Comments received on poems by Rocky Lagou
\"THE GAY VIRUS\"
Caring dove said:
Sorry , deleted my comment . Just read your poem again and can’t say I completely understand how you have expressed yourself and I’m not even sure the message comes across properly . Just to be honest . But I like that yoir trying to write about something that isn’t fair .. judgement , discrimination . I have been judged before I believe for my mental health problems and no it is never nice . Good for you . To try and write something related to something which isn’t fair .. discrimination . I think I wrote a poem once about mental health
May 23rd, 2022 13:40
Caring dove said:
Sorry , deleted my comment . Just read your poem again and can’t say I completely understand how you have expressed yourself and I’m not even sure the message comes across properly . Just to be honest . But I like that yoir trying to write about something that isn’t fair .. judgement , discrimination . I have been judged before I believe for my mental health problems and no it is never nice . Good for you . To try and write something related to something which isn’t fair .. discrimination . I think I wrote a poem once about mental health
May 23rd, 2022 13:40
\"THE GAY VIRUS\"
dusk arising said:
Right now there\'s a plague of woke-ingitus. Don\'t pay no attention to those religious types they cant even agree shit between themselves, theyre just self righteous ego maniacs.
Any crowd of wierdos who rally around effigies of a semi naked bloke nailed to a cross is a pretty disgusting bunch if you ask me anyway.
There\'s even one of them christians writing about opening god\'s book on MPS today. Poor misguided chap thinks it\'s the words of god. Them christians cant even get the 4th commandment right - remember the sabbath etc - sabbath is a saturday but they bent god\'s rules and made it a sunday LOL hypocrits the ;lot of them.
May 23rd, 2022 12:57
dusk arising said:
Right now there\'s a plague of woke-ingitus. Don\'t pay no attention to those religious types they cant even agree shit between themselves, theyre just self righteous ego maniacs.
Any crowd of wierdos who rally around effigies of a semi naked bloke nailed to a cross is a pretty disgusting bunch if you ask me anyway.
There\'s even one of them christians writing about opening god\'s book on MPS today. Poor misguided chap thinks it\'s the words of god. Them christians cant even get the 4th commandment right - remember the sabbath etc - sabbath is a saturday but they bent god\'s rules and made it a sunday LOL hypocrits the ;lot of them.
May 23rd, 2022 12:57
\"THE GAY VIRUS\"
Christina8 said:
This was a spectacular write, Rocky!!! We are all equals in Gods eyes so theres no judgement there. I have family members and friends who are LGBTQ+ and i love them all the same.
May 23rd, 2022 12:39
Christina8 said:
This was a spectacular write, Rocky!!! We are all equals in Gods eyes so theres no judgement there. I have family members and friends who are LGBTQ+ and i love them all the same.
May 23rd, 2022 12:39
\"THE GAY VIRUS\"
orchidee said:
Some churches seem more tolerant of LGBTQ+ than others. They might range from \'Hellfire and damnation to ya!\' to \'Come in, all are truly welcome\'.
May 23rd, 2022 12:28
orchidee said:
Some churches seem more tolerant of LGBTQ+ than others. They might range from \'Hellfire and damnation to ya!\' to \'Come in, all are truly welcome\'.
May 23rd, 2022 12:28
\"THE GAY VIRUS\"
turbo1904 said:
I did not enjoy this. I do not believe in judging people due to their sexual preference.
May 23rd, 2022 11:23
turbo1904 said:
I did not enjoy this. I do not believe in judging people due to their sexual preference.
May 23rd, 2022 11:23
The Mirror of Dawn
Paul Bell said:
Life and ashes and in-between
I wonder how many people get to ninety and wonder how life got them there.
May 22nd, 2022 05:55
Paul Bell said:
Life and ashes and in-between
I wonder how many people get to ninety and wonder how life got them there.
May 22nd, 2022 05:55
The Mirror of Dawn
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Rocky, any time in in Natures wonder is always fulfilling.
Andy
May 21st, 2022 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Rocky, any time in in Natures wonder is always fulfilling.
Andy
May 21st, 2022 00:29
The Mirror of Dawn
Rozina said:
Yes I get it. It\'s beautifully written, it makes total sense.
May 20th, 2022 18:07
Rozina said:
Yes I get it. It\'s beautifully written, it makes total sense.
May 20th, 2022 18:07
The Mirror of Dawn
Michael Edwards said:
A challenging write which carries you along - great stuff Rocky.
May 20th, 2022 14:45
Michael Edwards said:
A challenging write which carries you along - great stuff Rocky.
May 20th, 2022 14:45
The Mirror of Dawn
Christina8 said:
An apple:windfall, the ripeness eating all...........A beautiful line. An apple on the ground is easy to become consumed. I think this is a great poem, sorry I couldn\'t decipher more than what you put in your authors notes. I just like reading your poems and this one is beautiful!!
May 20th, 2022 09:47
Christina8 said:
An apple:windfall, the ripeness eating all...........A beautiful line. An apple on the ground is easy to become consumed. I think this is a great poem, sorry I couldn\'t decipher more than what you put in your authors notes. I just like reading your poems and this one is beautiful!!
May 20th, 2022 09:47
The Mirror of Dawn
arqios said:
So wonderful and uplifting. The words racing and popping like carousel horses in flight. Thanks for sharing.
May 20th, 2022 08:39
arqios said:
So wonderful and uplifting. The words racing and popping like carousel horses in flight. Thanks for sharing.
May 20th, 2022 08:39
They Say if You Jump High Enough, You Can Touch the Sky – So I Tried
tallisman said:
Thanks Rocky, enjoyed this!
May 20th, 2022 00:50
tallisman said:
Thanks Rocky, enjoyed this!
May 20th, 2022 00:50
They Say if You Jump High Enough, You Can Touch the Sky – So I Tried
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Rocky.
Andy
May 20th, 2022 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Rocky.
Andy
May 20th, 2022 00:46
They Say if You Jump High Enough, You Can Touch the Sky – So I Tried
Accidental Poet said:
Writer\'s block is there only if you let it be there. We\'ve all been there. To get out of writers block, you need to go back to just thinking about \"stuff\". I find sometimes funny thoughts or ideas just appear to me and I can\'t help but write it down just because it rattled my cage so much. Open yourself to funny thoughts, and they find you. 😄
May 19th, 2022 20:59
Accidental Poet said:
Writer\'s block is there only if you let it be there. We\'ve all been there. To get out of writers block, you need to go back to just thinking about \"stuff\". I find sometimes funny thoughts or ideas just appear to me and I can\'t help but write it down just because it rattled my cage so much. Open yourself to funny thoughts, and they find you. 😄
May 19th, 2022 20:59
They Say if You Jump High Enough, You Can Touch the Sky – So I Tried
Rozina said:
Hahaha next time try a ladder! (DON\'T!) Your poem reminded me of my son when he was small jumping from a chair every day trying to fly.
May 19th, 2022 18:26
Rozina said:
Hahaha next time try a ladder! (DON\'T!) Your poem reminded me of my son when he was small jumping from a chair every day trying to fly.
May 19th, 2022 18:26
They Say if You Jump High Enough, You Can Touch the Sky – So I Tried
distorted mikey said:
This is such a fun poem! I love it! The end line was such a jolt, like being punched out of childlike ideals into the adult world, it\'s awesome
May 19th, 2022 14:48
distorted mikey said:
This is such a fun poem! I love it! The end line was such a jolt, like being punched out of childlike ideals into the adult world, it\'s awesome
May 19th, 2022 14:48
They Say if You Jump High Enough, You Can Touch the Sky – So I Tried
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
You ever wonder what one means by \"touch the sky?\" If the sky is above us then how far? How high must one get until they reach what is considered sky? Perhaps we are all in the sky right now. But jumping off of two chairs and a dining table is a decent way of reaching it in a different sense :)
May 19th, 2022 11:20
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
You ever wonder what one means by \"touch the sky?\" If the sky is above us then how far? How high must one get until they reach what is considered sky? Perhaps we are all in the sky right now. But jumping off of two chairs and a dining table is a decent way of reaching it in a different sense :)
May 19th, 2022 11:20
They Say if You Jump High Enough, You Can Touch the Sky – So I Tried
orchidee said:
Good write R.
You trying to be \'The Birdman\' as I tried to be?
I was OK until I jumped off a ccllliiiifffffff!!! Notice the good acting there? lol.
May 19th, 2022 10:35
orchidee said:
Good write R.
You trying to be \'The Birdman\' as I tried to be?
I was OK until I jumped off a ccllliiiifffffff!!! Notice the good acting there? lol.
May 19th, 2022 10:35
A Dreamer\'s Wildfire
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Rocky !! I see you are going on a Rocky time. Life is a flame test. We burn and burn to become strong. Every Metal has to go through compressions, Tensions , and flame tests to prove its worth.
When Metal is tested, similarly we are too tested to get our Mettle. No one can make you weaker, without your Consent. So leave everything, let the positive breeze , breeze through and see how your real worth is exhibited. Till then take the flame tests to get stronger in life..... Great Insightful Write
May 19th, 2022 04:16
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Rocky !! I see you are going on a Rocky time. Life is a flame test. We burn and burn to become strong. Every Metal has to go through compressions, Tensions , and flame tests to prove its worth.
When Metal is tested, similarly we are too tested to get our Mettle. No one can make you weaker, without your Consent. So leave everything, let the positive breeze , breeze through and see how your real worth is exhibited. Till then take the flame tests to get stronger in life..... Great Insightful Write
May 19th, 2022 04:16
You Do Not Do, Not Do
Goldfinch60 said:
What Knot should I not have in this wonderful lot of not knots. LOL
Andy
May 19th, 2022 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
What Knot should I not have in this wonderful lot of not knots. LOL
Andy
May 19th, 2022 01:34
You Do Not Do, Not Do
Rozina said:
It\'s very catching! You\'ve got me singing this while I was sweeping the room. You do not do, not do.......!
May 18th, 2022 18:09
Rozina said:
It\'s very catching! You\'ve got me singing this while I was sweeping the room. You do not do, not do.......!
May 18th, 2022 18:09
You Do Not Do, Not Do
spilleronsheet said:
Muse like seasons shall strike you
Maybe like a gentle breeze shall pay you
Await its arrival
Welcome with greet
Cause when she arrives
You may not have peace
But I really liked this light hearted poetry
And the writer’s note added to my thoughts
Good one dear Rocky…
May 18th, 2022 13:43
spilleronsheet said:
Muse like seasons shall strike you
Maybe like a gentle breeze shall pay you
Await its arrival
Welcome with greet
Cause when she arrives
You may not have peace
But I really liked this light hearted poetry
And the writer’s note added to my thoughts
Good one dear Rocky…
May 18th, 2022 13:43
You Do Not Do, Not Do
Bella Shepard said:
You have phrased this refrain so cleverly, and I naturally fall into the cadence as I read it. I think the most fun you can have with words is to play with them, and you my friend do this beautifully.
May 18th, 2022 13:41
Bella Shepard said:
You have phrased this refrain so cleverly, and I naturally fall into the cadence as I read it. I think the most fun you can have with words is to play with them, and you my friend do this beautifully.
May 18th, 2022 13:41
A Dreamer\'s Wildfire
DestinysPerspectives said:
I love every line of this poem! You have a beautiful poetic soul. Never stop expressing those insightful thoughts that burn flames of passion within your heart, soul and mind.
May 18th, 2022 11:47
DestinysPerspectives said:
I love every line of this poem! You have a beautiful poetic soul. Never stop expressing those insightful thoughts that burn flames of passion within your heart, soul and mind.
May 18th, 2022 11:47
You Do Not Do, Not Do
Natalia B. Odair said:
Great poem!! I love how i had to think about the meaning of it to fully understand. Can\'t wait for more. And as for the lack of inspo... sounds weird, but if you have TikTok or Insta, browse through the stuff and find one thing unjust or sad about society today. Then write about it! I don\'t think poems have to be about anything grand, they just have to be from the heart.
May 18th, 2022 11:30
Natalia B. Odair said:
Great poem!! I love how i had to think about the meaning of it to fully understand. Can\'t wait for more. And as for the lack of inspo... sounds weird, but if you have TikTok or Insta, browse through the stuff and find one thing unjust or sad about society today. Then write about it! I don\'t think poems have to be about anything grand, they just have to be from the heart.
May 18th, 2022 11:30
You Do Not Do, Not Do
DestinysPerspectives said:
I love the rhythm and repetition. I could see this being a poem that is required reading in high school lit/ college. I really love this! I can\'t wait to see what you write when your creative mind returns from the spa. Sometimes we just need breaks and there is nothing wrong with that. Maybe go people watching or take a walk in nature to inspire you? I personally paint when I need inspiration. Maybe it will work for you too? I love your writing! It\'s very inspiring. Never stop expressing your beautiful creative mind.
May 18th, 2022 11:27
DestinysPerspectives said:
I love the rhythm and repetition. I could see this being a poem that is required reading in high school lit/ college. I really love this! I can\'t wait to see what you write when your creative mind returns from the spa. Sometimes we just need breaks and there is nothing wrong with that. Maybe go people watching or take a walk in nature to inspire you? I personally paint when I need inspiration. Maybe it will work for you too? I love your writing! It\'s very inspiring. Never stop expressing your beautiful creative mind.
May 18th, 2022 11:27
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