Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
My Friend
David Wakeling said:
This is a great description of an excentric partner.Very well constructed and excellent cadence.It read very well.Sadly it didn\'t last.Great fun poem
June 18th, 2025 04:28
David Wakeling said:
This is a great description of an excentric partner.Very well constructed and excellent cadence.It read very well.Sadly it didn\'t last.Great fun poem
June 18th, 2025 04:28
What a man is
Tom Dylan said:
A fine, thought-provoking piece, Soren. Nicely done.
June 18th, 2025 04:18
Tom Dylan said:
A fine, thought-provoking piece, Soren. Nicely done.
June 18th, 2025 04:18
What a man is
Goldfinch60 said:
It can happen if people respect what they promised soren.
Andy
June 18th, 2025 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
It can happen if people respect what they promised soren.
Andy
June 18th, 2025 02:16
What a man is
Teddy.15 said:
A Gentleman\'s promise. This is gorgeous and with such a message of strength and acceptance, things don\'t always go the way we want, it\'s how we deal with the cards we are dealt that counts 🌹
June 17th, 2025 13:32
Teddy.15 said:
A Gentleman\'s promise. This is gorgeous and with such a message of strength and acceptance, things don\'t always go the way we want, it\'s how we deal with the cards we are dealt that counts 🌹
June 17th, 2025 13:32
What a man is
Damaso said:
Beautiful, my friend! A beautiful utopia. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
June 17th, 2025 08:46
Damaso said:
Beautiful, my friend! A beautiful utopia. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
June 17th, 2025 08:46
What a man is
Tristan Robert Lange said:
INTEGRITY. That is what this poem is about. And too few people have it any more. Excellent job, my friend! 🌹👏
June 17th, 2025 08:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
INTEGRITY. That is what this poem is about. And too few people have it any more. Excellent job, my friend! 🌹👏
June 17th, 2025 08:16
What a man is
Mutley Ravishes said:
I recall reading about David Thompson (Welsh explorer of Canada), who after having spent years in the wilderness with fellow explorers and Native peoples, returned to the city. He had made some money trading and lent the money to various city folks who asked for loans. In the wilderness, a man\'s word was sacred. Not so in the city. He was left destitute.
June 17th, 2025 05:58
Mutley Ravishes said:
I recall reading about David Thompson (Welsh explorer of Canada), who after having spent years in the wilderness with fellow explorers and Native peoples, returned to the city. He had made some money trading and lent the money to various city folks who asked for loans. In the wilderness, a man\'s word was sacred. Not so in the city. He was left destitute.
June 17th, 2025 05:58
What a man is
Poetic Licence said:
A refreshing reminder of how things used to be, your word was everything, enjoyed the read
June 17th, 2025 05:19
Poetic Licence said:
A refreshing reminder of how things used to be, your word was everything, enjoyed the read
June 17th, 2025 05:19
What a man is
Doggerel Dave said:
Well at least one man somewhere........ You definitely have a way with words, Soren.....
June 17th, 2025 04:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Well at least one man somewhere........ You definitely have a way with words, Soren.....
June 17th, 2025 04:29
What a man is
David Wakeling said:
Yes indeed all he can be is bound up in his honesty and trust of his word. A powerful thoughtful poem
June 17th, 2025 04:18
David Wakeling said:
Yes indeed all he can be is bound up in his honesty and trust of his word. A powerful thoughtful poem
June 17th, 2025 04:18
Frigid conversation
Goldfinch60 said:
I life today soren there are so many questions that are answered with different answers, what can we believe in this world.
Andy
June 17th, 2025 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
I life today soren there are so many questions that are answered with different answers, what can we believe in this world.
Andy
June 17th, 2025 01:05
Junk
NafisaSB said:
even what seems like junk has given way to a beautiful poem, and hope.
all the best
June 16th, 2025 23:32
NafisaSB said:
even what seems like junk has given way to a beautiful poem, and hope.
all the best
June 16th, 2025 23:32
Frigid conversation
teardrop said:
My reply got deleted. I read this 3 times. Excellent write!
June 16th, 2025 23:30
teardrop said:
My reply got deleted. I read this 3 times. Excellent write!
June 16th, 2025 23:30
Frigid conversation
arqios said:
A resonating poem wherein Silence does not mean absence, and despair does not mean permanence. We are still here, and that means something. And even in the coldest moments, warmth is never truly beyond reach. We are not alone in this.🙏🏻🕊️
June 16th, 2025 20:33
arqios said:
A resonating poem wherein Silence does not mean absence, and despair does not mean permanence. We are still here, and that means something. And even in the coldest moments, warmth is never truly beyond reach. We are not alone in this.🙏🏻🕊️
June 16th, 2025 20:33
Frigid conversation
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Haunting and vivid—your imagery chills to the bone. A masterpiece of despair, beautifully bleak.
June 16th, 2025 20:15
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Haunting and vivid—your imagery chills to the bone. A masterpiece of despair, beautifully bleak.
June 16th, 2025 20:15
Frigid conversation
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I of course don\'t get many of the cryptic meanings! lol.
June 16th, 2025 11:12
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I of course don\'t get many of the cryptic meanings! lol.
June 16th, 2025 11:12
Frigid conversation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful, my dear friend. This poem punches in all the right ways. I know of what it speaks and its message works on multiple levels. Profound poetic truth. Well done, Soren! 🌹👏
June 16th, 2025 06:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful, my dear friend. This poem punches in all the right ways. I know of what it speaks and its message works on multiple levels. Profound poetic truth. Well done, Soren! 🌹👏
June 16th, 2025 06:53
Frigid conversation
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of impending doom and death, question being do we go quietly or do we try to change it, enjoyed the read
June 16th, 2025 04:49
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of impending doom and death, question being do we go quietly or do we try to change it, enjoyed the read
June 16th, 2025 04:49
Frigid conversation
David Wakeling said:
A very powerful poem. For me it represents the inevitabilty of Death and we are all on death row. Wonderful poem
June 16th, 2025 04:13
David Wakeling said:
A very powerful poem. For me it represents the inevitabilty of Death and we are all on death row. Wonderful poem
June 16th, 2025 04:13
Frigid conversation
Lorenz said:
Inspiring conversation for a frigid climate of nothingness ...
June 16th, 2025 03:28
Lorenz said:
Inspiring conversation for a frigid climate of nothingness ...
June 16th, 2025 03:28
Frigid conversation
Teddy.15 said:
For your imagery alone this is a kudos but speaks so loudly in this new dawn of weirdness of our world today. Brilliant on so many levels. 🌹
June 16th, 2025 03:24
Teddy.15 said:
For your imagery alone this is a kudos but speaks so loudly in this new dawn of weirdness of our world today. Brilliant on so many levels. 🌹
June 16th, 2025 03:24
Father
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
\'If any question why he died. Tell them, because our fathers lied.\' Kipling. Your poem reminds me of Kipling, how he sought favour for his son to go to war and as a consequence never to return. This one really provokes the mind, so, too, the soul. A profoundly powerful verse and perfectly composed. The poem should be awarded accolades galore and its author lionised. Happy Father\'s Day and may you have many more.
Kind regards,
Tony.
June 15th, 2025 11:53
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
\'If any question why he died. Tell them, because our fathers lied.\' Kipling. Your poem reminds me of Kipling, how he sought favour for his son to go to war and as a consequence never to return. This one really provokes the mind, so, too, the soul. A profoundly powerful verse and perfectly composed. The poem should be awarded accolades galore and its author lionised. Happy Father\'s Day and may you have many more.
Kind regards,
Tony.
June 15th, 2025 11:53
Father
orchidee said:
Not to be facetious, but yes, He did send His Son down to the \'parish\' to save us - should be \'perish\'. Oops!
June 15th, 2025 10:21
orchidee said:
Not to be facetious, but yes, He did send His Son down to the \'parish\' to save us - should be \'perish\'. Oops!
June 15th, 2025 10:21
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