Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
I thought I knew
David Wakeling said:
That\'s progress I guess.They don\'t knock down buildings they knock down memories.Certainly a touch of anger and sadness here,Made me think
May 6th, 2025 05:09
David Wakeling said:
That\'s progress I guess.They don\'t knock down buildings they knock down memories.Certainly a touch of anger and sadness here,Made me think
May 6th, 2025 05:09
I thought I knew
arqios said:
It always saddens me that the “hood” has transformed, eradicating my past along with my sentimental journeying 🙏🏻🕊️
May 6th, 2025 04:53
arqios said:
It always saddens me that the “hood” has transformed, eradicating my past along with my sentimental journeying 🙏🏻🕊️
May 6th, 2025 04:53
I thought I knew
Victor Bolshov said:
Very nice and original rhymes. Indeed, it can be quite an experience to get back to your memorable places only to find them irreversibly changed and forsaken.
May 6th, 2025 03:40
Victor Bolshov said:
Very nice and original rhymes. Indeed, it can be quite an experience to get back to your memorable places only to find them irreversibly changed and forsaken.
May 6th, 2025 03:40
Devil deeds angel thoughts
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine and true words soren, putting thoughts into practice can lead to anomalies.
Andy
May 6th, 2025 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine and true words soren, putting thoughts into practice can lead to anomalies.
Andy
May 6th, 2025 01:46
Devil deeds angel thoughts
Soman Ragavan said:
“Watch your thoughts,
they become your words;
watch your words,
they become your actions;
watch your actions,
they become your habits;
watch your habits,
they become your character;
watch your character,
it becomes your destiny.”
by
Lao Tzu (born 571 BC)
The tragedy is that we have no control over our thoughts. Hitler’s mind told him to wage wars, regardless. We know the consequences. It is the same with all those who launched wars. Thoughts lead in the end to character, which itself defines your destiny.
In the end, we have no control over the whole process.
Soman Ragavan
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May 6th, 2025 00:24
Soman Ragavan said:
“Watch your thoughts,
they become your words;
watch your words,
they become your actions;
watch your actions,
they become your habits;
watch your habits,
they become your character;
watch your character,
it becomes your destiny.”
by
Lao Tzu (born 571 BC)
The tragedy is that we have no control over our thoughts. Hitler’s mind told him to wage wars, regardless. We know the consequences. It is the same with all those who launched wars. Thoughts lead in the end to character, which itself defines your destiny.
In the end, we have no control over the whole process.
Soman Ragavan
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May 6th, 2025 00:24
Sacrifice, take the hit
NafisaSB said:
yes, i see humans also in the same shape, and thank God for all of the above.
beautifully expressed
May 5th, 2025 23:12
NafisaSB said:
yes, i see humans also in the same shape, and thank God for all of the above.
beautifully expressed
May 5th, 2025 23:12
Blackness\' light
NinjaGirl said:
Ah, the black square, this is the black square of poems!
May 5th, 2025 16:38
NinjaGirl said:
Ah, the black square, this is the black square of poems!
May 5th, 2025 16:38
Muse\'s blood
NinjaGirl said:
So satisfying! Perhaps the last poems are written in blood
May 5th, 2025 16:37
NinjaGirl said:
So satisfying! Perhaps the last poems are written in blood
May 5th, 2025 16:37
Sacrifice, take the hit
NinjaGirl said:
Sacrifice precedes success! Amazing message!
May 5th, 2025 16:34
NinjaGirl said:
Sacrifice precedes success! Amazing message!
May 5th, 2025 16:34
Devil deeds angel thoughts
NinjaGirl said:
You\'re not at fault thinking a bad thought! But choosing to continue to think about it, perhaps maybe then a little.
May 5th, 2025 16:33
NinjaGirl said:
You\'re not at fault thinking a bad thought! But choosing to continue to think about it, perhaps maybe then a little.
May 5th, 2025 16:33
Sacrifice, take the hit
aDarkerMind said:
in my opinion Soren, one of your finest pieces of work I have read;
Superb!
May 5th, 2025 12:38
aDarkerMind said:
in my opinion Soren, one of your finest pieces of work I have read;
Superb!
May 5th, 2025 12:38
Devil deeds angel thoughts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
An interesting concept that bears the question, whose the judge of another\'s thoughts. Well, I guess we don\'t have to live long and share much to find out other humans can be. Of course, for those who believe, there\'s God. Does God judge our thoughts? It seems not so long as those thoughts don\'t take root in the heart...which is a broad difference from those who are simply thinking thoughts. For something to take root, it then grows, it spreads and, of course that alone is actionable not to mention that the spreading often goes beyond the individual in harmful ways. A most thought-provoking poem, Soren. Another fave. 🌹👏
May 5th, 2025 11:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
An interesting concept that bears the question, whose the judge of another\'s thoughts. Well, I guess we don\'t have to live long and share much to find out other humans can be. Of course, for those who believe, there\'s God. Does God judge our thoughts? It seems not so long as those thoughts don\'t take root in the heart...which is a broad difference from those who are simply thinking thoughts. For something to take root, it then grows, it spreads and, of course that alone is actionable not to mention that the spreading often goes beyond the individual in harmful ways. A most thought-provoking poem, Soren. Another fave. 🌹👏
May 5th, 2025 11:19
Devil deeds angel thoughts
aDarkerMind said:
worthy of much applause Soren,
as always.
another one to fave.
May 5th, 2025 10:34
aDarkerMind said:
worthy of much applause Soren,
as always.
another one to fave.
May 5th, 2025 10:34
Devil deeds angel thoughts
arqios said:
Unthought out motives is impossible to prove, let alone establish. I wonder how the legal system works this out. Intriguing stuff🕊️🙏🏻
May 5th, 2025 05:41
arqios said:
Unthought out motives is impossible to prove, let alone establish. I wonder how the legal system works this out. Intriguing stuff🕊️🙏🏻
May 5th, 2025 05:41
Devil deeds angel thoughts
Ellen Marsell said:
To live in self-deception for the sake of outward peace and decency — that is the real drama.
A deeply philosophical poem, striking in its honesty. I like it!
May 5th, 2025 04:36
Ellen Marsell said:
To live in self-deception for the sake of outward peace and decency — that is the real drama.
A deeply philosophical poem, striking in its honesty. I like it!
May 5th, 2025 04:36
Life is but a dream
Reynaldo Casison said:
Soren Nice one my friend
Surreal and dreamy rhythms
May 5th, 2025 04:13
Reynaldo Casison said:
Soren Nice one my friend
Surreal and dreamy rhythms
May 5th, 2025 04:13
Devil deeds angel thoughts
Salvia.S said:
A striking reflection on inner conflict—dark thoughts contrasted with disciplined actions, expressed with rhythm and edge.
Love it !!!
May 5th, 2025 04:02
Salvia.S said:
A striking reflection on inner conflict—dark thoughts contrasted with disciplined actions, expressed with rhythm and edge.
Love it !!!
May 5th, 2025 04:02
Devil deeds angel thoughts
David Wakeling said:
I like the exceptional cadence here and rhyme. Some good advice as well \"put out the burning fires\".Made me think
May 5th, 2025 03:59
David Wakeling said:
I like the exceptional cadence here and rhyme. Some good advice as well \"put out the burning fires\".Made me think
May 5th, 2025 03:59
Sacrifice, take the hit
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing and very true words soren.
Andy
May 5th, 2025 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing and very true words soren.
Andy
May 5th, 2025 01:22
Sacrifice, take the hit
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The metaphors for selfless sacrifice are excellent. I could feel the blow,, hear the anvil swing, this is a glorious poem with fantastic use of metaphor and imagery! Well done, Soren! 🌹👏
May 4th, 2025 15:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The metaphors for selfless sacrifice are excellent. I could feel the blow,, hear the anvil swing, this is a glorious poem with fantastic use of metaphor and imagery! Well done, Soren! 🌹👏
May 4th, 2025 15:49
Sacrifice, take the hit
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful dear sorrenbarret. Most enjoyed this. 🌹
May 4th, 2025 10:56
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful dear sorrenbarret. Most enjoyed this. 🌹
May 4th, 2025 10:56
Sacrifice, take the hit
Neilton said:
What a beautifully expressed poem!The rhyme is perfect
May 4th, 2025 07:33
Neilton said:
What a beautifully expressed poem!The rhyme is perfect
May 4th, 2025 07:33
Sacrifice, take the hit
MDStone said:
There are so many ways to protect and preserve. Often it is our own pain that develops us into those roles for others. Becoming bolder, stronger, sharper, selfless… all to try to keep others from accident and pain. A beautiful snapshot of life, Soren. Thanks for sharing.
May 4th, 2025 06:39
MDStone said:
There are so many ways to protect and preserve. Often it is our own pain that develops us into those roles for others. Becoming bolder, stronger, sharper, selfless… all to try to keep others from accident and pain. A beautiful snapshot of life, Soren. Thanks for sharing.
May 4th, 2025 06:39
Sacrifice, take the hit
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful essay on the virtue of sacrifice.So many ways inanimate objects suffer for the common good.This could be taken as a metaphor for the human experience.For examples in War time.
May 4th, 2025 05:32
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful essay on the virtue of sacrifice.So many ways inanimate objects suffer for the common good.This could be taken as a metaphor for the human experience.For examples in War time.
May 4th, 2025 05:32
Sacrifice, take the hit
Salvia.S said:
A beautifully crafted reflection on selflessness—quiet strength shown through vivid, humble imagery.
May 4th, 2025 03:55
Salvia.S said:
A beautifully crafted reflection on selflessness—quiet strength shown through vivid, humble imagery.
May 4th, 2025 03:55
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