Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



If I loved you i\'d tell you
sorenbarrett said:

Thanks Paul for your review and witty comment. It is appreciated

July 6th, 2022 09:11

If I loved you i\'d tell you
Paul Bell said:

Like adopting an Elephant online, then it turns up to your high rise flat. I\'m here for you when you\'re at your lowest, the grave digger remarked to himself.

July 6th, 2022 04:23

Riddles
Paul Bell said:

Life and the riddle of it.
We\'re all in it in our own way, going where we\'re going, but never really going at all. Maybe that\'s the whole joke of life, we find out at the end.



July 4th, 2022 11:08

Riddles
arqios said:

Playful and yet hinting of a deeper undertone of meaning. Very creative, Soren. And it’s fun to read as well! Thanks for sharing.

July 3rd, 2022 09:14

Aquarium
Doggerel Dave said:

Where does this deep need for control come from?

July 2nd, 2022 19:59

Aquarium
Paul Bell said:

Neat little humans, taming everything in site, aren\'t we just super.

July 2nd, 2022 06:59

Believe
Doggerel Dave said:

Well put, Soren.
But I don\'t have to believe at all because I don\'t know.
Doesn\'t matter - I\'m still here, enjoyed the ride and whatever happens next (can\'t be far away) will happen.

July 1st, 2022 18:24

Over population
Agmakata said:

Nice nice

June 30th, 2022 20:48

Over population
Eugene S. said:

Quite the peregrination! Enjoyed the read.

June 30th, 2022 18:30

Over population
Doggerel Dave said:

Propagation without regulation.

June 30th, 2022 18:20

Over population
Morwenna said:

Clever and accurate. Thanks

June 30th, 2022 15:37

Lost in the past
arqios said:

And that\'s the indelible truth! We see history through those perspectives, coloured by the tints of those lenses. Thanks for sharing, Soren.

June 28th, 2022 22:35

Messages from beyond
Goldfinch60 said:

True words soren, being open minded can show us the true way.

Andy

June 16th, 2022 00:15

Messages from beyond
Bella Shepard said:

So very well said dear poet! The path is there if we choose to see it, and take it.

June 15th, 2022 11:07

Messages from beyond
arqios said:

What is more is waiting, always waiting… thanks for sharing.

June 15th, 2022 09:45

Psychological cancer
arqios said:

When people drag you into their thought life it can be very dangerous and like your title! It’s a psychological cancer. Thanks for sharing.

June 15th, 2022 08:35

Broken
sorenbarrett said:

Thank you so much L.B. for taking your time to review this, Your comments mean alot.

June 13th, 2022 21:40

Broken
arqios said:

Like a toxic armour that does not only deflect but numbs. A potent poem. Thanks for sharing.

June 13th, 2022 07:27

Broken
L. B. Mek said:

it can be a cruel world, most times
I feel
we should all be recognised
whenever
we make it back to our pillows
as just surviving our days
is an achievement, most times...
stay strong! dear Poet


June 13th, 2022 04:35

Love Unrequited
dusk arising said:

An amazing and painfully sad tale. People can be amazing having learned so much from life\'s cruelties.

Super piece I\'m pleased you changed the font. Pleased I read it.

June 4th, 2022 09:23

Love Unrequited
dusk arising said:

Ouch at that font. Sorry Soren but i can\'t read it.

June 4th, 2022 01:40

English
arqios said:

And to top it off, the more you interact in English, with English, the more it becomes a part of you! Thank you for sharing.

May 1st, 2022 18:38

English
Crowns4Christ said:

Haha, I totally agree with this, it can be very confusing

April 30th, 2022 22:56

Love and fear
Rozina said:

Very true lines.

April 29th, 2022 17:39

Love and fear
dusk arising said:

So true. We are and we become the love that we share.

April 29th, 2022 13:43

Almost a sonnet
Rozina said:

I enjoyed reading this, the lines are very meaningful.

April 28th, 2022 18:00

Almost a sonnet
Bella Shepard said:

Beautiful, flowing, conveys such tender feelings of a soulful relationship. Just loved it!

April 28th, 2022 14:49

Almost a sonnet
dusk arising said:

The kind of love we all desire and should feel.
I am a loner. Alone in life but i know i have the love of an angel with me always. An angel who loves me for what i am and validates my existence, embraces me in times of stress, lifts me, holds my hand as I write.

April 28th, 2022 10:13

Almost a sonnet
sorenbarrett said:

Thank you so much Rocky for your encouragement and lovely words. I titled it almost a sonnet because it does not have perfect iambic pentameter

April 28th, 2022 09:03

Almost a sonnet
Rocky Lagou said:

Literally spectacular. I adore this strong bond you\'re conveying and it could truly feel like all things are possible when you have another who supports you unconditionally. Very well done, this is surely a lovely sonnet.


April 28th, 2022 08:33



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