Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Piled logs
Young Fella said:

Great work. Enjoyed reading your lines.

October 27th, 2024 16:00

A nursery rhyme for us mature children
Accidental Poet said:

I\'ve often thought of writing such a poetic verse, but could never manage to come up with a clean way to put it. You Sir have achieved what I could not. I congratulate you. πŸ˜πŸ‘

October 27th, 2024 13:38

Ember
Teddy.15 said:

Having just had lunch with one of my most favourite people in my life who has recently been diagnosed with a type of dementia that also takes her eye sight, this is so very much appreciated today dear friend, memories we have so many and today we made yet another. Thank you my dear sorrenbarret 🌹 πŸ’™

October 27th, 2024 10:52

Ember
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

October 27th, 2024 09:32

Ember
Ezekiel Olayemi said:

A poignant poem. You reminded me that memories are indeed very precious πŸ‘

October 27th, 2024 09:03

Ember
Lorenz said:

Such a mighty majestuous tree...Embers !

October 27th, 2024 06:37

Ember
Neville said:



it only takes something miniscule a micro-second to undo what it has taken a millennium to nurture ..

October 27th, 2024 06:22

Ember
arqios said:

Life’s yolk, YES! Our lot is quite a think to deal with from day to day. Just this morning a breakfast egg flew off the β€œegg perch” in the fridge door, the white splattered against the kitchen counter but the yolk remained whole from the glancing impact; the yolk of the yolk or was that yoke?

October 27th, 2024 05:08

A nursery rhyme for us mature children
rebellion_in_sanity said:

I have almost made it a ritual for me to read one of your poems after writing a couple. Each read tells me the long path I would need to traverse before becoming better. This time also it was no different. Absolutely loved it.

October 27th, 2024 03:30

A nursery rhyme for us mature children
Neville said:


May I respectfully suggest that you neck a trug of tomatoes on a daily basis & when not in season, tinned ones will do the job just as well your Majesty πŸ…πŸ‘

October 27th, 2024 02:31

A nursery rhyme for us mature children
Goldfinch60 said:

Pee away dear soren, pee away. LOL

Andy

October 27th, 2024 02:28

A nursery rhyme for us mature children
Thomas W Case said:

Lol. Funny stuff.

October 26th, 2024 23:43

A nursery rhyme for us mature children
David Wakeling said:

Certainly a poet having fun.

October 26th, 2024 15:35

A nursery rhyme for us mature children
Thad Wilk said:

πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Hilarious nursery rhyme
I gotta say!!πŸ’―πŸ‘Œ
2nd stanza just blew
me away!! 🀣🀣
Thanks for sharing
really made my day!! 😁
Best regards ✌️ Thad

October 26th, 2024 14:43

What I left behind
Parisab said:

Hidden messages from nature, for the wise to hear …

October 26th, 2024 10:17

A nursery rhyme for us mature children
Tony36 said:

Excellent

October 26th, 2024 07:39

A nursery rhyme for us mature children
arqios said:

That about sums it up in every castle 🏰 to which the king does reign.



October 26th, 2024 06:06

A nursery rhyme for us mature children
Teddy.15 said:

Most amusing dear King 🀣

October 26th, 2024 05:00

Night\'s soliloquy
Accidental Poet said:

Surely a work of poetic art for all to enjoy. Well penned soren. πŸ˜‰πŸ‘

October 26th, 2024 03:20

Night\'s soliloquy
Goldfinch60 said:

Such wonderful words soren reborn to a wonderful future.

Andy

October 26th, 2024 01:05

Night\'s soliloquy
Thad Wilk said:

πŸ‘πŸ‘ clapping!
A wonderful treat to
read my friend!! πŸ‘πŸ’―
Lovely rhyme, flow
and blend!! πŸ‘Œ
Great word choices
I must say!
Thanks for sharing
with us today!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

October 25th, 2024 21:55

Night\'s soliloquy
David Wakeling said:

This is brilliant. Night is a double-edged sword. It is a safe refuge but we have to wake soon.I love the ancient references. I like the rhyme.Well done

October 25th, 2024 19:44

Don\'t
RSM0812 said:

Some decent advice.

October 25th, 2024 10:42

Night\'s soliloquy
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

October 25th, 2024 10:16

Night\'s soliloquy
Tony36 said:

Excellent

October 25th, 2024 09:46

Night\'s soliloquy
Neville said:



Incredibly intoxicating sir sorenbarrett .. like sipping from a soporific chalice through a straw .. but even more dreamy .. Neville

October 25th, 2024 05:56

Church, through the eyes of a child
Tom Dylan said:

Very good, Soren. A fine write.

October 25th, 2024 04:49

Night\'s soliloquy
Teddy.15 said:

I could feel a bit of shakespeare in this and what with your wonderful imagery well, you brought it all to life. Going back in dreams must be a real treat. 🌹

October 25th, 2024 04:31

Church, through the eyes of a child
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write soren.

Andy

October 25th, 2024 01:09

Running late
Thad Wilk said:

πŸ˜† Haaahahahaaa!
A lucky day for you indeed! 😊
A real hoot, thanks for the read!!! 🀣
Best regards ✌️ Thad

October 24th, 2024 19:14



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