Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Pillar of support
Neville said:



We all need at least one methinks .. and a spare perhaps .. just in case .. Enjoyed muchly .. Neville

October 17th, 2024 06:10

Pillar of support
arqios said:

If houses symbolised our personโ€™s enveloping existence then the corner post has kept our world possible and prevented โ€˜the sky from falling.โ€™ Lots to chew on and think through. Thatโ€™s the good stuff!

October 17th, 2024 05:48

Ants
Neville said:



incredible creatures just not amongst my favourite species but you make excellent points ant I agree with them entirely .. Neville

October 17th, 2024 02:43

Let go
Teddy.15 said:

Let go indeed, there are so many important things to deal with in life, this brings a sweet sense of serenity dear Sorrenbarret ๐ŸŒน

October 17th, 2024 01:49

Let go
rebellion_in_sanity said:

This is too good!

October 16th, 2024 23:02

Let go
Mutley Ravishes said:

You`ve weaved a beautiful poem here, Soren.

October 16th, 2024 21:13

Let go
Dan Williams said:

Another fine work from the wordsmith. \"On feathered dreams gleams of beams sunny angels wear\" is just masterful.

October 16th, 2024 21:07

Don\'t
Dan Williams said:

This is genius, then ten commandments V2.3.

October 16th, 2024 20:58

Let go
Thad Wilk said:

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
A dynamite poem,
thoughts and
message my friend! ๐Ÿค”
Love the rhyme scheme,
great flow and blend!! ๐Ÿ†
Best regards peace โœŒ๏ธ Thad

October 16th, 2024 16:01

Let go
orchidee said:

Good write SB - I said it again, repeating myself (as in my poem today)!

October 16th, 2024 10:28

Let go
arqios said:

Now thatโ€™s the way to go! Sign me up compadre!

October 16th, 2024 06:49

Let go
David Wakeling said:

This is amazing. Very well constructed. I love the rhyme. Well done compadre

October 16th, 2024 06:02

Don\'t
Bobby O said:

A sequel to Jim Croce?

October 16th, 2024 04:07

Don\'t
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words soren, I find that in situations where trouble may rise if there is an argument apathy can be a strong weapon.

Andy

October 16th, 2024 01:14

Don\'t
Thad Wilk said:

Terrific poem
thoughts and
message I must say! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Last stanza
most surely a triple play! โšพ๐Ÿ’ฏ
Thanks for sharing!! โ˜บ๏ธ
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

October 15th, 2024 20:44

Don\'t
Tony36 said:

Excellent

October 15th, 2024 14:23

Destination\'s dream
peet said:

Lovely write.

October 15th, 2024 13:25

Don\'t
peet said:

So much depth in those lines. The world is turning hostile and these lines do send a strong message across to all to calm down and let live.

October 15th, 2024 13:01

Don\'t
orchidee said:

Verse 3 line 2 applies to KP - garbage...rose! lol.

October 15th, 2024 10:36

A drop
Alan R said:

Gorgeous!!

October 15th, 2024 08:20

Don\'t
Doggerel Dave said:

You talking to me? No mask to that - It\'s clear.

PS: didn\'t stay away long did she?

October 15th, 2024 05:35

Don\'t
arqios said:

Such an odd feeling washes over when we metaphorically bite our tongues- a truly exhaustive coverage of the situation!

October 15th, 2024 04:59

Don\'t
Teddy.15 said:

I just couldn\'t have put it better myself my dear sorrenbarret ๐ŸŒน kudos and I\'m smiling from ear to ear. ๐Ÿ’™

October 15th, 2024 04:42

Destination\'s dream
Goldfinch60 said:

We have those dreams of life soren and in my life many have come true, I am very lucky.

Andy

October 15th, 2024 01:26

Destination\'s dream
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

October 14th, 2024 10:43

Destination\'s dream
Doggerel Dave said:

All life, it seems Soren is propelled by a Random Generator.....

October 14th, 2024 05:56

Ants
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words soren, ants are amazing creatures but they are also an awful nuisance.

Andy

October 14th, 2024 00:48

Ants
Thad Wilk said:

Awesome poem!! ๐Ÿ’ฏ
We have ( Fire Ants )
here In Texas,
One burning ๐Ÿ”ฅ bite you\'ll be
a scratching for a week! ๐Ÿ˜”
Don\'t wanna step on their nest!
Best regards peace โœŒ๏ธ Thad

October 13th, 2024 18:40

Ants
Thomas W Case said:

You paint this scene well.

October 13th, 2024 12:42

Ants
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

October 13th, 2024 08:28



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