Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Inflation def. noun- blowing up the economy
John Prophet said:

So true. Sad. Well said.

December 19th, 2024 21:01

The fly
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:

its a good write Soren, buzzzzz

December 19th, 2024 19:55

Inflation def. noun- blowing up the economy
Doggerel Dave said:

False modesty, Soren. Clear picture there (and also truthful).
Pop out as much poor quality poetry as you like - I\'ll understand that.

December 19th, 2024 17:31

Call of the earth
Kerry said:

My goodness. If anyone with dementia, even early onset can remain as proficient as as you are, hats off. But, really hope this poem is not your case

December 19th, 2024 16:52

Inflation def. noun- blowing up the economy
Neville said:



I never signed up for this .. and that\'s a fact, but they don\'t care, do they .. not hardly a single one of em .. 👍🐧

December 19th, 2024 13:08

Inflation def. noun- blowing up the economy
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Taking the bull by the horn - I don\'t know any better illustration of the phrase than the poem.

December 19th, 2024 11:02

Inflation def. noun- blowing up the economy
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 19th, 2024 10:28

Inflation def. noun- blowing up the economy
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I love how you intentionally had the form (or quality) of the poem match the crappiness of today\'s political bullshit. Brilliant my friend, and I am sure you agree with me on this...but I get really sick of what \"they\" say. Who are \"they\" anyway? And yet they make self-serving decisions that affect the rest of us. Anywho...enough of \"them\"...your poem, friend, is so very wonderfully done! 🌹👏

December 19th, 2024 08:10

The fly
Tom Dylan said:

Just brilliant. Loved it. The lines flowed so well.

December 19th, 2024 05:09

Inflation def. noun- blowing up the economy
arqios said:

They got it the wrong way around and gradually they’re bringing us back to the Middle Ages.

December 19th, 2024 04:12

Inflation def. noun- blowing up the economy
Teddy.15 said:

I\'m not a fan of today\'s world, how very poetically said dear sorrenbarret 🌹

December 19th, 2024 04:10

The fly
Goldfinch60 said:

Flies can be a right pain sometimes soren.

Andy

December 19th, 2024 02:45

The fly
Dan Williams said:

I so love the rehearsed confusion line. As usual close your observations have let you produce valid explanations in verse for what we mostly already know. Bravo.

December 19th, 2024 02:02

The fly
NinjaGirl said:

I like it--definitely makes me a little uneasy, but so does the person, so it was a beautiful metaphor!

December 18th, 2024 20:53

The fly
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow…excellent running metaphor that makes me want to sing, “shoo fly…” 😂 Well done, my friend! 🌹👏 Seriously rich, and creepy, imagery!

December 18th, 2024 18:01

The fly
Thad Wilk said:

I guess the fly
has a meaning in life,
but I haven\'t figured
out yet what it is¿? 🤔
Awesome write!
Great use of metaphor
and creepy good imagery!!
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

December 18th, 2024 17:18

The fly
Doggerel Dave said:

Sorry to be a fly in the ointment (ho ho ho) but I do think they should get an honourable mention for the pollination they do...irritating health hazard they may be...
A rich write, Soren.


December 18th, 2024 17:01

The fly
Ellen Marsell said:

A confused fly, repeating its disorderly choreography over and over... the perfect image of this chaotic creature.

December 18th, 2024 15:45

The fly
Poetic Licence said:

A really enjoyable read about one of life`s real pains, and i love the last line, great read.

December 18th, 2024 14:16

The fly
Cassie58 said:

Waiter there’s a fly in my soup.
Don’t worry, it won’t eat much.

Flies are a nuisance but they make for great metaphors. Also many jokes. Even flies have a purpose in life. Well penned Soren.

December 18th, 2024 10:57

The fly
Lorenz said:

Lord of flies .William Golden .1954.

December 18th, 2024 09:18

Call of the earth
NafisaSB said:

comes to all of us, my friend, that\'s for sure


December 18th, 2024 07:22

Words of the prophets
NafisaSB said:

it is true that lots of prophecy, dark humor, profound or obscene messages are to be found on the walls of public toilets - some are good as written in a state when the truth spouts forth without control, while some best left unread

December 18th, 2024 07:11

The fly
Teddy.15 said:

There is certainly always something to spoil the soup, your imagery and metaphor superb 🌹

December 18th, 2024 06:00

The fly
Melancholic~Onion said:

These are the type I enjoy, indie you-never-know-what-to-expect works. They\'re my favourite so far. And I like the fact that its about a fly.

December 18th, 2024 03:52

The fly
arqios said:

Ah! Now that is a scary metaphor, it’s thousand googly eyes to boot!

December 18th, 2024 03:47

The fly
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

December 18th, 2024 03:34

Call of the earth
Goldfinch60 said:

I do hope you are not suffering from dementia soren, my wife had it and I know all about it, she passed five years ago with dementia.

Andy

December 18th, 2024 02:49

Call of the earth
Neville said:


I have thought about it long and hard and now conclude there is no way you could have chosen a more apt title to front a topic that if we take enough breaths will have a vast impact on us all .. I have never been afraid of dying or of my own departure, but I am not keen on this getting old malarky .. the losses seem to occur back on back & with increasing ferociousness .. I still have my hair and a few marbles but still feel like a casualty .. I am not in the least bit surprised by the number of folk ho rate these words of yours so highly my friend .. and believe me, I do too .. Neville 👍👍

December 18th, 2024 01:28

Call of the earth
Dan Williams said:

It\'s nice to find someone as depressed and disappointed as I am. Finding things to counter this mood get harder and harder to find. \"Now winter\'s cold is coming\".

December 18th, 2024 00:51



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