Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



A twist of the tongue
Teddy.15 said:

lol this is full of charm and most hilarious tongue twisting, so fun to read indeed. I can hear that dramatic growl when others read my work as I often use words out of text lol 🀣 wonderfully brilliant and most entertaining
🌹 and your rhyming well kudos 🌹

January 14th, 2025 04:17

Mist
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderfully put soren, fog just crawls all over.

Andy

January 14th, 2025 02:49

Mist
𓆩Maseπ“†ͺ said:

Good write Soren!

January 14th, 2025 01:24

Mist
Thad Wilk said:

A really captivating
poem, great brevity! πŸ‘
Awesome imagery
penned superbly!!🀩
Much enjoyed my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

January 13th, 2025 23:15

Mist
NinjaGirl said:

very beautiful, creeping fog

January 13th, 2025 20:27

Condemned
RSM0812 said:

This was a great read. You write some beautiful stuff. I\'d be pleased if I had as much talent.

January 13th, 2025 18:25

Mist
RSM0812 said:

Hungry fog. It blinds the world of sense. Like a starving bear before his hibernation.

January 13th, 2025 18:22

How
Avi said:

You don’t deserve that

January 13th, 2025 14:28

Mist
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 13th, 2025 14:08

Riddle
Accidental Poet said:

I see it as reflecting upon one\'s life for what it is. Excellently penned soren. πŸŒΉπŸ‘

January 13th, 2025 11:58

Mist
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

January 13th, 2025 09:51

Mist
Tristan Robert Lange said:

The mist not only comes to life in your rich imagery, Soren, the shape of the poem actually looks, at least to me, like a mist settling in. Really enjoyed this. Well done, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ‘ An easy fave for me.

January 13th, 2025 08:46

Riddle
Tom Dylan said:

An intriguing piece, Soren. Nicely done.

January 13th, 2025 07:30

Mist
arqios said:

Can’t help but entertain a notion that this is more than just a poetic description of a mist. It is smooth, subtle and very atmospheric. πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

January 13th, 2025 07:22

Mist
Teddy.15 said:

Beautifully done dear sorrenbarret, now I\'m thinking out loud this just has to be the landscape of Brazil right? I\'ve been to Florida not such picturesque as Brazil 🀣

January 13th, 2025 06:35

Mist
Cassie58 said:

Wonderfully described sorenbarrett. You brought this mist to life with its movement and blotting out of the landscape. Done in such a creeping manner, it can take us by surprise.

January 13th, 2025 05:16

Mist
Poetic Licence said:

Like it is telling everything to rest with it, wonderful image as you read, enjoyed the read.

January 13th, 2025 05:05

Mist
David Wakeling said:

A wonderful poem that creates a vista so beautiful.Enjoyable

January 13th, 2025 04:58

Riddle
Neville said:



So many possibilities, so little time .. I shall have to make a stab in the dark and run with time .. or reflecting upon it .. and therefore one\'s mortality .. maybe Neville

January 13th, 2025 03:20

Riddle
Goldfinch60 said:

We all see ourselves as individuals soren

Andy

January 13th, 2025 02:51

Riddle
Thad Wilk said:

Terrific poem and
riddle indeed!! πŸ˜€
I see someone in a
multi mirrored room
like they have at the circus. πŸŽͺ
And all the shapes distorted.
That\'s the first thing that
Came to mind!¿😳
Best regards ✌️ Thad


January 12th, 2025 21:09

Riddle
NinjaGirl said:

sandy lair, hints to the making of glass. looking into another I see eternity, nods to two mirrors reflecting each other infinitely. silver stare shows that it is a mirror and not just glass, and plenty kids play peek-a-boo with themselves. I\'m not sure about the born an orphan from an infertile mother, but I love the detail that you put into each line.

January 12th, 2025 15:51

Riddle
Thomas W Case said:

Wow. Powerful and poignant.

January 12th, 2025 12:26

Riddle
Bella Shepard said:

Like a hall of mirrors, no beginning and no end, how do we make sense of life. A remarkable brain teaser, Loved it!

January 12th, 2025 12:22

Riddle
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This is a great poem with countless possible interpretations. Here\'s mine. The riddle: Life itself. This poem uses seeming impossibilities (birth out of infertility, confused directions, etc., to show the alluring and yet also trippy and even unsettling reality of life. That\'s what I get out of this. One but many interpretations, no doubt. A hallmark of brilliant work, Soren! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

January 12th, 2025 12:05

What happened to beauty?
vicecream said:

Thisss is a sore spot in my heart- the disposableness of everything it seems, so hard to find something made to last. Awesome write thank you

January 12th, 2025 08:16

Riddle
orchidee said:

Good write SB. I\'m sure I know the answer to this riddle - the mother-in-law, well KP\'s mum then! lol.

January 12th, 2025 08:04

Riddle
Teddy.15 said:

I see fate here, and no matter how hard we run we cannot escape it because it is there always and everywhere, oh how to play with your reader amazing in every way. 🌹

January 12th, 2025 05:32

Riddle
Poetic Licence said:

A beautiful piece of work, with a few interpretations, but i get reflections back through an old mirror, really enjoyed the read.

January 12th, 2025 05:24

Riddle
arqios said:

I\'m really no good with riddles but this looks like it\'s talking about some kind of looking glass or mirror... reflective surface.

January 12th, 2025 05:18



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