Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Blackness\' light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is cosmic poetry at its most refined—quantum physics woven through metaphor, light bending through lyrical space. I hear the waves, the dualities, the crests and collapses of matter and meaning alike. What strikes me most is how you layer transformation—blame into ash, devastation into bloom, blackness into light. Science meets soul here. It both humbles and stirs the reader—at least this one! Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
April 30th, 2025 10:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is cosmic poetry at its most refined—quantum physics woven through metaphor, light bending through lyrical space. I hear the waves, the dualities, the crests and collapses of matter and meaning alike. What strikes me most is how you layer transformation—blame into ash, devastation into bloom, blackness into light. Science meets soul here. It both humbles and stirs the reader—at least this one! Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
April 30th, 2025 10:13
Blackness\' light
arqios said:
Wow, such an interesting topic and treatment. Much enjoyed 🙏🏻🕊️🤩
April 30th, 2025 05:17
arqios said:
Wow, such an interesting topic and treatment. Much enjoyed 🙏🏻🕊️🤩
April 30th, 2025 05:17
Blackness\' light
David Wakeling said:
i think this is a wonderful powerful poem.So well constructed and meaningful.Enjoyed reading. Enlightening (pun intended)
April 30th, 2025 04:49
David Wakeling said:
i think this is a wonderful powerful poem.So well constructed and meaningful.Enjoyed reading. Enlightening (pun intended)
April 30th, 2025 04:49
Footprints on a beaten path
Goldfinch60 said:
We all leave footprints from our lives soren.
Andy
April 30th, 2025 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
We all leave footprints from our lives soren.
Andy
April 30th, 2025 01:23
Footprints on a beaten path
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful prose poem that actually addresses something I have been reflecting on much lately. An excellent write, my friend, and all too true. 🌹👏
April 29th, 2025 19:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful prose poem that actually addresses something I have been reflecting on much lately. An excellent write, my friend, and all too true. 🌹👏
April 29th, 2025 19:01
Footprints on a beaten path
Thomas W Case said:
Well done, my friend. Excellent.
April 29th, 2025 11:02
Thomas W Case said:
Well done, my friend. Excellent.
April 29th, 2025 11:02
Footprints on a beaten path
Friendship said:
Your poem beautifully reminds both poets and readers of the profound impact of poetry that extends far beyond immediate recognition, highlighting the significance of the emotional and intellectual connections that art so powerfully forges. It reflects on the inspiring idea that while individual poets may fade into obscurity, their work can continue to resonate in ways that are often unrecognized, leaving a lasting legacy. The entire poem functions as a metaphor for the poet\'s role as a tool and the enduring legacy of their work.
April 29th, 2025 10:11
Friendship said:
Your poem beautifully reminds both poets and readers of the profound impact of poetry that extends far beyond immediate recognition, highlighting the significance of the emotional and intellectual connections that art so powerfully forges. It reflects on the inspiring idea that while individual poets may fade into obscurity, their work can continue to resonate in ways that are often unrecognized, leaving a lasting legacy. The entire poem functions as a metaphor for the poet\'s role as a tool and the enduring legacy of their work.
April 29th, 2025 10:11
Footprints on a beaten path
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I shall feed KP embers and fag-ash! lol.
April 29th, 2025 08:36
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I shall feed KP embers and fag-ash! lol.
April 29th, 2025 08:36
Footprints on a beaten path
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
How very true this is. A beautiful piece my friend
April 29th, 2025 07:14
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
How very true this is. A beautiful piece my friend
April 29th, 2025 07:14
Footprints on a beaten path
Lorenz said:
Our words are messages engraved on the wall of time
destined to become questioning for a next future.
April 29th, 2025 05:21
Lorenz said:
Our words are messages engraved on the wall of time
destined to become questioning for a next future.
April 29th, 2025 05:21
Footprints on a beaten path
David Wakeling said:
A clever well written piece here. A wonderful metaphor about embers and past poets.Enjoyable
April 29th, 2025 05:17
David Wakeling said:
A clever well written piece here. A wonderful metaphor about embers and past poets.Enjoyable
April 29th, 2025 05:17
Footprints on a beaten path
Salvia.S said:
Your poem shows how poets may be forgotten, but their words can still touch people in the future, even if no one remembers where they came from. Very well written!!!
April 29th, 2025 05:16
Salvia.S said:
Your poem shows how poets may be forgotten, but their words can still touch people in the future, even if no one remembers where they came from. Very well written!!!
April 29th, 2025 05:16
Unknot the not
Victor Bolshov said:
Nicely said! Somehow it brought this line from Nietsche: \"You great star! What would your happiness be, had you not those for whom you shine?\"
April 29th, 2025 04:31
Victor Bolshov said:
Nicely said! Somehow it brought this line from Nietsche: \"You great star! What would your happiness be, had you not those for whom you shine?\"
April 29th, 2025 04:31
Footprints on a beaten path
arqios said:
Embers that refuse to be snuffed out 🙏🏻🕊️
April 29th, 2025 04:24
arqios said:
Embers that refuse to be snuffed out 🙏🏻🕊️
April 29th, 2025 04:24
Footprints on a beaten path
Teddy.15 said:
So very beautifully said, in a poem, ironic as it is, it just brings me back to the great Vincent Van Gogh, who I once had the great privilege to study, I always believe he was a poet and a painter and he used his work so very carefully with his muse, he always believed he should have had recognition and in the end was his downfall. A wonderful theme and read dear sorrenbarret 🌹
April 29th, 2025 04:02
Teddy.15 said:
So very beautifully said, in a poem, ironic as it is, it just brings me back to the great Vincent Van Gogh, who I once had the great privilege to study, I always believe he was a poet and a painter and he used his work so very carefully with his muse, he always believed he should have had recognition and in the end was his downfall. A wonderful theme and read dear sorrenbarret 🌹
April 29th, 2025 04:02
Good taste
NafisaSB said:
unlucky neighbor, and lucky shark - lol..enjoyed the read
April 29th, 2025 00:33
NafisaSB said:
unlucky neighbor, and lucky shark - lol..enjoyed the read
April 29th, 2025 00:33
Sleep on
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Been there, and get it entirely! The problem is when the sleeping on halts and reality hits. Still, damn that lemonade sounds worth the delay. 😉 All jokes aside, a well done. Powerful metaphor. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
April 28th, 2025 14:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Been there, and get it entirely! The problem is when the sleeping on halts and reality hits. Still, damn that lemonade sounds worth the delay. 😉 All jokes aside, a well done. Powerful metaphor. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
April 28th, 2025 14:51
Sleep on
Friendship said:
Yet short, yet well-written, “Spiked Lemonade” is a metaphor representing both indulgence and potential danger. Your poem revolves around a sense of ambivalence and confusion regarding emotions and states of being. It explores the paradoxical feelings of exhaustion and inactivity, as well as the blurred lines between madness and sanity. The imagery of “spiked lemonade” suggests a mix of pleasure and danger, reinforcing the theme of duality in experiences and emotions. seems to encapsulate a moment of introspection where the speaker grapples with their mental state and the complexities of their feelings. reflects the complexity of human emotions.
April 28th, 2025 07:52
Friendship said:
Yet short, yet well-written, “Spiked Lemonade” is a metaphor representing both indulgence and potential danger. Your poem revolves around a sense of ambivalence and confusion regarding emotions and states of being. It explores the paradoxical feelings of exhaustion and inactivity, as well as the blurred lines between madness and sanity. The imagery of “spiked lemonade” suggests a mix of pleasure and danger, reinforcing the theme of duality in experiences and emotions. seems to encapsulate a moment of introspection where the speaker grapples with their mental state and the complexities of their feelings. reflects the complexity of human emotions.
April 28th, 2025 07:52
Sleep on
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, SB. I can\'t afford Lemmons enough for lemonade. But there is some cheap vodka I pop into Ginger ale.
April 28th, 2025 07:48
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, SB. I can\'t afford Lemmons enough for lemonade. But there is some cheap vodka I pop into Ginger ale.
April 28th, 2025 07:48
Sleep on
Salvia.S said:
Love the raw honesty and clever wordplay in this poem!
April 28th, 2025 06:48
Salvia.S said:
Love the raw honesty and clever wordplay in this poem!
April 28th, 2025 06:48
Sleep on
David Wakeling said:
i know the feelings expressed here.Very relatable.Well done mi amigo
April 28th, 2025 05:02
David Wakeling said:
i know the feelings expressed here.Very relatable.Well done mi amigo
April 28th, 2025 05:02
Sleep on
arqios said:
The blood vessels doing shadow dances in translucence🙏🏻🕊️
April 28th, 2025 04:54
arqios said:
The blood vessels doing shadow dances in translucence🙏🏻🕊️
April 28th, 2025 04:54
Sleep on
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Any spare sewage for KP\'s dinner? lol.
April 28th, 2025 03:55
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Any spare sewage for KP\'s dinner? lol.
April 28th, 2025 03:55
Sleep on
RSM0812 said:
It\'s like the lemonade is a medicine. However too much of a good thing is bad.
April 28th, 2025 03:49
RSM0812 said:
It\'s like the lemonade is a medicine. However too much of a good thing is bad.
April 28th, 2025 03:49
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