Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Mist
Bobby O said:
Wish I had command of the metaphoric descriptive phrase the way you do - props my friend. Sun as a yolk - lets out thst in a tee shirt
December 14th, 2024 01:34
Bobby O said:
Wish I had command of the metaphoric descriptive phrase the way you do - props my friend. Sun as a yolk - lets out thst in a tee shirt
December 14th, 2024 01:34
Peace on earth, good will
Thad Wilk said:
Beautiful poem
thoughts and Christmas
wishes, that would be nice
if they came true! 👍
Eloquently penned my
friend thank you!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 13th, 2024 23:15
Thad Wilk said:
Beautiful poem
thoughts and Christmas
wishes, that would be nice
if they came true! 👍
Eloquently penned my
friend thank you!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 13th, 2024 23:15
Peace on earth, good will
Parisab said:
Ideals are fully received at this time (of the year:) May these loving messages be received …
December 13th, 2024 15:46
Parisab said:
Ideals are fully received at this time (of the year:) May these loving messages be received …
December 13th, 2024 15:46
Peace on earth, good will
Neville said:
it is a funny old world isn\'t it .. sad too much of the time .. I doubt that many of those who talk the talk really know what they are talking about or how their actions & inactions impact on others and indeed upon the world in general both directly & indirectly .. and I really do have a thing about trees 😎👍
December 13th, 2024 10:52
Neville said:
it is a funny old world isn\'t it .. sad too much of the time .. I doubt that many of those who talk the talk really know what they are talking about or how their actions & inactions impact on others and indeed upon the world in general both directly & indirectly .. and I really do have a thing about trees 😎👍
December 13th, 2024 10:52
Peace on earth, good will
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem that cuts the BS and gets straight to the truth. It\'s good will to \"men\"...but how can there be good will for humans if we fail to show good will to the earth? Provocative and true write! Well done, friend. 🌹👏
December 13th, 2024 08:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem that cuts the BS and gets straight to the truth. It\'s good will to \"men\"...but how can there be good will for humans if we fail to show good will to the earth? Provocative and true write! Well done, friend. 🌹👏
December 13th, 2024 08:18
Peace on earth, good will
Teddy.15 said:
I will definitely take a glass of this and say cheers 🥂 🌹 beautiful dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 13th, 2024 05:53
Teddy.15 said:
I will definitely take a glass of this and say cheers 🥂 🌹 beautiful dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 13th, 2024 05:53
Peace on earth, good will
orchidee said:
Some versions amend it to something like \'Peace on earth; good will to men with whom God is pleased\'. But He isn\'t pleased with those who go on sinning.
Yes, we should respect trees, etc. Many have been around longer than us, unless you\'re 100 million years old, like Goldfinch and I are! lol.
December 13th, 2024 03:23
orchidee said:
Some versions amend it to something like \'Peace on earth; good will to men with whom God is pleased\'. But He isn\'t pleased with those who go on sinning.
Yes, we should respect trees, etc. Many have been around longer than us, unless you\'re 100 million years old, like Goldfinch and I are! lol.
December 13th, 2024 03:23
Undeserving
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren showing those things that happen and slip passed us.
Andy
December 13th, 2024 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren showing those things that happen and slip passed us.
Andy
December 13th, 2024 02:16
Once there was a time
sheta said:
beautifully composed
i sounds like children
December 13th, 2024 00:15
sheta said:
beautifully composed
i sounds like children
December 13th, 2024 00:15
Undeserving
vicecream said:
I’ve always believed that the searing pain of guilt is itself the price to be paid for wrongdoing; that true justice is brought on by the internal process of feeling guilt, learning from it, and (hopefully) working through it into self forgiveness. It is human to make mistakes. Now what defines the future is how do we move forward from them
December 12th, 2024 09:32
vicecream said:
I’ve always believed that the searing pain of guilt is itself the price to be paid for wrongdoing; that true justice is brought on by the internal process of feeling guilt, learning from it, and (hopefully) working through it into self forgiveness. It is human to make mistakes. Now what defines the future is how do we move forward from them
December 12th, 2024 09:32
Undeserving
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yup…this is how it is! Contentment and happiness are ever fleeting, as expressed so poignantly in this poem! 🌹👏
December 12th, 2024 07:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yup…this is how it is! Contentment and happiness are ever fleeting, as expressed so poignantly in this poem! 🌹👏
December 12th, 2024 07:07
Undeserving
Teddy.15 said:
What a way to see something fade. Memory or other kudos dear friend. 🌹
December 12th, 2024 04:11
Teddy.15 said:
What a way to see something fade. Memory or other kudos dear friend. 🌹
December 12th, 2024 04:11
Undeserving
Neville said:
Unfortunately, that\'s the way the cookie crumbles .. it\'s so unfair .. but not new, it just goes round and around .. perfect penmanship displayed .. Neville 👍
December 12th, 2024 04:10
Neville said:
Unfortunately, that\'s the way the cookie crumbles .. it\'s so unfair .. but not new, it just goes round and around .. perfect penmanship displayed .. Neville 👍
December 12th, 2024 04:10
Undeserving
David Wakeling said:
This is well constructed. I like the rhyme. Guilt and shame are always with us.
December 12th, 2024 03:48
David Wakeling said:
This is well constructed. I like the rhyme. Guilt and shame are always with us.
December 12th, 2024 03:48
Undeserving
arqios said:
For me this poem captures the frustration of life\'s fleeting joys and the weight of guilt and shame that makes them unattainable. The imagery of \"dissolving threads of sunlight\" and \"water between fingers\" poignantly illustrates the elusive nature of happiness and fulfilment. Yet a beautifully haunting reflection on the transient beauty in our lives.
December 12th, 2024 03:47
arqios said:
For me this poem captures the frustration of life\'s fleeting joys and the weight of guilt and shame that makes them unattainable. The imagery of \"dissolving threads of sunlight\" and \"water between fingers\" poignantly illustrates the elusive nature of happiness and fulfilment. Yet a beautifully haunting reflection on the transient beauty in our lives.
December 12th, 2024 03:47
Mist
arqios said:
I am loving the ephemeral beauty of a misty morning, where the interplay of light and shadow creates a sense of magic and wonder. The emphasis appears to be the fleeting and transformative moments in nature, where the mundane becomes extraordinary!
December 12th, 2024 02:45
arqios said:
I am loving the ephemeral beauty of a misty morning, where the interplay of light and shadow creates a sense of magic and wonder. The emphasis appears to be the fleeting and transformative moments in nature, where the mundane becomes extraordinary!
December 12th, 2024 02:45
Mist
Thad Wilk said:
Wonderfully vivid view
of the mornings sunrise! 🌄 🌅
Mellifluously penned my friend!!
Thanks for sharing your
superb poetic vision!! 🏆
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 11th, 2024 21:38
Thad Wilk said:
Wonderfully vivid view
of the mornings sunrise! 🌄 🌅
Mellifluously penned my friend!!
Thanks for sharing your
superb poetic vision!! 🏆
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 11th, 2024 21:38
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