Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Silent colors
Bobby O said:
“Sculpts meaning without a note” a powerful line And u love the dog and monkey in a sack though I’m still trying to unwrap it and that helps make this poem great !
August 5th, 2024 05:31
Bobby O said:
“Sculpts meaning without a note” a powerful line And u love the dog and monkey in a sack though I’m still trying to unwrap it and that helps make this poem great !
August 5th, 2024 05:31
Silent colors
Goldfinch60 said:
That colour fills our life soren and will always do so.
Andy
August 5th, 2024 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
That colour fills our life soren and will always do so.
Andy
August 5th, 2024 01:44
Silent colors
Dan Williams said:
Being colorblind forces me to pay attention to descriptions of colors; this does that very well. Thanks.
August 4th, 2024 23:36
Dan Williams said:
Being colorblind forces me to pay attention to descriptions of colors; this does that very well. Thanks.
August 4th, 2024 23:36
Silent colors
Thad Wilk said:
Fantastic poem,
love it!
Eloquently penned my friend! 👍
Great rhyme scheme,
flow and blend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 4th, 2024 22:13
Thad Wilk said:
Fantastic poem,
love it!
Eloquently penned my friend! 👍
Great rhyme scheme,
flow and blend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 4th, 2024 22:13
Silent colors
Teddy.15 said:
And I do now to thee, one of my most favourite poets who also values the colour blue, I see nothing but acceptance and peace in this. We all have our own choices in life and it\'s really literally because religion or sexual preferences or colours are all blinded by love as long as we are happy. And I bow to you darling friend. Kudos. 🌹
August 4th, 2024 15:36
Teddy.15 said:
And I do now to thee, one of my most favourite poets who also values the colour blue, I see nothing but acceptance and peace in this. We all have our own choices in life and it\'s really literally because religion or sexual preferences or colours are all blinded by love as long as we are happy. And I bow to you darling friend. Kudos. 🌹
August 4th, 2024 15:36
Silent colors
Neville said:
Some, as you suggest hardly make a sound while others scream and roar .. My old sensei (now long gone) had a colour for everything and everyone .. He saw me in terms of purple and white .. Neville
August 4th, 2024 13:24
Neville said:
Some, as you suggest hardly make a sound while others scream and roar .. My old sensei (now long gone) had a colour for everything and everyone .. He saw me in terms of purple and white .. Neville
August 4th, 2024 13:24
Silent colors
Bella Shepard said:
We use silence in many different ways, and you have expressed so cleverly and beautifully the various forms, each with its equivalent emotional color. Great Write!
August 4th, 2024 12:51
Bella Shepard said:
We use silence in many different ways, and you have expressed so cleverly and beautifully the various forms, each with its equivalent emotional color. Great Write!
August 4th, 2024 12:51
Silent colors
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Not only do you suggest meals for KP, but also places for her holidays - fetid sewers! How come you know what she likes? lol.
August 4th, 2024 08:25
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Not only do you suggest meals for KP, but also places for her holidays - fetid sewers! How come you know what she likes? lol.
August 4th, 2024 08:25
Silent colors
aDarkerMind said:
one to favour soren.
and my favourite colour you write of,
is Blue.
most impressed.
August 4th, 2024 06:55
aDarkerMind said:
one to favour soren.
and my favourite colour you write of,
is Blue.
most impressed.
August 4th, 2024 06:55
Silent colors
2781 said:
I can\'t like that one. Should I pray for a speedy recovery?
August 4th, 2024 06:38
2781 said:
I can\'t like that one. Should I pray for a speedy recovery?
August 4th, 2024 06:38
Sannyasi to love
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I read the poem thrice. Slowly it dawned on me that the theme is about the ephemeral quality of material possessions. I might be totally off, please do correct me if that was the case.
August 4th, 2024 05:35
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I read the poem thrice. Slowly it dawned on me that the theme is about the ephemeral quality of material possessions. I might be totally off, please do correct me if that was the case.
August 4th, 2024 05:35
Sannyasi to love
Neville said:
I am a great believer in the unity of opposites .. these words seem to endorse the principle and reinforces my faith in it and in poetry .. Neville
August 4th, 2024 02:08
Neville said:
I am a great believer in the unity of opposites .. these words seem to endorse the principle and reinforces my faith in it and in poetry .. Neville
August 4th, 2024 02:08
Sannyasi to love
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren and that last stanza is so good.
Andy
August 4th, 2024 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren and that last stanza is so good.
Andy
August 4th, 2024 01:21
Sannyasi to love
Dan Williams said:
Wow. Discard your heart indeed.! Short and sweet. Bravo.
August 3rd, 2024 23:44
Dan Williams said:
Wow. Discard your heart indeed.! Short and sweet. Bravo.
August 3rd, 2024 23:44
Sirens
gray0328 said:
The rhythm and flow of this poem is something I aspire to gain. Great Job
August 3rd, 2024 10:55
gray0328 said:
The rhythm and flow of this poem is something I aspire to gain. Great Job
August 3rd, 2024 10:55
Don\'t be afraid
gray0328 said:
The peace in the darkness brings contentment. Well Done Soren, I enjoyed it.
August 3rd, 2024 10:49
gray0328 said:
The peace in the darkness brings contentment. Well Done Soren, I enjoyed it.
August 3rd, 2024 10:49
Sannyasi to love
Alan R said:
That last stanza….should be sung out loud!! Brilliant
August 3rd, 2024 10:11
Alan R said:
That last stanza….should be sung out loud!! Brilliant
August 3rd, 2024 10:11
Where zero meets infinity
MendedFences27 said:
Your line, \"death becomes life in the vastness of eternity\" caused me to think. Negative Matter and Negative Energy, which they say must exist or the Universe collapses, may be the souls of the expired. Perhaps, the negative energy and matter occupy space everywhere, undetectable, and attach to new life . This cycle could continue through infinity. Well needless to say I admired your poem. - Phil A,
August 3rd, 2024 09:17
MendedFences27 said:
Your line, \"death becomes life in the vastness of eternity\" caused me to think. Negative Matter and Negative Energy, which they say must exist or the Universe collapses, may be the souls of the expired. Perhaps, the negative energy and matter occupy space everywhere, undetectable, and attach to new life . This cycle could continue through infinity. Well needless to say I admired your poem. - Phil A,
August 3rd, 2024 09:17
Sannyasi to love
Teddy.15 said:
For me this reads, take your chance on love instead of hiding behind your own soul. I love your title and had to translate it.🌹
August 3rd, 2024 07:16
Teddy.15 said:
For me this reads, take your chance on love instead of hiding behind your own soul. I love your title and had to translate it.🌹
August 3rd, 2024 07:16
Sannyasi to love
2781 said:
Reminds me of the parable of the tares, where the good stuff grows amongst the weeds...
August 3rd, 2024 06:54
2781 said:
Reminds me of the parable of the tares, where the good stuff grows amongst the weeds...
August 3rd, 2024 06:54
Where zero meets infinity
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren and so very true.
Andy
August 3rd, 2024 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren and so very true.
Andy
August 3rd, 2024 01:23
Where zero meets infinity
Thad Wilk said:
A terrific write,
very creative and
thought provoking! 🤔
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed my friend,!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 2nd, 2024 22:35
Thad Wilk said:
A terrific write,
very creative and
thought provoking! 🤔
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed my friend,!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 2nd, 2024 22:35
Where zero meets infinity
hzugman said:
Finally I can divide zero by zero. Thanx, Soren
August 2nd, 2024 19:31
hzugman said:
Finally I can divide zero by zero. Thanx, Soren
August 2nd, 2024 19:31
Where zero meets infinity
Neville said:
I\'ll take two tabs of what you just took .. amazing mate, absolutely 10/10 +
August 2nd, 2024 12:39
Neville said:
I\'ll take two tabs of what you just took .. amazing mate, absolutely 10/10 +
August 2nd, 2024 12:39
Where zero meets infinity
Bella Shepard said:
Eight beautifully succinct lines that put into perspective the incomprehensible nature of life in the universe, which the vast majority of us never really understand. Thank God for those who do. Exquisite write my friend, loved it!
August 2nd, 2024 08:10
Bella Shepard said:
Eight beautifully succinct lines that put into perspective the incomprehensible nature of life in the universe, which the vast majority of us never really understand. Thank God for those who do. Exquisite write my friend, loved it!
August 2nd, 2024 08:10
Where zero meets infinity
Bobby O said:
In the vastness of eternity
The hourglass of eternity
I really like this piece
August 2nd, 2024 06:57
Bobby O said:
In the vastness of eternity
The hourglass of eternity
I really like this piece
August 2nd, 2024 06:57
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