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River123 said:

Short and captures the images of surrealism .
I think . Reads like a song .
Loved it. 👍👍👏👏

October 22nd, 2024 19:17

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Thad Wilk said:

Wow! 😮
Powerful penning
Pain filled imagery,!!
A superb read
expressed superbly!! 🏆
Thanks for sharing!!!
Best regards peace ✌️ Thad

October 22nd, 2024 12:11

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orchidee said:

Good write SB.

October 22nd, 2024 09:54

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aDarkerMind said:

a chameleon skin fades in pillow down....

wherever these words come from Soren. my only wish is they keep on comming.



October 22nd, 2024 09:25

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rebellion_in_sanity said:

I loved it! Although completely unrelated, the poem reminded me of the song \"The Impossible Dream.\" The correlation process inside our minds seems to work in a funny way.

October 22nd, 2024 08:11

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Goldfinch60 said:

That new life will always be there for us soren.

Andy

October 22nd, 2024 01:37

Nursery rhyme just horsing around
Dan Williams said:

Tongue very firmly in cheek, very nice.

October 21st, 2024 23:15

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Doggerel Dave said:

\"I know it\'s not therapeutic to do so, but in this instance just humour him a little - I don\'t think he\'s dangerous...\"😛🙃

October 21st, 2024 16:39

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Teddy.15 said:

LoL horsing or goating around? Never mind your nursery rhyme made me chuckle and that cow with a horse voice hilarious 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🌹

October 21st, 2024 08:12

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John Prophet said:

What ever you were smoking it must’ve been strong. 😉👍🏼

October 21st, 2024 07:12

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Neville said:



This reads more cuckoo than a Bavarian clock ..

October 21st, 2024 05:00

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David Wakeling said:

This is magic.I read it and could here Vivaldi Four Seasons.Very inspirational.There is a touch of Shakespeare and Keats about your writing.Well done

October 20th, 2024 17:29

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Neville said:


having now read through your \'Smoke\' several times I feel obliged to own up to the fact I find these words more than just a little bit relatable .. if by any chance you refer to being re-born then I must also confess I am a lifelong believer in reincarnation .. and don\'t mind admitting I have undergone numerous hypnotic regressions and my belief is that I was last here during the great war and before that I was a 7th century cartographer ..


October 20th, 2024 12:49

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arqios said:

Up in smoke we go one day!

October 20th, 2024 06:22

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Teddy.15 said:

Your incredible depth of appreciation for your life is flawless you truly are so proud of every day you have been alive and I feel it in every word, such a joy and yes reincarnation is something I actually do believe in, lets hope you bring your positive and gracious vibes once again my dear sorrenbarret 🌹 💙

October 20th, 2024 05:52