All Things
Crystal Hope said:

love the metaphor and feelings you expressed yourself.

wonderful write

January 26th, 2022 15:15

A longing for honey
Paul Bell said:

I suppose this could be Andrew or Harry. One needs a maid\'s slap, the other needs to get from under the wive\'s thumb.

January 25th, 2022 07:00

A moment in time
dusk arising said:

I think this is among the finest pieces i have read here on mps over the years. Very relateable for me in my grey haired years.

Truly excellent and a must for being placed among my favourites.

Thank you for such a wonderful read.

January 19th, 2022 11:47

A moment in time
Travis Kasparov said:

Cool poem. I like the rhyme scheme and theme

January 19th, 2022 10:32

Nature
L. B. Mek said:

soon
but never: too
soon
(wonderful, thanks for sharing)

January 18th, 2022 08:38

Point of view
GypsyLady said:

this is cleverly done with wonderful rhyme and flow, and a very thought-provoking piece as well! Quite enjoyable!

January 17th, 2022 16:39

Aren’t We Special
L. B. Mek said:

\'What is smart? Adaptivity is a start\'
acute commentary
from an observant mind
inking
words of poetic insight..
thanks for sharing, dear poet

January 17th, 2022 06:39

At the end of my fope
L. B. Mek said:

buttery-smooth, flow
kinda like how most lies
are stealthily silken, whispered
to bypass our awareness..
a fun read, thanks for sharing

January 14th, 2022 07:39

Esau
Paul Bell said:

Liberty, fought and paid for, just don\'t mention it out loud, or you could lose your liberty.

January 12th, 2022 06:09

Soft Darkness
Paul Bell said:

This feels like the very end of life and beyond.

January 9th, 2022 09:53

Purpose
orchidee said:

Good write S.

January 4th, 2022 03:27

Purpose
spilleronsheet said:

True so true
Very beautiful and powerful words
Especially hooked to the last lines
Welcome to mps dear poet
Keep writing and sharing

January 3rd, 2022 14:18