Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Deflowered
arqios said:

Oh to be outdoors and free, be it in a humble back garden rose bed… the exhilaration is beyond description but you have done so in poem! 🌹🌹🌹

January 24th, 2025 06:16

Deflowered
Neville said:



This is quite simply exquisite my friend .. all my senses have been aroused & then some .. if you would kindly excuse the pun .. πŸŒ»πŸ˜ŽπŸ‘

January 24th, 2025 05:30

Deflowered
Teddy.15 said:

You have uncovered the rose and it\'s mystical beauty my dear friend. Like everything in our lives time takes its toll. 🌹

January 24th, 2025 04:41

Deflowered
orchidee said:

Good write again SB. I admit I don\'t get some of the more cryptic meanings in people\'s poems, but don\'t let that stop you - or anyone else!

January 24th, 2025 04:25

Wake of a muse
Goldfinch60 said:

We will all rise in time soren and be together in a wonderful place of love and peace.

Andy

January 24th, 2025 02:14

Wake of a muse
Thad Wilk said:

Short and succinct,
a most captivating
and emotional write!!
Though your muse became
flaming clouds of smoke. πŸ”₯
It will return,
So don\'t give up the fight! πŸ™πŸ‘
Great read thanks for sharing!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

January 23rd, 2025 20:25

Wake of a muse
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

January 23rd, 2025 12:37

Wake of a muse
Teddy.15 said:

Wow, you certainly woke me, I could smell the smouldering lines. Wonderful. 🌹 Love your title

January 23rd, 2025 12:27

Wake of a muse
NinjaGirl said:

I absolutely love the imagery, it makes me very pleased.

January 23rd, 2025 12:23

Between heartbeats
Tom Dylan said:

A fine write, Soren. I love the way this flows. Great work.

January 23rd, 2025 10:30

Wake of a muse
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Man this hits home for me. The last couple of nights (though it may not seem like it because I keep publishing) have been muse wakes for me. I go, I pay my respects, I try to write something...anything...cannot do it. Depression certainly does not help. Anywho, if this poem is the resurrected \"trash\", I\'ll become a raccoon any day, my friend. This was superbly written! Well done! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

January 23rd, 2025 08:56

Wake of a muse
John Prophet said:

Enjoyable read. Nice work!
John

January 23rd, 2025 06:54

Wake of a muse
Mutley Ravishes said:

Thanks heavens a wake will never be held for The Muse!
Some great lines here Soren. It almost feels like you are writing backwards, if that makes sense?!

January 23rd, 2025 06:17

Between heartbeats
Salvia.S said:

Well written!

January 23rd, 2025 06:00

Wake of a muse
Poetic Licence said:

Wow a quite hard heavy piece today, hopefully something good will come out off the resurected trash, enjoyed the read

January 23rd, 2025 05:48

Between heartbeats
Neville said:



I feel both set and primed and able to take almost anything on .. but then I\'ve got the day off .. not that I\'m clock watching .. still I feel more aligned and that stems write from the heart .. excellent ink as ever .. Neville

January 23rd, 2025 05:36

Wake of a muse
arqios said:

That’s a hard striking poem, there, Soren. What’s left in the wake isn’t always what the final product embodies, other elements have been forged in their formation. On a side note, I wonder what the snow looked like in Pensacola. And although snow is what it is… its timing and circumstance brings nuances worth noting.πŸ™πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ•Š

January 23rd, 2025 04:09

Between heartbeats
Goldfinch60 said:

Time is such an unknown and unnerving thing soren.

Andy

January 23rd, 2025 02:23

Between heartbeats
Thad Wilk said:

Beautiful poem
wonderfully expressed!! πŸ‘
Imagery and metaphor
at its very best!!! πŸ†
My pleasure to read indeed!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

January 22nd, 2025 22:58

The muse\'s dirge
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Perhaps it\'s one of the best poems I have come across. Deeply moving portrayal in the colour of melancholy

January 22nd, 2025 22:50

Between heartbeats
David Wakeling said:

Time sure is a mystery.Some ask if it is real.This poem made me think.Excellent

January 22nd, 2025 19:33

Between heartbeats
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous. Powerful work.

January 22nd, 2025 12:54

Between heartbeats
NinjaGirl said:

Beautiful

January 22nd, 2025 12:50

Between heartbeats
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

January 22nd, 2025 09:54

Between heartbeats
Tristan Robert Lange said:

The very title is brilliant, let alone the poem. The idea of fleeting moments...and how many of those fill our lives. How many \"between heartbeat\" moments do we experience in a lifetime? In this poem, I could almost hear the hush between the ticks of a clock, much like the space between the beats of a heart. This is a very effective poem, my friend. And very thought-provoking! ❀️

January 22nd, 2025 09:17

Between heartbeats
Poetic Licence said:

Paints a picture to me of how time traps everything in some way however small that maybe, i sense a urge to forget the darker bits and regale more in the positive memories, Really enjoyed the read

January 22nd, 2025 07:40

Between heartbeats
Teddy.15 said:

I see a hospital bed and a ticking time bomb that is a heart , I see past present and future wow sorrenbarret this is outstanding. Wonderful wonderful. 🌹

January 22nd, 2025 05:12

Between heartbeats
arqios said:

Such a glorious tension between the transient and the eternal, the ever-present desire to capture and preserve the fleeting moments that define our lives.πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

January 22nd, 2025 04:06

Nature\'s poem
Goldfinch60 said:

Nature\'s symphonies, ballets are artworks are so wonderful to hear and see soren.

Andy

January 22nd, 2025 02:43

Nature\'s poem
Thad Wilk said:

A stunning poem
and painting 🎨 πŸ–ŒοΈ
of natures fine art!! πŸ‘
Just resonates
with greatness
right from the start!! πŸ†
My pleasure to read!!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

January 21st, 2025 22:32



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