Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Rust and steel
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
Your words carry deep meanings and much wisdom.
I very much enjoyed the words and the rhyme.
A beautiful piece my friend.
September 12th, 2024 02:01
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
Your words carry deep meanings and much wisdom.
I very much enjoyed the words and the rhyme.
A beautiful piece my friend.
September 12th, 2024 02:01
Shadows
Dan Williams said:
The eternal question, almost unanswerable mystery; makes life interesting, eh?
September 12th, 2024 00:21
Dan Williams said:
The eternal question, almost unanswerable mystery; makes life interesting, eh?
September 12th, 2024 00:21
Shadows
Neville said:
very muchly enjoyed .. can\'t beat a bit o noir can ya .. N โฏ๏ธ
September 11th, 2024 14:21
Neville said:
very muchly enjoyed .. can\'t beat a bit o noir can ya .. N โฏ๏ธ
September 11th, 2024 14:21
Rust and steel
Goldfinch60 said:
True words soren, we all have our own way to make our lives wonderful.
Andy
September 11th, 2024 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
True words soren, we all have our own way to make our lives wonderful.
Andy
September 11th, 2024 01:44
Rust and steel
Dan Williams said:
\"And rainbowโs ends were pinned\" is genius. Where the treasure is. Bravo.
September 11th, 2024 00:37
Dan Williams said:
\"And rainbowโs ends were pinned\" is genius. Where the treasure is. Bravo.
September 11th, 2024 00:37
Rust and steel
Thad Wilk said:
\"clapping\"๐
Terrific poem,
wonderful brevity!!
Great rhyme and flow,
expressed superbly! ๐ฏ
Best regards โ๏ธ Thad
September 10th, 2024 23:08
Thad Wilk said:
\"clapping\"๐
Terrific poem,
wonderful brevity!!
Great rhyme and flow,
expressed superbly! ๐ฏ
Best regards โ๏ธ Thad
September 10th, 2024 23:08
Rust and steel
Doggerel Dave said:
You bring out these nuggets nearly every day, all well polished and honed, Soren.
This one deserves greater prominence. I agree with Teddy completely here re those four lines.
When do you find time to eat?
Faved because I\'ll want to return.
September 10th, 2024 08:41
Doggerel Dave said:
You bring out these nuggets nearly every day, all well polished and honed, Soren.
This one deserves greater prominence. I agree with Teddy completely here re those four lines.
When do you find time to eat?
Faved because I\'ll want to return.
September 10th, 2024 08:41
Rust and steel
Teddy.15 said:
My husband being a PHD in physics and I with my PHD in Poetry
In science, all is sadness
In the mind of a philosopher all is joy
In chaos there is madness
A poetโs Hope none can destroy
Probably one of the best stanza\'s I\'ve ever read. ๐น By the way I\'m the Steel believe it or not ๐น
September 10th, 2024 06:58
Teddy.15 said:
My husband being a PHD in physics and I with my PHD in Poetry
In science, all is sadness
In the mind of a philosopher all is joy
In chaos there is madness
A poetโs Hope none can destroy
Probably one of the best stanza\'s I\'ve ever read. ๐น By the way I\'m the Steel believe it or not ๐น
September 10th, 2024 06:58
A thirsty dream
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
It doesn\'t matter if you write in prose or meter, as long a there is meaning to what you write.
I am a rhyme person myself, but sometimes I enjoy other form of writing.
I feel what your thoughts.๐
September 10th, 2024 01:49
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
It doesn\'t matter if you write in prose or meter, as long a there is meaning to what you write.
I am a rhyme person myself, but sometimes I enjoy other form of writing.
I feel what your thoughts.๐
September 10th, 2024 01:49
A thirsty dream
Goldfinch60 said:
Weeds are only flowers in the wrong place but your words are all in the right place soren, good \'planting\'.
Andy
September 10th, 2024 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Weeds are only flowers in the wrong place but your words are all in the right place soren, good \'planting\'.
Andy
September 10th, 2024 01:47
A thirsty dream
Dan Williams said:
Ah yes, the plight of the writer, expressed so eloquently. I especially like the poems falling out of a dream; a large part of mine originate in slumber. Nice.
September 10th, 2024 00:55
Dan Williams said:
Ah yes, the plight of the writer, expressed so eloquently. I especially like the poems falling out of a dream; a large part of mine originate in slumber. Nice.
September 10th, 2024 00:55
A thirsty dream
Neilton said:
So much talent here ! The rhyming words are perfect and it is really fun to read it !
September 10th, 2024 00:26
Neilton said:
So much talent here ! The rhyming words are perfect and it is really fun to read it !
September 10th, 2024 00:26
Bricks of hope
Thad Wilk said:
๐๐
Two thumbs up
you get from me!! ๐
Very evocative and
penned superbly!! ๐ฏ
Best regards โ๏ธ Thad
September 9th, 2024 19:03
Thad Wilk said:
๐๐
Two thumbs up
you get from me!! ๐
Very evocative and
penned superbly!! ๐ฏ
Best regards โ๏ธ Thad
September 9th, 2024 19:03
Tattoos and scars
River123 said:
Thatโs original 21st century relevant poem.
Luv it lots ๐ซถ
September 9th, 2024 16:02
River123 said:
Thatโs original 21st century relevant poem.
Luv it lots ๐ซถ
September 9th, 2024 16:02
A thirsty dream
orchidee said:
Ahh, more menu ideas for KP in the last half of the poem! heehee.
September 9th, 2024 12:58
orchidee said:
Ahh, more menu ideas for KP in the last half of the poem! heehee.
September 9th, 2024 12:58
A thirsty dream
Thad Wilk said:
A terrific poem indeed! ๐
Bones of metaphor on the plate,
minutes spat out sprouting seeds,
my favorite lines! ๐ฏ
Thanks for sharing
a treat to read!
Best regards โ๏ธ Thad
September 9th, 2024 09:22
Thad Wilk said:
A terrific poem indeed! ๐
Bones of metaphor on the plate,
minutes spat out sprouting seeds,
my favorite lines! ๐ฏ
Thanks for sharing
a treat to read!
Best regards โ๏ธ Thad
September 9th, 2024 09:22
A thirsty dream
Doggerel Dave said:
Certainly made me thirsty, Soren.............................................
Many times here (present company excepted) I feel words could be weeded or better placed or re arranged or not appear at all..........................๐
September 9th, 2024 08:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Certainly made me thirsty, Soren.............................................
Many times here (present company excepted) I feel words could be weeded or better placed or re arranged or not appear at all..........................๐
September 9th, 2024 08:13
A thirsty dream
2781 said:
Let both grow up together until the harvest: and in the time of harvest I will say to the reapers, Gather ye together first the tares, and bind them in bundles to burn them: but gather the wheat into my barn.
September 9th, 2024 07:45
2781 said:
Let both grow up together until the harvest: and in the time of harvest I will say to the reapers, Gather ye together first the tares, and bind them in bundles to burn them: but gather the wheat into my barn.
September 9th, 2024 07:45
A thirsty dream
Teddy.15 said:
What a scummy dream, dipped in free verse, poetic weeds you say? Are you still in Brazil? ๐คฃ Such a wonderful write. ๐น
September 9th, 2024 06:45
Teddy.15 said:
What a scummy dream, dipped in free verse, poetic weeds you say? Are you still in Brazil? ๐คฃ Such a wonderful write. ๐น
September 9th, 2024 06:45
Bricks of hope
Tom Dylan said:
Such an intriguing short poem. Nicely done. Cheers, Tom.
September 9th, 2024 05:21
Tom Dylan said:
Such an intriguing short poem. Nicely done. Cheers, Tom.
September 9th, 2024 05:21
Bricks of hope
Goldfinch60 said:
May that rope pull us all up into a better life soren.
Andy
September 9th, 2024 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
May that rope pull us all up into a better life soren.
Andy
September 9th, 2024 01:44
Bricks of hope
orchidee said:
KP\'s at the end of her rope, or tether - she\'s out of botox! lol.
September 8th, 2024 11:46
orchidee said:
KP\'s at the end of her rope, or tether - she\'s out of botox! lol.
September 8th, 2024 11:46
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