Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Call of the earth
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'ll circle around for a bit longer if you don\'t mind - if I take this too seriously, I\'ll crash...
Not sure if you are serious about the cost of living, Soren - be interesting, as I can\'t see metaphors being very handy there....😜

December 17th, 2024 23:16

Call of the earth
Thomas W Case said:

Wow. Powerful work, time never loses. Carpe Diem, my friend.

December 17th, 2024 22:52

Call of the earth
Ladywithaquill said:

Death and decay make for great poetry!

December 17th, 2024 19:44

Call of the earth
Mutley Ravishes said:

This body will rot
Only if it\'s in the grave
Is that not the intention
Of the Creator, I say?!
Look to the east
On your quest
Then take the journey
To the west


December 17th, 2024 19:38

Call of the earth
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

Open. Honest. Truth. Very well written!

December 17th, 2024 15:47

Call of the earth
David Wakeling said:

In each life there is a rise and fall. There secret is not to care.A powerful existential poem

December 17th, 2024 14:40

Call of the earth
gray0328 said:

We must accept the aging process, but we don\'t have to like it. I still have all my hair, but I\'m losing other things. Nice work Soren

December 17th, 2024 13:34

Peace on earth, good will
vicecream said:

Much for us to learn from our woody brethren

December 17th, 2024 12:58

The perfect poem
Lakshya said:

Awww❀

December 17th, 2024 12:40

Call of the earth
Poetic Licence said:

For a minute i thought i was reading my doctors report, really enjoyed the read

December 17th, 2024 11:22

Call of the earth
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

December 17th, 2024 10:30

Call of the earth
arqios said:

Liked and Faved. Part of me has days like that… now I’m nursing my sore feet. Just back from a much needed shift as the cost of living keeps us toiling even past what once was typical in one’s lifespan. So we trudge along like a tattered jalopy.

December 17th, 2024 08:28

Call of the earth
Teddy.15 said:

Well aren\'t you just a beam of sunshine today... πŸ’œ So incredibly gracious an honest look at the seasons of one\'s self.

December 17th, 2024 04:01

Call of the earth
Lorenz said:

Inspired writing as a part of imortality...

December 17th, 2024 03:55

Call of the earth
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

December 17th, 2024 03:19

Poseidon\'s bones
Goldfinch60 said:

I used to smoke a meerschaum pipe many years ago soren.

Andy

December 17th, 2024 02:50

Poseidon\'s bones
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Oh boy, did it make me toil! Chemistry was weak kneed...Meerschaum, well it was something I skipped...now it came to boil πŸ˜‡πŸ˜„πŸ˜€

Absolutely loved it

December 17th, 2024 01:27

Poseidon\'s bones
Mutley Ravishes said:

Thanks for the info, Soren. I wonder if Mithrandir\'s pipe was made of meerschaum?

December 16th, 2024 18:53

Poseidon\'s bones
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

December 16th, 2024 17:11

Poseidon\'s bones
Thad Wilk said:

My Granddad had a
collection of different
styles of pipes he used
to own!
I wonder if any were
made of, chip of sea bone!ΒΏΒΏ
Awesome read, brought
back some mem\'ries. πŸ‘
Best regards ✌️ Thad

December 16th, 2024 16:13

Poseidon\'s bones
Cassie58 said:

This poem is full of intrigue. It is beautifully penned Soren, but the meaning eluded me. I had to scroll to find out further. I am thankful for learning something new today. Delightful reading.

December 16th, 2024 12:53

Poseidon\'s bones
Poetic Licence said:

I really enjoyed this poem reminded me of an elderly couple i used to help, the old fella used to smoke these beautifully carved pipes, said there was nothing better. The wife said at his funeral Smoking might have killed him, but the pipes paid for the funeral, a lovely poem

December 16th, 2024 12:09

Poseidon\'s bones
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

December 16th, 2024 10:54

Poseidon\'s bones
Tristan Robert Lange said:

First, bravo...it is not often one sends me down a πŸ‡ hole of research, as I am a pretty well researched person. 🀣 That said, I have to confess I did have to look up meerschaum and, wow! I pretty much could figure out it was a sort of sea foam or something of that nature; however, when you got to smoking it...I knew I had to look it up. In this poem I see themes of transformation (soft to hard, color changes, etc.), versatility (represented by meerschaum\'s multiple uses)...and the interplay between natural materials and human culture and ingenuity (storing pipes in gourds...and using meerschaum as an incense burner). Anyway, multiple layers to this wonderful poem, my dear friend! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

December 16th, 2024 09:44

Poseidon\'s bones
Doggerel Dave said:

You are giving Dr Google a run for his money up there, Soren.

December 16th, 2024 06:28

Poseidon\'s bones
David Wakeling said:

Fascinating story about Meerchaum. I got a feeling I actually learned something for the first time in years.Well done

December 16th, 2024 06:11

Poseidon\'s bones
arqios said:

Thank you for sharing this thoughtful and evocative poem. It also serves as a reminder of the intricate beauty found in the materials that surround us and the transformative power of human creativity.

December 16th, 2024 06:03

Poseidon\'s bones
Teddy.15 said:

So very poetic and I\'m going to ask if may be so bold to let me in as I\'m not sparky on this one! 🀣

December 16th, 2024 05:15

Poseidon\'s bones
Neville said:



Holy smoke .. that\'s far from elementary my dear sb .. wot would Moriarty think of thee .. I still have my fathers old un and occasionally sniff on it .. πŸ˜ŽπŸ‘

December 16th, 2024 04:58

How
Goldfinch60 said:

We can always come out of the shadows into the glory of the light soren.

Andy

December 16th, 2024 02:48



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