Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
No choice
Poetic Licence said:
A very poignant and touching write, of the suffering some people are going through today, infront of what we laughingly call the civilised world, nicely expressed and written
July 31st, 2025 05:36
Poetic Licence said:
A very poignant and touching write, of the suffering some people are going through today, infront of what we laughingly call the civilised world, nicely expressed and written
July 31st, 2025 05:36
No choice
Tony Grannell said:
You could have easily been referring to a child in Gaza, the first thing to come to mind after reading this. A powerfully wrought verse, to express so much with so few words and to capture the minds, souls and hearts of many a poet. A superb passage of poetry, my friend, truly.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 31st, 2025 05:21
Tony Grannell said:
You could have easily been referring to a child in Gaza, the first thing to come to mind after reading this. A powerfully wrought verse, to express so much with so few words and to capture the minds, souls and hearts of many a poet. A superb passage of poetry, my friend, truly.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 31st, 2025 05:21
Vanity
Teddy.15 said:
lol that\'s hilarious, all\'s well that ends well. 🤣 Brilliantly written. Love the imagery. 🌹
July 31st, 2025 03:41
Teddy.15 said:
lol that\'s hilarious, all\'s well that ends well. 🤣 Brilliantly written. Love the imagery. 🌹
July 31st, 2025 03:41
No choice
Teddy.15 said:
Incredibly powerful, makes me think of all the good people who just want a chance at life. Wonderful theme my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
July 31st, 2025 03:38
Teddy.15 said:
Incredibly powerful, makes me think of all the good people who just want a chance at life. Wonderful theme my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
July 31st, 2025 03:38
Maybe
Goldfinch60 said:
Liberation is there within us soren, all we need is to believe in ourselves.
Andy
July 31st, 2025 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Liberation is there within us soren, all we need is to believe in ourselves.
Andy
July 31st, 2025 02:18
Now
Denise Roddis said:
A thought-provoking piece - that makes you reflect on your life.
July 30th, 2025 17:06
Denise Roddis said:
A thought-provoking piece - that makes you reflect on your life.
July 30th, 2025 17:06
Maybe
Bella Shepard said:
So much of life revolves around the word \"maybe\", and with poetic brilliance you capture the feeling place of hesitancy or uncertainty that plagues us all from time to time. Beatifully done!
July 30th, 2025 10:01
Bella Shepard said:
So much of life revolves around the word \"maybe\", and with poetic brilliance you capture the feeling place of hesitancy or uncertainty that plagues us all from time to time. Beatifully done!
July 30th, 2025 10:01
Maybe
Friendship said:
Well-written, Sorenbarrett, with a bit of twists and turns, uncertainties, but I kind of maybe think I got it! Your poem seems to revolve around uncertainty and the search for meaning in various aspects of life. The repeated use of \"maybe\" suggests a contemplation of possibilities and the complexities of human thoughts and emotions. You explore themes of self-reflection, hesitation, and the pursuit of understanding in the face of confusion and doubt. The poem delves into the interplay between imagination, reality, and the struggle for self-acceptance and transformation.
July 30th, 2025 07:45
Friendship said:
Well-written, Sorenbarrett, with a bit of twists and turns, uncertainties, but I kind of maybe think I got it! Your poem seems to revolve around uncertainty and the search for meaning in various aspects of life. The repeated use of \"maybe\" suggests a contemplation of possibilities and the complexities of human thoughts and emotions. You explore themes of self-reflection, hesitation, and the pursuit of understanding in the face of confusion and doubt. The poem delves into the interplay between imagination, reality, and the struggle for self-acceptance and transformation.
July 30th, 2025 07:45
Maybe
Jerry Reynolds said:
Wow! SB, the work that went into that. A great poem. Wonderful read.
July 30th, 2025 06:13
Jerry Reynolds said:
Wow! SB, the work that went into that. A great poem. Wonderful read.
July 30th, 2025 06:13
Maybe
Poetic Licence said:
I have to say that is so well written, so clever and maybe I will find the answers one day, wonderful write, enjoyed.
July 30th, 2025 06:00
Poetic Licence said:
I have to say that is so well written, so clever and maybe I will find the answers one day, wonderful write, enjoyed.
July 30th, 2025 06:00
Maybe
RSM0812 said:
Lots of great rhyming here describing the it or what it could be. Masterfully done.
July 30th, 2025 05:05
RSM0812 said:
Lots of great rhyming here describing the it or what it could be. Masterfully done.
July 30th, 2025 05:05
Night\'s refuge
Neville said:
Excellent ink my friend .. & then some .. Neville
July 30th, 2025 01:46
Neville said:
Excellent ink my friend .. & then some .. Neville
July 30th, 2025 01:46
Memories
Damaso said:
Wow I am very happy that I have connected that way with the text, an approach and alignment number. Very grateful to read and return. As always a pleasure. Kind regards
July 29th, 2025 11:39
Damaso said:
Wow I am very happy that I have connected that way with the text, an approach and alignment number. Very grateful to read and return. As always a pleasure. Kind regards
July 29th, 2025 11:39
Memories
Friendship said:
To me, this poem explores the tragic complexity of a chemistry teacher\'s life, juxtaposing his chaotic professional persona with the dark personal turmoil that ultimately leads to his demise. It reflects on the instability of human existence, the consequences of neglect and violence, and the irony of a life dedicated to education ending in tragedy. The outcome to me is that. The poem deals with themes of education, mental health, domestic violence, and the often-hidden struggles of individuals in positions of authority. It paints a picture of a teacher who is deeply flawed and whose failures in both his career and personal life culminate in tragic outcomes.
July 29th, 2025 07:25
Friendship said:
To me, this poem explores the tragic complexity of a chemistry teacher\'s life, juxtaposing his chaotic professional persona with the dark personal turmoil that ultimately leads to his demise. It reflects on the instability of human existence, the consequences of neglect and violence, and the irony of a life dedicated to education ending in tragedy. The outcome to me is that. The poem deals with themes of education, mental health, domestic violence, and the often-hidden struggles of individuals in positions of authority. It paints a picture of a teacher who is deeply flawed and whose failures in both his career and personal life culminate in tragic outcomes.
July 29th, 2025 07:25
Memories
Priya Tomar said:
Nice to read it......
Humour to tragic end .....
Well written
July 29th, 2025 06:29
Priya Tomar said:
Nice to read it......
Humour to tragic end .....
Well written
July 29th, 2025 06:29
Memories
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this starts with absurdity and ends in tragedy…like a punchline that forgets it’s supposed to be funny. The tone walks a razor’s edge...crude, chaotic, and then suddenly, brutally quiet. You captured memory not as nostalgia, but as a wound. Well done! 🖤🙏🕯️
July 29th, 2025 06:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this starts with absurdity and ends in tragedy…like a punchline that forgets it’s supposed to be funny. The tone walks a razor’s edge...crude, chaotic, and then suddenly, brutally quiet. You captured memory not as nostalgia, but as a wound. Well done! 🖤🙏🕯️
July 29th, 2025 06:24
Memories
Poetic Licence said:
An intriguing write drifting from the chaos of the classroom to the chaos of someone\'s mind and actions, nicely done
July 29th, 2025 05:38
Poetic Licence said:
An intriguing write drifting from the chaos of the classroom to the chaos of someone\'s mind and actions, nicely done
July 29th, 2025 05:38
Memories
Demar Desu said:
Hold on let me grab my tea and pastry dish before I start reading
July 29th, 2025 04:50
Demar Desu said:
Hold on let me grab my tea and pastry dish before I start reading
July 29th, 2025 04:50
Memories
arqios said:
This piece crackles with dark energy; mixing slapstick chemistry gags and sudden tragedy.
The voice feels raw and unfiltered, driving us from classroom chaos straight into a grim finale.
That jarring pivot, while shocking, gives the poem an unforgettable sting. Some memories do have \'em!
July 29th, 2025 04:19
arqios said:
This piece crackles with dark energy; mixing slapstick chemistry gags and sudden tragedy.
The voice feels raw and unfiltered, driving us from classroom chaos straight into a grim finale.
That jarring pivot, while shocking, gives the poem an unforgettable sting. Some memories do have \'em!
July 29th, 2025 04:19
Memories
Neville said:
Sh ** happens, yet sadly enjoyed .. Memories eh\' who would have em .. Neville
July 29th, 2025 03:34
Neville said:
Sh ** happens, yet sadly enjoyed .. Memories eh\' who would have em .. Neville
July 29th, 2025 03:34
Forest fig
NafisaSB said:
wonderful - what one wants, and what one gets is not always the same - so well explained...
July 29th, 2025 00:25
NafisaSB said:
wonderful - what one wants, and what one gets is not always the same - so well explained...
July 29th, 2025 00:25
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