Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Gone
MendedFences27 said:
This reminded me of the Dutch Elm Disease that wiped out all the chestnut trees in the U.S. They died from the inside out, became a hollowed-out trunk and nothing else. Can we try to save our natural environment?
- Phil A.
May 27th, 2025 14:28
MendedFences27 said:
This reminded me of the Dutch Elm Disease that wiped out all the chestnut trees in the U.S. They died from the inside out, became a hollowed-out trunk and nothing else. Can we try to save our natural environment?
- Phil A.
May 27th, 2025 14:28
Gone
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I see some trees with rot or leaning over. Must have strong roots so as not to come crashing down.
A joke now (argh): What is brown and green, and if it fell on you out of a tree, would kill you? Nope, not a branch - but a snooker table! heehee.
May 27th, 2025 07:56
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I see some trees with rot or leaning over. Must have strong roots so as not to come crashing down.
A joke now (argh): What is brown and green, and if it fell on you out of a tree, would kill you? Nope, not a branch - but a snooker table! heehee.
May 27th, 2025 07:56
Gone
Friendship said:
Well written, the tree symbolizes individuals and their struggles with internal and external forces. This poem serves as a poignant reminder to me of the inevitability of decay in life and the importance of self-reflection and cleansing in regaining one\'s vitality and freedom from negative influences. It offers a philosophical perspective on personal growth and resilience.
May 27th, 2025 07:23
Friendship said:
Well written, the tree symbolizes individuals and their struggles with internal and external forces. This poem serves as a poignant reminder to me of the inevitability of decay in life and the importance of self-reflection and cleansing in regaining one\'s vitality and freedom from negative influences. It offers a philosophical perspective on personal growth and resilience.
May 27th, 2025 07:23
Gone
Poetic Licence said:
To be free we have to discard all the rot around us and the debris of our life\'s, a very positive message, may take a bit of time!!!, enjoyed the read
May 27th, 2025 06:43
Poetic Licence said:
To be free we have to discard all the rot around us and the debris of our life\'s, a very positive message, may take a bit of time!!!, enjoyed the read
May 27th, 2025 06:43
Floral memories
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Lilacs have always been my favorite! A touching poem of seasons and changes.
May 27th, 2025 05:23
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Lilacs have always been my favorite! A touching poem of seasons and changes.
May 27th, 2025 05:23
Gone
Salvia.S said:
A powerful metaphor about decay and the need to let go of what clings to us - quietly thought-provoking and beautifully written.
May 27th, 2025 04:40
Salvia.S said:
A powerful metaphor about decay and the need to let go of what clings to us - quietly thought-provoking and beautifully written.
May 27th, 2025 04:40
Gone
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words weave nature’s truth with haunting grace—
a stark reminder to shed what decays, leaving no trace.
May 27th, 2025 04:24
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words weave nature’s truth with haunting grace—
a stark reminder to shed what decays, leaving no trace.
May 27th, 2025 04:24
Gone
David Wakeling said:
This is a wonderfully constructrd piece.There is a great metaphor in the fallen tree.I see the secret to freedom is get rid of \"debris\" or things we don\'t need, An enjoyable clever poem.Well done
May 27th, 2025 04:09
David Wakeling said:
This is a wonderfully constructrd piece.There is a great metaphor in the fallen tree.I see the secret to freedom is get rid of \"debris\" or things we don\'t need, An enjoyable clever poem.Well done
May 27th, 2025 04:09
Gone
Teddy.15 said:
I see two very important meanings to this poem, I see the soul of a person and a soul of a tree. Wonderful 🌹
May 27th, 2025 04:02
Teddy.15 said:
I see two very important meanings to this poem, I see the soul of a person and a soul of a tree. Wonderful 🌹
May 27th, 2025 04:02
Pebbles
Salvia.S said:
A beautifully evocative poem - fleeting, elemental and ephemeral.
May 27th, 2025 03:13
Salvia.S said:
A beautifully evocative poem - fleeting, elemental and ephemeral.
May 27th, 2025 03:13
Pebbles
Goldfinch60 said:
THos ripples can turn into waves soren but then they can turn back into ripples.
Andy
May 27th, 2025 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
THos ripples can turn into waves soren but then they can turn back into ripples.
Andy
May 27th, 2025 01:24
Pebbles
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the metaphor, pebbles creating ripples, and have used it myself; never in a poem though. Well done, Soren. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 15:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the metaphor, pebbles creating ripples, and have used it myself; never in a poem though. Well done, Soren. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 15:21
Good taste
Maryel said:
Poor neighbour. Just when he thought it was safe to go in the water! Darkly amusing.
May 26th, 2025 14:31
Maryel said:
Poor neighbour. Just when he thought it was safe to go in the water! Darkly amusing.
May 26th, 2025 14:31
Redemption in deception
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. Nothing...and I mean nothing...is BLACK & WHITE. That\'s just faux security for the insecure. Well done on this poetic musing, my friend. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 08:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. Nothing...and I mean nothing...is BLACK & WHITE. That\'s just faux security for the insecure. Well done on this poetic musing, my friend. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 08:48
Pebbles
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Pebbles\" beautifully captures the transient nature of experiences, memories, and creations, illuminating how everything, no matter how significant, eventually fades or is lost over time. It reflects on the impermanence of life and the profound yet subtle impact that small actions (like throwing a pebble into water) can have on the surrounding world. This poem inspires readers to cherish the fleeting nature of life and recognize the lasting effects of our actions, encouraging a deeper appreciation for the present moment and the small changes we can inspire in the world around us.
May 26th, 2025 05:44
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Pebbles\" beautifully captures the transient nature of experiences, memories, and creations, illuminating how everything, no matter how significant, eventually fades or is lost over time. It reflects on the impermanence of life and the profound yet subtle impact that small actions (like throwing a pebble into water) can have on the surrounding world. This poem inspires readers to cherish the fleeting nature of life and recognize the lasting effects of our actions, encouraging a deeper appreciation for the present moment and the small changes we can inspire in the world around us.
May 26th, 2025 05:44
Pebbles
Poetic Licence said:
In my turbulent mind these words do feel like a ripple in the pond, enjoyed the read
May 26th, 2025 04:45
Poetic Licence said:
In my turbulent mind these words do feel like a ripple in the pond, enjoyed the read
May 26th, 2025 04:45
Pebbles
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words ripple through time,
each verse a pebble in the mind’s pond—
beauty fleeting, impact eternal.
May 26th, 2025 04:38
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words ripple through time,
each verse a pebble in the mind’s pond—
beauty fleeting, impact eternal.
May 26th, 2025 04:38
Pebbles
David Wakeling said:
I read here that creatvity in the form of a Poem, a sand castle or a song sung cause ripples in the world but nothing lasts and their impact can actually disturb the balance.Quite a lot in a small space,Well done
May 26th, 2025 04:22
David Wakeling said:
I read here that creatvity in the form of a Poem, a sand castle or a song sung cause ripples in the world but nothing lasts and their impact can actually disturb the balance.Quite a lot in a small space,Well done
May 26th, 2025 04:22
Pebbles
Teddy.15 said:
Having read this many times each time the visions are more powerful, a wonderful title and how I could see those ripples. Superb as ever dear sorrenbarret 🌹
May 26th, 2025 03:57
Teddy.15 said:
Having read this many times each time the visions are more powerful, a wonderful title and how I could see those ripples. Superb as ever dear sorrenbarret 🌹
May 26th, 2025 03:57
Pebbles
Hollow Enigma said:
Always great reading your work! Hope that disturbance calms sooner than later.
A log burned, pages lost
I would say pages (Crossed, Tossed) to not say lost twice.
Ice sculpture dies belted
May 26th, 2025 03:21
Hollow Enigma said:
Always great reading your work! Hope that disturbance calms sooner than later.
A log burned, pages lost
I would say pages (Crossed, Tossed) to not say lost twice.
Ice sculpture dies belted
May 26th, 2025 03:21
Redemption in deception
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes we have to bend to truth to help others soren but hopefully we can find truer ways to do it.
Andy
May 26th, 2025 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes we have to bend to truth to help others soren but hopefully we can find truer ways to do it.
Andy
May 26th, 2025 01:23
Redemption in deception
Soman Ragavan said:
Please see my message on • MOTTAKEENUR REHMAN>
• FIRST LOVE: THE AWAKENING
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-204491
May 25th, 2025 21:11
Soman Ragavan said:
Please see my message on • MOTTAKEENUR REHMAN>
• FIRST LOVE: THE AWAKENING
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-204491
May 25th, 2025 21:11
Redemption in deception
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Truth is always best. Well written.
May 25th, 2025 20:14
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Truth is always best. Well written.
May 25th, 2025 20:14
Redemption in deception
orchidee said:
It\'s the need to \'speak the truth in love\', I would say. If it\'s truth only, it can seem harsh, bigoted, \'like it or lump it\'. Maybe if it\'s love only, it can seem soft, wishy-washy, sentimental.
\'What\'s all this sensible thinking from you? I\'m the one who thinks sensibly\'. Fido says to me. lol. He knows.
May 25th, 2025 09:58
orchidee said:
It\'s the need to \'speak the truth in love\', I would say. If it\'s truth only, it can seem harsh, bigoted, \'like it or lump it\'. Maybe if it\'s love only, it can seem soft, wishy-washy, sentimental.
\'What\'s all this sensible thinking from you? I\'m the one who thinks sensibly\'. Fido says to me. lol. He knows.
May 25th, 2025 09:58
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