Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Holes in the ground
sorenbarrett said:

Thanks so much for the read and the comment. The tears dry and the ink and poems fade.

August 27th, 2024 05:36

Holes in the ground
Maplespal said:

Even the ink from the pens or graphite in the pencils won\'t fill the holes. But, we write on hoping they get fixed.
love it.

August 27th, 2024 05:25

Vision
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words soren, in the darkness we can see forever.

Andy

August 27th, 2024 01:22

Roots
Thad Wilk said:

πŸ‘ great poem,
thought provoking
and true!! πŸ€”
We don\'t know a book πŸ“–
by reading a single page,
but most folk think they do! 😒
Thanks for sharing!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

August 26th, 2024 22:23

Vision
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

August 26th, 2024 21:37

Vision
Bella Shepard said:

It is true that we are often blinded by the light, but when our eyes are allowed to adjust to the dark it is amazing how much more we are able to comprehend. Wisely said my friend, and beautifully presented.

August 26th, 2024 14:20

Vision
Thad Wilk said:

Short and succinct
a great read indeed! πŸ‘
Awesome rhyme and flow
and a treat to read! 😁
Best regards ✌️ Thad

August 26th, 2024 09:31

Vision
Teddy.15 said:

How beautiful kudos dearest sorrenbarret 🌹

August 26th, 2024 06:56

Vision
Cassie58 said:

Absolutely true . A most interesting outlook and much appreciated by this star gazer. Very nicely conveyed sorenbarrett. Things much close to home can certainly be hidden from us.

August 26th, 2024 06:30

Vision
orchidee said:

A fine write SB.
Erm, does the No.7 bus got to Outer Space? What is the timetable?! lol.

August 26th, 2024 06:00

Vision
Mutley Ravishes said:

I never thought of it that way. Thanks, Soren, and so poetically put.

August 26th, 2024 05:30

Guilt
Goldfinch60 said:

May that new growth always be within us soren.

Andy

August 26th, 2024 01:47

Guilt
NafisaSB said:



August 26th, 2024 00:00

Guilt
NafisaSB said:

lovely write - so eloquently expressed - enjoyed the line \'guilt is the silt..\' - so true..

August 26th, 2024 00:00

Guilt
Dan Williams said:

You have the amazing ability to summarize eloquently, another well-crafted jewel from the master.

August 25th, 2024 23:55

Guilt
orchidee said:

The only \'guilt\' KP has is her \'gilded botox!\' lol. Good write SB.

August 25th, 2024 12:40

Guilt
Cassie58 said:

Guilt is the silt washed down from
the storm

That is a superb line

Better the guilt is on the move, rather than
solidified. That has to be progress.

Much enjoyed. A great read sorenbarrett.

August 25th, 2024 12:20

Guilt
Bella Shepard said:

I suppose guilt comes to all of us, in varying degrees, it is part of being human. A very wise and reflective write my friend.

August 25th, 2024 09:32

Guilt
Teddy.15 said:

How very beautiful and so very true, we can\'t change what is done but we can try not to have it in the future. 🌹

August 25th, 2024 05:50

Guilt
aDarkerMind said:

a most impressive write soren.

one to fave for sure.

August 25th, 2024 05:47

Music of the heart
Cassie58 said:

A fabulous metaphor. That’s relationships for you. How boring the same tune would be lol. So nicely composed. Have a happy Sunday.

August 25th, 2024 02:59

Music of the heart
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true soren, music can take you to so many places and bring every emotion to you.

Andy

August 25th, 2024 01:08

Music of the heart
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant.

August 25th, 2024 00:06

Music of the heart
Dan Williams said:

I repeat myself again: music can save us all if we just let it. Nice work.

August 24th, 2024 23:58

Music of the heart
𓆩Maseπ“†ͺ said:

Beautiful write Soren! πŸŒΉπŸ™

August 24th, 2024 20:04

Music of the heart
Doggerel Dave said:

Assuming you mean close relationships, Soren they are always dynamic in my experience, and your musical analogy feels very apt to me. Thanks

August 24th, 2024 16:26

Music of the heart
Teddy.15 said:

Indeed yesterday in tune today so out of tune it\'s just a mess. lol what a wonderful metaphor. 🌹

August 24th, 2024 16:18

Music of the heart
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

August 24th, 2024 13:00

Roots
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true soren, sometimes we just do not have any idea what is going on.

Andy

August 24th, 2024 01:43

Roots
Dan Williams said:

Let me join the usual chorus of approval, typically nice work. A Wordsmith indeed.

August 23rd, 2024 23:56



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