Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Sleep child
Teddy.15 said:
Your imagery is profoundly disturbing so you have certainly achieved excellence as usual dearest sorrenbarret, the contrast between those children living surrounded by love and tranquility support roofs and all they desire to become a grown up then those who have no chances at all. Makes my heart bleed dear friend. A truly wonderful piece of writing. Both side of the coin here. πΉ
December 6th, 2024 05:14
Teddy.15 said:
Your imagery is profoundly disturbing so you have certainly achieved excellence as usual dearest sorrenbarret, the contrast between those children living surrounded by love and tranquility support roofs and all they desire to become a grown up then those who have no chances at all. Makes my heart bleed dear friend. A truly wonderful piece of writing. Both side of the coin here. πΉ
December 6th, 2024 05:14
Sleep child
Cassie58 said:
Nightmares. So graphic is this write Soren. You reminded me why I donβt visit the butchers. Itβs the hanging carcasses that send my mind wandering. Eight lines which have brutal impact.
December 6th, 2024 04:35
Cassie58 said:
Nightmares. So graphic is this write Soren. You reminded me why I donβt visit the butchers. Itβs the hanging carcasses that send my mind wandering. Eight lines which have brutal impact.
December 6th, 2024 04:35
The bee and the fox
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, we all return to where we were from.
Andy
December 6th, 2024 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, we all return to where we were from.
Andy
December 6th, 2024 02:19
The bee and the fox
Dan Williams said:
You manage to convey most of a message in ten lines that takes me five verses. This is more fine work.
December 6th, 2024 00:56
Dan Williams said:
You manage to convey most of a message in ten lines that takes me five verses. This is more fine work.
December 6th, 2024 00:56
The bee and the fox
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem
short and sweet!! π
Great rhyme and flow,
to read a real treat!!!π―π€©
Best regards βοΈ peace Thad
December 5th, 2024 21:38
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem
short and sweet!! π
Great rhyme and flow,
to read a real treat!!!π―π€©
Best regards βοΈ peace Thad
December 5th, 2024 21:38
The bee and the fox
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. The rhyme and meter is impeccable.
December 5th, 2024 12:54
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. The rhyme and meter is impeccable.
December 5th, 2024 12:54
The bee and the fox
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dog once ran away and eventually came running home side-by-side with a fox. No joke. The two made friends! LOL! She\'s also been stung by bees before. They did not make friends! π€£ A wonderful poem, Soren. Enjoyed it thoroughly, my friend! β€οΈπ
December 5th, 2024 08:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dog once ran away and eventually came running home side-by-side with a fox. No joke. The two made friends! LOL! She\'s also been stung by bees before. They did not make friends! π€£ A wonderful poem, Soren. Enjoyed it thoroughly, my friend! β€οΈπ
December 5th, 2024 08:15
The bee and the fox
arqios said:
An interesting meeting of differing species, coated in humour and possibly more!
December 5th, 2024 06:42
arqios said:
An interesting meeting of differing species, coated in humour and possibly more!
December 5th, 2024 06:42
The bee and the fox
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable read, thank you Soren
December 5th, 2024 06:36
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable read, thank you Soren
December 5th, 2024 06:36
The bee and the fox
Teddy.15 said:
Fabulous rhyme and subject we can never forget natures beauty when you are around, love your imagery, and your very clever poetry. πΉ
December 5th, 2024 04:06
Teddy.15 said:
Fabulous rhyme and subject we can never forget natures beauty when you are around, love your imagery, and your very clever poetry. πΉ
December 5th, 2024 04:06
Mourn the morn
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words soren, may that sadness bring light to our lives in time.
Andy
December 5th, 2024 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words soren, may that sadness bring light to our lives in time.
Andy
December 5th, 2024 02:06
Mourn the morn
Thad Wilk said:
ππ
Two thumbs up my friend!!π€©
A very evocative piece
of art, great rhyme, flow and blend!π―
My pleasure to read indeed!! π
Best regards βοΈ Thad
December 4th, 2024 21:27
Thad Wilk said:
ππ
Two thumbs up my friend!!π€©
A very evocative piece
of art, great rhyme, flow and blend!π―
My pleasure to read indeed!! π
Best regards βοΈ Thad
December 4th, 2024 21:27
Mourn the morn
David Wakeling said:
This made me think of the days on the farm where everything is dependent on good weather but the good weather never comes.Powerful poem
December 4th, 2024 17:40
David Wakeling said:
This made me think of the days on the farm where everything is dependent on good weather but the good weather never comes.Powerful poem
December 4th, 2024 17:40
Mourn the morn
aDarkerMind said:
dark indeed Soren,
and worthy of many reads and many more comments.
December 4th, 2024 13:33
aDarkerMind said:
dark indeed Soren,
and worthy of many reads and many more comments.
December 4th, 2024 13:33
Mourn the morn
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem is filled with despair and darkness and yet a glimmer of hope. Love the last line. Indeed. A hauntingly beautiful write my friend! πΉπ
December 4th, 2024 09:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem is filled with despair and darkness and yet a glimmer of hope. Love the last line. Indeed. A hauntingly beautiful write my friend! πΉπ
December 4th, 2024 09:56
Mourn the morn
orchidee said:
I dunno if it\'s morn[ing], noon, or night. By the time I found out what \'carpe diem\' meant, there was no day left to seize - night had fallen! Doh! lol.
December 4th, 2024 09:40
orchidee said:
I dunno if it\'s morn[ing], noon, or night. By the time I found out what \'carpe diem\' meant, there was no day left to seize - night had fallen! Doh! lol.
December 4th, 2024 09:40
Mourn the morn
Cassie58 said:
Darker than dark, but still with a glint of feint light. Brimful of metaphor and wonderful language Soren.
December 4th, 2024 08:13
Cassie58 said:
Darker than dark, but still with a glint of feint light. Brimful of metaphor and wonderful language Soren.
December 4th, 2024 08:13
Mourn the morn
Teddy.15 said:
Your language is outstanding in this, I felt I was dancing all the way through, right to the end, brilliant title and imagery still the king π€£
December 4th, 2024 05:38
Teddy.15 said:
Your language is outstanding in this, I felt I was dancing all the way through, right to the end, brilliant title and imagery still the king π€£
December 4th, 2024 05:38
Mourn the morn
Neville said:
I fear we are about to loose it .. there are too many fingers hovering above too many buttons .. and for now, I shall keep digging ..
December 4th, 2024 05:37
Neville said:
I fear we are about to loose it .. there are too many fingers hovering above too many buttons .. and for now, I shall keep digging ..
December 4th, 2024 05:37
Mourn the morn
arqios said:
This poem captures the essence of a world steeped in despair yet holding onto fragments of hope and beauty. It\'s captivating imagery and metaphors evoke a powerful sense of struggle and resilience, highlighting the complex interplay between light and darkness in our lives. Another stirring poem Soren!
December 4th, 2024 05:16
arqios said:
This poem captures the essence of a world steeped in despair yet holding onto fragments of hope and beauty. It\'s captivating imagery and metaphors evoke a powerful sense of struggle and resilience, highlighting the complex interplay between light and darkness in our lives. Another stirring poem Soren!
December 4th, 2024 05:16
Jewel discarded
Cassie58 said:
There is loveliness everywhere for those who look. Sadly some donβt have the time to notice what is within their grasp. Beautiful poetry and multifaceted too. A jewel of a poem Soren. Fine work. A lovely read. This touched me particularly regarding the natural environment.
December 4th, 2024 03:41
Cassie58 said:
There is loveliness everywhere for those who look. Sadly some donβt have the time to notice what is within their grasp. Beautiful poetry and multifaceted too. A jewel of a poem Soren. Fine work. A lovely read. This touched me particularly regarding the natural environment.
December 4th, 2024 03:41
Jewel discarded
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren and so very true, poems can come from so many items and places.
Andy
December 4th, 2024 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren and so very true, poems can come from so many items and places.
Andy
December 4th, 2024 01:56
Jewel discarded
Dan Williams said:
Damn the critics, a jewel indeed. Hard to look past where you are bound. Nice.
December 4th, 2024 01:21
Dan Williams said:
Damn the critics, a jewel indeed. Hard to look past where you are bound. Nice.
December 4th, 2024 01:21
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