishes said:
What a mess! Is planet Earth a dumping ground for all the basket cases of the Universe?! Wait a minute, I\'m here too!!
March 12th, 2025 18:37
Mutley Ravishes said:
What a mess! Is planet Earth a dumping ground for all the basket cases of the Universe?! Wait a minute, I\'m here too!!
March 12th, 2025 18:37
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
arqios said:
So commenced the crises of the no-longer-existent🙏🏻🕊
March 12th, 2025 17:36
arqios said:
So commenced the crises of the no-longer-existent🙏🏻🕊
March 12th, 2025 17:36
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Sorrenbarret, you have hit so many of the sore points in which I dislike about our world, who would have ever thought these things up 30 years ago? I\'m glad I was born in the 70\'s I have seen a lot of wonderful things but also a lot I wish I hadn\'t. 🌹 Brilliant ❤️ some days I would definitely return my husband lol 🤣
March 12th, 2025 16:59
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Sorrenbarret, you have hit so many of the sore points in which I dislike about our world, who would have ever thought these things up 30 years ago? I\'m glad I was born in the 70\'s I have seen a lot of wonderful things but also a lot I wish I hadn\'t. 🌹 Brilliant ❤️ some days I would definitely return my husband lol 🤣
March 12th, 2025 16:59
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
Jerry Reynolds said:
A good write, SB.
No thanks, One mother and one wife
I have found it to be enough.
March 12th, 2025 12:55
Jerry Reynolds said:
A good write, SB.
No thanks, One mother and one wife
I have found it to be enough.
March 12th, 2025 12:55
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
Poetic Licence said:
When you write it like that, you realise how much of the modern is fake, entertaining and enjoyable read
March 12th, 2025 07:56
Poetic Licence said:
When you write it like that, you realise how much of the modern is fake, entertaining and enjoyable read
March 12th, 2025 07:56
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This, Soren, gets a fave for so many different reasons, starting with the rhyming title! LOL! Love it. Seriously though, if a poem could encapsulate today\'s issues, bury them up and come back to them later in time, this would be a PERFECT time capsule of where we are right now. What more can be said other than well done! Oh...yes...Bravo! 🌹🌹👏👏
March 12th, 2025 07:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This, Soren, gets a fave for so many different reasons, starting with the rhyming title! LOL! Love it. Seriously though, if a poem could encapsulate today\'s issues, bury them up and come back to them later in time, this would be a PERFECT time capsule of where we are right now. What more can be said other than well done! Oh...yes...Bravo! 🌹🌹👏👏
March 12th, 2025 07:52
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
Salvia.S said:
Amazing insight into modern society. Brilliantly written!
March 12th, 2025 06:50
Salvia.S said:
Amazing insight into modern society. Brilliantly written!
March 12th, 2025 06:50
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
Friendship said:
Your poem paints vivid pictures of modern life and its artificial elements, allowing readers to visualize the stark contrasts between authenticity and imitation.
March 12th, 2025 05:42
Friendship said:
Your poem paints vivid pictures of modern life and its artificial elements, allowing readers to visualize the stark contrasts between authenticity and imitation.
March 12th, 2025 05:42
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
David Wakeling said:
This is brillant.It sums up the despair that is felt with the way the modern world is. I was more of a throw away husband but the feeling is the same.Well written
March 12th, 2025 05:15
David Wakeling said:
This is brillant.It sums up the despair that is felt with the way the modern world is. I was more of a throw away husband but the feeling is the same.Well written
March 12th, 2025 05:15
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I must order another wife. Hope they don\'t send me someone worse than KP. lol.
March 12th, 2025 04:10
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I must order another wife. Hope they don\'t send me someone worse than KP. lol.
March 12th, 2025 04:10
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
The whole pome was great...but that last line made it for me. A fantastic ending indeed. Really makes it all sink it. Well done! 🌹
March 11th, 2025 13:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The whole pome was great...but that last line made it for me. A fantastic ending indeed. Really makes it all sink it. Well done! 🌹
March 11th, 2025 13:47
In school
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes, I know what you mean.
When I was in School, History was just about the Romans in Britain: Nothing else . It was only when I left I read History books and discovered more .
Teachers can be a bit ‘One Sided’ in matters. Good Write.
March 11th, 2025 10:25
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes, I know what you mean.
When I was in School, History was just about the Romans in Britain: Nothing else . It was only when I left I read History books and discovered more .
Teachers can be a bit ‘One Sided’ in matters. Good Write.
March 11th, 2025 10:25
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Tom Dylan said:
A cracking write, Soren. Had to read this twice to get my head around it. Nicely done!
March 11th, 2025 09:58
Tom Dylan said:
A cracking write, Soren. Had to read this twice to get my head around it. Nicely done!
March 11th, 2025 09:58
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Neville said:
Kids eh\' who would have em .. but then, where would we all be without them .. a fun riddle .. some of us just can\'t win .. can we
March 11th, 2025 08:06
Neville said:
Kids eh\' who would have em .. but then, where would we all be without them .. a fun riddle .. some of us just can\'t win .. can we
March 11th, 2025 08:06
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Friendship said:
Well said .sorenbarrett. Your poem explores themes of identity, belonging, and the complexities of familial relationships. It delves into feelings of inadequacy and the struggle for acceptance within a family and society. The speaker grapples with their sense of self concerning their mother and their own physical and emotional attributes. Your poem seeks to articulate the speaker\'s internal conflict and feelings of being caught between expectations and reality, inviting readers to reflect on their own experiences of identity and belonging.
March 11th, 2025 06:50
Friendship said:
Well said .sorenbarrett. Your poem explores themes of identity, belonging, and the complexities of familial relationships. It delves into feelings of inadequacy and the struggle for acceptance within a family and society. The speaker grapples with their sense of self concerning their mother and their own physical and emotional attributes. Your poem seeks to articulate the speaker\'s internal conflict and feelings of being caught between expectations and reality, inviting readers to reflect on their own experiences of identity and belonging.
March 11th, 2025 06:50
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Cassie58 said:
A fun poem. I’m the eldest of five children. I can honestly say I never questioned the rankings in our parents affections. Time alone with them always made me feel special. We were loved, warts and all lol.
March 11th, 2025 06:03
Cassie58 said:
A fun poem. I’m the eldest of five children. I can honestly say I never questioned the rankings in our parents affections. Time alone with them always made me feel special. We were loved, warts and all lol.
March 11th, 2025 06:03
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Teddy.15 said:
LOL well aren\'t you lucky she didn\'t throw you in the bin then! Lmao 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 oh I know you to be perfect by the way in everyway. 🌹 Ps see you on the 14th floor my straight jacket is broken I have to get it fixed. LoL
March 11th, 2025 05:41
Teddy.15 said:
LOL well aren\'t you lucky she didn\'t throw you in the bin then! Lmao 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 oh I know you to be perfect by the way in everyway. 🌹 Ps see you on the 14th floor my straight jacket is broken I have to get it fixed. LoL
March 11th, 2025 05:41
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Poetic Licence said:
I sense a bit of tongue in cheek here, I would assume this is probably quite a common occurance in a family setting, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 05:38
Poetic Licence said:
I sense a bit of tongue in cheek here, I would assume this is probably quite a common occurance in a family setting, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 05:38
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David Wakeling said:
This is a little self deprecating. I am left wondering what initiated it.To be honest I think many of us have been made feel worst than they should.Certainly this poem is an arrow that hits the heart.
March 11th, 2025 05:19
David Wakeling said:
This is a little self deprecating. I am left wondering what initiated it.To be honest I think many of us have been made feel worst than they should.Certainly this poem is an arrow that hits the heart.
March 11th, 2025 05:19
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arqios said:
Now where you doing my poetry portrait? Save for the fact that I was her firstborn unbald son! 🙏🏻🕊
March 11th, 2025 04:24
arqios said:
Now where you doing my poetry portrait? Save for the fact that I was her firstborn unbald son! 🙏🏻🕊
March 11th, 2025 04:24
In school
Cassie58 said:
We grow wiser with age and learn that not everything taught in school is based on fact. Indoctrination comes to mind, and that applies to universities too. Best do your own research to try and find some balance.
March 10th, 2025 21:53
Cassie58 said:
We grow wiser with age and learn that not everything taught in school is based on fact. Indoctrination comes to mind, and that applies to universities too. Best do your own research to try and find some balance.
March 10th, 2025 21:53
In school
rebellion_in_sanity said:
One of the most powerful introspective poems I have ever come across. Granted that my readings are quite limited, still it\'s pure gold. Btw this poem has an universal appeal as I suspect the history of many countries have been shaped by acceptable narrative and not facts.
March 10th, 2025 21:29
rebellion_in_sanity said:
One of the most powerful introspective poems I have ever come across. Granted that my readings are quite limited, still it\'s pure gold. Btw this poem has an universal appeal as I suspect the history of many countries have been shaped by acceptable narrative and not facts.
March 10th, 2025 21:29
Who we are
John Prophet said:
Man’s inhumanity to man, unfortunately it’s been around since the first son.
March 10th, 2025 18:43
John Prophet said:
Man’s inhumanity to man, unfortunately it’s been around since the first son.
March 10th, 2025 18:43
Crude and rude
Friendship said:
this is my favorite. Be Who You Are. I must say, I really can relate to this poem. I always wanted to live on my boat on an island by myself, and just the way the poem says, that\'s how I wanted to live. Kudos to you for an excellent painting! Soren, Your poem explores the tension between modernity and a simple, rustic lifestyle. The speaker embraces a crude and unrefined existence, rejecting societal norms and modern conveniences in favor of a more natural, self-sufficient way of living. reflecting the speaker\'s personality and lifestyle. Words like \"crude,\" \"rude,\" \"nude,\" and \"lewd\" convey a sense of rebelliousness and disregard for societal standards. The use of straightforward, unembellished language evokes a sense of authenticity and rawness. This poem is to express the speaker\'s pride in their lifestyle and to challenge the reader\'s perceptions of what constitutes a fulfilling, meaningful life. It advocates for self-sufficiency and a deeper connection to nature, inviting reflection on the values of modern society.
March 10th, 2025 16:17
Friendship said:
this is my favorite. Be Who You Are. I must say, I really can relate to this poem. I always wanted to live on my boat on an island by myself, and just the way the poem says, that\'s how I wanted to live. Kudos to you for an excellent painting! Soren, Your poem explores the tension between modernity and a simple, rustic lifestyle. The speaker embraces a crude and unrefined existence, rejecting societal norms and modern conveniences in favor of a more natural, self-sufficient way of living. reflecting the speaker\'s personality and lifestyle. Words like \"crude,\" \"rude,\" \"nude,\" and \"lewd\" convey a sense of rebelliousness and disregard for societal standards. The use of straightforward, unembellished language evokes a sense of authenticity and rawness. This poem is to express the speaker\'s pride in their lifestyle and to challenge the reader\'s perceptions of what constitutes a fulfilling, meaningful life. It advocates for self-sufficiency and a deeper connection to nature, inviting reflection on the values of modern society.
March 10th, 2025 16:17
In school
Neville said:
Damn right .. there are so many untruths and injustices we are introduced to and repeatedly indoctrinated to accept without question .. School has such an awful lot to answer for .. I\'m firmly in your corner with this one sir sorenbarrett .. Neville
March 10th, 2025 13:24
Neville said:
Damn right .. there are so many untruths and injustices we are introduced to and repeatedly indoctrinated to accept without question .. School has such an awful lot to answer for .. I\'m firmly in your corner with this one sir sorenbarrett .. Neville
March 10th, 2025 13:24
In school
hzugman said:
Right on. If the propaganda were eliminated from public education, students would learn much much more. Manifest Destiny indeed. A little Howard Zinn history would go a long way. Well done.
March 10th, 2025 10:50
hzugman said:
Right on. If the propaganda were eliminated from public education, students would learn much much more. Manifest Destiny indeed. A little Howard Zinn history would go a long way. Well done.
March 10th, 2025 10:50
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