Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
The Seed
Goldfinch60 said:
But many of those seeds will bring new life to the world soren.
Andy
September 20th, 2025 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
But many of those seeds will bring new life to the world soren.
Andy
September 20th, 2025 01:51
The Seed
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This is a dense, symbolic, and highly reflective poem. Nicely written.
September 19th, 2025 15:54
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This is a dense, symbolic, and highly reflective poem. Nicely written.
September 19th, 2025 15:54
The Seed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve seen seeds like this grow…isolation spreading where trust once lived. You’ve captured that hard truth with honesty. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2025 15:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve seen seeds like this grow…isolation spreading where trust once lived. You’ve captured that hard truth with honesty. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2025 15:31
The Seed
Bella Shepard said:
Stunning metaphor, imagery, I can feel the power of this all consuming deadly sin. Superb!
September 19th, 2025 08:37
Bella Shepard said:
Stunning metaphor, imagery, I can feel the power of this all consuming deadly sin. Superb!
September 19th, 2025 08:37
The Seed
Friendship said:
The central idea of the poem revolves around the destructive nature of greed and selfishness, which undermine community and compassion. It contrasts individuality with the collective good, highlighting how self-serving actions can lead to isolation and a loss of trust. The subject matter delves into the metaphor of a plant growing from a seed of greed, illustrating how negative traits can stifle growth and hope, ultimately resulting in despair.
September 19th, 2025 06:55
Friendship said:
The central idea of the poem revolves around the destructive nature of greed and selfishness, which undermine community and compassion. It contrasts individuality with the collective good, highlighting how self-serving actions can lead to isolation and a loss of trust. The subject matter delves into the metaphor of a plant growing from a seed of greed, illustrating how negative traits can stifle growth and hope, ultimately resulting in despair.
September 19th, 2025 06:55
Read
RSM0812 said:
A lot of really good rhyms here and a deeper story. Nicely done for sure.
September 19th, 2025 06:03
RSM0812 said:
A lot of really good rhyms here and a deeper story. Nicely done for sure.
September 19th, 2025 06:03
Forgiveness
William Hromada said:
nice, the feeling of shedding the old and looking forward to the new.
September 19th, 2025 04:21
William Hromada said:
nice, the feeling of shedding the old and looking forward to the new.
September 19th, 2025 04:21
Forgiveness
Goldfinch60 said:
We can all move on into a new and better life soren.
Andy
September 19th, 2025 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
We can all move on into a new and better life soren.
Andy
September 19th, 2025 00:53
Forgiveness
RSM0812 said:
This poem is full of emotion and despair. Its imagry has a sad and almost desparity to it. Nice job.
September 18th, 2025 20:10
RSM0812 said:
This poem is full of emotion and despair. Its imagry has a sad and almost desparity to it. Nice job.
September 18th, 2025 20:10
Forgiveness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this one struck deep. Very powerful. The musty cloth and dirt feel like despair itself, yet you strip it back to hope. That final image...crust of dirt falling like a forgiven sin...lingers long after reading. Honest and redemptive, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 18th, 2025 18:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this one struck deep. Very powerful. The musty cloth and dirt feel like despair itself, yet you strip it back to hope. That final image...crust of dirt falling like a forgiven sin...lingers long after reading. Honest and redemptive, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 18th, 2025 18:07
Forgiveness
Paul Bell said:
This is like out with the old, in with the new.
Yet it goes slightly deeper, and maybe forgiveness comes hard.
September 18th, 2025 15:03
Paul Bell said:
This is like out with the old, in with the new.
Yet it goes slightly deeper, and maybe forgiveness comes hard.
September 18th, 2025 15:03
Forgiveness
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Some poems leave no choice other than a resounding fave. The lines \"rain of despair need cleaning in spring\'s bright air\"- how I wish I could have thought something like those. But that\'s wishful thinking. The bow has to be to the master. Not a good poem, but a great one.
September 18th, 2025 09:44
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Some poems leave no choice other than a resounding fave. The lines \"rain of despair need cleaning in spring\'s bright air\"- how I wish I could have thought something like those. But that\'s wishful thinking. The bow has to be to the master. Not a good poem, but a great one.
September 18th, 2025 09:44
Forgiveness
TommyDingo said:
Brilliant as always! I am so in awe of your ability! Always a joy to read!
September 18th, 2025 06:16
TommyDingo said:
Brilliant as always! I am so in awe of your ability! Always a joy to read!
September 18th, 2025 06:16
Forgiveness
Teddy.15 said:
Well, I guess I can safely say this is absolutely stunning in rhyme and meaning, so much dignity acceptance and wisdom. Kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
September 18th, 2025 03:26
Teddy.15 said:
Well, I guess I can safely say this is absolutely stunning in rhyme and meaning, so much dignity acceptance and wisdom. Kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
September 18th, 2025 03:26
A slow fly
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun read soren, I hope you get out of jail soon. LOL
Andy
September 18th, 2025 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun read soren, I hope you get out of jail soon. LOL
Andy
September 18th, 2025 01:44
A slow fly
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This piece is humorous and lively but kind of sad. A comically foolish yet endearing man whose greed and poor judgment lead him into trouble. From childhood, but he also has a mischievous charm that makes people smile. Nicely written. ✨
September 17th, 2025 14:35
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This piece is humorous and lively but kind of sad. A comically foolish yet endearing man whose greed and poor judgment lead him into trouble. From childhood, but he also has a mischievous charm that makes people smile. Nicely written. ✨
September 17th, 2025 14:35
A slow fly
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Emotional sir... Yes, only the weak, poor and those the rich tagged as dumb goes to jail. The rich escape. A question if the rule of law truly is equal.
September 17th, 2025 12:30
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Emotional sir... Yes, only the weak, poor and those the rich tagged as dumb goes to jail. The rich escape. A question if the rule of law truly is equal.
September 17th, 2025 12:30
A slow fly
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, reading this felt like hearing a story told late into the night...wild, funny, but carrying a truth about justice and who gets caught. You nailed that balance. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2025 11:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, reading this felt like hearing a story told late into the night...wild, funny, but carrying a truth about justice and who gets caught. You nailed that balance. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2025 11:03
A slow fly
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Thick as teeth on a Comb\', I like it .
A lot of truth in your last lines too.
Enjoyed reading.
September 17th, 2025 08:23
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Thick as teeth on a Comb\', I like it .
A lot of truth in your last lines too.
Enjoyed reading.
September 17th, 2025 08:23
Suicide an twa
Tom Dylan said:
A powerful poem that flows wonderfully. A fine write.
September 17th, 2025 06:57
Tom Dylan said:
A powerful poem that flows wonderfully. A fine write.
September 17th, 2025 06:57
A slow fly
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Just too good. In one hand it is funny, but a closer look reveals scial commentary- somehow brings to mind Chaplin\'s movies. What I loved most was the absence of drama. A flat tone, that brought out the bite in the social commentary. Very well done.
September 17th, 2025 05:15
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Just too good. In one hand it is funny, but a closer look reveals scial commentary- somehow brings to mind Chaplin\'s movies. What I loved most was the absence of drama. A flat tone, that brought out the bite in the social commentary. Very well done.
September 17th, 2025 05:15
A slow fly
Teddy.15 said:
I had a great chuckle at your language, you really have made him sound dumb, kudos imagery emotion and last lines superb, it is indeed the slow flies that get squatted. A wonderful life lesson filled with great wisdom, and irony. 🌹
September 17th, 2025 03:47
Teddy.15 said:
I had a great chuckle at your language, you really have made him sound dumb, kudos imagery emotion and last lines superb, it is indeed the slow flies that get squatted. A wonderful life lesson filled with great wisdom, and irony. 🌹
September 17th, 2025 03:47
Suicide an twa
Goldfinch60 said:
Those truly in love will be one at there demise soren. Fine words.
Andy
September 17th, 2025 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Those truly in love will be one at there demise soren. Fine words.
Andy
September 17th, 2025 01:26
Don\'t mix them up
whats write for me said:
Surreal similarities, good read and thought provoking.
September 16th, 2025 21:51
whats write for me said:
Surreal similarities, good read and thought provoking.
September 16th, 2025 21:51
Suicide an twa
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is dark and devastating, my friend…passion mistaken for compassion, love bound in the same thrust of the blade. It reads like a dreadful ballad, and it stays with you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️Very well done, Soren!
September 16th, 2025 15:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is dark and devastating, my friend…passion mistaken for compassion, love bound in the same thrust of the blade. It reads like a dreadful ballad, and it stays with you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️Very well done, Soren!
September 16th, 2025 15:23
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