Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
A bad rap(tor)?
Cassie58 said:
You know vultures get bad press. For the first time Soren I am looking at them in a different light, after reading your poem. Normally they give me the creeps. All the best.
August 14th, 2024 18:32
Cassie58 said:
You know vultures get bad press. For the first time Soren I am looking at them in a different light, after reading your poem. Normally they give me the creeps. All the best.
August 14th, 2024 18:32
Time eroded memories
Thomas W Case said:
Superb and powerful work. Magnificent.
August 14th, 2024 17:52
Thomas W Case said:
Superb and powerful work. Magnificent.
August 14th, 2024 17:52
A bad rap(tor)?
Bobby O said:
I love your list or at least my imagined view of it. First I imagine a question for a survey. Now this is not a commentary or judgement , it’s a survey to present just a raw number and observation of contrast
A thousand people asked one question.
“Do you regularly think of paying tribute and listing positive attributes of vultures in a poem?” The contrast without comment is that if surveyed your answer would be yes.
August 14th, 2024 17:20
Bobby O said:
I love your list or at least my imagined view of it. First I imagine a question for a survey. Now this is not a commentary or judgement , it’s a survey to present just a raw number and observation of contrast
A thousand people asked one question.
“Do you regularly think of paying tribute and listing positive attributes of vultures in a poem?” The contrast without comment is that if surveyed your answer would be yes.
August 14th, 2024 17:20
A bad rap(tor)?
Bella Shepard said:
I see them in the neighborhood, and marvel as they soar just as beautifully as an eagle. You raise them up in lovely verse. Such a good write!
August 14th, 2024 07:58
Bella Shepard said:
I see them in the neighborhood, and marvel as they soar just as beautifully as an eagle. You raise them up in lovely verse. Such a good write!
August 14th, 2024 07:58
A bad rap(tor)?
Neville said:
Being both a bit of a horneythologist and a nortyculturist .. I know a thing or two about raptors, including Egyptian Vultures ..
When I was working in Africa a few years back one fell out of the sky and just missed me .. I think it may have had a heart attack .. I know that I nearly did .. Let\'s call that a rap for now eh\' .. Neville
August 14th, 2024 07:18
Neville said:
Being both a bit of a horneythologist and a nortyculturist .. I know a thing or two about raptors, including Egyptian Vultures ..
When I was working in Africa a few years back one fell out of the sky and just missed me .. I think it may have had a heart attack .. I know that I nearly did .. Let\'s call that a rap for now eh\' .. Neville
August 14th, 2024 07:18
A bad rap(tor)?
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, so there\'s method in my madness of feeding sewage to KP. Well, as you say here, it keeps others free from disease. heehee.
August 14th, 2024 07:04
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, so there\'s method in my madness of feeding sewage to KP. Well, as you say here, it keeps others free from disease. heehee.
August 14th, 2024 07:04
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Tom Dylan said:
A chilling poem, Soren. Really enjoyed that. Loved the tone and the rhyme. Reminded me of Poe. A fine write.
August 14th, 2024 06:28
Tom Dylan said:
A chilling poem, Soren. Really enjoyed that. Loved the tone and the rhyme. Reminded me of Poe. A fine write.
August 14th, 2024 06:28
A bad rap(tor)?
Doggerel Dave said:
As one argument for Nature to be left to sort itself, without mankind’s intervention, this is one step towards a greater understanding, Soren.
August 14th, 2024 06:07
Doggerel Dave said:
As one argument for Nature to be left to sort itself, without mankind’s intervention, this is one step towards a greater understanding, Soren.
August 14th, 2024 06:07
A bad rap(tor)?
Teddy.15 said:
I\'d say a quite brilliant rap(tor) I actually rapped it, a very powerful ending. Most entertaining dear sorrenbarret 🌹
August 14th, 2024 05:16
Teddy.15 said:
I\'d say a quite brilliant rap(tor) I actually rapped it, a very powerful ending. Most entertaining dear sorrenbarret 🌹
August 14th, 2024 05:16
Time eroded memories
Bobby O said:
Wind molded clouds of earth —-
Greatly descriptive - and then you pinch home the point of it all. It has power
August 14th, 2024 01:58
Bobby O said:
Wind molded clouds of earth —-
Greatly descriptive - and then you pinch home the point of it all. It has power
August 14th, 2024 01:58
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Bobby O said:
I read this three times, it’s solidly written and its quality flows through first line until last. I thought the opening was especially perfect.
August 14th, 2024 01:52
Bobby O said:
I read this three times, it’s solidly written and its quality flows through first line until last. I thought the opening was especially perfect.
August 14th, 2024 01:52
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Goldfinch60 said:
Those things are always there soren but sometime they come back to us when they are not expected.
Andy
August 14th, 2024 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Those things are always there soren but sometime they come back to us when they are not expected.
Andy
August 14th, 2024 01:24
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Dan Williams said:
I\'m running out of adjectives to describe your work; this is just . . wonderful? Graceful? So sincere? I read it and like it so much before I realized who wrote it, I could easily have predicted it would be you., so consistently eloquent. Bravo.
August 14th, 2024 00:36
Dan Williams said:
I\'m running out of adjectives to describe your work; this is just . . wonderful? Graceful? So sincere? I read it and like it so much before I realized who wrote it, I could easily have predicted it would be you., so consistently eloquent. Bravo.
August 14th, 2024 00:36
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Doggerel Dave said:
Those dreams, Soren….. You’ve just hauled memories back of tormented nights.…. Far too uncomfortable. I feel fortunate that currently my dreams are much more linear and untroubled – But am I (fortunate)?
August 13th, 2024 17:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Those dreams, Soren….. You’ve just hauled memories back of tormented nights.…. Far too uncomfortable. I feel fortunate that currently my dreams are much more linear and untroubled – But am I (fortunate)?
August 13th, 2024 17:50
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Neville said:
Just like I like my coffee .. very noir & then some .. Neville
August 13th, 2024 14:26
Neville said:
Just like I like my coffee .. very noir & then some .. Neville
August 13th, 2024 14:26
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Mase ♪ said:
Beautiful Write Soren! flows so well.
August 13th, 2024 11:36
Mase ♪ said:
Beautiful Write Soren! flows so well.
August 13th, 2024 11:36
One in all, all in one
AuburnScribbler said:
A beautifully written two stanzas here sorenbarrett, that reminds us the importance of a true core unity, despite our many differences.
Bravo and I hope that all is well.
August 13th, 2024 11:05
AuburnScribbler said:
A beautifully written two stanzas here sorenbarrett, that reminds us the importance of a true core unity, despite our many differences.
Bravo and I hope that all is well.
August 13th, 2024 11:05
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem,
deep, dark and delving. 😱
Love it! 👍
Great rhyme and flow,.
captivating throughout!!
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 13th, 2024 09:05
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem,
deep, dark and delving. 😱
Love it! 👍
Great rhyme and flow,.
captivating throughout!!
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 13th, 2024 09:05
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
A beautiful lovely poem. It hits deep my friend. Well done poet.
August 13th, 2024 09:02
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
A beautiful lovely poem. It hits deep my friend. Well done poet.
August 13th, 2024 09:02
Time eroded memories
Tom Dylan said:
A fascinating piece, Soren. Love the imagery.
August 13th, 2024 06:42
Tom Dylan said:
A fascinating piece, Soren. Love the imagery.
August 13th, 2024 06:42
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Teddy.15 said:
Don\'t go to sleep come to the 70 disco with me, oh my dear sorrenbarret this one made me shake, you have managed to get into my mind when I have dreams of the dead and then awake. Superbly dark and actually incredibly relatable and beautifully written. 🌹
August 13th, 2024 04:13
Teddy.15 said:
Don\'t go to sleep come to the 70 disco with me, oh my dear sorrenbarret this one made me shake, you have managed to get into my mind when I have dreams of the dead and then awake. Superbly dark and actually incredibly relatable and beautifully written. 🌹
August 13th, 2024 04:13
Time eroded memories
Dan Williams said:
From dust we came . . .Classy stuff, my friend.
August 13th, 2024 00:27
Dan Williams said:
From dust we came . . .Classy stuff, my friend.
August 13th, 2024 00:27
Time eroded memories
Neville said:
I have long found it helpful to take notes in order to help preserve situations, circumstances and events encountered along the way .. I now find it crucial .. lest we forget ..
August 13th, 2024 00:07
Neville said:
I have long found it helpful to take notes in order to help preserve situations, circumstances and events encountered along the way .. I now find it crucial .. lest we forget ..
August 13th, 2024 00:07
Point of view
Accidental Poet said:
Have to agree with Neville, he said it all. Great words soren. 👍
August 12th, 2024 21:51
Accidental Poet said:
Have to agree with Neville, he said it all. Great words soren. 👍
August 12th, 2024 21:51
Time eroded memories
Accidental Poet said:
Hold onto those memories soren. 😊👍
August 12th, 2024 21:21
Accidental Poet said:
Hold onto those memories soren. 😊👍
August 12th, 2024 21:21
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