Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
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Keeter C said:
Words of humor and wisdom why is it I continually fly too high or to close to the flame. Never understanding which is my lane or the league in which I belong.
A very fun read and nicely done!
September 8th, 2025 23:30
Keeter C said:
Words of humor and wisdom why is it I continually fly too high or to close to the flame. Never understanding which is my lane or the league in which I belong.
A very fun read and nicely done!
September 8th, 2025 23:30
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Kevin Hulme said:
I think it was Serge Gainsourg who said \' Ugly is better than Beauty because it\'s does not fade\' .
All in all a fine Poem.
September 8th, 2025 18:47
Kevin Hulme said:
I think it was Serge Gainsourg who said \' Ugly is better than Beauty because it\'s does not fade\' .
All in all a fine Poem.
September 8th, 2025 18:47
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NinjaGirl said:
Hahaha maybe I will end up in a relationship by this logic! =D in all silliness, there is some truth to this, but I\'m not sure I totally agree
September 8th, 2025 18:43
NinjaGirl said:
Hahaha maybe I will end up in a relationship by this logic! =D in all silliness, there is some truth to this, but I\'m not sure I totally agree
September 8th, 2025 18:43
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A Boy With Roses said:
\"Molding reality into metaphors\" is cool but \"hospitality in brutality\" takes the damn cake! Nice rhythm and mouthfuls of words!
September 8th, 2025 16:02
A Boy With Roses said:
\"Molding reality into metaphors\" is cool but \"hospitality in brutality\" takes the damn cake! Nice rhythm and mouthfuls of words!
September 8th, 2025 16:02
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Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem has a sharp, satirical edge, it plays with irony while touching on themes of insecurity, relationships, and social judgment. Love the Rhyme of life / wife gives it a catchy, memorable sound.
Paradox / Irony; It suggests happiness comes from marrying someone society might consider “undesirable,” which flips expectations. Satire is humorously critiques shallow standards of attraction and relationship insecurity. Honestly shocking, but nicely written.
September 8th, 2025 12:03
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem has a sharp, satirical edge, it plays with irony while touching on themes of insecurity, relationships, and social judgment. Love the Rhyme of life / wife gives it a catchy, memorable sound.
Paradox / Irony; It suggests happiness comes from marrying someone society might consider “undesirable,” which flips expectations. Satire is humorously critiques shallow standards of attraction and relationship insecurity. Honestly shocking, but nicely written.
September 8th, 2025 12:03
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Teddy.15 said:
LOL oh this is fabulous a chuckle moment with an incredibly wise ending, I can\'t help but love the first stanza your language is hilarious, but actually it is throughout 😁 🤣 yes we seem to always be close in though 🤔
September 8th, 2025 07:59
Teddy.15 said:
LOL oh this is fabulous a chuckle moment with an incredibly wise ending, I can\'t help but love the first stanza your language is hilarious, but actually it is throughout 😁 🤣 yes we seem to always be close in though 🤔
September 8th, 2025 07:59
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orchidee said:
Dunno why I complain then - verse 1 - I married KP! lol.
September 8th, 2025 07:38
orchidee said:
Dunno why I complain then - verse 1 - I married KP! lol.
September 8th, 2025 07:38
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Priya Tomar said:
Nice poem ...
Good poem on a happy relationship
But women worship bravery, and she loves a powerful man and a man wants beauty....
September 8th, 2025 07:21
Priya Tomar said:
Nice poem ...
Good poem on a happy relationship
But women worship bravery, and she loves a powerful man and a man wants beauty....
September 8th, 2025 07:21
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this lands with biting humor and bitter truth. The rhymes cut sharp, mocking how love gets twisted into status and appearance. That closing turn sticks hard—dark, witty, and honest. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Truthfully, the script could be flipped to men picking the \"right\" woman. Either way, the satire works and if it rubs a few the wrong way...so be it. That\'s what satire is for! A must fave from me.
September 8th, 2025 07:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this lands with biting humor and bitter truth. The rhymes cut sharp, mocking how love gets twisted into status and appearance. That closing turn sticks hard—dark, witty, and honest. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Truthfully, the script could be flipped to men picking the \"right\" woman. Either way, the satire works and if it rubs a few the wrong way...so be it. That\'s what satire is for! A must fave from me.
September 8th, 2025 07:06
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Friendship said:
I enjoy your sense of humor in the morning it made me chuckle! 😂
The poem revolves around the notion of security in relationships. It suggests that marrying someone who is not conventionally attractive (an \"ugly wife\") or financially poor can lead to a more stable and less complicated relationship. The poem implies that such choices can help avoid jealousy, insecurity, and societal pressures. It focuses on unconventional views of love and marriage, challenging societal norms regarding beauty and wealth.
September 8th, 2025 06:49
Friendship said:
I enjoy your sense of humor in the morning it made me chuckle! 😂
The poem revolves around the notion of security in relationships. It suggests that marrying someone who is not conventionally attractive (an \"ugly wife\") or financially poor can lead to a more stable and less complicated relationship. The poem implies that such choices can help avoid jealousy, insecurity, and societal pressures. It focuses on unconventional views of love and marriage, challenging societal norms regarding beauty and wealth.
September 8th, 2025 06:49
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Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Soren,
Now I know why my wife married me, and there was I, thinking I was handsome. A poem full of sound advice though never given, rendered forth with dollops of humour and awkward truths.
Wishing you all the best,
Tony.
September 8th, 2025 06:44
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Soren,
Now I know why my wife married me, and there was I, thinking I was handsome. A poem full of sound advice though never given, rendered forth with dollops of humour and awkward truths.
Wishing you all the best,
Tony.
September 8th, 2025 06:44
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arqios said:
The safe lizards are the ones with the longest lives and tails… they live to tell so many tales as well.
September 8th, 2025 05:58
arqios said:
The safe lizards are the ones with the longest lives and tails… they live to tell so many tales as well.
September 8th, 2025 05:58
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Neville said:
Now aint that so often the truth .. I just happen to have been very lucky .. Bloomin brilliant .. Neville 😎👍
September 8th, 2025 05:41
Neville said:
Now aint that so often the truth .. I just happen to have been very lucky .. Bloomin brilliant .. Neville 😎👍
September 8th, 2025 05:41
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Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. Love the way it flowed. Nicely done.
September 8th, 2025 02:21
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. Love the way it flowed. Nicely done.
September 8th, 2025 02:21
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Acheel said:
Hail Soren sayer of these mighty words throng
In sorrow brewed this unbroken, unsung song?
September 8th, 2025 00:14
Acheel said:
Hail Soren sayer of these mighty words throng
In sorrow brewed this unbroken, unsung song?
September 8th, 2025 00:14
What is a poet?
nami said:
oh YES, how different and yet so same. The common misery of the poets, the way we pour it into our pages, this is beautiful.
September 7th, 2025 23:04
nami said:
oh YES, how different and yet so same. The common misery of the poets, the way we pour it into our pages, this is beautiful.
September 7th, 2025 23:04
Recognition
nami said:
\"The lingering memory of a fading kiss\", this is haunting and beautiful. SO nicely done!!
September 7th, 2025 23:02
nami said:
\"The lingering memory of a fading kiss\", this is haunting and beautiful. SO nicely done!!
September 7th, 2025 23:02
Why?
NafisaSB said:
Really true. We always bow to the demands of society and try to toe the expected line
Resonates with me 👏✌️👍💐
September 7th, 2025 19:19
NafisaSB said:
Really true. We always bow to the demands of society and try to toe the expected line
Resonates with me 👏✌️👍💐
September 7th, 2025 19:19
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully done, my friend. The rhythm drives each line like an incantation, and the imagery keeps it pulsing with depth. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 7th, 2025 18:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully done, my friend. The rhythm drives each line like an incantation, and the imagery keeps it pulsing with depth. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 7th, 2025 18:33
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Kevin Hulme said:
Agree with all you say and the way you said it.
Fine Poem.
Also I never understood when Bugs Bunny came out of a Shower; he had a Towel draped around his waist; when usually he wore nothing at all. But that\'s something else.
September 7th, 2025 18:30
Kevin Hulme said:
Agree with all you say and the way you said it.
Fine Poem.
Also I never understood when Bugs Bunny came out of a Shower; he had a Towel draped around his waist; when usually he wore nothing at all. But that\'s something else.
September 7th, 2025 18:30
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arqios said:
Allied and almost mirrored experiences or in the least a variant in parallel universes, superbly resonant and relatable.
September 7th, 2025 17:14
arqios said:
Allied and almost mirrored experiences or in the least a variant in parallel universes, superbly resonant and relatable.
September 7th, 2025 17:14
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NinjaGirl said:
I would definitely agree with the \"borrower,\" sense. It\'s the idea that no story is wholly original, only borrowed parts and memories. As for the rest: well written and an enjoyable read!
September 7th, 2025 16:52
NinjaGirl said:
I would definitely agree with the \"borrower,\" sense. It\'s the idea that no story is wholly original, only borrowed parts and memories. As for the rest: well written and an enjoyable read!
September 7th, 2025 16:52
Why?
Tony Grannell said:
... and nakedness in the arts is accepted, Soren. Weather plays a large part in culture of modesty just as much as religion does. Impropriety is in the eye of the beholder depending on society. How you have composed this poem is a wonder. Eight lines and so much therein. Excellent!
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 7th, 2025 11:03
Tony Grannell said:
... and nakedness in the arts is accepted, Soren. Weather plays a large part in culture of modesty just as much as religion does. Impropriety is in the eye of the beholder depending on society. How you have composed this poem is a wonder. Eight lines and so much therein. Excellent!
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 7th, 2025 11:03
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Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Wow, the repeated roles of the poet really emphasize the power of words to shape and transform life. Such powerful imagery and rhythm! Beautifully written.
September 7th, 2025 09:07
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Wow, the repeated roles of the poet really emphasize the power of words to shape and transform life. Such powerful imagery and rhythm! Beautifully written.
September 7th, 2025 09:07
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Friendship said:
The intention behind the poem appears to be a meditation on the complexities of the creative process, revealing the emotional weight that accompanies artistic expression. It serves as both a personal reflection and a commentary on the broader human experience of searching for meaning amidst chaos.
September 7th, 2025 07:49
Friendship said:
The intention behind the poem appears to be a meditation on the complexities of the creative process, revealing the emotional weight that accompanies artistic expression. It serves as both a personal reflection and a commentary on the broader human experience of searching for meaning amidst chaos.
September 7th, 2025 07:49
Why?
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The line “Our soul undressed in our eyes\" brings in only one question. Is there a relationship between physical nudity and psychological nakedness? Somehow I felt being naked was not hard but baring one\'s mind was a challenge. Perhaps it\'s an aside. Great poem. Thank you
September 7th, 2025 02:30
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The line “Our soul undressed in our eyes\" brings in only one question. Is there a relationship between physical nudity and psychological nakedness? Somehow I felt being naked was not hard but baring one\'s mind was a challenge. Perhaps it\'s an aside. Great poem. Thank you
September 7th, 2025 02:30
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