Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Points of light
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Simply wow! \'in drips that form pools of dreams\' - my dream line. Loved the poem!
December 7th, 2024 09:24
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Simply wow! \'in drips that form pools of dreams\' - my dream line. Loved the poem!
December 7th, 2024 09:24
Points of light
teardrop said:
Very enjoyable read, loved loved loved the 2nd stanza Songs of primitive memory
played on cricket\'s legs...breath taking!
December 7th, 2024 05:35
teardrop said:
Very enjoyable read, loved loved loved the 2nd stanza Songs of primitive memory
played on cricket\'s legs...breath taking!
December 7th, 2024 05:35
Points of light
Neville said:
Its amazing what one might find in darkness .. one only need look long and hard enough .. absolutely dazzling poetry sorenbarrett 👍
December 7th, 2024 05:21
Neville said:
Its amazing what one might find in darkness .. one only need look long and hard enough .. absolutely dazzling poetry sorenbarrett 👍
December 7th, 2024 05:21
Sleep child
Goldfinch60 said:
What many do to children nowadays is appalling soren, children should always be protected.
Andy
December 7th, 2024 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
What many do to children nowadays is appalling soren, children should always be protected.
Andy
December 7th, 2024 02:13
Sleep child
Dan Williams said:
A little bitter, unsure of resolve, maybe none to be had. Truth here though.
December 7th, 2024 01:02
Dan Williams said:
A little bitter, unsure of resolve, maybe none to be had. Truth here though.
December 7th, 2024 01:02
Sleep child
arqios said:
Quite gruesome there and to the point. Had to double back and re-approach to allay the onset of PTSD. So quite effectively put together there! Breathing is back again too. You’re slugging with the good stuff this writing season.
December 6th, 2024 14:31
arqios said:
Quite gruesome there and to the point. Had to double back and re-approach to allay the onset of PTSD. So quite effectively put together there! Breathing is back again too. You’re slugging with the good stuff this writing season.
December 6th, 2024 14:31
Sleep child
Neville said:
Life can be so unnecessarily brutal can\'t it .. and the reason there\'s so much of it around is because there are far too many brutes ..
December 6th, 2024 11:27
Neville said:
Life can be so unnecessarily brutal can\'t it .. and the reason there\'s so much of it around is because there are far too many brutes ..
December 6th, 2024 11:27
Sleep child
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Soren! A dream or a nightmare! A wonderfully provocative write on the horror of child abuse, or any abuse. The ending has a real serial killer, Texas Chainsaw Massacre feel to it. Fitting for the subject…exposing the true evil of the abuser as well as the effect we all as parents and society can cast on children (fears, hate, etc), if i am interpreting the last part correctly. Regardless, a masterfully written, concise poem, that invites multiple reada! Bravo! 🌹👏
December 6th, 2024 09:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Soren! A dream or a nightmare! A wonderfully provocative write on the horror of child abuse, or any abuse. The ending has a real serial killer, Texas Chainsaw Massacre feel to it. Fitting for the subject…exposing the true evil of the abuser as well as the effect we all as parents and society can cast on children (fears, hate, etc), if i am interpreting the last part correctly. Regardless, a masterfully written, concise poem, that invites multiple reada! Bravo! 🌹👏
December 6th, 2024 09:03
Sleep child
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahh, another idea for KP\'s dinner - aging meat. I don\'t care how old it is. She\'s mutton dressed up as lamb anyway! lol.
December 6th, 2024 08:01
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahh, another idea for KP\'s dinner - aging meat. I don\'t care how old it is. She\'s mutton dressed up as lamb anyway! lol.
December 6th, 2024 08:01
The bee and the fox
teardrop said:
I\'m s big fan in rhyming poetry and you penned in flawlessly in this poem. Also put a smile on my face, thank you.
December 6th, 2024 05:54
teardrop said:
I\'m s big fan in rhyming poetry and you penned in flawlessly in this poem. Also put a smile on my face, thank you.
December 6th, 2024 05:54
The bee and the fox
teardrop said:
I\'m s big fan in rhyming poetry and you penned in flawlessly in this poem. Also put a smile on my face, thank you.
December 6th, 2024 05:54
teardrop said:
I\'m s big fan in rhyming poetry and you penned in flawlessly in this poem. Also put a smile on my face, thank you.
December 6th, 2024 05:54
Sleep child
Poetic Licence said:
A few words that are very powerful, for me open up some raw nerves, but it does highlight that not every child lives in a candy store and has an even opportunity in life, Thank you Soren
December 6th, 2024 05:35
Poetic Licence said:
A few words that are very powerful, for me open up some raw nerves, but it does highlight that not every child lives in a candy store and has an even opportunity in life, Thank you Soren
December 6th, 2024 05:35
Sleep child
Teddy.15 said:
Your imagery is profoundly disturbing so you have certainly achieved excellence as usual dearest sorrenbarret, the contrast between those children living surrounded by love and tranquility support roofs and all they desire to become a grown up then those who have no chances at all. Makes my heart bleed dear friend. A truly wonderful piece of writing. Both side of the coin here. 🌹
December 6th, 2024 05:14
Teddy.15 said:
Your imagery is profoundly disturbing so you have certainly achieved excellence as usual dearest sorrenbarret, the contrast between those children living surrounded by love and tranquility support roofs and all they desire to become a grown up then those who have no chances at all. Makes my heart bleed dear friend. A truly wonderful piece of writing. Both side of the coin here. 🌹
December 6th, 2024 05:14
Sleep child
Cassie58 said:
Nightmares. So graphic is this write Soren. You reminded me why I don’t visit the butchers. It’s the hanging carcasses that send my mind wandering. Eight lines which have brutal impact.
December 6th, 2024 04:35
Cassie58 said:
Nightmares. So graphic is this write Soren. You reminded me why I don’t visit the butchers. It’s the hanging carcasses that send my mind wandering. Eight lines which have brutal impact.
December 6th, 2024 04:35
The bee and the fox
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, we all return to where we were from.
Andy
December 6th, 2024 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, we all return to where we were from.
Andy
December 6th, 2024 02:19
The bee and the fox
Dan Williams said:
You manage to convey most of a message in ten lines that takes me five verses. This is more fine work.
December 6th, 2024 00:56
Dan Williams said:
You manage to convey most of a message in ten lines that takes me five verses. This is more fine work.
December 6th, 2024 00:56
The bee and the fox
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem
short and sweet!! 👍
Great rhyme and flow,
to read a real treat!!!💯🤩
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 5th, 2024 21:38
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem
short and sweet!! 👍
Great rhyme and flow,
to read a real treat!!!💯🤩
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 5th, 2024 21:38
The bee and the fox
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. The rhyme and meter is impeccable.
December 5th, 2024 12:54
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. The rhyme and meter is impeccable.
December 5th, 2024 12:54
The bee and the fox
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dog once ran away and eventually came running home side-by-side with a fox. No joke. The two made friends! LOL! She\'s also been stung by bees before. They did not make friends! 🤣 A wonderful poem, Soren. Enjoyed it thoroughly, my friend! ❤️🙏
December 5th, 2024 08:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dog once ran away and eventually came running home side-by-side with a fox. No joke. The two made friends! LOL! She\'s also been stung by bees before. They did not make friends! 🤣 A wonderful poem, Soren. Enjoyed it thoroughly, my friend! ❤️🙏
December 5th, 2024 08:15
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