Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



What you can\'t accept in yourself
MendedFences27 said:

Interesting form SB. Well rhymed also. Such insecurity can and does destroy lives. Some end up living alone like a hermit. - Phil A.

June 11th, 2025 12:57

What you can\'t accept in yourself
Reta said:

Such an interesting structure and a very intriguing read. Well done.

June 11th, 2025 12:13

What you can\'t accept in yourself
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

June 11th, 2025 11:27

What you can\'t accept in yourself
Damaso said:

\"Born lack of trust deep inside, from womb it bursts not to confide... ...................it\'s here.\" I have to say, my friend, it shook my head this morning. Thanks so much for sharing. One of my favorites! Cheers

June 11th, 2025 07:42

What you can\'t accept in yourself
Salvia.S said:

Thoughtful and truthful with haunting rhythm. Very well written!

June 11th, 2025 06:04

Years
jarcher54 said:

At 71, I am not sure I like this! (-:

June 11th, 2025 05:04

What you can\'t accept in yourself
Poetic Licence said:

A very intriguing write, we have them insecurities some of us in bucket loads, and we should protect ourselves better against them, as they can so easily be our downfall, really enjoyed the read

June 11th, 2025 04:38

What you can\'t accept in yourself
David Wakeling said:

This is quite an interesting new style.It resembles a List of contents of a book. Ranging from Suspicion, insecurity and trust issue and there origins.It is however a little sinister in that it ends with the need for Protection.Fascinating piece.Made me stop and think

June 11th, 2025 04:08

What you can\'t accept in yourself
jarcher54 said:

Clever and a bit ominous!

June 11th, 2025 04:05

Double
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words soren we may well have doubles in this world\'

Andy

June 11th, 2025 01:18

What is perfect
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

Touches the heart this write does!

June 10th, 2025 18:00

Double
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous. You nailed it.

June 10th, 2025 13:07

Sleep on
Antara Sinha said:

It\'s an interesting poem with a deep thought. Keep writing poems and express your creative ideas.

June 10th, 2025 11:29

Damaged
Salvia.S said:

This is so true! Very well written.

June 10th, 2025 11:03

Double
Poetic Licence said:

Very interesting write which i have always wondered, there clearly are people who are identical in looks, I have wondered if in thought, feelings etc they are the same, enjoyed the read

June 10th, 2025 07:08

Damaged
rrodriguez said:

So true. When our island was devastated by hurricane Maria, time and nature were the factors that brought healing. Thank you for sharing your poem.

June 10th, 2025 06:42

Double
David Wakeling said:

This raises some important philosophical questions about individuality and genetics.I used to have a boss once and I saw her on the train one morning.I said hello to her only to find it was an identical looka like.Scary but true. Great poem that made me think

June 10th, 2025 04:08

Succulent
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words soren, those spikes defend the beauty within all.

Andy

June 10th, 2025 01:47

Succulent
Damaso said:

Wow, my friend, I can feel so vividly in many of the lines in this text. The place where the line between pain and pleasure can blur. Excellent and very captivating. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.

June 9th, 2025 16:24

Succulent
hzugman said:

Good write sorenbarrett.

June 9th, 2025 11:29

Succulent
orchidee said:

Good write SB. Ohh, I need no succubus while I have KP! lol.

June 9th, 2025 11:12

Succulent
Soman Ragavan said:

We will notice that the cactus is surrounded by spikes and thorns; these guard against some predators. Yet, the flowers are still useful and within reach of creatures like bees and butterflies. Thus, the working of nature ensures that some creatures do get to the flowers.
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June 9th, 2025 10:00

Years
Tom Dylan said:

Fine words, Soren. Nicely done.

June 9th, 2025 07:00

Sparrow
Reynaldo Casison said:

Nice one soren

Sparrow enjoys its Solitude
Seems to love the rain very cool
Soaring rhythms

June 9th, 2025 06:40

Succulent
Poetic Licence said:

Possibly dealing with a devil woman, a seductress who draws you in, sucks you dry then spits you out, nicely crafted write

June 9th, 2025 04:43

Succulent
David Wakeling said:

This is quite clever and thoughtful. Succulent cactus for me is a metaphor for Life itself.In particular it seems to be a descritption of a human relationships. A well crafted poem

June 9th, 2025 04:27

Succulent
Demar Desu said:

Metaphor for the ladies I’m assuming… great write SB

June 9th, 2025 03:57

Years
Goldfinch60 said:

Time is there for us all and will never stop but I always look for the good in life soren, it is there for us but many do not recognise it.

Andy

June 9th, 2025 02:05

Sleep on
AwHec8 said:

I like (love) actually this short & Sweet Poem. Don

June 9th, 2025 00:30

Too many
AwHec8 said:

Nice Poem. I mean really Sweet. Don

June 9th, 2025 00:27



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