Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Leaves
arqios said:
Sometimes I feel that one or both of us was grafted and replanted elsewhere and our common roots and main trunk no longer shared. Speaks the state of several of my bygone younger relationships. 🙏🏻🕊
March 15th, 2025 05:51
arqios said:
Sometimes I feel that one or both of us was grafted and replanted elsewhere and our common roots and main trunk no longer shared. Speaks the state of several of my bygone younger relationships. 🙏🏻🕊
March 15th, 2025 05:51
Leaves
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of siblings growing up together but gradually drifting apart, then the loss of one while the other remembers fondly of their youth, enjoyed the read
March 15th, 2025 05:47
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of siblings growing up together but gradually drifting apart, then the loss of one while the other remembers fondly of their youth, enjoyed the read
March 15th, 2025 05:47
Verses of dust
Goldfinch60 said:
We all write poems and hope others read them as I do yours soren.
Andy
March 15th, 2025 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
We all write poems and hope others read them as I do yours soren.
Andy
March 15th, 2025 02:10
Verses of dust
Ellen Marsell said:
Not everything created will endure; some will crumble, but the process of creation remains meaningful.
March 14th, 2025 14:05
Ellen Marsell said:
Not everything created will endure; some will crumble, but the process of creation remains meaningful.
March 14th, 2025 14:05
Verses of dust
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, the poet\'s craft. Not every piece will be of the same quality, but they will be crafted all the same. Wonderful poem, my friend. 🌹👏
March 14th, 2025 09:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, the poet\'s craft. Not every piece will be of the same quality, but they will be crafted all the same. Wonderful poem, my friend. 🌹👏
March 14th, 2025 09:58
Verses of dust
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and enjoyable read, I have had many days like that with my poetry and emotions, the complexity is sometimes to daunting,
March 14th, 2025 09:22
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and enjoyable read, I have had many days like that with my poetry and emotions, the complexity is sometimes to daunting,
March 14th, 2025 09:22
Verses of dust
Teddy.15 said:
And that is everything that makes you into a great poet. 🌹 Love this. 🌹
March 14th, 2025 08:55
Teddy.15 said:
And that is everything that makes you into a great poet. 🌹 Love this. 🌹
March 14th, 2025 08:55
Verses of dust
Friendship said:
You use clay as a metaphor for experiences and emotions. The act of molding clay parallels the way we shape our thoughts and feelings into art. Your poem seeks to express the complexities of creation, acknowledging both the ephemeral and lasting aspects of artistic endeavors and inviting readers to consider their own creative journeys.
March 14th, 2025 05:49
Friendship said:
You use clay as a metaphor for experiences and emotions. The act of molding clay parallels the way we shape our thoughts and feelings into art. Your poem seeks to express the complexities of creation, acknowledging both the ephemeral and lasting aspects of artistic endeavors and inviting readers to consider their own creative journeys.
March 14th, 2025 05:49
Verses of dust
arqios said:
Amazing 🤩 a vivid portrayal that I’ve myself experienced 🙏🏻🕊Liked and Faved
March 14th, 2025 05:35
arqios said:
Amazing 🤩 a vivid portrayal that I’ve myself experienced 🙏🏻🕊Liked and Faved
March 14th, 2025 05:35
Verses of dust
Salvia.S said:
Your words are like clay, molded into a beautiful, poignant reflection on the human experience. Every line is a testament to the fragile, yet resilient nature of life.
March 14th, 2025 05:25
Salvia.S said:
Your words are like clay, molded into a beautiful, poignant reflection on the human experience. Every line is a testament to the fragile, yet resilient nature of life.
March 14th, 2025 05:25
Verses of dust
David Wakeling said:
I know the feeling.Some of mine are like arrows that hit the target others miss by a mile.A very thought provoking piece
March 14th, 2025 05:00
David Wakeling said:
I know the feeling.Some of mine are like arrows that hit the target others miss by a mile.A very thought provoking piece
March 14th, 2025 05:00
Thanatos night visitor
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, SB. Death is uninvited even though we know it will come to the party.
March 13th, 2025 14:21
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, SB. Death is uninvited even though we know it will come to the party.
March 13th, 2025 14:21
Thanatos night visitor
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Felt this one deeply. Very powerful
March 13th, 2025 13:13
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Felt this one deeply. Very powerful
March 13th, 2025 13:13
Thanatos night visitor
orchidee said:
A daft comment - I wanted the No.11 bus to Torremolinos but caught the No.7 bus to Thanatos by mistake. Doh! lol.
March 13th, 2025 12:10
orchidee said:
A daft comment - I wanted the No.11 bus to Torremolinos but caught the No.7 bus to Thanatos by mistake. Doh! lol.
March 13th, 2025 12:10
Thanatos night visitor
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Powerful and poignant.
March 13th, 2025 09:41
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Powerful and poignant.
March 13th, 2025 09:41
Thanatos night visitor
Neville said:
Be careful what you wish for .. is something my parents taught me long ago & I am still a great believer in .. not because I am either this or that .. but because I don\'t think it\'s a good idea to put all my eggs in the same frying pan .. Still very muchly enjoyed .. Neville
March 13th, 2025 08:32
Neville said:
Be careful what you wish for .. is something my parents taught me long ago & I am still a great believer in .. not because I am either this or that .. but because I don\'t think it\'s a good idea to put all my eggs in the same frying pan .. Still very muchly enjoyed .. Neville
March 13th, 2025 08:32
Thanatos night visitor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This theme is just so foreign to me, I am not sure what to say. 🤷♂️🤣 All kidding aside, well done on this, Soren. This, my friend, is a poignant meditation on mortality, with vivid imagery that contrasts light and darkness. Mortality and the swift passage of time are well thought out in this piece. I love how you\'ve captured life’s brevity so creatively, where a single night’s sleep transforms a child into an old man. Hauntingly beautiful poetic exposé on one of the most universal experiences to not just humanity, but all of life. Well done. 🌹👏
March 13th, 2025 07:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This theme is just so foreign to me, I am not sure what to say. 🤷♂️🤣 All kidding aside, well done on this, Soren. This, my friend, is a poignant meditation on mortality, with vivid imagery that contrasts light and darkness. Mortality and the swift passage of time are well thought out in this piece. I love how you\'ve captured life’s brevity so creatively, where a single night’s sleep transforms a child into an old man. Hauntingly beautiful poetic exposé on one of the most universal experiences to not just humanity, but all of life. Well done. 🌹👏
March 13th, 2025 07:32
Thanatos night visitor
Poetic Licence said:
A very powerful writ around the visitor of death, I wouldn\'t mind which way i die violent or gentle, just as long as its quick, great write
March 13th, 2025 06:52
Poetic Licence said:
A very powerful writ around the visitor of death, I wouldn\'t mind which way i die violent or gentle, just as long as its quick, great write
March 13th, 2025 06:52
Thanatos night visitor
arqios said:
Now I can’t pass up a poem where “gloom” features quite effectively 🙏🏻🕊
March 13th, 2025 05:37
arqios said:
Now I can’t pass up a poem where “gloom” features quite effectively 🙏🏻🕊
March 13th, 2025 05:37
Thanatos night visitor
David Wakeling said:
This is a master work.So powerful and insightful.Well done mi amigo
March 13th, 2025 04:53
David Wakeling said:
This is a master work.So powerful and insightful.Well done mi amigo
March 13th, 2025 04:53
Thanatos night visitor
Teddy.15 said:
Most dignified, as I\'ve lost many loved ones at a young age I truly dig deep and reflect on death in all its glory, before 1974 I believe I was in fact dead, because I wasn\'t alive, I know this will make sense to you because you know me well, I don\'t believe we should live in fear of death, because it is a natural cycle of the gift of life, none can escape it in the end. Stunning poem my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
March 13th, 2025 04:37
Teddy.15 said:
Most dignified, as I\'ve lost many loved ones at a young age I truly dig deep and reflect on death in all its glory, before 1974 I believe I was in fact dead, because I wasn\'t alive, I know this will make sense to you because you know me well, I don\'t believe we should live in fear of death, because it is a natural cycle of the gift of life, none can escape it in the end. Stunning poem my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
March 13th, 2025 04:37
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
Tom Dylan said:
This really packed a punch. Modern life in a nutshell. A fine, thought-provoking piece.
March 13th, 2025 03:28
Tom Dylan said:
This really packed a punch. Modern life in a nutshell. A fine, thought-provoking piece.
March 13th, 2025 03:28
Bee in your bonnet sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words soren but luckily I think outside the box and have reality in my life.
Andy
March 13th, 2025 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words soren but luckily I think outside the box and have reality in my life.
Andy
March 13th, 2025 01:43
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