Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Head of wheat
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great metaphor, my friend. Not just chaff blowing in the wind, this wheat is an essential ingredient to life. There\'s many ways this can be interpreted to. The wheat and the vine draw up images of the Eucharist, for me, among other things. So, whether one is reading this metaphor more straight forward or whether one is divining mystical insights, this poem delivers all the way around my friend. Well done!!! 🌹👏
June 7th, 2025 09:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great metaphor, my friend. Not just chaff blowing in the wind, this wheat is an essential ingredient to life. There\'s many ways this can be interpreted to. The wheat and the vine draw up images of the Eucharist, for me, among other things. So, whether one is reading this metaphor more straight forward or whether one is divining mystical insights, this poem delivers all the way around my friend. Well done!!! 🌹👏
June 7th, 2025 09:19
Damaged
Damaso said:
Mother Earth, mother of all flavors and colors, some of us ask for your forgiveness! Beautifully written and very thoughtful. As always, a pleasure to read. Best regards!
June 7th, 2025 08:46
Damaso said:
Mother Earth, mother of all flavors and colors, some of us ask for your forgiveness! Beautifully written and very thoughtful. As always, a pleasure to read. Best regards!
June 7th, 2025 08:46
Damaged
Poetic Licence said:
Nature has abilities we will never have to survive and adapt over time and repair the damage we cause to it, enjoyed the read
June 7th, 2025 06:39
Poetic Licence said:
Nature has abilities we will never have to survive and adapt over time and repair the damage we cause to it, enjoyed the read
June 7th, 2025 06:39
Damaged
Soman Ragavan said:
Indeed, nature creates wonders of a kind that humans cannot match. We can only admire them.
June 7th, 2025 04:48
Soman Ragavan said:
Indeed, nature creates wonders of a kind that humans cannot match. We can only admire them.
June 7th, 2025 04:48
Damaged
David Wakeling said:
Indeed a short and sweet portrayal of the need to repair the damage in our lives and the human limitations we endure.
June 7th, 2025 04:23
David Wakeling said:
Indeed a short and sweet portrayal of the need to repair the damage in our lives and the human limitations we endure.
June 7th, 2025 04:23
Head of wheat
Teddy.15 said:
This just makes me smile it\'s stunning, your poetry is truly breathtaking dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
June 7th, 2025 02:13
Teddy.15 said:
This just makes me smile it\'s stunning, your poetry is truly breathtaking dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
June 7th, 2025 02:13
Head of wheat
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This is a beautiful and meaning poem. Well written!
June 7th, 2025 01:18
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This is a beautiful and meaning poem. Well written!
June 7th, 2025 01:18
Head of wheat
Goldfinch60 said:
Life grows in all soren and will always do so.
Andy
June 7th, 2025 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Life grows in all soren and will always do so.
Andy
June 7th, 2025 01:16
Habit or addiction
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This poem makes us think about when something is simply a pleasure and when it turns into a problem. Well done!
June 7th, 2025 01:15
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This poem makes us think about when something is simply a pleasure and when it turns into a problem. Well done!
June 7th, 2025 01:15
Weeds grow
Sylvia Somaduroff said:
I really like this flow and I\'ve been in my yard all spring so far and it resonates :).
June 7th, 2025 00:28
Sylvia Somaduroff said:
I really like this flow and I\'ve been in my yard all spring so far and it resonates :).
June 7th, 2025 00:28
Redemption in deception
James Michael said:
It is only with the heart that one can see rightly, what is essential is invisible to the eye. Something like that from a book I read.
June 6th, 2025 22:13
James Michael said:
It is only with the heart that one can see rightly, what is essential is invisible to the eye. Something like that from a book I read.
June 6th, 2025 22:13
Head of wheat
Damaso said:
What a beautiful text, so full of wisdom. Thank you so much for sharing it. Best regards.
June 6th, 2025 16:44
Damaso said:
What a beautiful text, so full of wisdom. Thank you so much for sharing it. Best regards.
June 6th, 2025 16:44
Head of wheat
MendedFences27 said:
From the seed planted to the bread baked. The life cycle rolls along. A very clever poem. Also, liked your rhyme scheme. Phil A.
June 6th, 2025 15:55
MendedFences27 said:
From the seed planted to the bread baked. The life cycle rolls along. A very clever poem. Also, liked your rhyme scheme. Phil A.
June 6th, 2025 15:55
Recognition
NafisaSB said:
Beautiful- enjoyed the flow of words as much as the scene depicted 👌💐
June 6th, 2025 12:08
NafisaSB said:
Beautiful- enjoyed the flow of words as much as the scene depicted 👌💐
June 6th, 2025 12:08
Habit or addiction
Kevin Hulme said:
As Oscar Wilde said: \'I can resist everything except Temptation\'. Good Write.
June 6th, 2025 08:44
Kevin Hulme said:
As Oscar Wilde said: \'I can resist everything except Temptation\'. Good Write.
June 6th, 2025 08:44
Head of wheat
Poetic Licence said:
Lifes cycle in all its glory, enjoyed the read
June 6th, 2025 06:41
Poetic Licence said:
Lifes cycle in all its glory, enjoyed the read
June 6th, 2025 06:41
Head of wheat
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your beautiful poem weaves life\'s cycle with striking imagery—birth, death, and rebirth in golden grain. A divine dance of sacrifice, sustenance, and sacred design.
June 6th, 2025 04:54
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your beautiful poem weaves life\'s cycle with striking imagery—birth, death, and rebirth in golden grain. A divine dance of sacrifice, sustenance, and sacred design.
June 6th, 2025 04:54
Head of wheat
David Wakeling said:
I see the great Australian staple \"wheat\". This explores the planting and growth and the miracle of natural growth.Excellent poem.I really enjoyed reading.
June 6th, 2025 04:06
David Wakeling said:
I see the great Australian staple \"wheat\". This explores the planting and growth and the miracle of natural growth.Excellent poem.I really enjoyed reading.
June 6th, 2025 04:06
Habit or addiction
Doggerel Dave said:
Most of what we ingest have therapeutic windows....
Good \'un Soren.
June 5th, 2025 18:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Most of what we ingest have therapeutic windows....
Good \'un Soren.
June 5th, 2025 18:20
Before we knew better
Alex Arnot said:
It\'s funny how knowledge of the world kills the magic of it. Sometimes I wish I could be as mystified by things as an adult as I was when I was a child.
June 5th, 2025 15:41
Alex Arnot said:
It\'s funny how knowledge of the world kills the magic of it. Sometimes I wish I could be as mystified by things as an adult as I was when I was a child.
June 5th, 2025 15:41
Habit or addiction
orchidee said:
I\'m in the \'habit\' of giving KP sewage for lunch daily! LOL.
June 5th, 2025 09:38
orchidee said:
I\'m in the \'habit\' of giving KP sewage for lunch daily! LOL.
June 5th, 2025 09:38
Habit or addiction
Damaso said:
I believe that if a social habit invades the privacy of your solitude, it becomes a problematic habit. On the other hand, I haven\'t seen my friends for a long time for this reason. Sometimes those confusing circles are worse than any kind of consumption. Thank you for sharing this text, a very important reflection for me. Regards.
June 5th, 2025 08:52
Damaso said:
I believe that if a social habit invades the privacy of your solitude, it becomes a problematic habit. On the other hand, I haven\'t seen my friends for a long time for this reason. Sometimes those confusing circles are worse than any kind of consumption. Thank you for sharing this text, a very important reflection for me. Regards.
June 5th, 2025 08:52
Habit or addiction
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable read and that list probably could of been endless, they both cover many things and will be different to each person, certainly makes you wonder
June 5th, 2025 04:42
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable read and that list probably could of been endless, they both cover many things and will be different to each person, certainly makes you wonder
June 5th, 2025 04:42
Habit or addiction
David Wakeling said:
so much controversy here. Wine coffee and cigars. Who can say for sure. Even the doctors can\'t agree on if alcohol is good for you or not. I guess the answer is \"moderation\". Too much of anything is probably bad.Certainly a thoughtful and well constructed poem.Had me smiling which I haven\'t done for years.
June 5th, 2025 04:11
David Wakeling said:
so much controversy here. Wine coffee and cigars. Who can say for sure. Even the doctors can\'t agree on if alcohol is good for you or not. I guess the answer is \"moderation\". Too much of anything is probably bad.Certainly a thoughtful and well constructed poem.Had me smiling which I haven\'t done for years.
June 5th, 2025 04:11
Birth, life, death
Goldfinch60 said:
Those reversals in life never stop soren but we do get to understand them in our lives.
Andy
June 5th, 2025 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Those reversals in life never stop soren but we do get to understand them in our lives.
Andy
June 5th, 2025 01:46
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