Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Sleep on
Salvia.S said:
Love the raw honesty and clever wordplay in this poem!
April 28th, 2025 06:48
Salvia.S said:
Love the raw honesty and clever wordplay in this poem!
April 28th, 2025 06:48
Sleep on
David Wakeling said:
i know the feelings expressed here.Very relatable.Well done mi amigo
April 28th, 2025 05:02
David Wakeling said:
i know the feelings expressed here.Very relatable.Well done mi amigo
April 28th, 2025 05:02
Sleep on
arqios said:
The blood vessels doing shadow dances in translucence🙏🏻🕊️
April 28th, 2025 04:54
arqios said:
The blood vessels doing shadow dances in translucence🙏🏻🕊️
April 28th, 2025 04:54
Sleep on
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Any spare sewage for KP\'s dinner? lol.
April 28th, 2025 03:55
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Any spare sewage for KP\'s dinner? lol.
April 28th, 2025 03:55
Sleep on
RSM0812 said:
It\'s like the lemonade is a medicine. However too much of a good thing is bad.
April 28th, 2025 03:49
RSM0812 said:
It\'s like the lemonade is a medicine. However too much of a good thing is bad.
April 28th, 2025 03:49
Sleep on
Lorenz said:
A popular french expression to designate an unpleasant situation : \'\' C\'est une mauvaise limonade ! \'\' (Its a bad lemonade ! )
April 28th, 2025 03:49
Lorenz said:
A popular french expression to designate an unpleasant situation : \'\' C\'est une mauvaise limonade ! \'\' (Its a bad lemonade ! )
April 28th, 2025 03:49
Sleep on
Teddy.15 said:
Lemonade is delicious and so is the fighting spirit within this, take what comes and ride with it. 🌹
April 28th, 2025 03:41
Teddy.15 said:
Lemonade is delicious and so is the fighting spirit within this, take what comes and ride with it. 🌹
April 28th, 2025 03:41
Good taste
Doggerel Dave said:
Famous Last Words there for all to digest. The rhyme the seasoning.
April 28th, 2025 00:04
Doggerel Dave said:
Famous Last Words there for all to digest. The rhyme the seasoning.
April 28th, 2025 00:04
Fallen sand
NafisaSB said:
so romantic, and so touching, and so many truths of life laid bare here
fantastic
April 27th, 2025 23:54
NafisaSB said:
so romantic, and so touching, and so many truths of life laid bare here
fantastic
April 27th, 2025 23:54
Good taste
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Humorous this time! Very good! I like the switch up.
April 27th, 2025 13:00
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Humorous this time! Very good! I like the switch up.
April 27th, 2025 13:00
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hzugman said:
The unsaid powerfully spoken. Good read. Innovative! A mind at rest is the quickest route to your inner self.
April 27th, 2025 12:49
hzugman said:
The unsaid powerfully spoken. Good read. Innovative! A mind at rest is the quickest route to your inner self.
April 27th, 2025 12:49
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orchidee said:
Here\'s an extended version of your poem: ............................ LOL.
April 27th, 2025 11:56
orchidee said:
Here\'s an extended version of your poem: ............................ LOL.
April 27th, 2025 11:56
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Tony Grannell said:
Yes, much shorter than, Nashe\'s, Adam/Had\'em. You could actually title this poem: On Maleviche\'s \'Black Square\'. Both pieces have a zillion interpretations and are very alike. When I beheld the, \'.\' the word, \'now\' came to mind. A perfect poem, to baffle any critic. Very well done.
All the best,
Tony.
April 27th, 2025 11:01
Tony Grannell said:
Yes, much shorter than, Nashe\'s, Adam/Had\'em. You could actually title this poem: On Maleviche\'s \'Black Square\'. Both pieces have a zillion interpretations and are very alike. When I beheld the, \'.\' the word, \'now\' came to mind. A perfect poem, to baffle any critic. Very well done.
All the best,
Tony.
April 27th, 2025 11:01
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, if the note doesn\'t count (and it doesn\'t in my book), this IS the shortest poem ever written without a doubt. And yet in the space around the period, so much is said. Brilliantly expressed, my friend. This is far more brilliant than a damn banana duct taped to a wall, that is for sure! And, at least you don\'t have to keep replacing it. 🤣 All jokes aside, the period alone can mean so much...let alone the white space around it. Again. blown away. 🌹👏
April 27th, 2025 07:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, if the note doesn\'t count (and it doesn\'t in my book), this IS the shortest poem ever written without a doubt. And yet in the space around the period, so much is said. Brilliantly expressed, my friend. This is far more brilliant than a damn banana duct taped to a wall, that is for sure! And, at least you don\'t have to keep replacing it. 🤣 All jokes aside, the period alone can mean so much...let alone the white space around it. Again. blown away. 🌹👏
April 27th, 2025 07:48
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Salvia.S said:
Your poem is profound in its simplicity. The dot (.) symbolizes completion, yet also emptiness, sparking thought on existence and meaning. Beautiful!! Loved it!!
April 27th, 2025 07:03
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is profound in its simplicity. The dot (.) symbolizes completion, yet also emptiness, sparking thought on existence and meaning. Beautiful!! Loved it!!
April 27th, 2025 07:03
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Doggerel Dave said:
Wot can one do with that? Only response is to endeavour to be as short as the poem... Or as that well known small furry animal poeticus orchidus might have ...and so on....
April 27th, 2025 06:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot can one do with that? Only response is to endeavour to be as short as the poem... Or as that well known small furry animal poeticus orchidus might have ...and so on....
April 27th, 2025 06:21
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Jerry Reynolds said:
Stunning, SB. You could end it at this point. But I hope you won\'t.
April 27th, 2025 06:20
Jerry Reynolds said:
Stunning, SB. You could end it at this point. But I hope you won\'t.
April 27th, 2025 06:20
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Teddy.15 said:
Most profound dear sorrenbarret as always you are incredibly inspiring. A true earth poet. 🌹
April 27th, 2025 03:51
Teddy.15 said:
Most profound dear sorrenbarret as always you are incredibly inspiring. A true earth poet. 🌹
April 27th, 2025 03:51
Within a hair
sunshine777 said:
The hair is dead yet it grows. Life must go on. Great write!!
April 26th, 2025 17:16
sunshine777 said:
The hair is dead yet it grows. Life must go on. Great write!!
April 26th, 2025 17:16
Good taste
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem. Loved the humor in it. The shark gets a meal and a floss. 🤣 It flowed very nicely when read aloud, my friend. 🌹👏
April 26th, 2025 12:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem. Loved the humor in it. The shark gets a meal and a floss. 🤣 It flowed very nicely when read aloud, my friend. 🌹👏
April 26th, 2025 12:37
Good taste
Jerry Reynolds said:
That is so good, SB. I am still laughing from the first 19 words to now. I almost spilled my coffee.
April 26th, 2025 07:55
Jerry Reynolds said:
That is so good, SB. I am still laughing from the first 19 words to now. I almost spilled my coffee.
April 26th, 2025 07:55
Good taste
isa kemmy said:
I like ur neighbours ignorance,sometimes u know facts in life still u lie to urself to console the mind ,the shark did get him,
April 26th, 2025 07:26
isa kemmy said:
I like ur neighbours ignorance,sometimes u know facts in life still u lie to urself to console the mind ,the shark did get him,
April 26th, 2025 07:26
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