Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



The bee and the fox
Thad Wilk said:

Awesome poem
short and sweet!! πŸ‘
Great rhyme and flow,
to read a real treat!!!πŸ’―πŸ€©
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad

December 5th, 2024 21:38

The bee and the fox
Tony36 said:

Brilliant

December 5th, 2024 17:15

The bee and the fox
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work. The rhyme and meter is impeccable.

December 5th, 2024 12:54

The bee and the fox
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Sorren.

December 5th, 2024 10:46

The bee and the fox
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

December 5th, 2024 08:33

The bee and the fox
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My dog once ran away and eventually came running home side-by-side with a fox. No joke. The two made friends! LOL! She\'s also been stung by bees before. They did not make friends! 🀣 A wonderful poem, Soren. Enjoyed it thoroughly, my friend! β€οΈπŸ™

December 5th, 2024 08:15

The bee and the fox
arqios said:

An interesting meeting of differing species, coated in humour and possibly more!

December 5th, 2024 06:42

The bee and the fox
TobaniNataiella said:

A very enjoyable read, thank you Soren

December 5th, 2024 06:36

The bee and the fox
Teddy.15 said:

Fabulous rhyme and subject we can never forget natures beauty when you are around, love your imagery, and your very clever poetry. 🌹

December 5th, 2024 04:06

Mourn the morn
NafisaSB said:

such a poignant message - touched my heart

December 5th, 2024 02:13

Mourn the morn
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words soren, may that sadness bring light to our lives in time.

Andy

December 5th, 2024 02:06

Mourn the morn
Thad Wilk said:

πŸ‘πŸ‘
Two thumbs up my friend!!🀩
A very evocative piece
of art, great rhyme, flow and blend!πŸ’―
My pleasure to read indeed!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad

December 4th, 2024 21:27

Mourn the morn
David Wakeling said:

This made me think of the days on the farm where everything is dependent on good weather but the good weather never comes.Powerful poem

December 4th, 2024 17:40

Mourn the morn
aDarkerMind said:

dark indeed Soren,
and worthy of many reads and many more comments.

December 4th, 2024 13:33

Mourn the morn
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This poem is filled with despair and darkness and yet a glimmer of hope. Love the last line. Indeed. A hauntingly beautiful write my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

December 4th, 2024 09:56

Mourn the morn
orchidee said:

I dunno if it\'s morn[ing], noon, or night. By the time I found out what \'carpe diem\' meant, there was no day left to seize - night had fallen! Doh! lol.

December 4th, 2024 09:40

Mourn the morn
Cassie58 said:

Darker than dark, but still with a glint of feint light. Brimful of metaphor and wonderful language Soren.

December 4th, 2024 08:13

Mourn the morn
Teddy.15 said:

Your language is outstanding in this, I felt I was dancing all the way through, right to the end, brilliant title and imagery still the king 🀣

December 4th, 2024 05:38

Mourn the morn
Neville said:



I fear we are about to loose it .. there are too many fingers hovering above too many buttons .. and for now, I shall keep digging ..

December 4th, 2024 05:37

Mourn the morn
arqios said:

This poem captures the essence of a world steeped in despair yet holding onto fragments of hope and beauty. It\'s captivating imagery and metaphors evoke a powerful sense of struggle and resilience, highlighting the complex interplay between light and darkness in our lives. Another stirring poem Soren!

December 4th, 2024 05:16

Mourn the morn
TobaniNataiella said:

Thank you for a very beautiful read

December 4th, 2024 05:10

Jewel discarded
Cassie58 said:

There is loveliness everywhere for those who look. Sadly some don’t have the time to notice what is within their grasp. Beautiful poetry and multifaceted too. A jewel of a poem Soren. Fine work. A lovely read. This touched me particularly regarding the natural environment.

December 4th, 2024 03:41

Jewel discarded
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words soren and so very true, poems can come from so many items and places.

Andy

December 4th, 2024 01:56

Jewel discarded
Dan Williams said:

Damn the critics, a jewel indeed. Hard to look past where you are bound. Nice.

December 4th, 2024 01:21

Jewel discarded
Thad Wilk said:

Awesome poem and
thoughts penned!! πŸ‘
There\'s beauty all around
abound and still yet found!
So it\'s told,
One mans trash πŸ—‘οΈ
another man\'s gold! πŸͺ™
Great read love the
rhyme scheme!! 😍
Best regards ✌️ Thad

December 3rd, 2024 18:35

Jewel discarded
David Wakeling said:

This is a great poem mi amigo. I read it twice. Each poem contains a heartbeat....Made me think. Well done

December 3rd, 2024 15:02

Jewel discarded
Teddy.15 said:

Fabulous, you know you open a great debate with this. And you my friend are a great jewel. πŸ‘‘

December 3rd, 2024 12:54

Jewel discarded
orchidee said:

Boohoo! Verse 2, line 1: What I thought was splendour turned out to be trash - well, a trout, you know! lol.

December 3rd, 2024 10:02

Jewel discarded
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Amen! A wonderful write on writing and people discovering those written gems along the way, even if others thought they were trash. I often post, engage…then on to the next, almost forgetting the poem I previously wrote, that is until I see a notification that someone liked or commented on it because it spoke to them. Poems are the gifts that keep on giving! And yes, they do have their critics too! But well worth the risk in my humble opinion. Well done, friend! Great poem! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

December 3rd, 2024 09:27

Jewel discarded
Neville said:



I\'m with the geezer in the rectangle just below mine πŸ˜ŽπŸ‘

December 3rd, 2024 05:54



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