Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Near sighted
Friendship said:
A unique style of writing that expresses a lot of emotional feelings, yet is concise and to the point. Your poem explores the theme of awareness and empowerment in the face of global suffering and conflict, inspiring us to take action. It contrasts the idyllic imagery of a peaceful, domestic life—symbolized by the “white picket fence” and “painted home”—with the harsh realities of the world, where “people die while peace burns,” urging us to make a difference. The subject matter reflects a tension between the speaker\'s personal desires for a tranquil existence and the darker truths of societal issues that they choose to address, motivating us to create positive change.
October 10th, 2025 06:52
Friendship said:
A unique style of writing that expresses a lot of emotional feelings, yet is concise and to the point. Your poem explores the theme of awareness and empowerment in the face of global suffering and conflict, inspiring us to take action. It contrasts the idyllic imagery of a peaceful, domestic life—symbolized by the “white picket fence” and “painted home”—with the harsh realities of the world, where “people die while peace burns,” urging us to make a difference. The subject matter reflects a tension between the speaker\'s personal desires for a tranquil existence and the darker truths of societal issues that they choose to address, motivating us to create positive change.
October 10th, 2025 06:52
Near sighted
Neville said:
How extraordinarily short-sighted .. and it\'s happening right under all of our very noses .. shame on them .. Neville 👍😎👍
October 10th, 2025 06:10
Neville said:
How extraordinarily short-sighted .. and it\'s happening right under all of our very noses .. shame on them .. Neville 👍😎👍
October 10th, 2025 06:10
The bed
Goldfinch60 said:
That decay can happen soren but can be renewed and a new bed can be so wonderful.
Andy
October 10th, 2025 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
That decay can happen soren but can be renewed and a new bed can be so wonderful.
Andy
October 10th, 2025 01:50
The bed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this one aches quietly…the image of love’s decay wrapped in dust and wood is haunting. You’ve turned memory into ruin fantastically, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2025 19:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this one aches quietly…the image of love’s decay wrapped in dust and wood is haunting. You’ve turned memory into ruin fantastically, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2025 19:49
Mirrored pool of Hermes
Joseph M Marion said:
I love this very profound but a very soothing way to look at what could be to come
October 9th, 2025 15:34
Joseph M Marion said:
I love this very profound but a very soothing way to look at what could be to come
October 9th, 2025 15:34
The bed
Friendship said:
🕷️ It is quite interesting how one perceives their bed.🕷️🐀
October 9th, 2025 07:11
Friendship said:
🕷️ It is quite interesting how one perceives their bed.🕷️🐀
October 9th, 2025 07:11
Perfume of war
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe one day we will be able to give peace a chance soren.
Andy
October 9th, 2025 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe one day we will be able to give peace a chance soren.
Andy
October 9th, 2025 01:14
Perfume of war
NinjaGirl said:
Just think: after the war where the dog eats the cat, comes the lion laying down with the lamb.
October 8th, 2025 20:22
NinjaGirl said:
Just think: after the war where the dog eats the cat, comes the lion laying down with the lamb.
October 8th, 2025 20:22
Perfume of war
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this reads like a gothic prayer to decomposition...graphic, rhythmic, and strangely reverent. You caught the poetry in decay perfectly, my friend. A must fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 8th, 2025 14:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this reads like a gothic prayer to decomposition...graphic, rhythmic, and strangely reverent. You caught the poetry in decay perfectly, my friend. A must fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 8th, 2025 14:31
Perfume of war
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the grotesque and brutal realities of death and decay, particularly in the context of war. It reflects on the aftermath of violence, highlighting the visceral consequences and the pervasive stench of mortality that lingers in the environment. The poem suggests a cycle of life and death, where the natural world consumes the remnants of life, and beauty is overshadowed by horror.
October 8th, 2025 13:42
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the grotesque and brutal realities of death and decay, particularly in the context of war. It reflects on the aftermath of violence, highlighting the visceral consequences and the pervasive stench of mortality that lingers in the environment. The poem suggests a cycle of life and death, where the natural world consumes the remnants of life, and beauty is overshadowed by horror.
October 8th, 2025 13:42
Heaven\'s rain
Soman Ragavan said:
The poet\'s eye catches what others miss. Hidden wonders reveal themselves.
October 8th, 2025 07:10
Soman Ragavan said:
The poet\'s eye catches what others miss. Hidden wonders reveal themselves.
October 8th, 2025 07:10
Relationships, everything has a price
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
That\'s an interesting poem.
Everything is for sale, and ultimately, we are for sale too, even if it goes unnoticed
October 8th, 2025 05:21
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
That\'s an interesting poem.
Everything is for sale, and ultimately, we are for sale too, even if it goes unnoticed
October 8th, 2025 05:21
Relationships, everything has a price
Goldfinch60 said:
Purchase what you need not what you desire soren.
Andy
October 8th, 2025 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Purchase what you need not what you desire soren.
Andy
October 8th, 2025 01:06
Relationships, everything has a price
NinjaGirl said:
A difficult question...I\'ll take a used car, thrifted clothing, and a top-of-the-line quality man! It will never be one or the other. Very well-written, I enjoyed reading...a deepened experience for sure.
October 7th, 2025 12:22
NinjaGirl said:
A difficult question...I\'ll take a used car, thrifted clothing, and a top-of-the-line quality man! It will never be one or the other. Very well-written, I enjoyed reading...a deepened experience for sure.
October 7th, 2025 12:22
Relationships, everything has a price
Friendship said:
The poem explores the complexities and considerations involved in purchasing a vehicle, using it as a metaphor for broader life decisions and relationships. The speaker ultimately reflects on the pressures and confusion of consumer choices, leading to a humorous conclusion that walking may be the simplest option.
October 7th, 2025 08:23
Friendship said:
The poem explores the complexities and considerations involved in purchasing a vehicle, using it as a metaphor for broader life decisions and relationships. The speaker ultimately reflects on the pressures and confusion of consumer choices, leading to a humorous conclusion that walking may be the simplest option.
October 7th, 2025 08:23
Relationships, everything has a price
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, like a dealership of desire...slick talk, smart rhythm, and hard truth under the shine. The humor hits, but the insight sticks. Excellent work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 7th, 2025 07:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, like a dealership of desire...slick talk, smart rhythm, and hard truth under the shine. The humor hits, but the insight sticks. Excellent work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 7th, 2025 07:49
Relationships, everything has a price
Ellen Marsell said:
So witty and true — sometimes walking really is the best option😊
October 7th, 2025 05:32
Ellen Marsell said:
So witty and true — sometimes walking really is the best option😊
October 7th, 2025 05:32
Nuts
RSM0812 said:
Im pretty much fucking blown away by this one. Nice write Sorrenbarett!!!
October 6th, 2025 20:25
RSM0812 said:
Im pretty much fucking blown away by this one. Nice write Sorrenbarett!!!
October 6th, 2025 20:25
Some day
arqios said:
What a powerful ending! “Toilet paper,” in contrast to the rest of the poem entire, is just superlative! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻🪶
October 6th, 2025 19:37
arqios said:
What a powerful ending! “Toilet paper,” in contrast to the rest of the poem entire, is just superlative! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻🪶
October 6th, 2025 19:37
Some day
Lorenz said:
Man of toilet paper are you reffering to a french president ?
October 6th, 2025 11:32
Lorenz said:
Man of toilet paper are you reffering to a french president ?
October 6th, 2025 11:32
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