Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Fear myths of the unknown
RSM0812 said:

This poem conveys the power of a strong leader. For good or bad. In tyranny we still must survive as a species. Great write.

September 4th, 2025 10:09

Fear myths of the unknown
Teddy.15 said:

You have hypnotized me with this one. Brilliant & powerful. 🌹 We are all these things and more.

September 4th, 2025 09:31

Fear myths of the unknown
Jerry Reynolds said:

A solid write, sorenbarrett. So much to reflect on.

September 4th, 2025 07:20

Fear myths of the unknown
Soman Ragavan said:

Indeed, better the tyrant you know than the one you don\'t know. Birds that are caged go through a painful tragedy. They will never see the free world. They will drop dead in the cage. Then the \"owner\" brings in another bird... The faithfulness of dogs is such that even ones that are beaten will still wag their tail in friendship at the very people who aggress them !...

September 4th, 2025 04:32

Read till your eyes bleed
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Stunning. Lyrical and meaningful.

September 4th, 2025 03:27

Little armor
Keeter C said:

I’ve been told of armadillo on the half shell on a campfire. Never tried it and I don’t think I will..

September 3rd, 2025 19:05

Plastic legacy
Keeter C said:

Ah yes but magical
Plastics will save the forest, don’t you know what’s good for us?!

September 3rd, 2025 18:59

Read till your eyes bleed
Keeter C said:

Interesting. A pearl is formed around an irritant yet smooth and we value them
Greatly.
The human body is the same but the product is not.
Does the rose know its value over the weed?
This deserves another read. Definitely a good one!


September 3rd, 2025 18:53

Plastic legacy
Doggerel Dave said:

Despite your justified aesthetic objections, plastic has it\'s place in this society today; however, its all pervasiveness, inadequate disposal and thus pollution which are the real issues.

September 3rd, 2025 12:52

Read till your eyes bleed
NinjaGirl said:

This is so well-written, and an interesting commentary. I think humans like things that sparkle and shine, not caring that it comes from a clam or a rock. It\'s interesting what we define as valuable.

September 3rd, 2025 12:13

Read till your eyes bleed
orchidee said:

But I don\'t want my eyes to bleed - heehee. Good write SB.
But KP goes blue in the face - asking me endlessly to cook her summat decent! She says \'Oh no, not sewage again!\' lol.

September 3rd, 2025 11:49

Read till your eyes bleed
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this one sparkles with bite. The pearls, the roses, the hoarded treasures...it’s sharp critique and rhythmically so. That image of “hoarded pearls we take from our chest” is powerful…a parable clear as day. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 3rd, 2025 11:31

Read till your eyes bleed
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:

Wonderful Poetry. Nicely written, Love it.

September 3rd, 2025 07:56

Read till your eyes bleed
Jerry Reynolds said:

Beautifully written, Soren.

September 3rd, 2025 06:26

Read till your eyes bleed
Teddy.15 said:

Some beautiful wisdom. 🌹

September 3rd, 2025 05:33

Plastic legacy
Goldfinch60 said:

So true soren, we just throw things away nowadays and do not repair them if broken.

Andy

September 3rd, 2025 02:45

Too long
Tom Dylan said:

A powerful write, Soren, with some hard-hitting imagery. Fine words.

September 3rd, 2025 01:49

The character of a man
John Lee said:

Didn\'t God also create the animals? He did, and found them good. So what to do with the \"unwanted\" dog?.. Want it. Love it. Just as God intended. Heaven is full of everything He loves. Not just humans. Excellent write!

September 2nd, 2025 22:43

Plastic legacy
arqios said:

Truly living in a world of grand delusion it would appear. We are such a contradictory species, probably the laughing stock of the rest of nature. 🙏🏻

September 2nd, 2025 16:25

Plastic legacy
Jerry Reynolds said:

Sharp humor, soren. A lot of truth lurks in sharp humor. Love it.

September 2nd, 2025 16:05

Plastic legacy
NinjaGirl said:

It\'s so interesting because it is all made from nature if you consider the elements part of nature. I don\'t know how it\'s possible to create something so...long-lasting and permanent.

September 2nd, 2025 14:52

Plastic legacy
Teddy.15 said:

I tell you what is not fake? Your fabulous poetry. What an epic marvelous poem, what a world we do live in all so very true what you have said in poetic form, I want a world in which artisan is appreciated and loved. 🌹

September 2nd, 2025 12:01

Plastic legacy
orchidee said:

Ohh, pass it all to me. I will give it to KP to eat! lol.

September 2nd, 2025 11:23

Plastic legacy
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this is sharp. The images stack heavy...plastic plants, asphalt sheets, steel forests...and it all lands as indictment. That line about “an asphalt sheet pulled over the flower’s bed”…that one really hit. It says everything about what we’ve paved over in the name of progress. Haunting image, my friend, and the close is biting truth. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 2nd, 2025 09:24

Too long
Goldfinch60 said:

Very moving words soren, that chain can always be there even if it is not.

Andy

September 2nd, 2025 01:40

Too long
NafisaSB said:

it is so sad when either a dog, or sometimes even a human feels this pain and rejection
well portrayed

September 2nd, 2025 00:58

Too long
Muse of Calliope said:

Heart-wrenching especially as I can relate to the feeling of being stuck in a troubled mindset borne of past sorrows; that although gone externally, still remain just as real to me in my head. Thank you for the write.

September 1st, 2025 20:36

Too long
Kevin Hulme said:

Certainly has you thinking. Is anyone really free.
Good Write.

September 1st, 2025 18:20

Too long
Keeter C said:

The wind often changes directions.

September 1st, 2025 17:49

Let it go
Natalie Heisey said:

Very beautiful! And well written 👏

September 1st, 2025 15:37



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