Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Words of an old man
orchidee said:
I will close dat door after I\'ve said good write SB. lol.
May 24th, 2025 08:23
orchidee said:
I will close dat door after I\'ve said good write SB. lol.
May 24th, 2025 08:23
Demise of a poem
Soman Ragavan said:
The title “Demise of a poem” is problematic. The nature of poetry is such that a poem, once composed, has a life of its own. It goes beyond the reach of the poet himself. Indeed, others (eg critics) can find in it things that the original poet himself did not see. For such is the nature of poetry. It is so complex that even the poet might not fully realise what he has produced. Strangely, other people might be able to decipher the issues.
“(Quoting PHILIP LARKIN).
“Some years ago I came to the conclusion that to write a poem was to construct a verbal device that would preserve an experience indefinitely by reproducing it in whoever read the poem. (.....) “ -- \"MODERN POETS IN FOCUS.\" (Volume 2). (Edited by Jeremy Robson). London : Woburn Books Ltd., 1973.
So, in writing a poem, somehow we expect, in our subconscious at least, that others will be able to dig into the meanings.
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May 24th, 2025 08:08
Soman Ragavan said:
The title “Demise of a poem” is problematic. The nature of poetry is such that a poem, once composed, has a life of its own. It goes beyond the reach of the poet himself. Indeed, others (eg critics) can find in it things that the original poet himself did not see. For such is the nature of poetry. It is so complex that even the poet might not fully realise what he has produced. Strangely, other people might be able to decipher the issues.
“(Quoting PHILIP LARKIN).
“Some years ago I came to the conclusion that to write a poem was to construct a verbal device that would preserve an experience indefinitely by reproducing it in whoever read the poem. (.....) “ -- \"MODERN POETS IN FOCUS.\" (Volume 2). (Edited by Jeremy Robson). London : Woburn Books Ltd., 1973.
So, in writing a poem, somehow we expect, in our subconscious at least, that others will be able to dig into the meanings.
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May 24th, 2025 08:08
Lies of romance
Soman Ragavan said:
Intuition is a powerful force, as well as a mysterious one. It cannot be explained. More often than not, it advises us for the better. But we prefer to throw away that advice. We might live to regret it. Intuition is a power that complements intelligence and reasoning. It operates on laws of its own. But the voice is distinctly there. We ignore it at our own peril.
May 24th, 2025 07:56
Soman Ragavan said:
Intuition is a powerful force, as well as a mysterious one. It cannot be explained. More often than not, it advises us for the better. But we prefer to throw away that advice. We might live to regret it. Intuition is a power that complements intelligence and reasoning. It operates on laws of its own. But the voice is distinctly there. We ignore it at our own peril.
May 24th, 2025 07:56
Demise of a poem
Neilton said:
oh my god !! what a masterpiece ! a few months ago my phone literally almost died and i thought i lost all my poems i had written there. Thankfully i got them back but i cried every day because of that .As you said our poems are just like our children and its actually so sad when you have a good idea and you have written such a great poem and you just cant find the right words to finish it. But I like to believe that some day im going to finish all my poems!
Also i admire so much your love for poetry !
May 24th, 2025 07:54
Neilton said:
oh my god !! what a masterpiece ! a few months ago my phone literally almost died and i thought i lost all my poems i had written there. Thankfully i got them back but i cried every day because of that .As you said our poems are just like our children and its actually so sad when you have a good idea and you have written such a great poem and you just cant find the right words to finish it. But I like to believe that some day im going to finish all my poems!
Also i admire so much your love for poetry !
May 24th, 2025 07:54
Words of an old man
Friendship said:
The poem masterfully embodies the resilient voice of an elderly individual, courageously embracing the complexities of daily life, memories, and the transformative power of time. It conveys a profound sense of hope and warmth, even in the face of adversity and the ominous threat of life\'s challenges, both literal and metaphorical. Moreover, your poem serves to underscore the vital importance of unbreakable familial bonds, the solace of a loving home, and the simple yet profound joys of life, while concurrently acknowledging the triumphs of aging and the beauty of cherished memories.
This poem elicited profound sadness within me, resonating deeply in my heart. It\'s challenging to navigate a world without familial support, yet simultaneously experiencing a sense of detachment. Aging can be particularly difficult without a support system or individuals to share memories of the past.
May 24th, 2025 07:03
Friendship said:
The poem masterfully embodies the resilient voice of an elderly individual, courageously embracing the complexities of daily life, memories, and the transformative power of time. It conveys a profound sense of hope and warmth, even in the face of adversity and the ominous threat of life\'s challenges, both literal and metaphorical. Moreover, your poem serves to underscore the vital importance of unbreakable familial bonds, the solace of a loving home, and the simple yet profound joys of life, while concurrently acknowledging the triumphs of aging and the beauty of cherished memories.
This poem elicited profound sadness within me, resonating deeply in my heart. It\'s challenging to navigate a world without familial support, yet simultaneously experiencing a sense of detachment. Aging can be particularly difficult without a support system or individuals to share memories of the past.
May 24th, 2025 07:03
Words of an old man
Jerry Reynolds said:
I have heard that song. Different accents same song.
May 24th, 2025 06:48
Jerry Reynolds said:
I have heard that song. Different accents same song.
May 24th, 2025 06:48
Unknown greatness
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Very thought provoking. Does art exist for its own sake or is its survival and meaning depend on tbe beholder?
May 24th, 2025 06:38
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Very thought provoking. Does art exist for its own sake or is its survival and meaning depend on tbe beholder?
May 24th, 2025 06:38
Demise of a poem
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Beautiful and profound - a rare combination
May 24th, 2025 06:36
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Beautiful and profound - a rare combination
May 24th, 2025 06:36
Words of an old man
Poetic Licence said:
It\'s getting drafty in here, enjoyed the read
May 24th, 2025 06:19
Poetic Licence said:
It\'s getting drafty in here, enjoyed the read
May 24th, 2025 06:19
Words of an old man
arqios said:
ENjoyed to Fave! Felt your freedom here, Soren 🕊️🙏🏻
May 24th, 2025 06:08
arqios said:
ENjoyed to Fave! Felt your freedom here, Soren 🕊️🙏🏻
May 24th, 2025 06:08
Words of an old man
David Wakeling said:
This is a fun accent poem. I enjoyed reading mi amigo
May 24th, 2025 04:25
David Wakeling said:
This is a fun accent poem. I enjoyed reading mi amigo
May 24th, 2025 04:25
Demise of a poem
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have poems within us that were not written soren but they may come to the fore in the future.
Andy
May 24th, 2025 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have poems within us that were not written soren but they may come to the fore in the future.
Andy
May 24th, 2025 01:18
Demise of a poem
Kevin Hulme said:
Good Metaphor .
\'The Poet\' by Rainer Maria Rilke is a good Poem on the Muse Subject.
May 23rd, 2025 20:19
Kevin Hulme said:
Good Metaphor .
\'The Poet\' by Rainer Maria Rilke is a good Poem on the Muse Subject.
May 23rd, 2025 20:19
Demise of a poem
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
My poem demised. It started \'Once upon a time....\', then I ran out of words of what to say next! heehee.
May 23rd, 2025 09:50
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
My poem demised. It started \'Once upon a time....\', then I ran out of words of what to say next! heehee.
May 23rd, 2025 09:50
Demise of a poem
MendedFences27 said:
We\'ve all been there, and I suppose that doesn\'t help at all, and there is no clear-cut solution. I have tried many, many techniques to get back on track, and I\'m convinced it\'s just a matter of time. Some seemed to work at the time but failed when tried at a later date. One way that worked is to write about not being able to write. I hope this gets you going again. - Phil A.
May 23rd, 2025 08:48
MendedFences27 said:
We\'ve all been there, and I suppose that doesn\'t help at all, and there is no clear-cut solution. I have tried many, many techniques to get back on track, and I\'m convinced it\'s just a matter of time. Some seemed to work at the time but failed when tried at a later date. One way that worked is to write about not being able to write. I hope this gets you going again. - Phil A.
May 23rd, 2025 08:48
Demise of a poem
Muse of Calliope said:
I love this metaphor; poetic babies. All of them so precious, and far too many left to untimely demise 🥀
May 23rd, 2025 08:33
Muse of Calliope said:
I love this metaphor; poetic babies. All of them so precious, and far too many left to untimely demise 🥀
May 23rd, 2025 08:33
Demise of a poem
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t you ever stop or at least slow down Soren? I remain unsure as to who will exhaust themselves first, you or your followers. Either way I always read \'em get what I can out of \'em and thanks for the chance to do that!
May 23rd, 2025 07:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t you ever stop or at least slow down Soren? I remain unsure as to who will exhaust themselves first, you or your followers. Either way I always read \'em get what I can out of \'em and thanks for the chance to do that!
May 23rd, 2025 07:23
Demise of a poem
Friendship said:
Well written, your title gave it away,The poem explores feelings regarding the death of their poetic expression. could be interpreted as the internal landscape of the poet\'s mind, a place filled with lost ideas and unfulfilled potential. You seem to suggest a moment of introspection—perhaps during a creative block or a period of self-doubt.\"You \" centers on the need to articulate the pain of artistic failure, highlighting its emotional toll on the creator. The poem acts as a catharsis for the poet, enabling them to confront and articulate their grief over lost creativity.
May 23rd, 2025 07:14
Friendship said:
Well written, your title gave it away,The poem explores feelings regarding the death of their poetic expression. could be interpreted as the internal landscape of the poet\'s mind, a place filled with lost ideas and unfulfilled potential. You seem to suggest a moment of introspection—perhaps during a creative block or a period of self-doubt.\"You \" centers on the need to articulate the pain of artistic failure, highlighting its emotional toll on the creator. The poem acts as a catharsis for the poet, enabling them to confront and articulate their grief over lost creativity.
May 23rd, 2025 07:14
Demise of a poem
John Prophet said:
Yup, how many started only to vaporize. Well said.
John
May 23rd, 2025 06:50
John Prophet said:
Yup, how many started only to vaporize. Well said.
John
May 23rd, 2025 06:50
Demise of a poem
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write over something we all have alot of unfinished work. Is there such a thing as a perfect poem, do we chase something that\'s not there, we all cherish our creations because they are personnel, . Myself I am happy if mine turn out half ok, enjoyed the read
May 23rd, 2025 06:08
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write over something we all have alot of unfinished work. Is there such a thing as a perfect poem, do we chase something that\'s not there, we all cherish our creations because they are personnel, . Myself I am happy if mine turn out half ok, enjoyed the read
May 23rd, 2025 06:08
Demise of a poem
arqios said:
Oh the sadness of this.. I had notebook upon notebook, boxes and boxes of them filled with scribblings that never made it to completion. Very moving🙏🏻🕊️
May 23rd, 2025 05:39
arqios said:
Oh the sadness of this.. I had notebook upon notebook, boxes and boxes of them filled with scribblings that never made it to completion. Very moving🙏🏻🕊️
May 23rd, 2025 05:39
Demise of a poem
David Wakeling said:
This is a sobering piece.There is a touch of sadness at the fact that some poems are regarded as imperfect and in fact dead. But really you have to trust your audience.they will see things you never thought were there. This is a powerful poem that made me think.Well done
May 23rd, 2025 04:51
David Wakeling said:
This is a sobering piece.There is a touch of sadness at the fact that some poems are regarded as imperfect and in fact dead. But really you have to trust your audience.they will see things you never thought were there. This is a powerful poem that made me think.Well done
May 23rd, 2025 04:51
Demise of a poem
Salvia.S said:
This is strong and emotional. It shows the pain of losing creativity in a powerful way. The images used—like poems being buried or lost—are clear and moving. It feels very real and honest.
May 23rd, 2025 04:42
Salvia.S said:
This is strong and emotional. It shows the pain of losing creativity in a powerful way. The images used—like poems being buried or lost—are clear and moving. It feels very real and honest.
May 23rd, 2025 04:42
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