Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Ma an me
Friendship said:
I must say you caught me off guard today with this poem; well written, definitely out of character, but I had to read it twice. Then, finally understood it! Your poem beautifully explores the journey of aging, loss, and resilience in the face of health challenges. The poem reflects on the transformative power of growing older, embracing memories of a deceased mother, and finding strength in the lingering presence of love. You have an uplifting theme of hope, renewal, and the preciousness of time, as well as the unbreakable bond between the Poet and their mother. This poem serves to convey the emotional complexity of dealing with aging and loss, fostering empathy and understanding for those facing similar experiences.
May 22nd, 2025 07:37
Friendship said:
I must say you caught me off guard today with this poem; well written, definitely out of character, but I had to read it twice. Then, finally understood it! Your poem beautifully explores the journey of aging, loss, and resilience in the face of health challenges. The poem reflects on the transformative power of growing older, embracing memories of a deceased mother, and finding strength in the lingering presence of love. You have an uplifting theme of hope, renewal, and the preciousness of time, as well as the unbreakable bond between the Poet and their mother. This poem serves to convey the emotional complexity of dealing with aging and loss, fostering empathy and understanding for those facing similar experiences.
May 22nd, 2025 07:37
Unknown greatness
Soman Ragavan said:
“How great would be a giant redwood tree fallen never seen…”
Indeed, when a tree is upstanding we can rarely assess its height. It is when it falls to the ground that we see its real LENGTH. Before that we could not see its real HEIGHT…
So, the universe is a ravine, a bottom pit into which we cannot see very deep.
As for unread poems, the poet goes mostly unnoticed in his lifetime.
“Poet is a posthumous epithet.” From the book “How to write poetry.”
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May 22nd, 2025 07:18
Soman Ragavan said:
“How great would be a giant redwood tree fallen never seen…”
Indeed, when a tree is upstanding we can rarely assess its height. It is when it falls to the ground that we see its real LENGTH. Before that we could not see its real HEIGHT…
So, the universe is a ravine, a bottom pit into which we cannot see very deep.
As for unread poems, the poet goes mostly unnoticed in his lifetime.
“Poet is a posthumous epithet.” From the book “How to write poetry.”
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May 22nd, 2025 07:18
Ma an me
Teddy.15 said:
Goosebumps, she certainly did lose the ring so did you! Extraordinary this one, I could literally see you running for the phone hoping it would be her, language a super kudos very very original. 🌹
May 22nd, 2025 05:31
Teddy.15 said:
Goosebumps, she certainly did lose the ring so did you! Extraordinary this one, I could literally see you running for the phone hoping it would be her, language a super kudos very very original. 🌹
May 22nd, 2025 05:31
Ma an me
arqios said:
One of our fave road trip songs was Rocky Top TN; we spent some time at Gatlinburg one winter and hiked that portion of the Appalachian trail towards NC. 🕊️🙏🏻
May 22nd, 2025 05:31
arqios said:
One of our fave road trip songs was Rocky Top TN; we spent some time at Gatlinburg one winter and hiked that portion of the Appalachian trail towards NC. 🕊️🙏🏻
May 22nd, 2025 05:31
Ma an me
Poetic Licence said:
Although done in an entertaining style this is a sad and touching write, the ghost of ma still holds memories and pain, nicely expressed write
May 22nd, 2025 04:35
Poetic Licence said:
Although done in an entertaining style this is a sad and touching write, the ghost of ma still holds memories and pain, nicely expressed write
May 22nd, 2025 04:35
Ma an me
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem breaks me—the cold, the cancer, the ghost of \'Ma\' answering a phone that never rings. Grief lives in the spaces between your words. Stunning and sorrowful.
May 22nd, 2025 04:10
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem breaks me—the cold, the cancer, the ghost of \'Ma\' answering a phone that never rings. Grief lives in the spaces between your words. Stunning and sorrowful.
May 22nd, 2025 04:10
Ma an me
David Wakeling said:
This sounds like \"The Real Housewives of the Appalachians\" Just kidding.An enjoyable fun accent and poem
May 22nd, 2025 04:03
David Wakeling said:
This sounds like \"The Real Housewives of the Appalachians\" Just kidding.An enjoyable fun accent and poem
May 22nd, 2025 04:03
Unknown greatness
NinjaGirl said:
There are so many good things that are just never seen. Some of my best poems are never read, my best artwork never seen, the best parts of me hidden away...
May 21st, 2025 22:37
NinjaGirl said:
There are so many good things that are just never seen. Some of my best poems are never read, my best artwork never seen, the best parts of me hidden away...
May 21st, 2025 22:37
Empathy
ForeverJesus7 said:
I like this piece. We should all have empathy for others. Empathy lets people know that they are not alone in their pain. Keep writing.
Persistence is key
May 21st, 2025 19:40
ForeverJesus7 said:
I like this piece. We should all have empathy for others. Empathy lets people know that they are not alone in their pain. Keep writing.
Persistence is key
May 21st, 2025 19:40
Unknown greatness
orchidee said:
Shakey chose some daft names for people, and verges on daftness at times I think. Not all his sayings are wise. Not that I\'ve read his Complete Works! lol.
I wish KP never saw the light of day, but she does. She never hibernates. heehee.
May 21st, 2025 11:47
orchidee said:
Shakey chose some daft names for people, and verges on daftness at times I think. Not all his sayings are wise. Not that I\'ve read his Complete Works! lol.
I wish KP never saw the light of day, but she does. She never hibernates. heehee.
May 21st, 2025 11:47
Unknown greatness
Teddy.15 said:
On reading your title I imagined this could be about me! 🤣 Indeed I too reflect on the fact that those greats had a platform even if for some it was in their afterlife. Wow this is a wonderful piece 👏 🌹
May 21st, 2025 10:30
Teddy.15 said:
On reading your title I imagined this could be about me! 🤣 Indeed I too reflect on the fact that those greats had a platform even if for some it was in their afterlife. Wow this is a wonderful piece 👏 🌹
May 21st, 2025 10:30
Unknown greatness
arqios said:
A pain I can hardly describe has been lifted. You know and see and feel 🕊️🙏🏻
May 21st, 2025 06:12
arqios said:
A pain I can hardly describe has been lifted. You know and see and feel 🕊️🙏🏻
May 21st, 2025 06:12
Unknown greatness
Friendship said:
The poem inspires us to ponder the nature of greatness and existence, illuminating that the genuine value of something shines brightest in its recognition and profound impact on others. It prompts us to reexamine the essence of greatness when it is not celebrated or cherished. It reminds us that art and beauty flourish when shared with others.
May 21st, 2025 05:49
Friendship said:
The poem inspires us to ponder the nature of greatness and existence, illuminating that the genuine value of something shines brightest in its recognition and profound impact on others. It prompts us to reexamine the essence of greatness when it is not celebrated or cherished. It reminds us that art and beauty flourish when shared with others.
May 21st, 2025 05:49
Unknown greatness
Poetic Licence said:
Straight to the heart, if anything in life is never seen it just fades away as if it was never there, such a waste, nicely written and enjoyed
May 21st, 2025 05:01
Poetic Licence said:
Straight to the heart, if anything in life is never seen it just fades away as if it was never there, such a waste, nicely written and enjoyed
May 21st, 2025 05:01
Unknown greatness
Salvia.S said:
Your poem says a lot in just a few lines—it\'s a powerful reminder that even the greatest things can be forgotten if no one sees them. Simple, deep, and true.
May 21st, 2025 04:58
Salvia.S said:
Your poem says a lot in just a few lines—it\'s a powerful reminder that even the greatest things can be forgotten if no one sees them. Simple, deep, and true.
May 21st, 2025 04:58
Unknown greatness
David Wakeling said:
A sad fact but true. So many great works never see the light of day.A well constructed piece
May 21st, 2025 03:56
David Wakeling said:
A sad fact but true. So many great works never see the light of day.A well constructed piece
May 21st, 2025 03:56
Empathy
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, we just need to be aware of all that you have mentioned and try and deal with ot in a positive and kind manner.
Andy
May 21st, 2025 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, we just need to be aware of all that you have mentioned and try and deal with ot in a positive and kind manner.
Andy
May 21st, 2025 00:57
Floral memories
NafisaSB said:
sight, smell and sound - these are what attract us - and yes the olfactory nerves seem to seek out each beautiful flower in your poem
well done
May 21st, 2025 00:20
NafisaSB said:
sight, smell and sound - these are what attract us - and yes the olfactory nerves seem to seek out each beautiful flower in your poem
well done
May 21st, 2025 00:20
Empathy
Soman Ragavan said:
“Can they hear the drops of tears?...” Tears are the product of suffering. The cause of the suffering might be loud, but tears themselves are noiseless...
Similarly in the next line, there is the splash of pain. Both tears and pain are the product of suffering.
“the flavor of a broken dream?...” “ this is sure a poetic way to describe the characteristic of a dream.
“I like walking in the rain, because nobody can see my tears.”
--Charlie Chaplin (1889-1977)
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May 20th, 2025 11:11
Soman Ragavan said:
“Can they hear the drops of tears?...” Tears are the product of suffering. The cause of the suffering might be loud, but tears themselves are noiseless...
Similarly in the next line, there is the splash of pain. Both tears and pain are the product of suffering.
“the flavor of a broken dream?...” “ this is sure a poetic way to describe the characteristic of a dream.
“I like walking in the rain, because nobody can see my tears.”
--Charlie Chaplin (1889-1977)
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May 20th, 2025 11:11
Empathy
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write around the subject so lacking these days, genuine empathy towards living things. The one good thing that ever came out of my childhood is I have always cared and had empathy for other\'s, especially those less fortunate. Have never understood the justification of some people\'s lack of empathy to others due their childhood, it should make you care because you understand and have been there, if I didn\'t have empathy I could be a mass murderer and justify it on my past. Well needed and meaning write
May 20th, 2025 06:02
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write around the subject so lacking these days, genuine empathy towards living things. The one good thing that ever came out of my childhood is I have always cared and had empathy for other\'s, especially those less fortunate. Have never understood the justification of some people\'s lack of empathy to others due their childhood, it should make you care because you understand and have been there, if I didn\'t have empathy I could be a mass murderer and justify it on my past. Well needed and meaning write
May 20th, 2025 06:02
Empathy
Friendship said:
Well written,Soren,At times, I\'m very guilty of lacking empathy; I catch myself after the fact, and it\'s not acceptable, yet I do it; I\'m just as guilty as others.
Your poem \"Empathy\" explores the importance of emotional sensitivity and awareness in understanding the pain and struggles of others. It prompts readers to reflect on their ability to perceive the suffering around them and cultivate a deeper sense of empathy. You seem to revolve around sensory experiences—hearing, seeing, touching, smelling, and tasting—as metaphors for emotional awareness. The poem contrasts the beauty of positive experiences with the often overlooked or ignored pain and suffering that people endure. Your poem aims to inspire readers to cultivate empathy and to become more attuned to the emotional experiences of those around them, prompting a deeper understanding of shared human struggles.
May 20th, 2025 05:45
Friendship said:
Well written,Soren,At times, I\'m very guilty of lacking empathy; I catch myself after the fact, and it\'s not acceptable, yet I do it; I\'m just as guilty as others.
Your poem \"Empathy\" explores the importance of emotional sensitivity and awareness in understanding the pain and struggles of others. It prompts readers to reflect on their ability to perceive the suffering around them and cultivate a deeper sense of empathy. You seem to revolve around sensory experiences—hearing, seeing, touching, smelling, and tasting—as metaphors for emotional awareness. The poem contrasts the beauty of positive experiences with the often overlooked or ignored pain and suffering that people endure. Your poem aims to inspire readers to cultivate empathy and to become more attuned to the emotional experiences of those around them, prompting a deeper understanding of shared human struggles.
May 20th, 2025 05:45
Empathy
Salvia.S said:
This is a powerful exploration of empathy, questioning the sensitivity of our senses to the emotional pain and struggles of others..
It highlights the importance of being attuned to others\' emotional pain. Well done!!!
May 20th, 2025 05:15
Salvia.S said:
This is a powerful exploration of empathy, questioning the sensitivity of our senses to the emotional pain and struggles of others..
It highlights the importance of being attuned to others\' emotional pain. Well done!!!
May 20th, 2025 05:15
Empathy
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words weave raw emotion so deep,
a mirror to souls that ache and weep.
May 20th, 2025 04:19
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words weave raw emotion so deep,
a mirror to souls that ache and weep.
May 20th, 2025 04:19
Empathy
David Wakeling said:
Empathy is what makes us good human beings and what makes life worth living.Take that away and we have Hitler and the gas chambers.Wonderful poem raising the ultimate questions about sympathy.
May 20th, 2025 04:07
David Wakeling said:
Empathy is what makes us good human beings and what makes life worth living.Take that away and we have Hitler and the gas chambers.Wonderful poem raising the ultimate questions about sympathy.
May 20th, 2025 04:07
Empathy
arqios said:
That is a regret that strikes hard and lasts an eternity.🕊️🙏🏻
May 20th, 2025 03:51
arqios said:
That is a regret that strikes hard and lasts an eternity.🕊️🙏🏻
May 20th, 2025 03:51
Empathy
Teddy.15 said:
A beautiful reminder of empathy, unfortunately not everyone has this life tool, putting ones feet in the shoes of another to really see and feel is a true gift and life lesson, to those who acknowledge the world of another human. 🌹
May 20th, 2025 03:33
Teddy.15 said:
A beautiful reminder of empathy, unfortunately not everyone has this life tool, putting ones feet in the shoes of another to really see and feel is a true gift and life lesson, to those who acknowledge the world of another human. 🌹
May 20th, 2025 03:33
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