Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Night visitor
Neville said:
this is the second time in a relatively very short space of time you have penned a poem that contains subject matter and associated imagery (in this case, a white moth) that I have been working on .. and although you may see it differently, I think it a bit spooky .. I also think this is better than the one I have just deleted .. if it happens again, I shall have to get my house exorcised .. Neville
February 1st, 2025 12:40
Neville said:
this is the second time in a relatively very short space of time you have penned a poem that contains subject matter and associated imagery (in this case, a white moth) that I have been working on .. and although you may see it differently, I think it a bit spooky .. I also think this is better than the one I have just deleted .. if it happens again, I shall have to get my house exorcised .. Neville
February 1st, 2025 12:40
Night visitor
Teddy.15 said:
Goosebumps, when my mother died a giant beast that must have been la moth flew into my home and flew up the stairs into my attic, I was completely terrified. The weird thing was it had never happened before and has never happened again, nor had I ever seen such in Italy, a chance meeting or a sign? I know the answer already. Your rhyming is superb and so is your Imagery. 🌹
February 1st, 2025 10:41
Teddy.15 said:
Goosebumps, when my mother died a giant beast that must have been la moth flew into my home and flew up the stairs into my attic, I was completely terrified. The weird thing was it had never happened before and has never happened again, nor had I ever seen such in Italy, a chance meeting or a sign? I know the answer already. Your rhyming is superb and so is your Imagery. 🌹
February 1st, 2025 10:41
Night visitor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First, I might not have much company joining me on this, but I love moths. No, I don\'t love them in my closet, but I always love seeing them, and when they land, I love to observe them. That aside, this is quite the chilling piece and quite the metaphor. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
February 1st, 2025 08:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First, I might not have much company joining me on this, but I love moths. No, I don\'t love them in my closet, but I always love seeing them, and when they land, I love to observe them. That aside, this is quite the chilling piece and quite the metaphor. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
February 1st, 2025 08:48
Night visitor
Cassie58 said:
A haunting. Superb description and chilling. Very well written sorenbarrett.
February 1st, 2025 08:09
Cassie58 said:
A haunting. Superb description and chilling. Very well written sorenbarrett.
February 1st, 2025 08:09
Peace on earth, good will
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice Harmony And Rhythms Soren
February 1st, 2025 04:59
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice Harmony And Rhythms Soren
February 1st, 2025 04:59
Little boy blue come blow your horn
David Wakeling said:
I see Donald Trump in this poem. He certainly is one worth keeping an eye on. A wonderful thoughtful poem. Excellent cadence and construction. Enjoyed
January 31st, 2025 15:23
David Wakeling said:
I see Donald Trump in this poem. He certainly is one worth keeping an eye on. A wonderful thoughtful poem. Excellent cadence and construction. Enjoyed
January 31st, 2025 15:23
Little boy blue come blow your horn
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wait and learn we shall see. Did you know that Diversity, Equity, and Inclusion can cause severe air traffic problems evidently? Who knew oppression kept the airways safe? 🤷♂️ I am not sure whether to laugh or cry at this poem, nor what it will take for his supporters to wake up, if that is even possible at this point. Methinks not. Anywho. Well done, on this Soren, and you will see that our poems today share a certain...ehem...theme! LOL! 😝
January 31st, 2025 08:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wait and learn we shall see. Did you know that Diversity, Equity, and Inclusion can cause severe air traffic problems evidently? Who knew oppression kept the airways safe? 🤷♂️ I am not sure whether to laugh or cry at this poem, nor what it will take for his supporters to wake up, if that is even possible at this point. Methinks not. Anywho. Well done, on this Soren, and you will see that our poems today share a certain...ehem...theme! LOL! 😝
January 31st, 2025 08:22
Sonnett of an old man
RSM0812 said:
Pretty deep. I\'m going to have to read it a few times. Lol
January 31st, 2025 08:09
RSM0812 said:
Pretty deep. I\'m going to have to read it a few times. Lol
January 31st, 2025 08:09
Little boy blue come blow your horn
arqios said:
Raising that banner in this sociopolitical commentary in verse 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 31st, 2025 06:48
arqios said:
Raising that banner in this sociopolitical commentary in verse 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 31st, 2025 06:48
Little boy blue come blow your horn
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my, you say it all so poetically, what a ghastly world in which we have these ugly good for nothing loaded politicians, and none are worse as Trump. My very sore point, it\'s hard to believe he got the votes from the very people he will now screw over. Sorry I can\'t say it better than that. He speaks from his arsehole. Again please forgive my language I cannot say it more politely. A very clever way of making a point millions are now scratching their heads to fathom. 🌹
January 31st, 2025 06:01
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my, you say it all so poetically, what a ghastly world in which we have these ugly good for nothing loaded politicians, and none are worse as Trump. My very sore point, it\'s hard to believe he got the votes from the very people he will now screw over. Sorry I can\'t say it better than that. He speaks from his arsehole. Again please forgive my language I cannot say it more politely. A very clever way of making a point millions are now scratching their heads to fathom. 🌹
January 31st, 2025 06:01
Little boy blue come blow your horn
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful description and very accurate one of the man that is going to cause the world an awful lot of problems and take his own country (that he reportedly loves ) back by about 50 years. Well expressed, great read
January 31st, 2025 05:55
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful description and very accurate one of the man that is going to cause the world an awful lot of problems and take his own country (that he reportedly loves ) back by about 50 years. Well expressed, great read
January 31st, 2025 05:55
Sonnett of an old man
Neville said:
Old men dream too, don\'t they .. and not only of the past and those halcyon days of their own youth, when most, felt and thought they were young gods .. but also, of what delights may be left for them to harvest in the dwindling time of their future .. Neville
January 31st, 2025 04:31
Neville said:
Old men dream too, don\'t they .. and not only of the past and those halcyon days of their own youth, when most, felt and thought they were young gods .. but also, of what delights may be left for them to harvest in the dwindling time of their future .. Neville
January 31st, 2025 04:31
Sonnett of an old man
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren old age can be surprisingly wonderful.
Andy
January 31st, 2025 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren old age can be surprisingly wonderful.
Andy
January 31st, 2025 02:24
Sonnett of an old man
Mutley Ravishes said:
It doesn\'t have to be this way.
A dead man was put in a cave
And came out three days
Later in rude health!
Great write, Soren
January 30th, 2025 18:50
Mutley Ravishes said:
It doesn\'t have to be this way.
A dead man was put in a cave
And came out three days
Later in rude health!
Great write, Soren
January 30th, 2025 18:50
Call of the earth
Firefall said:
You really captured the realities and sadness of growing older.
January 30th, 2025 13:06
Firefall said:
You really captured the realities and sadness of growing older.
January 30th, 2025 13:06
Sonnett of an old man
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Aging is not for the faint of heart! I am only mid-aged (depending on how long I live too, of course) and, truthfully, I have already experienced things I never thought would happen. I know that only increases as the years go by, but we\'re all in it...so cheers! 🍻 Well done, my friend. Thoroughly enjoyed this sonnet. 🌹👏
January 30th, 2025 08:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Aging is not for the faint of heart! I am only mid-aged (depending on how long I live too, of course) and, truthfully, I have already experienced things I never thought would happen. I know that only increases as the years go by, but we\'re all in it...so cheers! 🍻 Well done, my friend. Thoroughly enjoyed this sonnet. 🌹👏
January 30th, 2025 08:51
Sonnett of an old man
Poetic Licence said:
I did not think you knew me !!, have had many a day feeling like this, wish it felt like reading this though, quite soothing and calming, enjoyed the read
January 30th, 2025 07:09
Poetic Licence said:
I did not think you knew me !!, have had many a day feeling like this, wish it felt like reading this though, quite soothing and calming, enjoyed the read
January 30th, 2025 07:09
Sonnett of an old man
Teddy.15 said:
Magnificent 👏👏👏👏👏 please do take your bow sir! Wow 🌹 age really does bring wisdom and so much more. 🌹
January 30th, 2025 04:42
Teddy.15 said:
Magnificent 👏👏👏👏👏 please do take your bow sir! Wow 🌹 age really does bring wisdom and so much more. 🌹
January 30th, 2025 04:42
Sonnett of an old man
arqios said:
Truly feeling this these days, it will only ripen more in the coming years should I get to see them. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 30th, 2025 03:43
arqios said:
Truly feeling this these days, it will only ripen more in the coming years should I get to see them. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 30th, 2025 03:43
All ever desired
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words soren but I am sure Chronos will bring all goodness and love in time.
Andy
January 30th, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words soren but I am sure Chronos will bring all goodness and love in time.
Andy
January 30th, 2025 02:22
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