Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
At what point?
Poetic Licence said:
That raises alot of questions and I am sure there are any definite answers, a lot to ponder on this one, enjoyed the read
July 7th, 2025 05:31
Poetic Licence said:
That raises alot of questions and I am sure there are any definite answers, a lot to ponder on this one, enjoyed the read
July 7th, 2025 05:31
At what point?
Doggerel Dave said:
Each of those lines could be extended, explored in their own right. You certainly pack \'em in, Soren.
Room there somewhere for thought...
Interest maintained throughout.
July 7th, 2025 04:48
Doggerel Dave said:
Each of those lines could be extended, explored in their own right. You certainly pack \'em in, Soren.
Room there somewhere for thought...
Interest maintained throughout.
July 7th, 2025 04:48
At what point?
David Wakeling said:
Now this is interesting. It raises some important philosophical questions. Sadly I don\' thave the answers but I enjoyed the journey this poem takes you on. Well done mi amigo
July 7th, 2025 04:23
David Wakeling said:
Now this is interesting. It raises some important philosophical questions. Sadly I don\' thave the answers but I enjoyed the journey this poem takes you on. Well done mi amigo
July 7th, 2025 04:23
Why me?
Goldfinch60 said:
Some of us are more fortunate than others soren, I have never broken a bone.
Andy
July 7th, 2025 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Some of us are more fortunate than others soren, I have never broken a bone.
Andy
July 7th, 2025 01:53
Why me?
Doggerel Dave said:
No accounting for it, Soren. My thought when I see a wheelchair just tells me \"there but for a thousandth of an inch go I\"
Much reality in a very neat form.
July 6th, 2025 19:05
Doggerel Dave said:
No accounting for it, Soren. My thought when I see a wheelchair just tells me \"there but for a thousandth of an inch go I\"
Much reality in a very neat form.
July 6th, 2025 19:05
Why me?
MendedFences27 said:
There are all types of good fortune. Some people get discovered and become stars, others work just as hard and never get an audition. If your poem is factual, your good fortune is keeping you alive. I liked your poem. The construction was unique. More importantly, it asks a penetrating question we all wonder about. - Phil A.
July 6th, 2025 13:31
MendedFences27 said:
There are all types of good fortune. Some people get discovered and become stars, others work just as hard and never get an audition. If your poem is factual, your good fortune is keeping you alive. I liked your poem. The construction was unique. More importantly, it asks a penetrating question we all wonder about. - Phil A.
July 6th, 2025 13:31
Why me?
Teddy.15 said:
I know someone who died from an allergic reaction to a calabroni which is a big black bee we have here in Italy. You my friend are in the ring of a thousand angels whom protect you from harm. 😇
July 6th, 2025 10:20
Teddy.15 said:
I know someone who died from an allergic reaction to a calabroni which is a big black bee we have here in Italy. You my friend are in the ring of a thousand angels whom protect you from harm. 😇
July 6th, 2025 10:20
Why me?
NafisaSB said:
It seems that you were destined for greater things so a bee sting though very painful should be taken in your stride
A bit on the gloomy side but a good read
July 6th, 2025 10:05
NafisaSB said:
It seems that you were destined for greater things so a bee sting though very painful should be taken in your stride
A bit on the gloomy side but a good read
July 6th, 2025 10:05
What were they thinking?
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes and it\'s usually Rock stars that give their Children silly names as well.
There\'s also people with a famous Name as well . I\'ve met a : Betty Davis, George Best and Paul McCartney. Nice one.
July 6th, 2025 09:03
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes and it\'s usually Rock stars that give their Children silly names as well.
There\'s also people with a famous Name as well . I\'ve met a : Betty Davis, George Best and Paul McCartney. Nice one.
July 6th, 2025 09:03
Why me?
Bella Shepard said:
The age old question, why? We can analyze all the factors but in the end perhaps it\'s just, because. How can we explain what we can\'t possibly understand. You gave me a really good think over this one. Excellent!
July 6th, 2025 08:32
Bella Shepard said:
The age old question, why? We can analyze all the factors but in the end perhaps it\'s just, because. How can we explain what we can\'t possibly understand. You gave me a really good think over this one. Excellent!
July 6th, 2025 08:32
Why me?
Poetic Licence said:
A question always pondered, is it just pure luck or do some people have something else protecting them, enjoyed the read
July 6th, 2025 06:22
Poetic Licence said:
A question always pondered, is it just pure luck or do some people have something else protecting them, enjoyed the read
July 6th, 2025 06:22
Why me?
David Wakeling said:
It certainly is a mystery.I knew a man who had a stroke will on a jack hammer.He was in hospital for a while but survives. Others choke to death on a fish bone in minutes.I guess there is an element of luck in this universe.Great poem.Inspirational.Made me think
July 6th, 2025 04:24
David Wakeling said:
It certainly is a mystery.I knew a man who had a stroke will on a jack hammer.He was in hospital for a while but survives. Others choke to death on a fish bone in minutes.I guess there is an element of luck in this universe.Great poem.Inspirational.Made me think
July 6th, 2025 04:24
What were they thinking?
Goldfinch60 said:
There are some strange names which mean strange things to others, and example is my Mary, she is Mary Berry, NO NOT THAT ONE! But when she joined n=my croquet club it was mentioned in the Croquet Magazine that Mary Berry had joined the club and we had an email from another club asking her to come down and open a new lawn for them.
Andy
July 6th, 2025 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
There are some strange names which mean strange things to others, and example is my Mary, she is Mary Berry, NO NOT THAT ONE! But when she joined n=my croquet club it was mentioned in the Croquet Magazine that Mary Berry had joined the club and we had an email from another club asking her to come down and open a new lawn for them.
Andy
July 6th, 2025 02:06
What were they thinking?
Damaso said:
There\'s a great truth hidden in this text, and the symbolic content of the words can imprint inevitable destinies. I really liked the way it unfolds. Thank you so much for sharing it. Best regards.
July 5th, 2025 10:48
Damaso said:
There\'s a great truth hidden in this text, and the symbolic content of the words can imprint inevitable destinies. I really liked the way it unfolds. Thank you so much for sharing it. Best regards.
July 5th, 2025 10:48
What were they thinking?
orchidee said:
Good write Harrible, erm, SB. lol. And there\'s Bill Stickers and Bill Posters too. Not that 100 year old joke again, Fido says to me. lol.
July 5th, 2025 09:48
orchidee said:
Good write Harrible, erm, SB. lol. And there\'s Bill Stickers and Bill Posters too. Not that 100 year old joke again, Fido says to me. lol.
July 5th, 2025 09:48
What were they thinking?
Teddy.15 said:
lol 🤣 this is such fun, I knew someone who actually called her child Minnie because she wanted a boy, but her second name.wasnt mouse. 🌹 Hilarious 🤣
July 5th, 2025 09:02
Teddy.15 said:
lol 🤣 this is such fun, I knew someone who actually called her child Minnie because she wanted a boy, but her second name.wasnt mouse. 🌹 Hilarious 🤣
July 5th, 2025 09:02
What were they thinking?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very fun way to treat an otherwise horrifying reality for some. Parents can be cruel. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
July 5th, 2025 08:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very fun way to treat an otherwise horrifying reality for some. Parents can be cruel. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
July 5th, 2025 08:42
What were they thinking?
arqios said:
This poem plays with the irony and sting of names, where humour barely disguises a deeper commentary on how identity can be shaped (or skewered) by what we’re called. The rhythm is punchy, the tone offhanded, but there’s a flicker of empathy beneath the laughs, especially in the image of Harry enduring hallway ridicule. It reminds us how names can both anchor us and expose us, sometimes through no fault of our own. In its brevity and wit, it delivers a small, strange truth: we don’t choose our labels, but they often choose how the world sees us.
July 5th, 2025 07:27
arqios said:
This poem plays with the irony and sting of names, where humour barely disguises a deeper commentary on how identity can be shaped (or skewered) by what we’re called. The rhythm is punchy, the tone offhanded, but there’s a flicker of empathy beneath the laughs, especially in the image of Harry enduring hallway ridicule. It reminds us how names can both anchor us and expose us, sometimes through no fault of our own. In its brevity and wit, it delivers a small, strange truth: we don’t choose our labels, but they often choose how the world sees us.
July 5th, 2025 07:27
What were they thinking?
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - inappropriate name inflicted should be an indicator to the recipient that the genes they inherited are not worth perpetuating.......🤣
July 5th, 2025 06:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - inappropriate name inflicted should be an indicator to the recipient that the genes they inherited are not worth perpetuating.......🤣
July 5th, 2025 06:21
What were they thinking?
cellinic said:
A wonderful and really a very funny write with rather a deep sense)
July 5th, 2025 06:18
cellinic said:
A wonderful and really a very funny write with rather a deep sense)
July 5th, 2025 06:18
What were they thinking?
Poetic Licence said:
Enjoyable read, its amazing how much effort some people put into deciding a name, only to then choose one that is guaranteed to make their childs life a misery, nicely done
July 5th, 2025 05:52
Poetic Licence said:
Enjoyable read, its amazing how much effort some people put into deciding a name, only to then choose one that is guaranteed to make their childs life a misery, nicely done
July 5th, 2025 05:52
What were they thinking?
David Wakeling said:
This was a fun read.Yes names can be a curse. Very well constructed piece.Excellent work mi amigo
July 5th, 2025 04:31
David Wakeling said:
This was a fun read.Yes names can be a curse. Very well constructed piece.Excellent work mi amigo
July 5th, 2025 04:31
Turn out the lights
Doggerel Dave said:
All been said above, actually. As usual, I came late to the party. I don\'t know where you find the energy and time here Soren, but I for one am really glad you do.
July 5th, 2025 03:03
Doggerel Dave said:
All been said above, actually. As usual, I came late to the party. I don\'t know where you find the energy and time here Soren, but I for one am really glad you do.
July 5th, 2025 03:03
Turn out the lights
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your poem masterfully weaves chaos and order, challenging nature and morality with striking imagery. The raw power of your words forces us to confront humanity’s contradictions—creation and destruction, unity and conflict. A thought-provoking piece that lingers long after reading.
July 4th, 2025 13:42
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your poem masterfully weaves chaos and order, challenging nature and morality with striking imagery. The raw power of your words forces us to confront humanity’s contradictions—creation and destruction, unity and conflict. A thought-provoking piece that lingers long after reading.
July 4th, 2025 13:42
Turn out the lights
Lorenz said:
Let\'s leave the light on so that te flies can come and burn themselves ...
July 4th, 2025 13:27
Lorenz said:
Let\'s leave the light on so that te flies can come and burn themselves ...
July 4th, 2025 13:27
Turn out the lights
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is brilliant, Soren. Truly. The depth packed into each line caught me off guard—in the best way. It’s tight, sharp, and layered with insight. Form and message are completely in sync. You’ve delivered something powerful here, my friend. 🌹🔥👏
July 4th, 2025 12:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is brilliant, Soren. Truly. The depth packed into each line caught me off guard—in the best way. It’s tight, sharp, and layered with insight. Form and message are completely in sync. You’ve delivered something powerful here, my friend. 🌹🔥👏
July 4th, 2025 12:21
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