Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Glory of naught
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I love this existential reflection! 🥰 The contrast between “Glimmering glitter” and “festering sores of decay” shows both life’s fleeting beauty and inevitable decline. Also, that final line was mind-blowing! 🤯 It perfectly encapsulates existence’s cyclical nature. Bravo, my dear friend! 🌹👏
December 29th, 2024 16:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I love this existential reflection! 🥰 The contrast between “Glimmering glitter” and “festering sores of decay” shows both life’s fleeting beauty and inevitable decline. Also, that final line was mind-blowing! 🤯 It perfectly encapsulates existence’s cyclical nature. Bravo, my dear friend! 🌹👏
December 29th, 2024 16:47
Shadows
Cassie58 said:
Night and day, shade and light. There is a point when they are so very closely linked. There is much beauty here Soren. Lovely.
December 29th, 2024 13:23
Cassie58 said:
Night and day, shade and light. There is a point when they are so very closely linked. There is much beauty here Soren. Lovely.
December 29th, 2024 13:23
Glory of naught
Neville said:
There is a lot to be said for nothing & about it too don\'tcha know .. and then, there are those who make a fuss about something and never let you forget about it .. this is ragged and real, just the way I like em .. Neville
December 29th, 2024 13:17
Neville said:
There is a lot to be said for nothing & about it too don\'tcha know .. and then, there are those who make a fuss about something and never let you forget about it .. this is ragged and real, just the way I like em .. Neville
December 29th, 2024 13:17
Glory of naught
Bella Shepard said:
Happy or unhappy, we own the memories that have shaped us. We must live with them, and hopefully put them in some perspective. Love when you challange me to think. Great write!
December 29th, 2024 12:57
Bella Shepard said:
Happy or unhappy, we own the memories that have shaped us. We must live with them, and hopefully put them in some perspective. Love when you challange me to think. Great write!
December 29th, 2024 12:57
Glory of naught
Teddy.15 said:
Reminds me of one of my most favourite people, who now has dementia. I\'m losing a bit of her every day. 🌹 An exquisite poem dear sorrenbarret. 🌹
December 29th, 2024 09:28
Teddy.15 said:
Reminds me of one of my most favourite people, who now has dementia. I\'m losing a bit of her every day. 🌹 An exquisite poem dear sorrenbarret. 🌹
December 29th, 2024 09:28
Glory of naught
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I\'m giving KP debris of rot for supper tonight! lol.
December 29th, 2024 09:13
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I\'m giving KP debris of rot for supper tonight! lol.
December 29th, 2024 09:13
Glory of naught
Poetic Licence said:
A reflection on past wounds and pain, and even though a wound may heal the memory lives on. Enjoyed the read
December 29th, 2024 07:18
Poetic Licence said:
A reflection on past wounds and pain, and even though a wound may heal the memory lives on. Enjoyed the read
December 29th, 2024 07:18
Glory of naught
aDarkerMind said:
rainbow bubbles pop and pour.....
a most impressive write Soren, as always.
December 29th, 2024 05:37
aDarkerMind said:
rainbow bubbles pop and pour.....
a most impressive write Soren, as always.
December 29th, 2024 05:37
Glory of naught
arqios said:
One of those reminiscences… and how they are so real and so fresh feeling, still!
December 29th, 2024 05:16
arqios said:
One of those reminiscences… and how they are so real and so fresh feeling, still!
December 29th, 2024 05:16
Shadows
Goldfinch60 said:
But as each day lengthens
Within this New Year
The nights get shorter
And the shadows linger
Linger for life to be seen.
Andy
December 29th, 2024 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
But as each day lengthens
Within this New Year
The nights get shorter
And the shadows linger
Linger for life to be seen.
Andy
December 29th, 2024 02:49
Shadows
Dan Williams said:
Sometimes I see shadows where no one is standing. Amen.
December 28th, 2024 19:59
Dan Williams said:
Sometimes I see shadows where no one is standing. Amen.
December 28th, 2024 19:59
Shadows
arqios said:
I myself have made acquaintance of existing in the grey, part shadow-part light. Very interesting to see that in poetry. Never fails to catch attention.
December 28th, 2024 19:02
arqios said:
I myself have made acquaintance of existing in the grey, part shadow-part light. Very interesting to see that in poetry. Never fails to catch attention.
December 28th, 2024 19:02
Shadows
David Wakeling said:
This is an interesting rhyme technique. It is very much a song writer\'s style. All you need is a few guitar chords. Brilliant
December 28th, 2024 15:29
David Wakeling said:
This is an interesting rhyme technique. It is very much a song writer\'s style. All you need is a few guitar chords. Brilliant
December 28th, 2024 15:29
Shadows
Thad Wilk said:
A captivating and
thought provoking
write i must say!! 🤔
Have no fear, dark shadows
fade away
at the end of day! Love it!! 😍
Thanks for sharing 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 28th, 2024 13:45
Thad Wilk said:
A captivating and
thought provoking
write i must say!! 🤔
Have no fear, dark shadows
fade away
at the end of day! Love it!! 😍
Thanks for sharing 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 28th, 2024 13:45
Shadows
Bella Shepard said:
A very enigmatic write my friend. It makes me wonder where the boundary of shadow ends and life begins, I think.
December 28th, 2024 12:24
Bella Shepard said:
A very enigmatic write my friend. It makes me wonder where the boundary of shadow ends and life begins, I think.
December 28th, 2024 12:24
Shadows
Neville said:
what\'s not to know, like or love there\'s nowt to fear in shadows no matter how dark nor deep .. .. Neville
December 28th, 2024 10:28
Neville said:
what\'s not to know, like or love there\'s nowt to fear in shadows no matter how dark nor deep .. .. Neville
December 28th, 2024 10:28
Shadows
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this poem Soren. In it, I love the the play with light and shadow, life and death, reflection and movement...each juxtaposition serving to give one a sense of the passage of time and, of course, the cyclical nature of existence. This is an existential poem at its best and the ending 🤯. Indeed, with the absence of light there are no shadows. Profoundly powerful my friend! 🌹👏
December 28th, 2024 09:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this poem Soren. In it, I love the the play with light and shadow, life and death, reflection and movement...each juxtaposition serving to give one a sense of the passage of time and, of course, the cyclical nature of existence. This is an existential poem at its best and the ending 🤯. Indeed, with the absence of light there are no shadows. Profoundly powerful my friend! 🌹👏
December 28th, 2024 09:21
Shadows
Poetic Licence said:
I am not going to claim i fully understand it, but i have found it interesting and enjoyable to read, and will read again later.
December 28th, 2024 06:08
Poetic Licence said:
I am not going to claim i fully understand it, but i have found it interesting and enjoyable to read, and will read again later.
December 28th, 2024 06:08
Hole
Goldfinch60 said:
That well of love can have so many wonderful things down it soren.
Andy
December 28th, 2024 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
That well of love can have so many wonderful things down it soren.
Andy
December 28th, 2024 02:46
Hole
Thad Wilk said:
A very touching poem
of a love 😍 gone astray! 😢
Artfully expressed my friend
in every way!!🏆
Thanks for sharing!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 27th, 2024 20:28
Thad Wilk said:
A very touching poem
of a love 😍 gone astray! 😢
Artfully expressed my friend
in every way!!🏆
Thanks for sharing!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 27th, 2024 20:28
Hole
David Wakeling said:
This is why I don\'t drink. I hate waking up in a dark well. Good poem
December 27th, 2024 18:32
David Wakeling said:
This is why I don\'t drink. I hate waking up in a dark well. Good poem
December 27th, 2024 18:32
Hole
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This...just wow! Soren! What a metaphor for love from the moment we fall onward...and, of course in that falling comes ups, downs, gains and loss...in unique proportions for each person...and, in the midst of it all, particularly loss, trying to make sense of it all and find, if any, inherent meaning to it all. That is what I get of out of this the first several reads, but my friend, this is a multifaceted masterpiece that rewards multiple reads and will, no doubt, invite multiple interpretations...all signaling the reader to what this is...a great piece of poetic art! Bravo, my friend! 🌹👏
December 27th, 2024 17:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This...just wow! Soren! What a metaphor for love from the moment we fall onward...and, of course in that falling comes ups, downs, gains and loss...in unique proportions for each person...and, in the midst of it all, particularly loss, trying to make sense of it all and find, if any, inherent meaning to it all. That is what I get of out of this the first several reads, but my friend, this is a multifaceted masterpiece that rewards multiple reads and will, no doubt, invite multiple interpretations...all signaling the reader to what this is...a great piece of poetic art! Bravo, my friend! 🌹👏
December 27th, 2024 17:30
Hole
Neville said:
it takes considerable skill to score a hole in one .. I\'m betting more occur by chance or by accident .. but are inevitably & nevertheless, more than welcome and celebrated to high heaven .. if that is where it is laid or set ... Neville
December 27th, 2024 11:51
Neville said:
it takes considerable skill to score a hole in one .. I\'m betting more occur by chance or by accident .. but are inevitably & nevertheless, more than welcome and celebrated to high heaven .. if that is where it is laid or set ... Neville
December 27th, 2024 11:51
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