Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Deflowered
arqios said:
Oh to be outdoors and free, be it in a humble back garden rose bedβ¦ the exhilaration is beyond description but you have done so in poem! πΉπΉπΉ
January 24th, 2025 06:16
arqios said:
Oh to be outdoors and free, be it in a humble back garden rose bedβ¦ the exhilaration is beyond description but you have done so in poem! πΉπΉπΉ
January 24th, 2025 06:16
Deflowered
Neville said:
This is quite simply exquisite my friend .. all my senses have been aroused & then some .. if you would kindly excuse the pun .. π»ππ
January 24th, 2025 05:30
Neville said:
This is quite simply exquisite my friend .. all my senses have been aroused & then some .. if you would kindly excuse the pun .. π»ππ
January 24th, 2025 05:30
Deflowered
Teddy.15 said:
You have uncovered the rose and it\'s mystical beauty my dear friend. Like everything in our lives time takes its toll. πΉ
January 24th, 2025 04:41
Teddy.15 said:
You have uncovered the rose and it\'s mystical beauty my dear friend. Like everything in our lives time takes its toll. πΉ
January 24th, 2025 04:41
Deflowered
orchidee said:
Good write again SB. I admit I don\'t get some of the more cryptic meanings in people\'s poems, but don\'t let that stop you - or anyone else!
January 24th, 2025 04:25
orchidee said:
Good write again SB. I admit I don\'t get some of the more cryptic meanings in people\'s poems, but don\'t let that stop you - or anyone else!
January 24th, 2025 04:25
Wake of a muse
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all rise in time soren and be together in a wonderful place of love and peace.
Andy
January 24th, 2025 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all rise in time soren and be together in a wonderful place of love and peace.
Andy
January 24th, 2025 02:14
Wake of a muse
Thad Wilk said:
Short and succinct,
a most captivating
and emotional write!!
Though your muse became
flaming clouds of smoke. π₯
It will return,
So don\'t give up the fight! ππ
Great read thanks for sharing!!
Best regards βοΈ Thad
January 23rd, 2025 20:25
Thad Wilk said:
Short and succinct,
a most captivating
and emotional write!!
Though your muse became
flaming clouds of smoke. π₯
It will return,
So don\'t give up the fight! ππ
Great read thanks for sharing!!
Best regards βοΈ Thad
January 23rd, 2025 20:25
Wake of a muse
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, you certainly woke me, I could smell the smouldering lines. Wonderful. πΉ Love your title
January 23rd, 2025 12:27
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, you certainly woke me, I could smell the smouldering lines. Wonderful. πΉ Love your title
January 23rd, 2025 12:27
Wake of a muse
NinjaGirl said:
I absolutely love the imagery, it makes me very pleased.
January 23rd, 2025 12:23
NinjaGirl said:
I absolutely love the imagery, it makes me very pleased.
January 23rd, 2025 12:23
Between heartbeats
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Soren. I love the way this flows. Great work.
January 23rd, 2025 10:30
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Soren. I love the way this flows. Great work.
January 23rd, 2025 10:30
Wake of a muse
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Man this hits home for me. The last couple of nights (though it may not seem like it because I keep publishing) have been muse wakes for me. I go, I pay my respects, I try to write something...anything...cannot do it. Depression certainly does not help. Anywho, if this poem is the resurrected \"trash\", I\'ll become a raccoon any day, my friend. This was superbly written! Well done! πΉπ
January 23rd, 2025 08:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Man this hits home for me. The last couple of nights (though it may not seem like it because I keep publishing) have been muse wakes for me. I go, I pay my respects, I try to write something...anything...cannot do it. Depression certainly does not help. Anywho, if this poem is the resurrected \"trash\", I\'ll become a raccoon any day, my friend. This was superbly written! Well done! πΉπ
January 23rd, 2025 08:56
Wake of a muse
Mutley Ravishes said:
Thanks heavens a wake will never be held for The Muse!
Some great lines here Soren. It almost feels like you are writing backwards, if that makes sense?!
January 23rd, 2025 06:17
Mutley Ravishes said:
Thanks heavens a wake will never be held for The Muse!
Some great lines here Soren. It almost feels like you are writing backwards, if that makes sense?!
January 23rd, 2025 06:17
Wake of a muse
Poetic Licence said:
Wow a quite hard heavy piece today, hopefully something good will come out off the resurected trash, enjoyed the read
January 23rd, 2025 05:48
Poetic Licence said:
Wow a quite hard heavy piece today, hopefully something good will come out off the resurected trash, enjoyed the read
January 23rd, 2025 05:48
Between heartbeats
Neville said:
I feel both set and primed and able to take almost anything on .. but then I\'ve got the day off .. not that I\'m clock watching .. still I feel more aligned and that stems write from the heart .. excellent ink as ever .. Neville
January 23rd, 2025 05:36
Neville said:
I feel both set and primed and able to take almost anything on .. but then I\'ve got the day off .. not that I\'m clock watching .. still I feel more aligned and that stems write from the heart .. excellent ink as ever .. Neville
January 23rd, 2025 05:36
Wake of a muse
arqios said:
Thatβs a hard striking poem, there, Soren. Whatβs left in the wake isnβt always what the final product embodies, other elements have been forged in their formation. On a side note, I wonder what the snow looked like in Pensacola. And although snow is what it isβ¦ its timing and circumstance brings nuances worth noting.ππ»ππ»π
January 23rd, 2025 04:09
arqios said:
Thatβs a hard striking poem, there, Soren. Whatβs left in the wake isnβt always what the final product embodies, other elements have been forged in their formation. On a side note, I wonder what the snow looked like in Pensacola. And although snow is what it isβ¦ its timing and circumstance brings nuances worth noting.ππ»ππ»π
January 23rd, 2025 04:09
Between heartbeats
Goldfinch60 said:
Time is such an unknown and unnerving thing soren.
Andy
January 23rd, 2025 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Time is such an unknown and unnerving thing soren.
Andy
January 23rd, 2025 02:23
Between heartbeats
Thad Wilk said:
Beautiful poem
wonderfully expressed!! π
Imagery and metaphor
at its very best!!! π
My pleasure to read indeed!
Best regards βοΈ Thad
January 22nd, 2025 22:58
Thad Wilk said:
Beautiful poem
wonderfully expressed!! π
Imagery and metaphor
at its very best!!! π
My pleasure to read indeed!
Best regards βοΈ Thad
January 22nd, 2025 22:58
The muse\'s dirge
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Perhaps it\'s one of the best poems I have come across. Deeply moving portrayal in the colour of melancholy
January 22nd, 2025 22:50
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Perhaps it\'s one of the best poems I have come across. Deeply moving portrayal in the colour of melancholy
January 22nd, 2025 22:50
Between heartbeats
David Wakeling said:
Time sure is a mystery.Some ask if it is real.This poem made me think.Excellent
January 22nd, 2025 19:33
David Wakeling said:
Time sure is a mystery.Some ask if it is real.This poem made me think.Excellent
January 22nd, 2025 19:33
Between heartbeats
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The very title is brilliant, let alone the poem. The idea of fleeting moments...and how many of those fill our lives. How many \"between heartbeat\" moments do we experience in a lifetime? In this poem, I could almost hear the hush between the ticks of a clock, much like the space between the beats of a heart. This is a very effective poem, my friend. And very thought-provoking! β€οΈ
January 22nd, 2025 09:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The very title is brilliant, let alone the poem. The idea of fleeting moments...and how many of those fill our lives. How many \"between heartbeat\" moments do we experience in a lifetime? In this poem, I could almost hear the hush between the ticks of a clock, much like the space between the beats of a heart. This is a very effective poem, my friend. And very thought-provoking! β€οΈ
January 22nd, 2025 09:17
Between heartbeats
Poetic Licence said:
Paints a picture to me of how time traps everything in some way however small that maybe, i sense a urge to forget the darker bits and regale more in the positive memories, Really enjoyed the read
January 22nd, 2025 07:40
Poetic Licence said:
Paints a picture to me of how time traps everything in some way however small that maybe, i sense a urge to forget the darker bits and regale more in the positive memories, Really enjoyed the read
January 22nd, 2025 07:40
Between heartbeats
Teddy.15 said:
I see a hospital bed and a ticking time bomb that is a heart , I see past present and future wow sorrenbarret this is outstanding. Wonderful wonderful. πΉ
January 22nd, 2025 05:12
Teddy.15 said:
I see a hospital bed and a ticking time bomb that is a heart , I see past present and future wow sorrenbarret this is outstanding. Wonderful wonderful. πΉ
January 22nd, 2025 05:12
Between heartbeats
arqios said:
Such a glorious tension between the transient and the eternal, the ever-present desire to capture and preserve the fleeting moments that define our lives.ππ»ππ»π
January 22nd, 2025 04:06
arqios said:
Such a glorious tension between the transient and the eternal, the ever-present desire to capture and preserve the fleeting moments that define our lives.ππ»ππ»π
January 22nd, 2025 04:06
Nature\'s poem
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature\'s symphonies, ballets are artworks are so wonderful to hear and see soren.
Andy
January 22nd, 2025 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature\'s symphonies, ballets are artworks are so wonderful to hear and see soren.
Andy
January 22nd, 2025 02:43
Nature\'s poem
Thad Wilk said:
A stunning poem
and painting π¨ ποΈ
of natures fine art!! π
Just resonates
with greatness
right from the start!! π
My pleasure to read!!!
Best regards βοΈ Thad
January 21st, 2025 22:32
Thad Wilk said:
A stunning poem
and painting π¨ ποΈ
of natures fine art!! π
Just resonates
with greatness
right from the start!! π
My pleasure to read!!!
Best regards βοΈ Thad
January 21st, 2025 22:32
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