Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Passing on
David Wakeling said:

This shoots like a machine gun.Wonderful construction and wisdom.Well done

April 13th, 2025 05:31

Passing on
Poetic Licence said:

Forgive me as this is more than likely not what you intended it to mean, but to me it comes across as someone who is only interested in themselves and getting to the top as quickly as possible, regardless of cost to himself or others, than when he makes it, it\'s not what he thought it would be and the pleasure is short lived, hence the bullet, whatever it means I have enjoyed reading this write

April 13th, 2025 05:10

Passing on
arqios said:

Now that has compressed so much in so few lines, bursting with thought and meaning🙏🏻🕊️

April 13th, 2025 04:12

Seasons pass
Goldfinch60 said:

May each season bring us a different joy soren, as do the words in your poem.

Andy

April 13th, 2025 02:32

Unknot the not
James Michael said:

Enjoyable! You sure do crank ‘em out! Kindness can be a rarity, this site was a war zone a few years ago. I packed my bags and left after three years here as Johnny FN Lawless. This place has returned to a better place.

April 12th, 2025 22:22

Seasons pass
James Michael said:

Hard to read with the font, maybe I’ll have an easier time with another.

April 12th, 2025 22:19

Seasons pass
Lorenz said:

A season\'s fire words!

April 12th, 2025 12:26

Seasons pass
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

April 12th, 2025 11:42

Seasons pass
Tristan Robert Lange said:

A most excellent and beautiful write on the passing of the seasons. Indeed, it may be April, but I woke up with some snow today. It\'ll be gone by the end of the day...but quite apropos for the reading of this poem. Wonderful job, my friend. 🌹👏

April 12th, 2025 08:05

Seasons pass
MDStone said:

Soren,
Loved the way you started and finished in the same season. The circle of life! What beautiful snapshots of Mother Nature told from a lover’s point of view. Loved the font that flowered and flowed like the Négligée. Thanks for sharing. I feel like I have new memories.

April 12th, 2025 07:17

Seasons pass
arqios said:

It must well and truly be Spring… “everyone” is writing twitterpated 🥰 poems and this one encompasses all seasons, just wonderful 🕊🙏🏻

April 12th, 2025 05:32

Seasons pass
David Wakeling said:

This is an amazing poem.Filled with delightful metaphors for the seasons.enjoyable read mi amigo

April 12th, 2025 05:30

Seasons pass
teardrop said:

You covered the seasons to beautifully! Especially loved the \" In a gown of roses, her beauty exposed\" breathtaking. Beautiful write!

April 12th, 2025 04:53

Seasons pass
Poetic Licence said:

I think that is the most beautiful way I have ever read of the passing of the seasons, really enjoyed the read

April 12th, 2025 04:46

Scent of the past
Goldfinch60 said:

Smell is the most relevant of the senses to bring back memories soren.

Andy

April 12th, 2025 01:55

How soon we forget
NafisaSB said:

beautiful poem, makes me remember the days when i enjoyed the burning hot sun of my hometown, Chennai, where the weather is hot, hotter and hottest

April 12th, 2025 01:26

Scent of the past
hzugman said:

What a fine combination of thought and scent. You hit a homer with this one.

April 11th, 2025 17:15

Scent of the past
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant use of the senses. My mom loved Hollyhocks.

April 11th, 2025 14:51

Scent of the past
orchidee said:

A fine write SB.

April 11th, 2025 11:31

Flower
Salvia.S said:

Vibrant imagery and symbolism weave a beautiful tapestry of resilience and spirituality. Well written!!!!

April 11th, 2025 09:35

Scent of the past
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I love your use of the sense of smell in this poem, particularly, \"The smell anxiety and anticipation\". Really wonderful write, Soren. A fave for sure. 🌹👏

April 11th, 2025 07:55

You will argue
spilleronsheet said:

Transient nature of mind…no permanence but the evolution of time….beautiful observation dear poet

April 11th, 2025 07:21

Scent of the past
arqios said:

They do tell a story and narrate history as well as its accompanying feelings. 🙏🏻🕊

April 11th, 2025 05:27

Scent of the past
Libellule said:

Vivid sensual write...

April 11th, 2025 05:26

Scent of the past
David Wakeling said:

I like the scents that this poem conjures up. It shows the magic power of poetry.Enjoyable

April 11th, 2025 05:21

Scent of the past
MDStone said:

Soren,
Made me think about past experiences, good times, good people, good memories. But also awakened me to my lack of anticipation for what is to come. New scents bring new experiences. Thank you dear poet for providing an aroma of reflection.

April 11th, 2025 05:21

Scent of the past
Poetic Licence said:

Its not something we usually think off but there are things, thoughts, feelings, emotions connected with smell. Interesting write and observation, enjoyed the read

April 11th, 2025 05:07

Scent of the past
Lorenz said:

Here\'s A theme I particularly like ! The scents of times...

April 11th, 2025 03:57

Flower
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words and history lesson soren.

Andy

April 11th, 2025 01:41

Flower
John Prophet said:

Wonderful sophisticated work.

April 10th, 2025 20:48



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