Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Too long
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my, your imagery is really haunting and I have such a visual so sad when we are tied by invisible chains and we just have no idea how to break them. such powerful metaphor and I hope the only doors to ever open are those in which bring you light. 🌹
September 1st, 2025 14:29
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my, your imagery is really haunting and I have such a visual so sad when we are tied by invisible chains and we just have no idea how to break them. such powerful metaphor and I hope the only doors to ever open are those in which bring you light. 🌹
September 1st, 2025 14:29
Too long
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hit me hard. The image of an old dog chained too long…now free, yet still bound inside…it’s devastating. The weight of memory here doesn’t just linger, it gnaws. Very well done and a fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2025 13:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hit me hard. The image of an old dog chained too long…now free, yet still bound inside…it’s devastating. The weight of memory here doesn’t just linger, it gnaws. Very well done and a fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2025 13:39
Little armor
Neville said:
You seem to have got them off to a T .. I must confess, I always wanted one .. and I ended up learning a lot here today .. 😎👍
September 1st, 2025 11:25
Neville said:
You seem to have got them off to a T .. I must confess, I always wanted one .. and I ended up learning a lot here today .. 😎👍
September 1st, 2025 11:25
Too long
NinjaGirl said:
This is sad and tragic...so beautifully written with a lovely metaphor.
September 1st, 2025 11:21
NinjaGirl said:
This is sad and tragic...so beautifully written with a lovely metaphor.
September 1st, 2025 11:21
Too long
Neville said:
This filled me with sadness sir sorenbarrett and then when I read it again and it came across completely different .. it gets the 👍\'s up from me . Neville
September 1st, 2025 05:08
Neville said:
This filled me with sadness sir sorenbarrett and then when I read it again and it came across completely different .. it gets the 👍\'s up from me . Neville
September 1st, 2025 05:08
Little armor
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Soren. Love the way this poem flows.
September 1st, 2025 02:00
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Soren. Love the way this poem flows.
September 1st, 2025 02:00
Little armor
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write soren, that life in a solitary way can be very good in many ways.
Andy
September 1st, 2025 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write soren, that life in a solitary way can be very good in many ways.
Andy
September 1st, 2025 01:14
Little armor
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Soren. They are exactly what you say they are.
August 31st, 2025 17:42
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Soren. They are exactly what you say they are.
August 31st, 2025 17:42
Little armor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha, Soren…you had me smiling with this one. Tough shell, snaggle-tooth grin, dancing jumps…you’ve turned the armadillo into a full-blown character. Fun and vivid! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 31st, 2025 17:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha, Soren…you had me smiling with this one. Tough shell, snaggle-tooth grin, dancing jumps…you’ve turned the armadillo into a full-blown character. Fun and vivid! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 31st, 2025 17:03
Little armor
Bella Shepard said:
You pay tribute to one of my favorite animals, believe it or not. We have them in our neighborhood, and I actually had one bump into my ankle on an early morning walk, hence the poor eyesight. I love your fascinating description in lyrical, rhyming verse, truly enjoyed!
August 31st, 2025 13:31
Bella Shepard said:
You pay tribute to one of my favorite animals, believe it or not. We have them in our neighborhood, and I actually had one bump into my ankle on an early morning walk, hence the poor eyesight. I love your fascinating description in lyrical, rhyming verse, truly enjoyed!
August 31st, 2025 13:31
Little armor
Lorenz said:
This armoured text reminds me of our good old fellow Ankylosaurus !
August 31st, 2025 11:16
Lorenz said:
This armoured text reminds me of our good old fellow Ankylosaurus !
August 31st, 2025 11:16
Little armor
Teddy.15 said:
Wat a creative invention is the Armadillo I\'ve always been fascinated by them, we don\'t have them here though. A wonderful piece and a learning curve too, yuck who would ever want to eat one? 🤣 Brilliantly described in poetic form 🌹
August 31st, 2025 07:44
Teddy.15 said:
Wat a creative invention is the Armadillo I\'ve always been fascinated by them, we don\'t have them here though. A wonderful piece and a learning curve too, yuck who would ever want to eat one? 🤣 Brilliantly described in poetic form 🌹
August 31st, 2025 07:44
The character of a man
Poetic Dan said:
It\'s 3 am and another night I can\'t sleep and here you come with this little treat! Yes it is so true, I believe 99% of shelters in the uk are in it for the money. Its a ball ache to volunteer and they hate any opinions on how it\'s run! They never have the dog in mind and condition, most to stay in fight or flight.
I must say though after letting my own dog have puppies! It\'s not something I\'ll rush to do again 3 out of 5 made it. To watch her just ignore it and it just cry out with no hope of her caring because it\'s lower have was not formed and just mulled in one. Yet the head was perfect and calling out for nearly 2 hours. I sat and cried so hard (and now writing this) on the sofa, thinking of what it would of gone through if we was not there. This world can definitely feel unfair but I did it to better my understanding for work and give the world 3 well balanced puppies to help us rebalance as mine does me.
Hope this is all readable! And thanks again for helping me pass the time.
Much peace and respect
August 30th, 2025 21:26
Poetic Dan said:
It\'s 3 am and another night I can\'t sleep and here you come with this little treat! Yes it is so true, I believe 99% of shelters in the uk are in it for the money. Its a ball ache to volunteer and they hate any opinions on how it\'s run! They never have the dog in mind and condition, most to stay in fight or flight.
I must say though after letting my own dog have puppies! It\'s not something I\'ll rush to do again 3 out of 5 made it. To watch her just ignore it and it just cry out with no hope of her caring because it\'s lower have was not formed and just mulled in one. Yet the head was perfect and calling out for nearly 2 hours. I sat and cried so hard (and now writing this) on the sofa, thinking of what it would of gone through if we was not there. This world can definitely feel unfair but I did it to better my understanding for work and give the world 3 well balanced puppies to help us rebalance as mine does me.
Hope this is all readable! And thanks again for helping me pass the time.
Much peace and respect
August 30th, 2025 21:26
Embers
NinjaGirl said:
Such a beautiful reflection, but also haunting touching on what may pass to be never remembered. Lovely
August 30th, 2025 19:56
NinjaGirl said:
Such a beautiful reflection, but also haunting touching on what may pass to be never remembered. Lovely
August 30th, 2025 19:56
Embers
Kevin Hulme said:
I think December is full of dying embers.
A time of Reflection. You put it so well. Good Write.
August 30th, 2025 19:23
Kevin Hulme said:
I think December is full of dying embers.
A time of Reflection. You put it so well. Good Write.
August 30th, 2025 19:23
Embers
orchidee said:
Doh! I probably got the cryptic bit wrong again - sounds like someone\'s head on fire! lol.
August 30th, 2025 10:09
orchidee said:
Doh! I probably got the cryptic bit wrong again - sounds like someone\'s head on fire! lol.
August 30th, 2025 10:09
Embers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That closing image of dreams drifting away on smoke stayed with me, Soren. It’s tender and haunting all at once…a powerful finish, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 30th, 2025 09:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That closing image of dreams drifting away on smoke stayed with me, Soren. It’s tender and haunting all at once…a powerful finish, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 30th, 2025 09:09
Embers
Teddy.15 said:
Just beautiful dear sorrenbarret a celebration of a life well lived, may those fires keep on burning inside your heart and soul for many more December\'s to come.. ❤️
August 30th, 2025 05:00
Teddy.15 said:
Just beautiful dear sorrenbarret a celebration of a life well lived, may those fires keep on burning inside your heart and soul for many more December\'s to come.. ❤️
August 30th, 2025 05:00
Beauty and thorns
Goldfinch60 said:
Beauty and love are there for us without destroying them soren.
Andy
August 30th, 2025 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Beauty and love are there for us without destroying them soren.
Andy
August 30th, 2025 01:44
Beauty and thorns
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully crafted, my friend. You’ve captured how desire can wound what it tries to hold…and how true love lets the rose grow where it belongs. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 29th, 2025 17:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully crafted, my friend. You’ve captured how desire can wound what it tries to hold…and how true love lets the rose grow where it belongs. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 29th, 2025 17:49
Beauty and thorns
Bella Shepard said:
This touches the heart in a very special way. Allow beauty to live in its own way, and enjoy it day after day. Simple, elegant and so true.
August 29th, 2025 09:10
Bella Shepard said:
This touches the heart in a very special way. Allow beauty to live in its own way, and enjoy it day after day. Simple, elegant and so true.
August 29th, 2025 09:10
After the fall
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, the words feel ancient. Nicely done.
August 29th, 2025 08:26
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, the words feel ancient. Nicely done.
August 29th, 2025 08:26
After the fall
Kevin Hulme said:
Not looking forward to Autumn or Winter one bit.
Alas , poor Summer I knew you well.
Good Write.
August 29th, 2025 08:06
Kevin Hulme said:
Not looking forward to Autumn or Winter one bit.
Alas , poor Summer I knew you well.
Good Write.
August 29th, 2025 08:06
Beauty and thorns
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP\'s like a rose. I help her to grow with plenty of fertiliser/manure - for her dinner! heehee. It\'s horrible in our kitchen. lol.
August 29th, 2025 07:36
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP\'s like a rose. I help her to grow with plenty of fertiliser/manure - for her dinner! heehee. It\'s horrible in our kitchen. lol.
August 29th, 2025 07:36
Beauty and thorns
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t know how, but even I can get the metaphor...
Well scribed, Sir.
August 29th, 2025 07:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t know how, but even I can get the metaphor...
Well scribed, Sir.
August 29th, 2025 07:00
Beauty and thorns
arqios said:
🌹 Passion isn’t always love. Sometimes we grab the rose bare‑handed, drawn by beauty, only to realise we’ve hurt both her and ourselves. A flower cut from her roots can’t thrive; no matter how pretty the vase. True care is letting her bloom and thrive in her natural state. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 29th, 2025 05:38
arqios said:
🌹 Passion isn’t always love. Sometimes we grab the rose bare‑handed, drawn by beauty, only to realise we’ve hurt both her and ourselves. A flower cut from her roots can’t thrive; no matter how pretty the vase. True care is letting her bloom and thrive in her natural state. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 29th, 2025 05:38
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