Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Have you ever
Goldfinch60 said:
Been there soren and love every moment of it, as I do your words.
Andy
September 20th, 2023 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Been there soren and love every moment of it, as I do your words.
Andy
September 20th, 2023 01:24
Have you ever
Teddy.15 said:
Hello dear poet I\'m not religious at all but I have to say what a beautiful poem. 💖 your imagery took me away into a whirlwind
September 19th, 2023 11:30
Teddy.15 said:
Hello dear poet I\'m not religious at all but I have to say what a beautiful poem. 💖 your imagery took me away into a whirlwind
September 19th, 2023 11:30
All living things
Goldfinch60 said:
May that light forge the people on this world into a loving place for ALL.
Andy
September 19th, 2023 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
May that light forge the people on this world into a loving place for ALL.
Andy
September 19th, 2023 00:46
All living things
Teddy.15 said:
What I see is an incredible amount of acceptance in being who we are being allowed to be who we are and being proud of who we are. Diversity is what makes for a very rich culture indeed. 💖
September 18th, 2023 14:42
Teddy.15 said:
What I see is an incredible amount of acceptance in being who we are being allowed to be who we are and being proud of who we are. Diversity is what makes for a very rich culture indeed. 💖
September 18th, 2023 14:42
All living things
Bella Shepard said:
As I read this beautiful poem I see in my minds eye the yin and yang, opposing forces complementing each other.
\"Life\'s energy reincarnated is our mother\", energy neither created nor destroyed, but eternal. This is mind bending, mind broading, mind blowing in the best possible way. Brilliant!
September 18th, 2023 13:15
Bella Shepard said:
As I read this beautiful poem I see in my minds eye the yin and yang, opposing forces complementing each other.
\"Life\'s energy reincarnated is our mother\", energy neither created nor destroyed, but eternal. This is mind bending, mind broading, mind blowing in the best possible way. Brilliant!
September 18th, 2023 13:15
A Work of the Heart
Pop64 said:
It can be so often that writes from the heart are discarded or dismissed by others, but that can only be due to their lack of understanding and greater need to feel. This poem, however, is so descriptive and detailed that it can be appreciated by all who\'ve suffered the loss of a heart written poem. Nicely penned!
September 18th, 2023 06:31
Pop64 said:
It can be so often that writes from the heart are discarded or dismissed by others, but that can only be due to their lack of understanding and greater need to feel. This poem, however, is so descriptive and detailed that it can be appreciated by all who\'ve suffered the loss of a heart written poem. Nicely penned!
September 18th, 2023 06:31
A Work of the Heart
L. B. Mek said:
some do Art
some live Art
some, utilise Art
we must use our Art, to release
our hurt
to rejoice our victories
to ink our life\'s most debilitating
catastrophes
I am so sorry for the pain
that inspired these words, treasured friend
\'stay\' strong!
September 18th, 2023 03:17
L. B. Mek said:
some do Art
some live Art
some, utilise Art
we must use our Art, to release
our hurt
to rejoice our victories
to ink our life\'s most debilitating
catastrophes
I am so sorry for the pain
that inspired these words, treasured friend
\'stay\' strong!
September 18th, 2023 03:17
A Work of the Heart
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is truly a work of the heart. The words are never lost, they beat on and new life rises often from the ashes left behind. Beautiful!
September 17th, 2023 10:04
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is truly a work of the heart. The words are never lost, they beat on and new life rises often from the ashes left behind. Beautiful!
September 17th, 2023 10:04
A Work of the Heart
Teddy.15 said:
Your title describes this poetry perfectly ❤️
September 17th, 2023 06:31
Teddy.15 said:
Your title describes this poetry perfectly ❤️
September 17th, 2023 06:31
Beyond Love
L. B. Mek said:
knocked it out of the park!
\'first swing\'
brilliant, yeah these is it here
\'Balance\'
we\'re all together in the fight...
(I bow to your superior talent)
\'was enamored by Li Qingzhao,
marveled over Xue Tao to no end
I have suffered Maya Angelou\'s painful loss,
felt the warning of Mary Shelly,
seen the love of Jane Austin,
lived the despair of Bronte\'
September 15th, 2023 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
knocked it out of the park!
\'first swing\'
brilliant, yeah these is it here
\'Balance\'
we\'re all together in the fight...
(I bow to your superior talent)
\'was enamored by Li Qingzhao,
marveled over Xue Tao to no end
I have suffered Maya Angelou\'s painful loss,
felt the warning of Mary Shelly,
seen the love of Jane Austin,
lived the despair of Bronte\'
September 15th, 2023 04:55
Three-Fourths Time
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant interpretation
Distilling the essence of this scene
while keeping to a rhythmic flow
of entwined heart\'s
embraced, in the dance of life
counting, to get that timing right
to insure they\'re forever, in-step
with each other\'s desires...
(this song still get me as well)
thank you oh wise Poet
(I read and learn)
September 15th, 2023 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant interpretation
Distilling the essence of this scene
while keeping to a rhythmic flow
of entwined heart\'s
embraced, in the dance of life
counting, to get that timing right
to insure they\'re forever, in-step
with each other\'s desires...
(this song still get me as well)
thank you oh wise Poet
(I read and learn)
September 15th, 2023 04:51
Beyond Love
Teddy.15 said:
challenge completed this is a masterpiece
I cannot choose a favourite part each line has its beauty and elegance and I could never argue the depth of a woman\'s love as I am one. Superb beauty throughout 💖
September 14th, 2023 15:51
Teddy.15 said:
challenge completed this is a masterpiece
I cannot choose a favourite part each line has its beauty and elegance and I could never argue the depth of a woman\'s love as I am one. Superb beauty throughout 💖
September 14th, 2023 15:51
Beyond Love
Bella Shepard said:
Parisab has said it perfectly, can\'t tamper with that. If you plumb the depths of a woman\'s love, it is as deep as the sea, and as expansive as the heavens. Thank you for this beautiful poem!
September 14th, 2023 14:41
Bella Shepard said:
Parisab has said it perfectly, can\'t tamper with that. If you plumb the depths of a woman\'s love, it is as deep as the sea, and as expansive as the heavens. Thank you for this beautiful poem!
September 14th, 2023 14:41
Beyond Love
Parisab said:
Reads like an intimate connection to many of women’s special works-I bet you there were many more who loved their work as a mother would their child but gained no traction or support for their art to be seen and be compensated-I bet that most of the ‘muses’ were probably artists and contributed to the ‘celebrated (mostly male) artists’ work-thanks for the write
September 14th, 2023 14:07
Parisab said:
Reads like an intimate connection to many of women’s special works-I bet you there were many more who loved their work as a mother would their child but gained no traction or support for their art to be seen and be compensated-I bet that most of the ‘muses’ were probably artists and contributed to the ‘celebrated (mostly male) artists’ work-thanks for the write
September 14th, 2023 14:07
Three-Fourths Time
Doggerel Dave said:
Experimental poetry?....well it felt experimental to a traditional plodder like me - and non the worse for that, Soren. Tripped through it lightly.
September 12th, 2023 19:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Experimental poetry?....well it felt experimental to a traditional plodder like me - and non the worse for that, Soren. Tripped through it lightly.
September 12th, 2023 19:07
Three-Fourths Time
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, kudos and it did in fact feel just like a waltz, and I\'d come back any day for a dance like this. 💖
September 12th, 2023 10:43
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, kudos and it did in fact feel just like a waltz, and I\'d come back any day for a dance like this. 💖
September 12th, 2023 10:43
All men
L. B. Mek said:
loved this, now
we must do one for those sisters
that were being marginalised
while these geniuses were thriving,
contrasted, side by side
Bronte\'s, Austen, Woolf, George Eliot, Toni Morrison, Maya, Harper Lee, Louisa Alcott
etc
September 11th, 2023 02:35
L. B. Mek said:
loved this, now
we must do one for those sisters
that were being marginalised
while these geniuses were thriving,
contrasted, side by side
Bronte\'s, Austen, Woolf, George Eliot, Toni Morrison, Maya, Harper Lee, Louisa Alcott
etc
September 11th, 2023 02:35
Equal opportunity yes, affirmative action no
L. B. Mek said:
the irony
in assuming, \'some\'
need policy to help them achieve
you\'re inadvertently stating
they can\'t do it otherwise
so instead of creating a society
with equal playing fields
\'they\'
rather stay on their inherited hills
look down and offer a rope
to those they deem lesser
and think of themselves as heroes
...
vanity, I name thee charity...
September 11th, 2023 02:27
L. B. Mek said:
the irony
in assuming, \'some\'
need policy to help them achieve
you\'re inadvertently stating
they can\'t do it otherwise
so instead of creating a society
with equal playing fields
\'they\'
rather stay on their inherited hills
look down and offer a rope
to those they deem lesser
and think of themselves as heroes
...
vanity, I name thee charity...
September 11th, 2023 02:27
All men
Bobby O said:
This is really great. Not as critique but as proof of inspiration from your phrase and form. The power on that page could also fit in a cause and effect format, extracting and displaying the tangible quality of each reference.
Ie; …, lived in Woods of Thoreau learned natures beauty and absorbed some of its wonder and helped me grow ..,
That’s corny but you get the point. Tiny bits of impactful info validates and separates with evidence of greatness
September 10th, 2023 22:51
Bobby O said:
This is really great. Not as critique but as proof of inspiration from your phrase and form. The power on that page could also fit in a cause and effect format, extracting and displaying the tangible quality of each reference.
Ie; …, lived in Woods of Thoreau learned natures beauty and absorbed some of its wonder and helped me grow ..,
That’s corny but you get the point. Tiny bits of impactful info validates and separates with evidence of greatness
September 10th, 2023 22:51
Equal opportunity yes, affirmative action no
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, we are all unique and have our own path to walk in our lives.
Andy
September 10th, 2023 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, we are all unique and have our own path to walk in our lives.
Andy
September 10th, 2023 02:00
Equal opportunity yes, affirmative action no
Bella Shepard said:
Point of view well taken, and very well expressed. How to achieve equality that suits everyone will always be a struggle.
September 9th, 2023 14:35
Bella Shepard said:
Point of view well taken, and very well expressed. How to achieve equality that suits everyone will always be a struggle.
September 9th, 2023 14:35
Equal opportunity yes, affirmative action no
Doggerel Dave said:
This is a hard one to respond to Soren. Are you sure that equal opportunity exists? If not, how would you achieve it?
Neat poem executed with your customary skill, but I’m not sure the argument addresses the problem..
September 9th, 2023 07:44
Doggerel Dave said:
This is a hard one to respond to Soren. Are you sure that equal opportunity exists? If not, how would you achieve it?
Neat poem executed with your customary skill, but I’m not sure the argument addresses the problem..
September 9th, 2023 07:44
Equal opportunity yes, affirmative action no
Teddy.15 said:
I most enjoy being unique, as you make such a brilliant point we are all very different and it\'s better to be, your ebola stew made me chuckle, so to an excellent point, your last stanza so very powerful and thought provoking as a mother it sparked fear. Excellent read excellent subject. 💖
September 9th, 2023 07:15
Teddy.15 said:
I most enjoy being unique, as you make such a brilliant point we are all very different and it\'s better to be, your ebola stew made me chuckle, so to an excellent point, your last stanza so very powerful and thought provoking as a mother it sparked fear. Excellent read excellent subject. 💖
September 9th, 2023 07:15
Always
Pop64 said:
as well without the writer, there would be no reader, no viewer, no interpreter. This, however, needs no interpretation as it is quite clear in its imagery with the truth of the ying and yang. Nicely penned!
September 8th, 2023 07:22
Pop64 said:
as well without the writer, there would be no reader, no viewer, no interpreter. This, however, needs no interpretation as it is quite clear in its imagery with the truth of the ying and yang. Nicely penned!
September 8th, 2023 07:22
Abject terror
L. B. Mek said:
rich in iconic imagery
reads like a serenade
to the scenic passages
in our poetic realities..
\'Piercing crystal slivers of frigid fear, puncture a barren plain of sterile white\'
we truth scribblers
ink, with emotionality\'s
shaky fingers
September 8th, 2023 03:40
L. B. Mek said:
rich in iconic imagery
reads like a serenade
to the scenic passages
in our poetic realities..
\'Piercing crystal slivers of frigid fear, puncture a barren plain of sterile white\'
we truth scribblers
ink, with emotionality\'s
shaky fingers
September 8th, 2023 03:40
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