Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Redemption in deception
Princesslove said:
Lovely poem. I enjoyed reading
Thanks for sharing!!
July 18th, 2025 15:42
Princesslove said:
Lovely poem. I enjoyed reading
Thanks for sharing!!
July 18th, 2025 15:42
Light of progress
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
From the naked ape to the clothed obedient; unable to function without the pills of survival and the shackles of fake liberties in a plastic society. As powerful as it is excellent and brilliantly composed. Very well done indeed, my fine fellow.
Wishing you the very best,
Tony.
July 18th, 2025 14:05
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
From the naked ape to the clothed obedient; unable to function without the pills of survival and the shackles of fake liberties in a plastic society. As powerful as it is excellent and brilliantly composed. Very well done indeed, my fine fellow.
Wishing you the very best,
Tony.
July 18th, 2025 14:05
Light of progress
Lorenz said:
Are all our creations but vain companions of illusions ?
July 18th, 2025 09:40
Lorenz said:
Are all our creations but vain companions of illusions ?
July 18th, 2025 09:40
I love roses
Joan Reese said:
It made me think of a beautiful woman losing her youth. Insightful poem!
July 18th, 2025 07:57
Joan Reese said:
It made me think of a beautiful woman losing her youth. Insightful poem!
July 18th, 2025 07:57
Light of progress
jim56 said:
love this beautifully written beautiful words
nice lovely flow nice to read jim
July 18th, 2025 07:56
jim56 said:
love this beautifully written beautiful words
nice lovely flow nice to read jim
July 18th, 2025 07:56
Light of progress
arqios said:
Reading “light of progress” feels like stepping through time’s shadowed corridors. It begins in a shared darkness; humanity unified in vulnerability, then traces our inventions and inventions’ unintended chains. The poem’s sweep from primal intimacy to modern indoctrination strikes with urgent clarity. It invites us to question whether we can reclaim the tools we’ve forged.🕊️🙏🏻
July 18th, 2025 06:22
arqios said:
Reading “light of progress” feels like stepping through time’s shadowed corridors. It begins in a shared darkness; humanity unified in vulnerability, then traces our inventions and inventions’ unintended chains. The poem’s sweep from primal intimacy to modern indoctrination strikes with urgent clarity. It invites us to question whether we can reclaim the tools we’ve forged.🕊️🙏🏻
July 18th, 2025 06:22
Light of progress
Poetic Licence said:
Deep thinking and meaning in this write reflecting onl civilisations progress or not as may be the case, I also felt alot of references referring to the darker times of the slave trade, enjoyed the read
July 18th, 2025 05:55
Poetic Licence said:
Deep thinking and meaning in this write reflecting onl civilisations progress or not as may be the case, I also felt alot of references referring to the darker times of the slave trade, enjoyed the read
July 18th, 2025 05:55
Light of progress
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful filled with wisdom and imagery, you make it sound all so easy to explain in poetic form my dear sorrenbarret and I listen to every word loud and clear 🌹
July 18th, 2025 04:17
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful filled with wisdom and imagery, you make it sound all so easy to explain in poetic form my dear sorrenbarret and I listen to every word loud and clear 🌹
July 18th, 2025 04:17
Light of progress
ElizabethMoroz said:
Rich and vivid imagery with beautiful phraseology amidst an internal rhythmic structure that conveys a multitude of themes exploring the human condition, history, the nature of man & philosophy as well as devastatingly emotionally poignant reflections. Qudos on a beautiful piece. Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 18th, 2025 04:03
ElizabethMoroz said:
Rich and vivid imagery with beautiful phraseology amidst an internal rhythmic structure that conveys a multitude of themes exploring the human condition, history, the nature of man & philosophy as well as devastatingly emotionally poignant reflections. Qudos on a beautiful piece. Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 18th, 2025 04:03
Light of progress
Priya Tomar said:
Civilizational progress vs moral regression
Deep philosophy, wisdom in every word
Poetic power highly praiseworthy
Lovely metaphors , well , very lovely
Every word touched my heart
July 18th, 2025 03:31
Priya Tomar said:
Civilizational progress vs moral regression
Deep philosophy, wisdom in every word
Poetic power highly praiseworthy
Lovely metaphors , well , very lovely
Every word touched my heart
July 18th, 2025 03:31
Insignificant
Goldfinch60 said:
We all exist in reality no matter how insignificant we appear to be.
Andy
July 18th, 2025 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
We all exist in reality no matter how insignificant we appear to be.
Andy
July 18th, 2025 01:26
Insignificant
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
Deeper into the circle of reality to nothingness and beyond nothingness whatever and wherever that is. It\'s most likely where you asked the question, ... to not exist in reality. Perhaps, no matter how small there is always something smaller. I\'m going to leave it at that because this could drive this old bard mad, that being said, another mind boggling, powerful and excellent poem from your bureau.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 17th, 2025 14:32
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
Deeper into the circle of reality to nothingness and beyond nothingness whatever and wherever that is. It\'s most likely where you asked the question, ... to not exist in reality. Perhaps, no matter how small there is always something smaller. I\'m going to leave it at that because this could drive this old bard mad, that being said, another mind boggling, powerful and excellent poem from your bureau.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 17th, 2025 14:32
Insignificant
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s impossible to be small enough \" to not exist in reality.\" All one must do is accept reality to become a part of it. Those were my thoughts after reading your poem. It\'s beautiful piece of poetry. I loved it.
July 17th, 2025 12:59
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s impossible to be small enough \" to not exist in reality.\" All one must do is accept reality to become a part of it. Those were my thoughts after reading your poem. It\'s beautiful piece of poetry. I loved it.
July 17th, 2025 12:59
Insignificant
orchidee said:
A lottery ticket win for some becomes ALL the universe to them. Especially if KP wins and shares none with me. Boohoo! lol.
July 17th, 2025 11:22
orchidee said:
A lottery ticket win for some becomes ALL the universe to them. Especially if KP wins and shares none with me. Boohoo! lol.
July 17th, 2025 11:22
Insignificant
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Heart touching words here. Always love your work.
July 17th, 2025 10:09
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Heart touching words here. Always love your work.
July 17th, 2025 10:09
Mr. Cotter
DLewis88 said:
This is a wonderful poem you\'ve written. I enjoy reading it.
July 17th, 2025 09:24
DLewis88 said:
This is a wonderful poem you\'ve written. I enjoy reading it.
July 17th, 2025 09:24
Insignificant
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This is powerful in its simplicity. It captures the feeling of being small in a vast universe with striking, thoughtful imagery. Nicely done 👍
July 17th, 2025 07:36
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This is powerful in its simplicity. It captures the feeling of being small in a vast universe with striking, thoughtful imagery. Nicely done 👍
July 17th, 2025 07:36
Insignificant
arqios said:
Such a beautifully haunting poem; full of cosmic imagery and existential weight! 🕊️🙏🏻
July 17th, 2025 07:30
arqios said:
Such a beautifully haunting poem; full of cosmic imagery and existential weight! 🕊️🙏🏻
July 17th, 2025 07:30
Insignificant
Friendship said:
A powerful poem, Insignificant. I know this feeling very well - it\'s a feeling that you don\'t belong in this universe, also projected by others onto you. It\'s a feeling of being a ghost and shame. The poem \"Insignificant\" explores themes of existentialism and the feeling of insignificance in the vastness of the universe. It reflects on the smallness of individual existence in comparison to the grand scale of nature and the cosmos. The poet explores notions of identity, worth, and the search for meaning in a world that often makes one feel insignificant. The poet seeks to provoke thought and introspection regarding one\'s identity and the human condition, encouraging readers to reflect on their own significance in a seemingly indifferent universe.
July 17th, 2025 06:05
Friendship said:
A powerful poem, Insignificant. I know this feeling very well - it\'s a feeling that you don\'t belong in this universe, also projected by others onto you. It\'s a feeling of being a ghost and shame. The poem \"Insignificant\" explores themes of existentialism and the feeling of insignificance in the vastness of the universe. It reflects on the smallness of individual existence in comparison to the grand scale of nature and the cosmos. The poet explores notions of identity, worth, and the search for meaning in a world that often makes one feel insignificant. The poet seeks to provoke thought and introspection regarding one\'s identity and the human condition, encouraging readers to reflect on their own significance in a seemingly indifferent universe.
July 17th, 2025 06:05
Insignificant
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🤯 Wow. I mean, I am not going to even add anything to this other than. Wow. 🤯 Seriously deep, with the kind of reflection that causes goosebumps to rise as one gets lost in the cosmos of profundity. Seriously, a beautifully done reflection and a fave. 🌹👏
July 17th, 2025 05:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🤯 Wow. I mean, I am not going to even add anything to this other than. Wow. 🤯 Seriously deep, with the kind of reflection that causes goosebumps to rise as one gets lost in the cosmos of profundity. Seriously, a beautifully done reflection and a fave. 🌹👏
July 17th, 2025 05:56
Insignificant
Priya Tomar said:
Very well.
Deep thoughts always find place in your poetry.
July 17th, 2025 04:58
Priya Tomar said:
Very well.
Deep thoughts always find place in your poetry.
July 17th, 2025 04:58
Insignificant
Poetic Licence said:
A puzzle I cannot answer but I sometimes wish, enjoyed the read
July 17th, 2025 04:47
Poetic Licence said:
A puzzle I cannot answer but I sometimes wish, enjoyed the read
July 17th, 2025 04:47
Insignificant
Teddy.15 said:
Brought a tear to my eye, absolutely poetry at its finest 👏 💜
July 17th, 2025 04:13
Teddy.15 said:
Brought a tear to my eye, absolutely poetry at its finest 👏 💜
July 17th, 2025 04:13
Insignificant
Demar Desu said:
How important one must be to exist in reality? Good poem…it takes one grain to start the beach
July 17th, 2025 03:09
Demar Desu said:
How important one must be to exist in reality? Good poem…it takes one grain to start the beach
July 17th, 2025 03:09
Synchronicity
Goldfinch60 said:
There is a theory that there are infinite timelines soren and that everything we nearly did is in one of those time lines in our other lives.
Andy
July 17th, 2025 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
There is a theory that there are infinite timelines soren and that everything we nearly did is in one of those time lines in our other lives.
Andy
July 17th, 2025 01:13
Synchronicity
Kevin Hulme said:
I\'ve being telling Marty this for years: Doc Brown.
Well put.
July 16th, 2025 20:41
Kevin Hulme said:
I\'ve being telling Marty this for years: Doc Brown.
Well put.
July 16th, 2025 20:41
Synchronicity
Bella Shepard said:
The simultaneous existence of past, present and future is on the minds of philosophers and scientists these days, as well as poets. We balked when daylight savings time came to be, so now whatever will we do with this conundrum. A delightful and eternaly puzzling write my friend.
July 16th, 2025 12:32
Bella Shepard said:
The simultaneous existence of past, present and future is on the minds of philosophers and scientists these days, as well as poets. We balked when daylight savings time came to be, so now whatever will we do with this conundrum. A delightful and eternaly puzzling write my friend.
July 16th, 2025 12:32
Synchronicity
Caring dove said:
The other day I was talking about seeing foxes .. I was out in a cafe talking to my dad and sister , next minute there was a fox outside .. and Asked my sister what that word meant and she said ‘ synchronicity ‘
Yes I’ve seen a fox there , one time before .. and can see several in the garden .. where I live
July 16th, 2025 08:06
Caring dove said:
The other day I was talking about seeing foxes .. I was out in a cafe talking to my dad and sister , next minute there was a fox outside .. and Asked my sister what that word meant and she said ‘ synchronicity ‘
Yes I’ve seen a fox there , one time before .. and can see several in the garden .. where I live
July 16th, 2025 08:06
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