Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Differences
NinjaGirl said:
\"We don\'t make love, we feel it\" what a beautiful stanza that follows. It\'s a funny thing that people don\'t seem to understand for a while.
April 14th, 2025 11:05
NinjaGirl said:
\"We don\'t make love, we feel it\" what a beautiful stanza that follows. It\'s a funny thing that people don\'t seem to understand for a while.
April 14th, 2025 11:05
Differences
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"We don\'t make love, we feel it.\" On the surface, a literal translation of this is true enough. But metaphorically and philosophically, this is profoundly true across the board. We feel and we share/give love...experience it even, but we don\'t make it. 🤯 Well done, Soren. This is an instant fave for a whole host of reasons, let alone what I focused on. 🌹👏
April 14th, 2025 07:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"We don\'t make love, we feel it.\" On the surface, a literal translation of this is true enough. But metaphorically and philosophically, this is profoundly true across the board. We feel and we share/give love...experience it even, but we don\'t make it. 🤯 Well done, Soren. This is an instant fave for a whole host of reasons, let alone what I focused on. 🌹👏
April 14th, 2025 07:39
Differences
Friendship said:
Your poem illuminates the beautiful nuances between passion and love, highlighting their ephemeral nature and the profound impact they have on human connections. It reveals that while passion can radiate intensely and swiftly diminish, love blossoms gradually, nurturing a sense of serenity and comfort. This thought-provoking exploration invites reflection on the intricate dance between passion and love, inspiring readers to contemplate how these emotions intertwine and elevate their lives. Ultimately, it serves as a poignant meditation on the transitory and enduring essence of these universal human emotions.
April 14th, 2025 07:21
Friendship said:
Your poem illuminates the beautiful nuances between passion and love, highlighting their ephemeral nature and the profound impact they have on human connections. It reveals that while passion can radiate intensely and swiftly diminish, love blossoms gradually, nurturing a sense of serenity and comfort. This thought-provoking exploration invites reflection on the intricate dance between passion and love, inspiring readers to contemplate how these emotions intertwine and elevate their lives. Ultimately, it serves as a poignant meditation on the transitory and enduring essence of these universal human emotions.
April 14th, 2025 07:21
Differences
David Wakeling said:
This poem explores the link between Love and Passion.I think people get those two mixed up. As the poem says Neither we understand.Powerful message here
April 14th, 2025 05:40
David Wakeling said:
This poem explores the link between Love and Passion.I think people get those two mixed up. As the poem says Neither we understand.Powerful message here
April 14th, 2025 05:40
Differences
Poetic Licence said:
So often thought of as the same but completely different, and truth be known none of us truly understand either, enjoyed the read
April 14th, 2025 04:26
Poetic Licence said:
So often thought of as the same but completely different, and truth be known none of us truly understand either, enjoyed the read
April 14th, 2025 04:26
Passing on
Goldfinch60 said:
But the bullet was a blank soren and all was good.
Andy
April 14th, 2025 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
But the bullet was a blank soren and all was good.
Andy
April 14th, 2025 01:53
Broken toys
Sylvia Somaduroff said:
i like the stencil use. feels tactile when reading, like the stencil was not just for you to say but for the reader to read and remember the feeling of the stencil.
April 14th, 2025 01:18
Sylvia Somaduroff said:
i like the stencil use. feels tactile when reading, like the stencil was not just for you to say but for the reader to read and remember the feeling of the stencil.
April 14th, 2025 01:18
Passing on
NinjaGirl said:
Reminds me of Russian Roulette at the end there. I see a gambler, trying so desperately to buy pleasure, then trying desperately to win back his losses. Of course, it\'s only so long until either a mistake is made, or a purposeful shot taken.
April 13th, 2025 15:20
NinjaGirl said:
Reminds me of Russian Roulette at the end there. I see a gambler, trying so desperately to buy pleasure, then trying desperately to win back his losses. Of course, it\'s only so long until either a mistake is made, or a purposeful shot taken.
April 13th, 2025 15:20
Passing on
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In this I see the course of one\'s life with, perhaps, death being the bullet in the gun ending fun. The rushing to grow up, the youthful mistakes cast a bit of a shadow but are forgotten by the progression of one\'s life and the busyness therein. Then, before one knows it...death. Or, it could be past mistakes forgotten only to return with a vengeance, I can see multiple interpretations in this wonderful poem. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
April 13th, 2025 13:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In this I see the course of one\'s life with, perhaps, death being the bullet in the gun ending fun. The rushing to grow up, the youthful mistakes cast a bit of a shadow but are forgotten by the progression of one\'s life and the busyness therein. Then, before one knows it...death. Or, it could be past mistakes forgotten only to return with a vengeance, I can see multiple interpretations in this wonderful poem. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
April 13th, 2025 13:25
Passing on
Lorenz said:
Weird...It reminds of sentences from 70\'s spaghetti western !
April 13th, 2025 10:52
Lorenz said:
Weird...It reminds of sentences from 70\'s spaghetti western !
April 13th, 2025 10:52
Passing on
Tony Grannell said:
This one is fired from the hip, tragic as it is honest. A hurried existence, to make a quick buck, as it were. Each line a shot of truth in a life lived until the final bullet.
This is one for the books - excellent!
Kind regards,
Tony.
April 13th, 2025 09:46
Tony Grannell said:
This one is fired from the hip, tragic as it is honest. A hurried existence, to make a quick buck, as it were. Each line a shot of truth in a life lived until the final bullet.
This is one for the books - excellent!
Kind regards,
Tony.
April 13th, 2025 09:46
Seasons pass
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A touching poem of not just the seasons but also of the seasons of life.
April 13th, 2025 08:56
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A touching poem of not just the seasons but also of the seasons of life.
April 13th, 2025 08:56
Passing on
Friendship said:
Your poem functions as a cautionary narrative, prompting the reader to contemplate the merits of patience, the significance of appreciating experiences, and the inexorable progression of time. It inspires introspection regarding the manner in which one elects to live life amidst societal pressures to accelerate.
April 13th, 2025 08:08
Friendship said:
Your poem functions as a cautionary narrative, prompting the reader to contemplate the merits of patience, the significance of appreciating experiences, and the inexorable progression of time. It inspires introspection regarding the manner in which one elects to live life amidst societal pressures to accelerate.
April 13th, 2025 08:08
Passing on
Salvia.S said:
Poignant reminder to cherish the present, as life\'s moments and pursuits can be fleeting. Well written!!!!
April 13th, 2025 07:44
Salvia.S said:
Poignant reminder to cherish the present, as life\'s moments and pursuits can be fleeting. Well written!!!!
April 13th, 2025 07:44
Passing on
David Wakeling said:
This shoots like a machine gun.Wonderful construction and wisdom.Well done
April 13th, 2025 05:31
David Wakeling said:
This shoots like a machine gun.Wonderful construction and wisdom.Well done
April 13th, 2025 05:31
Passing on
Poetic Licence said:
Forgive me as this is more than likely not what you intended it to mean, but to me it comes across as someone who is only interested in themselves and getting to the top as quickly as possible, regardless of cost to himself or others, than when he makes it, it\'s not what he thought it would be and the pleasure is short lived, hence the bullet, whatever it means I have enjoyed reading this write
April 13th, 2025 05:10
Poetic Licence said:
Forgive me as this is more than likely not what you intended it to mean, but to me it comes across as someone who is only interested in themselves and getting to the top as quickly as possible, regardless of cost to himself or others, than when he makes it, it\'s not what he thought it would be and the pleasure is short lived, hence the bullet, whatever it means I have enjoyed reading this write
April 13th, 2025 05:10
Passing on
arqios said:
Now that has compressed so much in so few lines, bursting with thought and meaning🙏🏻🕊️
April 13th, 2025 04:12
arqios said:
Now that has compressed so much in so few lines, bursting with thought and meaning🙏🏻🕊️
April 13th, 2025 04:12
Seasons pass
Goldfinch60 said:
May each season bring us a different joy soren, as do the words in your poem.
Andy
April 13th, 2025 02:32
Goldfinch60 said:
May each season bring us a different joy soren, as do the words in your poem.
Andy
April 13th, 2025 02:32
Unknot the not
James Michael said:
Enjoyable! You sure do crank ‘em out! Kindness can be a rarity, this site was a war zone a few years ago. I packed my bags and left after three years here as Johnny FN Lawless. This place has returned to a better place.
April 12th, 2025 22:22
James Michael said:
Enjoyable! You sure do crank ‘em out! Kindness can be a rarity, this site was a war zone a few years ago. I packed my bags and left after three years here as Johnny FN Lawless. This place has returned to a better place.
April 12th, 2025 22:22
Seasons pass
James Michael said:
Hard to read with the font, maybe I’ll have an easier time with another.
April 12th, 2025 22:19
James Michael said:
Hard to read with the font, maybe I’ll have an easier time with another.
April 12th, 2025 22:19
Seasons pass
Friendship said:
A beautiful painting , Soren.Your poem masterfully personifies the seasons—winter, spring, summer, and autumn—using breathtaking imagery and metaphor to describe the awe-inspiring transformations occurring in nature throughout the year. You beautifully illustrate how each season brings distinct beauty and characteristics, while also reflecting the passage of time and the changes in the natural world. Your poem may be intended to celebrate the splendor of nature and the profound emotional resonance that changing seasons evoke in human experience, inviting readers to revel in the transformations occurring in the world around them. Your poem is replete with sensory imagery. For example, \"Goose down snow\" and \"gown of roses\" evoke visual and tactile sensations. Metaphors comparing seasons to clothing, such as \"cloud\'s linen case\" and \"Seasonal ice negligee,\" convey beauty and transformation.
April 12th, 2025 08:53
Friendship said:
A beautiful painting , Soren.Your poem masterfully personifies the seasons—winter, spring, summer, and autumn—using breathtaking imagery and metaphor to describe the awe-inspiring transformations occurring in nature throughout the year. You beautifully illustrate how each season brings distinct beauty and characteristics, while also reflecting the passage of time and the changes in the natural world. Your poem may be intended to celebrate the splendor of nature and the profound emotional resonance that changing seasons evoke in human experience, inviting readers to revel in the transformations occurring in the world around them. Your poem is replete with sensory imagery. For example, \"Goose down snow\" and \"gown of roses\" evoke visual and tactile sensations. Metaphors comparing seasons to clothing, such as \"cloud\'s linen case\" and \"Seasonal ice negligee,\" convey beauty and transformation.
April 12th, 2025 08:53
Seasons pass
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A most excellent and beautiful write on the passing of the seasons. Indeed, it may be April, but I woke up with some snow today. It\'ll be gone by the end of the day...but quite apropos for the reading of this poem. Wonderful job, my friend. 🌹👏
April 12th, 2025 08:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A most excellent and beautiful write on the passing of the seasons. Indeed, it may be April, but I woke up with some snow today. It\'ll be gone by the end of the day...but quite apropos for the reading of this poem. Wonderful job, my friend. 🌹👏
April 12th, 2025 08:05
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