Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Age
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Goldfinch and I on here are millions of years old, so we say - eccentric?! lol.
December 24th, 2023 05:42
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Goldfinch and I on here are millions of years old, so we say - eccentric?! lol.
December 24th, 2023 05:42
Na serra
orchidee said:
A fine write SB - reaches for \'translate\' option. lol.
Bit of French there?! Erm, was I any good at languages? Doh! heehee.
December 23rd, 2023 12:54
orchidee said:
A fine write SB - reaches for \'translate\' option. lol.
Bit of French there?! Erm, was I any good at languages? Doh! heehee.
December 23rd, 2023 12:54
The seed
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, those seeds of time are so meaningful to us.
Andy
December 23rd, 2023 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, those seeds of time are so meaningful to us.
Andy
December 23rd, 2023 01:35
Strive on
Goldfinch60 said:
Your heart is full of joy soren so all will remember that.
Andy
December 21st, 2023 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Your heart is full of joy soren so all will remember that.
Andy
December 21st, 2023 02:25
Questions of another type
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks Dave I appreciate the review
December 19th, 2023 21:54
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks Dave I appreciate the review
December 19th, 2023 21:54
Questions of another type
Doggerel Dave said:
Took more than one read to get into the core/cores of your meaning/meanings Soren. Images will stay for a goodly while.
December 19th, 2023 20:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Took more than one read to get into the core/cores of your meaning/meanings Soren. Images will stay for a goodly while.
December 19th, 2023 20:21
Surrender
Doggerel Dave said:
Could well make it to a tombstone, Soren. A polished piece on polished marble
December 12th, 2023 15:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Could well make it to a tombstone, Soren. A polished piece on polished marble
December 12th, 2023 15:59
A tooth ache
Natalie Gladmir said:
I\'m very sorry, but judging by these truthful lines, you suffered very much. Please take proper care of yourself. Health is a great treasure.
December 5th, 2023 16:08
Natalie Gladmir said:
I\'m very sorry, but judging by these truthful lines, you suffered very much. Please take proper care of yourself. Health is a great treasure.
December 5th, 2023 16:08
Ghost of a dream
Doggerel Dave said:
Happened upon (though thankfully not involved with) a few for whom the desire for \'a savior with a slaves behavior\' was present. The need to exert power and control for its own sake as a desirable way of interacting with others brings forth some almost-homicidal tendencies in me.
Message wrapped up in plenty of poetic metaphor which took, for me, some unravelling but worth the effort, Soren.
December 2nd, 2023 19:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Happened upon (though thankfully not involved with) a few for whom the desire for \'a savior with a slaves behavior\' was present. The need to exert power and control for its own sake as a desirable way of interacting with others brings forth some almost-homicidal tendencies in me.
Message wrapped up in plenty of poetic metaphor which took, for me, some unravelling but worth the effort, Soren.
December 2nd, 2023 19:19
Eye of a madman
joshi said:
What was yesterday is not today,
notes must change for the music to play...
this is definitely going on my insta and I will mention you in CAPS.
I was expecting this to be a perspective poem but whatever it is, in the end it\'s a work of art.
November 25th, 2023 09:24
joshi said:
What was yesterday is not today,
notes must change for the music to play...
this is definitely going on my insta and I will mention you in CAPS.
I was expecting this to be a perspective poem but whatever it is, in the end it\'s a work of art.
November 25th, 2023 09:24
Eye of a madman
arqios said:
It makes one think how costly this business really is! Thanks for sharing. Good to be reading you again.
November 25th, 2023 08:47
arqios said:
It makes one think how costly this business really is! Thanks for sharing. Good to be reading you again.
November 25th, 2023 08:47
Eye of a madman
Doggerel Dave said:
First two lines, I woz with you, Soren - I won\'t be forgetting this idea in a hurry....... I slide quickly over the blast at \'science\' and land squarely on \'What was yesterday--- music to play\'
You know - the style and rhythm (almost) got me in..... Good stuff....
November 24th, 2023 17:40
Doggerel Dave said:
First two lines, I woz with you, Soren - I won\'t be forgetting this idea in a hurry....... I slide quickly over the blast at \'science\' and land squarely on \'What was yesterday--- music to play\'
You know - the style and rhythm (almost) got me in..... Good stuff....
November 24th, 2023 17:40
Rights that are left
Goldfinch60 said:
Man is the most dangerous animal in the world soren.
Andy
November 17th, 2023 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Man is the most dangerous animal in the world soren.
Andy
November 17th, 2023 02:10
Rights that are left
Cedrick said:
man is the top apex predator. Great write btw
November 16th, 2023 15:47
Cedrick said:
man is the top apex predator. Great write btw
November 16th, 2023 15:47
Rights that are left
Doggerel Dave said:
Up to your usual neat puzzle poem standard Soren.
Not sure man has the right to confer rights at all, right?
November 16th, 2023 15:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Up to your usual neat puzzle poem standard Soren.
Not sure man has the right to confer rights at all, right?
November 16th, 2023 15:07
Rights that are left
2781 said:
Top of the food chain, we destroy ourselves.
November 16th, 2023 14:16
2781 said:
Top of the food chain, we destroy ourselves.
November 16th, 2023 14:16
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