Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
A grip too tight
Teddy.15 said:
I have a 12 year old and this is truly and remarkably relatable, you know from one day to the next he has changed, I will reason always and try to shine a beacon but it\'s bloody hard. Thank you dear friend, almost as if you are my inner voice. 🌹
March 8th, 2025 09:58
Teddy.15 said:
I have a 12 year old and this is truly and remarkably relatable, you know from one day to the next he has changed, I will reason always and try to shine a beacon but it\'s bloody hard. Thank you dear friend, almost as if you are my inner voice. 🌹
March 8th, 2025 09:58
A grip too tight
Neville said:
Damn ........................ we were not expecting that .. but I don\'t know why not because it happens all the time .. Neville
March 8th, 2025 08:19
Neville said:
Damn ........................ we were not expecting that .. but I don\'t know why not because it happens all the time .. Neville
March 8th, 2025 08:19
A grip too tight
Poetic Licence said:
A well written thought provoking write, those who create dependency are reliant on our compliance to fulfill their own insecurities and needs, to be in control, loved the read it
March 8th, 2025 05:30
Poetic Licence said:
A well written thought provoking write, those who create dependency are reliant on our compliance to fulfill their own insecurities and needs, to be in control, loved the read it
March 8th, 2025 05:30
A grip too tight
cellinic said:
Very sincere, deep and multi-faceted view on dependency associated with \" bubble of reliance with walls of compliance\". Sorry for delay in reply. best wishes
March 8th, 2025 05:22
cellinic said:
Very sincere, deep and multi-faceted view on dependency associated with \" bubble of reliance with walls of compliance\". Sorry for delay in reply. best wishes
March 8th, 2025 05:22
A grip too tight
arqios said:
Reminds me of the Conor Clapton toddler tragedy… “Tears in Heaven” but on the reverse side the iron grip that ruins people for life- far too many resulting crimes against humanity demonstrate this. 🙏🏻🕊
March 8th, 2025 04:45
arqios said:
Reminds me of the Conor Clapton toddler tragedy… “Tears in Heaven” but on the reverse side the iron grip that ruins people for life- far too many resulting crimes against humanity demonstrate this. 🙏🏻🕊
March 8th, 2025 04:45
A grip too tight
David Wakeling said:
Wow this certainly puts forward the argument against High rise buildings.Very well constructed poem and argument
March 8th, 2025 04:25
David Wakeling said:
Wow this certainly puts forward the argument against High rise buildings.Very well constructed poem and argument
March 8th, 2025 04:25
A grip too tight
Salvia.S said:
A haunting and thought-provoking exploration of the delicate dance between dependence and independence. Well written!
March 8th, 2025 03:53
Salvia.S said:
A haunting and thought-provoking exploration of the delicate dance between dependence and independence. Well written!
March 8th, 2025 03:53
Too warm
Goldfinch60 said:
That heat can be so overwhelming, it is only 12 at the moment and may be 16 durung the day which is OK by me. Hope you can find some coolness soren.
Andy
March 8th, 2025 02:59
Goldfinch60 said:
That heat can be so overwhelming, it is only 12 at the moment and may be 16 durung the day which is OK by me. Hope you can find some coolness soren.
Andy
March 8th, 2025 02:59
Flies
NafisaSB said:
this is such a true and telling message - these obnoxious creatures defile whatever they land on.
wonderfully explained in good detail
March 8th, 2025 00:00
NafisaSB said:
this is such a true and telling message - these obnoxious creatures defile whatever they land on.
wonderfully explained in good detail
March 8th, 2025 00:00
Too warm
Doggerel Dave said:
Stap me vitals - you never told me you lived next door....
March 7th, 2025 19:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Stap me vitals - you never told me you lived next door....
March 7th, 2025 19:38
Flies
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Seemed like a mesterly picture of decay embedded into our lives. Great write
March 7th, 2025 07:49
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Seemed like a mesterly picture of decay embedded into our lives. Great write
March 7th, 2025 07:49
Too warm
Poetic Licence said:
I feel a sense of might become, with global warming, enjoyed the read
March 7th, 2025 05:27
Poetic Licence said:
I feel a sense of might become, with global warming, enjoyed the read
March 7th, 2025 05:27
Too warm
Neville said:
Now that is bloomin hot .. Sounds like a global warming warning to me ..
March 7th, 2025 04:57
Neville said:
Now that is bloomin hot .. Sounds like a global warming warning to me ..
March 7th, 2025 04:57
Too warm
David Wakeling said:
Indeed it hot as hades here at times.A powerful poem. Enjoyed
March 7th, 2025 04:56
David Wakeling said:
Indeed it hot as hades here at times.A powerful poem. Enjoyed
March 7th, 2025 04:56
Too warm
Teddy.15 said:
Yes, only the best for the devil 🤣 oh how I know this feeling, it can be truly unbearable the summer heat here in Italy, I cannot have air-conditioning because I\'m an asthma sufferer and allergic to dust, hey maybe that old devil bought my soul lol wonderful rhyme and I could feel the heat, Dante is down there having a party I believe 🌹
March 7th, 2025 03:57
Teddy.15 said:
Yes, only the best for the devil 🤣 oh how I know this feeling, it can be truly unbearable the summer heat here in Italy, I cannot have air-conditioning because I\'m an asthma sufferer and allergic to dust, hey maybe that old devil bought my soul lol wonderful rhyme and I could feel the heat, Dante is down there having a party I believe 🌹
March 7th, 2025 03:57
Too warm
orchidee said:
Some of those overhead cooler things give out an icy blast, even in Summer. Then it\'s colder indoors than outdoors. Doh! It\'s a draught that\'s more unpleasant than actually being outdoors on a chilly windy day.
March 7th, 2025 03:28
orchidee said:
Some of those overhead cooler things give out an icy blast, even in Summer. Then it\'s colder indoors than outdoors. Doh! It\'s a draught that\'s more unpleasant than actually being outdoors on a chilly windy day.
March 7th, 2025 03:28
Blinded by the light
Goldfinch60 said:
We are so intent on going one way soren that we ignore other things around us.
Andy
March 7th, 2025 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
We are so intent on going one way soren that we ignore other things around us.
Andy
March 7th, 2025 02:15
Blinded by the light
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Hard to see what the heart won’t allow sometimes. A beautiful write!!
March 6th, 2025 14:05
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Hard to see what the heart won’t allow sometimes. A beautiful write!!
March 6th, 2025 14:05
Blinded by the light
NinjaGirl said:
\"bent is the straight line\" this is everything!
March 6th, 2025 13:21
NinjaGirl said:
\"bent is the straight line\" this is everything!
March 6th, 2025 13:21
Blinded by the light
Cassie58 said:
The hard headed crowd. No man is an island, and yet here in this write I saw a real struggle going on against dark forces. One man against the crowd. Full of imagery and thought provoking lines. Well penned.
March 6th, 2025 06:33
Cassie58 said:
The hard headed crowd. No man is an island, and yet here in this write I saw a real struggle going on against dark forces. One man against the crowd. Full of imagery and thought provoking lines. Well penned.
March 6th, 2025 06:33
Blinded by the light
David Wakeling said:
It seems hard to find security with all the problems in the world.Powerful messages here
March 6th, 2025 05:48
David Wakeling said:
It seems hard to find security with all the problems in the world.Powerful messages here
March 6th, 2025 05:48
Blinded by the light
Poetic Licence said:
The double sided coin of not always getting what you see, as we only see what we want to see, enjoyed the read
March 6th, 2025 05:02
Poetic Licence said:
The double sided coin of not always getting what you see, as we only see what we want to see, enjoyed the read
March 6th, 2025 05:02
Blinded by the light
Teddy.15 said:
No matter what is in front of us sometimes it can be hard to see and even harder to hear. Beautiful. 🌹
March 6th, 2025 04:32
Teddy.15 said:
No matter what is in front of us sometimes it can be hard to see and even harder to hear. Beautiful. 🌹
March 6th, 2025 04:32
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