Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Broken Albatross
Bobby O said:
Atrocious atrocities always arrive abominably. It’s there though, that whole ignorance is bliss thing never lasted long enough for me,
Like Sly said, if you dance to the music you’re gonna have to pay to the piper.
July 15th, 2023 12:31
Bobby O said:
Atrocious atrocities always arrive abominably. It’s there though, that whole ignorance is bliss thing never lasted long enough for me,
Like Sly said, if you dance to the music you’re gonna have to pay to the piper.
July 15th, 2023 12:31
Fear\'s enslavement
L. B. Mek said:
fear is misunderstood
it isn\'t a weakness or a hurdle
it\'s a state of mind, designed
by our evolutionary prerequisite\'s
to help us survive, if we but learn
to utilise it, instead
of wagging a war against it..
(but what do i know)
Bella was right \'Powerful\', indeed
thank you! dear Poet
July 14th, 2023 02:23
L. B. Mek said:
fear is misunderstood
it isn\'t a weakness or a hurdle
it\'s a state of mind, designed
by our evolutionary prerequisite\'s
to help us survive, if we but learn
to utilise it, instead
of wagging a war against it..
(but what do i know)
Bella was right \'Powerful\', indeed
thank you! dear Poet
July 14th, 2023 02:23
Corps of a fool
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'Desperation\'s white water rapids of tears
erode a stone sky, bedrock of my will
Tangled in coils of barbwire fears,\'
July 14th, 2023 02:16
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'Desperation\'s white water rapids of tears
erode a stone sky, bedrock of my will
Tangled in coils of barbwire fears,\'
July 14th, 2023 02:16
Daybreak
L. B. Mek said:
sunrays of promise inked
with poetic intent
(feels like a friend\'s comforting whisper
worded eloquently succinct)
\'soothing\'
thank you kind Poet, lovely
July 14th, 2023 02:14
L. B. Mek said:
sunrays of promise inked
with poetic intent
(feels like a friend\'s comforting whisper
worded eloquently succinct)
\'soothing\'
thank you kind Poet, lovely
July 14th, 2023 02:14
Fear\'s enslavement
Bella Shepard said:
Powerful words my friend. I think you capture perfectly finding the moment of courage to act, it can come in so many different forms. Superbly written dear poet, and truly a fav.
July 13th, 2023 08:02
Bella Shepard said:
Powerful words my friend. I think you capture perfectly finding the moment of courage to act, it can come in so many different forms. Superbly written dear poet, and truly a fav.
July 13th, 2023 08:02
Corps of a fool
Teddy.15 said:
A wonderful poem ❤️
Desperation\'s white water rapids of tears
erode a stone sky, bedrock of my will
Tangled in coils of barbwire fears,
submerged below debris, thorn crowned lungs fill
Kudos X
July 11th, 2023 14:39
Teddy.15 said:
A wonderful poem ❤️
Desperation\'s white water rapids of tears
erode a stone sky, bedrock of my will
Tangled in coils of barbwire fears,
submerged below debris, thorn crowned lungs fill
Kudos X
July 11th, 2023 14:39
Character
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, we curate our character
from the sensations we experience
sculpting ourselves with each
deed or spoken word and aspiring
to become, that which we
desire to be recognised for, by those
in our lives, we care about
(a great write! wise Poet
words to contemplate, not just read and forget)
July 7th, 2023 02:17
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, we curate our character
from the sensations we experience
sculpting ourselves with each
deed or spoken word and aspiring
to become, that which we
desire to be recognised for, by those
in our lives, we care about
(a great write! wise Poet
words to contemplate, not just read and forget)
July 7th, 2023 02:17
Deicide
L. B. Mek said:
Spinoza would so agree, my wise friend!
if you\'re going to afford your chosen deity
all the praise and blame, then surely
it behoves you to witness, that deity\'s
presence, in all that you see and feel...
(when the sky is choking
from all the fumes we send up
it rains it back down on us
but those humble trees, getting
chopped every second
and forced to inhale humanity\'s
toxic legacy, merely - steadfastly
afford us a constant supply
of the oxygen, we need to exist..)
such a great write! thank you
July 7th, 2023 02:10
L. B. Mek said:
Spinoza would so agree, my wise friend!
if you\'re going to afford your chosen deity
all the praise and blame, then surely
it behoves you to witness, that deity\'s
presence, in all that you see and feel...
(when the sky is choking
from all the fumes we send up
it rains it back down on us
but those humble trees, getting
chopped every second
and forced to inhale humanity\'s
toxic legacy, merely - steadfastly
afford us a constant supply
of the oxygen, we need to exist..)
such a great write! thank you
July 7th, 2023 02:10
From the heart
L. B. Mek said:
beyond our ink\'s projected personas
let us, reveal boldly
scribble defiantly, to insure
imbued in all that we seek to share
with the world, is a lasting legacy
curated by our writing\'s, innate sincerity
and thereby
letting our poems become a part
of our integrity and worth...
(a write i really relate to dear Poet
as, in aspiring to reach our artistic heights
we sometimes forget, that
our words need to be a reflection
of ourselves, not just a description
of all that surrounds, us
thank you! such a meaningful write)
I read and try to heed
July 7th, 2023 02:00
L. B. Mek said:
beyond our ink\'s projected personas
let us, reveal boldly
scribble defiantly, to insure
imbued in all that we seek to share
with the world, is a lasting legacy
curated by our writing\'s, innate sincerity
and thereby
letting our poems become a part
of our integrity and worth...
(a write i really relate to dear Poet
as, in aspiring to reach our artistic heights
we sometimes forget, that
our words need to be a reflection
of ourselves, not just a description
of all that surrounds, us
thank you! such a meaningful write)
I read and try to heed
July 7th, 2023 02:00
Character
Neville said:
I like the way you look at things .. and then .. you see them .. well penned my friend ... Neville
July 6th, 2023 11:54
Neville said:
I like the way you look at things .. and then .. you see them .. well penned my friend ... Neville
July 6th, 2023 11:54
Mists of Melville
christopher c cohen said:
As a (former) sailor, I enjoy these descriptions. Very evocative.
July 5th, 2023 19:18
christopher c cohen said:
As a (former) sailor, I enjoy these descriptions. Very evocative.
July 5th, 2023 19:18
Deicide
orchidee said:
Did the spellchecker come up with \'Decide\'?! heehee.
There\'s somewhat cryptic, yet true, phrases, about God - All-Knowing, All-Encompassing, etc.
July 5th, 2023 02:10
orchidee said:
Did the spellchecker come up with \'Decide\'?! heehee.
There\'s somewhat cryptic, yet true, phrases, about God - All-Knowing, All-Encompassing, etc.
July 5th, 2023 02:10
Fire, water, air and earth
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing )) I liked reading your poem 🙂 lovely way with words
July 4th, 2023 16:03
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing )) I liked reading your poem 🙂 lovely way with words
July 4th, 2023 16:03
Listen
Caring dove said:
This is so nice ! Lovely poem
Your last lines ‘ you only need to listen ‘ that’s very similar to what I wrote in my latest poem about birds
Nature has so much to say ))
July 4th, 2023 15:54
Caring dove said:
This is so nice ! Lovely poem
Your last lines ‘ you only need to listen ‘ that’s very similar to what I wrote in my latest poem about birds
Nature has so much to say ))
July 4th, 2023 15:54
From the heart
Goldfinch60 said:
Inside me my love far all is never ending.
Andy
July 4th, 2023 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Inside me my love far all is never ending.
Andy
July 4th, 2023 01:20
From the heart
Bella Shepard said:
The heart says \"let go of things you can\'t control\". Take each day as it comes, and deal with whatever it brings. Speak the truth and be content in doing the very best that you can. Thank you my friend, for this simply wonderful poem!
July 3rd, 2023 12:06
Bella Shepard said:
The heart says \"let go of things you can\'t control\". Take each day as it comes, and deal with whatever it brings. Speak the truth and be content in doing the very best that you can. Thank you my friend, for this simply wonderful poem!
July 3rd, 2023 12:06
Cynic\'s love
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks L.B. your words serve to inspire and brighten the day. So appreciate your remarks
July 3rd, 2023 06:37
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks L.B. your words serve to inspire and brighten the day. So appreciate your remarks
July 3rd, 2023 06:37
Cynic\'s love
L. B. Mek said:
delusional fools tend to read our words
upside down
choosing to see what they want to see
while we strive
to deliver everything n anything
they may need of us
and so that disconnect, surreal
is imbued subtly, absurdly
within relationships
we once assumed
as that all-important, in our lives...
(i so relate, dear wise Poet
still, onwards
breath to step, till we learn
to forget, onwards
we can but strive, to survive)
July 3rd, 2023 02:09
L. B. Mek said:
delusional fools tend to read our words
upside down
choosing to see what they want to see
while we strive
to deliver everything n anything
they may need of us
and so that disconnect, surreal
is imbued subtly, absurdly
within relationships
we once assumed
as that all-important, in our lives...
(i so relate, dear wise Poet
still, onwards
breath to step, till we learn
to forget, onwards
we can but strive, to survive)
July 3rd, 2023 02:09
Cynic\'s love
Bobby O said:
Nice phrase and metaphor. If we pretend we slid the last stanza to the top then the finish had a touch of optimism and the down and dirty start w lacerated and absurd sets a no nonsense tone ?
July 1st, 2023 18:00
Bobby O said:
Nice phrase and metaphor. If we pretend we slid the last stanza to the top then the finish had a touch of optimism and the down and dirty start w lacerated and absurd sets a no nonsense tone ?
July 1st, 2023 18:00
A bird
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, i have learnt the hard way
as well, now
i only look for homing Pigeon\'s
just that, they\'re not that easy to find
I find...
(I so relate, dear Poet
I hope fate affords you kindness
enough
and delivers you a homing Pigeon
for your generous heart, one more
time, for keeps, this time)
June 30th, 2023 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, i have learnt the hard way
as well, now
i only look for homing Pigeon\'s
just that, they\'re not that easy to find
I find...
(I so relate, dear Poet
I hope fate affords you kindness
enough
and delivers you a homing Pigeon
for your generous heart, one more
time, for keeps, this time)
June 30th, 2023 04:49
Discounted
L. B. Mek said:
an ant\'s strength, putting us to shame
yet we parade like our foot size
means we can stomp over all other
life;
abuse our cows, keep them impregnated
their whole miserable life
just so we can
make milkshakes from their
misery n strife;
I laugh at people\'s, brazen
assumptions of what evil is
while cracking an egg, every morning
and trying to dictate, who
gets the right to define, if
an embryo is a fetus or a life
to be protected
while loudly proclaiming
\'I\'ll take mine sunny side up\'
...
what word defines a person
better than, the ultimate:
\'hypocrite\'
June 30th, 2023 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
an ant\'s strength, putting us to shame
yet we parade like our foot size
means we can stomp over all other
life;
abuse our cows, keep them impregnated
their whole miserable life
just so we can
make milkshakes from their
misery n strife;
I laugh at people\'s, brazen
assumptions of what evil is
while cracking an egg, every morning
and trying to dictate, who
gets the right to define, if
an embryo is a fetus or a life
to be protected
while loudly proclaiming
\'I\'ll take mine sunny side up\'
...
what word defines a person
better than, the ultimate:
\'hypocrite\'
June 30th, 2023 04:44
Wash it down
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(sleek, sweat drenched and sick
we swallow lies as facts of surreal
wash it down
with that blue and red pill, Hollywood
spider\'s in our horizons
cobwebs rooting our steps
swimming to fly
running to find a peaceful sleep
straining to relax serene
we progress with each blink of regress
and smile, those surgical white teeth
while inside
our heart\'s are rotting gangrene
still, a new dawning
and our clown masks appear
bright and eager
daring to dream, daring to believe
in a better, once promised
to our great, great, great, great, great
kin
yeah, we wait! knowing
one way or another, death
will deliver
mercy to those kids on deathbeds
worldwide
gifting hope, in each brave smile
with eyes shut tight
baring a pain, they\'ll never comprehend..)
June 26th, 2023 03:15
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(sleek, sweat drenched and sick
we swallow lies as facts of surreal
wash it down
with that blue and red pill, Hollywood
spider\'s in our horizons
cobwebs rooting our steps
swimming to fly
running to find a peaceful sleep
straining to relax serene
we progress with each blink of regress
and smile, those surgical white teeth
while inside
our heart\'s are rotting gangrene
still, a new dawning
and our clown masks appear
bright and eager
daring to dream, daring to believe
in a better, once promised
to our great, great, great, great, great
kin
yeah, we wait! knowing
one way or another, death
will deliver
mercy to those kids on deathbeds
worldwide
gifting hope, in each brave smile
with eyes shut tight
baring a pain, they\'ll never comprehend..)
June 26th, 2023 03:15
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