Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
All American turkey
2781 said:
I think if we had to kill and clean the pet turkey, before cooking, we might be more grateful.
Or just take the pumpkin pie. Which, if like grammar pie, is more to my liking.
November 28th, 2024 06:18
2781 said:
I think if we had to kill and clean the pet turkey, before cooking, we might be more grateful.
Or just take the pumpkin pie. Which, if like grammar pie, is more to my liking.
November 28th, 2024 06:18
All American turkey
arqios said:
Oh, so you know about that shift! Not to be indelicate but even cushioned seats appear impervious to passing gases.
November 28th, 2024 05:28
arqios said:
Oh, so you know about that shift! Not to be indelicate but even cushioned seats appear impervious to passing gases.
November 28th, 2024 05:28
All American turkey
Teddy.15 said:
A very very happy Thanksgiving to you and all whom you love my dearest sorrenbarret π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦ π π
I absolutely love pumpkin pie, and banoffee just in case your making them lol π€£
November 28th, 2024 04:00
Teddy.15 said:
A very very happy Thanksgiving to you and all whom you love my dearest sorrenbarret π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦ π π
I absolutely love pumpkin pie, and banoffee just in case your making them lol π€£
November 28th, 2024 04:00
All American turkey
orchidee said:
Veggies will have pumpkin pie, yes?! Happy Thanksgiving Day there :)
November 28th, 2024 03:43
orchidee said:
Veggies will have pumpkin pie, yes?! Happy Thanksgiving Day there :)
November 28th, 2024 03:43
All American turkey
David Wakeling said:
Sounds like a lot of fun. A lot to be thankful for. Good fun poem
November 28th, 2024 02:09
David Wakeling said:
Sounds like a lot of fun. A lot to be thankful for. Good fun poem
November 28th, 2024 02:09
All American turkey
Goldfinch60 said:
Never had pumpkin pie on any day soren but I would eat it if placed before me.
Andy
November 28th, 2024 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Never had pumpkin pie on any day soren but I would eat it if placed before me.
Andy
November 28th, 2024 01:53
Nursery mantra
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren taking me back to my childhood days of wonder.
Andy
November 28th, 2024 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren taking me back to my childhood days of wonder.
Andy
November 28th, 2024 01:39
Nursery mantra
Thad Wilk said:
ππ
Wonderfully expressed
feelings and emotions painted
with nursery rhymes penned
to fit this very evocative
piece of art!! π¨ π
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards βοΈ peace. Thad
November 27th, 2024 21:23
Thad Wilk said:
ππ
Wonderfully expressed
feelings and emotions painted
with nursery rhymes penned
to fit this very evocative
piece of art!! π¨ π
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards βοΈ peace. Thad
November 27th, 2024 21:23
Nursery mantra
Teddy.15 said:
Protected by the hand of unconditional love from the wolf, LoL I find much humour in this but maybe because my humour is dry β€οΈ
November 27th, 2024 13:35
Teddy.15 said:
Protected by the hand of unconditional love from the wolf, LoL I find much humour in this but maybe because my humour is dry β€οΈ
November 27th, 2024 13:35
Nursery mantra
orchidee said:
Is my old repetition appreciated?! lol. As I say, I may get no further than \'good/fine write\'. (lol) I never thought of juxtaposing, narcissism, etc, in some of the other educated comments!
November 27th, 2024 09:57
orchidee said:
Is my old repetition appreciated?! lol. As I say, I may get no further than \'good/fine write\'. (lol) I never thought of juxtaposing, narcissism, etc, in some of the other educated comments!
November 27th, 2024 09:57
Drip from the tap
rebellion_in_sanity said:
What a poem! Beauty in brutal honesty - it felt like a painting of alienation, a potrate of understanding and pain of rejection. Please correct me if the understanding was off.
November 27th, 2024 09:41
rebellion_in_sanity said:
What a poem! Beauty in brutal honesty - it felt like a painting of alienation, a potrate of understanding and pain of rejection. Please correct me if the understanding was off.
November 27th, 2024 09:41
Nursery mantra
Michael Edwards said:
Love this - it has an element of the surreal but with prophetic undercurrents.
November 27th, 2024 08:43
Michael Edwards said:
Love this - it has an element of the surreal but with prophetic undercurrents.
November 27th, 2024 08:43
Ads
2781 said:
It rings true to me, what was despised is certainty now idealised. I dropped out a while ago.
November 27th, 2024 08:06
2781 said:
It rings true to me, what was despised is certainty now idealised. I dropped out a while ago.
November 27th, 2024 08:06
Nursery mantra
arqios said:
Too enjoyable, trying to make out the barbs from the hilarity! Hereβs a couple in response:
Hickory, dickory, dock,
The rat ran up the corporate clock.
Strikes one, strikes two, strikes three,
Climbing fast, no time for glee.
Little Bo-Peep has lost her sheep,
In a world where promises don\'t keep.
Look and find, they say in jest,
In life\'s maze, we all do our best.
November 27th, 2024 07:24
arqios said:
Too enjoyable, trying to make out the barbs from the hilarity! Hereβs a couple in response:
Hickory, dickory, dock,
The rat ran up the corporate clock.
Strikes one, strikes two, strikes three,
Climbing fast, no time for glee.
Little Bo-Peep has lost her sheep,
In a world where promises don\'t keep.
Look and find, they say in jest,
In life\'s maze, we all do our best.
November 27th, 2024 07:24
Nursery mantra
Neville said:
such nursery crimes are all the rage write now .. I think its something to do with being woke too late in the day .. nicely penned & then some
November 27th, 2024 06:23
Neville said:
such nursery crimes are all the rage write now .. I think its something to do with being woke too late in the day .. nicely penned & then some
November 27th, 2024 06:23
Nursery mantra
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent, Soren! The juxtaposition in brilliant in this, not t to mention the fresh take in classic nursery rhymes to serve th poems central point. Bravo! πΉπ
November 27th, 2024 04:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent, Soren! The juxtaposition in brilliant in this, not t to mention the fresh take in classic nursery rhymes to serve th poems central point. Bravo! πΉπ
November 27th, 2024 04:27
Ads
Dan Williams said:
\"once despised now idolized\" sums it up nicely. The rest fills in the details. Nice.
November 27th, 2024 00:37
Dan Williams said:
\"once despised now idolized\" sums it up nicely. The rest fills in the details. Nice.
November 27th, 2024 00:37
Ads
Bobby O said:
That piece SPEAKS
all at once you cover the human trip through responsibility, reality inevitability, and frivolity canβt eliminate any you can hit them all. You gotta still stand up like Ludacris stand up.
November 26th, 2024 22:07
Bobby O said:
That piece SPEAKS
all at once you cover the human trip through responsibility, reality inevitability, and frivolity canβt eliminate any you can hit them all. You gotta still stand up like Ludacris stand up.
November 26th, 2024 22:07
Ads
Cassie58 said:
There are some adverts which transport me back in time. Simpler times, better values, more peaceful. Bringing a nostalgia which I love to be part of. The bisto gravy ad always did that to me. Some of the ads these days are ridiculous. Canβt relate at all. Must be showing my age. Thatβs my penny worth Soen.
November 26th, 2024 16:45
Cassie58 said:
There are some adverts which transport me back in time. Simpler times, better values, more peaceful. Bringing a nostalgia which I love to be part of. The bisto gravy ad always did that to me. Some of the ads these days are ridiculous. Canβt relate at all. Must be showing my age. Thatβs my penny worth Soen.
November 26th, 2024 16:45
Ads
Teddy.15 said:
I see the awakening of a nightmare in here, one that we will all live. Superb and thought provoking and your last lines made me think there shall never be peace. πΉ
November 26th, 2024 15:15
Teddy.15 said:
I see the awakening of a nightmare in here, one that we will all live. Superb and thought provoking and your last lines made me think there shall never be peace. πΉ
November 26th, 2024 15:15
Ads
Thad Wilk said:
A deep, dark and
thought provoking write! π€
A few things came to mind,
political one.. ,π²
Thank you for sharing
wonderfully woven!! π
Best regards βοΈ peace. Thad
November 26th, 2024 11:19
Thad Wilk said:
A deep, dark and
thought provoking write! π€
A few things came to mind,
political one.. ,π²
Thank you for sharing
wonderfully woven!! π
Best regards βοΈ peace. Thad
November 26th, 2024 11:19
Ads
Neville said:
I\'m not entirely sure whether this has anything to do with subliminal messages that historically were used (for example in cinemas) to get folk to buy a particular product .. if it is, then it works .. but if it isn\'t, then it works .. even better ... Neville
November 26th, 2024 10:54
Neville said:
I\'m not entirely sure whether this has anything to do with subliminal messages that historically were used (for example in cinemas) to get folk to buy a particular product .. if it is, then it works .. but if it isn\'t, then it works .. even better ... Neville
November 26th, 2024 10:54
Ads
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful write, friend! Well done! I have felt this, and it is an important exercise to consider how external influences shape our desires and how we grapple with the passage of time and the allure of escapism. I could not find a time to want to escape more than now. And we just got through a ton of political ads, not to bring that into it, where what was once despised is now idolized. Then we get ourselves into the holiday season. βBuried peace mournsβ indeed! Not sure if I am correct in my interpretation, but this is what hit me when I read. Again, well done Soren! A wonderful write! πΉπβ€οΈ
November 26th, 2024 09:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful write, friend! Well done! I have felt this, and it is an important exercise to consider how external influences shape our desires and how we grapple with the passage of time and the allure of escapism. I could not find a time to want to escape more than now. And we just got through a ton of political ads, not to bring that into it, where what was once despised is now idolized. Then we get ourselves into the holiday season. βBuried peace mournsβ indeed! Not sure if I am correct in my interpretation, but this is what hit me when I read. Again, well done Soren! A wonderful write! πΉπβ€οΈ
November 26th, 2024 09:37
Ads
arqios said:
Mmm⦠quite thought provoking! It might also be interesting to see how memories vary for each specific ad between persons or generations even.
November 26th, 2024 07:14
arqios said:
Mmm⦠quite thought provoking! It might also be interesting to see how memories vary for each specific ad between persons or generations even.
November 26th, 2024 07:14
Drip from the tap
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an intriguing write about the place we have always probably been in soren.
Andy
November 26th, 2024 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an intriguing write about the place we have always probably been in soren.
Andy
November 26th, 2024 02:43
Little bird
NafisaSB said:
so beautiful, and so true.. freedom is so essential in life
November 25th, 2024 23:49
NafisaSB said:
so beautiful, and so true.. freedom is so essential in life
November 25th, 2024 23:49
Drip from the tap
RSM0812 said:
Story of my life. Reminds me of the pain and lonliness a person can feel when they have no one to turn to.
November 25th, 2024 22:00
RSM0812 said:
Story of my life. Reminds me of the pain and lonliness a person can feel when they have no one to turn to.
November 25th, 2024 22:00
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