Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Mourn the morn
Thad Wilk said:

πŸ‘πŸ‘
Two thumbs up my friend!!🀩
A very evocative piece
of art, great rhyme, flow and blend!πŸ’―
My pleasure to read indeed!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad

December 4th, 2024 21:27

Mourn the morn
David Wakeling said:

This made me think of the days on the farm where everything is dependent on good weather but the good weather never comes.Powerful poem

December 4th, 2024 17:40

Mourn the morn
aDarkerMind said:

dark indeed Soren,
and worthy of many reads and many more comments.

December 4th, 2024 13:33

Mourn the morn
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This poem is filled with despair and darkness and yet a glimmer of hope. Love the last line. Indeed. A hauntingly beautiful write my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

December 4th, 2024 09:56

Mourn the morn
orchidee said:

I dunno if it\'s morn[ing], noon, or night. By the time I found out what \'carpe diem\' meant, there was no day left to seize - night had fallen! Doh! lol.

December 4th, 2024 09:40

Mourn the morn
Cassie58 said:

Darker than dark, but still with a glint of feint light. Brimful of metaphor and wonderful language Soren.

December 4th, 2024 08:13

Mourn the morn
Teddy.15 said:

Your language is outstanding in this, I felt I was dancing all the way through, right to the end, brilliant title and imagery still the king 🀣

December 4th, 2024 05:38

Mourn the morn
Neville said:



I fear we are about to loose it .. there are too many fingers hovering above too many buttons .. and for now, I shall keep digging ..

December 4th, 2024 05:37

Mourn the morn
arqios said:

This poem captures the essence of a world steeped in despair yet holding onto fragments of hope and beauty. It\'s captivating imagery and metaphors evoke a powerful sense of struggle and resilience, highlighting the complex interplay between light and darkness in our lives. Another stirring poem Soren!

December 4th, 2024 05:16

Mourn the morn
Poetic Licence said:

Thank you for a very beautiful read

December 4th, 2024 05:10

Jewel discarded
Cassie58 said:

There is loveliness everywhere for those who look. Sadly some don’t have the time to notice what is within their grasp. Beautiful poetry and multifaceted too. A jewel of a poem Soren. Fine work. A lovely read. This touched me particularly regarding the natural environment.

December 4th, 2024 03:41

Jewel discarded
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words soren and so very true, poems can come from so many items and places.

Andy

December 4th, 2024 01:56

Jewel discarded
Dan Williams said:

Damn the critics, a jewel indeed. Hard to look past where you are bound. Nice.

December 4th, 2024 01:21

Jewel discarded
Thad Wilk said:

Awesome poem and
thoughts penned!! πŸ‘
There\'s beauty all around
abound and still yet found!
So it\'s told,
One mans trash πŸ—‘οΈ
another man\'s gold! πŸͺ™
Great read love the
rhyme scheme!! 😍
Best regards ✌️ Thad

December 3rd, 2024 18:35

Jewel discarded
David Wakeling said:

This is a great poem mi amigo. I read it twice. Each poem contains a heartbeat....Made me think. Well done

December 3rd, 2024 15:02

Jewel discarded
Teddy.15 said:

Fabulous, you know you open a great debate with this. And you my friend are a great jewel. πŸ‘‘

December 3rd, 2024 12:54

Jewel discarded
orchidee said:

Boohoo! Verse 2, line 1: What I thought was splendour turned out to be trash - well, a trout, you know! lol.

December 3rd, 2024 10:02

Jewel discarded
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Amen! A wonderful write on writing and people discovering those written gems along the way, even if others thought they were trash. I often post, engage…then on to the next, almost forgetting the poem I previously wrote, that is until I see a notification that someone liked or commented on it because it spoke to them. Poems are the gifts that keep on giving! And yes, they do have their critics too! But well worth the risk in my humble opinion. Well done, friend! Great poem! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

December 3rd, 2024 09:27

Jewel discarded
Neville said:



I\'m with the geezer in the rectangle just below mine πŸ˜ŽπŸ‘

December 3rd, 2024 05:54

Jewel discarded
Poetic Licence said:

I really like this poem, it highlights to me that different people can see beauty in different things, and that everything has some beauty in it somewhere, enjoyable read, Thank you Soren

December 3rd, 2024 05:42

Jewel discarded
arqios said:

The notion that each poem contains a heartbeat underscores the emotional investment and transformative power of art. This poem challenge its reader to look beyond the surface and appreciate the inherent beauty and value in the overlooked and discarded. It is a celebration of transformation and the enduring power of life-perception and art.

December 3rd, 2024 05:19

She
Goldfinch60 said:

Such wonderful words soren. Some people we meet bring so much joy and knowledge to us.

Andy

December 3rd, 2024 03:04

Once there was a time
NafisaSB said:

from the past to the present - going forward presenting a wonderful journey in your inimitable style using just few lines - fantastic

December 3rd, 2024 00:36

She
Tristan Robert Lange said:

When one comes across such wisdom, nurture, and perseverance, they ought to acknowledge and honor it. You have done both so poignantly friend! Well done! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

December 2nd, 2024 13:03

She
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

December 2nd, 2024 10:51

She
Poetic Licence said:

Beautifully written piece of work, Thank you Soren

December 2nd, 2024 09:26

She
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

December 2nd, 2024 09:08

She
Neville said:



She reads precious .. a real treasure .. you are a very lucky fellow sir .. Neville

December 2nd, 2024 08:52

Once there was a time
Cassie58 said:

Transported back in time. Orange peelings and forget me nots did it, as did sandcastles and scuffed knees. A picture book of imagery. Just lovely Soren.

December 2nd, 2024 08:33

She
Lorenz said:

Where is she ? ....

December 2nd, 2024 08:13



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