Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Word of rocks
NinjaGirl said:
You are truly an extremely skilled poet, beautiful imagery so lovely and full of meaning
January 28th, 2025 12:13
NinjaGirl said:
You are truly an extremely skilled poet, beautiful imagery so lovely and full of meaning
January 28th, 2025 12:13
Word of rocks
Cassie58 said:
Reminds me how painful emotional wounds are, however they are caused, but words can inflict far greater damage. Best to hold that tongue in and say nothing. Wounds from rocks have a whole different meaning for me. There is much here metaphorically to contemplate. Many strong images contained in these lines. Very well penned sorenbarrett.
January 28th, 2025 11:44
Cassie58 said:
Reminds me how painful emotional wounds are, however they are caused, but words can inflict far greater damage. Best to hold that tongue in and say nothing. Wounds from rocks have a whole different meaning for me. There is much here metaphorically to contemplate. Many strong images contained in these lines. Very well penned sorenbarrett.
January 28th, 2025 11:44
Word of rocks
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A word thrown of rocks is worse than any rock thrown. I always hated the phrase, \"Sticks and stones may break my bones by names will never hurt me.\" The first part of the proposition is certainly true enough; however, the last part is really not true at all. In fact, I would rather have broken bones (which heal) than emotional wounds that linger an entire lifetime. Of course, that might depend on the extent of the break in a bone...but still, emotional wounds are very hurtful...very damaging....deadly even. Anyway, this poem inspired me to think of this. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
January 28th, 2025 08:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A word thrown of rocks is worse than any rock thrown. I always hated the phrase, \"Sticks and stones may break my bones by names will never hurt me.\" The first part of the proposition is certainly true enough; however, the last part is really not true at all. In fact, I would rather have broken bones (which heal) than emotional wounds that linger an entire lifetime. Of course, that might depend on the extent of the break in a bone...but still, emotional wounds are very hurtful...very damaging....deadly even. Anyway, this poem inspired me to think of this. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
January 28th, 2025 08:20
Word of rocks
David Wakeling said:
This was enjoyable to read.The sea carving out shapes and the night moving in what more could anyone want
January 28th, 2025 05:41
David Wakeling said:
This was enjoyable to read.The sea carving out shapes and the night moving in what more could anyone want
January 28th, 2025 05:41
Word of rocks
arqios said:
To be thrown off! That is quite a strong image. Makes me wonder, plummet or be carried off, and to where; be dashed on the rocks or flown to the unknowable. Very intriguing Soren… sends my poetic senses bristling! 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 28th, 2025 05:20
arqios said:
To be thrown off! That is quite a strong image. Makes me wonder, plummet or be carried off, and to where; be dashed on the rocks or flown to the unknowable. Very intriguing Soren… sends my poetic senses bristling! 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 28th, 2025 05:20
Pick a page
Neville said:
There are too many to choose a single one .. I\'ll take the lot and savour each one of em slow .. Nice one my friend & truly .. Neville
January 28th, 2025 04:38
Neville said:
There are too many to choose a single one .. I\'ll take the lot and savour each one of em slow .. Nice one my friend & truly .. Neville
January 28th, 2025 04:38
Word of rocks
Poetic Licence said:
I feel words always hurt and damage more and are longer lasting if coming from a place of care, a lovely piece of writing, really enjoyed
January 28th, 2025 04:16
Poetic Licence said:
I feel words always hurt and damage more and are longer lasting if coming from a place of care, a lovely piece of writing, really enjoyed
January 28th, 2025 04:16
Word of rocks
Teddy.15 said:
I see so much metaphor, glass houses and stones comes to mind, sometimes things that are said are far more painful than a rock being thrown at ones head. 🌹 Wonderful imagery.
January 28th, 2025 04:10
Teddy.15 said:
I see so much metaphor, glass houses and stones comes to mind, sometimes things that are said are far more painful than a rock being thrown at ones head. 🌹 Wonderful imagery.
January 28th, 2025 04:10
Pick a page
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words soren, both the light and dark on any page are so menaingful.
Andy
January 28th, 2025 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words soren, both the light and dark on any page are so menaingful.
Andy
January 28th, 2025 02:16
Pick a page
NinjaGirl said:
This is beautiful, one of my favorite works to read
January 27th, 2025 21:49
NinjaGirl said:
This is beautiful, one of my favorite works to read
January 27th, 2025 21:49
Pick a page
Thad Wilk said:
Terrific poem
expressed superbly!!🤩
I\'d pick \'contented glee\'
most certainly!! ☺️
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 27th, 2025 19:43
Thad Wilk said:
Terrific poem
expressed superbly!!🤩
I\'d pick \'contented glee\'
most certainly!! ☺️
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 27th, 2025 19:43
Pick a page
Cassie58 said:
Great write sorenbarrett. Variety is the spice of life. A little of everything, not a diet of too much much happy or too much sad, that is what works best for me. Enjoyed very much your lines.
January 27th, 2025 14:55
Cassie58 said:
Great write sorenbarrett. Variety is the spice of life. A little of everything, not a diet of too much much happy or too much sad, that is what works best for me. Enjoyed very much your lines.
January 27th, 2025 14:55
Pick a page
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this metaphor! This poem reads almost as a sort of Knight in the cavern of chalices where only one is the Holy Grail and one must pick and choose carefully! (Thank you Indiana Jones). But this, truthfully, more profound because it deals with our life and the choices that can come to define it. Well done! 🌹👏
January 27th, 2025 08:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this metaphor! This poem reads almost as a sort of Knight in the cavern of chalices where only one is the Holy Grail and one must pick and choose carefully! (Thank you Indiana Jones). But this, truthfully, more profound because it deals with our life and the choices that can come to define it. Well done! 🌹👏
January 27th, 2025 08:51
Pick a page
David Wakeling said:
Well constructed with wisdom as well.Excellent
January 27th, 2025 05:45
David Wakeling said:
Well constructed with wisdom as well.Excellent
January 27th, 2025 05:45
Pick a page
Poetic Licence said:
This resonates with me as someone who is quite adept at making the wrong choices in life, even though some of them i thought were the right choices. Enjoyed the read and the message it gives.
January 27th, 2025 05:14
Poetic Licence said:
This resonates with me as someone who is quite adept at making the wrong choices in life, even though some of them i thought were the right choices. Enjoyed the read and the message it gives.
January 27th, 2025 05:14
Pick a page
arqios said:
Hey Soren! I do like the power of choice and its impact on our lives. Just as in a book, each page represents a different experience, emotion, or decision. By carefully choosing which pages to read—or in this metaphor, which actions to take and which paths to follow—we have the ability to shape our journey and influence the overall narrative of our lives. Something that I have historically not been very goo at. Pick wisely! Wisely pick. Pick. Wisely. (note to self, N.B.)
January 27th, 2025 04:32
arqios said:
Hey Soren! I do like the power of choice and its impact on our lives. Just as in a book, each page represents a different experience, emotion, or decision. By carefully choosing which pages to read—or in this metaphor, which actions to take and which paths to follow—we have the ability to shape our journey and influence the overall narrative of our lives. Something that I have historically not been very goo at. Pick wisely! Wisely pick. Pick. Wisely. (note to self, N.B.)
January 27th, 2025 04:32
Pick a page
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, that\'s all I\'m saying, utter beauty in your pages that will always be read. 🌹 Exquisite poetry dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
January 27th, 2025 04:26
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, that\'s all I\'m saying, utter beauty in your pages that will always be read. 🌹 Exquisite poetry dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
January 27th, 2025 04:26
Victim
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words soren, and so true, there is so much dishonour and lying in the world today.
Andy
January 27th, 2025 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words soren, and so true, there is so much dishonour and lying in the world today.
Andy
January 27th, 2025 02:48
Victim
Dan Williams said:
I sometimes think you mind read my mind\'s hostility, negativity, etc. You spell it out more clearly than I can though. Fine work.
January 27th, 2025 00:46
Dan Williams said:
I sometimes think you mind read my mind\'s hostility, negativity, etc. You spell it out more clearly than I can though. Fine work.
January 27th, 2025 00:46
Victim
Thad Wilk said:
Terrific poem,
great rhyme,
rhythm and flow!! 🤩
Great word choices,
awesome presentation
way to go bro!!! 😁
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 26th, 2025 20:38
Thad Wilk said:
Terrific poem,
great rhyme,
rhythm and flow!! 🤩
Great word choices,
awesome presentation
way to go bro!!! 😁
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 26th, 2025 20:38
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