Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Destination\'s dream
Doggerel Dave said:

All life, it seems Soren is propelled by a Random Generator.....

October 14th, 2024 05:56

Ants
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words soren, ants are amazing creatures but they are also an awful nuisance.

Andy

October 14th, 2024 00:48

Ants
Thad Wilk said:

Awesome poem!! πŸ’―
We have ( Fire Ants )
here In Texas,
One burning πŸ”₯ bite you\'ll be
a scratching for a week! πŸ˜”
Don\'t wanna step on their nest!
Best regards peace ✌️ Thad

October 13th, 2024 18:40

Ants
Thomas W Case said:

You paint this scene well.

October 13th, 2024 12:42

Ants
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

October 13th, 2024 08:28

Ants
Doggerel Dave said:

Very true, Soren: Organisation, exploitation, military might.
Text book ant study there.

October 13th, 2024 04:46

Unknown self
Goldfinch60 said:

The unknown can also bring such wonder to our lives soren. Very good words.

Andy

October 13th, 2024 02:04

Unknown self
Dan Williams said:

I so wish I could embrace this view, another of your classics.

October 12th, 2024 23:53

A drop
Dan Williams said:

oooh, \"Droplets now cling adhesively
infinitesimally small\" is just magic. \"to ocean, original giver\" isn\'t bad either. You continue to better yourself.

October 12th, 2024 23:34

Unknown self
arqios said:

β€˜Know thyself,” it has been said but not as easy as jam and bread!

October 12th, 2024 19:43

Unknown self
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

October 12th, 2024 18:55

Unknown self
rebellion_in_sanity said:

The theme of self discovery feels so necessary. The line which seemed to leap at me and asked me to take notice was \'making our inner nest, host to a ghost\'. Just WOW! Great theme expressed in lovely way. Thank you

October 12th, 2024 07:30

A drop
Goldfinch60 said:

So true soren, I habve written about this many times.

Andy

October 12th, 2024 01:58

A drop
Thad Wilk said:

A wonderful poem
thought provoking and
eloquently expressed! πŸ‘
Great rhyme and \'flows\'
like a gentle stream! πŸ’¦
My pleasure to read!!
Best regards peace ✌️ Thad

October 11th, 2024 21:18

A drop
peet said:

Water can flow. Water can crash. Be water, my friend.
(Words by Bruce Lee).
Very well written. Looking forward to read more from ya.

October 11th, 2024 13:51

Life is but a dream
tallisman said:

Beautifully expressed.

October 11th, 2024 11:35

A drop
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

October 11th, 2024 10:08

A drop
Tony36 said:

Bravo

October 11th, 2024 09:40

A drop
Neville said:



you have just put your finger write on what is essentially a perpetual circle or cycle if we a talking in washing machine terms .. nice one sir

October 11th, 2024 07:10

Hurricane
rebellion_in_sanity said:

The poem paints the picture effortlessly like the deft brush strokes of a painter. Captivating!

October 11th, 2024 06:58

A drop
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Absolutely loved the poem!

October 11th, 2024 06:54

A drop
arqios said:

Both powerful and fearsome, water is… as is this poem!

October 11th, 2024 06:07

Hurricane
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words soren on an awful occurrence.

Andy

October 11th, 2024 01:47

Hurricane
Neville said:


I hope this whole thing blows over real quickly and with no more loss of life .. I don\'t think many here realise just how devastating these things can be .. I am thinking of you all .. Neville

October 11th, 2024 01:33

Hurricane
Thad Wilk said:

Powerful penning
awesomazing imagery! 😳
Last stanza really rocks!! ⚑ 🌩️
Brilliantly composed my friend! πŸ‘
Best regards peace ✌️ Thad

October 10th, 2024 21:35

Hurricane
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 10th, 2024 12:39

Hurricane
MaxSmith said:

Great imagery you creates here, I almost feel as I\'m right there.

I really enjoyed. Nice work.

October 10th, 2024 11:14

Hurricane
orchidee said:

Good write, and unfortunately true SB.

October 10th, 2024 10:19

Hurricane
arqios said:

The imagery of battle and war is quite effective. Hope you are safe and dry.

October 10th, 2024 05:33

Hurricane
Teddy.15 said:

A magnificent piece that really churns the reader, thinking of you dear sorrenbarret 🌹 stay safe dear poetry friend. πŸ’™

October 10th, 2024 05:21



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