Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



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Poetic Licence said:

Thought provoking write, rightly highlighting the important issues of today , although I wouldn\'t say it is all down to overpopulation, nicely composed

May 8th, 2025 05:44

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arqios said:

And in some corners depopulation is on the agenda 🙏🏻🕊️

May 8th, 2025 05:15

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Salvia.S said:

This is so powerful and thought-provoking, highlighting pressing global issues with striking clarity. The rhythm and structure effectively convey the urgency and importance of these concerns. Well done!

May 8th, 2025 05:13

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Goldfinch60 said:

The end of the day can be so relaxing but life is so much better when you arise in the morning soren.

Andy

May 8th, 2025 01:46

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Mottakeenur Rehman said:

The rhythm and word choice enhance the reflective, almost wistful mood. Lovely work!

May 7th, 2025 21:44

I thought I knew
Doggerel Dave said:

Great rhymes and rhythm there, Soren.

Moral: Don\'t look back - forward, ever forward?

May 7th, 2025 19:18

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Kevin Hulme said:

I can understand your frustrations.
And it\'s not only Landscapes that change; but People we loved Change or Leave us. Nice one.

May 7th, 2025 15:55

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GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

Short sweet and a great write!!!

May 7th, 2025 12:45

I thought I knew
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

There was a song once; “pave paradise put up a parking lot.” Great write!

May 7th, 2025 12:42

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow. Powerful poem, full of depth. This is a wonderful metaphor that can be interpreted in a few very impactful ways. In this, I initially read it as the passing of life to death and, how, death is really providing comfort and relaxation from a long, tiring, but worthy existence. Well done, my friend. Beautiful! 🌹👏

May 7th, 2025 11:02

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Jerry Reynolds said:

A fine write, SB. I can relate for sure at my age.

May 7th, 2025 06:33

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Salvia.S said:

A hauntingly graceful verse—quietly powerful, with a gentle melancholy that lingers.


May 7th, 2025 06:08

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David Wakeling said:

As I get older I look forward to sleep more and more. Wonderfully created poem.Strong rhyme.

May 7th, 2025 05:50

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MDStone said:

The seasons with all their feels, changes, and challenges also bring their own special “delight.” So much like life. Thank you, Soren, for the introspection. I felt the coolness of the shadows, the loneliness of darkness coming way too soon. But I also snuggled in tired to a warm bed with a comfy quilt. Now I’m ready for another go of it!

May 7th, 2025 05:16

Sacrifice, take the hit
Soman Ragavan said:

You have a rare mind that sees hidden things, fleeting occurrences, the connection between things... In short you have vision.
**VISION. A great poet has spiritual insight and can see truths that others do not. Poets have, in moments of vision, the power of understanding, by a kind of instinct, things, their qualities and the relations between them, which ordinary people cannot see. All true poetry is the product of vision or imagination, for it is the expression of it. The poet idealises the real. There is suggestiveness in great poetry. It suggests or implies much more than it says.**
--Wren & Martin : \"HIGH SCHOOL ENGLISH GRAMMAR AND COMPOSITION.\" (Revised by Prasada Rao). New Delhi : S. Chand & Co., 1994. (Reprinted 1994). (Full acknowledgements are made).

May 7th, 2025 04:24

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Poetic Licence said:

A very relatable write, nicely written

May 7th, 2025 04:06

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Victor Bolshov said:

Beautiful, as always. Few words that introduce you to a lot of thoughts.

May 7th, 2025 03:49

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Lorenz said:

Landscape of shifting seasons...

May 7th, 2025 03:37

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orchidee said:

A fine write SB.

May 7th, 2025 03:29

I thought I knew
Goldfinch60 said:

So many things change in our lives soren.

Andy

May 7th, 2025 01:20

I thought I knew
Salvia.S said:

Your poem is powerful and evocative, effectively capturing the pain of change and loss in familiar places. The imagery is vivid and impactful. Well done!

May 6th, 2025 21:51

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Oh, I know this experience well. Where I grew up, everything is different. Well done, on this Soren! 🌹👏

May 6th, 2025 20:24

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NinjaGirl said:

People destroy what we never thought we\'d once appreciate. Thoughtful write.

May 6th, 2025 18:47

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Teddy.15 said:

A familiar place, so very important and in some cases it\'s not. When I go to London I always hope for this, sometimes .y very old memories are ruined but again it\'s ok, time and age moves us on. . An absolutely wonderful poem. 🌹

May 6th, 2025 13:30

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Thomas W Case said:

I love it. Tremendous work.

May 6th, 2025 12:37

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orchidee said:

And now my poem - What I didn\'t know! LOL.

May 6th, 2025 11:12

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Lorenz said:

I have the same feeling when I look at my environment .As it belonged to a stolen memory ...

May 6th, 2025 09:50

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Damaso said:

It breaks my heart. I share your sentiment. Excellent. Regards.

May 6th, 2025 09:40

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Tony36 said:

Excellent write

May 6th, 2025 09:23

Devil deeds angel thoughts
Teddy.15 said:

What a magnificent truth and so very poetically powerful. Blown away with this one especially because it speaks personally to me. 🌹

May 6th, 2025 05:18



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