Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Nuts
Teddy.15 said:
Well I\'d say you are perfectly normal then. 🤣 How wonderfully written, I\'d say we were definitely two peas in a pod. 💜 Fabulous humour and imagery. Chuckled all the way 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭
March 5th, 2025 04:39
Teddy.15 said:
Well I\'d say you are perfectly normal then. 🤣 How wonderfully written, I\'d say we were definitely two peas in a pod. 💜 Fabulous humour and imagery. Chuckled all the way 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭
March 5th, 2025 04:39
Webs of words
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, those words of the past can be so meaningful.
Andy
March 5th, 2025 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, those words of the past can be so meaningful.
Andy
March 5th, 2025 02:43
Webs of words
Cassie58 said:
A põem of sad reflection. I very much admire the references to Greek mythology and the imagery surrounding those cobwebs is captivating. A wonderful poem Sorenbarrett.
March 5th, 2025 01:20
Cassie58 said:
A põem of sad reflection. I very much admire the references to Greek mythology and the imagery surrounding those cobwebs is captivating. A wonderful poem Sorenbarrett.
March 5th, 2025 01:20
Night visitor
Firefall said:
Wow! Powerful words. This poem is meant to speak aloud.
March 4th, 2025 16:02
Firefall said:
Wow! Powerful words. This poem is meant to speak aloud.
March 4th, 2025 16:02
Webs of words
David Wakeling said:
The Greeks sure had many Gods.I liked the idea of weaving.Excellent
March 4th, 2025 15:54
David Wakeling said:
The Greeks sure had many Gods.I liked the idea of weaving.Excellent
March 4th, 2025 15:54
Webs of words
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a masterful weaving of myth and metaphor. You’ve spun a \"web of words\" that captures the essence of poetry, punishment, and the lingering threads of memory. The way you’ve connected Arachne’s tale to the poet’s craft is brilliant, my friend! Your final stanzas weave vivid designs of memories clinging like cobwebs, once intricate patterns now broken and floating. I resonate with that...a powerfully evocative reflection on the fragility of our past and the stories we tell. Beautifully crafted, my friend. This gets a fave for sure. 🌹👏
March 4th, 2025 10:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a masterful weaving of myth and metaphor. You’ve spun a \"web of words\" that captures the essence of poetry, punishment, and the lingering threads of memory. The way you’ve connected Arachne’s tale to the poet’s craft is brilliant, my friend! Your final stanzas weave vivid designs of memories clinging like cobwebs, once intricate patterns now broken and floating. I resonate with that...a powerfully evocative reflection on the fragility of our past and the stories we tell. Beautifully crafted, my friend. This gets a fave for sure. 🌹👏
March 4th, 2025 10:15
Webs of words
Poetic Licence said:
A story of reflection the Greek way!!, beautifully written and some lovely lines, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 08:04
Poetic Licence said:
A story of reflection the Greek way!!, beautifully written and some lovely lines, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 08:04
Webs of words
Friendship said:
Your poem masterfully weaves together classical mythology and personal reflection, transforming the story of Arachne into a powerful exploration of memory, loss, and transformation. By drawing on this myth, you convey a sense of longing for lost connections and past relationships, while also illuminating the human capacity for resilience and growth. The imagery of webs and threads skillfully symbolizes the fragility and beauty of memories, highlighting the importance of embracing our experiences and learning from them. Your work inspires empathy and introspection, inviting readers to reflect on the transformative power of memory and the impact of lost connections on our lives. How can we harness the emotional weight of our memories to fuel positive change and growth?
March 4th, 2025 07:30
Friendship said:
Your poem masterfully weaves together classical mythology and personal reflection, transforming the story of Arachne into a powerful exploration of memory, loss, and transformation. By drawing on this myth, you convey a sense of longing for lost connections and past relationships, while also illuminating the human capacity for resilience and growth. The imagery of webs and threads skillfully symbolizes the fragility and beauty of memories, highlighting the importance of embracing our experiences and learning from them. Your work inspires empathy and introspection, inviting readers to reflect on the transformative power of memory and the impact of lost connections on our lives. How can we harness the emotional weight of our memories to fuel positive change and growth?
March 4th, 2025 07:30
Webs of words
MDStone said:
Cobwebs cling to me, lingering threads of what used to be
Memories broken pulled away glisten in the light of day
Strands once woven with care, fragments sticky tickle of despair
Pieces of what once was home now floating in air do roam
Wow! Soren, that’s all I can say is WOW. Great wording and writing. I hung there suspended on threads of the web, remembering. Thanks for sharing this great piece of art.
March 4th, 2025 06:38
MDStone said:
Cobwebs cling to me, lingering threads of what used to be
Memories broken pulled away glisten in the light of day
Strands once woven with care, fragments sticky tickle of despair
Pieces of what once was home now floating in air do roam
Wow! Soren, that’s all I can say is WOW. Great wording and writing. I hung there suspended on threads of the web, remembering. Thanks for sharing this great piece of art.
March 4th, 2025 06:38
Webs of words
Salvia.S said:
Wow!!!
A beautiful and emotional exploration of memory, loss, and transformation. The way you weave together mythology and personal reflection is truly captivating.
Well written.
March 4th, 2025 05:35
Salvia.S said:
Wow!!!
A beautiful and emotional exploration of memory, loss, and transformation. The way you weave together mythology and personal reflection is truly captivating.
Well written.
March 4th, 2025 05:35
Webs of words
arqios said:
Brings to life how the ancients envisioned their world and time that they lived in. 🙏🏻🕊️
March 4th, 2025 04:42
arqios said:
Brings to life how the ancients envisioned their world and time that they lived in. 🙏🏻🕊️
March 4th, 2025 04:42
Webs of words
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite poetry my dear sorrenbarret 🌹 so very beautiful. 🌹
March 4th, 2025 03:37
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite poetry my dear sorrenbarret 🌹 so very beautiful. 🌹
March 4th, 2025 03:37
Webs of words
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I find Greek mythology stories eccentric, weird, horrific too in places. They are surely only myths. There are some horrible things in some of the stories.
March 4th, 2025 03:23
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I find Greek mythology stories eccentric, weird, horrific too in places. They are surely only myths. There are some horrible things in some of the stories.
March 4th, 2025 03:23
Do you know?
Goldfinch60 said:
That last line is so very true soren, when will they ever learn!
Andy
March 4th, 2025 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
That last line is so very true soren, when will they ever learn!
Andy
March 4th, 2025 03:01
Pages not written
NafisaSB said:
so many unsung heroes - we salute this noble band
thanks for translating and sharing
March 4th, 2025 00:12
NafisaSB said:
so many unsung heroes - we salute this noble band
thanks for translating and sharing
March 4th, 2025 00:12
Do you know?
David Wakeling said:
Wow some fundamental questions right here.Made me think for the first time in years. Well done
March 3rd, 2025 17:06
David Wakeling said:
Wow some fundamental questions right here.Made me think for the first time in years. Well done
March 3rd, 2025 17:06
Do you know?
Neville said:
I believe a lot of people know but they choose either to ignore it (its easier that way & requires no real effort) .. or they are misguided and or delusional and think they know better .. compassion however, is priceless & sadly an increasingly rare human characteristic ..
March 3rd, 2025 14:38
Neville said:
I believe a lot of people know but they choose either to ignore it (its easier that way & requires no real effort) .. or they are misguided and or delusional and think they know better .. compassion however, is priceless & sadly an increasingly rare human characteristic ..
March 3rd, 2025 14:38
Do you know?
NinjaGirl said:
Absolutely incredible, I love everything about this poem! Very thought provoking.
March 3rd, 2025 13:21
NinjaGirl said:
Absolutely incredible, I love everything about this poem! Very thought provoking.
March 3rd, 2025 13:21
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Accidental Poet said:
Very wise words soren. There are people of high-profile powers that should pay special attention to these words. But because they are who they are, they don\'t see the values that the rest of us do.
March 3rd, 2025 10:08
Accidental Poet said:
Very wise words soren. There are people of high-profile powers that should pay special attention to these words. But because they are who they are, they don\'t see the values that the rest of us do.
March 3rd, 2025 10:08
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
There\'s a reason so many have faved this, my friend. It\'s brilliant, hauntingly touching, and a call to reflect and act. Well done on this one, for sure! 🌹👏
March 3rd, 2025 09:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
There\'s a reason so many have faved this, my friend. It\'s brilliant, hauntingly touching, and a call to reflect and act. Well done on this one, for sure! 🌹👏
March 3rd, 2025 09:20
Do you know?
Friendship said:
Your poem appears to be a deliberate and intricate composition, inviting us to ponder the numerous unresolved thoughts and ongoing questions it presents. You delve into profound inquiries regarding value and morality within human relationships and societal structures. Human behavior in relationships can be unpredictable, involving a delicate balance of give-and-take. However, some individuals exert control over our thoughts and actions, while others seek to destroy a person without justification, driven by self-serving interests and desires. Ultimately, your poem serves as a reflection on the complexities of human emotions and societal values, prompting the reader to reevaluate the true significance of their cherished aspirations.
March 3rd, 2025 08:35
Friendship said:
Your poem appears to be a deliberate and intricate composition, inviting us to ponder the numerous unresolved thoughts and ongoing questions it presents. You delve into profound inquiries regarding value and morality within human relationships and societal structures. Human behavior in relationships can be unpredictable, involving a delicate balance of give-and-take. However, some individuals exert control over our thoughts and actions, while others seek to destroy a person without justification, driven by self-serving interests and desires. Ultimately, your poem serves as a reflection on the complexities of human emotions and societal values, prompting the reader to reevaluate the true significance of their cherished aspirations.
March 3rd, 2025 08:35
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Poetic Licence said:
It\'s all about the last line to me and it is very powerful, for a close and emotional read
March 3rd, 2025 06:05
Poetic Licence said:
It\'s all about the last line to me and it is very powerful, for a close and emotional read
March 3rd, 2025 06:05
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Mutley Ravishes said:
Great questions, Soren. Don\'t let the world grind you down!
March 3rd, 2025 05:38
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great questions, Soren. Don\'t let the world grind you down!
March 3rd, 2025 05:38
Do you know?
Teddy.15 said:
Such beauty in every line, wisdom and knowledge and a lot of reflection, I\'d like to believe in everything you say, as I\'m a pretty good human, spreading love is in my opinion the best way to go. Doesn\'t mean it will help any war but a smile goes a long way. We really should all reach deep to find the empathy and compassion we are all capable of having, those who are simply lost in evil, well they will be the ones to go down the drain in history. 🌹
March 3rd, 2025 05:05
Teddy.15 said:
Such beauty in every line, wisdom and knowledge and a lot of reflection, I\'d like to believe in everything you say, as I\'m a pretty good human, spreading love is in my opinion the best way to go. Doesn\'t mean it will help any war but a smile goes a long way. We really should all reach deep to find the empathy and compassion we are all capable of having, those who are simply lost in evil, well they will be the ones to go down the drain in history. 🌹
March 3rd, 2025 05:05
Do you know?
Salvia.S said:
Actually are you a doctor or mathematician? I\'m confused... 😁 anyway good writing...
March 3rd, 2025 04:47
Salvia.S said:
Actually are you a doctor or mathematician? I\'m confused... 😁 anyway good writing...
March 3rd, 2025 04:47
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