Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Darker than black
Teddy.15 said:

Darken than black, superb dreams of someone dearly dearly missed. It\'s when we wake up that it\'s more painful 🌹

August 10th, 2024 07:14

Darker than black
Doggerel Dave said:

The pain of separation... But when sleep and the nonexistent possibilities leave you, and the pain returns, the need to confront....So well pinned, Soren.

August 10th, 2024 06:30

Old fashioned political correctness
rebellion_in_sanity said:

WOW - excuse me for the brevity, but \'wow\' filled my mind when I finished reading the poem

August 10th, 2024 06:13

Darker than black
rebellion_in_sanity said:

I had a strange sensation of experiencing something which was raw and primitive yet artistic and eerily beautiful. Please do correct me if I missed the essence of the poem.

August 10th, 2024 06:07

Old fashioned political correctness
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words soren.

Andy

August 10th, 2024 01:23

One in all, all in one
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good words soren but I am sure that light will get brighter.

Andy

August 10th, 2024 01:09

Old fashioned political correctness
Dan Williams said:

Being kind of hard on the vultures dogs, pigs and chickens, eh? The message stands though.

August 9th, 2024 23:43

One in all, all in one
Dan Williams said:

Are you cranking out these gems every day? Amazing.

August 9th, 2024 23:33

One in all, all in one
Thad Wilk said:

Terrific poem
thought provoking
and true all the above! 🤔
Sugar and salt,
a great
possibility when
It comes to love! ❤️
Awesome read indeed, much enjoyed!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

August 9th, 2024 22:03

One in all, all in one
Doggerel Dave said:

I think that\'s definitely chemistry. Or perhaps complementary. A well polished little gem, Soren.

August 9th, 2024 21:22

One in all, all in one
Cassie58 said:

Left and Right, two wings of the same bird. I saw this quote today. Your poem reminded me. Also opposites attract. Really like what you have penned here.

August 9th, 2024 20:35

One in all, all in one
Mase ♪ said:

Great poem Soren, it really makes you think.

August 9th, 2024 15:41

One in all, all in one
2781 said:

The last line grabs me.

August 9th, 2024 10:05

Old fashioned political correctness
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

August 9th, 2024 09:35

Old fashioned political correctness
Teddy.15 said:

This is wonderful and I would never call you anything but a rose 🌹 such a wonderful peice of philosophy and wisdom. 🌹

August 9th, 2024 09:16

Old fashioned political correctness
Accidental Poet said:

Seems to me the name calling was a immature childish way of emotionally
inflicting hurt upon another. That was many years ago, or is it? Politics I thought was supposed to be about what and how a candidate intends to do to make his or her country better off by earning the votes of the people they represent. Today tactics are much different where they stop at nothing to dig up or fabricate their opponent\'s dirty laundry and throw them under the bus. Politics has gotten way out of control. 🫤 Great write soren.

August 9th, 2024 09:05

Old fashioned political correctness
Doggerel Dave said:

Soren, Soren, Soren – you know this is not what the whole debate, loosely labeled ‘Political Correctness’ by those who do not like the original idea is about.
So the concept that language shapes our attitudes, the way a culture places its elements is long debated.
The most simple and obvious example (which should lead you to determine which side you are on) is that of ‘Chairman’: Argument – term excludes in people’s minds women from the role. Response from the other side (that you?) ‘Nah, rubbish- but if you must, we will use the term ‘Chairperson’ so we can continue to keep up our conservative backlash intact’.
For my money, ‘Chair’ would have done the job. (That’s me!)




August 9th, 2024 07:11

Old fashioned political correctness
2781 said:

It took me time to work out it was not my problem, unless I was the abuser.

August 9th, 2024 06:38

Old fashioned political correctness
Neville said:



sound advice reads like this .. 😎👍

August 9th, 2024 06:07

Old fashioned political correctness
John Prophet said:

So true, well written.

August 9th, 2024 05:46

Old fashioned political correctness
Mutley Ravishes said:

Thanks for the reminder, Soren!

August 9th, 2024 05:17

Old fashioned political correctness
Cassie58 said:

Sticks and stones will break my bones but names will never hurt me. Learned that at a very early age in primary school Soren. Sadly too many these days appear to like the sticks and stones. We are living in a world of conflict. Poetry makes it so much better. Yours is a joy to read.

August 9th, 2024 04:24

One in all, all in one
Tom Dylan said:

A fine write. Works on so many levels.

August 9th, 2024 03:39

One in all, all in one
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work. Powerful.

August 8th, 2024 19:36

One in all, all in one
Neville said:



.. its a jungle out here .. it aint a melting pot no more .. tis lovely ..

August 8th, 2024 14:01

One in all, all in one
orchidee said:

The title sounds a tad Musketeer-ish! lol.

August 8th, 2024 11:58

One small voice
rew4er2nail said:

since regularly receiving kudos (from you) for my postings, I thought to browse some poems of yours, which no matter if a smattering of lines pack a punch.

August 8th, 2024 10:21

One in all, all in one
Tony36 said:

L9ve it

August 8th, 2024 09:53

One in all, all in one
Teddy.15 said:

Soulmates till the end. I\'m salt and my husband is sugar, that\'s what I believe anyway or maybe he is the salt depends on the day. This is sadly profoundly beautiful. 🌹

August 8th, 2024 09:13

One in all, all in one
Jerry Reynolds said:

A fine write, SB. Great imagery made me think.

August 8th, 2024 08:44



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