Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Life is what you make it
Bella Shepard said:
The analogy of each stanza is outstanding, as is the superb rhyming pattern that pulls it all together into a masterclass. The message is powerful.
August 7th, 2024 15:20
Bella Shepard said:
The analogy of each stanza is outstanding, as is the superb rhyming pattern that pulls it all together into a masterclass. The message is powerful.
August 7th, 2024 15:20
Life is what you make it
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning,
thoughts and
message my friend!! 🤔
A treat to read
beginning to end!!! 😁 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 7th, 2024 13:52
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning,
thoughts and
message my friend!! 🤔
A treat to read
beginning to end!!! 😁 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 7th, 2024 13:52
Life is what you make it
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
Beautiful, wise words.
Excellent rhyme.
But what is mans true purpose in life my friend?
August 7th, 2024 10:28
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
Beautiful, wise words.
Excellent rhyme.
But what is mans true purpose in life my friend?
August 7th, 2024 10:28
Life is what you make it
Doggerel Dave said:
Certainly make it if you can, Soren.
August 7th, 2024 08:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Certainly make it if you can, Soren.
August 7th, 2024 08:42
Life is what you make it
Teddy.15 said:
Superb your message, and full of magnificent wisdom I shall show this one to my son, what a way to wake the reader up and make them take a look at the bigger picture that with a positive attitude we can in fact live our lives to the full, despite all of the obstacles and madness. Kudos dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
August 7th, 2024 04:51
Teddy.15 said:
Superb your message, and full of magnificent wisdom I shall show this one to my son, what a way to wake the reader up and make them take a look at the bigger picture that with a positive attitude we can in fact live our lives to the full, despite all of the obstacles and madness. Kudos dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
August 7th, 2024 04:51
Life is what you make it
Neville said:
This is one o them absolutely superb bits of poetry that I seriously wish I had got to first ..
excellent ink and so finely spilt .. N
August 7th, 2024 04:51
Neville said:
This is one o them absolutely superb bits of poetry that I seriously wish I had got to first ..
excellent ink and so finely spilt .. N
August 7th, 2024 04:51
Too many
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
Isn\'t it ironic that small things in life can turn into disastrous situations. I really enjoyed reading your poem, it has a lot of meaning. Well done.
Thank you
August 7th, 2024 03:06
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
Isn\'t it ironic that small things in life can turn into disastrous situations. I really enjoyed reading your poem, it has a lot of meaning. Well done.
Thank you
August 7th, 2024 03:06
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Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words soren and so true in the world which we now live in.
Andy
August 7th, 2024 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words soren and so true in the world which we now live in.
Andy
August 7th, 2024 01:53
From a tiny view
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words soren, if only we could go back to the innocence of childhood it would be wonderful.
Andy
August 7th, 2024 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words soren, if only we could go back to the innocence of childhood it would be wonderful.
Andy
August 7th, 2024 01:41
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Dan Williams said:
Brazo! This is simply beautiful. I admit I am partial to you but this is no random standout; you get better every time.
August 6th, 2024 23:43
Dan Williams said:
Brazo! This is simply beautiful. I admit I am partial to you but this is no random standout; you get better every time.
August 6th, 2024 23:43
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Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for this, Soren. I hear population on decline through a combination of lower fertility, personal choice and economic necessity, I hear, I hear.
But your well formed little icicle sends cold winds round my ears and is for my money more realistic.
Here the South is suffering a more than usually cold winter….thus the icicle… (South pole cooked and sent this way?)
August 6th, 2024 18:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for this, Soren. I hear population on decline through a combination of lower fertility, personal choice and economic necessity, I hear, I hear.
But your well formed little icicle sends cold winds round my ears and is for my money more realistic.
Here the South is suffering a more than usually cold winter….thus the icicle… (South pole cooked and sent this way?)
August 6th, 2024 18:45
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Bella Shepard said:
Somehow we do not understand the finiteness of earths ability to sustain us. You capture this graphically in a poem that is a wake up call, which goes unheard.
August 6th, 2024 13:03
Bella Shepard said:
Somehow we do not understand the finiteness of earths ability to sustain us. You capture this graphically in a poem that is a wake up call, which goes unheard.
August 6th, 2024 13:03
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AuburnScribbler said:
A brilliantly written two stanzas here sorenbarrett.
Your poem highlights the fact, that no proud human can ever think themselves a master of the planet.
Also, it highlights the importance and the respect of the concept of space, which you mention with a particular clarity in the second stanza.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 6th, 2024 11:32
AuburnScribbler said:
A brilliantly written two stanzas here sorenbarrett.
Your poem highlights the fact, that no proud human can ever think themselves a master of the planet.
Also, it highlights the importance and the respect of the concept of space, which you mention with a particular clarity in the second stanza.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 6th, 2024 11:32
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Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning,
thoughts and message too! 🤔
Awesome rhyme and flow,
way to go, thank you!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 6th, 2024 09:33
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning,
thoughts and message too! 🤔
Awesome rhyme and flow,
way to go, thank you!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 6th, 2024 09:33
Too many
Neville said:
they say it\'ll be all right on the night .. but somehow what with everything that is going on, I doubt it .. you can beat an egg but you can\'t beat nature ..
August 6th, 2024 07:30
Neville said:
they say it\'ll be all right on the night .. but somehow what with everything that is going on, I doubt it .. you can beat an egg but you can\'t beat nature ..
August 6th, 2024 07:30
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orchidee said:
Go to a busy town - arghhh - people and more people! lol.
August 6th, 2024 07:23
orchidee said:
Go to a busy town - arghhh - people and more people! lol.
August 6th, 2024 07:23
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Teddy.15 said:
Such powerful imagery and mother nature\'s wrath, well she can certainly turn up a baobab or two. Kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
August 6th, 2024 05:02
Teddy.15 said:
Such powerful imagery and mother nature\'s wrath, well she can certainly turn up a baobab or two. Kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
August 6th, 2024 05:02
From a tiny view
Dan Williams said:
I don\'t know where you come up with these jewels but do keep it up. I mean \"Drinking knowledge from a media latrine\" is just inspired. Nice work.
August 5th, 2024 22:57
Dan Williams said:
I don\'t know where you come up with these jewels but do keep it up. I mean \"Drinking knowledge from a media latrine\" is just inspired. Nice work.
August 5th, 2024 22:57
From a tiny view
orchidee said:
Now this is spooky - the poem changed from verses to one whole piece, then back again to verses!
Maybe a blip when I pressed the \'like\' button?! Good write SB.
August 5th, 2024 14:13
orchidee said:
Now this is spooky - the poem changed from verses to one whole piece, then back again to verses!
Maybe a blip when I pressed the \'like\' button?! Good write SB.
August 5th, 2024 14:13
From a tiny view
Neville said:
I have tried to see the world through a childs eyes but sadly, I think I lost it way back .. this post made me think about perception in general a topic that I have long been interested in .. nice one my friend .. Neville
August 5th, 2024 13:32
Neville said:
I have tried to see the world through a childs eyes but sadly, I think I lost it way back .. this post made me think about perception in general a topic that I have long been interested in .. nice one my friend .. Neville
August 5th, 2024 13:32
From a tiny view
Teddy.15 said:
LOL 🤣 brilliant what magical lies children can make up, and of course the adult too. I found this to be most endearing, I\'ve worked with children all my life. Mountains out of mole hills 🌹
August 5th, 2024 08:21
Teddy.15 said:
LOL 🤣 brilliant what magical lies children can make up, and of course the adult too. I found this to be most endearing, I\'ve worked with children all my life. Mountains out of mole hills 🌹
August 5th, 2024 08:21
Silent colors
Bobby O said:
“Sculpts meaning without a note” a powerful line And u love the dog and monkey in a sack though I’m still trying to unwrap it and that helps make this poem great !
August 5th, 2024 05:31
Bobby O said:
“Sculpts meaning without a note” a powerful line And u love the dog and monkey in a sack though I’m still trying to unwrap it and that helps make this poem great !
August 5th, 2024 05:31
Silent colors
Goldfinch60 said:
That colour fills our life soren and will always do so.
Andy
August 5th, 2024 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
That colour fills our life soren and will always do so.
Andy
August 5th, 2024 01:44
Silent colors
Dan Williams said:
Being colorblind forces me to pay attention to descriptions of colors; this does that very well. Thanks.
August 4th, 2024 23:36
Dan Williams said:
Being colorblind forces me to pay attention to descriptions of colors; this does that very well. Thanks.
August 4th, 2024 23:36
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