Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Against all we want to believe
Accidental Poet said:

An interesting idea of the birth of a poem. Great work soren. 😉👍

February 5th, 2024 07:05

Against all we want to believe
Doggerel Dave said:

An odd process, but you\'ve got its essence, I believe Soren. After its birth, the process, as you point out, is ever evolving. Thanks for some poetic clarity here.

February 5th, 2024 06:26

Against all we want to believe
Teddy.15 said:

Dear sorenbarret

You have just described the birth of a poem perfectly
A poem like an embryo begins in the mind,

more than often conceived in the blind.

Created and born of a kind.

Its nature set and defined

Wow loved all the stanza\'s but what language you do use. Simply beautiful. And yes mine are ever evolving. Kudos. ❤️


February 5th, 2024 05:27

Transformation
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes we must all mover on in our lives soren.

Andy

February 5th, 2024 02:27

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arqios said:

Before and after!

February 4th, 2024 22:11

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Thomas W Case said:

Here\'s to new beginnings. Cheers.

February 4th, 2024 13:00

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Parisab said:

Simple and beautifully clean!

February 4th, 2024 12:38

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Accidental Poet said:

Inspiration comes in many ways and from many sources. You and Teddy of such sources. 😉👍

February 4th, 2024 11:16

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orchidee said:

Good write SB.

February 4th, 2024 10:53

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2781 said:

Another good analogy.

February 4th, 2024 07:50

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Teddy.15 said:

Wow, putting my senryu to shame. 😂 Oh my dear Sorenbarret an outstanding 5/7/5 absolutely a huge kudos inspiring and gosh, your imagery wow. 🦋

February 4th, 2024 07:50

From time to time
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words soren taking me to those former places in your mind.

Andy

February 4th, 2024 02:20

Blossoms to ground
2781 said:

Let\'s hope it\'s an analogy for the world.

February 3rd, 2024 17:22

From time to time
Accidental Poet said:

Your metaphors are mind boggling, yet enticing the reader to stroll along through your forests of memories. Excellent write soren. 😉👍

February 3rd, 2024 09:23

From time to time
arqios said:

Verses of pastoral bliss. Enraptured here in this forest. Thanks Soren 🙏🏻

February 3rd, 2024 06:33

From time to time
Teddy.15 said:

So deep in thought you have made a moving film. Absolutely beautiful. 🤗

February 3rd, 2024 06:03

From time to time
orchidee said:

Good write SB.
You been there before?! heehee.

February 3rd, 2024 05:30

From time to time
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'m not skilled with metaphor, as I may have mentioned before once or twice...........
However this, so rich in imagery leaves me in total concordance as it perfectly describes the flavour of my from time to time reveries, although with more truth than I could achieve.
Great write, Soren.


February 3rd, 2024 05:10

Blossoms to ground
Goldfinch60 said:

May that new life always be there soren.

Andy

February 3rd, 2024 03:25

Blossoms to ground
Bella Shepard said:

The cycle of life in beautiful verse. Love it!

February 2nd, 2024 16:30

Going home
Bella Shepard said:

When it\'s over, is it really over? What was love is always there, locked away in a compartment of memory, for better or worse. Two incredible stanzas that says it all so eloquently.

February 2nd, 2024 14:49

Blossoms to ground
Accidental Poet said:

And the cycle of life continues. Awesome write soren. 😊👍

February 2nd, 2024 11:22

Blossoms to ground
Teddy.15 said:

Wow simply gorgeous and what a wonderful seed it be. ❤️

February 2nd, 2024 04:56

Blossoms to ground
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

February 2nd, 2024 04:52

Going home
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful emotive words soren.

Andy

February 2nd, 2024 02:51

Going home
Accidental Poet said:

Great write soren, reminds me of my dad. 😌

February 1st, 2024 10:06

Going home
orchidee said:

A fine write SB.
If it wasn\'t so poignant a theme - when did ya see me breathing? And why won\'t ya be here tomorrow - where ya going?! heehee.
Do shut up Orchi, says Fido.

February 1st, 2024 09:55

Going home
Teddy.15 said:

Just so sad yet so beautiful. I wanted to choose a favourite part but every line is perfect, hidden under a blanket of deep pain. 💜

February 1st, 2024 04:23

One, Two, See
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work.

January 31st, 2024 12:02

One, Two, See
Accidental Poet said:

And so there begins a child\'s interest in poetry. Quick, somebody get that kid a pen. 😉👍

January 31st, 2024 10:57



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