Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Footprints on a beaten path
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wonderful prose poem that actually addresses something I have been reflecting on much lately. An excellent write, my friend, and all too true. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

April 29th, 2025 19:01

Footprints on a beaten path
Thomas W Case said:

Well done, my friend. Excellent.

April 29th, 2025 11:02

Footprints on a beaten path
orchidee said:

Good write SB. I shall feed KP embers and fag-ash! lol.

April 29th, 2025 08:36

Footprints on a beaten path
GenXer Shamrocker โ˜˜๏ธ said:

How very true this is. A beautiful piece my friend

April 29th, 2025 07:14

Footprints on a beaten path
Lorenz said:

Our words are messages engraved on the wall of time
destined to become questioning for a next future.

April 29th, 2025 05:21

Footprints on a beaten path
David Wakeling said:

A clever well written piece here. A wonderful metaphor about embers and past poets.Enjoyable

April 29th, 2025 05:17

Footprints on a beaten path
Salvia.S said:

Your poem shows how poets may be forgotten, but their words can still touch people in the future, even if no one remembers where they came from. Very well written!!!

April 29th, 2025 05:16

Unknot the not
Victor Bolshov said:

Nicely said! Somehow it brought this line from Nietsche: \"You great star! What would your happiness be, had you not those for whom you shine?\"

April 29th, 2025 04:31

Footprints on a beaten path
arqios said:

Embers that refuse to be snuffed out ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

April 29th, 2025 04:24

Footprints on a beaten path
Teddy.15 said:

So very beautifully said, in a poem, ironic as it is, it just brings me back to the great Vincent Van Gogh, who I once had the great privilege to study, I always believe he was a poet and a painter and he used his work so very carefully with his muse, he always believed he should have had recognition and in the end was his downfall. A wonderful theme and read dear sorrenbarret ๐ŸŒน

April 29th, 2025 04:02

Sleep on
Goldfinch60 said:

Opposites can also attract soren.

Andy

April 29th, 2025 01:20

Good taste
NafisaSB said:

unlucky neighbor, and lucky shark - lol..enjoyed the read

April 29th, 2025 00:33

Sleep on
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Been there, and get it entirely! The problem is when the sleeping on halts and reality hits. Still, damn that lemonade sounds worth the delay. ๐Ÿ˜‰ All jokes aside, a well done. Powerful metaphor. Well done, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

April 28th, 2025 14:51

Sleep on
hzugman said:

My kind of poem. Love it! Good job.

April 28th, 2025 11:21

Sleep on
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

A short gemโค๏ธ

April 28th, 2025 09:45

Sleep on
Jerry Reynolds said:

A fine write, SB. I can\'t afford Lemmons enough for lemonade. But there is some cheap vodka I pop into Ginger ale.

April 28th, 2025 07:48

Sleep on
Salvia.S said:

Love the raw honesty and clever wordplay in this poem!

April 28th, 2025 06:48

Sleep on
David Wakeling said:

i know the feelings expressed here.Very relatable.Well done mi amigo

April 28th, 2025 05:02

Sleep on
arqios said:

The blood vessels doing shadow dances in translucence๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

April 28th, 2025 04:54

Sleep on
orchidee said:

Good write SB. Any spare sewage for KP\'s dinner? lol.

April 28th, 2025 03:55

Sleep on
RSM0812 said:

It\'s like the lemonade is a medicine. However too much of a good thing is bad.

April 28th, 2025 03:49

Sleep on
Lorenz said:

A popular french expression to designate an unpleasant situation : \'\' C\'est une mauvaise limonade ! \'\' (Its a bad lemonade ! )

April 28th, 2025 03:49

Sleep on
RSM0812 said:

Short and sweet.

April 28th, 2025 03:48

Sleep on
Teddy.15 said:

Lemonade is delicious and so is the fighting spirit within this, take what comes and ride with it. ๐ŸŒน

April 28th, 2025 03:41

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Goldfinch60 said:

So much can be seen in that one dot soren.

Andy

April 28th, 2025 01:05

Good taste
Doggerel Dave said:

Famous Last Words there for all to digest. The rhyme the seasoning.

April 28th, 2025 00:04

Fallen sand
NafisaSB said:

so romantic, and so touching, and so many truths of life laid bare here
fantastic

April 27th, 2025 23:54

Good taste
Thomas W Case said:

You paint a vivid scene. Great work.

April 27th, 2025 22:49

Good taste
mya said:

this is such a fun read!! lovely and creative.

April 27th, 2025 13:46

Good taste
GenXer Shamrocker โ˜˜๏ธ said:

Humorous this time! Very good! I like the switch up.

April 27th, 2025 13:00



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