Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Slumbering light
Musdeenthoughts said:
Amazing flow! Beautiful expression of figures of speech!! This is Beautifully written
July 21st, 2025 11:36
Musdeenthoughts said:
Amazing flow! Beautiful expression of figures of speech!! This is Beautifully written
July 21st, 2025 11:36
What were they thinking?
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
lol 😂 enough said in those three letters. Happy Monday! Lol
July 21st, 2025 08:55
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
lol 😂 enough said in those three letters. Happy Monday! Lol
July 21st, 2025 08:55
Not too smart
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A powerful writer! Humorous and always a lesson in each write!
July 21st, 2025 08:53
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A powerful writer! Humorous and always a lesson in each write!
July 21st, 2025 08:53
Why me?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You wrote a poem with long, sharp fangs, Soren. My kind of poem! Each line flips the blame with precision…like watching denial unravel in real time. “Blame the hammer striking the thumb”—yeah. You don’t miss. Beautifully done. 🌹👏
July 21st, 2025 08:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You wrote a poem with long, sharp fangs, Soren. My kind of poem! Each line flips the blame with precision…like watching denial unravel in real time. “Blame the hammer striking the thumb”—yeah. You don’t miss. Beautifully done. 🌹👏
July 21st, 2025 08:33
Why me?
arqios said:
What a fierce cascade of inversion,“Why Me?” reads like a howl against moral misdirection and the failure to confront true culpability.
July 21st, 2025 08:00
arqios said:
What a fierce cascade of inversion,“Why Me?” reads like a howl against moral misdirection and the failure to confront true culpability.
July 21st, 2025 08:00
Why me?
Friendship said:
Well written, I firmly believe that we are all guilty of this; it is an intrinsic aspect of human behavior. We all engage in this behavior. I do not think that any single individual can be ruled out. Your poem \"Why Me!\" addresses the theme of misplaced blame and the human tendency to assign responsibility for our own suffering or failures to external forces rather than recognizing our own roles in these situations. It critiques the irrationality of blaming inanimate objects or the vulnerable for the consequences of our actions. The poet explores the idea of accountability and the absurdity of blaming others or inanimate objects for our own choices and outcomes. The imagery evokes violence, hardship, and the struggle for understanding in the face of suffering.
July 21st, 2025 06:42
Friendship said:
Well written, I firmly believe that we are all guilty of this; it is an intrinsic aspect of human behavior. We all engage in this behavior. I do not think that any single individual can be ruled out. Your poem \"Why Me!\" addresses the theme of misplaced blame and the human tendency to assign responsibility for our own suffering or failures to external forces rather than recognizing our own roles in these situations. It critiques the irrationality of blaming inanimate objects or the vulnerable for the consequences of our actions. The poet explores the idea of accountability and the absurdity of blaming others or inanimate objects for our own choices and outcomes. The imagery evokes violence, hardship, and the struggle for understanding in the face of suffering.
July 21st, 2025 06:42
Why me?
Poetic Licence said:
Looking for that escape goat to ease your own conscience, some find it easier to just blaming without looking for the real fault, often themselves, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 06:18
Poetic Licence said:
Looking for that escape goat to ease your own conscience, some find it easier to just blaming without looking for the real fault, often themselves, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 06:18
Why me?
Priya Tomar said:
Criticism of human tendency to externalise blame....
Baby crying.... society often faults most vulnerable or marginalised section....
Clever rhyming scheme....
Nice to read it....
July 21st, 2025 03:58
Priya Tomar said:
Criticism of human tendency to externalise blame....
Baby crying.... society often faults most vulnerable or marginalised section....
Clever rhyming scheme....
Nice to read it....
July 21st, 2025 03:58
Weak and strong
Friendship said:
Your poem embarks on a profound exploration of the transformative power of language and the art of poetry, illuminating the vital importance of vibrant, evocative words that resonate deeply with the reader on an emotional level. It masterfully juxtaposes weak and strong language, revealing how the potency of words can elevate the beauty and impact of poetry to unprecedented heights. The poem seeks to convey the intricate complexities and nuances inherent in the noble craft of writing poetry, inspiring both writers and readers to recognize the boundless power of words to evoke emotions, foster connections, and transcend boundaries.
July 20th, 2025 15:06
Friendship said:
Your poem embarks on a profound exploration of the transformative power of language and the art of poetry, illuminating the vital importance of vibrant, evocative words that resonate deeply with the reader on an emotional level. It masterfully juxtaposes weak and strong language, revealing how the potency of words can elevate the beauty and impact of poetry to unprecedented heights. The poem seeks to convey the intricate complexities and nuances inherent in the noble craft of writing poetry, inspiring both writers and readers to recognize the boundless power of words to evoke emotions, foster connections, and transcend boundaries.
July 20th, 2025 15:06
Weak and strong
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
I see you were busy in the kitchen with this one. Wonderful culinary analogies to enlighten and nourish one\'s understanding of the art(s) of poetry and to do so with a sprinkle of humour. More informative than any lecture - experience and love of the subject rings through. Excellent.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 20th, 2025 13:42
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
I see you were busy in the kitchen with this one. Wonderful culinary analogies to enlighten and nourish one\'s understanding of the art(s) of poetry and to do so with a sprinkle of humour. More informative than any lecture - experience and love of the subject rings through. Excellent.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 20th, 2025 13:42
Weak and strong
Bella Shepard said:
This is truly a master class in poetry, given by the master craftsman. Excellent!
July 20th, 2025 08:34
Bella Shepard said:
This is truly a master class in poetry, given by the master craftsman. Excellent!
July 20th, 2025 08:34
Weak and strong
Priya Tomar said:
Meta poem...
Lovely food metaphors
Fabric and threads suggest poetry is not just sponteneous but well constructed, meanings woven in........
Very nice .
July 20th, 2025 05:08
Priya Tomar said:
Meta poem...
Lovely food metaphors
Fabric and threads suggest poetry is not just sponteneous but well constructed, meanings woven in........
Very nice .
July 20th, 2025 05:08
Weak and strong
Poetic Licence said:
I don\'t think I have read a more creative or clever way of describing a recipe a poem, thoroughly enjoyed
July 20th, 2025 04:30
Poetic Licence said:
I don\'t think I have read a more creative or clever way of describing a recipe a poem, thoroughly enjoyed
July 20th, 2025 04:30
The tooth
Poetic Licence said:
I got a chill reading this, some homes I was in this happened or tying to a door and slamming, I felt all the pain as i read this, nicely expressed
July 19th, 2025 08:05
Poetic Licence said:
I got a chill reading this, some homes I was in this happened or tying to a door and slamming, I felt all the pain as i read this, nicely expressed
July 19th, 2025 08:05
The tooth
arqios said:
This poem hits like a blow to the jaw; visceral, darkly comic, and unapologetically graphic.
It swings from the brutality of a rusty nail to the absurdity of DIY dental surgery,
all while weaving in biblical allusion and a fierce sense of agency.
July 19th, 2025 07:19
arqios said:
This poem hits like a blow to the jaw; visceral, darkly comic, and unapologetically graphic.
It swings from the brutality of a rusty nail to the absurdity of DIY dental surgery,
all while weaving in biblical allusion and a fierce sense of agency.
July 19th, 2025 07:19
I love roses
jim56 said:
love this beautifully written
words are well chosen to express poem so well
nice flow nice to read jim
July 19th, 2025 06:05
jim56 said:
love this beautifully written
words are well chosen to express poem so well
nice flow nice to read jim
July 19th, 2025 06:05
The tooth
Priya Tomar said:
Witty poetry criticized health sector
It blends realism with sharp wit
Well worded....
July 19th, 2025 05:03
Priya Tomar said:
Witty poetry criticized health sector
It blends realism with sharp wit
Well worded....
July 19th, 2025 05:03
Lost art
nami said:
The theater is empty today, but my paint doesn\'t come off. The fire had sculpted me in a shape I\'ve never known. This was beautiful,Soren.
July 19th, 2025 03:03
nami said:
The theater is empty today, but my paint doesn\'t come off. The fire had sculpted me in a shape I\'ve never known. This was beautiful,Soren.
July 19th, 2025 03:03
Light of progress
Goldfinch60 said:
We are only free if we think outside the box and trust our own freedom soren.
Andy
July 19th, 2025 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
We are only free if we think outside the box and trust our own freedom soren.
Andy
July 19th, 2025 01:46
Redemption in deception
Princesslove said:
Lovely poem. I enjoyed reading
Thanks for sharing!!
July 18th, 2025 15:42
Princesslove said:
Lovely poem. I enjoyed reading
Thanks for sharing!!
July 18th, 2025 15:42
Light of progress
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
From the naked ape to the clothed obedient; unable to function without the pills of survival and the shackles of fake liberties in a plastic society. As powerful as it is excellent and brilliantly composed. Very well done indeed, my fine fellow.
Wishing you the very best,
Tony.
July 18th, 2025 14:05
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
From the naked ape to the clothed obedient; unable to function without the pills of survival and the shackles of fake liberties in a plastic society. As powerful as it is excellent and brilliantly composed. Very well done indeed, my fine fellow.
Wishing you the very best,
Tony.
July 18th, 2025 14:05
Light of progress
Lorenz said:
Are all our creations but vain companions of illusions ?
July 18th, 2025 09:40
Lorenz said:
Are all our creations but vain companions of illusions ?
July 18th, 2025 09:40
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