Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
A lot of wind
Goldfinch60 said:
We must all keep sailing in our lives soren no matter which way we go.
Andy
May 3rd, 2025 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
We must all keep sailing in our lives soren no matter which way we go.
Andy
May 3rd, 2025 01:29
Hands that grasp
jarcher54 said:
Brilliant ring composition... first the chains and bonds and abuse tighten and oppress, then forgiveness cuts the chains and we all begin to be free, oppressor as well as oppressed. Love this!
May 2nd, 2025 21:09
jarcher54 said:
Brilliant ring composition... first the chains and bonds and abuse tighten and oppress, then forgiveness cuts the chains and we all begin to be free, oppressor as well as oppressed. Love this!
May 2nd, 2025 21:09
Acts
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Would I be wrong if I said it evoked the memory of Gone With the Wind? The gaity in the beginning followed by the tragedy of war?
May 2nd, 2025 12:34
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Would I be wrong if I said it evoked the memory of Gone With the Wind? The gaity in the beginning followed by the tragedy of war?
May 2nd, 2025 12:34
A lot of wind
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I believe every family must have a great storyteller. Perhaps not, but that is hard to imagine. Mine has had a few. This was such a wonderful write that I am sure is a fitting tribute to your Uncle. Well done, Soren! 🌹👏
May 2nd, 2025 10:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I believe every family must have a great storyteller. Perhaps not, but that is hard to imagine. Mine has had a few. This was such a wonderful write that I am sure is a fitting tribute to your Uncle. Well done, Soren! 🌹👏
May 2nd, 2025 10:46
A lot of wind
MDStone said:
I hasten to say, I was blown away! Great story with vivid expression. For a moment it brought back that childlike imagination. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
May 2nd, 2025 10:17
MDStone said:
I hasten to say, I was blown away! Great story with vivid expression. For a moment it brought back that childlike imagination. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
May 2nd, 2025 10:17
A lot of wind
hzugman said:
Good write. Brings up the question does time flow both ways.
May 2nd, 2025 09:59
hzugman said:
Good write. Brings up the question does time flow both ways.
May 2nd, 2025 09:59
A lot of wind
Friendship said:
Beautifully crafted, the \"vertical lake held in place by the force of the gale\" powerfully symbolizes life\'s unpredictable journey, where natural forces shape our paths. The poem inspires reflection on life\'s twists and turns, and how external forces can transform and elevate human existence. It also celebrates the human spirit\'s capacity for resilience and adaptation in the face of nature\'s awe-inspiring power.
May 2nd, 2025 08:19
Friendship said:
Beautifully crafted, the \"vertical lake held in place by the force of the gale\" powerfully symbolizes life\'s unpredictable journey, where natural forces shape our paths. The poem inspires reflection on life\'s twists and turns, and how external forces can transform and elevate human existence. It also celebrates the human spirit\'s capacity for resilience and adaptation in the face of nature\'s awe-inspiring power.
May 2nd, 2025 08:19
A lot of wind
David Wakeling said:
an amazing tale of the wind creating havoc, An enjoyable read.Excellent
May 2nd, 2025 05:11
David Wakeling said:
an amazing tale of the wind creating havoc, An enjoyable read.Excellent
May 2nd, 2025 05:11
A lot of wind
Teddy.15 said:
A story teller, how truly wonderful and in all this imagery a very windy journey absolutely magical last stanza 🌹 I\'ll be wanting to rent it too. 🌬️
May 2nd, 2025 05:02
Teddy.15 said:
A story teller, how truly wonderful and in all this imagery a very windy journey absolutely magical last stanza 🌹 I\'ll be wanting to rent it too. 🌬️
May 2nd, 2025 05:02
A lot of wind
Victor Bolshov said:
Holy Carroll! Innit something?! This one\'s probably the best I read here so far. Surrealistic, rich imagery. The idea of a storm that comes in as a constructive force (mills flour, holds a whole lake in place, all at right angles!) - is brilliant. It\'s like this is the storm of very reason!
May 2nd, 2025 05:02
Victor Bolshov said:
Holy Carroll! Innit something?! This one\'s probably the best I read here so far. Surrealistic, rich imagery. The idea of a storm that comes in as a constructive force (mills flour, holds a whole lake in place, all at right angles!) - is brilliant. It\'s like this is the storm of very reason!
May 2nd, 2025 05:02
Ponderings
Goldfinch60 said:
Insanity seems to rulke the world nowadays soren.
Andy
May 2nd, 2025 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Insanity seems to rulke the world nowadays soren.
Andy
May 2nd, 2025 01:45
Blackness\' light
Dan Williams said:
First class work. \"A thought forgot cuts the knot\" and \"Drinking from earth\'s nipples\" could carry it all by themselves. Nice.
May 1st, 2025 21:21
Dan Williams said:
First class work. \"A thought forgot cuts the knot\" and \"Drinking from earth\'s nipples\" could carry it all by themselves. Nice.
May 1st, 2025 21:21
Good taste
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe he needed a \'Bigger Boat\' as someone once said.
Enjoyable poem
May 1st, 2025 18:23
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe he needed a \'Bigger Boat\' as someone once said.
Enjoyable poem
May 1st, 2025 18:23
Ponderings
Lorenz said:
Squeaking thinking machine .Reminiscent of pink floyds themes .
May 1st, 2025 13:00
Lorenz said:
Squeaking thinking machine .Reminiscent of pink floyds themes .
May 1st, 2025 13:00
Ponderings
Tony Grannell said:
What caught my attention was \'A silent Rustle,\' a conflict, as in imagining sounds, a cacophony of presumed sounds and the madness therein, an aural paranoia , \'echoing in my brain\'. Frightening to say the least and very well captured in this exceedingly interesting and well written poem. Excellent!
All the best,
Tony.
May 1st, 2025 11:36
Tony Grannell said:
What caught my attention was \'A silent Rustle,\' a conflict, as in imagining sounds, a cacophony of presumed sounds and the madness therein, an aural paranoia , \'echoing in my brain\'. Frightening to say the least and very well captured in this exceedingly interesting and well written poem. Excellent!
All the best,
Tony.
May 1st, 2025 11:36
Ponderings
orchidee said:
Good write SB. It\'s KP squeaking and creeping about! lol.
May 1st, 2025 10:53
orchidee said:
Good write SB. It\'s KP squeaking and creeping about! lol.
May 1st, 2025 10:53
Good taste
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A befitting commentry on modern life of living beyond the means. Loved it
May 1st, 2025 10:23
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A befitting commentry on modern life of living beyond the means. Loved it
May 1st, 2025 10:23
Ponderings
Friendship said:
Ponderings is a profound exploration of the transformative power of sound, awakening a sense of wonder and curiosity within us. Your subject matter beautifully delves into the human experience of perceiving noises in one’s environment, interpreting them as potential threats or mysteries that inspire growth. The poem masterfully captures a blend of anxiety and intrigue, as the speaker reflects on the various sounds that surround them and the thoughts they inspire, leading to a deeper understanding of ourselves. Your poem expresses the complex yet beautiful relationship humans have with their environment and how sounds can trigger a mix of emotions, from fear to fascination, ultimately enriching our lives. In what I wrote, I wish it were true to feel it!
May 1st, 2025 10:06
Friendship said:
Ponderings is a profound exploration of the transformative power of sound, awakening a sense of wonder and curiosity within us. Your subject matter beautifully delves into the human experience of perceiving noises in one’s environment, interpreting them as potential threats or mysteries that inspire growth. The poem masterfully captures a blend of anxiety and intrigue, as the speaker reflects on the various sounds that surround them and the thoughts they inspire, leading to a deeper understanding of ourselves. Your poem expresses the complex yet beautiful relationship humans have with their environment and how sounds can trigger a mix of emotions, from fear to fascination, ultimately enriching our lives. In what I wrote, I wish it were true to feel it!
May 1st, 2025 10:06
Ponderings
David Wakeling said:
This is some amazing word play. Some enigmatic sounds to ponder.Great read
May 1st, 2025 05:20
David Wakeling said:
This is some amazing word play. Some enigmatic sounds to ponder.Great read
May 1st, 2025 05:20
Ponderings
MDStone said:
Oh yes indeed, I heard it. Well done yet again, Soren. We learn to ignore the things that go “bump” in the night, but those whispers are hard to ignore. Thank for sharing.
May 1st, 2025 05:16
MDStone said:
Oh yes indeed, I heard it. Well done yet again, Soren. We learn to ignore the things that go “bump” in the night, but those whispers are hard to ignore. Thank for sharing.
May 1st, 2025 05:16
Ponderings
arqios said:
Who gets to say we’re insane is quite a debatable issue 🙏🏻🕊️
May 1st, 2025 05:11
arqios said:
Who gets to say we’re insane is quite a debatable issue 🙏🏻🕊️
May 1st, 2025 05:11
Ponderings
Teddy.15 said:
LOL well maybe you are normal after all if you are insane! What a fun and visual write, i felt as if the three bears were going to burst through the cabin door in the Forrest lol 🤣 brilliant, way to keep the reader on their toes, with smell and emotion and the scene so beautifully created. 🌹
May 1st, 2025 04:05
Teddy.15 said:
LOL well maybe you are normal after all if you are insane! What a fun and visual write, i felt as if the three bears were going to burst through the cabin door in the Forrest lol 🤣 brilliant, way to keep the reader on their toes, with smell and emotion and the scene so beautifully created. 🌹
May 1st, 2025 04:05
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