Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Omnipresent
arqios said:

No good byes here, just farewell, and houroo!

November 30th, 2024 06:34

Omnipresent
Doggerel Dave said:

Yeh – the subtle connotations which can attach themselves to otherwise roughly similar words to those in one’s own native language can cause confusion, Soren. As a last resort one can always fall back on β€œBugger off’ 😜
Keen write - great collection.

November 30th, 2024 05:39

Omnipresent
Teddy.15 said:

Truly stunning dear friend a language treat with a twist of wisdom. Addio is also a way to say goodbye in Italian when we are unlikely to meet again, just showing off my skills as a bilingual 🀣

November 30th, 2024 04:00

Omnipresent
orchidee said:

I said goodbye, adios, etc, etc to KP every day, but she always comes back like a bad apple,,,, or smell. Doh! lol.

November 30th, 2024 03:50

No sugar
Goldfinch60 said:

I can drink coffee anyway it is made for me but my preference is Columbian coffee black with no sugar.

As an aside many years ago when I was working in local government we could not ask for black or white coffee it had to be with milk or without milk.

Andy

November 30th, 2024 02:18

No sugar
Thad Wilk said:

πŸ‘πŸ‘
Grrrr8 read thought
provoking to!! πŸ€”
Much enjoyed thank you! πŸ‘
Hot, black and sweet
now that would be a treat! β˜•
Best regards ✌️ Thad


November 29th, 2024 17:13

No sugar
David Wakeling said:

It is all an illusion and a puppet show. Nice poem short and sweet like my coffee

November 29th, 2024 14:45

All American turkey
Cassie58 said:

We don’t celebrate Thanksgiving here, but I can imagine the feasting done on this day. A day to pig out and probably alot of left overs in the kitchen. Does make you think of the hungry. My mum wouldn’t let us leave the table till our plates were clean. You reminded me. A poem of contrasts Soren. Both humour and sadness.

November 29th, 2024 12:42

No sugar
Teddy.15 said:

Computer Generated Imagery

Not my cup of tea, but yes a craze, I guess people have forgotten how to use their hands. A wonderful write and subject. 🌹

November 29th, 2024 12:03

No sugar
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Black when I could drink coffee! Now RLS has ruined that, but this poem friend, I will take any way you give it to me! As for the strings on a puppet…so true. πŸ’― Well done! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

November 29th, 2024 10:48

No sugar
Mutley Ravishes said:

I’ve been thinking of writing about Big Sugar lately. And I need to contemplate what you’ve just written. Black magic at work?!


November 29th, 2024 07:51

No sugar
2781 said:

I prefer mine white and sweet.

November 29th, 2024 07:06

No sugar
arqios said:

Technology seamlessly integrates into our lives, becoming both magical and omnipresent. The poem seems to highlight how these invisible tools shape our perceptions, much like CGI in movies or cream in coffee. It could be a reminder to us to appreciate the subtle yet profound influence of innovation.

November 29th, 2024 05:57

No sugar
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

November 29th, 2024 05:05

No sugar
Neville said:



Hold the sweeteners, I always take mine strong and black & with no strings attached .. technology eh\' who would have it .. I don\'t mind a couple of rich teas tho\'

November 29th, 2024 04:37

No sugar
Lorenz said:

Indivisible black for me !

November 29th, 2024 04:23

All American turkey
rebellion_in_sanity said:

I don\'t remember the last time read such scathing critique of overindulgence in such crisp and almost comical tone. Reminnded me of Charlie Chaplin,\'s style. Truely remarkable. Advanced apologies for any misinterpretation

November 29th, 2024 01:48

All American turkey
rin said:

\'Sit and slurp as we belch and burp
Shifting our ass to pass gas\'
I think this is a great perspective, focusing on how it is an integral part of life, even if at first glance it appears to be a dirty operation.

November 28th, 2024 10:24

All American turkey
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! You and I are viewing this day through the same lens my friend! A wonderfully poignant and truthful poem friend! πŸ‘πŸŒΉ That said, I do wish you and family a very Happy Thanksgiving Day.

November 28th, 2024 09:03

All American turkey
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 28th, 2024 08:29

All American turkey
Doggerel Dave said:

Am I looking at the same post? I felt that there was a subtle (not too subtle surely) critique of gluttony there, Soren....
A rich write.

November 28th, 2024 08:16

All American turkey
2781 said:

I think if we had to kill and clean the pet turkey, before cooking, we might be more grateful.
Or just take the pumpkin pie. Which, if like grammar pie, is more to my liking.

November 28th, 2024 06:18

All American turkey
arqios said:

Oh, so you know about that shift! Not to be indelicate but even cushioned seats appear impervious to passing gases.

November 28th, 2024 05:28

All American turkey
Teddy.15 said:

A very very happy Thanksgiving to you and all whom you love my dearest sorrenbarret πŸ¦ƒπŸ¦ƒπŸ¦ƒπŸ¦ƒπŸ¦ƒπŸ¦ƒπŸ¦ƒπŸ¦ƒπŸ¦ƒπŸ¦ƒπŸ¦ƒ πŸ’™ πŸŽ„

I absolutely love pumpkin pie, and banoffee just in case your making them lol 🀣

November 28th, 2024 04:00

All American turkey
orchidee said:

Veggies will have pumpkin pie, yes?! Happy Thanksgiving Day there :)

November 28th, 2024 03:43

All American turkey
David Wakeling said:

Sounds like a lot of fun. A lot to be thankful for. Good fun poem

November 28th, 2024 02:09

All American turkey
Goldfinch60 said:

Never had pumpkin pie on any day soren but I would eat it if placed before me.

Andy

November 28th, 2024 01:53

Nursery mantra
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words soren taking me back to my childhood days of wonder.

Andy

November 28th, 2024 01:39

Nursery mantra
Thad Wilk said:

πŸ‘πŸ‘
Wonderfully expressed
feelings and emotions painted
with nursery rhymes penned
to fit this very evocative
piece of art!! 🎨 πŸ‘
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad

November 27th, 2024 21:23

Nursery mantra
Teddy.15 said:

Protected by the hand of unconditional love from the wolf, LoL I find much humour in this but maybe because my humour is dry ❀️

November 27th, 2024 13:35



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