Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Hard Words
MDStone said:
As the old saying goes, “sticks and stones”… ah but they can hurt us and they do. And we in the carelessness of our own whims sometimes leave a mark or end a “life” as we knew it. Perfectly tucked into metaphorical language and a skillfully crafted image. My thoughts like ripples across my brain. Thank you, as always for sharing your gift of words with us.
April 24th, 2025 05:25
MDStone said:
As the old saying goes, “sticks and stones”… ah but they can hurt us and they do. And we in the carelessness of our own whims sometimes leave a mark or end a “life” as we knew it. Perfectly tucked into metaphorical language and a skillfully crafted image. My thoughts like ripples across my brain. Thank you, as always for sharing your gift of words with us.
April 24th, 2025 05:25
Hard Words
David Wakeling said:
This is well constructed as always.Sad about the bird but hey that\'s life.Clever poem
April 24th, 2025 05:11
David Wakeling said:
This is well constructed as always.Sad about the bird but hey that\'s life.Clever poem
April 24th, 2025 05:11
Hard Words
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem beautifully captures the delicate balance of our actions and their unintended consequences. The imagery of skipping stones creating ripples mirrors how even small choices can have far-reaching effects—sometimes harming the fragile beauty around us.
April 24th, 2025 04:52
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem beautifully captures the delicate balance of our actions and their unintended consequences. The imagery of skipping stones creating ripples mirrors how even small choices can have far-reaching effects—sometimes harming the fragile beauty around us.
April 24th, 2025 04:52
Hard Words
Teddy.15 said:
I could never write a metaphor as masterful as you dearest sorrenbarret, I have never had a poetry book truly published into a book and I often wonder what would people say, how would it be perceived? For some the fact of the matter is we write for ourselves and we shouldn\'t walk on egg shells in case we offend, there really is nothing or no one to offend, however if the reader sees otherwise that is in fact the problem only of the reader. Your work has kept me coming back to read more for a very long time, at the moment I am reading a lot of Sylvia Plath, who in some very strange ways reminds me of me, and inspires my latest writing. Never stop being you and never stop writing your masterpiece\'s of stunning poetry. 🌹
April 24th, 2025 04:07
Teddy.15 said:
I could never write a metaphor as masterful as you dearest sorrenbarret, I have never had a poetry book truly published into a book and I often wonder what would people say, how would it be perceived? For some the fact of the matter is we write for ourselves and we shouldn\'t walk on egg shells in case we offend, there really is nothing or no one to offend, however if the reader sees otherwise that is in fact the problem only of the reader. Your work has kept me coming back to read more for a very long time, at the moment I am reading a lot of Sylvia Plath, who in some very strange ways reminds me of me, and inspires my latest writing. Never stop being you and never stop writing your masterpiece\'s of stunning poetry. 🌹
April 24th, 2025 04:07
What\'s in a name
Goldfinch60 said:
Bliss overcomes all ills in our lives soren.
Andy
April 24th, 2025 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Bliss overcomes all ills in our lives soren.
Andy
April 24th, 2025 01:13
What\'s in a name
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
You piece words together so effortlessly. Bringing to life a beautiful rhythm and again; a favorite 🤩
April 23rd, 2025 13:48
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
You piece words together so effortlessly. Bringing to life a beautiful rhythm and again; a favorite 🤩
April 23rd, 2025 13:48
What\'s in a name
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite imagery and poetry dearest sorrenbarret 🌹 stunning
April 23rd, 2025 09:07
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite imagery and poetry dearest sorrenbarret 🌹 stunning
April 23rd, 2025 09:07
What\'s in a name
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This poem is both playful and rich with philosophical reflection—like a modern parable cloaked in wordplay and floral metaphor. And subversive, too! Chastity found in an orgy, Peace adored through hedonistic convergence, and Bliss remaining untouched by it all. Brilliant, Soren. Seriously. You flip norms on their head, challenging those who cling to them. Compassion, peace, and bliss—these cannot be confined by our rigid frameworks. Bravo! 🌹👏 A fave for sure.
April 23rd, 2025 07:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This poem is both playful and rich with philosophical reflection—like a modern parable cloaked in wordplay and floral metaphor. And subversive, too! Chastity found in an orgy, Peace adored through hedonistic convergence, and Bliss remaining untouched by it all. Brilliant, Soren. Seriously. You flip norms on their head, challenging those who cling to them. Compassion, peace, and bliss—these cannot be confined by our rigid frameworks. Bravo! 🌹👏 A fave for sure.
April 23rd, 2025 07:14
What\'s in a name
arqios said:
I had a friend once, several in fact, during the nascent days of online poetry. We were friends and comrades without the aid of offline acquaintance- hence we grew intimate in our words and essence even as we had masqueraded behind avatars, nom de plume and internet “anonymity.” 🕊🙏🏻
April 23rd, 2025 06:09
arqios said:
I had a friend once, several in fact, during the nascent days of online poetry. We were friends and comrades without the aid of offline acquaintance- hence we grew intimate in our words and essence even as we had masqueraded behind avatars, nom de plume and internet “anonymity.” 🕊🙏🏻
April 23rd, 2025 06:09
What\'s in a name
David Wakeling said:
What an amazing poem. All the great states of mind: Love Passion Charity Compassion Peace and Diversity.All woven into the old question What is in a name.I
think just about everything is in these names.Well done
April 23rd, 2025 05:35
David Wakeling said:
What an amazing poem. All the great states of mind: Love Passion Charity Compassion Peace and Diversity.All woven into the old question What is in a name.I
think just about everything is in these names.Well done
April 23rd, 2025 05:35
Overdone romance sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb sonnet soren, very clever phrasing on the bad things in life.
Andy
April 23rd, 2025 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb sonnet soren, very clever phrasing on the bad things in life.
Andy
April 23rd, 2025 01:44
Sweet and bitter
maydanae said:
I love the structure of your poem here and a couple of others you\'ve written where the ends of each phrase rhyme. The choice of words is really beautiful as well and the imagery is very clear and vivid. Wonderful job!
April 22nd, 2025 20:28
maydanae said:
I love the structure of your poem here and a couple of others you\'ve written where the ends of each phrase rhyme. The choice of words is really beautiful as well and the imagery is very clear and vivid. Wonderful job!
April 22nd, 2025 20:28
Overdone romance sonnet
Damaso said:
No, well! Tremendous! I\'m always speechless when I see your pieces. Cheers!
April 22nd, 2025 10:01
Damaso said:
No, well! Tremendous! I\'m always speechless when I see your pieces. Cheers!
April 22nd, 2025 10:01
Overdone romance sonnet
rrodriguez said:
Your poem is wildly original—I\'ve never seen romance framed with such dark, visceral imagery! Wow, what a way to go—literally! I\'m not having lunch today after this read. LOL!
April 22nd, 2025 09:59
rrodriguez said:
Your poem is wildly original—I\'ve never seen romance framed with such dark, visceral imagery! Wow, what a way to go—literally! I\'m not having lunch today after this read. LOL!
April 22nd, 2025 09:59
Overdone romance sonnet
Jerry Reynolds said:
It\'s more fun than a barrel of monkeys, SB. Well done.
April 22nd, 2025 08:18
Jerry Reynolds said:
It\'s more fun than a barrel of monkeys, SB. Well done.
April 22nd, 2025 08:18
Overdone romance sonnet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And how. The truth, Shakespearean style. Wonderful sonnet, friend. And I couldn\'t agree more. This metaphor hit home for me. 👏🌹
April 22nd, 2025 08:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And how. The truth, Shakespearean style. Wonderful sonnet, friend. And I couldn\'t agree more. This metaphor hit home for me. 👏🌹
April 22nd, 2025 08:02
Overdone romance sonnet
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna be sick! But, ahh, the perfect foods for KP! heehee.
April 22nd, 2025 07:35
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna be sick! But, ahh, the perfect foods for KP! heehee.
April 22nd, 2025 07:35
Overdone romance sonnet
David Wakeling said:
Sounds like my 21st.Well Gordon Ramsey would have a field day here. Some powerful images of culinary delights. Well done
April 22nd, 2025 05:27
David Wakeling said:
Sounds like my 21st.Well Gordon Ramsey would have a field day here. Some powerful images of culinary delights. Well done
April 22nd, 2025 05:27
Overdone romance sonnet
Teddy.15 said:
LOL hilarious and fantasticly pungent from the very first line to the last absurdly brilliant, I am chuckling away here, oh the very smell and torture. 🌹 One of my new favourites of yours. Loved everything about this, kudos a thousand times. 👏
April 22nd, 2025 04:55
Teddy.15 said:
LOL hilarious and fantasticly pungent from the very first line to the last absurdly brilliant, I am chuckling away here, oh the very smell and torture. 🌹 One of my new favourites of yours. Loved everything about this, kudos a thousand times. 👏
April 22nd, 2025 04:55
Overdone romance sonnet
arqios said:
The phrasing and texture is strong and the drive is quite moving. Nice change of pace here🕊🙏🏻
April 22nd, 2025 04:00
arqios said:
The phrasing and texture is strong and the drive is quite moving. Nice change of pace here🕊🙏🏻
April 22nd, 2025 04:00
Foggy morning
orchidee said:
You got that special food ready for KP yet?! LOL.
April 22nd, 2025 02:35
orchidee said:
You got that special food ready for KP yet?! LOL.
April 22nd, 2025 02:35
Lies of romance
Kevin Hulme said:
I always remember Homer Simpson dreaming of the Land of Chocolate. Nice one .
April 21st, 2025 20:02
Kevin Hulme said:
I always remember Homer Simpson dreaming of the Land of Chocolate. Nice one .
April 21st, 2025 20:02
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