Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Birth
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Absolutely loved the poem. I am still reeling from:
\"A siren\'s whispers leading to graves, \"
An easy fave 👏
February 3rd, 2026 03:53
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Absolutely loved the poem. I am still reeling from:
\"A siren\'s whispers leading to graves, \"
An easy fave 👏
February 3rd, 2026 03:53
Birth
orchidee said:
Good write SB. This is gross of me - but more recipe ideas for KP in this. heehee.
February 3rd, 2026 03:30
orchidee said:
Good write SB. This is gross of me - but more recipe ideas for KP in this. heehee.
February 3rd, 2026 03:30
Black spot
Goldfinch60 said:
Out damn spot indeed soren, those spots are everywhere in modern ife.
Andy
February 3rd, 2026 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Out damn spot indeed soren, those spots are everywhere in modern ife.
Andy
February 3rd, 2026 02:06
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RSM0812 said:
Rules. They are pushed sometimes. This read had a good point of the soverignty of rule makers and the consequences of chains. Remarkable.
February 2nd, 2026 20:18
RSM0812 said:
Rules. They are pushed sometimes. This read had a good point of the soverignty of rule makers and the consequences of chains. Remarkable.
February 2nd, 2026 20:18
Black spot
Doggerel Dave said:
Great little rhymer Soren. While I do get the Macbeth reference (done him at school) I would think any rose cultivator would be pricked by this one. Me? I\'ll stick with geraniums....
February 2nd, 2026 18:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Great little rhymer Soren. While I do get the Macbeth reference (done him at school) I would think any rose cultivator would be pricked by this one. Me? I\'ll stick with geraniums....
February 2nd, 2026 18:20
Black spot
Teddy.15 said:
🤣 Such a wonderful poet you are my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
February 2nd, 2026 14:47
Teddy.15 said:
🤣 Such a wonderful poet you are my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
February 2nd, 2026 14:47
Black spot
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is satire rooted in rot. Shakespearean ghosts, martial language, and the blunt pragmatism of fertilizer all collide to show how decay, neglect, and remedy coexist. It’s clever, irreverent, and pointed…as well played as Lady Macbeth herself! Fabulous write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 2nd, 2026 13:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is satire rooted in rot. Shakespearean ghosts, martial language, and the blunt pragmatism of fertilizer all collide to show how decay, neglect, and remedy coexist. It’s clever, irreverent, and pointed…as well played as Lady Macbeth herself! Fabulous write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 2nd, 2026 13:22
Black spot
Paul Bell said:
The biggest threat to my garden is unfortunately me, I\'m like the mad scythe guy.
Plans are forming in my head for this year, and already I can see the garden in the distance legging it.
February 2nd, 2026 09:13
Paul Bell said:
The biggest threat to my garden is unfortunately me, I\'m like the mad scythe guy.
Plans are forming in my head for this year, and already I can see the garden in the distance legging it.
February 2nd, 2026 09:13
Black spot
E.J. Waling said:
Any gardener would appreciate this verse. Well poetically said. 👍🏼
February 2nd, 2026 06:27
E.J. Waling said:
Any gardener would appreciate this verse. Well poetically said. 👍🏼
February 2nd, 2026 06:27
Black spot
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Why did it make me feel royalty and roses are as useful as each other? Of course I am wrong 😞. Loved it.
February 2nd, 2026 06:27
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Why did it make me feel royalty and roses are as useful as each other? Of course I am wrong 😞. Loved it.
February 2nd, 2026 06:27
Black spot
Soman Ragavan said:
Shakespeare reviv\'d. Out, damn\'d spot ! Birnam Wood... Dung and hill : dunghill... The rose was destin\'d to ramble : Rambling Rose..
February 2nd, 2026 06:03
Soman Ragavan said:
Shakespeare reviv\'d. Out, damn\'d spot ! Birnam Wood... Dung and hill : dunghill... The rose was destin\'d to ramble : Rambling Rose..
February 2nd, 2026 06:03
Black spot
Lorenz said:
an infection turns insurrection ... I appreciate the social metaphor !
February 2nd, 2026 05:21
Lorenz said:
an infection turns insurrection ... I appreciate the social metaphor !
February 2nd, 2026 05:21
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arqios said:
capitalisation both of language and economy. A far-reaching meditation, much enjoyed Soren. 🕊️🙏
February 1st, 2026 19:47
arqios said:
capitalisation both of language and economy. A far-reaching meditation, much enjoyed Soren. 🕊️🙏
February 1st, 2026 19:47
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is smart wordplay with teeth. Ice melting, value shrinking, presence becoming unwelcome…the metaphor slides seamlessly into current realities without losing its footing. It’s understated, pointed, and effective. Well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 1st, 2026 14:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is smart wordplay with teeth. Ice melting, value shrinking, presence becoming unwelcome…the metaphor slides seamlessly into current realities without losing its footing. It’s understated, pointed, and effective. Well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 1st, 2026 14:02
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Allie561 said:
A very powerful poem with a hidden meaning. Ice unfortunately can’t tolerate spice and as we all know, milk is what really cures it. Great poem Soren.
February 1st, 2026 13:18
Allie561 said:
A very powerful poem with a hidden meaning. Ice unfortunately can’t tolerate spice and as we all know, milk is what really cures it. Great poem Soren.
February 1st, 2026 13:18
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rebellion_in_sanity said:
\"a foreign glass breaks out in a sweat\" - who could have written that!! A fave
February 1st, 2026 08:01
rebellion_in_sanity said:
\"a foreign glass breaks out in a sweat\" - who could have written that!! A fave
February 1st, 2026 08:01
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Thomas W Case said:
The imagery here is sly and observational—mundane details stretched into small philosophical questions.
That ice becomes almost existential, melting under scrutiny, makes the ordinary feel surprisingly sharp and witty.
February 1st, 2026 07:39
Thomas W Case said:
The imagery here is sly and observational—mundane details stretched into small philosophical questions.
That ice becomes almost existential, melting under scrutiny, makes the ordinary feel surprisingly sharp and witty.
February 1st, 2026 07:39
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Soman Ragavan said:
Clever composition. The hot spicy food needs ice, which should be served along the dish. Mexican food is known to be hot and spicy.
February 1st, 2026 05:34
Soman Ragavan said:
Clever composition. The hot spicy food needs ice, which should be served along the dish. Mexican food is known to be hot and spicy.
February 1st, 2026 05:34
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Teddy.15 said:
Worth reading many times as it hits the reader with each read it brings the power of the words. Super poetry. 🌹
February 1st, 2026 05:18
Teddy.15 said:
Worth reading many times as it hits the reader with each read it brings the power of the words. Super poetry. 🌹
February 1st, 2026 05:18
Birth and death sun and moon
Allie561 said:
What an ethereal poem Soren. I cannot express how beautiful this is. The way that it can be read all together and separately is truly amazing work. I also enjoyed how they are similar but vastly different all on their own. What a talent you have, definitely one of my favorites.
January 31st, 2026 22:34
Allie561 said:
What an ethereal poem Soren. I cannot express how beautiful this is. The way that it can be read all together and separately is truly amazing work. I also enjoyed how they are similar but vastly different all on their own. What a talent you have, definitely one of my favorites.
January 31st, 2026 22:34
Birth and death sun and moon
Teddy.15 said:
Utterly stunning poetry, metaphor and all. I get a soft happy tone of heavenly vibes 🌹
January 31st, 2026 14:55
Teddy.15 said:
Utterly stunning poetry, metaphor and all. I get a soft happy tone of heavenly vibes 🌹
January 31st, 2026 14:55
Birth and death sun and moon
Paul Bell said:
Always like something different, catches the imagination.
You\'re on another level with this one.
Expect it to be pinched at some point in the future.
January 31st, 2026 14:35
Paul Bell said:
Always like something different, catches the imagination.
You\'re on another level with this one.
Expect it to be pinched at some point in the future.
January 31st, 2026 14:35
Birth and death sun and moon
Lorenz said:
I am fascinated by extinct and conlangs ! One advantage of being asymptomatic autistic !
January 31st, 2026 14:04
Lorenz said:
I am fascinated by extinct and conlangs ! One advantage of being asymptomatic autistic !
January 31st, 2026 14:04
Birth and death sun and moon
Lorenz said:
(Translation of your corker in proto-germanic )
Burtiz jah daus .Sunnon jah méno .
Dunst sunnonsetlaz
attarwibja spinan
Méno ward fangen .
Endilhaz strids feht .
kalu swartaz nahts .
Mùdis wiganaes .
Urstanden fo\' naht skrùd.
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Austan mistaz .
In spruzjan ist faran .
Ofenbranda hleithra .
Brennit daga .
Glôsi isenes middagis .
Skadwos swindan .
Guldin runa hlimmith .
Sama sinkwand spina .
( An essay )
January 31st, 2026 13:37
Lorenz said:
(Translation of your corker in proto-germanic )
Burtiz jah daus .Sunnon jah méno .
Dunst sunnonsetlaz
attarwibja spinan
Méno ward fangen .
Endilhaz strids feht .
kalu swartaz nahts .
Mùdis wiganaes .
Urstanden fo\' naht skrùd.
-------------------------------
Austan mistaz .
In spruzjan ist faran .
Ofenbranda hleithra .
Brennit daga .
Glôsi isenes middagis .
Skadwos swindan .
Guldin runa hlimmith .
Sama sinkwand spina .
( An essay )
January 31st, 2026 13:37
Birth and death sun and moon
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this poem moves as if light were a pendulum. Dawn to dusk, blaze to shadow, struggle to release…the structure itself enacts the passage it describes. The closing lift back into light feels earned and calm. Strong work, dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
January 31st, 2026 12:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this poem moves as if light were a pendulum. Dawn to dusk, blaze to shadow, struggle to release…the structure itself enacts the passage it describes. The closing lift back into light feels earned and calm. Strong work, dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
January 31st, 2026 12:37
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