Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Between heartbeats
Poetic Licence said:

Paints a picture to me of how time traps everything in some way however small that maybe, i sense a urge to forget the darker bits and regale more in the positive memories, Really enjoyed the read

January 22nd, 2025 07:40

Between heartbeats
Teddy.15 said:

I see a hospital bed and a ticking time bomb that is a heart , I see past present and future wow sorrenbarret this is outstanding. Wonderful wonderful. 🌹

January 22nd, 2025 05:12

Between heartbeats
arqios said:

Such a glorious tension between the transient and the eternal, the ever-present desire to capture and preserve the fleeting moments that define our lives.👍🏻🙏🏻🕊

January 22nd, 2025 04:06

Nature\'s poem
Goldfinch60 said:

Nature\'s symphonies, ballets are artworks are so wonderful to hear and see soren.

Andy

January 22nd, 2025 02:43

Nature\'s poem
Thad Wilk said:

A stunning poem
and painting 🎨 🖌️
of natures fine art!! 👏
Just resonates
with greatness
right from the start!! 🏆
My pleasure to read!!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

January 21st, 2025 22:32

Nature\'s poem
Salvia.S said:

Nature is the art of God, and this poem is truly a masterpiece!

January 21st, 2025 20:25

Nature\'s poem
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

Nature is peaceful as is this write

January 21st, 2025 19:33

Nature\'s poem
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 21st, 2025 12:50

Nature\'s poem
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Nature is the greatest work of art and the of artists greatest muses. A wonderful poem that captures the allure and awe of nature. Well done, my friend. As a lover of nature, I am a lover of this poem. 🌹👏

January 21st, 2025 08:28

Nature\'s poem
arqios said:

This is such a symphonic depiction of the profound harmony found in nature\'s elements, each contributing to an eternal dance of life and art. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊

January 21st, 2025 06:54

Nature\'s poem
Teddy.15 said:

Our lives are certainly a poem, and your imagery is extraordinary in beauty love it all but your last stanza is a wow 🌹

January 21st, 2025 05:55

Nature\'s poem
orchidee said:

I never knew there was so much in Nature. Well, I know now! lol.

January 21st, 2025 03:51

Homographs
Goldfinch60 said:

Intriguing words soren giving a great deal to think about.

Andy

January 21st, 2025 02:51

Homographs
Thomas W Case said:

Superb.

January 20th, 2025 22:53

Homographs
David Wakeling said:

This is very clever and fun to read. Gotta love those homographs,

January 20th, 2025 19:25

Homographs
Thad Wilk said:

Brilliantly penned, 🖊️
very witty indeed!! 👍
Wonderful brevity,
Really enjoyed the read!🥇
Thanks for sharing my friend! 😁
Best regards ✌️ Thad


January 20th, 2025 18:39

Homographs
Cassie58 said:

I had to look up homographs - a new word for me

Intriguing, but I did find alliteration and rhyme and also groupings of words. There is probably much I have missed sorenbarrett. I am hopeless at cryptic stuff:)

January 20th, 2025 17:04

Homographs
NinjaGirl said:

Reading this took a minute, and that\'s what makes it so awesome!

January 20th, 2025 10:27

Homographs
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

January 20th, 2025 10:15

Homographs
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This, my friend, is the challenge with homographs, brilliantly put into poetic form. Well done! 🌹👏 Absolutely loved this! So unique and original, Soren!

January 20th, 2025 10:03

Homographs
arqios said:

Such a delightful labyrinthine poem, highlighting the dualities of our language! Almost like decoding a message as well.

January 20th, 2025 07:22

Tree of life
Salvia.S said:

Words with timeless beauty....

January 20th, 2025 06:01

Homographs
Neville said:



Most intriguing and I like very much .. a pondersome poem for more in-depth consideration later methinks .. well me knows actually .. Neville

January 20th, 2025 04:45

Homographs
Teddy.15 said:

You have used your poetic licence on this one I love your play on words dear sorrenbarret a superb and very unique piece.🌹

January 20th, 2025 04:29

Wound
Teddy.15 said:

My dear sorrenbarret, this is immensely powerful I can see all your imagery and even smell the meat. Your title is especially meaningful to the emotions in this most gracious poem. 🌹

January 20th, 2025 04:26

Wound
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good words soren, sometimes those memories are hard to let go but remember there is always a better day tomorrow.

Andy

January 20th, 2025 02:44

Wound
Dan Williams said:

Nothing new under the sun, time is indeed circular \"always returning to where it begins\". Rings of edgar Poe. Very nice.

January 20th, 2025 01:06

Wound
Thad Wilk said:

A powerful poem,
Poignant and heart wrenching! 😢
I can feel the pain and loss
between each skillfully
expressed poetic line!!! 👍
My pleasure to read indeed!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

January 19th, 2025 21:35

Wound
NinjaGirl said:

no matter how deep the wound, it will always scar. scars may hurt occasionally, but they remind us of the power we had to heal

January 19th, 2025 16:40

Wound
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Different wounds lead to different outcomes. The most minor are not even noticeable over time; however, the larger the wound, the longer the healing time, and the less likely they will go away, whether they end up healing as scars or become festering wounds that can lead to serious illness and death. Well done, my friend. This is thought-provoking, for sure. And completely visceral imagery. This poem is felt more than it is read. Wonderful job! 👏🌹

January 19th, 2025 16:11



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