Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Dust of life
Salvia.S said:
Stunning! Your poem weaves together spirituality, nature, and human experience in a captivating way. The imagery is vivid, and the themes are both personal and universally relatable.
Well done!!!!!
May 15th, 2025 04:44
Salvia.S said:
Stunning! Your poem weaves together spirituality, nature, and human experience in a captivating way. The imagery is vivid, and the themes are both personal and universally relatable.
Well done!!!!!
May 15th, 2025 04:44
Dust of life
David Wakeling said:
A great poem about star-gazing and the human condition.Very cleverly constructed as usual.Very powerful mi amigo
May 15th, 2025 04:28
David Wakeling said:
A great poem about star-gazing and the human condition.Very cleverly constructed as usual.Very powerful mi amigo
May 15th, 2025 04:28
Give and take
Caring dove said:
Lovely and interesting writing .. I liked the read ) there’s a softness to the words in this
May 15th, 2025 03:57
Caring dove said:
Lovely and interesting writing .. I liked the read ) there’s a softness to the words in this
May 15th, 2025 03:57
Dust of life
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Profound reflections on life\'s fleeting essence, where dust and divinity intertwine. A poetic dance of nature, myth, and human existence—beautifully haunting.
May 15th, 2025 03:51
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Profound reflections on life\'s fleeting essence, where dust and divinity intertwine. A poetic dance of nature, myth, and human existence—beautifully haunting.
May 15th, 2025 03:51
Dust of life
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully enjoyable read, some lovely lines and imagery, nicely done
May 15th, 2025 03:46
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully enjoyable read, some lovely lines and imagery, nicely done
May 15th, 2025 03:46
Give and take
Teddy.15 said:
An incredible sense of peace in this beautiful poem your imagery once again is a kudos 🌹
May 15th, 2025 02:56
Teddy.15 said:
An incredible sense of peace in this beautiful poem your imagery once again is a kudos 🌹
May 15th, 2025 02:56
Give and take
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderfully true words soren, new worlds exist from those things that are thrown out.
Andy
May 15th, 2025 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderfully true words soren, new worlds exist from those things that are thrown out.
Andy
May 15th, 2025 01:23
Give and take
Dan Williams said:
\"deep thoughts that are mined\' indeed. That\'s what poetry is all about, eh?
May 15th, 2025 00:48
Dan Williams said:
\"deep thoughts that are mined\' indeed. That\'s what poetry is all about, eh?
May 15th, 2025 00:48
A lot of wind
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice one Soren
Reflective and surreal
Like the light and wind
May 14th, 2025 16:46
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice one Soren
Reflective and surreal
Like the light and wind
May 14th, 2025 16:46
Give and take
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem, everything in life is a give and take. Sometimes there is more take than give, and vice versa. Sometimes there is a balance. Very thought-provoking and powerfully written, my friend. 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 11:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem, everything in life is a give and take. Sometimes there is more take than give, and vice versa. Sometimes there is a balance. Very thought-provoking and powerfully written, my friend. 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 11:19
Give and take
orchidee said:
Good write SB. And yes - KP gives all to me; I take it all from her! heehee.
May 14th, 2025 11:17
orchidee said:
Good write SB. And yes - KP gives all to me; I take it all from her! heehee.
May 14th, 2025 11:17
What
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The darkness shines in this poem my friend. Having slept in the woods many times throughout my life, this one felt home to me. Love it, Soren. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 10:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The darkness shines in this poem my friend. Having slept in the woods many times throughout my life, this one felt home to me. Love it, Soren. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 10:53
Give and take
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is really beautiful! It weaves together nature and creativity in a thoughtful way. Very well written ❤️!
May 14th, 2025 09:24
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is really beautiful! It weaves together nature and creativity in a thoughtful way. Very well written ❤️!
May 14th, 2025 09:24
Give and take
arqios said:
What a beautiful and thought-provoking piece! 🌿 The interplay of nature’s cycle and the creativity of the mind is captured with such elegance here. The metaphor of roots and leaves mirroring how thoughts and ideas grow and evolve is especially striking. I love how it turns discarded elements—whether fallen leaves or \"rejected words\"—into sources of renewal and inspiration. 🙏🏻🕊
May 14th, 2025 05:46
arqios said:
What a beautiful and thought-provoking piece! 🌿 The interplay of nature’s cycle and the creativity of the mind is captured with such elegance here. The metaphor of roots and leaves mirroring how thoughts and ideas grow and evolve is especially striking. I love how it turns discarded elements—whether fallen leaves or \"rejected words\"—into sources of renewal and inspiration. 🙏🏻🕊
May 14th, 2025 05:46
Give and take
David Wakeling said:
I think give and take is a fundamental process in life and nature.Although my X wife only ever took.She never gave much.Just kidding.This is a wonderfully structure piece .Many examples of how there is a balance of give and take in life.Enjoyable read
May 14th, 2025 04:28
David Wakeling said:
I think give and take is a fundamental process in life and nature.Although my X wife only ever took.She never gave much.Just kidding.This is a wonderfully structure piece .Many examples of how there is a balance of give and take in life.Enjoyable read
May 14th, 2025 04:28
Shorty
Tony Grannell said:
I, too, thought you were poetising about some hard man and then to discover it was a lady by Jove and a famous one at that - Aphrodite. It\'s great to be caught off guard especially after such a fine and powerful introduction. I was engrossed and then stunned, stunned in a delightful way. How I love a good surprise. A great poem.
Kind regards,
Tony.
May 13th, 2025 11:45
Tony Grannell said:
I, too, thought you were poetising about some hard man and then to discover it was a lady by Jove and a famous one at that - Aphrodite. It\'s great to be caught off guard especially after such a fine and powerful introduction. I was engrossed and then stunned, stunned in a delightful way. How I love a good surprise. A great poem.
Kind regards,
Tony.
May 13th, 2025 11:45
What
NinjaGirl said:
Uncertainty lurks...literally. You are safe for now as it retreats..
May 13th, 2025 10:59
NinjaGirl said:
Uncertainty lurks...literally. You are safe for now as it retreats..
May 13th, 2025 10:59
What
Doggerel Dave said:
Can\'t as usual work out what your metaphor is this time Soren, but I tell you what, I\'m glad I\'m secure inside four walls with the door locked.....
May 13th, 2025 09:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Can\'t as usual work out what your metaphor is this time Soren, but I tell you what, I\'m glad I\'m secure inside four walls with the door locked.....
May 13th, 2025 09:34
What
Tony Grannell said:
When eyes glow, it\'s time to flee, especially so when in a jungle and even more so at night. A brave man you are to have undertaken such an adventure. A high tension verse, cemented with fear before a foreboding green glow and so deftly rendered with poetic flair. Well done, Soren.
All the very best to you,
Tony.
May 13th, 2025 07:23
Tony Grannell said:
When eyes glow, it\'s time to flee, especially so when in a jungle and even more so at night. A brave man you are to have undertaken such an adventure. A high tension verse, cemented with fear before a foreboding green glow and so deftly rendered with poetic flair. Well done, Soren.
All the very best to you,
Tony.
May 13th, 2025 07:23
What
Poetic Licence said:
Lovely imagery on how the forest can play with your imagination, enjoyed the read
May 13th, 2025 06:39
Poetic Licence said:
Lovely imagery on how the forest can play with your imagination, enjoyed the read
May 13th, 2025 06:39
What
David Wakeling said:
I see a hunter expecting a lion or tiger and finding a bird.Great fun read.
May 13th, 2025 04:49
David Wakeling said:
I see a hunter expecting a lion or tiger and finding a bird.Great fun read.
May 13th, 2025 04:49
What
Teddy.15 said:
A stunning visual of the darkness, forests have always given me the creeps, I couldn\'t tell you why though, darkness turns to light and the moment moves along with the ghost. Super 🌹
May 13th, 2025 04:22
Teddy.15 said:
A stunning visual of the darkness, forests have always given me the creeps, I couldn\'t tell you why though, darkness turns to light and the moment moves along with the ghost. Super 🌹
May 13th, 2025 04:22
What
arqios said:
The trees do not answer,
the night does not yield.
It appeared, then vanished—
not a beast, not a shadow,
but something else, unseen,
something heretofore waiting.
May 13th, 2025 03:47
arqios said:
The trees do not answer,
the night does not yield.
It appeared, then vanished—
not a beast, not a shadow,
but something else, unseen,
something heretofore waiting.
May 13th, 2025 03:47
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