Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Survival
gray0328 said:
suggests that collective survival requires suppressing personal creativity and uniqueness. It implies a trade-off between societal order and individual freedom. Well Done Brother
October 12th, 2025 05:46
gray0328 said:
suggests that collective survival requires suppressing personal creativity and uniqueness. It implies a trade-off between societal order and individual freedom. Well Done Brother
October 12th, 2025 05:46
Survival
Goldfinch60 said:
So true soren but I don\'t think I will see it in my lifetime.
Andy
October 12th, 2025 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
So true soren but I don\'t think I will see it in my lifetime.
Andy
October 12th, 2025 01:10
Survival
RSM0812 said:
This is a lesson for the learning mind. It evokes the way people should treat others and live in a better world of kindness and understanding.
October 11th, 2025 20:45
RSM0812 said:
This is a lesson for the learning mind. It evokes the way people should treat others and live in a better world of kindness and understanding.
October 11th, 2025 20:45
Survival
spilleronsheet said:
Wonderful ethical dilemmas you pulled thought those lovely lines….a dialectics between utilitarian vs individualism….keep penning dear soren
October 11th, 2025 15:41
spilleronsheet said:
Wonderful ethical dilemmas you pulled thought those lovely lines….a dialectics between utilitarian vs individualism….keep penning dear soren
October 11th, 2025 15:41
Survival
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
I love the way you started it and how you ended it. It conveys a very hard-to-accept message, but it\'s true. Nicely written, dude!
October 11th, 2025 14:32
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
I love the way you started it and how you ended it. It conveys a very hard-to-accept message, but it\'s true. Nicely written, dude!
October 11th, 2025 14:32
Survival
Lorenz said:
What is strong will become weak. This reminds me something : \'\' Who controls the present ...\'\'
October 11th, 2025 10:17
Lorenz said:
What is strong will become weak. This reminds me something : \'\' Who controls the present ...\'\'
October 11th, 2025 10:17
Near sighted
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Always capturing my complete attention! Great write my friend!
October 11th, 2025 09:21
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Always capturing my complete attention! Great write my friend!
October 11th, 2025 09:21
Near sighted
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is piercing truth wrapped in quiet rhyme...the dream of home shadowed by the cost of looking away. You turned privilege into poetry, and it hits hard. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2025 08:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is piercing truth wrapped in quiet rhyme...the dream of home shadowed by the cost of looking away. You turned privilege into poetry, and it hits hard. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2025 08:37
Survival
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reads like a mirror to the darker instincts of humanity…when survival eclipses soul. Unsettling but honest in its provocation. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2025 08:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reads like a mirror to the darker instincts of humanity…when survival eclipses soul. Unsettling but honest in its provocation. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2025 08:24
Survival
Poetic Licence said:
The reality is and I hate to say this, it doesn\'t matter how we or collective society\'s change or try to change, there will always be those to stop the good and keep the bad well and truly alive. Sorry doom mongering again, enjoyed the read
October 11th, 2025 08:19
Poetic Licence said:
The reality is and I hate to say this, it doesn\'t matter how we or collective society\'s change or try to change, there will always be those to stop the good and keep the bad well and truly alive. Sorry doom mongering again, enjoyed the read
October 11th, 2025 08:19
Survival
Friendship said:
I enjoyed your poem very much; it really caught my interest because it\'s something I\'ve always believed in. Your poem masterfully explores the tension between individualism and collectivism in the context of survival, revealing that in the pursuit of existence, societal values may need to be reimagined, leading to a transformative shift in personal freedom and creativity. The poem posits that in a quest for the greater good, individual expression may be elevated, yet also sacrificed. Moreover, your poem serves as a profound commentary on the moral dilemmas inherent in the pursuit of survival, inspiring contemplation about the implications of balancing individualism with the greater good. It raises essential questions about the values that govern society and the potential consequences of embracing collectivism.
October 11th, 2025 06:57
Friendship said:
I enjoyed your poem very much; it really caught my interest because it\'s something I\'ve always believed in. Your poem masterfully explores the tension between individualism and collectivism in the context of survival, revealing that in the pursuit of existence, societal values may need to be reimagined, leading to a transformative shift in personal freedom and creativity. The poem posits that in a quest for the greater good, individual expression may be elevated, yet also sacrificed. Moreover, your poem serves as a profound commentary on the moral dilemmas inherent in the pursuit of survival, inspiring contemplation about the implications of balancing individualism with the greater good. It raises essential questions about the values that govern society and the potential consequences of embracing collectivism.
October 11th, 2025 06:57
Survival
Paul Bell said:
Freedom today in Britain is strained.
Who would have thought Facebook posts would get the police chapping your door.
They did say the weak would inherit the earth, just seems to be taking a long time.
October 11th, 2025 06:11
Paul Bell said:
Freedom today in Britain is strained.
Who would have thought Facebook posts would get the police chapping your door.
They did say the weak would inherit the earth, just seems to be taking a long time.
October 11th, 2025 06:11
Near sighted
NafisaSB said:
Agree with you here. It’s what’s happening all around us 🤔we have become immune to other people’s suffering 🥲
October 11th, 2025 03:49
NafisaSB said:
Agree with you here. It’s what’s happening all around us 🤔we have become immune to other people’s suffering 🥲
October 11th, 2025 03:49
Near sighted
Goldfinch60 said:
That fence will protect your home from all evil soren.
Andy
October 11th, 2025 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
That fence will protect your home from all evil soren.
Andy
October 11th, 2025 01:24
Near sighted
NinjaGirl said:
I\'d say people would rather have an amazing life for themselves than a mediocre life for everyone...not on purpose per se, but that\'s the way the world seems to turn. Well-written description.
October 10th, 2025 20:09
NinjaGirl said:
I\'d say people would rather have an amazing life for themselves than a mediocre life for everyone...not on purpose per se, but that\'s the way the world seems to turn. Well-written description.
October 10th, 2025 20:09
Near sighted
RSM0812 said:
I love the wording you used with myopic. Nicely done for sure.
October 10th, 2025 19:07
RSM0812 said:
I love the wording you used with myopic. Nicely done for sure.
October 10th, 2025 19:07
Near sighted
arqios said:
Reminds me of that Rupert Holmes song. But this poem is of much more depth and reach🕊️🙏🏻
October 10th, 2025 16:57
arqios said:
Reminds me of that Rupert Holmes song. But this poem is of much more depth and reach🕊️🙏🏻
October 10th, 2025 16:57
The bed
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting write, it sounds like the bed is carrying a lot of memories and baggage from the past, maybe a new bed is needed.
October 10th, 2025 13:50
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting write, it sounds like the bed is carrying a lot of memories and baggage from the past, maybe a new bed is needed.
October 10th, 2025 13:50
Near sighted
Poetic Licence said:
Describes a shameful picture, how we stand and watch, to me it is so sad.
October 10th, 2025 13:39
Poetic Licence said:
Describes a shameful picture, how we stand and watch, to me it is so sad.
October 10th, 2025 13:39
Near sighted
Paul Bell said:
That\'s the way it is today, we all ignore the world in case it sues us.
Mind you, I think the white picket fence has been replaced with the 6 foot fence now.
October 10th, 2025 11:20
Paul Bell said:
That\'s the way it is today, we all ignore the world in case it sues us.
Mind you, I think the white picket fence has been replaced with the 6 foot fence now.
October 10th, 2025 11:20
Near sighted
Friendship said:
A unique style of writing that expresses a lot of emotional feelings, yet is concise and to the point. Your poem explores the theme of awareness and empowerment in the face of global suffering and conflict, inspiring us to take action. It contrasts the idyllic imagery of a peaceful, domestic life—symbolized by the “white picket fence” and “painted home”—with the harsh realities of the world, where “people die while peace burns,” urging us to make a difference. The subject matter reflects a tension between the speaker\'s personal desires for a tranquil existence and the darker truths of societal issues that they choose to address, motivating us to create positive change.
October 10th, 2025 06:52
Friendship said:
A unique style of writing that expresses a lot of emotional feelings, yet is concise and to the point. Your poem explores the theme of awareness and empowerment in the face of global suffering and conflict, inspiring us to take action. It contrasts the idyllic imagery of a peaceful, domestic life—symbolized by the “white picket fence” and “painted home”—with the harsh realities of the world, where “people die while peace burns,” urging us to make a difference. The subject matter reflects a tension between the speaker\'s personal desires for a tranquil existence and the darker truths of societal issues that they choose to address, motivating us to create positive change.
October 10th, 2025 06:52
Near sighted
Neville said:
How extraordinarily short-sighted .. and it\'s happening right under all of our very noses .. shame on them .. Neville 👍😎👍
October 10th, 2025 06:10
Neville said:
How extraordinarily short-sighted .. and it\'s happening right under all of our very noses .. shame on them .. Neville 👍😎👍
October 10th, 2025 06:10
The bed
Goldfinch60 said:
That decay can happen soren but can be renewed and a new bed can be so wonderful.
Andy
October 10th, 2025 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
That decay can happen soren but can be renewed and a new bed can be so wonderful.
Andy
October 10th, 2025 01:50
The bed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this one aches quietly…the image of love’s decay wrapped in dust and wood is haunting. You’ve turned memory into ruin fantastically, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2025 19:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this one aches quietly…the image of love’s decay wrapped in dust and wood is haunting. You’ve turned memory into ruin fantastically, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2025 19:49
Mirrored pool of Hermes
Joseph M Marion said:
I love this very profound but a very soothing way to look at what could be to come
October 9th, 2025 15:34
Joseph M Marion said:
I love this very profound but a very soothing way to look at what could be to come
October 9th, 2025 15:34
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