Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Eyes of a child
orchidee said:

Good write SB.
But why is that gal in the video wearing a pair of curtains?! lol.

June 26th, 2024 07:35

The immortal
Goldfinch60 said:

I too have plants like this and they have moved with me but still remain alive. Immortality is certainly with us.
One of them is over fifty years old and is now with my daughter.

Andy

June 26th, 2024 01:14

The immortal
Teddy.15 said:

So mysterious, once again I thought you were writing about marriage. 🤣 Hey sorrenbarret you gave me the shivers, but may I ask what it\'s called? You have my mind so curious. Now it could also be as your title suggests however I\'m asking, even if I look silly. 🌹

June 25th, 2024 14:22

The immortal
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

June 25th, 2024 10:08

The immortal
NafisaSB said:

some thrive with care, and some grow even if you ignore them and don\'t care..
but i love plants and when you literally get to eat the fruits of your labor, it\'s just a wonderful experience.. well written
by the way, your \'who i am\' is just amazing and all encompassing.. wow and wow again and again

June 25th, 2024 08:21

The immortal
2781 said:

Plants are amazing. My wife has an indoor lilly that refuses to die, no matter the rejection!
I prefer growing herbs.

June 25th, 2024 07:03

Melted dreams
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words soren, living with Nature can be wonderful.

Andy

June 25th, 2024 01:22

Melted dreams
Bloomingcereus said:

Great poem. keep up the good work.

June 24th, 2024 22:33

Melted dreams
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

June 24th, 2024 09:32

Melted dreams
Teddy.15 said:

Such stunning imagery. 🌹

June 24th, 2024 07:58

Melted dreams
2781 said:

Sounds like a night in the woods.

June 24th, 2024 07:01

Judas
orchidee said:

And yet chosen as one of the 12 disciples - the bad apple in the bunch?

June 23rd, 2024 14:31

Judas
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful image.

June 23rd, 2024 13:24

Trapped
Doggerel Dave said:

I very much like the portrayal of a transition to a better person you describe here, Soren.

June 22nd, 2024 17:55

Trapped
orchidee said:

Why, yes, it is about marriage too - me and KP. I will have to chew me leg off then, to get free from this ball and chain she has tied to it, and thrown away the key! lol.
Dunno how else I\'m gonna get free. Could drag me leg down to the locksmiths and get another key made.
Why does it only happen to me - these mad adventures?! lol.

June 22nd, 2024 15:07

Trapped
Teddy.15 said:

Oh I see 🤣 for a moment I thought this was a poem about marriage 🤣 we have nutria here but I confess I had to Google Muskrat, seems they are quite similar. What a poetic piece of brilliance. 🌹

June 22nd, 2024 08:19

Lost images
Teddy.15 said:

Slumberbashing at its finest dearest sorrenbarret, where would we be if we couldn\'t dream. 🌹 Beautiful.

June 22nd, 2024 05:29

Lost images
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words soren.

Andy

June 22nd, 2024 01:49

Lost images
Bella Shepard said:

I had to read this twice aloud, taking in each beautiful line, a rhyming pattern smooth as silk. The images you conjure, breathtaking. This is a true work of art my friend!

June 21st, 2024 09:02

Lost images
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

June 21st, 2024 08:48

The machine
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true soren but not in my world, I still speak to people face to face.

Andy

June 21st, 2024 01:42

The machine
Doggerel Dave said:

Yes, it is embryonic, Soren. I really enjoyed this – you make your justified reservations very clear. But there is hope. Some folks are detoxifying from their smart phones, eschewing social media.
I haven’t read ‘Brave New World’ for over sixty years; I must give it another go…..


June 20th, 2024 21:17

The machine
Teddy.15 said:

I never use the word hate but if I did it would be for technology. It\'s ruined the world and brought Pandora back from the dead. Yet there are some nice reasons to have it. A superb discussion from your wonderful lines. 🌹

June 20th, 2024 17:17

The machine
MLHnow said:

Love this poem!
I t is valuable for us to consider ourselves in the bigger picture and so removed from our natural connections

June 20th, 2024 16:11

The machine
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work.

June 20th, 2024 13:30

The machine
2781 said:

It\'s a beast.

June 20th, 2024 09:31

The machine
orchidee said:

I\'m controlled by an old trout KP! lol.

June 20th, 2024 08:10

The machine
Mutley Ravishes said:

Right on the money, Soren.
Steiner and co saw this coming
All those years ago

June 20th, 2024 07:14

Smoke of dreams
Goldfinch60 said:

Dreams come from very many palces soren.

Andy

June 20th, 2024 01:28

Smoke of dreams
Cassie58 said:

Visually stunning in its movement and unpredictability. Beautifully penned stanzas sorenbarrett.

June 19th, 2024 23:44



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