Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Time eroded memories
gray0328 said:
speaks to the fleeting nature of memories and how they shape our identity. Well Done Soren
August 12th, 2024 11:51
gray0328 said:
speaks to the fleeting nature of memories and how they shape our identity. Well Done Soren
August 12th, 2024 11:51
Time eroded memories
MendedFences27 said:
Do as we all do, embellish. Those \"Time Eroded Memories\" can be expanded and cleaned up and converted to poetry. Your poem states the truth and is therefore poetic. Loved it. - Phil A.
August 12th, 2024 10:59
MendedFences27 said:
Do as we all do, embellish. Those \"Time Eroded Memories\" can be expanded and cleaned up and converted to poetry. Your poem states the truth and is therefore poetic. Loved it. - Phil A.
August 12th, 2024 10:59
Time eroded memories
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
You have summarized life in a few words. Beautiful, well done.
August 12th, 2024 09:53
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
You have summarized life in a few words. Beautiful, well done.
August 12th, 2024 09:53
Point of view
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Soren. Works on so many levels. Thanks for sharing.
August 12th, 2024 06:33
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Soren. Works on so many levels. Thanks for sharing.
August 12th, 2024 06:33
Time eroded memories
Teddy.15 said:
You have captured the very essence of this poem in the title, beautifully done 🌹
August 12th, 2024 04:57
Teddy.15 said:
You have captured the very essence of this poem in the title, beautifully done 🌹
August 12th, 2024 04:57
Point of view
Neville said:
the interpretation of stimulus as deemed by the senses past present and future ..
the above definition has remained with me ever since our first lectures on the subject of perception many many many years ago .. and boy, have you just reinforced that here .. you are absolutely right and the rule is, it applies to absolutely everything and everyone .. the topic features large in my would be novel (A Certain Point of Beauty) ..
A splendid offering today sorenbarrett .. 100/100 at least ..
Neville
August 12th, 2024 01:23
Neville said:
the interpretation of stimulus as deemed by the senses past present and future ..
the above definition has remained with me ever since our first lectures on the subject of perception many many many years ago .. and boy, have you just reinforced that here .. you are absolutely right and the rule is, it applies to absolutely everything and everyone .. the topic features large in my would be novel (A Certain Point of Beauty) ..
A splendid offering today sorenbarrett .. 100/100 at least ..
Neville
August 12th, 2024 01:23
Point of view
Dan Williams said:
You are the master of the short and sweet, when you are not looking I just might steal that mud line. Borrow?
August 12th, 2024 00:21
Dan Williams said:
You are the master of the short and sweet, when you are not looking I just might steal that mud line. Borrow?
August 12th, 2024 00:21
Point of view
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning,
very evocative and
skillfully expressed! 👍
Poetic perfection
just resonates throughout
each line, way to go!! 😃
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 11th, 2024 22:28
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning,
very evocative and
skillfully expressed! 👍
Poetic perfection
just resonates throughout
each line, way to go!! 😃
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 11th, 2024 22:28
Point of view
Mase ♪ said:
Powerful yet beautiful poem Soren, Love your writes!
August 11th, 2024 20:29
Mase ♪ said:
Powerful yet beautiful poem Soren, Love your writes!
August 11th, 2024 20:29
Point of view
MendedFences27 said:
No two people see the same thing exactly the same.
Your poem on perception shows this
exactly. - Phil A.
August 11th, 2024 18:13
MendedFences27 said:
No two people see the same thing exactly the same.
Your poem on perception shows this
exactly. - Phil A.
August 11th, 2024 18:13
Point of view
Bobby O said:
So much wisdom here, but that’s not enough to say. (Don’t wince) the yin Yang thing can be trite in lesser hands but not here. A comparison might be on observation of a group in unison performing Tai Chi , it would be trite to notice moves in common and generalize but that may be the greatest disservice to self., a limit that reflex adopts then births that overly proud and boisterousn explanation as the ego of some needs a place to go , never recognizing these built their own corral and will insist they didn’t.
That is a world of the yin Yang (trite).
If allowed to seep and steep the minuscule detailsnd beauty of Nuance dances in and performs and adds splendor as that Tai Chi master with control and precision snf timing and urgency to improve is separate and a Joy to own., much like it was for me as I read your piece. Thanks for listening.
August 11th, 2024 11:42
Bobby O said:
So much wisdom here, but that’s not enough to say. (Don’t wince) the yin Yang thing can be trite in lesser hands but not here. A comparison might be on observation of a group in unison performing Tai Chi , it would be trite to notice moves in common and generalize but that may be the greatest disservice to self., a limit that reflex adopts then births that overly proud and boisterousn explanation as the ego of some needs a place to go , never recognizing these built their own corral and will insist they didn’t.
That is a world of the yin Yang (trite).
If allowed to seep and steep the minuscule detailsnd beauty of Nuance dances in and performs and adds splendor as that Tai Chi master with control and precision snf timing and urgency to improve is separate and a Joy to own., much like it was for me as I read your piece. Thanks for listening.
August 11th, 2024 11:42
Point of view
Bobby O said:
So much wisdom here, but that’s not enough to say. (Don’t wince) the yin Yang thing can be trite in lesser hands but not here. A comparison might be on observation of a group in unison performing Tai Chi , it would be trite to notice moves in common and generalize but that may be the greatest disservice to self., a limit that reflex adopts then births that overly proud and boisterousn explanation as the ego of some needs a place to go , never recognizing these built their own corral and will insist they didn’t.
That is a world of the yin Yang (trite).
If allowed to seep and steep the minuscule detailsnd beauty of Nuance dances in and performs and adds splendor as that Tai Chi master with control and precision snf timing and urgency to improve is separate and a Joy to own., much like it was for me as I read your piece. Thanks for listening.
August 11th, 2024 11:42
Bobby O said:
So much wisdom here, but that’s not enough to say. (Don’t wince) the yin Yang thing can be trite in lesser hands but not here. A comparison might be on observation of a group in unison performing Tai Chi , it would be trite to notice moves in common and generalize but that may be the greatest disservice to self., a limit that reflex adopts then births that overly proud and boisterousn explanation as the ego of some needs a place to go , never recognizing these built their own corral and will insist they didn’t.
That is a world of the yin Yang (trite).
If allowed to seep and steep the minuscule detailsnd beauty of Nuance dances in and performs and adds splendor as that Tai Chi master with control and precision snf timing and urgency to improve is separate and a Joy to own., much like it was for me as I read your piece. Thanks for listening.
August 11th, 2024 11:42
Point of view
orchidee said:
Yes - and also:
KP - Mrs Botox to me; some sort of \'superstar\' to others! lol.
August 11th, 2024 09:37
orchidee said:
Yes - and also:
KP - Mrs Botox to me; some sort of \'superstar\' to others! lol.
August 11th, 2024 09:37
Darker than black
aDarkerMind said:
a pain I know only too well Soren.
a very impressive write
and I enjoyed every word.
August 11th, 2024 08:36
aDarkerMind said:
a pain I know only too well Soren.
a very impressive write
and I enjoyed every word.
August 11th, 2024 08:36
Point of view
Teddy.15 said:
How very true we all see what we want to through our eyes indeed we all have our own point of view. Nicely done my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
August 11th, 2024 07:44
Teddy.15 said:
How very true we all see what we want to through our eyes indeed we all have our own point of view. Nicely done my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
August 11th, 2024 07:44
Point of view
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, precisely Soren. Perception is never neutral, always dependent on POV (Point Of View).Again, neatly poetical, concise.
August 11th, 2024 06:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, precisely Soren. Perception is never neutral, always dependent on POV (Point Of View).Again, neatly poetical, concise.
August 11th, 2024 06:50
Darker than black
Cassie58 said:
A poem of deep loss. Dreams can bring a short lived comfort until reality punches in with the morning light. So poetically expressed and felt deeply. Lovely work.
August 11th, 2024 03:23
Cassie58 said:
A poem of deep loss. Dreams can bring a short lived comfort until reality punches in with the morning light. So poetically expressed and felt deeply. Lovely work.
August 11th, 2024 03:23
Darker than black
Dan Williams said:
I really like the way you use the minimum of words to get your mood across. My dreams don\'t always dissolve. Nice.
August 11th, 2024 00:00
Dan Williams said:
I really like the way you use the minimum of words to get your mood across. My dreams don\'t always dissolve. Nice.
August 11th, 2024 00:00
Darker than black
Thad Wilk said:
A very poignant 😢
and emotional write!!
Loss can become
most unbearable
In the night!
Eloquently penned
my friend! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 10th, 2024 17:18
Thad Wilk said:
A very poignant 😢
and emotional write!!
Loss can become
most unbearable
In the night!
Eloquently penned
my friend! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 10th, 2024 17:18
Funny Weed
HolesInMyJeans said:
I don’t know where you are but if you ever want to light one up, message me.
August 10th, 2024 16:52
HolesInMyJeans said:
I don’t know where you are but if you ever want to light one up, message me.
August 10th, 2024 16:52
Darker than black
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna play a game with KP now.
Toss a coin 100 times. She guesses heads every time; I guess tails every time.
I will win every time. She doesn\'t know the coin has two tails! heehee.
August 10th, 2024 12:14
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna play a game with KP now.
Toss a coin 100 times. She guesses heads every time; I guess tails every time.
I will win every time. She doesn\'t know the coin has two tails! heehee.
August 10th, 2024 12:14
Darker than black
Bella Shepard said:
The pain of unbearable loss is so tangible in your words, finding comfort only in the unconscious state of dreams. Unbeliveably sad, and yearning for what will never be.
Wonderfully versed my friend.
August 10th, 2024 10:02
Bella Shepard said:
The pain of unbearable loss is so tangible in your words, finding comfort only in the unconscious state of dreams. Unbeliveably sad, and yearning for what will never be.
Wonderfully versed my friend.
August 10th, 2024 10:02
Darker than black
Neville said:
this is like breaking bad but only a damned sight better .. and I loved breaking bad .. write on sb .. Neville
August 10th, 2024 08:07
Neville said:
this is like breaking bad but only a damned sight better .. and I loved breaking bad .. write on sb .. Neville
August 10th, 2024 08:07
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